2020版高考英语新设计大一轮人教新高考(浙鲁京琼)版讲义:必修四Unit1
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词汇
请匹配下列单词与其词义
1.welfare A.n.专家;专业工作者
2.institute B.n.联系;关系;结合;纽带
3.specialist C.n.学会;学院;协会
4.shade D.n.福利;福利事业
5.bond E.n.荫;阴凉处 vt.遮住光线
6.entertainment F.adj.直言的;坦诚
7.outspoken G.n.比率;速度
8.rate H.n.款待;娱乐;娱乐表演
9.project I.n.突发事件;紧急情况
10.emergency J.n.项目;工程;规划
答案 1.D 2.C 3.A 4.E 5.B 6.H 7.F 8.G 9.J 10.I
高频词汇
请根据汉语提示完成下列词块
1.respect the ideas of others尊重别人的意见
2.support oneself自谋生计
3.deliver a message带信,传话
4.observe a rule遵守规则
5.refer a question to an expert把问题提交给专家(处理)
6.intend to go home打算回家
7.the most considerate person最能体谅人的人
8.a very modest person一个十分谦虚的人
9.a political campaign政治运动
10.some really worthwhile novels一些真正有价值的小说
11.draw a large crowd吸引大批观众
12.such a large audience这么多听众
拓展
词汇
请填入括号内单词的正确形式
1.Being a good neighbor is more or less about consideratebehavior(behave).(2018·浙江6月卷)
2.Among the bag makers’ arguments(argue): many cities with bans still allow shoppers to purchase paper bags.(2018·浙江6月卷)
3.With some books, you may feel a connection(connect) right away.(2017·浙江11月卷)
4.I had an interesting childhood(child): It was filled with surprises and amusements.
5.I’ll never forget your kindness (kind) and help during my stay here.
6.Do some research on the position and organization (organize) before the interview.
7.The crowd went directly to the accident scene, and the spot was crowded(crowd) with people.
8.He has been observing the situation of that region for a long time, so his observation (observe) is believable.
9.I hold the firm belief that you are bound to achieve your dream of being admitted to a key university,which will give you a wonderful sense of achievement(achieve).
10.Listening to his inspiring speech, we were inspired to make great efforts.It gave us not only hope but also inspiration.(inspire)
必会
短语
请根据汉语提示完成下列词块
1.move__off离开;起程;出发
2.crowd__in(想法、问题等)涌上心头;涌入脑海
3.live/lead__a happy life生活得开心
4.refer__to all of us针对我们所有的人
5.look__down__on/upon this kind of work看不起这种工作
6.carry__on with your work继续做你的工作
7.come__across him in the street在街上碰到他
8.work__out the problem with no difficulty毫无困难地解决这个问题
9.devote oneself to helping the poor致力于帮助穷人
10.hear their talking by__chance偶然听到他们的谈话
必仿
佳句
1.[原句] Only after her mother came to help her for the first few months was she allowed to begin her project.
2.[原句] Once I stop, it all comes crowding in and I remember the chimps in laboratories.
3.[原句] Suddenly it hit me how difficult it was for a woman to get medical training at that time.
1.[仿写] 只有通过每天花费至少两个小时学英语,你才能快速提高它。
Only by spending at least two hours learning English every day can__you__improve__it quickly.
2.[仿写] 一旦学会了利用失败,那么失败就能为你的生活做出积极的贡献。
Failure can make a positive contribution to your life once__you__learn__to__make__use__of__it.
3.[仿写] 我忽然想到我告诉他们的电话号码是错的。
It__hit__me__that the phone number I had told them was wrong.
1.intend vt.& vi.打算,计划,想要;意指,意思是
(1)intend doing/to do sth 打算/想要做某事
intend sb to do sth 计划让某人做某事
be intended for/to do... 旨在,预定……用途;为……打算的
(2)intention n. 意图;目的;打算
单句语法填空/句式升级
①I looked carefully at the text and realized that it was intended for women in the countryside.
②This programme was set up with an intention of providing help to homeless people.
→This programme was set up, which__was__intended__to__provide help to homeless people.(定语从句)
[佳句背诵] I had intended to go/intended to have gone there but I changed my mind at the last minute.
我本打算去那里,但在最后一分钟我改变了主意。
[名师指津] had intended to do...=intended to have done...本打算做…… (但实际未做)
2.behave vt.& vi.举动;(举止或行为)表现
(1)behave well/badly 举止良好/糟糕
behave well/badly to/towards sb 对待某人好/差
behave oneself 守规矩;表现得体
(2)well-behaved adj. 表现好的
badly-behaved adj. 表现差的
(3)behaviour n. 举止;行为
单句语法填空/完成句子
①I think all of us should mind our behaviour (behave) in public places.
②He always behaves__very__well__towards/to__us (对我们很好).
[佳句背诵] Behave yourself in public and you will win the respect of most of us.
在公众场合举止得体才能赢得我们大多数人的尊重。
3.observe vt.观察;注意到;观测;遵守;庆祝
(1)observe sb do sth 观察/看到某人做某事 (全过程)
observe sb doing sth 观察/看到某人正在做某事
observe that... 观察到……
(2)observation n. 观察;观察力;观测
[一词多义] 写出下列句子中observe的含义
①Though having lived abroad for years, many Chinese still observe the traditional customs.遵守;遵从
②It is a tradition for the people here to observe the Spring Festival.庆祝
③The scientist devoted most of his lifetime to observing the behavior of the chimps.观察
完成句子
④The guard observed__a__young__man__stealing (注意到一位年轻人正偷东西) from the office, and he tried to approach him quietly.
[名师指津] observe sb do sth中do为不带to的动词不定式,变成被动语态时要把to 补充出来,相似用法的还有使役动词如make,感官动词如see, hear等。
4.argue vi.争吵,争论 vi.& vt.辩论,主张,说服
(1)argue with sb about/over sth与某人就某事争辩
argue for/against 为……据理力争/据理反对……
argue sb into/out of doing sth 说服某人做/不做某事
(2)argument n. 争辩;论据,论点
单句语法填空/句型转换
①It’s no use arguing about/over the question with him for he won’t change his opinion.
②I argue that every one of us (should)__try (try)our best to help those in need.
③To persuade the peasants to believe scientific farming is our task.
→To argue__the__peasants__into__believing scientific farming is our task.
[佳句背诵] It is beyond argument that Diaoyu Islands belong to China.
钓鱼岛属于中国这是不争的事实。
[名师指津] argue that...意为“主张……”时,that从句的谓语动词常使用虚拟语气“(should) do”形式。
5.support vt.& n.支持;拥护;赡养
(1)support sb in (doing) sth 在(做)某事方面支持某人
support oneself 自力更生
(2)in support of 支持,支援;拥护
单句语法填空/完成句子
①We’ll support you heart and soul in your new experiment.
②She has__been__supporting__herself(一直自食其力) since she was 18 years old.
[佳句背诵] Only a few people spoke in support of his plan, which made him very disappointed.
只有少数人发言支持他的计划,这使他很失望。
6.respect vt.尊重;尊敬 n.敬意;尊敬;方面,细节
(1)respect sb for sth 因某事尊敬或敬重某人
(2)show/have respect for 对……表示尊敬/尊重
in respect of 关于;就……而言
单句语法填空/句型转换
①In respect of this question, there are three opinions.
②In addition, you should respect all the teachers who unselfishly help you to gain much knowledge.
→In addition, you should show/have__respect__for__all__the__teachers who unselfishly help you to gain much knowledge.(respect n.)
[佳句背诵] Respect yourself, or no one else will respect you.
[谚]君须自敬,人乃敬之。
7.deliver vt.递送;接生;发表 (演说等)
(1)deliver sth to sb 把……递送给某人
deliver a speech 发表演说
(2)delivery n. 投递;送货;分娩
单句语法填空/完成句子
①Each time he delivered a letter to Mrs.Brown, he had to finish his work quite late, because she lived far away.
②The headmaster delivered__an__important__speech(发表了重要演说) at the meeting yesterday, which left a deep impression on his students.
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8.refer to提及;谈到;参考;查阅;提交;涉及
(1)refer...to... 把……提交给…… (以求获得帮助)
refer to...as... 把……称作……
(2)reference n. 言及;提及;参考;查阅
[一词多义] 写出下列句子中refer to的含义
①If you don’t know the exact meaning of the word, you may refer to the dictionary.查阅
②The new law does not refer to land used for farming.涉及
③We have reached an agreement that we will not refer to the matter again.提及
完成句子
④People who work in offices are__usually__referred__to__as(通常被称为) “white collar workers”.
9.come across(偶然)遇见;碰见
come about 发生
come out 出现;开花;发行;发表
come up (问题、计划等)被提出;升起;长出地面
come up with 提出
句型转换
I met an old school friend by chance in Oxford Street this morning.
→I came__across__an__old__school__friend in Oxford Street this morning.
[佳句背诵] From the book, I have learned that whenever we come across difficulties, we should never give in or run away.
从这本书中,我得知无论什么时候我们遇到困难,我们都不能够屈服或逃避。
10.carry on继续;坚持;经营;进行(生意、谈话等)
carry on with sth继续做某事(相当于go on with)
carry out 执行;实施;履行;落实;完成(任务)
carry through 帮……渡过(难关等);履行(承诺);完成
单句语法填空/完成句子
①If you carry on working(work) like that, you will break down sooner or later.
②He asked us to assist him in carrying__through__his__plan(完成他的计划).
[佳句背诵] I hate it when she calls me at work — I’m always too busy to carry on a conversation with her.
我讨厌工作时她给我打电话——我一直很忙,没时间与她进行谈话。
11.Once__I__stop,__it all comes crowding in and I remember the chimps in laboratories.
我一旦停下来, 所有的一切都会涌上心头, 我就会想起实验室的黑猩猩。
once在本句中引导条件状语从句,意为“一旦”。
如果once引导的从句的主语与主句的主语一致,且从句中的谓语动词含有be动词的某种形式,或从句为“it be... ”形式,从句中的“主语+be”或“it be”可以省略。
单句语法填空/句式升级
①You will be successful in the interview once__you__have__confidence(你一旦有了自信心).
②Once he was buried in something, he would close his ears to anything.
→Once__buried__in__something,__he would close his ears to anything.(省略句式)
[佳句背诵] Once the damage is done, it will take many years for the farmland to recover.
一旦被毁坏,农田将会花费很多年才能恢复。
12.Suddenly it__hit__me__how difficult it was for a woman to get medical training at that time.
突然我想起在那个年代,一个女子去学医是多么困难啊。
“It hit(s) sb+从句”结构,意思是“某人突然想到……”,it在句中作形式主语。类似的结构还有:
(1)It occurs/occurred to sb that...(某人)突然想到……
(2)It strikes/struck sb that...(某人)突然想到……
(3)It happens/happened that...碰巧……
单句语法填空/句型转换
①It happened that they spent their childhood in the same village.
②It struck him that he had an important conference to attend the next morning.
→It__hit__him__that he had an important conference to attend the next morning.(hit)
→It__occurred__to__him__that he had an important conference to attend the next morning.(occur)
[佳句背诵] Suddenly it hit me that he was trying to ask me to forgive him.
我突然意识到他是要我原谅他。
Ⅰ.阅读——教材VS高考之一
Lucy was better at①observation than most children of her generation.She had ②intended to become a lawyer but changed her mind when she met Dr.Cooper, who was delivering medical courses to a large ③crowd of audience.Cooper ④inspired her to study medicine and supported her to a medical institute.Lucy is now a specialist, working in the ⑤emergency department of a hospital.Her being considerate and ⑥modest has won her much venerability from her patients.
1.写出黑体词汇在语境中的词性和词义
①n.观察;观测 ②vt.计划;打算
③n.人群 ④vt.鼓舞;激励
⑤n.突发事件;紧急情况 ⑥adj.谦虚的;谦让的
2.Which of the following can replace the underlined “venerability”?
A.respect B.determination
C.achievement D.welfare
答案 A
Ⅱ.完形——教材VS高考之二
Jack, who was in charge of a project, was invited to__1__ a speech by a famous company.He had __2__ to arrive early but his car broke down.Then he __3__ Mary, who offered to drive him there.Thanks to her kindness and __4__, Jack got there just in time.
1.A.behave B.observe
C.support D.deliver
2.A.crowded B.intended
C.argued D.campaigned
3.A.came across B.carried on
C.referred to D.worked out
4.A.bond B.entertainment
C.consideration D.emergency
答案 1.D 2.B 3.A 4.C
Ⅲ.语法填空——教材VS高考之三
When you refer to human beings’ achievements, what kind of women is more likely to get success? Song Qingling devoted herself 1.to Chinese welfare project.Lin Qiaozhi is a 2.specialist(special) in women’s diseases and she helped reduce death rate of babies in China.She delivered so many babies and wrote a book 3.intended(intend) for women to deal with emergencies in the countryside.Jane Goodall found the connection and bond between human beings and chimps and started a campaign to protect the wildlife.She 4.observed(observe) the chimps’ nests for many years.They all set up 5.organizations(organize) to call on people 6.to__behave(behave) with love and their efforts are worthwhile.They were outspoken and 7.considerate(consider) and modest.They argued for equal rights and supported freedom.We all should carry on their career 8.and build a better world.We won’t come across success by chance.We should try our best to realize our goals.
Ⅳ.写作——教材VS高考之四
一、细读本单元Reading部分,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的概要。
【参考范文】
In the 1960s,Jane Goodall moved off to Africa to study chimps.(要点1)She spent over 25 years observing and recording their daily activities and fully understood chimps’ behaviour like humans.(要点2)Her research showed the close connections between chimps and human beings and changed the way people think about chimps.(要点3)Later,she did many things to protect animals.(要点4)Jane’s great achievements show that women can be as great as men.(要点5)
二、一份对外发行的英文报纸有“人物剪影”栏目,请根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文,介绍著名人物汉斯(Hans)。
1.一生都奉献给了无家可归的儿童;
2.曾受邀在哈佛大学毕业典礼上发表演讲;
3.名言:一旦开始做一件事情,就必须坚持下去,否则你将一事无成。
注意:1.词数不少于60;
2.至少使用5个所提示的关键词语。
提示词:achievement, devote...to..., behaviour, respect, deliver, once, carry on, otherwise, only, try your best
【参考范文】
Hans, a man of great achievements, has devoted all his life to homeless children, whose behaviour has won respect of all.When asked to deliver a speech on the graduation in Harvard University, he said.
“Once you begin to do something, you must carry on with it; otherwise you will never achieve anything.” And he added, “Only when you are old looking back and saying that you have tried your best will you be content with your life.”
Ⅰ.完形填空
A storm was coming,but Alex was too busy fixing her leg bandage to notice it.She said to herself, “Great.I __1__ myself the week before Cross Country Running tryouts (选拔赛).I am so __2__.Why did I think running through the forest would be a good idea in the first place?”
After __3__,Alex went to the kitchen and poured herself some lemonade.She opened the door to her __4__ and sat down outside.“Every year,I work so hard and yet,I always __5__,” Alex said.“Last year,I was one spot away from Varsity (校队).The previous __6__,I handed in my medical forms late...”
Suddenly there was a flash of __7__.Sounds like it’s going to be a thunderstorm,Alex thought and __8__ to head inside.She tried to __9__ the door,only to find that she had locked herself out.__10__,Alex shook the door handle __11__ back and forth.As she took a quick step backwards,she lost her __12__ and fell down.“Why me?” she yelled.“Why did this all happen to me?” Once Alex __13__ to pull herself up,she sat silently on the staircase.As rapidly as the rain poured from the sky,so did the __14__ stream down Alex’s face.Alone and wet,Alex wept until all the __15__ and wetness of the day washed away.Finally,when she __16__ crying,she looked up at a suddenly __17__ image of her backyard.The air felt light and the sun shone through the clouds.__18__ her leg still felt stiff,Alex tore off the __19__ and stood up.“I will take part in the Cross Country this year and I will make Varsity,” Alex __20__ with a breath of inspiration, “Nothing will stop me.”
【语篇解读】 本文是记叙文。亚历克斯在越野赛跑选拔赛前一周受伤,心里非常苦闷。碰巧她又在一场暴风雨中把自己锁在了门外,不禁痛哭起来。暴风雨过后,看着明亮的后院,亚历克斯的心情也好了起来并决定重振旗鼓。
1.A.blame B.injure
C.enjoy D.help
答案 B [根据本段开头的“bandage (绷带)”可推测,亚历克斯“受伤(injure)”了。]
2.A.stupid B.weak
C.small D.lazy
答案 A [根据下一句内容可知,亚历克斯很后悔在森林里跑步,认为自己太“傻(stupid)”了。]
3.A.resting B.running
C.apologizing D.complaining
答案 D [根据上段内容不难看出,亚历克斯在“抱怨(complaining)”。]
4.A.bedroom B.garden
C.basement D.backyard
答案 D [第三段中的“she looked up at a suddenly __17__ image of her backyard”提示了本题答案。]
5.A.regret B.miss
C.fail D.escape
答案 C [根据本空前的“yet”和本空后的“I was one spot away from Varsity (校队)...I handed in my medical forms late...”可知,虽然亚历克斯努力训练,但却总是“失败(fail)”。]
6.A.year B.month
C.week D.day
答案 A [根据本段中的“Every year” “Last year”可知,这里指前一“年(year)”。]
7.A.inspiration B.lightning
C.white D.loneliness
答案 B [根据下句中的“thunderstorm (雷暴)”可知,突然有一道“闪电(lightning)”。]
8.A.looked up B.cleared up
C.got up D.stayed up
答案 C [根据上段中的“sat down outside”可知,这里指亚历克斯“起来(got up)”向里走。]
9.A.close B.repair
C.open D.change
答案 C [根据第9空后的“only to find that she had locked herself out”可知,亚历克斯试着“开(open)”门,却发现自己被锁门外了,因此感到很“沮丧 (Frustrated)”。]
10.A.Afraid B.Frustrated
C.Confused D.Ashamed
答案 B [参见上题解析。]
11.A.violently B.naturally
C.eventually D.directly
答案 A [为了开门,亚历克斯“用力地(violently)”前后晃门把手。]
12.A.breath B.balance
C.head D.heart
答案 B [根据本空后的“fell down”可知,亚历克斯失去“平衡(balance)”摔倒了。]
13.A.hoped B.decided
C.managed D.agreed
答案 C [根据本空后的“she sat silently on the staircase”可知,亚历克斯“努力(managed)”站起来,然后默默地坐在楼梯上。]
14.A.sweat B.blood
C.rainwater D.tears
答案 D [根据下文中的“wept”和“crying”可知,“泪水(tears)”顺着亚历克斯的脸颊流了下来。]
15.A.suffering B.anxiety
C.burden D.stress
答案 A [根据上文内容可知,亚历克斯受着伤,而且在暴风雨中把自己锁在了门外,因此说她这一天过得很“痛苦(suffering)”。]
16.A.continued B.practised
C.avoided D.stopped
答案 D [根据本空后的“she looked up”可知,亚历克斯“停止(stopped)”哭泣后抬起头。]
17.A.complete B.vivid
C.bright D.colorful
答案 C [根据下句中的“the sun shone through the clouds”可知,暴风雨过后,太阳出来了,整个后院一片“光明(bright)”。]
18.A.Because B.If
C.Although D.When
答案 C [根据本句中的“stiff”和“stood up”的对比可知,“尽管(Although)”亚历克斯的腿还很僵硬,但是她撕掉“绷带”站了起来。本文开头的“fixing her leg bandage”提示了第19题答案。]
19.A.paper B.bandage
C.shoes D.socks
答案 B [参见上题解析。]
20.A.declared B.suggested
C.recalled D.explained
答案 A [根据本空后的“a breath of inspiration”可知,亚历克斯重振旗鼓,“宣布(declared)”自己要参加今年的越野赛跑。]
Ⅱ.语法填空
(2019·杭州二中一模)One day in 2017,I went to visit my 90-year-old grandma in a nursing home.She had lived there for 15 years.But it was becoming a little bit sad,partly because the place was full of people who 1.________ (be) at the last stage of their life.What’s 2.________ (bad),it was taking her longer and longer 3.________ (recognize) me.
She was really excited that day because they were having a dance party.I was not a big fan of dancing,4.________ I was a big fan of Grandma,so I accepted her 5.________ (invite).During the party,an old lady 6.________ (sit) next to me chatted with me,saying how much she loved music and dancing.Not knowing 7.________ to say,I stood up and invited her for a dance.
I danced with all the ladies,8.________ (particular) with Grandma,which was awesome.However,I felt discomfort throughout 9.________ party.I didn’t know the reason at that moment.But now,I realize it was my fear of watching Grandma grow older,my powerlessness to do anything about it and the thought of losing 10.________ (she) that made me uncomfortable.
【语篇解读】 作者去敬老院看望祖母,她那天很高兴,因为她们在举行舞会,作者怕有一天会失去祖母而感到难过。
1.were [考查动词时态及主谓一致。此处为who引导的定语从句,修饰先行词people;结合句意可知,从句的时态应与主句的时态保持一致。所以填were。]
2.worse [考查固定结构。What’s worse意思是“更糟糕的是”,相当于副词短语Even worse/Worse still。所以填worse。]
3.to recognize [考查非谓语动词。句型It takes (took) sb some time (money) to do sth 意为“做某事需要花费某人的时间或金钱”。所以填to recognize。]
4.but/yet [考查并列连词。结合空前的“not a big fan of dancing”和空后的“a big fan of Grandma”可知,空处前后有转折含义,所以填but/yet。]
5.invitation [考查名词。根据空前的“accepted her”可知,空处应该是名词作宾语,意思是“接受她的邀请”,所以填invitation。]
6.sitting [考查非谓语动词。空处是非谓语动词作后置定语,主语an old lady与动词sit是逻辑上的主谓关系。所以填sitting。]
7.what [考查从属连词。根据“疑问代词+不定式”结构及空前的knowing可知,空处应该填疑问代词,意思为“不知道说什么”,所以填what。]
8.particularly [考查副词。空后是介词短语with Grandma,介词短语只能用副词修饰。所以填particularly。]
9.the [考查冠词。根据句意可知,此处的party特指上文中的“a dance party”所以填the。]
10.her [考查人称代词。根据空前的losing同时结合句意可知,空处应该填人称代词she的宾格her。]
Ⅲ.应用文写作
(2019·台州模拟)中国家庭多数是独生子女,少数有两个孩子。假定你是李华,你的朋友Amy来信想了解你的家庭情况,请给她写封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的家庭情况;
2.你与家人间的关系。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Amy,
I am glad to receive your letter.Now I am writing to tell you something about my family.
With the country’s one-child policy introduced,most Chinese families have only one child.I am lucky because I have a twin sister named Li Ting.Accompanied by my sister,I never feel lonely.Although sometimes we quarrel with each other,we love each other.Our parents work hard in order to take good care of us.Therefore,my sister and I do what we can to help them ease the burden.I am content to live in such a happy family.
Will you tell me something about your family?
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅳ.读后续写
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was one of the hottest days in the dry season.We had not seen rain for almost a month.The crops were dying.Cows had stopped giving milk.The streams were long gone back into the earth.If we didn’t see some rain soon, we would lose everything.It was on this day that I learned the true lesson of sharing and witnessed the only miracles I have ever seen in my life.
I was making lunch for the family in the kitchen when I saw my six-year-old son, Billy,__walking toward the woods.He was obviously walking with a great effort, trying to be as still as possible.Minutes after he disappeared into the woods,he came running out again, toward the house.I went back to making sandwiches thinking that whatever task he had been doing was completed.
Moments later, however, he was once again walking in that unusual way toward the woods.This activity went on for an hour.Finally, my curiosity got the best of me.I crept out of the house and followed him on his journey.
He was cupping both hands in front of him as he walked, being very careful not to spill the water he carried.I followed him secretly as he went into the woods.Branches slapped (拍打) his little face but he did not try to avoid them.He might have a much higher purpose,__I thought.As I came closer, I saw the most amazing sight.Several large deer stood in front of him.Billy walked right up to them, at the sight of which I almost screamed at him to get away.A huge buck (雄鹿) was dangerously close.But the buck didn’t threaten him nor even move as Billy knelt__down.And then I saw a tiny baby__deer,__lying on the ground, obviously suffering from thirst and heat, lift its head with great effort to drink the water in my boy’s hands.
注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
When the water was gone, Billy jumped up to run back to the house.
Paragraph 2:
Instead of lecturing him like his father, I decided to help him.
【文章大意】
干旱炎热时期,小男孩Billy为了救森林里的小鹿,小心地用双手接水,然后送到森林里去给小鹿喝。
【写作指导】
Paragraph 1的开头语指出“当(他手中的)水没有的时候,Billy就跳起来跑回家”,再根据第二段的开头语可知,第一段会讲述Billy回家再次打水的行为,侧重细节和动作描写。写作中可能会用到的关键词有:Billy,water,hands等。
Paragraph 2的开头语指出“而不是像他爸爸一样来说教他,我决定帮助他”,因此可推知接下来妈妈将要陪Billy一起去给小鹿喂水,来突出妈妈对孩子的支持和理解。写作中可用到的关键词有woods,baby deer等。
【参考范文】
Paragraph 1:
When the water was gone, Billy jumped up to run back to the house.Hiding behind a tree, I followed him back to the house.Billy carefully opened the tap water and a small trickle began to creep out.He knelt__down,__letting the drops drip slowly onto his hands.He was so attentive and patient that he almost ignored the sun beating down on his back.
Paragraph 2:
Instead of lecturing him like his father, I decided to help him.It took almost twenty minutes for the drops to fill his hands.When he stood up and went back to the woods,__I was there in front of him.I didn’t say anything but hugged him tightly.As he began his walk, I joined him, with a small pot of water from the kitchen.Tears rolled down my face as I stood on the edge of the woods watching a beautiful heart working so hard to save the baby__deer.