上海中考英语话题作文专项训练

话题作文

1．Write at least 60 words on the topic “I learned a lot from...”（以“我从……学到了很多”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格）

提示：每个人都能通过不同的方式学到有益于成长的东西，请结合具体事例谈谈你自己的感悟。

(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。照抄语篇不得分)

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2．Write at least 60 words according on the topic of “ ________ made me a difference”.

生活、学习中的经历，我们亲人、朋友或是陌生人等，都可能对我们产生影响，让我们发生一些变化。这些变化往往会有助于我们的成长。请结合一次自身经历，以“ ________ 改变了我”为题，写一篇短文，标点符号不占格。

（注意：1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。）

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3．Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “A decision I made”（请以“决定”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

在学习和生活中，我们会做出许多决定，有时会庆幸自己的决定是正确的，有时也会为错误的决定而懊恼后悔。这些决定都会让我们有所感悟。请结合你的经历，谈谈你的感受。

注意：

1) 抄袭试卷中内容不得分；

2) 文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

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4．Write at least 50 words about the topic “I will possibly be a ... in the future”. （以“我将来很可能成为一名……”为题写一篇不少于 50 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）

The following questions for reference（以下问题仅供参考）

What will you possibly be in the future?

Why do you think so?

What are you good at?

What are you poor at?

What do you have to practise more?

What do you have to learn?

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5．The school newspaper is going to use the given photo in the culture section. It’s a photo of two exchange students from America. Please write a short news article entitled “Exploring Chinese Culture” based on the given photo for the newspaper.

校报准备在报纸文化栏里用到所给照片做报道。这张照片主人公是两位来自美国的交换生。请仔细看所给照片，并为报纸撰写一篇题为“探索中国文化”的简单报道。不少于60词。

(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格)

剪纸paper cutting        书法 calligraphy

Exploring Chinese Culture

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6．Write at least 60 words on the topic “I’d like to pass________on”补全题目，以“我愿传递________”为题，写一篇不少于 60 词的短文，标点符号不占格。

传递一种精神、一种品质、一种态度、一种情感、一种能量……。请结合自身经历， 谈谈你在家庭、学校或社会中所愿传递的东西。

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7．Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “________ makes no difference”. （以“……是无济于事的”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）阅读D篇怀特家的故事告诉我们：一旦事情已经发生，责备任何人都无济于事，相反会让被责备的人背负罪恶感。在我们的生活中，总会遇到困难或者发生一些不愉快的事情，这时候谩骂、责备、抱怨、生气、担忧等等都不会起到任何作用。我们应该改变自身，寻求智慧的解决办法。请结合你的经历或见闻，谈谈你的感受。写作前请你先把题目补充完整。

注意：

文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。抄袭阅读理解语篇的不给分。

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8．Write at least 60 words on the topic “The moving moment in my life”（请以“生活中让我感动的瞬间”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

在你的生活中一定有许多令人感动的记忆，请结合自己的个人经历，谈谈发生了哪件事，并具体讲述为何这个瞬间最能触动你的心灵。

（注意：1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）

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9．Write at least 60 words on the topic “Small tricks to improve happiness” (以“提升幸福感的小妙招”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)

3月20日是国际幸福日。快乐、自信、充实、自豪，当你拥有这些感受，你就是一个幸福的人。生活中的一些小妙招可以让我们获得幸福感，请你结合自己或他人的经历和感受描述至少两个提升幸福感的小妙招，并说明一下理由。

(注意: 1.短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)

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10．Write at least 60 words on the topic “The most important rule in my family”. (以“我家最重要的一条家规”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

国有国法，家有家规 (family rule)。不同家庭有不同家规。如：做人诚实、尊敬长辈、天天阅读、人人做家务或吃饭时不能刷手机等等。在你家里，可能也有很多家规，那么你认为你家最看重的家规是哪一条呢？为什么？请举例说明。

注意：

1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。

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参加答案

1．例文：

I learned a lot from my teacher

Recently, I’ve learned something helpful from my English teacher Mr. Li for my future life. I’ve had a change in my life. It makes me realize that how important it is for me to be confident.

I was poor at English and my English score was so disappointing that I became mad at myself. But my teacher Mr. Li told me that I could have done much better if I believed in myself. Every time I met with some English problems, I told myself “You should be confident and you can do it.” And out of my expectation, I got an “A” in my English exam a month later. Not until then did I realize I had a gift for English.

There is nothing that I can’t do if I am confident enough.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文。以“我从……学到了很多”为题进行写作，在写作时应根据题目要求讲述自己学到有益于成长的东西，需要结合具体实例叙述自己的感悟，可以适当发挥。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主，结合具体事例讲述自己学到有益于成长的东西和自己的感受，要叙述完整，条理清晰。

2．

Persistence made me a difference

In our life, our family or friends, even some strangers, as well as what we’ve gone through in our study or daily life, may make us a difference. What made me a difference is the persistence my mother once taught me.

I can well remember the day when I first learnt the English word “valley”. I was five years old then and my mother was trying to taught me English words. When my mother pronounced the word “valley”, I tried over and over again, but it was too difficult for me to pronounce the v sound correctly, so I failed. I began to get angry and was unwilling to utter any sound any more. At that time, my mother just tried her best to encourage me to pronounce again. She told me that if I could keep trying pronouncing the word, I would succeed in the end. Nobody else could help me. Only I, myself could. So I did as my mother told me. I tried hard even if I was making mistakes all the time. But suddenly, I heard my mother cheer, “You did it, my boy!”. It was persistence that helped me succeed. I was greatly moved indeed.

From then on, persistence is always with me, especially whenever I come across difficulties. And I never give up easily. Persistence made me a difference.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文属于话题作文写作，以“……改变了我”为题，按照记叙文的格式，讲述自己的一次亲身经历，说明是“什么改变了我”，可以是某些人，也可以是某个物件或某个抽象概念。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称单数来写；在记叙亲身经历时，时态以一般过去时为主；在陈述观点时，时态以一般现在时为主。写作时按记叙文的格式来写，第一段开门见山，直接说明“改变了我”的东西是什么；第二段记叙自己的亲身经历为主；第三段回应主题并结尾。叙述亲身经历是这篇文章的主体部分，讲述时要说清楚事件的来龙去脉，适时抒发自己的感悟。

3．范文：

A decision I made

Our lives are the sum of all our decision. The decisions we make today may play an important role in our future. When I was thirteen, my mother wanted me to be a girl who was good at school work. However, I was keen on playing the drum a lot and didn’t like study at all. As a result, we quarreled with each other a lot. As time passed by, I gradually found that one should be knowledgeable, no matter what he would be in the future. I decided to work hard and regarded playing the drum as my hobby. I think the decision I’ve made must be wise one.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：题目要求以“A decision I made”为题，叙述自己所做过的决定，以及自己的感受。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，并且把故事发生的背景、起因和过程叙述完整，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。

4．例文

I will possibly be a writer in the future

I will possibly be a writer in the future. Maybe writing is hard, but it can bring me much happiness.

When I was young, I liked reading and writing very much. And I also had a good imagination. So I would like to be a writer in the future. I think writing is interesting and it can make me interested in the beautiful world.

To be a writer, I should do many things. I am supposed to read more and write more. I need to gain much knowledge and practice writing skills. If I study hard and practice more, I believe I can be a good writer in the future.

【解析】

【详解】

1. 题干解读：本文属于半命题作文，要求以“我将来很可能成为一名……”为题，参考所给的问题，进行写作。

2. 写作指导：本文综合使用一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时，采用第一人称口吻。第一段主要点明作者将来很可能从事的职业，第二段具体说明原因，第三段阐述应该如何做并结尾。注意语句通顺，无拼写和语法错误。

5．例文：

Exploring Chinese Culture

In order to arouse students’ interest in exploring Chinese culture and enrich our school life, our school held a Culture Day last week. Hundreds of us took part in it.

As scheduled, students gathered at the assembly hall at 2 p.m. Tuesday. 15 students delivered their speeches introducing different Chinese culture in turn, which were well received by the audience. Later, some students showed some traditional skills, such as knitting, making kites and performing Beijing opera. Some American students were interested in the paper cutting and calligraphy. They learned Chinese characters and tried to write some of them with writing brushes.

The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it improve our understanding of Chinese culture, but it also provided a great chance for us to show ourselves. What a wonderful time!

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求讲述学校的文化节的具体过程。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主，讲述文化节的活动和中国文化的体验，要叙述完整，条理清晰。

6．例文：

I’d like to pass the helpful spirit on

We face many difficulties at school. For example, when I played football, I fell down and hurt my leg. My classmates helped me to go to the school hospital. When I met some difficult math questions, my classmates helped me to work them out. These things made me happy and comfortable. I want to pass the helpful spirit on. I think helping others is to help ourselves.

【解析】

【详解】

1、题干解读：该题目属于话题作文写作，写作时应先补全题目，然后介绍传递乐于助人的精神，可适当发挥。

2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容；时态综合采用一般现在时和一般过去时，介绍传递乐于助人的精神时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。

7．

例文：

Blaming others makes no difference

In our life, there will always be difficulties or unpleasant things. Blaming, complaining, getting angry, worrying and so on will not do any good. We should change ourselves and seek intelligent solutions.

I used to climb mountains with my friend who insisted on going to remote places. Finally we got lost, and I knew it was useless to blame my friend. So I called for help right away. At last we were saved.

I think when something unexpected happens, we should try to solve it instead of blaming the other person.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，首先把题目补全完整。其次根据题目要求结合自己的经历和见闻写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文在叙述过去的经历时用一般过去时，叙述感受时使用一般现在时。人称以第一人为主。写作时可以从“谩骂、责备、抱怨、生气、担忧”等词中选取一个把题目补充完整，然后围绕主题展开叙述。确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。

8．例文：

The moving moment in my life

Here is a moving moment in my life that I will never forget.

I still remember that was a rainy day. I failed an exam, and I felt very upset. What was worse, I didn’t bring an umbrella. Countless raindrops beat against my body, which seemed that they were laughing at me. Suddenly, the raindrops disappeared. At first, I thought the rain finally stopped. But when I looked up, I saw a big umbrella and the smiling face of my deskmate, Mike. He looked into my eyes sincerely and said, “An exam can’t stand for everything. I believe you can get good grades next time.” His words really touched my heart and cheered me up. After that, I studied harder and made great progress.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“The moving moment in my life”为题，介绍生活中让自己感动的事情。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主行文；人称以第一人称为主。写作时围绕主题展开适当的叙述，谈谈发生了哪件事，并具体讲述为何这个瞬间最能触动你的心灵。确保语句通顺，逻辑清晰，无单词语法错误。

9．例文：

The feeling of happiness is very important. We are no longer satisfied with only enough food and clothes. Instead, we need happiness. Now I will share some tips to increase our sense of happiness.

The first is friendship. Friends can share our feelings and help to make us happy when we are sad. They can provide us with help when we are in need. They can also keep us company when we are lonely. The second is being thankful. Sometimes we can’t get what we want and we will be unhappy. But if we focus on what we already have, and be thankful to everything around us, I believe our life will be a lot happier.

Try to make some friends and be thankful to everything. I am sure we will be much happier.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，以“Small tricks to improve happiness”为题参照所给提示中要点信息进行分析。写作时需选定至少两个提升幸福感的小妙招，并陈述理由。

2.写作指导：本文以第一人称为主，时态为一般现在时；写作时注意分段叙述，第一段开门见山，引入话题；第二段介绍小妙招及原因；第三段总结全文；保证文章条理清晰，语句通顺。

10．例文

The most important rule in my family

There are national laws and family rules. Different families have different rules, such as being honest, respecting elders, reading every day, not playing on the phone when doing housework or eating, and so on.

In my family, the most important rule is to be honest. Because my father thinks: lose honesty, also lose everything. Honesty involves many aspects, such as keeping promises, strictly carrying out plans, not telling lies and so on.

Honesty is very important for everyone. I hope every one of us can be an honest person.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“The most important rule in my family”为题，写一篇英文短文，介绍家中最重要的一条家规。

2.写作指导：本文运用第一人称；时态采用一般现在时。可采用分段的形式，使文章结构清晰。最后保证语言通顺，行文连贯；注意语法正确，无标点和大小写错误。