广东高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Richard计划今年暑假来中国旅游并学习中国文化，请你写信给他，内容包括：

1. 推荐合适的目的地；

2. 说明理由。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Richard,

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Yours,

Li Hua

2．假定你是李华。你的美国网友Mike打算寒假来中国旅游，发来邮件请你推荐景点。请给他回复邮件。

内容包括：

1．介绍某个景点特色；

2．邀请他来你所在城市游玩。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Mike,

I am glad to learn that you are visiting China this winter break.

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Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

3．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Hans来信请你为他负责策划的4月20日“中文日”班级庆祝活动提建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括：

1.来信收悉；

2.提出活动建议；

3.望录制和分享。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Hans,

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Yours,

Li Hua

4．假定你是李华，你收到一封来自朋友杰克的电子邮件。他在邮件里说自己在英语学习上遇到了一些困难，希望你给他提一些建议。请你根据以下内容要点给他回封邮件。

写作要点包括：

1.写信目的。

2.提出建议(至少三点)。

3.表达期待。

注意：1.词数80左右;2.开头与落款已给出，不计入总词数;3.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Jack,

How is everything going?

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Yours,

Li Hua

5．假设你是李华，你在美国夏令营认识的朋友Mike给你来信说他最近沉迷于电脑难以控制。请你给他回一封信，告诉他网瘾可能会导致成绩下降、健康状况恶化、损害家庭关系等问题，并提出一些建议。

参考词汇：沉溺于be/become addicted to 网瘾：Internet addiction

内容包括：

1.表示担忧；

2.网瘾危害；

3.建议。

注意。

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

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6．假定你是李华，最近收到了笔友Mike的来信，内容如下：

Dear Li Hua,

Recently, Tom, my best friend since when we were in junior high school, has been avoiding me on purpose. I don’t know why. I have tried to talk with him several times, but in vain. I don’t want to lose him. What should I do?

Yours,

Mike

请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：

1. 表示理解；

2. 提出建议；

3. 表达希望。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Mike,

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Yours

Li Hua

7．假如你是李华，你刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件，她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何学好英语。请你根据下列的内容给她写封回信。

1.上课认真听讲，做好笔记，课后及时复习；

2.词汇是基础，每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词，朗读课文；

3.课外多与同学用英语交流，提高听力和口语能力；

4.每天坚持写日记。

注意：

(1)包括以上所有要点内容

(2)词数100左右；

(3)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

(4)参考词汇：复习go over；背诵recite

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8．你的好朋友Ben比较肥胖，原因之一是他沉迷甜食，写信向你求助，请你回信给予建议。

主要内容如下：

1.甜食的弊端；

2.你的建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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9．假如你是李华，前几天你收到了好朋友王梅的电子邮件，她向你询问在高中如何学好英语。请你用英文给她写封回信，提出一些建议。要点包括：

1.上课认真听讲，做好笔记；

2.每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词，朗读课文；

3.多与同学用英语交流，提高听力和口语能力；

4.每天坚持写日记。

注意：

1.词数100词左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总数。

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Wang Mei,

I’m sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning English.

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Best Wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

10．假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Jack刚刚升入高中，但他一时无法适应新的校园生活，写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回一封信，内容主要包括:

1．不必太担忧;

2．提出建议。

3．表达祝愿

注意:1.词数100左右;

2．可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3．开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble in

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Yours,

Li Hua

1．Dear Richard,

   I’m glad to hear that you are coming to visit China. There is one city I want to recommend to you.

   Bejing, the capital of China, has а long history. Many ancient dynasties made it their capitals, so there are many majestic buildings. If you want to have an enjoyable journey, I advise you to visit the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Palace museum. Besides, Beijing is also famous for its local delicacies that you haven’t tasted.

   Wish you а pleasant trip in China!

                                                                                                                                                              Yours,

                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Richard写封信，给他推荐来中国旅游的目的地并说明理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad→delighted

令人愉快的：enjoyable→pleasant

建议：advise→suggest

另外：besides→moreover

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Bejing, the capital of China, has а long history.

拓展句：Bejing, which is the capital of China, has а long history.

【点睛】[高分句型1] There is one city I want to recommend to you. (运用了省略了关系代词that/which的定语从句)

[高分句型2] Besides, Beijing is also famous for its local delicacies that you haven’t tasted. (运用了关系代词that引导的定语从句)

2．Dear Mike,

I am glad to learn that you are visiting China this winter break. I would like to recommend Xiaoqikong scenic spot to you.

Located in Guizhou, Xiaoqikong got its name from an ancient stone bridge on its entrance. As you walk into the parks, you will be amazed by the blue lakes, lush forests and magnificent waterfalls. You can also have other experiences like boats and rafting. Last but not least, the convenient bus network and clean restrooms will make your tour more comfortable.

I wish you a nice tour and invite you to Shenzhen to explore more about China if you are available.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向美国网友Mike写一封邮件，向其推荐一个中国的景点，以供他寒假来中国旅游时参考，并邀请他来考生所在城市游玩。

【详解】1.词汇积累

想要做某事：would like to do sth. → want to do sth.

吃惊的：amazed → surprised/shocked

壮丽的：magnificent → grand/splendid

最后：last but not least→ finally/ lastly

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Located in Guizhou, Xiaoqikong got its name from an ancient stone bridge on its entrance.

拓展句： Xiaoqikong, which is located in Guizhou, got its name from an ancient stone bridge on its entrance.

【点睛】【高分句型1】As you walk into the parks, you will be amazed by the blue lakes, lush forests and magnificent waterfalls.（运用了as引导的状语从句）

【高分句型2】I wish you a nice tour and invite you to Shenzhen to explore more about China if you are available.（运用了if引导的状语从句）

3．Dear Hans,

I’m glad to hear you will hold an activity on the “Chinese Language Day”. Here are some tips to make it amazing and educational.

First, engaging audience in entertaining activities is the key. It can start with Chinese calligraphy show demonstrating the beauty of Chinese characters. Then, why not hold a Chinese speech contest to highlight the unmatched charm of this elegant language? After that, it could be wrapped up with “Jasmine”, a traditional Chinese song, which will certainly impress the audience.

I am sure this will be a feast of culture and I sincerely hope you could record this unforgettable show and share your achievement with me!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Hans回复邮件，为他负责策划的4月20日“中文日”班级庆祝活动提建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad→delighted

以……开始：start with→begin with

比赛：contest→competition

真诚地：sincerely→genuinely

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：First, engaging audience in entertaining activities is the key.

拓展句：First, what matters is to engage audience in entertaining activities.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m glad to hear you will hold an activity on the “Chinese Language Day”. （运用了省略that的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】After that, it could be wrapped up with “Jasmine”, a traditional Chinese song, which will certainly impress the audience.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

4．Dear Jack,

How is everything going? Knowing that you’re having trouble with English learning, I am sorry to hear that and writing to offer you some advice.

As far as I’m concerned, first, concentrating on English lessons is the most important. While listening to the teacher, you should take notes. Meanwhile, make sure you can memorize the vocabulary, which plays a hugely important role in English learning. Trying to communicate in English as often as possible can help you improve your oral English. It is also beneficial for you to watch some American TV series or listen to some English songs in your spare time.

I hope my suggestions can help you. I believe with your hard work your English will be better soon!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】这是一篇书面表达——建议信。要求根据材料和要点给你朋友李梅一些建议，回一封邮件。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

学习英语有困难：having trouble with English learning→having difficulty in learning English

做些笔记：take notes→make notes

提高：improve→enhance

空闲时间：spare time→free time

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Trying to communicate in English as often as possible can help you improve your oral English.

拓展句：If you can try to communicate in English as often as possible，it can help you improve your oral English.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Meanwhile, make sure you can memorize the vocabulary, which plays a hugely important role in English learning.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2]Knowing that you’re having trouble with English learning, I am sorry to hear that and writing to offer you some advice.(that引导的宾语从句)

5．Dear Mike,

    I am glad to hear from you. As your close friend, I’d like to talk about the harm of Internet addiction to you as I feel worried to know that you have wasted lots of valuable time playing the Internet games.

    As we know, the Internet is a convenient tool to improve our knowledge and skills. However, our life will be greatly affected if we are addicted to it. For example, your grades may go down and your health will be going from bad to worse. To make things worse, it can also damage the relationship with your family. So I think it is high time that you got rid of the bad habit. It is a good idea for you to read some meaningful books and do some physical exercises.

    I am looking forward to hearing your good news soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在美国夏令营认识的朋友Mike回信，告诉他网瘾可能会导致成绩下降、健康状况恶化、损害家庭关系等问题，并提出一些建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad→ delighted

宝贵的：valuable →precious

然而：however→ nevertheless

更糟糕的是：to make things worse→ worse still

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：To make things worse, it can also damage the relationship with your family.

拓展句：What makes things worse is that it can also damage the relationship with your family.

【点睛】[高分句型1]As we know, the Internet is a convenient tool to improve our knowledge and skills. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2]So I think it is high time that you got rid of the bad habit. (运用了虚拟语气)

6．Dear Mike,

I am sorry to learn that you are having trouble with your best friend. It is indeed a hard nut to crack when your best friend is avoiding you while you’ve no idea about the reason. Here are some suggestions which I hope can be of help to you.

Considering your unsuccessful attempts to talk with him, I advise that you turn to his parents, teachers, and his other friends, to whom he might reveal his discontentment with you. Additionally, you can try sending him a text message, telling him how you feel and asking about the reason for his getting away from you. True friendship is based on good communication and I believe Tom should understand this. Meanwhile, it is of great necessity to include a sincere apology for doing something that might have hurt him unintentionally.

Hopefully you will find the tips above practical. I sincerely wish that with active efforts you can smoothly remove your misunderstandings and restore your friendship.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生回复笔友Mike的来信，对Mike信中提到的情况表示理解，并提出解决问题的建议，最后表达顺利解决问题的希望。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

棘手的（问题）：a hard nut to crack→demanding, challenging, intractable

考虑到，鉴于：considering→given, granted

不成功的，失败的：unsuccessful→unfruitful, useless

不满：discontentment→dissatisfaction, unhappiness

无意地：unintentionally→accidentally

切实可行的：practical→applicatory, working

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：True friendship is based on good communication and I believe Tom should understand this.

拓展句：True friendship is based on good communication, which I believe Tom should understand.

【点睛】【高分句型1】It is indeed a hard nut to crack when your best friend is avoiding you while you’ve no idea about the reason.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句、while引导的并列句）

【高分句型2】Considering your unsuccessful attempts to talk with him, I advise that you turn to his parents, teachers, and his other friends, to whom he might reveal his discontentment with you.（运用了that引导的宾语从句、whom引导的非限制性定语从句）

7．Dear Wang Mei,

I’m delighted to receive your email. Knowing that you want to know how to learn English, I’m writing to give you some conducive advice.

At the very beginning, you should listen to teachers carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons after class. As far as I am concerned, vocabulary is of great importance. Therefore, you had better spend half an hour reciting words in the morning and reading books aloud. Additionally, why not communicate with your classmates in English after class? Only in this way can you improve your listening and spoken English quickly. Eventually, it would be a good idea to develop the habit of keeping a diary, which helps improve your written English and helps you review the words and expressions that you have learnt.

In a word, I sincerely hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就你的朋友王梅向你询问在高中如何学好英语的事，给她写封回信。内容包括：上课认真听讲，做好笔记，课后及时复习；词汇是基础，每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词，朗读课文；课外多与同学用英语交流，提高听力和口语能力；每天坚持写日记。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：delighted→pleased

有益的：conducive→beneficial

非常重要的：of great importance→very important

最后：Eventually→At last

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Therefore, you had better spend half an hour reciting words in the morning and reading books aloud.

拓展句：Therefore, you had better spend half an hour reciting words in the morning and reading books aloud, which can better help you remember words and phrases.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowing that you want to know how to learn English, I’m writing to give you some conducive advice.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] Eventually, it would be a good idea to develop the habit of keeping a diary, which helps improve your written English and helps you review the words and expressions that you have learnt.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

8．Dear Ben,

How’s everything going? I’m worried about you and I’d like to help.

As we both know, sugar is a killer. First, sweets and sweet drinks not only give us extra calories, making us overweight but provide a favorable condition for germs to grow, resulting in bad teeth. Besides, it may also lead to poor eyesight, weak bones and even cancer.

I used to love sweet foods, too. I know it wasn’t easy to change. However, I tried to award myself whenever I succeeded in cutting down desserts or sweet drinks. Eventually, I cut them out and felt much better.

I hope that my experience can inspire you to live a healthier life.

Yours,

Li Hus.

【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给好友Ben写信，给他介绍甜食的弊端，以及减少甜食的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

担心：be worried about→be concerned about

提供：provide→offer

导致，引起：lead to→cause

成功做某事：succeed in doing→manage to do

2.句型拓展

同义句

原句：As we both know, sugar is a killer.

拓展句：What we know is that sugar is a killer.

【点睛】[高分句型1]First, sweets and sweet drinks not only give us extra calories, making us overweight but provide a favorable condition for germs to grow, resulting in bad teeth. （运用了现在分词作状语）

[高分句型2]However, I tried to award myself whenever I succeeded in cutting down desserts or sweet drinks.（运用了whenever引导的时间状语从句）

9．One possible version:

Dear Wang Mei,

I’m sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning English. Now I’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.

First of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons regularly after class. Besides, you’d better spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud. What’s more, try to communicate with your classmates in English. In this way you can improve your listening and spoken English. Last but not least, it would be a good idea to develop the habit of keeping a diary, which helps improve your written English and helps you go over the words and expressions that you have learnt.

I hope these suggestions will be useful to you.

Best wishes!

Yours

Li Hua

【导语】这是一篇应用文写作。题目要求学生以李华的身份针对好朋友王梅如何学好英语的询问回复电子邮件，并且提出一些建议，包括上课认真听讲，做好笔记；每天早上花半小时背诵单词，朗读课文；多与同学用英语交流，提高听力和口语能力；每天坚持写日记等。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

建议：advice→suggestion

复习：go over→review

提高：improve→promote

困难：difficulty→trouble

2. 句式拓展

陈述句变倒装句

原句：In this way you can improve your listening and spoken English.

倒装句：Only in this way can you improve your listening and spoken English.

【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning English.（that引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型2]Last but not least, it would be a good idea to develop the habit of keeping a diary, which helps improve your written English and helps you go over the words and expressions that you have learnt.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）

10．Dear Jack,

    I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble in adjusting to your high school life. Actually, it’s normal that freshmen feel confused about high school life, so don’t worry about it too much. I’m writing to offer you some useful advice.

To begin with, I recommend that you sign up for extracurricular activities, which can help you make more new friends. In this way, you won’t feel lonely and your school life will become colorful and interesting. In addition, you should make a good schedule and focus on improving your study. As teenagers, it is our responsibility to study well.

I hope my suggestions will be suitable for you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jack写一封回信，就他因刚升入高中，还无法适应新的校园生活的问题给予安慰，并提出建议，表达祝愿。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

适应：adjust to→adapt to

实际上：actually→ in fact

提供：offer→provide

建议：advice→suggestion

此外：in addition→besides

集中于：focus on→concentrate on

2. 句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Actually, it’s normal that freshmen feel confused about high school life, so don’t worry about it too much.

拓展句：Actually, it’s normal for freshmen to feel confused about high school life, so don’t worry about it too much.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Actually, it’s normal that freshmen feel confused about high school life, so don’t worry about it too much.（运用了以it为形式主语，连词that引导的主语从句和以so引导的结果状语从句。）

【高分句型2】To begin with, I recommend that you sign up for extracurricular activities, which can help you make more new friends. （运用了以连接词that引导的宾语从句和虚拟语气，以及以关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句。）