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广东高考英语写作分类训练：建议信
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建议信
1．假定你是李华，你的朋友 Peter 是就读于广州某学校的英国交换生，他对本地文化很感兴趣。广州博物馆将于 7 月 4 日下午 2：00 举办画展，请给 Peter 写一封电子邮件邀他一起观展。要点如下：
1. 提出邀请；
2. 画展时间及地点；
3. 观展后活动建议；
4. 请求对方回复。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I have good news to tell you.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．假设你是李华，你所在的学校拟在下周三举办一场地震知识讲座。请你根据以下内容要点给著名地质学家张教授写一封短信，邀请他给学生做这次讲座。信的内容包括：
讲座目的：提高同学们处理突发事件的能力和自救的能力；
讲座内容：了解地震的一般知识以及地震中逃生的知识；
讲座时间：共两个小时，包括1小时30分钟的讲座和30分钟的问答环节
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.参考词汇：互动:interaction
Dear Professor Zhang,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
3．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack因为疫情待在家中，为即将到来的考试焦虑不已，严重影响了生活和学习，为此写信向你求助。请你根据一下要点用英语给他回一封信。
1. 制定复习计划，树立信心
2. 坚持锻炼身体
3. 保持良好睡眠
注意：
1. 词数80词左右
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数
Dear Jack,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．假如你是李华，你的学校邀请了专家来校进行一场关于“地震”的演讲，现在请你写一篇书面通知，要求全体学生参加。内容如下：
1.演讲的时间、地点；
2.演讲的内容；
3.要求。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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5．假如你是李华，来自光明中学，你校羽毛球队应邀去新西兰一所中学参加中学生羽毛球友谊赛。请你给举办学校的联系人 Mr. Roger写一封邮件询问相关事宜，要点如下：
1.接受邀请，表示感谢；
2.询问食宿、交通及比赛日程等方面的安排；
3.提出相关建议。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Roger,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for all your help and look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假如你是李华，你的加拿大朋友Mike在与你同一城市的国际学校读书。你收到他的e-mail了解到他最近因为一次考试不及格而烦恼，请根据以下内容给Mike写一封回信，要点如下：
1.宽慰；
2.给予改进学习的建议（查找失败原因，向老师求助）；
3.邀请周末去打篮球。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
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7．假定你是李华，你所在的班明天英语课前有一个简短的演讲。请你写一篇关于倡议养成健康生活习惯的演讲稿，内容包括：
1.演讲的主题；
2.健康生活习惯的重要性；
3. 2~3条健康生活习惯的建议。
注意：
1.词数80个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hello, everyone!
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Wish you all the best. Thank you!
8．假定你是李华，著名的外国音乐家Sam将要到你们学校参观访问。学校学生会让你负责在学生中进行一次调查。请你根据以下调查结果写一份报告给校长并给出相关建议。
调查对象
来自我校的70名学生
调查内容
1. 如何组织活动与Sam进行互动2. 送什么礼物给Sam作为纪念；
建议
1. 关于活动的建议，如可以在礼堂组织活动，所有学生都有机会参与见面会并向Sam进行提问；……2. 关于礼物的建议，如可以手绘图画送给Sam；……
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入字数；
4. 不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校。
Dear Headmaster,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing this letter on behalf of the student union.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
9．为积极应对人口老龄化，我国已全面放开三胎。假定你是李华，你的父母计划生第三胎， 请给你校外籍教师Barton写信，谈谈你的看法。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右：
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答;
参考词汇：the aging population 人口老龄化；three-child policy 三孩政策；give birth to 生 孩子；sibling兄弟姐妹；the burden of…的负担
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10．假定你是李华。你校即将举办“英文读书月”活动——阅读并写读书笔记，请你给外教Mr. Smith写封邮件求助，内容包括：
1.介绍活动内容；
2.请他推荐英文书；
3.请教如何写读书笔记。
注意：
1.词数应为80左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
161．One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I have good news to tell you. An exhibition of paintings will be put on in Guangzhou Museum at 2:00 pm on July 4th. Knowing that you take a great fancy to Guangzhou culture, I am wondering whether you would like to go to the exhibition with me. If you can come, I suggest we appreciate the other exhibitions of Guangzhou history in the museum as well, which would hopefully satisfy your interest in this incredible city. Afterwards, I would like to invite you to have dinner with my family at home, trying some local food and my mother’s famous dishes. I am sure you’ll have an unforgettable cultural experience.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生，给自己的朋友Peter写一封邀请信，邀请他来参加画展。
【详解】1.词汇积累
展览：display → exhibition
想要：would like to do →want to do →intend to do
建议：suggest →advise →recommend
对…感兴趣：take a fancy to=be interested in =show an interest in
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I have good news to tell you. An exhibition of paintings will be put on in Guangzhou Museum at 2:00 pm on July 4th.
拓展句：I want to tell you good news that an exhibition of paintings will be put on in Guangzhou Museum at 2:00 pm on July 4th.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you take a great fancy to Guangzhou culture, I am wondering whether you would like to go to the exhibition with me.（分别运用了that和whether引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] If you can come, I suggest we appreciate the other exhibitions of Guangzhou history in the museum as well, which would hopefully satisfy your interest in this incredible city.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句，省略了that的宾语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句）
2．Dear Professor Zhang,
Our school is planning to have a lecture on how to survive in an earthquake next Wednesday and I’m writing to invite you to come and give a talk on earthquake safety tips. It will help equip us with knowledge about the signs of a coming earthquake, and improve our ability to deal with emergencies, thus saving ourselves effectively when an earthquake breaks out. Do you think one and a half hours will be enough for such a lecture? Besides, can a 30 minutes’ interaction be added after the lecture? Please let me know as soon as possible so that I can make arrangements.
I’m looking forward to seeing you again and enjoying the lecture.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给给著名地质学家张教授写一封短信，邀请他给学生做地震知识讲座。
【详解】1.词汇积累
讲座：speech→lecture
建议：advice→tip
保护：protect→save
发生：take place→break out
2.句式拓展
简单句变独立主格
原句：Our school is planning to have a lecture on how to survive in an earthquake next Wednesday and I’m writing to invite you to come and give a talk on earthquake safety tips.
拓展句：Our school planning to have a lecture on how to survive in an earthquake next Wednesday, I’m writing to invite you to come and give a talk on earthquake safety tips.
【点睛】[高分句型1]It will help equip us with knowledge about the signs of a coming earthquake, and improve our ability to deal with emergencies, thus saving ourselves effectively when an earthquake breaks out.(分词作状语)
[高分句型2] It will help equip us with knowledge about the signs of a coming earthquake, and improve our ability to deal with emergencies, thus saving ourselves effectively when an earthquake breaks out. (when引导时间状语从句)
3．Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear that you feel extremely nervous before an important exam. I'd like to give you some suggestions. First of all, you'd better make careful plans before exams to master what you've learned completely. It will help you build up your confidence. Besides, why not take proper exercise regularly, which will help you keep healthy and energetic. Last but not least, don't stay up late studying. It's very important to have a good sleep at night if you want to be energetic during the day. I hope my suggestions can help you reduce the pressure of exams and perform well in them. Best wishes!
Yours, Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据内容提示，给美国笔友Jack回一封信，提出一些建议，以缓解他的考试焦虑。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→advice
焦虑的：nervous→anxious
增强：build up→improve/enhance
首先：First of all →Firstly/To begin with
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：First of all, you'd better make careful plans before exams to master what you've learned completely. It will help you build up your confidence.
拓展句：First of all, you'd better make careful plans before exams to master what you've learned completely，which will help you build up your confidence.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides, why not take proper exercise regularly, which will help you keep healthy and energetic. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It's very important to have a good sleep at night if you want to be energetic during the day.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
4．Notice
In order to learn more about earthquakes, our school is scheduled to invite an expert, Professor Smith, to give us a lecture in the lecture hall from 8:30 to 10:30 this Friday morning.At the beginning, the expert is expected to share the most destructive earthquakes in history.Then the signs before an earthquake will be included.What’s the most important is that some advice on how to protect ourselves will be offered.All the students are required to be present on time and keep silent through the lecture.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，考生的学校邀请了专家来校进行一场关于“地震”的演讲，现在请考生写一篇书面通知，要求全体学生参加。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建议：advice→ suggestion
要求：require→ request
计划做某事：be scheduled to do sth→ plan to do sth
提供：offer→ provide
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：All the students are required to be present on time and keep silent through the lecture.
拓展句：All the students who are present are required to be present on time and keep silent through the lecture.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In order to learn more about earthquakes, our school is scheduled to invite an expert, Professor Smith, to give us a lecture in the lecture hall from 8:30 to 10:30 this Friday morning.（动词不定式作目的状语）
[高分句型2] What’s the most important is that some advice on how to protect ourselves will be offered.（what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）
5．Dear Mr. Roger,
I am Li Hua, a student from Guangming Middle School. We are delighted to accept the invitation to play a friendly badminton match, which will no doubt strengthen our friendship. I am writing to know more about the arrangements.
Since it is the first time for us to go to New Zealand, we'd like to know the details about the accommodations so that we can make some preparations in advance. We prefer to live in host families to experience local culture. Besides, is it possible for you to pick us up at the airport after our arrival? Also, I would appreciate it if you could work out a proper schedule for both sides.
Thank you for all your help and look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给举办学校的联系人 Mr. Roger写一封邮件询问中学生羽毛球友谊赛的相关事宜。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：competition→match
巩固：hence→strengthen
高兴的：glad→delighted
此外：in addition → Besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am Li Hua, a student from Guangming Middle School.
拓展句：I am Li Hua, who is a student from Guangming Middle School.
【点睛】[高分句型1] We are delighted to accept the invitation to play a friendly badminton match, which will no doubt strengthen our friendship. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Since it is the first time for us to go to New Zealand, we'd like to know the details about the accommodations so that we can make some preparations in advance. (运用了since引导原因状语从句)
6．Dear Mike,
I'm sorry to hear that you failed in the last exam. But I have to remind you that nobody can win all the time. So you had better forget the unchangeable fact and focus more energy on future studies.
To guarantee success in the next exam, you are advised to do what I will tell you to. First, find out the real reasons why you failed the exam. Only when you know where your mistakes are, will you know how to correct them. Besides, it is wise to turn to your teachers for help. After all, they are experienced. Meanwhile, remember to strike the balance with studies and rest. Adequate sleep and proper exercise will certainly make it possible for you to keep energetic.
How about playing football together this weekend? Surely we will have fun. Hoping everything will be fine with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给考试失利的朋友Mike写一封信安慰一下他，并给予建议，邀请他打篮球。
【详解】词汇量积累
保证：promise→guarantee
同时：at the same time→meanwhile
足够的：enough→adequate
玩得开心：enjoy oneself→have fun
句式拓展
原句：But nobody can win all the time. I have to remind you it.
拓展句：But I have to remind you that nobody can win all the time.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To guarantee success in the next exam, you are advised to do what I will tell you to. （运用了不定式做目的状语，且运用了what引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] Only when you know where your mistakes are, will you know how to correct them.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句，且运用了only+状语位于句首的部分倒装结构）
7．Hello, everyone!
I’m glad to stand here to share with you my ideas about healthy living habits. In my eyes, healthy living habits can keep us fit, protect us from getting ill and help us start a new day with full energy.
So we may take fresh fruits, meat and vegetables, and avoid eating too many snacks. Then taking appropriate exercise regularly is also necessary for good health.
When you arrive home from public places, please wash the hands, especially before touching your own eyes, nose or mouth. And when you sneeze and cough, it’s a good manner as well as a protection for public health that you use paper or handkerchief to cover the nose or mouth.
Wish you all the best. Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇关于倡议养成健康生活习惯的演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
观点：opinion→idea
保持健康：keep sb. healthy→keep sb. fit
生病的：sick→ill
必要的：essential→necessary
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Then taking appropriate exercise regularly is also necessary for good health.
拓展句：Then in order to stay in good health, it is also necessary for us to take appropriate exercise regularly.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Then taking appropriate exercise regularly is also necessary for good health. (运用了动名词作主语)
[高分句型2] And when you sneeze and cough, it’s a good manner as well as a protection for public health that you use paper or handkerchief to cover the nose or mouth. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
8．Possible version:
Dear Headmaster,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing this letter on behalf of the student union. Here are suggestions for the activity and present when Sam visits our school. It is based on a survey of 70 students.
Most students thought we can have an interview in the school hall. Sam could be on the stage and students could ask him questions. Besides, each class could prepare some hand-painting pictures or DIY creations as gifts for Sam. By doing what are mentioned above, we may leave a great impression on Sam and show him our sincerity. We hope these suggestions can be beneficial to you.
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生根据调查结果写一份报告给校长并给出相关建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
代表：represent→ on behalf of
根据：according to→ be based on
留下深刻的印象：be impressed with→ leave a great impression on
有益的：helpful→ beneficial
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Most students thought we can have an interview in the school hall. Sam could be on the stage and students could ask him questions.
拓展句：Most students thought we can have an interview on the stage of the school hall, where students could ask Sam questions.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Here are suggestions for the activity and present when Sam visits our school. （运用了由when引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2] By doing what are mentioned above, we may leave a great impression on Sam and show him our sincerity.（运用了由what引导的宾语从句作doing的宾语）
[高分句型3] We hope these suggestions can be beneficial to you.（运用了省略了that引导的宾语从句作hope的宾语）
9．One possible version:
Dear Barton,
How are you doing these days? I’m writing to share something about the three-child policy in China with you．
Actively responding to the aging population, China support couples having third child. Now my parents have made a decision to give birth to their third child, which excites me a lot. First of all, I can share everything I have with them. Besides, Watching my siblings play and fight is a kind of fun for me. Last but not least, we three can take care of my parents and support them together when they grow old.
However, I worry about how I can set a good example to my siblings. Could you give me some constructive suggestions?
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外籍教师Barton写信，谈谈自己对中国三胎政策的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
决定：decide → make a decision
告知某人某事：tell sb. about sth. →share sth. with sb．
生育: produce→give birth to
提供建议：give sb. good advice→ give sb. constructive suggestions.
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I worry about how I can set a good example to my siblings. Could you give me some constructive suggestions?
拓展句：Could you give me some constructive suggestions about how I can set a good example to my siblings?
【点睛】[高分句型1] Now my parents have made a decision to give birth to their third child, which excites me a lot. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] we three can take care of my parents and support them together when they grow old.(运用了时间状语从句)
10．Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to ask for your help. Our school is planning to hold an event called English Reading Month, in which we are required to read and English book and take notes.
I hope you can recommend an English book to me. Considering I’m not an advanced English learner, the book needs to be suitable for my level. It will be better if the book is about the life of teenagers. Meanwhile, I also feel confused about taking notes. Could you offer me some advice?
I’d appreciate it if you could reply to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写封邮件求助，介绍“英文读书月”活动内容、请他推荐英文书以及请教如何写读书笔记。
【详解】1.词汇积累
计划：intend to→plan to
建议：suggestion→advice
困惑的：puzzled→confused
适合：be fit for = be suitable for
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I’m writing to ask for your help. Our school is planning to hold an event called English Reading Month, in which we are required to read and English book and take notes.
拓展句：I’m writing to ask for your help because our school is planning to hold an event called English Reading Month, in which we are required to read and English book and take notes
【点睛】[高分句型1] Our school is planning to hold an event called English Reading Month, in which we are required to read and English book and take notes. (运用了“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It will be better if the book is about the life of teenagers. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
建议信
1．假定你是李华，你的朋友 Peter 是就读于广州某学校的英国交换生，他对本地文化很感兴趣。广州博物馆将于 7 月 4 日下午 2：00 举办画展，请给 Peter 写一封电子邮件邀他一起观展。要点如下：
1. 提出邀请；
2. 画展时间及地点；
3. 观展后活动建议；
4. 请求对方回复。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I have good news to tell you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．假设你是李华，你所在的学校拟在下周三举办一场地震知识讲座。请你根据以下内容要点给著名地质学家张教授写一封短信，邀请他给学生做这次讲座。信的内容包括：
讲座目的：提高同学们处理突发事件的能力和自救的能力；
讲座内容：了解地震的一般知识以及地震中逃生的知识；
讲座时间：共两个小时，包括1小时30分钟的讲座和30分钟的问答环节
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.参考词汇：互动:interaction
Dear Professor Zhang,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
3．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack因为疫情待在家中，为即将到来的考试焦虑不已，严重影响了生活和学习，为此写信向你求助。请你根据一下要点用英语给他回一封信。
1. 制定复习计划，树立信心
2. 坚持锻炼身体
3. 保持良好睡眠
注意：
1. 词数80词左右
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数
Dear Jack,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．假如你是李华，你的学校邀请了专家来校进行一场关于“地震”的演讲，现在请你写一篇书面通知，要求全体学生参加。内容如下：
1.演讲的时间、地点；
2.演讲的内容；
3.要求。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．假如你是李华，来自光明中学，你校羽毛球队应邀去新西兰一所中学参加中学生羽毛球友谊赛。请你给举办学校的联系人 Mr. Roger写一封邮件询问相关事宜，要点如下：
1.接受邀请，表示感谢；
2.询问食宿、交通及比赛日程等方面的安排；
3.提出相关建议。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Roger,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for all your help and look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假如你是李华，你的加拿大朋友Mike在与你同一城市的国际学校读书。你收到他的e-mail了解到他最近因为一次考试不及格而烦恼，请根据以下内容给Mike写一封回信，要点如下：
1.宽慰；
2.给予改进学习的建议（查找失败原因，向老师求助）；
3.邀请周末去打篮球。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．假定你是李华，你所在的班明天英语课前有一个简短的演讲。请你写一篇关于倡议养成健康生活习惯的演讲稿，内容包括：
1.演讲的主题；
2.健康生活习惯的重要性；
3. 2~3条健康生活习惯的建议。
注意：
1.词数80个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hello, everyone!
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Wish you all the best. Thank you!
8．假定你是李华，著名的外国音乐家Sam将要到你们学校参观访问。学校学生会让你负责在学生中进行一次调查。请你根据以下调查结果写一份报告给校长并给出相关建议。
调查对象
来自我校的70名学生
调查内容
1. 如何组织活动与Sam进行互动2. 送什么礼物给Sam作为纪念；
建议
1. 关于活动的建议，如可以在礼堂组织活动，所有学生都有机会参与见面会并向Sam进行提问；……2. 关于礼物的建议，如可以手绘图画送给Sam；……
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入字数；
4. 不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校。
Dear Headmaster,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing this letter on behalf of the student union.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
9．为积极应对人口老龄化，我国已全面放开三胎。假定你是李华，你的父母计划生第三胎， 请给你校外籍教师Barton写信，谈谈你的看法。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右：
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答;
参考词汇：the aging population 人口老龄化；three-child policy 三孩政策；give birth to 生 孩子；sibling兄弟姐妹；the burden of…的负担
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10．假定你是李华。你校即将举办“英文读书月”活动——阅读并写读书笔记，请你给外教Mr. Smith写封邮件求助，内容包括：
1.介绍活动内容；
2.请他推荐英文书；
3.请教如何写读书笔记。
注意：
1.词数应为80左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
161．One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I have good news to tell you. An exhibition of paintings will be put on in Guangzhou Museum at 2:00 pm on July 4th. Knowing that you take a great fancy to Guangzhou culture, I am wondering whether you would like to go to the exhibition with me. If you can come, I suggest we appreciate the other exhibitions of Guangzhou history in the museum as well, which would hopefully satisfy your interest in this incredible city. Afterwards, I would like to invite you to have dinner with my family at home, trying some local food and my mother’s famous dishes. I am sure you’ll have an unforgettable cultural experience.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生，给自己的朋友Peter写一封邀请信，邀请他来参加画展。
【详解】1.词汇积累
展览：display → exhibition
想要：would like to do →want to do →intend to do
建议：suggest →advise →recommend
对…感兴趣：take a fancy to=be interested in =show an interest in
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I have good news to tell you. An exhibition of paintings will be put on in Guangzhou Museum at 2:00 pm on July 4th.
拓展句：I want to tell you good news that an exhibition of paintings will be put on in Guangzhou Museum at 2:00 pm on July 4th.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you take a great fancy to Guangzhou culture, I am wondering whether you would like to go to the exhibition with me.（分别运用了that和whether引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] If you can come, I suggest we appreciate the other exhibitions of Guangzhou history in the museum as well, which would hopefully satisfy your interest in this incredible city.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句，省略了that的宾语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句）
2．Dear Professor Zhang,
Our school is planning to have a lecture on how to survive in an earthquake next Wednesday and I’m writing to invite you to come and give a talk on earthquake safety tips. It will help equip us with knowledge about the signs of a coming earthquake, and improve our ability to deal with emergencies, thus saving ourselves effectively when an earthquake breaks out. Do you think one and a half hours will be enough for such a lecture? Besides, can a 30 minutes’ interaction be added after the lecture? Please let me know as soon as possible so that I can make arrangements.
I’m looking forward to seeing you again and enjoying the lecture.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给给著名地质学家张教授写一封短信，邀请他给学生做地震知识讲座。
【详解】1.词汇积累
讲座：speech→lecture
建议：advice→tip
保护：protect→save
发生：take place→break out
2.句式拓展
简单句变独立主格
原句：Our school is planning to have a lecture on how to survive in an earthquake next Wednesday and I’m writing to invite you to come and give a talk on earthquake safety tips.
拓展句：Our school planning to have a lecture on how to survive in an earthquake next Wednesday, I’m writing to invite you to come and give a talk on earthquake safety tips.
【点睛】[高分句型1]It will help equip us with knowledge about the signs of a coming earthquake, and improve our ability to deal with emergencies, thus saving ourselves effectively when an earthquake breaks out.(分词作状语)
[高分句型2] It will help equip us with knowledge about the signs of a coming earthquake, and improve our ability to deal with emergencies, thus saving ourselves effectively when an earthquake breaks out. (when引导时间状语从句)
3．Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear that you feel extremely nervous before an important exam. I'd like to give you some suggestions. First of all, you'd better make careful plans before exams to master what you've learned completely. It will help you build up your confidence. Besides, why not take proper exercise regularly, which will help you keep healthy and energetic. Last but not least, don't stay up late studying. It's very important to have a good sleep at night if you want to be energetic during the day. I hope my suggestions can help you reduce the pressure of exams and perform well in them. Best wishes!
Yours, Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据内容提示，给美国笔友Jack回一封信，提出一些建议，以缓解他的考试焦虑。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→advice
焦虑的：nervous→anxious
增强：build up→improve/enhance
首先：First of all →Firstly/To begin with
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：First of all, you'd better make careful plans before exams to master what you've learned completely. It will help you build up your confidence.
拓展句：First of all, you'd better make careful plans before exams to master what you've learned completely，which will help you build up your confidence.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides, why not take proper exercise regularly, which will help you keep healthy and energetic. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It's very important to have a good sleep at night if you want to be energetic during the day.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
4．Notice
In order to learn more about earthquakes, our school is scheduled to invite an expert, Professor Smith, to give us a lecture in the lecture hall from 8:30 to 10:30 this Friday morning.At the beginning, the expert is expected to share the most destructive earthquakes in history.Then the signs before an earthquake will be included.What’s the most important is that some advice on how to protect ourselves will be offered.All the students are required to be present on time and keep silent through the lecture.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，考生的学校邀请了专家来校进行一场关于“地震”的演讲，现在请考生写一篇书面通知，要求全体学生参加。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建议：advice→ suggestion
要求：require→ request
计划做某事：be scheduled to do sth→ plan to do sth
提供：offer→ provide
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：All the students are required to be present on time and keep silent through the lecture.
拓展句：All the students who are present are required to be present on time and keep silent through the lecture.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In order to learn more about earthquakes, our school is scheduled to invite an expert, Professor Smith, to give us a lecture in the lecture hall from 8:30 to 10:30 this Friday morning.（动词不定式作目的状语）
[高分句型2] What’s the most important is that some advice on how to protect ourselves will be offered.（what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）
5．Dear Mr. Roger,
I am Li Hua, a student from Guangming Middle School. We are delighted to accept the invitation to play a friendly badminton match, which will no doubt strengthen our friendship. I am writing to know more about the arrangements.
Since it is the first time for us to go to New Zealand, we'd like to know the details about the accommodations so that we can make some preparations in advance. We prefer to live in host families to experience local culture. Besides, is it possible for you to pick us up at the airport after our arrival? Also, I would appreciate it if you could work out a proper schedule for both sides.
Thank you for all your help and look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给举办学校的联系人 Mr. Roger写一封邮件询问中学生羽毛球友谊赛的相关事宜。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：competition→match
巩固：hence→strengthen
高兴的：glad→delighted
此外：in addition → Besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am Li Hua, a student from Guangming Middle School.
拓展句：I am Li Hua, who is a student from Guangming Middle School.
【点睛】[高分句型1] We are delighted to accept the invitation to play a friendly badminton match, which will no doubt strengthen our friendship. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Since it is the first time for us to go to New Zealand, we'd like to know the details about the accommodations so that we can make some preparations in advance. (运用了since引导原因状语从句)
6．Dear Mike,
I'm sorry to hear that you failed in the last exam. But I have to remind you that nobody can win all the time. So you had better forget the unchangeable fact and focus more energy on future studies.
To guarantee success in the next exam, you are advised to do what I will tell you to. First, find out the real reasons why you failed the exam. Only when you know where your mistakes are, will you know how to correct them. Besides, it is wise to turn to your teachers for help. After all, they are experienced. Meanwhile, remember to strike the balance with studies and rest. Adequate sleep and proper exercise will certainly make it possible for you to keep energetic.
How about playing football together this weekend? Surely we will have fun. Hoping everything will be fine with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给考试失利的朋友Mike写一封信安慰一下他，并给予建议，邀请他打篮球。
【详解】词汇量积累
保证：promise→guarantee
同时：at the same time→meanwhile
足够的：enough→adequate
玩得开心：enjoy oneself→have fun
句式拓展
原句：But nobody can win all the time. I have to remind you it.
拓展句：But I have to remind you that nobody can win all the time.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To guarantee success in the next exam, you are advised to do what I will tell you to. （运用了不定式做目的状语，且运用了what引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] Only when you know where your mistakes are, will you know how to correct them.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句，且运用了only+状语位于句首的部分倒装结构）
7．Hello, everyone!
I’m glad to stand here to share with you my ideas about healthy living habits. In my eyes, healthy living habits can keep us fit, protect us from getting ill and help us start a new day with full energy.
So we may take fresh fruits, meat and vegetables, and avoid eating too many snacks. Then taking appropriate exercise regularly is also necessary for good health.
When you arrive home from public places, please wash the hands, especially before touching your own eyes, nose or mouth. And when you sneeze and cough, it’s a good manner as well as a protection for public health that you use paper or handkerchief to cover the nose or mouth.
Wish you all the best. Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇关于倡议养成健康生活习惯的演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
观点：opinion→idea
保持健康：keep sb. healthy→keep sb. fit
生病的：sick→ill
必要的：essential→necessary
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Then taking appropriate exercise regularly is also necessary for good health.
拓展句：Then in order to stay in good health, it is also necessary for us to take appropriate exercise regularly.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Then taking appropriate exercise regularly is also necessary for good health. (运用了动名词作主语)
[高分句型2] And when you sneeze and cough, it’s a good manner as well as a protection for public health that you use paper or handkerchief to cover the nose or mouth. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
8．Possible version:
Dear Headmaster,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing this letter on behalf of the student union. Here are suggestions for the activity and present when Sam visits our school. It is based on a survey of 70 students.
Most students thought we can have an interview in the school hall. Sam could be on the stage and students could ask him questions. Besides, each class could prepare some hand-painting pictures or DIY creations as gifts for Sam. By doing what are mentioned above, we may leave a great impression on Sam and show him our sincerity. We hope these suggestions can be beneficial to you.
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生根据调查结果写一份报告给校长并给出相关建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
代表：represent→ on behalf of
根据：according to→ be based on
留下深刻的印象：be impressed with→ leave a great impression on
有益的：helpful→ beneficial
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Most students thought we can have an interview in the school hall. Sam could be on the stage and students could ask him questions.
拓展句：Most students thought we can have an interview on the stage of the school hall, where students could ask Sam questions.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Here are suggestions for the activity and present when Sam visits our school. （运用了由when引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2] By doing what are mentioned above, we may leave a great impression on Sam and show him our sincerity.（运用了由what引导的宾语从句作doing的宾语）
[高分句型3] We hope these suggestions can be beneficial to you.（运用了省略了that引导的宾语从句作hope的宾语）
9．One possible version:
Dear Barton,
How are you doing these days? I’m writing to share something about the three-child policy in China with you．
Actively responding to the aging population, China support couples having third child. Now my parents have made a decision to give birth to their third child, which excites me a lot. First of all, I can share everything I have with them. Besides, Watching my siblings play and fight is a kind of fun for me. Last but not least, we three can take care of my parents and support them together when they grow old.
However, I worry about how I can set a good example to my siblings. Could you give me some constructive suggestions?
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外籍教师Barton写信，谈谈自己对中国三胎政策的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
决定：decide → make a decision
告知某人某事：tell sb. about sth. →share sth. with sb．
生育: produce→give birth to
提供建议：give sb. good advice→ give sb. constructive suggestions.
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I worry about how I can set a good example to my siblings. Could you give me some constructive suggestions?
拓展句：Could you give me some constructive suggestions about how I can set a good example to my siblings?
【点睛】[高分句型1] Now my parents have made a decision to give birth to their third child, which excites me a lot. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] we three can take care of my parents and support them together when they grow old.(运用了时间状语从句)
10．Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to ask for your help. Our school is planning to hold an event called English Reading Month, in which we are required to read and English book and take notes.
I hope you can recommend an English book to me. Considering I’m not an advanced English learner, the book needs to be suitable for my level. It will be better if the book is about the life of teenagers. Meanwhile, I also feel confused about taking notes. Could you offer me some advice?
I’d appreciate it if you could reply to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写封邮件求助，介绍“英文读书月”活动内容、请他推荐英文书以及请教如何写读书笔记。
【详解】1.词汇积累
计划：intend to→plan to
建议：suggestion→advice
困惑的：puzzled→confused
适合：be fit for = be suitable for
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I’m writing to ask for your help. Our school is planning to hold an event called English Reading Month, in which we are required to read and English book and take notes.
拓展句：I’m writing to ask for your help because our school is planning to hold an event called English Reading Month, in which we are required to read and English book and take notes
【点睛】[高分句型1] Our school is planning to hold an event called English Reading Month, in which we are required to read and English book and take notes. (运用了“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It will be better if the book is about the life of teenagers. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
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