上海中考英语看图作文专项训练

这是一份上海中考英语看图作文专项训练，共14页。试卷主要包含了Writing等内容，欢迎下载使用。

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2．Write at least 60 wrds abut the tpic “A visit t the park with my parents” (请以“和父母一起去公园玩”为主题，写一篇不少于60字的文章，标点符号不占格)
Phrases and pictures fr reference (以下短语和图片仅供参考)
ride a bike
fly kites
have a picnic
have a gd time
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3．Write at least 50 wrds t describe the picture（请根据图片的内容，写一篇至少50个单词的短文，要求内容连贯，语句通顺，至少包含一句使用比较级的句子，标点符号不占格。）
（须包含以下要点）
 What d Mr. Lin and Miss Chen lk like?
 Where d they live?
 What d they like ding?
 Wh wuld yu like t learn frm? Why?
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4．根据图画内容及所给提示，以“Bb’s Busy Sunday”为题写一篇短文，介绍Bb上周日的活动。提示：图1和图2是上午的活动；图3和图4是下午的活动；图5和图6是晚上的活动。
要求： 1. 时态正确，语言流畅； 2. 60词左右，可适当发挥。
Bb’s Busy Sunday
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5．Write at least 60 wrds accrding t the pictures abut “A spring uting”（根据所给图片，写一篇关于“春游”的短文，题目可以另拟，字数不少于60词，标点符号不占格。）
climb a muntain pick up paper and bttles thrw…int dustbins
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6．In 60-100 wrds, write a stry t g alng with the given pictures. (根据所给图片和标题，合理发挥想象，用 60 至 100 个词写一个故事。故事开头已给。标点符号不占格)
My nisy neighbur
Last Sunday, my neighbur had a hme party with her friends.
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7．Writing: Yu had a very strange dream last night and yu want t tell yur friend Jim abut it. The fllwing are pictures f yur dream. Write a letter telling Jim abut yur dream.
1. 2. 3.
4. 5. 6.

8．Write passage f at least 60 wrds accrding t the given picture.（以所给提示和图片为主题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
很多父母希望孩子将时间都花在学习。假如你是图中的学生黄敏，请根据图示将昨天下午放学回家后发生的事情和你的想法用不少于60个字的短文表达，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Yesterday afternn, I went hme after schl.
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9．Suppse yu are Mark. Yu witnessed a crime. Write a diary in 60-120 wrds abut it. (假设你是Mark，看到了一起犯罪活动，就你所见所为写一篇60-120个词的日记，标点符号不占格)
The fllwing questins are fr reference（以下问题仅供参考）: Wh did yu see? When and where did yu see them? What were they ding? Hw did yu feel? What did yu d then?




10．Writing（作文）
In 60﹣100wrds，write a stry based n the pictures belw．（展开合理想象，看图写一篇60﹣100个词的有趣的短文故事，标点符号不占格）
The fllwing wrds and phrases are fr reference nly．（以下单词和短语仅供参考）
hurs f studying take a break a pair f skates．
1．例文：
Life skills are necessary fr us. What life skills shuld we teenagers develp? And hw? Here is my pinin.
First, we shuld try ur best t keep healthy. It’s a gd idea t keep a balanced diet and take daily exercise. And be happy every day. Secnd, wrking with thers is imprtant. Smetimes, we need t wrk as a team. When we cmmunicate with thers, try t understand them. Third, slve prblems in different ways. We shuld be able t find ut the prblem, find slutins alne r with thers and then slve it. Besides, learn t manage time. We can make a list f things t d every mrning. Get up early and never be late fr schl. Finally, learn t d sme husewrk, such as cking. We can ask family fr help r search the Internet. Then practice making sme dishes.
All in all, if we try ur best t imprve these life skills, we will lead a happier and healthier life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏思维导图中给出的关键信息，介绍青少年应该掌握的一些生活技能。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文的主题，介绍青少年该培养的生活技能；
第二步，具体分条介绍要培养那些生活技能及如何培养；
第三步，收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①try ne’s best t d sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事
②keep a balanced diet 保持均衡饮食
③cmmunicate with sb. 与某人交流
[高分句型]
①It’s a gd idea t keep a balanced diet and take daily exercise.（it固定句式）
②When we cmmunicate with thers, try t understand them.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③Get up early and never be late fr schl.（and连接并列祈使句）
2．例文：
A visit t the park with my parents
Last Sunday, the weather was very gd. My parents and I went t the park fr a picnic by bike. We brught a lt f delicius fd. We enjyed the beauty f nature alng the way. We flew kites and went bats there. We als tk many phts and met many children. We played games tgether. I als made many friends. We had a gd time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意结合图片进行写作，具体介绍和父母去公园游玩的经历，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。首先介绍上周日的天气状况来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍游玩时做了什么。
第三步，书写结语。表达“我们玩得很开心”的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①a lt f许多，大量
②have a gd time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①We flew kites and went bats there.（and连接并列的成分）
3．
Mr. Lin is very fat. Miss Chen is very slim. S Mr. Lin is much fatter than Miss Chen. Mr. Lin lives in the city. But Miss Chen lives in the cuntryside. Mr. Lin likes t eat junk fd. Miss Chen likes wrking. I’d like t learn frm Miss Chen. Because I want t be a healthy persn.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏题干中的“至少包含一句使用比较级的句子”，注意结合图片内容进行描写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍两人的外貌、居住地和喜欢做的事情；
第二步，阐述自己想向谁学习，以及原因。
[亮点词汇]
① live in 住在……
② in cuntryside 在乡下
③ junk fd 垃圾食品
④ learn frm 向……学习
[高分句型]
S Mr. Lin is much fatter than Miss Chen.（比较级+than）
4．例文：
Bb’s Busy Sunday
Bb was very busy last Sunday. In the mrning, he washed his clthes first and then did his hmewrk. It was time fr exercise in the afternn. He went t the playgrund t play ftball with his friends. After that, he went t the park t walk his dgs. Evening was a time t relax. He cked delicius dinner. After dinner, he watched TV fr a while befre ging t the bed. What a busy Sunday! But Bb felt very happy.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文，题目为“Bb忙碌的周日”，图片分别给出了Bb周日上午、下午和晚上做的事情，写作时注意包括全部内容，可适当添加细节。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般过去时，以第三人称进行写作。先引出主题，再按照时间顺序描述Bb所做的活动，最后总结收尾。注意全文时态一致，做到无拼写和语法错误。
5．One pssible versin:
A spring uting
Spring in March, accmpanied by the cmfrtable weather and warm sunshine, ur class had a spring uting n Saturday.
We went t Renmin Park and hld sme activities. All f my classmates were s excited that we lked like the birds just cming ut frm birdcage. We climbed a muntain and went bating. We picked up paper and bttles then threw them int dustbins. At the same time, we enjyed the beautiful scenery f spring. Sme peple in the park als jined us and had fun. We had a happy day and the relatinship f us were getting clser.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇看图作文。要求根据图片提示，写一篇关于“春游”的短文。要包含所有要点，并适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文时态是一般过去时，主要用第一人称来书写。在写作时应该注意符合题意，做到无语法和单词拼写错误，可适当补充细节使文章连贯。
6．例文：
My nisy neighbur
Last Sunday, my neighbur had a hme party with her friends. The party began frm 5:00 p.m. They sang, danced and laughed ludly. At 11:30 p.m. the party still cntinued. I culdn’t stand it, s I kncked at her dr. I tld her it was midnight and let her keep quiet. But she just ignred me. Finally, I called the plice fr help. With the help f the plicemen, the party ended. And next mrning, my neighbur aplgized t me fr what happened last night. I tld her that it’s everyne’s jb t prtect the cmmunity.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。根据所给图片编写一个故事。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。按照图片显示内容，合理编写一个故事，逻辑要紧密，注意时态的用法，保证无词汇和语法错误。
7．Dear Jim
Last night, I had a very strange dream. This dream was s special and unfrgettable that I can’t wait t share it with yu here.
When I was just arriving hme after taking a walk last night, I fund a spaceship n the grassland near my huse in surprise. Just then, a friendly alien stepped ut f the spaceship and invited me t a new place. Quite strangely, I fllwed him int his spaceship and then arrived at an unknwn planet. Then, the alien tk ut a laser trch and pinted it at me! My eyes became blind immediately. Sn I gt extremely frightened. Just at that mment, I wke up! Actually, it was just a bad dream! I felt relieved at nce.
As yu can see, it was such a frightening experience and nw I really wnder whether aliens are bad r gd. S what’s yur pinin n this issue? Write sn!
Yurs
【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于看图作文，整个文章根据所给的图片，所用的描述语言语意连贯，句式规范。
2.例文点评：例文采取第一人称来描述，时态采用一般过去时，准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。整篇文章中关于梦境的描述逻辑严谨，语句通顺。
3.高分亮点：This dream was s special and unfrgettable that I can’t wait t share it with yu here中s…that…引导的是结果状语从句；When I was just arriving hme after taking a walk last night, I fund a spaceship n the grassland near my huse in surprise中when引导的是时间状语从句；I really wnder whether aliens are bad r gd 中whether引导的是宾语从句。
8．范文
Yesterday afternn, I went hme after schl. I wanted t help my father t sweep the flr, but he said, “Yu needn't d that. D sme reading!” Later when I was watching TV, my mther came and turned ff the TV and said, “Yu shuldn't waste yur time. G t study!” I knw clearly the imprtance f studying, but I still wnder if I shuld spend all the time n my study. There are many ther things fr me t learn, t!
【详解】1. 题干解读：文章主要以图片的方式呈现出要写的内容，在写作前首先要仔细观察图片所描述的内容，可以结合自己身边的事例或者自己的亲身经历描述，文章开头已经给出，要注意衔接。
2. 例文点评：本文主要描述“父母认为以学习为主”的话题展开叙述，阐述了父母认为的观点和我自己认为的观点，短文结构完整，语言简单易懂，描述清晰。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：after schl；want t d；help sb t d；spend…n。
句型：when引导的时间状语从句；if引导的宾语从句。
9．Tday I came acrss a terrifying event. After supper, I walked my dg in the park near my hme as usual. At a turning crner f the park, my dg nticed a number plate f a car and I was quite curius. Walking frward, I fund smething unusual. I saw fur men and a car there. A man was carrying several packs t the trunk, I culd see it was plenty f mney inside the packs. Tw men were painting the car in anther clr, while the last men were changing the number plate f the car in frnt f it. I knew immediately that I had witnessed a crime and thse criminals were trying t uncver the crime. I felt terrified, but I knew it was my duty t reprt it t the plice. S I quietly left there and went t the plice statin right away. At last, the plice caught thse criminals successfully. I felt prud f myself.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于看图作文，要求根据图片内容描述一次事件，其实是记叙文写作。根据要求首先要根据图片理清事件的内容，其次可采用参考内容中给出的叙事方向。
2. 例文点评：例文用第一人称来叙述个人的经历，时态采用一般过去时为主；此次事件的描述前因后果、时间地点、人物及其行为等都描写得非常完整，逻辑清晰、条理分明。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：cme acrss；as usual；in frnt f；try t d；right away；at last；feel prud f sb.。
句型：that引导的宾语从句；while引导的时间状语从句；it’s+n.+t d sth.。
10．One Sunday afternn， Tm stayed hme，preparing fr the cming exam．（引出话题） After several hurs' study， he was tired and determined t take a break． （介绍第一幅图的内容）S he tk ut a pair f skates， enjying ging skating n cuntry rads（高分句型）．（介绍第二幅图的内容） Suddenly a little cat rushed ut frm the side and scared Tm a lt， but time was t shrt fr Tm t stp． As a result， Tm fell dwn and the little cat was hurt． （介绍第三幅图的内容）Seeing this little cat， Tm hurried t send it t the hspital nearby（高分句型）． Luckily， the little cat wasn't hurt badly． After treatment， Tm tk it hme and tk gd care f it． They became gd friends and lived a happy life．（想象第四幅图的内容）
【详解】题干分析：本篇作文题材是漫画类作文，根据题目要求，展开想象，描述这四幅图，因此文章体裁应为记叙文，需注意时间地点人物的介绍，以及整篇文章所使用的时态立为一般过去时。文章重心应放在第三第四副图上，要做到详略得当。
例文点评：本文主要以三人称为主，时态为一般过去时。例文故事情节连贯，并且运用了一些亮点短语与句型。
高分亮点：
短语：prepare fr为…做准备；determine t d sth决心做某事；take a break休息；a pair f一副，一套；rush ut冲出去；As a result结果；fall dwn摔倒。
句型：S he tk ut a pair f skates，enjying ging skating n cuntry rads．于是他拿出一双溜冰鞋，在乡间小路上享受溜冰的乐趣。这里enjy ding sth表示喜欢做某事。
Seeing this little cat，Tm hurried t send it t the hspital nearby．看到这只小猫，汤姆急忙把它送到附近的医院。这里hurry t d sth表示着急做某事。