专题06 书面表达（应用文写作）--新高考八省最新名校联考试题汇编

专题06  书面表达（应用文写作）

---2023年新高考八省最新名校联考试题汇编

(解析版)

1.【广东省深圳市中学2022-2023学年高三试题】

假定你是李华，乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：

1. 行程信息；

2. 钱包特征；

3. 联系方式。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing to report the loss of my wallet. On 1st November, 2018 I flew business class on your flight 753 from China to London.

I clearly remember it was with me immediately I boarded the plane. However, on arrival in London Heathrow Airport, I found it gone. I guess it must have slipped out of my pocket during the flight. It is a black leather one with around 200 dollars, my ID card, and 2 credit cards in it. Along with the items mentioned above, the wallet contains a family photo, my precious memory. As you can imagine, these matter a lot to me.

Thank you for your time and support.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇考查的写作类型是求助信

【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，本文是一封求助信。李华乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失，要求给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：1.行程信息；2. 钱包特征；3. 联系方式。

第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：I am writing to report the loss of my wallet. boarded the plane, on arrival…, I found it gone. it must have……Has anybody happened to find it? Thank you for your time and support.

第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。时态以一般现在时为主，一般过去时为辅。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】【高分句型1】

What’s worse, my cash, ID card, and 2 credit cards were in it. 更糟的是，里面有我的现金，身份证和两张信用卡。What’s worse意为“更糟糕的是”，连接并列两个坏的东西，且后面一个更严重。

【高分句型2】

I’d appreciate it if you could help me to get it back. 如果你能帮我把它拿回来，我会很感激的。I’d appreciate it if…如果……我会很感激的。

2.【2023届福建省七地市高三质量检测】

假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了以“The Power of Voluntary Work”为主题的演讲比赛，请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：

1.参加人员；

2.比赛过程；

3.活动反响。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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【答案】One possible version：

Last week, an English speech contest on “The Power of Voluntary Work” was held in our school. Students from different grades participated in the competition. By sharing some of their most unforgettable volunteering experiences, 20 contestants deeply impressed the audience with their vivid stories, feelings and insights. The judges, consisting of our headmaster and teachers, also commented on each student’s performance and finally selected the best three.

The activity, as one of the students says, will be very helpful for the better understanding of volunteering work among middle school students, and more activities of this kind are expected.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道，就学校上周日举办的以“The Power of Voluntary Work”为主题的演讲比赛进行报道，内容包括：参赛人员、比赛过程和活动反响。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

比赛：contest→competition

参赛者：contestant→competitor

参加：participate in→take part in

选择：select→choose

种类：kind→sort

2. 句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：The judges, consisting of our headmaster and teachers, also commented on each student’s performance and finally selected the best three.

拓展句：The judges, who consisted of our headmaster and teachers, also commented on each student’s performance and finally selected the best three.

【点睛】【高分句型1】By sharing some of their most unforgettable volunteering experiences, 20 contestants deeply impressed the audience with their vivid stories, feelings and insights.（运用了介词后接动名词短语的形式作方式状语）

【高分句型2】The activity, as one of the students says, will be very helpful for the better understanding of volunteering work among middle school students, and more activities of this kind are expected.（运用了以as引导的状语从句作插入语的结构和以and引导的并列句）

3. 【2023年福建省福州一中调研】

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青，你校校刊上的“展望未来”栏目正在征文，请以“50年后的学校”为题写一篇文章投稿。你的稿件必须包括：

描述50年后的学校里的一个场景；谈谈现在的你置身其中的感受。

(注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。)

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【答案】

Schools in 50 years

50 years later, the school uses robots to teach students, and students sit in a transparent classroom on all sides to learn. Besides, students’ performance in class and learning feedback are all conducted by AI equipment. The construction of the school is no longer what it is now. The school 50 years later is very intelligent, and students’ needs can be met in an instant. The school has only a few technicians and teachers who manage machinery and equipment, so it is so convenient.

Imagine traveling through time and space to the future school 50 years later. It will be a fast and convenient school linked by the Internet. I will be shocked by all modern devices and intelligent functions. It’s great to feel the learning efficiency brought by the infinite power of modern science and technology, feel the friendship between classmates, and carefully taste the magic of knowledge.

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“50年后的学校”为题为校刊上的“展望未来”栏目写一篇文章投稿。

1.词汇积累

用、利用：use→make use of

此外：besides→what’s more

智能的：intelligent→smart

震惊的：shocked→astonished

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Imagine traveling through time and space to the future school 50 years later. It will be a fast and convenient school linked by the Internet.

拓展句：Imagine traveling through time and space to the future school 50 years later, which will be a fast and convenient school linked by the Internet.

【点睛】【高分句型1】 The construction of the school is no longer what it is now. (运用了what引导的表语从句)

【高分句型2】The school has only a few technicians and teachers who manage machinery and equipment, so everything is so convenient. (运用了who引导的定语从句)

4.【河北省“五个一”名校联盟2023年1月试题】

假定你是李华，想邀请你的美国朋友Mary 一起参加滑雪训练营。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括:

1. 训练营的时间、地点；

2. 选择此训练营的原因；

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使得行文连贯。

Dear Mary,

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Looking forward to meeting you at the training camp.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Mary,

I’ m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the winter holiday. I want to join Ski training camp.           Knowing that you have a great interest in Ski, I’d like to invite you to come with me.

This camp, to be held in the urban ski resort, will open on January 20th. It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and build up our body. There are many skiers from other countries in this training camp. They all have excellent skills, which will allow us to communicate and learn better and improve our skiing skills. I wonder if it is convenient for you to join me.

Looking forward to meeting you at the training camp.

                                                                     Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写邮件邀请美国朋友Mary 一起参加滑雪训练营。

【详解】1.词汇积累

对……感兴趣：have interest in→ be keen to

提供：offer → provide

提高：improve→ promote

高超的：excellent→ superb

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Knowing that you have a great interest in Ski, I’d like to invite you to come with me.

拓展句：As I know you have a great interest in Ski, I’d like to invite you to come with me.

【点睛】【高分句型1】They all have excellent skills, which will allow us to communicate and learn better and improve our skiing skills.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】This camp, to be held in the urban ski resort, will open on January 20th.（运用了不定式作的被动式作后置定语）

5.【湖北省部分重点中学2023年高三联考试题】

今年，重庆山火和泸定地震中涌现出了很多青年榜样：00 后消防员，00 后志愿者等。你校正在组织 “We Should Shoulder the Responsibility” 英语征文活动，请你投稿。

内容包括：

1. 青年榜样的突出品质;

2. 他们对你的影响;

3. 呼吁年轻人向他们学习。

注意：

1. 词数 80 左右;

2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。

We Should Shoulder the Responsibility

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【答案】One possible version:

We Should Shoulder the Responsibility

This year, many young role models emerged in the mountain fire in Chongqing and the Luding earthquake：post-00s firefighters，post-00s volunteers, etc.They showed their bravery and ambition, especially, their sense of responsibility.

What they did made me think about our responsibility. The young people are carrying too much responsibility.The contemporary young people are stressed out, and we have to work hard to serve the country. As a student,as long as we choose study, we have a responsibility to complete our studies seriously and steadfastly. We have to grow up with physical and mental health, and that is inseparable from all kinds of hardship parents endured.So we should not shirk any responsibility of love and care.

In a word, all the young people should learn from them and shoulder our responsibility.

【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作，现要求考生写一篇“We Should Shoulder the Responsibility” 英语征文投稿。其内容包括：青年榜样的突出品质、他们对你的影响以及呼吁年轻人向他们学习。

【详解】1.词汇积累

很多：many→plenty of

 特别：especially →in particular

 考虑：think about→reflect on

 应该：should→be supposed to

 2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：This year, many young role models emerged in the mountain fire in Chongqing and the Luding earthquake：post-00s firefighters，post-00s volunteers, etc.They showed their bravery and ambition, especially, their sense of responsibility.

拓展句：This year, many young role models emerged in the mountain fire in Chongqing and the Luding earthquake：post-00s firefighters，post-00s volunteers, etc, who showed their bravery and ambition, especially, their sense of responsibility.

【点睛】【高分句型1】What they did made me think about our responsibility.（运用了what引导的主语从句）

 【高分句型2】As a student，as long as we choose study，we have a responsibility to complete our studies seriously and steadfastly.（运用了as long as引导条件状语从句）

6.【湖南省长沙市一中2022-2023学年高三试题】

假设你是李华，你的澳洲朋友David参加汉语水平考试(HSK)未能通过。请你写一封信给他，内容包括：

1. 表示安慰和鼓励；

2. 提出今后学习汉语的建议。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear David,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】参考范文

Dear David,

I’m sorry to hear that you failed to pass HSK. I hope that the unexpected failure won’t let you down, for I have still been amazed by the excellent Chinese you spoke when we first met.

As we know, language learning is never an easy task, but needs painstaking efforts and patience. Personally, I think you’d better pay close attention to the formal use of Chinese words and expressions, which really counts. Meanwhile, you may as well read more Chinese materials as much as you can afford. More importantly, you should learn from the mistakes that you have made. Anyhow, you’ve already made great progress in your learning of Chinese.

Hopefully, my suggestions will be of some help and wish you good luck.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给没能通过汉语水平考试的澳洲朋友David写一封信给，表示安慰和鼓励，同时就如何学习汉语提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

惊讶的：amazed→astonished

就个人而言：personally→as far as I am concerned

重要：count→matter

无论如何：anyhow→in any case

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Anyhow, you’ve already made great progress in your learning of Chinese.

拓展句：Anyhow, you’ve already made great progress in your learning of Chinese, which is encouraging.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I hope that the unexpected failure won’t let you down, for I have still been amazed by the excellent Chinese you spoke when we first met. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，for引导的原因状语从句和when引导的时间状语从句)

【高分句型2】Personally, I think you’d better pay close attention to the formal use of Chinese words and expressions, which really counts. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

7. 【湖南省长沙市雅礼中学2022-2023学年高三试题】

假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter正在准备明年来中国的旅游，并发邮件请你推荐一处湖南的旅游景点。请你给他回信，内容包括：

1. 景点名称；

2. 景区简介；

3. 发出邀请。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Peter,

So pleased to know that you are planning for your trip to China and my recommendation for a must-see scenic spot is Zhangjiajie.

Located in the northwest of Hunan, Zhangjjajie is renowned for its stunning beauty of Wulingyuan, which boasts complicated landforms, with diverse hills rising from the ground and never-ending creeks winding through. Thus, it is a paradise for nature and outdoor lovers. You’ll definitely be overwhelmed by the breathtaking scenery while walking there.

It is suitable to visit Zhangjiajie all through the year and I strongly advise you come to see the natural wonder for yourself. Wish you an enjoyable trip in China!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给正在为明年来中国旅游做准备的英国朋友Peter回信，给他推荐一处湖南的旅游景点。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

高兴的：pleased→delighted

因……而闻名：be renowned for→be famous for

建议：advise→suggest

令人愉快的：enjoyable→pleasant

2. 句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：So pleased to know that you are planning for your trip to China and my recommendation for a must-see scenic spot is Zhangjiajie.

拓展句：Pleased to know that you are planning for your trip to China, I recommend Zhangjiajie as a must-see scenic spot.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Located in the northwest of Hunan, Zhangjjajie is renowned for its stunning beauty of Wulingyuan, which boasts complicated landforms, with diverse hills rising from the ground and never-ending creeks winding through. （运用了非谓语动词作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】You’ll definitely be overwhelmed by the breathtaking scenery while walking there.（运用了while引导的状语从句的省略）

8.【江苏省扬州中学2023学年试题】

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你中国武术的情况，并想来中国学习。请给他回信，内容包括：

1. 中国武术很受欢迎；

2. 推荐他来中国学习太极；

3. 欢迎尽快来中国学习。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：1. 武术martial arts   2. 太极Tai chi

Dear Peter,

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Peter,

I’m more than delighted to hear that you are willing to learn Chinese martial arts. They  appeal to tens of thousands of people throughout the world so that many come to China to learn them each year.

There are varieties of Chinese martial arts. Among them I’d like to recommend Tai chi to you. First , as a martial art with a long history, Tai chi has been widely acknowledged as an effective way to build up our body. Then, Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements，Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation as well as physical fitness for us. Therefore, it has become a popular choice to take exercise in recent years.

I’m looking forward to your early coming to China.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【详解】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 be willing to do…；appeal to；Chinese martial art；recommend …to sb.；be widely acknowledged as；build up one’s body；be famous for；graceful；well-balanced；provides…for sb.；mental relaxation；physical fitness；a popular choice；take exercise 等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如so that引导的结果状语从句的运用They appeal to tens of thousands of people throughout the world so that many come to China to learn them each year；形容词短语作状语的运用Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements，Tai Chi provides the mental relaxation as well as physical fitness for us等。

9.【辽宁省名校联盟2022-2023学年全国统考模拟试题】

假定你是李华，上周末去乡村参加了为期一天的环保宣传活动。请给笔友Mike写一封信，介绍这次活动。内容包括：

1. 参加人员；

2. 活动内容；

3. 你的感受。

注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】

Dear Mike,

I’m happy to share my voluntary experience with you. Last Sunday our class organized an environmental protection activity in the countryside. All the students and teachers in our school took part in it. We went to a village called Yongxing Village, where we worked in two groups. The first group collected the rubbish and the second group distributed leaflets. Besides, we gave a speech on “white pollution” related to the environmental protection.

For the sake of people’s health and happiness, all of us should play a role in protecting the environment.

Have you done any voluntary work recently? Looking forward to your sharing.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，上周末去乡村参加了为期一天的环保宣传活动。请给笔友Mike写一封信，介绍这次活动。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

activity→campaign； take part in→participate in；happy→delighted；speech→lecture

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Have you done any voluntary work recently? Looking forward to your sharing.

拓展句：If you have done some voluntary works recently, I am looking forward to your sharing.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] We went to a village called Yongxing Village, where we worked in two groups. (运用了where引导非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Besides, we gave a speech on “white pollution” related to the environmental protection. (运用了过去分词作定语)

10.【重庆市巴蜀中学2022-2023学年试题】

假定你是学生会主席李华，你校筹划下周举办一次“魅力中国”城市展览，给国际学生提供了解中国城市的机会。请你用英语写一份通知，号召国际学生积极参与，内容包括：

1．活动时间、地点;

2．活动内容及意义。

注意：

1．词数不少于80;

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

NOTICE

November 19,2022

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The Students’ Union

【答案】

NOTICE

November 19, 2022

Aimed at providing a platform where international students can have a chance to know about cities in China, an exhibition is to be held on our school playground next Friday afternoon.

Themed “Charming China”, the exhibition will present attractive pictures of major cities of China like Beijing. At the event, not only can you participate in a wide range of activities where you will be exposed to cultures and customs in different cities, but you can enjoy stunning performances given by Chinese students as well.

So if you are free at that time, please pay a visit to the exhibition! Undoubtedly, it will satisfy your curiosity about China and help you better fit in with Chinese culture.

The Students’ Union

【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生用英语写一份通知，号召国际学生积极参与下周举办的“魅力中国”城市展览。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

展示：present→show

加入：participate in→take part in

各种各样的：a wide range of→a diversity of

美妙的：stunning→wonderful

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Undoubtedly, it will satisfy your curiosity about China and help you better fit in with Chinese culture.

拓展句：Undoubtedly, it will satisfy your curiosity about China, which help you better fit in with Chinese culture.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Aimed at providing a platform where international students can have a chance to know about cities in China, an exhibition is to be held on our school playground next Friday afternoon.(运用where引导的定语从句)

[高分句型2]At the event, not only can you participate in a wide range of activities where you will be exposed to cultures and customs in different cities, but you can enjoy stunning performances given by Chinese students as well.(运用not only引导的倒装句)