广东高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

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建议信
1．假定你是李华，笔友Tom对于高中生活感到焦虑，写信询问你如何适应高中的生活。请根据以下内容，给Tom提出建议。
1. 合理安排学习时间；
2. 保持良好的生活习惯。
【写作要求】
1. 词数：100 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．假设你是李华, 你的好朋友王源前不久随父母去了美国, 他写信告诉你他很不适应美国的校园生活, 感到很孤独。请你根据以下要点用英语给他写一封建议信。
1.学好英语, 从而增加和别人交流的机会;
2.多交一些朋友, 友情会使他忘记孤独;
3.积极参加各种活动, 使自己的生活更加有趣。
注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Wang Yuan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．假定你是校学生会主席李华。这学期，你校来了一些英美国家的交换生，由于语言文化方面的差异，他们还不太能适应新的学习生活环境。针对这种情况，你打算在校英语报上发表一篇英语文章，内容包括：
1.交换生目前面临的困难；
2.提出合理建议；
3.学生会所能给予的帮助。
注意：1.标题已给出；2.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
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4．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Jim来信告诉你，在新学期他要来中国当交换生，想让你给他一些建议，帮助他尽快适应中国的高中学习和生活。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括如下：
1. 收信的感受；
2. 学习方面的建议（课堂、课后）；
3. 其他方面的建议（多交朋友，参加社团等）。
写作要求：字数100词左右。主要不要逐句翻译，可以增加适当细节，令行文连贯。
交换生 exchange student
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5．假设你叫李华，最近你的好友Jane来信说她升入高中后倍感焦虑，不知道如何尽快结交新朋友，请你用英语给她回一封信，提出一些建议。内容包括：
1.写信的目的；
2.提出建议；
3.表达希望和祝愿。
【注意】
1.信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数； 2.词数：80词左右。
Dear Jane,
I am sorry to hear that you feel rather nervous after entering high school. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，你的表妹Alice去市区的一所高中学校上学。由于离家很远，她很不适应离开父母后的生活，于是向你写信求助。请你给她回封信，信的内容包括：
1.给与安慰；
2.分析现状；
3.提出建议。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
I am so sorry to hear from you that you have some trouble in your new life.
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Wish you happy every day!
Yours,
Li Hua
7．假设你是李华。你的英国笔友杰克刚刚升入高中，但他一时无法适应新的校园生活，写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回一封建议信，内容主要包括：
1. 表示理解和安慰；
2. 给出一些具体建议及理由；
3. 表达个人期待。
注意事项：
1. 可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。   
2. 词数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
3. 请在答题卡上相应位置作答，写在本试卷上无效。   
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear that
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Truly yours,
Li Hua
8．你是张伟的好朋友John，张伟即将参加学校的英语朗诵比赛，向你求助，请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。
写作内容：
1．说明回信的意图；
2．向张伟提出建议；
3．预祝张伟比赛成功。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
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9．假设你是李华，是学生会的主席。为了呼吁高三学生在重压之下养成健康的生活方式，请你以学生会的名义，为学校“英语天地”宣传栏写一份倡议书，内容包括：
1. 倡议的原因；
2. 倡议的目的；
3. 倡议的具体内容。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
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Students’ Union
10．假定你是李华，你新进入高一的朋友王强近来沉迷于网络游戏《王者荣耀》 (King of Glory)不能自拔，严重影响了学习和身心健康。请你给他写一封信劝他戒掉这一不良习惯，并对他的学习生活给出自己的建议。内容包括：
1. 你对他的担心；
2. 游戏的危害；
3. 提出建议。
注意：1词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Wang Qiang，
I'm sorry to know that you become addicted to computer games recently.
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I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration. Looking forward to your good news.
Yours，
Li Hua











1．Dear Tom,
I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble adjusting to your high school life. Actually, many freshmen are confused about high school life, so there is no need to worry about it too much. I’m writing to offer you some useful suggestions.
Firstly, you should make a good schedule and focus on improving your study. As a teenager, it is our responsibility to study well. Besides, keeping a balanced diet and doing more exercises can strengthen your body. If you insist on regular training, you can always be in a good mood and high spirits.
I hope my suggestions will be of great benefit to you.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给笔友Tom写一封信，针对如何适应高中生活给出你的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
做某事有困难：have trouble (in) doing sth.→have difficulty (in) doing sth.
困惑的：confused→puzzled
有用的，有帮助的：useful→helpful
专注于：focus on→concentrate on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, you should make a good schedule and focus on improving your study.
拓展句：Firstly, I suggest that you should make a good schedule and focus on improving your study.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble adjusting to your high school life. (运用了that 引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] If you insist on regular training, you can always be in a good mood and high spirits. (运用了If 引导的条件状语从句)
2．Dear Wang Yuan,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting yourself to your new school life in America, but this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice.
Firstly, you should work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. Secondly, why not make some friends? They can help you to know more about America, and friendship can help you forget your loneliness. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting. By doing so, you will be happier with your new life soon.
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给不适应校园生活，感到孤独的好朋友王源写信，给出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
做某事有困难：have trouble doing sth.→have difficulty doing sth.
采纳某人的建议：take one’s advice→ follow one’s advice
参加：take part in→ participate in
有用的：useful→be of use
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：Secondly, why not make some friends? They can help you to know more about America, and friendship can help you forget your loneliness.
拓展句：Secondly, why not make some friends，who can help you to know more about America, and friendship can help you forget your loneliness.？
【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, you should work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting.（运用了it作形式主语，if引导主语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句）
3．Have a Wonderful School Life
With exchange students becoming new members, our school has taken on a new look. However, due to language barrier and culture shock, they are facing an increasing number of challenges, like feeling lonely, worrying about academic performances and being unfamiliar with campus.
As the chairman of the Students' Union, I didn't focus on their troubles until Jack, an exchange student from New York, wanted to go back home. To overcome the difficulties, on the one hand, it would be better for exchange students to make friends with their Chinese classmates, take part in the home-stay programme and sign up for some school communities, so that they will get rid of homesick and better expose themselves to the new environment. On the other hand, Chinese Salon is an ideal place for them to visit in their spare time, where not only can they have specially-designed Chinese lessons for exchange students, but also attend some lectures to learn more about Chinese customs.
At the same time, the Students' Union will take immediate action to provide some help. Firstly, some weekend activities regarding Chinese culture will be held for exchange students. Secondly, some brochures, on which there is a brief introduction to our school and some tips on how to lead a convenient life on campus, will be handed out. Finally, a mailbox, SES@aq.com. has been set up for exchange students to reflect their problems.
We do hope every exchange student can lead a fantastic and delightful life in our school.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇英语文章，说明交换生目前面临的困难；提出合理建议以及学生会所能给予的帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
因为：because of→due to
关注：concentrate on→focus on
闲暇时间：leisure time→spare time
建立：build→set up
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With exchange students becoming new members, our school has taken on a new look.
拓展句：Our school has taken on a new look because more and more exchange students have become new members.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As the chairman of the Students' Union, I didn't focus on their troubles until Jack, an exchange student from New York, wanted to go back home. (运用了时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] On the other hand, Chinese Salon is an ideal place for them to visit in their spare time, where not only can they have specially-designed Chinese lessons for exchange students, but also attend some lectures to learn more about Chinese customs. (运用了where引导非限制性定语从句)
4．Dear Jim,
I’m delighted that you will come to China as an exchange student next term. Knowing that you hope to adapt to the new life here as fast as possible, I would like to give you some advice.
Firstly, it’s necessary to pay full attention to what teachers say and take down the notes during the classes. Secondly, as a foreign student, you may find it a bit difficult to understand some notes or thinking patter about study, so that you are supposed to ask your teachers and classmates for help after class. What’s more, make friends with them, which will make you more easily get used to the life here. Finally, different kinds of clubs are offered to choose, such as music club, ping-pong club, AI club, you can join what you like best.
I hope my suggestion can work well with you and I am looking forward to see you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友Jim写封信，帮助他尽快适应中国的高中学习和生活。
【详解】1.词汇积累
学期：semester→term
建议：tip→advice/suggestion
高兴的：happy→delighted
各种各样的：various→different kinds of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Finally, different kinds of clubs are offered to choose, such as music club, ping-pong club, AI club, you can join what you like best.
拓展句：Finally, since different kinds of clubs are offered to choose, such as music club, ping-pong club, AI club, you can join what you like best.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m delighted that you will come to China as an exchange student next term. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] What’s more, make friends with them, which will make you more easily get used to the life here. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
5．Dear Jane,
I am sorry to hear that you feel rather nervous after entering high school. I’d like to offer you some useful tips on how to make new friends in high school.
Firstly, you should be concerned about others and try to be as friendly as you can. If you are always ready to help others, your classmates will know more about you. Besides, it is important for you to be a good listener while others are speaking. In this way, people will feel comfortable to be with you. Finally, it is good for you to take an active part in class activities where you can show your talent and get to know more classmates.
I hope my advice will be useful to you and you can get along well with your new classmates. I wish you happiness in your new school.
Yours,
LiHua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给好友Jane回封信，提出缓解焦虑的建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提出：offer→give
重要的：important→vital
才能：talent→gift
有用的：useful→helpful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, it is important for you to be a good listener while others are speaking.
拓展句：Besides, it is important that you should be a good listener while others are speaking.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sorry to hear that you feel rather nervous after entering high school (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Finally, it is good for you to take an active part in class activities where you can show your talent and get to know more classmates. (运用了where引导的定语从句)
6．One possible version:
Dear Alice,
I am so sorry to hear from you that you have some trouble in your new life.
It is natural for us to miss our parents the first time we leave home. However, we cannot live with our parents forever because of further education, employment or something else. I believe you must realize that present separation will not only help your study but also improve your personal ability. You can make new friends in your school and share ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now. I also suggest you enjoy yourself by taking an active part in different kinds of activities in school. You will get much pleasure from it.
Wish you happy every day!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给表妹Alice写一封信，针对她遇到的问题给与安慰并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
正常的：normal→natural
永远，总是：always→forever
参加：participate in→take part in
各种各样的：various→different kinds of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You will get much pleasure from it.
拓展句：I believe that you will get much pleasure from it.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I believe you must realize that present separation will not only help your study but also improve your personal ability.  (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] You can make new friends in your school and share ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
7．Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble adjusting to your high school life. Actually, many freshmen are confused about high school life, so there is no need to worry about it too much. I’m writing to offer you some useful suggestions.
Firstly, I suggest that you sign up for extra-curricular activities, which can help you make more new friends. In this way you won’t feel lonely and your school life will become colorful and interesting. Secondly, you should make a good schedule and focus on improving your study. As a teenager, it is our responsibility to study well.
I hope my suggestions will be of great benefit to you.
Truly yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友杰克写一封建议信，针对他无法适应新的校园生活这一问题表示安慰并给出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
做某事有困难：have difficulty (in) doing sth.→have trouble (in) doing sth.
困惑的：puzzled→confused
有用的，有帮助的：helpful→useful
专注于：concentrate on→focus on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Secondly, you should make a good schedule and focus on improving your study.
拓展句：Secondly, I suggest that you make a good schedule and focus on improving your study.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble adjusting to your high school life. (运用了that 引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Firstly, I suggest that you sign up for extra-curricular activities, which can help you make more new friends. (运用了that 引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
8．Dear Zhangwei，
You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you． In my opinion，you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror．
Besides，you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges． When you are giving the speech，remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words，don't be panic and just continue your speech，because no one will notice it．Wish you success in the speech．
                                                                                                                                                Yours，
                                                                                                                                             John
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，考生是张伟的好朋友John，张伟即将参加学校的英语朗诵比赛，向考生求助，请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
对……感到紧张：be nervous about→ be anxious about
留下深刻印象：make a deep impression on→ leave a deep impression on
各种各样： in my view→ in my opinion
建议：suggestion→ advice
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：In my opinion，you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror．.
拓展句：In my opinion，you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror，which is of help to you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides，you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges．（so that引导的目的状语从句）
[高分句型2] You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you.（which引导的定语从句）
9．Possible version:
Dear fellow students,
With College Entrance Examination approaching, many of us are under much pressure from study and therefore have developed an unhealthy lifestyle, ranging from studying deep into the night to taking little physical exercise, which is extremely harmful to our health.
To equip ourselves for the challenges of this senior year in our high school, it is high time that we take actions to say no to the unhealthy lifestyle.
We are supposed to reasonably distribute our time of study and rest, as a result of which we are able to maintain an energetic state when faced with difficulties and pressure. Additionally, it is recommended that physical exercise, an excellent way of relieving pressure, be scheduled regularly. Keeping healthy is also key to our success. Let's take actions now!
Students’ Union
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以学生会的名义，为学校“英语天地”宣传栏写一份倡议书，呼吁高三学生在重压之下养成健康的生活方式。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
会议：approach→draw near
说：pressure→stress
另外：additionally→moreover
采取行动做某事：take actions to do sth.→take steps to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Keeping healthy is also key to our success.
拓展句：It is vital to our success that we should keep healthy.
【点睛】[高分句型1] With College Entrance Examination approaching, many of us are under much pressure from study and therefore have developed an unhealthy lifestyle, ranging from studying deep into the night to taking little physical exercise, which is extremely harmful to our health. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，现在分词作宾语补足语和现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] We are supposed to reasonably distribute our time of study and rest, as a result of which we are able to maintain an energetic state when faced with difficulties and pressure. (运用了介词+关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句和过去分词作状语)
10．Dear Wang Qiang，
I'm sorry to know that you become addicted to computer games recently.I feel quite worried about you.Now I'm writing to offer you some advice, hoping you can get rid of this bad habit soon.
As far as I'm concerned, it is no good addicting yourself in computer games since spending too much time online does harm to your health and makes it very difficult to focus on schoolwork.Therefore, I'd like to recommend that you take up a new hobby such as running or playing football.Besides, it might be a good idea if you join a school club, where you can take part in all kinds of activities and make new friends.In this way, you will be attracted to your wonderful school life instead of getting lost in a virtual world.
I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration.Looking forward to your good news.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新进入高一的朋友王强写封信，劝他戒掉沉迷于网络游戏《王者荣耀》的不良习惯。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
另外：besides→moreover
戒掉：get rid of→give up
集中于：focus on→concentrate on
参加：take part in→participate in
在我看来：as far as I'm concerned→in my opinion
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Now I'm writing to offer you some advice, hoping you can get rid of this bad habit soon.
拓展句：Now I'm writing to offer you some advice, which I hope can help you get rid of this bad habit soon.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Therefore, I'd like to recommend that you take up a new hobby such as running or playing football. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, it might be a good idea if you join a school club, where you can take part in all kinds of activities and make new friends. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)