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【江苏省镇江市2021-2022学年高三上学期期中】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
This happened with me once while coming back from office late at night. The time was around 11:30 pm and most of the public transport had stopped.
It had been a long busy day. I was annoyed and too eager to reach home and rest. I was on my bike. The traffic signal just before my house turned red and my anger rose.
Then suddenly someone came up from behind me and tied to hand me a piece of paper.I thought it was another one of those people who hand you pages of some sad story and ask you for money. I could feel anger boiling up inside me shirked (避开) the person away with the motion of my hand without even looking at him.
This guy moved over to the next person in traffic and did a similar thing of showing him the paper. The other guy who was not in as bad mood as mine looked at the paper and started giving directions.It was at this moment realized that the person who came to me was asking for directions. He couldn't speak so he had written it down on a piece of paper.He was not some beggar asking for money, and he was dressed as a salesman carrying one of those bully encyclopedias (百科全书). After getting the directions he smiled at the person,bowed his head showing his appreciation and jogged away to the other end of the road.
I felt a sudden tender pity for him.By the time the signal turned green this salesman was standing at the other end of the road signalling people for a lift.I decided to help him out but my house was on a different route than where he was asking for a lift.I moved on but I was still feeling bad fr treating a hard working person that way.
注意∶
1.续写词数应为150词左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After going about 100 meters, I decided to turn back to offer him a helping hand.
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When another bike stopped and he sat on the bike, he noticed me in the distance.
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【答案】After going about 100 meters I decided to turn back to offer him a helping hand. Nothing could set my mind at rest other than having a chance to make up for treating him that way. Without hesitation, I turned around and made my way to where we first met. When I saw him, the exhausted but patient salesman was still signalling at people for a lift and meanwhile showing them the piece of paper. I pressed my feet down sharply on the pedals in a desperate attempt to offer my help as soon as possible.
When another bike stopped and he sat on the bike, he noticed me in the distance. I thought he would probably pretend not to have seen me. To my surprise, he smiled and waved at me as he was swallowed up by the crowd. I was almost rooted to the spot with regretful tears rolling down my cheeks. Though this incident didn’t change my life, I learned a precious lesson: try to treat others with tolerance and kindness even though sometimes life throws you a curveball.
【解析】
本文以回家路上为线索展开,讲述了作者在骑自行车回家的路上,遇到一个聋哑人向他问路求助,他因故无情的拒绝之后,有所悔悟,打算回头帮助聋哑人却没能成功的故事。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“走了大约100米后,我决定回头向他伸出援助之手。”可知,第一段可描写作者有所悔悟,回头想帮助聋哑人。
②由第二段首句内容“当另一辆自行车停下来,他坐在自行车上时,他注意到我在远处。”可知,第二段可描写作者愿望没能实现的悔恨以及感悟。
2.续写线索:返回——坚决(毫不犹豫)——帮助——见到——感谢——悔恨——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.返回:go back/return around
②.见到:see/find
情绪类
①.毫不犹豫地:without hesitation/unhesitantly/with determination
②.悔恨:with regretful tears/regretting deeply
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Without hesitation, I turned around and made my way to where we first met. (由连接词where引导的宾语从句作介词to的宾语)
[高分句型2]. Though this incident didn’t change my life, I learned a precious lesson: try to treat others with tolerance and kindness even though sometimes life throws you a curveball. (由though引导的让步状语从句)
【江苏省盐城市2021-2022学年高三上学期期中】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once upon a time when I was in school my best friend called me late night on Saturday to invite me to her birthday the next day. I was very happy and excited to go there but I needed to take permission from my parents. I went to their room and slowly asked them. They said, “OK, you can go but you should be back before 10.”
Then my preparations started. I made a card for my friend and started selecting clothes for the party. Finally everything completed and I went to sleep and only one thing was there in my mind all the time—THE PARTY. I was waiting for the night to end and the party to begin.
Next morning my Mom was surprised to see that I just woke up by myself, no alarm, no Mom’s warning. The whole day had passed and now it was party time. My father dropped me to my friend’s place and said that he would be back at 10.
I enjoyed a lot at the party. My friend loved the card that I made for her and everybody in the party loved my dress, I was on cloud nine. We had dinner, played so many games and it was 10 finally. I remembered my parents’ advice that I should be back by 10. I came out and started searching for my dad, but I could not find him. I was so worried and scared; everybody was inside, but I was alone there, I waited there for 5 to 10 minutes but waiting alone seemed to be more than the time. I started walking, and I thought at least I could go home by walking as my home was 20 minutes away from my friends place. As I was walking I was weeping as I had never walked alone on the road at night.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly I heard someone calling something.
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After some time I relaxed and told everything to mom.
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【答案】Para 1:
Suddenly I heard someone calling something. I was scared and started walking fast. As I was walking, I heard someone following me and I started running and crying. Then I saw some cars that parked there and I hid myself behind those cars. I saw one shadow searching for me. After some time that shadow disappeared and I ran towards my home. Finally I reached home. I hugged my mom and started crying. She started asking so many questions but I was unable to answer any of them.
Para 2:
After some time I relaxed and told everything to mom. She got scared and while we were discussing my father came and asked what happened. As soon as I started telling him my story, he said, “I saw you and I was screaming at you but you were running away from me and suddenly you disappeared. I came late there as my tyre got flat. My mom burst out laughing and told my dad everything. I was shocked to hear that and felt relieved. That day I slept with my parents and really felt safe and secure.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者去参加朋友的生日聚会,却在聚会后找不到父亲,作者害怕地独自走在路上,边走边哭,这时发现身后有个影子在找自己,作者等影子消失后跑回了家。最后才知道那个影子其实是爸爸。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“突然我听到有人在叫什么。”可知,第一段可描写作者听到有人在叫的反应以及作者是如何回家的。
②由第二段首句内容“过了一段时间,我放松下来,把一切都告诉了妈妈。”可知,第二段可描写作者最后弄清楚那个人其实是父亲。
2.续写线索:听到有人叫喊——作者跑着躲起来——影子消失——作者跑回家——告诉妈妈——得知真相
3.词汇激活
行为类
看见:see/ spot
到达:reach/ arrive
大喊:scream at/ shout at
情绪类
吃惊:shocked / surprised
害怕:scared / terrified
【点睛】
[高分句型1] As I was walking, I heard someone following me and I started running and crying. (运用了as引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] She got scared and while we were discussing my father came and asked what happened. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
【江苏省徐州市2021-2022学年高三上学期期中】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
As we came down to breakfast that morning, with very shiny faces and spandy clean aprons, we found father alone in the dining-room.
“Happy New Year,papa! Where is mother?”we cried.
“A little boy came begging and said they were starving at home, so your mother went to see and--ah,here she is.”
As papa spoke, in came mamma, looking very cold, rather sad, and very much excited.
“Children, don't begin till you hear what I have to say,” she cried and we sat staring at her, with the breakfast untouched before us.
“Not far away from here, lies a poor woman with a little new-born baby. Six children are huddled into one bed to keep from freezing, for they have no fire. There is nothing to eat over there; and the oldest boy came here to tell me they were starving this bitter cold day. My little girls, will you give them your breakfast, as a New Year's gift?”
We sat silent a minute, and looked at the nice, hot porridge, creamy milk, and good bread and butter.
“I wish we'd eaten it up,” thought I, for I was rather a selfish child, and very hungry.
“I'm so glad you come before we began,”said Nan, cheerfully.
“May I go and help carry it to the poor, little children?” asked Beth, who had the tenderest heart.
“I can carry the lassy pot,” said little May, proudly giving the thing she loved best.
“And I shall take all the porridge,” I burst in, heartily ashamed of my first feeling.
“You shall put on your things and help me, and when we come back, we'll get something to eat,”said mother, beginning to pile the bread and butter into a big basket.
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We were soon ready and set out.
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Paragraph 2:
Seeing the house totally in a mess, we fell to work immediately.
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【答案】Para 1:
We were soon ready and set out. With May and Beth carrying the pot and I holding the porridge, we closely trailed mom. We plodded forward in the harsh wind and heavy snow. Then appeared a shabby house and in we popped. What greeted our eyes shocked us: at one end of the bed huddled six kids shivering with cold and the other lay a weak woman who just gave birth to a fragile child. Dirty pans and pots scattered about, with cockroaches creeping on the cracked floor.
Para 2:
Seeing the house totally in a mess, we fell to work immediately. May helped sweep the floor. Beth and Nan cleaned the sink. Mom and I started a fire, which immediately heated up the place. The oldest brother joined us and set the table, which was now laid with lukewarm porridge, creamy milk and yummy bread. All the work done, we sat around and enjoyed the delicious food with mom complimenting it was the most meaningful New Year she had ever had. Meanwhile, tears of gratitude twinkled in the family's eyes as no words could convey with their appreciation towards us.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了在新年里,作者的妈妈号召孩子们去帮助穷苦的一家人,作者刚开始不愿意将自己的早饭奉献出,看到兄弟姐妹都很慷慨,也决定成为其中的一份子,他们最终给这家人送了食物,还帮忙打扫了卫生,度过了有意义的新年的故事。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我们很快就准备好出发了。”可知,第一段可描写作者一家出发并到达,最终见到这一家人的场景。
②由第二段首句内容“看到房子里一片狼藉,我们立即开始工作。”可知,第二段可描写作者一家帮忙打扫房屋,这一家人十分感激。
2.续写线索:出行——房屋状况——打扫卫生——结束工作——感悟——收到感激
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.使……升温heat up/warm up
②.出现:appear/emerge
情绪类
①.震惊:shock/astonish
②.感谢:gratitude/be grateful
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Then appeared a shabby house and in we popped. (完全倒装句)
[高分句型2]. All the work done, we sat around and enjoyed the delicious food with mom complimenting it was the most meaningful New Year she had ever had. (独立主格结构,宾语从句及省略关系词的限制性定语从句)
【江苏省无锡市2021-2022学年高三上学期期中教学质量调研测试】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
My mother eyed me with suspicion. I dared not look at her. Knowing that I was late from school five days continuously, I could not offer an acceptable explanation. I knew she did not believe that I had extra classes every day and arrived home after 5 pm. However, realizing she had little choice but to believe in me, she told me that dinner was in the refrigerator. She had to rush for her night shift at the local clinic.
Ever since we lost our dad in an accident, my mother became the breadwinner. I was the eldest among the four siblings and it fell upon my shoulder to ensure that they could become responsible adults. Besides helping mother with the housework, I regularly coached them in their studies. Thankfully, never once had I had to raise my voice or force them to complete their homework. But all of us missed dad very much. He was a model father and husband.Life was cruelly taken away from him at a very young age of 42.
However, my mother managed to pull through and found a job at the clinic. It was very tough on someone like her who had never worked before in her life. But money was scarce and there were five mouths to feed. Dad did not leave much behind.He never suspected he would die so young.We stopped dining out and had our meals mostly at home. We basically lived from hand to mouth.That's when it dawned on me that I had to do my part for the family. I knew mother would not agree but I threw caution out of the window and managed to get a part-time job at a fast-food restaurant.I worked three hours a day and managed to bring home money so that my siblings and I could go out for occasional movies or meals. I was sure that mother suspected something. But she could not quite point the figure to the source of her suspicion.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One day,while I was busy serving the customers, I was shocked to see mother standing opposite the counter.
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Mother made me sit down. She was already crying, so were my siblings.
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【答案】Para 1:
One day, while I was busy serving the customers, I was shocked to see mother standing opposite the counter. So surprised was I that I dared not look into her eyes. She appeared shocked at the same time. I clumsily took her orders and saw her staggering to a table occupied by my siblings! My supervisor who saw my worried expression and who knew about my family situation quickly volunteered to take over my duties. Slowly,I removed my apron and joined my family.
Para 2:
Mother made me sit down. She was already crying, so were my siblings. She covered my hands with hers and told me that she was grateful for my help. I could not hold back my tears and hugged her. How guilt-ridden I was! I told mother that contributing financially to the family was the least I could to relieve her burden. To my great relief, my beloved mother understood my situation and reassured me everything would be alright. It was then that I came to realize that I should not have hidden such a big secret from her.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者为了帮母亲分担家里的经济负担,开始瞒着母亲放学后在一家快餐店找了份兼职工作,结果这天被母亲遇到了在店里工作的作者,母亲对作者的行为感动而感激。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“有一天,当我忙着为顾客服务时,我震惊地看到母亲站在柜台对面。”可知,第一段可描写作者看到母亲之后的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“母亲让我坐下。 她已经哭了,我的兄弟姐妹也哭了。”可知,第二段可描写母亲对作者行为的态度和做法。
2.续写线索:看见母亲——替母亲点菜——上司接替作者工作——母亲和兄弟姐妹哭泣——母亲表示理解——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
看到:see/ spot
接替:take over / replace
减轻:relieve / ease
情绪类
惊讶:surprised / shocked/ amazed
担忧:worried / concerned
【点睛】
[高分句型1] So surprised was I that I dared not look into her eyes. (运用了部分倒装)
[高分句型2] My supervisor who saw my worried expression and who knew about my family situation quickly volunteered to take over my duties. (运用了who引导定语从句)
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。【江苏省苏州中学2021-2022学年高三上学期10月学业质量评估】
I am a photographer running a studio in the inner city. We are well known for our children's portraits (肖像),and we range from high-end portraits for modelling jobs to fun sibling photos and birth announcements. We do a bit of everything; as such, we are extremely busy, and it states on our website that we do not accept walk-ins. We are usually booked up six months in advance. One day, ten minutes before closing, a mum walked in with a young girl around six or seven behind her. I internally sighed.
The mother said:"Hello. I know you're closing soon, but I have a special favour to ask.”
At that point the little girl peeked around her mother's legs and I was lost for words. Under her thick winter coat and hat, she was skinny with huge dark circles under her eyes. From what I could tell, she had no hair, and a tube taped to her cheek that fed into her nose. It was immediately clear this kid was very, very sick.
The mother said again, nearly teary. " My daughter saw one of your photos taped to the wall at the hospital. She really loves unicorns (独角兽)and the photo had a girl photoshopped onto a horse. I know you're booked up, and it's months before the next appointment, but…”
At that point she actually started crying. I realised that our next available appointment was probably way too far away for this particular kid. The little girl squeezed her mother's hand. I am a very big guy with a beard, but I'm not ashamed to say I needed a minute before I spoke.
I smiled and said with the softest voice I had ever had : ” Ahh, that's just for regular customers I I've been waiting all day to take a photo of someone as beautiful as you! What's your name, sweetheart?"
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
I locked the front door and invited them to the changing room,
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The mother thanked me over and over and came up front, holding out her credit card. .
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【答案】I locked the front door and invited them to the changing room. I spent the next three hours taking photos of this kid in every princess costume I have in my closet. She was the sweetest, most well-behaved kid I had ever worked with. Once we were done, she lay on the couch in my office and fell asleep while I loaded up the photos for her mum to see and choose the ones she liked best.
The other thanked me over and over and came up front, holding out her credit card. I refused to accept it, say: “I feel very honored to take a photo of such a lovely angel. I’m not taking money for this, but I hope you can allow me to put one of her photos in our showcase, because she has the most beautiful and warmest smile. Many years later that photo of a sick little girl on a giant pink unicorn is still in a frame in my shop, always reminding me to show kindness to those who really need it.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者是一名摄影师,在市中心经营一家工作室,生意火爆,顾客不预约,就不接受其摄影订单。一天,一个妈妈带着生病的女儿来到作者店里,想要作者给女儿拍一张有独角兽的照片。虽然妈妈没预约,但作者答应给小女孩拍照片。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我锁上前门,邀请她们去更衣室。”可知,第一段可描写作者帮助小女孩拍了很多照片,拍完后,小女孩累得睡着了,作者让她妈妈选择最好的照片。
②由第二段首句内容“另一个人一遍又一遍地感谢我,然后走到前面,拿出她的信用卡。”可知,第二段可描写作者拒绝接受钱,但希望放一张小女孩的照片在店里,这张照片提醒作者要对那些真正需要照片的人表示友好。
2.续写线索:拍照——选照片——拒绝钱——请求——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①拍照:taking photos / taking pictures
②睡着了:fell asleep / fell into a sleep
③拒绝:refused / rejected
情绪类
①感到荣幸:feel very honored to / feel a great honor to
②笑容:smile / smiling expression
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. She was the sweetest, most well-behaved kid I had ever worked with.(先行词是the sweetest, most well-behaved kid,用了省略that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]. Many years later that photo of a sick little girl on a giant pink unicorn is still in a frame in my shop, always reminding me to show kindness to those who really need it.(用了现在分词短语作状语,用了who引导的定语从句)
【江苏省如皋市2021-2022学年高三英语第一学期教学质量调研(一)】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
In 1995 I broke my left foot on a bike ride. Luckily, I could still drive, so I continued my life with crutches (拐杖). One Sunday I drove to a picnic in a forest preserve an hour from my home, in my comfortable, but uncertain, white car.
The picnic was great, with good food, good friends and good weather. Late in the afternoon I left the party and began my drive home. I took the scenic route through West Chicago, a small town about 25 miles west of Chicago proper. Everything closed down on Sunday there, so it was hard to find someone driving on the road.
As I started up a bridge my car started to move with a short sudden action. The problem was that my car's alternator (交流发电机) went wrong, resulting in the car's battery dying. I thought, not now, not here! Finally, the car died. I rolled backwards onto a safer place, and pulled the emergency brake (紧急制动). Of course it was starting to get dark. I had to go out to walk, but where would I go? And on crutches? How long before a car would come by, and would they be kind enough to stop help? It would be very expensive to get my car to the auto mechanic shop (汽车修理店) of my hometown. Could I go home safely?
Then I saw a house right there at the bottom of the bridge, with a family outside having a picnic with their friends! Some of them were looking in my direction; some women were clearing away the completed picnic meal. I had great trouble walking with crutches, so I got out, leaned on the car and waved one crutch over my head. Their response was immediate. Three people ran up to the car to see what I needed. I told them my story and they took action at once.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
To my great joy, the family owned an auto mechanic shop.
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Unbelievable luck again, I had a ride to my home.
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【答案】To my great pleasure, the family owned a car repair shop. Fortunately, their repair shop was not far from here. One of them went back to get tools and helped me repair my car. They changed the battery and restarted the car. My worries completely disappeared. I was so grateful that I hoped to give them some reward. But they said to me, “It’s our pleasure to help people in trouble out of trouble.” They were really my timely help! Because it was late and they saw that it was not easy for me to move, they were very willing to continue to help me and take me home.
Unbelievable luck again, I had a ride to my home. I felt very happy to be taken care of, especially in this difficult time. My heart was full of gratitude and incomparable warmth. In the car we talked happily all the way. I thought it was these warm-hearted people who had made me not have to go hungry and spend this cold night in the wild. I must pass on this kind of love for helping others. Let the world be full of love forever.
【解析】
本文以作者去森林保护区野餐为线索展开,讲述了作者在负伤的情况下,驱车去森林保护区野餐,结果在回来的路上,车坏了。幸运的是,遇到一些热心人帮助作者脱离困境的故事。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“令我非常高兴的是,这家人拥有一家汽车修理店。”可知,第一段可描写热心人帮助作者修车,作者表示感激。
②由第二段首句内容“又一次令人难以置信的幸运,有人开车送我回家。”可知,第二段可描写作者得到帮助,脱离困境后的感悟,要把爱心传递下去。
2.续写线索:修车——帮助——感谢——回家——传递爱心——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.修理:fix/repair
②.传递:deliver/pass on
情绪类
①.感谢:showing my appreciation/show my gratitude/be grateful
②.开心:feel happy/ be joyful
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. I was so grateful that I hoped to give them some reward. (运用了so…that句型,that引导结果状语从句)
[高分句型2]. I thought it was these warm-hearted people who had made me not have to go hungry and spend this cold night in the wild. (强调句型)
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【江苏省淮安市高中校协作体2021-2022学年高三英语期中】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
As mountains go,1,642-foot Squaw Peak isn’t particularly grand. But its inviting views of western Massachusetts have tricked hikers into becoming self-satisfied with its steep,slippery cliffs(悬崖) , resulting in countless injuries and even deaths.
Henry Grant, a week shy of starting his freshman year at Ithaca College, respected Squaw Peak’s record.Therefore, he stayed a good ten feet from the edge while waiting for his mother to catch up to him one day. He watched 15 or so other hikers enjoy the vista; one hiker, around 60 and dressed in pink, was peeking over the lip of the cliff with her husband.
When Grant’s mother rejoined him, the two turned to continue on their way. Suddenly,he heard a heavy dull sound, he told the Cornell Daily Sun. Then he heard something chilling: “Paula! Paula!” a man yelled wildly. Grant wheeled around. The woman in pink was no-where to be seen. She'd fallen off the side of the mountain.
Several hikers immediately started looking for her, but their view was blocked by trees.Grant told his mother,“I hate to say this, but they’re probably going to find a body.”
Uncertain they could help, Grant and his mother headed down the trail. But when he saw hikers still searching, he decided to lend a hand. “My young dumb brain was like, ‘I can do it,’” he says.After assuring his mother that he would be safe, he made a long and difficult journey alone, hoping he wasn’t too late.
After 15 minutes of scrambling over the large rock, pushing past prickly(多刺的)brush,and slipping down patches of loose dirt, Grant spotted a figure about 25 feet above him. She was dressed in pink and crumpled in a kneeling position on a small rocky.
The woman had fallen about 75 feet.
Unexpectedly,she was alive.
“Paula!” Grant shouted.“Paula.Is that you?”
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
The woman barely responded.
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Paragraph 2:
About 45 minutes later, first responders arrived on the top.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
The woman barely responded. She was clearly hurt and almost mad. Grant called 911 to report her location. He waited where he was for a bit, but she kept trying to move, and every time she moved, she slipped a little more. Afraid that in her muddled state of mind, she might tumble off the outcropping to her death, Grant crawled on all fours up a tight, narrow path, gaining traction by digging into the dirt with his fingers and feet until he reached Paula. She was moaning and barely making sense. Her head, arms, and legs were bleeding. Securing himself against a tree, Grant gently put her hand in his and tried to keep her mind off the pain by peppering her with questions.
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About 45 minutes later, first responders arrived on the top. To reach them, a rescuer rappelled down and secured Paula to a stretcher. Rescuers at the summit lifted the stretcher to the top and then carried her to a waiting ATV. Eventually, Paula and her husband would be flown by helicopter to a hospital
【解析】
本文以格兰特和他的母亲一起爬山为线索展开。讲述了格兰特开学前一周,和他的母亲一起爬斯阔峰,一名叫宝拉的穿粉色衣服的女士和她的丈夫正在悬崖边旁攀爬。突然,宝拉从悬崖边摔下去了。格兰特和几个徒步者开始去寻找她,后来格兰特在一块岩石上发现了宝拉,他打了911报告了位置,陪着宝拉直到救援人员赶到,用直升机把她送往医院。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“那个女人几乎没有反应。”可知,第一段可描写格兰特发现宝拉受伤了,格兰特打911申请救援,设法靠近宝拉,并陪着她等候救援。
②由第二段首句内容“大约45分钟后,第一批救援人员到达山顶。”可知,第二段写第一批救援人员赶到,用担架抬宝拉到山顶,等待直升机来接宝拉送往医院。
2.续写线索:发现宝拉受伤——拨打911——陪着宝拉等待救援——救援赶到——等待直升机将宝拉送往医院。
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.回应:respond/reply /answer
②.到达:arrive on/reach
③.抬:lift/promote
情绪类
①.发疯的,混乱的:mad /crazy
②.糊涂的:muddled / confused/ chaotic
【点睛】
[高分句型1].
He waited where he was for a bit, but she kept trying to move, and every time she moved, she slipped a little more.(由连接副词where引导的地点状语从句)
[高分句型2].
To reach them, a rescuer rappelled down and secured Paula to a stretcher.(运用了动词不定式to reach them作目的状语)
【江苏省海门中学、淮阴中学、姜堰中学2021-2022学年高三上学期11月阶段测试(期中)】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Any day that I had to go to the airport was the worst day of my life, and as a traveling appliance salesman, I had to fly quite a bit. On this particular day in 2010. 1 was assigned to a middle seat. Back then, I was so fat that I couldn't fit down the aisle (走廊) facing forward,so I was forced to walk sideways like a crab. I weighed between 340 and 360 pounds; the exact figure depended on whether I measured my weight before or after one of my enormous meals. When I finally squeezed into my seat, the seat belt wasn't long enough to fit around my 52-inch waist.They never were.
I woke up the next morning knowing that I needed to change. I started looking for signs that might lead me toward a better life and immediately a sign showed up. I turned on the TV and happened to catch an interview with former president Bill Clinton. He said he'd been under the care of a doctor who put him on a whole-food, plant-based diet. He lost weight without feeling hungry, and he was healthier and stronger than he'd been since his twenties. I never imagined my sign would come from Bill Clinton, but there he was.
I had no idea what a “whole-food, plant-based diet” was. I went online and searched for a doctor who could help me. That's when I found Preeti. 1 felt hopeful when she agreed to see me the next day. The doctor recommended a low calorie diet and suggested some moderate exercises I could do in my home. She also suggested that I go to a shelter and adopt a dog.“Exercise?”I asked, “A dog?" I couldn't believe what I heard.But, she said. “A dog is a good companion. Plus, you live in an apartment. which means the dog has to be walked. So if you walk your dog twice a day,that will be your exercise."
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With doubts and hesitation, I drove up to a dog sheller near where I lived.
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I came back home with the large black and-white dog with a big round body.
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【答案】范文:
Para 1:
With doubt and hesitation, I drove up to a dog shelter near where I lived.Upon opening the door, I was amazed to see various types of dogs: Poodle, Husky, Samoyed .. Though abandoned, they all appeared clean and energetic. Seeing a stranger approaching, they kept barking, alert but curious. I was torn between a Poodle with golden fur and a Husky wagging its tail when a large black-and-white dog dozing in the corner caught my attention. His round body immediately reminded me of my size and what Preeti said-A dog is a good companion. I knew he was perfect for me.
Para 2:
I came back home with the large black-and-white dog with a big round body. I named him David, who often lay motionless on the floor and yawned with eyes half-closed. Though a bit discouraged, I was determined to change both of us. Soon, I found a ball, dragged David to the park and threw it at him. Driven by natural instinct, David dashed forward to chase the ball. Gradually, I could walk David twice a day. One month later, I suddenly realized that there was no need for me to walk like a crab on the plane. Meanwhile, David became lean and healthy.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者体重在340到360磅之间,作者决定改变自己,作者在网上找到了能帮助自己的医生,医生建议作者吃低热量的食物,并建议作者在家里做一些适度的运动。她还建议作者去收容所领养一只狗。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“带着疑虑和犹豫,我开车来到我家附近的一家狗狗收容所。”可知,第一段可描写作者去狗狗收容所选狗的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“我带着一条大的黑白色的狗回到家里,它的身体又大又圆”可知,第二段可描写作者与狗狗相处的过程。
2.续写线索:作者惊讶收容所里有各种狗——作者选择——带了一条大的黑白色的狗回到家———狗与作者互动——作者和狗狗的改变
3.词汇激活
行为类
1.吸引注意力:catch one’s attention/ catch one’s eyes
2.想起recall/remind
3.决定做某事:be determined to do sth /make up one’s mind to do sth
情绪类
1.惊讶的:amazed/astonished
2.失望的:discouraged /disappointed
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Seeing a stranger approaching, they kept barking, alert but curious. (现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] One month later, I suddenly realized that there was no need for me to walk like a crab on the plane. (that引导的宾语从句)
【江苏省常州市2021-2022学年高三上学期期中】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
That December, with Christmas approaching, my mother was out at work when I let myself into her bedroom one afternoon in search of a safety pin. I took the key hidden under the carpet, unlocked the door stepped in. Standing against the wall was a big, black bicycle with balloon tires. I recognized it instantly. It was the same second-hand bike I'd been admiring in a Baltimore Street shop window. Somehow my mother must have scraped together enough for a down payment and meant to surprise me with the bicycle on Christmas morning.
I was deeply moved by the discovery and yet sickened by the knowledge that, bursting into her room like this I had robbed her of the pleasure of seeing me astonished and delighted on Christmas day. I immediately backed out, put the key back in its hiding place, and thought over what to do.
I decided that between now and Christmas I must do absolutely nothing to reveal the slightest hint of my terrible knowledge. Nothing must deny her the happiness of seeing me completely amazed on Christmas day. I even started practicing my surprised face in front of the mirror, testing exclamations of delight:"Wow!""A bike with balloon tires! I don't believe it!"
The day finally came when Christmas arrived. My mother woke me and my sister early in the morning."Go see what Santa Claus brought to you."
注意∶1.续写词数应为150左右
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Heartbeat racing,I came out of my bedroom.
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I was about to go into my room disappointedly with the shirt when my mom cried behind me, "Wait! There's something in bedroom I forget all about."
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【答案】Heartbeat racing, I came out of my bedroom. To my disappointment, only a few small brightly wrapped packages were lying under the Christmas tree. No bicycle. My heart sank as if being splashed by cold water. Slowly I opened my package, only to see a shirt lying inside. What I felt was bitter displeasure. What happened to my bicycle? I couldn’t help thinking my mom had found the bike just too expensive and eventually sent it back. I could feel tears welling up in my eyes as I clenched the shirt.
I was about to go into my room disappointedly with the shirt when my mom cried behind me, “Wait! There’s something in my bedroom I forgot all about.” She went to her room, and a moment later came back wheeling the big black bicycle with balloon tires. I didn’t have to pretend the excitement and surprise as the bicycle came into my sight. I threw my arms around my mom and kissed her spontaneously. “Thank you mom! This is the best Christmas gift I’ve ever had!” A brilliant grin bloomed on my mom’s face as she held me tightly. Hiding her pleasure of seeing my surprised face, she said, “All right now, it’s only a bicycle.”
【解析】
本文讲述了作者趁妈妈不在家,偷偷进她卧室找东西时,意外发现了妈妈为他准备的圣诞礼物,为了不让妈妈失望,作者决定假装不知道并不断练习“喜出望外”的表情,满心欢喜地等待圣诞节的到来。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“心脏快速地跳着,我走出卧室。”可知,第一段可描写作者满怀期待,却发现妈妈送给他的圣诞礼物不是自行车后失落的心情。
②由第二段首句内容“我正要失望地拿着衬衫走进房间时,妈妈在我身后叫了起来,“等等!卧室里的东西被我忘得一干二净了。”可知,第二段可描写作者终于收到了心仪的圣诞礼物。
2.续写线索:看到礼物——失望的心情——难过——看到自行车——惊喜的心情
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.拆开:opened my package/unwrapped my package
②.看见:sth came into my sight/ I saw sth
③.拥抱:threw my arms around my mom/hugged my mom
情绪类
①.兴奋:excitement/ exhilaration
②.生气:displeasure/annoyance
【点睛】
[高分句型1]What I felt was bitter displeasure.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
[高分句型1]This is the best Christmas gift I’ve ever had.(运用了省略了关系词that的定语从句)
【江苏省高邮市2022届高三上学期期初学情调研】阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a cold, snowy evening. Tommy was running as fast as he could, focused on nothing but his destination----the shop on the street corner. Two weeks ago he saw figurines(小塑像) of Marvel superheroes on the shelves and felt he had to have one. He’s been walking the neighbor’s dog ever since then to earn money to fulfil his little dream. He was so excited and barely noticing the world around him. Maybe that’s why he tripped over the legs of a homeless woman, who was sitting on the pavement, her back against the wall. He murmured(低语) "sorry" and moved on to his destination.
Once he entered the shop, he went straight to the shelves with figurines. Hulk, Thor, Captain America, Iron Man, and many more----all of his admired heroes. With his heart pounding like crazy he reached for Spiderman.
“You like these, true believer?”
Tommy turned around. An old man was standing behind him with a wide smile on his face.
“Y-yes, …Yes, they’re awesome!” answered Tommy. “They’re strong and fast and help other people a lot ...”the boy looked at figurines in admiration. “I wish I could be a superhero too.”
“Then become one!” said the old man.
“How?” Tommy asked in surprise. “I don’t have any superpowers.”
“And why would you need them?” the old man smiled. Seeing the confusion on the boy's face, he squatted(蹲下) and put his hands on Tommy's arms. “Did you know that shopkeeper lady over there has a disabled husband? She’s been working hard and taking care of him for years. I’ve never heard a word of complaint from her. And this person ---” he pointed at a redhead man, who just entered the shop. “He’s a firefighter; he’s saved countless lives. He never gives up, no matter how dangerous the situation seems to be.”
The old man looked Tommy in the eyes and smiled. “You don’t need a superpower to be a hero for someone else. The path of a superhero starts not in the mind, not in the muscles, but in the heart.”
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely.
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The homeless woman was right there, where he saw her last time.
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【答案】One possible version:
Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely. Finally he raised his head. "So I am supposed to...” he stopped mid-sentence when he realized that he was alone. He turned his head left and right, but the old man was nowhere to be seen. His eyes lit up---- he already had an idea of what he should do. He looked at figurines for the last time and moved towards the counter. "Two sandwiches and a cup of tea please, "he said, and then returned, food in hand.
The homeless woman was right there, where he saw her last time. Tommy came closer and carefully gave the woman his buys. Her eyes opened wide in surprise, then filled with tears. “Thank you," she whispered. Tommy bowed his head, turned around and went back home. He was moving faster and faster and finally he started to run. Strange energy filling his body made him feel like he could fly. When he finally stopped, he was breathing heavily, but he didn’t feel tired. He smiled happily --- it was a wonderful feeling. And nothing could stop it.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了汤米想成为超级英雄,在一个老人的开导下他学会了用自己的行动去帮助他人的故事。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“汤米低下头,看着自己的鞋子,冥思苦想。”可知,第一段可描写汤米懂得了真正超级英雄的含义。
②由第二段首句内容“那个无家可归的女人就在那里,他最后一次见到她的地方。”可知,第二段可描写汤米帮助了那个女人。
2.续写线索:领悟——帮助——感谢——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.开始:start/begin/commence
②.充满:be filled with/be full of
情绪类
①.感谢:Thank for/show one’s appreciation/show one’s gratitude/be grateful
②.积极:positive attitude/act positively
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. His eyes lit up---- he already had an idea of what he should do.这句话运用了what引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型2] Strange energy filling his body made him feel like he could fly.这句话运用了现在分词作定语。
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