新目标九年级 英语 Unit 4 PPT课件+教案+导学案+单元试卷+素材

介绍“我”所发生的变化

写作任务 (Section B 3a & 3b)

某英文杂志社正在举办题为“How I’ve Changed!”的征文活动。请你写一篇英语短文介绍你的变化，然后向该杂志社投稿。

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内容：关于自己过去与现在情况的对比，重点介绍一个最主要的变化 文体：说明文 人称：以第一人称为主 时态：一般过去时(可用本单元的used to结构表示“过去常常……”)和一般现在时

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语块

▲外貌：tall, big and strong, a little heavy, overweight (超重的), be of medium height / build, thin, short, light, straight / curly / long / short hair, high / big nose,big / bright eyes, wear glasses

▲性格：funny, friendly / nice / kind, outgoing, serious, humorous, active, brave, helpful, popular, talkative (健谈的), silent, quiet, shy, lazy, be easy / hard to get on / along with, be ready to help others

▲兴趣与爱好：in the school music / ... club, on a basketball / ... team, love / like / enjoy (playing) soccer / ..., be interested in  / be good at ..., dislike / can’t stand ...

▲行为习惯：watch TV / movies, listen to pop / ... music, hate P.E. / ... class, not eat a lot of vegetables / ..., not read a lot of books, be afraid of the dark / high places / being alone / giving a speech in public ...

▲学习：study / work hard, get good scores / grades on one’s exams, do well in school, be good at English / ..., become less / more interested in studying, be absent from classes, fail the exam, be bad at / be poor in / be bored with / do badly in ...

▲衣着：dress in black / ..., wear jeans / ..., be dressed as a boy, dress beautifully / nicely / poorly / simply / ...

句型

1. ... used to be / do ..., but now ...  

2. ... didn’t use to be / do ...

3. ... would often / usually / always ...

4. ... had the habit of ...

5. ... has / have changed so much / a lot / greatly / …

6. ... no longer ...

7. ... doesn’t / don’t ... anymore.        

8. It was common to see ... do / doing ... (in those days / at that time / ...)

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【点评范文】

1. 内容：文章内容丰富且详略得当，作者首先从外貌、性格和爱好三个方面简单介绍了自己的变化，其次详细地介绍了自己的重要变化——在英语口语方面发生的变化，并说明了变化的原因和过程。

2. 语言：平行结构(I used to ..., but now I ...)的使用，使得文章节奏匀称；使用了表示对比的词but，还使用了表示时间的词语now和When进行衔接，使得文章语意连贯、自然；比较级结构(became better and better, became more and more confident)和固定句式(The most important ... was that ...)的使用，使得文章提升了一个档次。