Unit 4 单元话题满分范文必背-高一英语必修第一册单元重难点易错题精练(人教版)
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1.(2022·江苏省阜宁中学高一阶段练习)假定你是李华,在某国际学校就读。因你所在海滨城市经常有飓风袭扰,必须提醒新来的英国交换生 Kate 了解安全须知。请你用英语给她发一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 飓风来临前应该怎么做;
2. 飓风来临时应该怎么做;不应该做什么。
注意:词数为 80 左右。
Dear Kate,
I’m wring to
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Kate,
I’m writing to inform you a newcomer, of some tips on hurricane safety so that you can survive this common threat to a coastal city.
Knowing what to do matters when a hurricane strikes. Before a hurricane, make sure your property is protected. Close windows and bring indoors anything that could blow away. You should have sufficient food, water, medicine and batteries for emergency. During a hurricane, you’d better stay in the shelter, away from windows and listen to weather warning. Do not assume the storm has passed and go out even if the wind stops. Dangerous winds may return.
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,在某国际学校就读。因你所在海滨城市经常有飓风袭扰,必须提醒新来的英国交换生 Kate了解安全须知。请你用英语给她发一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
告知:inform sb. of sth.→tell sb. sth.
重要:matter→count
建议:tip→advice
充足的:sufficient→enough
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:Do not assume the storm has passed and go out even if the wind stops. Dangerous winds may return.
拓展句:Do not assume the storm has passed and go out even if the wind stops because dangerous winds may return.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m writing to inform you a newcomer, of some tips on hurricane safety so that you can survive this common threat to a coastal city. (运用了目的状语从句)
[高分句型2] Close windows and bring indoors anything that could blow away. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
2.(2022·湖北·十堰市教育科学研究院高一期末)假定你是李华,你校将举办一场以“How to survive an earthquake”为主题的讲座。请你写封邮件邀请你的外国朋友George参加,内容包括:
1.邮件的目的;
2.讲座的主要内容;
3.讲座的时间和地点。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear George,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear George,
I’m writing to invite you to attend a lecture about “How to survive an earthquake”, which will be held in our school hall next Monday. The relevant details are as follows.
To begin with, an earthquake video will be presented, making us know the horrible result of an earthquake. Then the specialist will give us some guidelines for surviving an earthquake, such as how to signal for help if you are trapped. Though we can't stop earthquakes, the harm they bring us can be reduced if we do the right things.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份写邮件邀请外国朋友George参加以“How to survive an earthquake”为主题的讲座。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:hold→host
首先:to begin with→first of all
参加:attend→take part in
建议:lecture→speech
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To begin with, an earthquake video will be presented, making us know the horrible result of an earthquake.
拓展句:To begin with, an earthquake video will be presented, whose aim is to make us know the horrible result of an earthquake.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to invite you to attend a lecture about “How to survive an earthquake”, which will be held in our school hall next Monday. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Then the specialist will give us some guidelines for surviving an earthquake, such as how to signal for help if you are trapped.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
3.(2022·陕西·铜川市第一中学高一期中)假定你是李华,你校英文报社将举办主题为自然灾害的征文活动。请你给美国朋友Bruce写一封邮件,邀请他参加。内容包括:
1. 说明缘由;
2. 请他介绍美国的自然灾害并谈谈影响、应对措施等;
3. 告知征文截稿日期。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Bruce,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Bruce,
Here is good news for you. Our school English paper will hold an essay competition about natural disasters. I’d like to invite you to take part in it.
It is well-known that many natural disasters occur every year in America, causing great damage. You can introduce the main natural disasters, such as tornadoes and hurricanes and tell some common knowledge about them. For example, you can discuss how they form, when they happen, what harm they may cause, and what you can do in the face of disasters. The measures you take may benefit us, because we also face many natural disasters.
The deadline is June 8th, 2020. I’m looking forward to your article.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Bruce写信邀请他参加主题为自然灾害的征文活动,请他介绍美国的自然灾害并谈谈影响、应对措施等。
【详解】1.词汇积累
关于:about→concerning;on;with regard to
参加:take part in→participate in;get involved in
面对:in the face of→facing
有益于:benefit→be beneficial to;be of benefit to
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Our school English paper will hold an essay competition about natural disasters. I’d like to invite you to take part in it.
拓展句:Our school English paper will hold an essay competition about natural disasters, so I’d like to invite you to take part in it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is well-known that many natural disasters occur every year in America, causing great damage.(运用了it作形式主语及现在分词短语作结果状语)
【高分句型2】The measures you take may benefit us, because we also face many natural disasters.(运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从句及原因状语从句)
4.(2022·山东淄博·高一期末)假定你是英语俱乐部主席李华,为提高同学们自我保护的意识,你校将举办一次以“Earthquake Safety Guidelines”为主题的演讲比赛。请你用英语写一则通知,内容包括:
1. 比赛的时间、地点;
2. 比赛的要求;
3. 呼吁同学们积极参加。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
NOTICE
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The English Club
【答案】NOTICE
To arouse our students’ awareness of self-protection, we will hold a speech competition on the theme of “Earthquake Safety Guidelines” on May 20 at the academic hall. Entry works from each class are warmly welcome.
As to requirements, the theme should be related to earthquake and your speech is expected to be related within 10 minutes and purely in English. Moreover, the whole number in a cast should not exceed six. Finally, considering the large amount of preparation work from the Student Union side, we set the deadline before next Monday.
For more information, please contact us in our office. Keenly anticipate your participation.
The English Club
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是英语俱乐部主席李华,为提高同学们自我保护的意识,你校将举办一次以“Earthquake Safety Guidelines”为主题的演讲比赛。请你用英语写一则通知。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛:competition→contest
主题:theme→topic
至于:as to→as for
此外:moreover→besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Finally, considering the large amount of preparation work from the Student Union side, we set the deadline before next Monday.
拓展句:Finally, we set the deadline before next Monday because the preparation work from the Student Union side is too much.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To arouse our students’ awareness of self-protection, we will hold a speech competition on the theme of “Earthquake Safety Guidelines” on May 20 at the academic hall. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2] Finally, considering the large amount of preparation work from the Student Union side, we set the deadline before next Monday. (运用了现在分词作状语)
5.(2021·湖南·常德市第二中学高一期末)在过去几年中,我们目睹了人类活动引起的各种灾害。请写一封倡议书,呼吁大家关注这些灾害并保护环境。内容包括如下要点:
1.举出人类活动引发的灾害实例;
2.给出一些必要的防范措施;
3.号召大家行动起来拯救地球,保护环境。
注意
1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数
Dear friends,
I am writing to call on everyone to pay attention to the present disasters caused by human activities.
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That’s all! Thank you!
【答案】Dear friends,
I am writing to call on everyone to pay attention to the present disasters caused by human activities. As we know, over the past years, floods, landslides, and dust storms have frequented our planet. All these have sounded an alarm to human beings. So it is high time that we should join efforts to save our planet.
Above all, the top priority for us is to plant as many trees as possible, especially in the arid areas. Meanwhile, we should protect wild plants and animals to maintain the ecological balance. And we can save our planet through many other ways, such as saving water and using recyclable paper. Since it’s our duty to protect our planet, don’t hesitate to join us in the action and take thesemeasures.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封倡议书,呼吁大家关注灾害并保护环境。
【详解】1.词汇积累
付出努力:join efforts→work hard
同时:meanwhile→at the same time
责任:duty→responsibility
保护:protect→guard
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:As we know, over the past years, floods, landslides, and dust storms have frequented our planet.
拓展句:It is well known that over the past years, floods, landslides, and dust storms have frequented our planet.
【点睛】[高分句型1] So it is high time that we should join efforts to save our planet.(运用了虚拟语气)
[高分句型2] Since it’s our duty to protect our planet, don’t hesitate to join us in the action and take thesemeasures.(运用了since引导原因状语从句)
6.(2022·江苏·泗阳县实验高级中学高一阶段练习)假定你是李华,得知你的美国网友Bill的家乡发生山火,房屋被烧毁,他现在住在临时避难所。请你写一封邮件慰问他,内容要点如下:
1.询问受灾情况,表示关心;
2.鼓励他振作起来,重建家园。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:山火 mountain fire
Dear Bill,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Bill,
On hearing the news that the destructive mountain fire broke out in your hometown, I am extremely worried about you.
Are you or your family injured? Your house was burned down and you are living in the temporary shelter now. How about the conditions there? Do you have enough clothes and food?
The fire has caused great damage to your family, but I firmly believe that all things will get better. Cheer up! I'm sure you will rebuild your hometown soon. Anyway, tomorrow is another day!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。得知你的美国网友Bill的家乡发生山火,房屋被烧毁,他现在住在临时避难所,现要求你根据所给要点写一封邮件慰问他。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常:extremely→badly
担心的:worried→ anxious
损害:damage→harm
导致:cause→ lead to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Your house was burned down and you are living in the temporary shelter now.
拓展句:Because your house was burned down, you are living in the temporary shelter now.
【点睛】【高分句型1】On hearing the news that the destructive mountain fire broke out in your hometown, I am extremely worried about you.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)
【高分句型2】The fire has caused great damage to your family, but I firmly believe that all things will get better.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
7.(2022·海南·嘉积中学高一期末)假设你是校英文报记者。近日,你所在的城市受附近超级台风的影响,遭受特大暴雨,暴雨对当地造成巨大的破坏,请你根据下面的内容写一篇新闻报道。要点包括:
1.受灾情况;
2.救援情况;
3.你的看法。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】 In recent days, the super typhoon which had attacked the areas nearby affected our city. It brought heavy rain and then caused flash floods, destroying many things. Everywhere the natives looked, there seemed to be nothing but water. Many people were trapped on top of the high buildings, waiting for help. Fortunately, no one was found to be killed but only a few got injured. Thanks to the city government, the soldiers were sent to deliver anything in need and transport the trapped. Besides, many volunteers came to offer help.
I believe that with the great effort of the government and the warm-hearted people, our city will be able to revive itself and get back up on its feet.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。假设你是校英文报记者。近日,你所在的城市受附近超级台风的影响,遭受特大暴雨,暴雨对当地造成巨大的破坏,请你根据下面的内容写一篇新闻报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
造成:lead to→cause
帮助:assistance→help
幸运地:luckily→fortunately
此外:additionally→besides
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Thanks to the city government, the soldiers were sent to deliver anything in need and transport the trapped. Besides, many volunteers came to offer help.
拓展句:Thanks to the city government, not only were the soldiers sent to deliver anything in need and transport the trapped, but also many volunteers came to offer help.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In recent days, the super typhoon which had attacked the areas nearby affected our city. (运用了which引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] I believe that with the great effort of the government and the warm-hearted people, our city will be able to revive itself and get back up on its feet. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
8.(2022·全国·高一课时练习)假如你是来自地震灾区的李明,你的美国朋友Tom写信询问你的安全、你家乡的灾后重建情况,以及你的学习、生活情况。请你用英语从以下几个方面写一封回信,内容包括:
1.很多人在地震中失去了家人。幸运的是,在政府和全社会的帮助下,我们已经从废墟中站了起来;
2.现在我们正在新建的教室里上课。经过这场灾难,我们变得更坚强;
3.现在仍然有很多来自全国各地的好心人来看望我们,他们给我们带来了爱和信心;
4.我们已决心重建家园,争取使其变得更美好。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Tom,
I’m so glad to hear from you. Now I want to tell you about my hometown. Many people lost their families in the earthquake. Luckily, with the help of the government and the whole society, we have gradually recovered from the earthquake.
Now we are studying in our newlybuilt classrooms. Through the disaster, we have become much stronger. There are still many warmhearted people from all over the country coming to see us. They bring us love and confidence. Now we are determined to rebuild our hometown and try to make it a better place.
Yours,
Li Ming
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文,要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假如你是来自地震灾区的李明,你的美国朋友Tom写信询问你的安全、你家乡的灾后重建情况,以及你的学习、生活情况。请你用英语从以下几个方面写一封回信,内容包括:1.很多人在地震中失去了家人。幸运的是,在政府和全社会的帮助下,我们已经从废墟中站了起来;2.现在我们正在新建的教室里上课。经过这场灾难,我们变得更坚强;3.现在仍然有很多来自全国各地的好心人来看望我们,他们给我们带来了爱和信心;4.我们已决心重建家园,争取使其变得更美好。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):hear from (收到来信);hometown(家乡);earthquake(地震);with the help of(在……的帮助下);society(社会);recover from(恢复);newlybuilt(新建的);disaster(灾难);warmhearted(热心的);be determined to(决心……)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如There are still many warmhearted people from all over the country coming to see us.非谓语动词和there be句型的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
9.(2022·全国·高一单元测试)假定你是李华,最近获悉你的美国网友Peter家乡受到飓风(hurricane)侵袭,损失惨重。请你用英语给Peter写一封慰问信。信的内容包括:
1. 得知情况及感受;
2. 表达安慰和鼓励;
3. 打算提供的帮助。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
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【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe hurricane unexpectedly hit your hometown and caused a great loss. Shocked to learn the terrible news, I feel upset about your suffering.
Though sorrowful, you have to be tough to stand up to any bad conditions. I think you, as a strong-willed person, can get through this difficult period. You will definitely gather all your courage to face and handle the mess that the hurricane brought about.
Thinking about your present situation, I feel sincere pity for you, and I’ll be there for you whenever you need any help! If necessary, I will call on my classmates to make a donation to you to help you go through the difficultly.
Never give up hope and be strong! Longing for good news from you!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封慰问信,表达对朋友的关心和帮助。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般过去时,一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:分-总法
分-总法指分点表达要点之后,在最后进行总结。
要求:
1. 得知情况及感受;
2. 表达安慰和鼓励;
3. 打算提供的帮助。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
horrible,severe,hurricane, hit , loss, upset , stand up to, get through, bring about, whenever ,help, call on, make a donation, give up
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe hurricane unexpectedly hit your hometown and caused a great loss.
2. I feel upset about your suffering
3. you have to be tough to stand up to any bad conditions
4. I think you, as a strong-willed person, can get through this difficult period.
5…. face and handle the mess that the hurricane brought about.
6. I feel sincere pity for you
7. I will call on my classmates to make a donation to you to help you go through the difficultly.
8. Never give up hope
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:I’m awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe hurricane unexpectedly hit your hometown and caused a great loss.这句话运用了宾语从句。Shocked to learn the terrible news, I feel upset about your suffering.和Thinking about your present situation, I feel sincere pity for you,运用了非谓语动词作状语;Though sorrowful, you have to be tough to stand up to any bad conditions.和If necessary, I will call on my classmates to make a donation to you to help you go through the difficultly.运用了状语从句的省略。使用了一些固定词组,如get through, bring about等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。

