上海中考英语材料作文专项训练

这是一份上海中考英语材料作文专项训练，共15页。
(2) like it, yung age, prtect Mnk Tang,
(3) becme Mnkey King t beat bad men n the earth。
作文要求：
(1)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Mnkey King
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2．保持健康对于我们来说是非常重要的，我们如何保持健康呢？请以“Hw d we keep healthy?”为题写一篇文章，例如，具备平衡的饮食，多吃蔬菜，少吃肉，多锻炼身体，保持快乐的心态。
可能用到的词汇：a balanced diet, fish, necessary, exercise, running, walking, jgging, be happy every day, talk with parents r friends.
要求：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
2.词数不少于80。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
Hw d we keep healthy?
It’s imprtant fr us t keep healthy. But what can we d t make us healthy?
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3．你的学校正在开展主题为“The mst beautiful vlunteer”的征文活动，请写一篇文章介绍一位志愿者，以及她/他的事迹。
文章内容可以包含以下几个问题：
1. Wh is he/she?
2. What did he/she d? (What des he/she d?)
3. What can yu learn frm him/her?
注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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4．中国的茶是世界上最受欢迎的饮品之一，假如你叫李华，你的学校正在举行用英语讲好中国故事的比赛，请围绕茶的历史、种类、加工、饮茶、益处等方面，根据下面的思维导图，以“Chinese Tea Culture”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺；
2. 短文应包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，不要逐字翻译；
3. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Chinese Tea Culture
Gd mrning! Ladies and gentleman. My name is Li Hua. I am happy t share my tpic with yu here. Chinese tea is ne f the mst ppular drinks in the wrld. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Cme t enjy Chinese tea culture. Maybe, yu will like it.
5．Write at least 60 wrds n the tpic “My views n nline study” (以“在线学习之我见”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
随着在线学习模式的开启，你对在线学习的态度是什么？你在线上学习的过程中有什么经验可以向大家分享？请结合自己或他人在线学习的经历，谈谈你对这个话题的看法。
（ 注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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6．Write a passage f at least 60 wrds n the tpic“Lve is always arund”. (以“爱一直在我身边”为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
提示：Kevin的故事告诉我们无论遇到什么问题，身边总是会有支持或帮助你的人让你感受到爱。请结合自己的经历，具体谈谈他或她做了什么让你感受到爱一直在你身边。
(注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分；2. 照抄阅读理解语篇的不给分。)
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7．Write at least 60 wrds abut the tpic “My Way(s) f Imprving Scial Skills”（ 以“我提高社交技能的方法”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the fllwing pints as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
1. Are scial skills imprtant?
2. Describe yur wn experience and share yur way f imprving scial skills.
3. What d yu want t say t thse wh are shy?
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8．Write at least 60 wrds n the tpic “Use electricity safely”. （你发现你身边的亲朋好友经常有不安全用电的行为，有很大的危险隐患。请以“安全用电”为题写一篇 60—120 词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the fllwing pints as a guide: （写作必须包含以下内容）
1. Hw d sme peple use electricity?
2. Why shuld we use electricity safely?
3. What’s yur suggestin n using electricity safely?
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9．Write at least 60 wrds n the given tpic (根据以下话题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
There are a lt f useful resurces in ur life. Please chse ne and write at least 60 wrds abut the tpic “The imprtance f ____________”
(我们的生活中有许多有用的资源，请选取一种以“____________ 的重要性”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)
Suggested questins:
Why is the thing imprtant?
What can we d with it?
What can we d t prtect it?
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10．Write at least 60 wrds n the tpic “________ is imprtant ”.(以“________是重要的”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文。）
Suggested questins:
1. What d yu think is imprtant?
2. Why d yu think s? ( list at least tw reasns)
注意：
文中不得出现人名、班级等个人信息，否则不予评分。
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1．例文
Mnkey King
D yu like cartns? Tell yu the truth, I like cartns very much, because they are very interesting. And I dn’t feel bred. When I was yung, my mther always tld me smething abut Mnkey King, I like Mnkey King very much because Mnkey King is very brave and he can beat s many mnsters. He prtects Mnk Tang t travel t the west. S I want t be Mnkey King in the future.
I really want t beat bad men n the earth. There will be n war and n fight. There will be peace everywhere. D yu think s?
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文。
时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。
提示：写作提示以及题目已给出，要围绕写作提示进行写作，并可以适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，通过问题引出Mnkey King这个主题；
第二步，介绍美猴王的具体事迹以及喜爱他的原因；
第三步，表达自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①prtect sb. t d sth保护某人做某事
②in the future在未来
[高分句型]
There will be n war and n fight. There will be peace everywhere. (there be句型)
2．例文
Hw d we keep healthy?
It’s imprtant fr us t keep healthy. But what can we d t make us healthy?
First, we shuld have a balanced diet. It’s necessary fr us t eat different kinds f fds. We can eat vegetables and fresh fruit every day. Fish is als gd fd fr ur health, but we’d better eat less meat r junk fd.
Secnd, taking exercise helps us keep healthy and strng. There are many ways t d exercise. Fr example, we can have a walk after dinner. We can play basketball and ping-png at weekends. Swimming, jgging and running are als helpful.
Third, being happy is anther way t keep healthy. We shuld smile a lt and dn’t wrry t much. When we feel lnely r sad, we can talk with ur friends, parents r watch sme interesting TV shws. They may help us t be in a gd feeling.
In shrt, I hpe everyne can enjy a healthy and happy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据所给的建议提示以及参考词汇具体阐述如何保持健康；
第二步，简单总结。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds f不同种类的
②fr example比如
③in shrt简言之
[高分句型]
①taking exercise helps us keep healthy and strng.（动名词作主语）
②When we feel lnely r sad, we can talk with ur friends, parents r watch sme interesting TV shws.（when引导的时间状语从句）
3．例文：
The Mst Beautiful Vlunteer
Li Hng is a plite girl. She is bth kind and patient. She is a helpful vlunteer. At schl, she is always ready t help teachers and classmates. At weekends, she takes part in a lt f activities. She ften des sme cleaning in the street. Besides, she ges t the library t help carry bks. Als, she lks after ld peple in the nursing hme. We all think Li Hng is such an excellent girl that we shuld learn frm her. We’d like t recmmend her fr The Mst Beautiful Vlunteer.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中对这位志愿者的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“写一篇文章介绍一位志愿者，以及她/他的事迹”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“品质、所做的事、对她的评价等”几个方面重点介绍这位志愿者的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“我们想推荐她成为最美志愿者”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready t d sth.乐意做某事；
②take part in参加；
③lk after照顾；
④nursing hme养老院。
[高分句型]
①We all think Li Lei is such an excellent by that we shuld learn frm him.（引导的结果状语从句）
②Many vlunteers cme t the libraries t d the service after wrk.(动词不定式作目的状语)
4．例文
Chinese Tea Culture
Gd mrning! Ladies and gentleman. My name is Li Hua. I am happy t share my tpic with yu here. Chinese tea is ne f the mst ppular drinks in the wrld.
Chinese peple have liked drinking tea since ancient times. Tea has a histry f ver 4000 years since the Chinese began t grw and drink tea. There are many kinds f tea in China, such as green tea, black tea, lng tea and s n. Lngjing Tea is famus all ver the wrld. Peple use tea pts r tea cups t drink tea. They are made f ceramics.
Drinking tea is gd fr health. It’s said that green tea can prevent cancer. When yu are tired, a cup f tea can help yu relax.
Cme t enjy Chinese tea culture. Maybe, yu will like it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：本文采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求包含所有提示内容，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，具体阐述茶的历史、种类、加工等；
第二步，阐述喝茶的好处；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①many kinds f tea很多种茶
②and s n等等
③all ver the wrld全世界
[高分句型]
①Drinking tea is gd fr health.（动名词作主语）
②It’s said that green tea can prevent cancer.（主语从句）
③When yu are tired, a cup f tea can help yu relax.（when引导时间状语从句）
5．例文：
My views n nline study
This spring ur new term desn’t cme n time because the epidemic brke ut. We have t learn nline at hme. We have lessns frm Mnday t Friday. Classes begin at 7:30 and end at 4:00 every day. We study Math, English, Chinese, Physics and PE. During nline learning, there are many prblems. Sme students think that this kind f learning methd is very fresh and can stimulate their interest in learning. If they meet prblems in learning, they can ask the teacher fr help in time. But sme ther students think it’s nt gd because they can’t cncentrate n learning and they can nt study as carefully as in class. When their parents g t wrk, they feel lnely at hme alne.
As fr me, I like learning at hme because I needn’t get up early. I have mre sleep time. I wn’t hurry t schl. But I miss my schl, my teachers and my classmate. I lk frward t meeting them sn.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作中需要回答额问题已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍在家在线学习的经历；
第二步，分享同学在线学习的经验和看法；
第三步，表达自己对在线学习的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① stimulate激发
② cncentrate n专心于……
[高分句型]
①Sme students think that this kind f learning methd is very fresh and can stimulate their interest in learning.（that引导的宾语从句）
②When their parents g t wrk, they feel lnely at hme alne.（when引导的时间状语从句）
6．例文：
Lve is always arund
When I was in Grade 7, my English grade was pr. I was upset because f it. I even wanted t give up. My English knew it, and she cmmunicated with me. She encuraged me nt t give up. She als gave me sme advice n hw t learn English well. With the help f her, I made great prgress in English. Thanks t her, I gt better grades in final exam.
Lve lets me grw up. We shuld enjy lve and send it t thers.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的经历；
第二步，介绍自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①give up放弃
②cmmunicate with与……沟通
③give up放弃
④with the help f在……的帮助下
⑤thanks t多亏了
[高分句型]
①When I was in Grade 7, my English grade was pr.（when引导时间状语从句）
②She als gave me sme advice n hw t learn English well（疑问词+动词不定式结构）
7．例文：
My Way(s) f Imprving Scial Skills
Having gd scial skills is very imprtant. It can help yu deal with relatinships better.
I usually read mre bks t give myself mre knwledge. When I meet thers at the same time, I will take the initiative t say hell. If I attend the party, I will respect everyne. If yu are shy, I suggest yu jin mre clubs and take the initiative t make friends with them. Yu will becme a ppular persn.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的问题提示介绍你提高社交技能的方法，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明社交技能的重要性；
第二步，通过自己的经历，分享你提高社交技能的方法；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理
②at the same time同时
③make friends with sb和某人交朋友
[高分句型]
①When I meet thers at the same time, I will take the initiative t say hell. (when引导的时间状语从句)
② If yu are shy, I suggest yu jin mre clubs and take the initiative t make friends with them.(if引导的条件状语从句)
8．例文
Use electricity safely
Using electricity safely is a very imprtant tpic in ur daily lives.
First, ensure any electrical items are apprved standard when purchasing and keep them crrectly maintained. Secnd, unplug electrical items that are nt in regular use and
ensure that yu unplug and switch ff electrical items when yu are away frm the huse fr any length f time . Third, dn’t use any electrical items in the bathrm unless specifically
designed fr use there, such as shavers and electric tthbrushes. But when yu use them, make sure nt t get them wet and avid plugging and unplugging with wet hands. The last, always turn
the electrics ff at the mains if carrying ut any electrical repairs and nly attempt repairs if yu knw what yu are ding.
We shuld use electricity carefully because items left plugged in can be a fire risk and waste energy if left n standby.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“应该如何用电；安全用电的原因以及安全用电的建议”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“安全用电是我们日常生活中非常重要的话题。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“如何安全用电以及安全用电的建议”重点介绍安全用电的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我们应该谨慎用电，因为插上电源的物品如果处于待机状态，则可能会引发火灾，并浪费能源。”
[亮点词汇]
① switch ff关上
② make sure nt t d sth确保不做某事
[高分句型]
① Third, dn’t use any electrical items in the bathrm unless specifically designed fr use there, such as shavers and electric tthbrushes.（dn’t...祈使句的否定形式，表劝告）
② We shuld use electricity carefully because items left plugged in can be a fire risk and waste energy if left n standby.（because引导的原因状语从句，if引导的条件状语从句）
9．例文
The imprtance f saving water
It is widely accepted that the rle f water cannt be replaced by any ther thing in ur daily life, but few peple are aware that the fresh water is reducing sharply. S, what shuld we d?
As far as I am cncerned, we shuld use water twice r mre. Fr example, we can use water after cleaning the rice t water the plants. Furthermre, turn ff the tap whenever we stp using it. Last but nt least, plluted water shuld be dealt with in time t keep the river clean because we cannt live withut water.
Frm what has been discussed abve, we shuld pay clse attentin t daily water. Let’s act nw t save water.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作时需要围绕题干提出的问题展开，并可适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，并引出要保护的资源；
第二步，详细介绍采取的措施；
第三步，最后进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
① as far as I am cncerned就我而言
② turn ff关闭
③ last but nt least最后
[高分句型]
① It is widely accepted that the rle f water cannt be replaced by any ther thing in ur daily life, but few peple are aware that the fresh water is reducing sharply.（it作形式主语）
②Furthermre, turn ff the tap whenever we stp using it. （whenever引导的时间状语从句）
10．例文
Exercise is imprtant
Everyne in the wrld wants t live happily. Exercise is indispensable t a happy life. There is a famus saying: “life lies in exercise.” S I think exercise is imprtant.
Exercise helps t imprve ur md. When yu d exercise, yu mve a lt and yu have t be mre psitive, which helps yu becme ptimistic. Exercise will make yur life full f all kinds f cntents and make yur life mre clurful. Mrever, exercise will help yu get rid f yur inertia. If yu insist n exercise, yu will never be a lazy persn.
Therefre, exercise is imprtant. Let’s get up and exercise.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：要求根据提示问题，列出至少两点原因说明你的观点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍锻炼是重要的；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍锻炼的好处和重要性；
第三步，总结并呼吁大家一起来做锻炼。
[亮点词汇]
① indispensable 不可或缺的
② Psitive 积极乐观的
③ get rid f 摆脱
[高分句型]
If yu insist n exercise, yu will never be a lazy persn.（条件状语从句）