热点05 “德、智、体、美、劳”五育之写作押题 （原卷版+解析版）

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强化“德、智、体、美、劳”教育引导，夯实全面发展基础。英语科试卷围绕人与自然、人与社会、人与自我三大主题选材，将对体美劳教育的引导与考查内容、考查要求、考查情境有机融合。如2021年新高考I卷考查到此话题。预测2024年“德、智、体、美、劳”五育并举仍会成为高考应用文写作的主题。
热点话题基本词汇：
favrite (最喜欢的);
taste (爱好，志趣);
read nvels (读小说);
surf the Internet (上网);
chat nline (在线聊天);
cllect stamps (集邮);
make friends (交友);
climb muntains (爬山);
enjy pp music (喜欢流行音乐)
亮点词汇：
develp an interest in (在……方面培养兴趣);
be fnd f (喜欢);
be keen n (对……着迷);
have a taste in (喜爱);
hbby (业余爱好);
be interested in (对……感兴趣);
have a great lve fr (非常喜爱……)
make friends with sb.(和某人交朋友);
a strng persnality (个性强);
persnal matters (私事);
friendly (友好的);
a clse friend (一个亲密的朋友);
trust each ther (互相信任);
sb.(与某人分享);
keep in tuch with sb. (与某人保持联系);
stay best friends with sb. (和某人保持很好的友谊);
a friend in need (患难之交)
亮点词汇：
knw sb. very well(熟知某人);
precius(珍贵的);
wrthy(有价值的);
understanding(善解人意的);
be lyal t(对……忠诚);
keep sb. pany.(陪伴，做伴)
physical and mental cnditin(身体与精神状况);
strng(强壮的);
unhealthy/healthy(不健康的/健康的);
fat(太胖的);
thin(瘦的); nearsighted/shrt|sighted(近视的);
nrmal(正常的);
abnrmal(不正常的);
energetic(精力旺盛的);
eating habit(饮食习惯);
eat t much junk fd (吃太多的垃圾食品);
stay/keep healthy/fit(保持健康);
enugh sleep(充足的睡眠);
gd living habit(良好的生活习惯);
lse weight(减肥) ;
nutritin(营养)
亮点词汇
build up ne's bdy/imprve ne's health(强身健体);
ease the burden(减轻负担);
be/g n a diet(节食);
verweight(太胖的);
take regular exercise(进行有规律的运动);
prper diet(合理的饮食);
be gd fr/d gd t(对……有益处)
harmnius(和谐的);
hnest(诚实的);
credible (可信的);
balanced(平衡的);
scial rder(社会秩序);
peaceful(和平的);
sustainable develpment(可持续发展);
help each ther(互助);
care fr each ther(互相关心);
have a liking fr (喜爱);
build(创建);
cherish(珍惜);
public mrals(社会道德)
亮点词汇
devte t(献身);
be public|spirited(有公德心的);
be cncerned with (关心);
live in harmny(和谐共处)
典例分析
典例一
（2021·新高考I卷）你校英文报Yuth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 读报的经历；2. 喜爱的栏目；3. 期望和祝福。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。
Yuth and Me
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【答案】Yuth and Me
It has been 10 years since Yuth was funded. In my memry, it is Yuth that accmpanies me thrugh my whle high schl. When feeling depressed, I ften chse t enjy the nvel part which includes a lt f imaginative stries. These stries can relieve my stress and braden my hrizn. Besides, I even submitted my wn fictin t Yuth. Refused as I was, I still received sme great encuragement, which gives me cnfidence t be a writer.
I d expect Yuth can publish mre classic wrks and have a prmising future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校英文报Yuth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：fund→establish
沮丧的：depressed→upset
此外：besides→what’s mre
得到：receive→btain
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：These stries can relieve my stress and braden my hrizn.
拓展句：Nt nly can these stries relieve my stress, but als they can braden my hrizn.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When feeling depressed, I ften chse t enjy the nvel part which includes a lt f imaginative stries. (运用了状语从句的省略和which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Refused as I was, I still received sme great encuragement, which gives me cnfidence t be a writer. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
典例二
（2021年6月浙江卷）
昨天你去学校参观了中国画的展览，请你为学校英语报写一篇宣传稿：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 你的感受；
3. 强烈推荐。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

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【参考范文】
As is knwn t all, Chinese painting is a crucial part f ur traditinal cultural; therefre, with great hnr and curisity, I paid a visit t the Chinese painting display exhibited in ur schl lecture hall at 9 a.m. yesterday. During my ne hur and a half’s visit, I was fully expsed t a wrld f art. The visit includes three parts, first f which is a brief intrductin f the histry f Chinese painting, traced back t 7000 years ag. In this part, many wrks painted n pttery, grund and rck wall in pictures are shwn. The secnd part is tl display. The basic tls used are brush and ink and mineral pigments. At first, Chinese painting was painted n pttery, grund and rck wall, and gradually develped int painting n wall, silk and paper. In the third part f this exhibitin, many paintings by famus arts are appreciated and discussed by students and teachers., Thrugh this visit, I fall in lve with Chinese painting and I wuld like t recmmend my fellw students t have an amazing experience t this art shw as well. And yu wn’t regret it.
（建议用时：25分钟/篇）
1．（2023·福建·统考一模）假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了以“The Pwer f Vluntary Wrk”为主题的演讲比赛，请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.参加人员；
2.比赛过程；
3.活动反响。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】One pssible versin：
Last week, an English speech cntest n “The Pwer f Vluntary Wrk” was held in ur schl. Students frm different grades participated in the cmpetitin. By sharing sme f their mst unfrgettable vlunteering experiences, 20 cntestants deeply impressed the audience with their vivid stries, feelings and insights. The judges, cnsisting f ur headmaster and teachers, als cmmented n each student’s perfrmance and finally selected the best three.
The activity, as ne f the students says, will be very helpful fr the better understanding f vlunteering wrk amng middle schl students, and mre activities f this kind are expected.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道，就学校上周日举办的以“The Pwer f Vluntary Wrk”为主题的演讲比赛进行报道，内容包括：参赛人员、比赛过程和活动反响。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
比赛：cntest→cmpetitin
参赛者：cntestant→cmpetitr
参加：participate in→take part in
选择：select→chse
种类：kind→srt
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：The judges, cnsisting f ur headmaster and teachers, als cmmented n each student’s perfrmance and finally selected the best three.
拓展句：The judges, wh cnsisted f ur headmaster and teachers, als cmmented n each student’s perfrmance and finally selected the best three.
【点睛】【高分句型1】By sharing sme f their mst unfrgettable vlunteering experiences, 20 cntestants deeply impressed the audience with their vivid stries, feelings and insights.（运用了介词后接动名词短语的形式作方式状语）
【高分句型2】The activity, as ne f the students says, will be very helpful fr the better understanding f vlunteering wrk amng middle schl students, and mre activities f this kind are expected.（运用了以as引导的状语从句作插入语的结构和以and引导的并列句）
2．（2023·山东枣庄·统考一模）假定你是李华，你校英文报正在开展“The Sprts I Like”征文比赛。请用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1.喜爱的体育运动；
2.喜爱的原因；
3.运动的收获。
注意：词数80左右；
The Sprts I Like
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【答案】The Sprt I Like
When it cmes t sprts, I like basketball best. It is a ball game between tw teams, each cnsisting f five players. It requires speed, strength, talent as well as skills.
Basketball has been an imprtant part in my life ever since I was intrduced t it at the age f 9. Fr ne thing, it helps build up my bdy, enabling me t be energetic and dynamic all the time. Fr anther, it has taught me t value teamwrk ver individual perfrmance.
Basketball fills my days with wnders and challenges. I will keep playing basketball in the rest f my life.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇说明文，要求考生介绍一项自己喜欢的运动并陈述理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
由……组成：cnsist f→be made up f
重要的：imprtant→significant
珍惜：value→cherish
个人的：individual→persnal
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Fr ne thing, it helps build up my bdy, enabling me t be energetic all the time.
拓展句：Fr ne thing, it helps build up my bdy, which enables me t be energetic all the time.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Basketball has been an imprtant part in my life ever since I was intrduced t it at the age f 9.（ever since引导时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]Fr ne thing, it helps build up my bdy, enabling me t be energetic all the time.（现在分词作状语）
3．（2023·湖北·校联考模拟预测）假定你是李华，上周你班举行了一场主题为“人工智能(AI)与英语学习”的讨论，请为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.讨论目的;
2.讨论内容;
3.你的收获。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
AI and English Learning
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【答案】One pssible versin:
AI and English Learning
In rder t explre the impact f AI n English learning and exchange ideas abut its advantages and disadvantages, ur class hsted a discussin n “AI and English Learning” last week.
Many students nted the ptential benefits f AI, such as prviding persnalized learning and instant feedback. Hwever, sme als expressed cncerns abut the negative effects n traditinal teaching methds and interpersnal cmmunicatin.
Frm my perspective, this was a thught—prvking discussin which inspired me t pnder the rle f AI in English learning and hw we can strike a balance between technlgy and human cmmunicatin.
Overall, this discussin highlighted the need fr cntinued examinatin f AI’s rle in English learning as we strive t create effective and engaging learning envirnments.
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生就班上举行的一场主题为“人工智能(AI)与英语学习”的讨论，写一篇英文报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
为了：in rder t→in a gesture t/with the aim f
在我看来：frm my perspective→as far as I am cncerned/as I see it
强调：highlight→lay emphasis n/stress
影响：impact→influence/effect
2.句式拓展：
简单句变复合句
原句：In rder t explre the impact f Al n English learning and exchange ideas abut its advantages and disadvantages, ur class hsted a discussin n “AI and English Learning” last week.
拓展句：A discussin n “AI and English Learning” was held by ur class, with the aim f explring hw AI has an impact n English learning and exchanging ideas abut its advantages and disadvantages.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Frm my perspective, this was a thught—prvking discussin which inspired me t pnder the rle f AI in English learning and hw we can strike a balance between technlgy and human cmmunicatin.(运用了which引导定语从句和hw引导宾语从句。)
【高分句型2】
Overall, this discussin highlighted the need fr cntinued examinatin f AI’s rle in English learning as we strive t create effective and engaging learning envirnments.(运用了as引导状语从句。)
4．（2023·湖南常德·统考模拟预测）假如你是李华，上周末你校组织了一次“感恩父母行”的活动，请你为学校英文报写一篇短文，内容包括：
1.活动目的;
2.你的行动;
3.你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Gratitude t my parents
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【答案】参考范文
Gratitude t my parents
In rder t aruse ur awareness f being grateful t ur parents, ur schl held an activity last weekend.
T shw my thanks, I decided t d smething fr my parents. Getting up earlier than usual last Saturday, I spent much time preparing their breakfast and then I began t help d cleaning in ur huse, which made me tired and exhausted. When I saw my parents’ satisfied smiles, I felt that my labr was wrthwhile.
Thrugh this activity, I’ve learnt that it is nt easy fr my parents t wrk and take care f us at the same time. It is their selfless and uncnditinal lve that l shuld appreciate.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校英文报写一篇短文，介绍上周末学校组织了一次“感恩父母行”的活动，内容包括活动的目的、行动和对活动的感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激的：grateful →thankful
开始：begin →set ut
筋疲力尽的：exhausted →wrn ut
值得的：wrthwhile →rewarding
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In rder t aruse ur awareness f being grateful t ur parents, ur schl held an activity last weekend.
拓展句：Our schl held an activity last weekend, which is aimed at arusing ur awareness f being grateful t ur parents.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Getting up earlier than usual last Saturday, I spent much time preparing their breakfast and then I began t help d cleaning in ur huse, which made me tired and exhausted.（运用了现在分词作状语以及which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】It is their selfless and uncnditinal lve that l shuld appreciate.（运用了强调句型强调句子宾语）
5．（2023·广东·校联考模拟预测）你校英文报正在组织作文比赛，请你以“Failure Is Nt Necessarily Bad”为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你的理解；
2. 举例说明。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Failure Is Nt Necessarily Bad
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【答案】参考范文：
Failure Is Nt Necessarily Bad
Peple ften feel srrwful fr failure, thus trying t avid it at any cst. Hwever, in daily life, failure is unavidable. It is ur attitude twards it that cunts. Thus, we shuld treat failure as a stepping stne instead f as a blck.
Take myself as an example, I used t d prly in math, hwever hard I tried. Repeated failure in the subject was a blw t my cnfidence. I never thught f giving up, thugh. I began t reflect n my failure. By and by, I made prgress and achieved my final success. I learnt an imprtant lessn abut never giving up and determinatin frm the experience.
In brief, failure is nt necessarily bad.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校英文报正在组织作文比赛，请你以“Failure Is Nt Necessarily Bad”为题写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
因此：thus→therefre
重要：cunt→matter
障碍：blck→bstacle
开始：begin→start
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I began t reflect n my failure. By and by, I made prgress and achieved my final success.
拓展句：After I began t reflect n my failure, I made prgress and achieved my final success.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Take myself as an example, I used t d prly in math, hwever hard I tried. (运用了hwever引导让步状语从句)
[高分句型2] I learnt an imprtant lessn abut never giving up and determinatin frm the experience. (运用了动名词作宾语)
6．（2023·广东梅州·统考二模）你校将以“关爱健康”为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.保持健康的重要性；2.保持健康的方法(至少两条)。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Keep healthy
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【答案】One pssible versin:
Keep healthy
It is very imprtant fr us t keep healthy, because a healthy bdy will ensure a happy life and smth wrk.
There are many ways t keep healthy. We’d better eat mre fruits and vegetables and less meat. Take exercise fr at least ne hur every day. We need enugh sleep and rest, s it is imprtant t g t bed early and get up early. We shuld wash ur hands as ften as pssible t keep away frm bacteria r viruses.
In additin, we mustn’t drink wine r smke. They are bad fr ur health.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于你校将以“关爱健康”为主题，举办英语征文比赛，写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：imprtant→ vital
确保：ensure → make sure
足够的：enugh→ sufficient
此外：In additin→ What’s mre
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In additin, we mustn’t drink wine r smke. They are bad fr ur health.
拓展句：In additin, we mustn’t drink wine r smke because they are bad fr ur health.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is very imprtant fr us t keep healthy, because a healthy bdy will ensure a happy life and smth wrk.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】We need enugh sleep and rest, s it is imprtant t g t bed early and get up early.（运用了it is+形容词+t d sth的固定句型）
7．（2023·广东广州·统考一模）你校英文报 “Teenage Life”专栏本期的主题为“Sprts and Health”。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 运动的重要性;
2. 你的运动建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Sprts and Health
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【答案】[Versin 1]
Sprts and Health
As we knw, the clumn Teenage Life f ur schl newspaper is intended t draw students’ attentin int “Sprts and Health”, fr which I am abslutely willing t share my perspectives.
It is a cmmn sense that regular exercises benefit us in varius ways. Nt nly can it serve as a chance fr students t strengthen a gd figure in face f increasing learning burden but als it is central t prmting persnal mental well-being. In the curse f ding sprts, it’s highly recmmended that students shuld wrk ut a reasnable timetable in cmpliance with their physical quality and curriculum arrangement.
I sincerely wish everyne wuld take an active part int sprts and gain mre insight int the benefits it cnveys because f ur endeavrs.
[Versin 2]
Sprts and health
Learning that the clumn Teenage Life f ur schl English newspaper is cmmitted t casting a light n the tpic “Sprts and health”, I am mre than thrilled t express my view.
The reasns why we shuld wrk ut regularly are that nt nly des it build up ur bdies, but it bsts ur learning efficiency as well. Based n such a meaningful theme, a wide variety f activities are highly recmmended. Additinally, several health prfessinals can be invited t give sme lectures abut hw t d daily exercise prperly after all the cmpetitins.
Only by raising the awareness f taking exercise and participating actively can we truly enjy the benefits it brings. I believe every participant will achieve smething amazing.
【导语】本文是应用文写作。要求考生用英语以“Sprts and Health”为主题写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
非常兴奋：thrilled→excited
锻炼：wrk ut→exercise
此外：additinally→furthermre
参加：participant→take part in
2. 句式拓展
原句：Based n such a meaningful theme, a wide variety f activities are highly recmmended.
拓展句：As is based n such a meaningful theme, a wide variety f activities are highly recmmended.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Learning that the clumn Teenage Life f ur schl English newspaper is cmmitted t casting a light n the tpic “Sprts and health”, I am mre than thrilled t express my view.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]The reasns why we shuld wrk ut regularly are that nt nly des it build up ur bdies, but it bsts ur learning efficiency as well.(why引导的定语从句)
8．（2023·辽宁大连·一模）假设你是李华，最近你校举办了“家务活，我在行”活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动内容；
3.活动反响。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Husewrk, I can d it
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【答案】Husewrk, I can d it
An activity named “Husewrk, I can d it” was launched by ur schl last week. The purpse f this event was t prmte awareness f the imprtance f ding husewrk.
Student participants f the event were encuraged t cmplete different tasks t raise the awareness f the value f cmpleting these chres. The event included several activities, such as a discussin sessin and a bedmaking cmpetitin. Thrugh these activities, participants learned mre abut the significance f cmpleting family chres, as well as techniques t make husewrk cleaner.
The event was enthusiastically received by the students. Many expressed their appreciatin fr the event, stating that they had gained a better understanding f the imprtance f ding husewrk.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道。要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道，报道学校举办的“家务活，我在行”活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
活动：activity→event
目的：purpse→aim/gal
完成：cmplete→accmplish/finish
任务：task→missin/assignment
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：An activity named “Husewrk, I can d it” was launched by ur schl last week. The purpse f this event was t prmte awareness f the imprtance f ding husewrk.
拓展句：An activity named “Husewrk, I can d it” was launched by ur schl last week, whse aim was t prmte awareness f the imprtance f ding husewrk.
【点睛】【高分句型1】An activity named “Husewrk, I can d it” was launched by ur schl last week. (运用了过去分词短语作后置定语)
【高分句型2】Many expressed their appreciatin fr the event, stating that they had gained a better understanding f the imprtance f ding husewrk. (运用了现在分词短语作伴随状语和that引导宾语从句)
9．（2023·辽宁·辽宁实验中学校考一模）你校将举办一场以“在劳动中成长(Grw Up in Labr)”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿参赛。内容包括：
1.个人劳动经历；
2. 你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Hell, everyne!
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That’s all. Thank yu !
【答案】 Hell, everyne! I’m mre than privileged t deliver my speech here. The tpic is abut Grw Up in Labr.
I still remember the day when I first was asked t wash stcks by myself. I just put them in the basin full f water. Then I tried t twist them, but n matter hw hard I did, they were still dirty. At that mment, I remembered I shuld mix sme washing liquid int the stcks. At last, I cleaned them, which made me very happy.
Frm this experience, I learned that befre we begin t d anything, we shuld plan it carefully.
That’s all. Thank yu !
【导语】本文是开放性作文。要求考生写一篇以“在劳动中成长(Grw Up in Labr)”为主题的演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常：mre than→very
做（演讲）：deliver→give
话题：tpic→subject
要求：ask→require
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I just put them in the basin full f water.
拓展句：I just put them in the basin which is full f water.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I still remember the day when I first was asked t wash stcks by myself.（运用了由when引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】At last, I cleaned them, which made me very happy.（运用了由which引导的非限制性定语从句）
10．（2023·辽宁·校联考一模）假设你是李华，你校英文网站举办智能机器人设计征文大赛，你设计了一款智能英语学习助手。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 设计目的；
2. 功能介绍；
3. 你的期望。
注意：
1. 写作词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 开头已给出。
My Intelligent Rbt fr Learning English
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【答案】My Intelligent Rbt fr Learning English
Aiming t imprve students’ learning efficiency and help them tackle their prblems timely, I designed an intelligent rbt t assist students in learning English.
With this English learning assistant, students can have smene make a cnversatin in English s that they can practise their ral English. Additinally, this intelligent rbt can nt nly help students check their cmpsitins by finding sme grammar mistakes and spelling mistakes, but als ffer sme inspiratin fr students t have new ideas fr their writing assignments. What’s mst impressive is that it is capable f prviding sme exercises accrding t the mistakes cllected in their frmer exercises.
I d hpe students can benefit frm my inventin.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给学校英文网站举办的智能机器人设计征文大赛投稿介绍自己设计的一款可以帮助学习英语的智能机器人。
【详解】1.词汇积累
解决：tackle→slve
及时地：timely→in time
另外：additinally→mrever
提供：ffer→prvide
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Aiming t imprve students’ learning efficiency and help them tackle their prblems timely, I designed an intelligent rbt t assist students in learning English.
拓展句：I designed an intelligent rbt t assist students in learning English, the purpse f which was t imprve students’ learning efficiency and help them tackle their prblems timely.
【点睛】[高分句型1] With this English learning assistant, students can have smene make a cnversatin in English s that they can practise their ral English. (运用了s that引导的目的状语从句)
[高分句型2] What’s mst impressive is that it is capable f prviding sme exercises accrding t the mistakes cllected in their frmer exercises. (运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
11．（2023·辽宁沈阳·统考一模）你校将以“节约粮食，减少浪费”为主题举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1.浪费粮食的现象；
2.节约粮食的做法；
3.节约粮食的倡议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Say NO t Fd Waste
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【答案】Say NO t Fd Waste
As we knw, fd is very imprtant fr human survival. Hwever, wasting fd is a cmmn phenmenn that peple rder mre fd than they can eat, and even thrw away their leftvers in restaurants, which is s disappinting that I'd like t give sme advice n reducing fd waste.
First, we shuld have the awareness f saving fd. Next, it’s time fr us t take actin t save fd. We ught t treasure grain wherever we are. What is mst imprtant is that we shuld have the curage t fight against wasting fd.
I call n everyne t say n t fd waste. Saving fd is a virtue. Please remember t rder apprpriately starting with urselves as early as pssible.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生以“节约粮食，减少浪费”为主题写一篇短文参加英语征文比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
常见的：cmmn→general
建议：advice→suggestin
减少：reduce → decrease
意识：awareness→understanding
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Please remember t rder apprpriately starting with urselves as early as pssible.
拓展句：Please remember t rder apprpriately while we can start with urselves as early as pssible.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Next, it’s time fr us t take actin t save fd.（运用了it充当形式主语，不定式t take actin充当真正主语）
【高分句型2】What is mst imprtant is that we shuld have the curage t fight against wasting fd.（运用了主语从句和表语从句）
12．（2023·安徽·校联考模拟预测）学会面对失败和挫折是中学生成长路上必不可少的一课。你校英文校刊正在以“Learn Frm Failure”为话题组织征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：1.你的一次失败经历;
2.你从失败中所学到的东西。
注意：1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Learn Frm Failure
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【答案】Failure is inevitable in everyne’s life. The prblem that many f us face, hwever, is that we autmatically equate experiencing failure with being a failure. We feel frustrated r despaired in face f failure, but it may be an educatinal lessn in certain ways.
I used t be an interest - driven learner, nly willing t explre in the fields that I was passinate abut as deep as I culd. While learning in this way did make me feel cmfrtable, it led t a harmful imbalance between my grades f different subjects, sme f which I failed afterwards. Nevertheless, I was nt discuraged and made up my mind t change my learning habits. Befre lng, I became skilled at subjects that I cmpletely ignred in the past.
Despite that dreadful failure, I std up where I fell. Therefre, failure gives us an pprtunity t learn, adapt and grw. Just as the famus qutatin frm Churchill ges: Failure is nt fatal, what matters mst is the curage t carry n. S learn yur lessns f life.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于你校英文校刊正在以“Learn Frm Failure”为话题组织征文活动，写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不可避免的：inevitable→ unavidable
对……感兴趣：be passinate abut→ be interested in
导致：led t→ resulted in
然而：Nevertheless→ Hwever
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句：We feel frustrated r despaired in face f failure, but it may be an educatinal lessn in certain ways.
拓展句：Thugh we feel frustrated r despaired in face f failure, it may be an educatinal lessn in certain ways.
【点睛】[高分句型1]The prblem that many f us face, hwever, is that we autmatically equate experiencing failure with being a failure.（运用了关系代词that引导的定语从句以及从属连词that引导的表语从句。）
[高分句型2]While learning in this way did make me feel cmfrtable, it led t a harmful imbalance between my grades f different subjects, sme f which I failed afterwards.（运用了While引导的让步状语从句以及介词f+ which引导的定语从句。）
13．（2023·安徽·校联考模拟预测）假定你是李华，三月为“学雷锋，做好事”活动月，你校组织了许多志愿者活动。请你写一篇短文，向英语校刊投稿。内容包括：
1. 介绍你校志愿者活动；
2. 呼吁更多人学雷锋。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Learn frm Lei Feng and d gd deeds
March 5th is Learning frm Lei Feng Day.
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【答案】 Learn frm Lei Feng and d gd deeds
March 5th is Learning frm Lei Feng Day. In rder t prmte the spirit f Lei Feng and encurage students t d gd deeds, ur schl rganized a series f vlunteer events in March. First f all, a pem cntest was rganized, in which students recited pems cmpsed by themselves related t Lei Feng spirit. At weekends, the Students’ Unin arranged visits t the Nursing Hme nearby, where they did what they culd t make the elderly feel happy. Besides, vlunteers helped clean the street, which wn cleaning staff’s praise.
Lei Feng spirit has inspired generatins f Chinese peple and I hpe an increasing number f students can learn frm Lei Feng and extend his spirit.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求作者写一篇短文，向英语校刊投稿，介绍我校为迎接三月份的“学雷锋，做好事”活动月，所组织的志愿者活动，并呼吁更多的人学习雷锋。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
鼓励、激励：encurage→inspire
比赛：cntest→cmpetitin
与……有关系：be related t→be linked t
此外：besides→in addtin
帮助：help→assist
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：In rder t prmte the spirit f Lei Feng and encurage students t d gd deeds, ur schl rganized a series f vlunteer events in March.
拓展句：Our schl rganized a series f vlunteer events in March in rder that they culd prmte the spirit f Lei Feng and encurage students t d gd deeds,
【点睛】【高分句型1】First f all, a pem cntest was rganized, in which students recited pems cmpsed by themselves related t Lei Feng spirit.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和以关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】 At weekends, the Students’ Unin arranged visits t the Nursing Hme nearby, where they did what they culd t make the elderly feel happy.（运用了以关系副词where引导的非限制性定语从句和以连接代词what引导的宾语从句。）
14．（2023·安徽淮南·统考二模）你校交换生Felix刚看完“美丽中国”摄影展，应邀给校英文网站写一篇观后感，内容包括：
1. 画展特色；
2. 观看感受；
3. 意见建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Charming China” Phtgraphic Exhibitin is perfectly fantastic.
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【答案】
“Charming China” Phtgraphic Exhibitin is perfectly fantastic. It displays a wide variety f phts that reflect Chinese abundant and unique cultures, attractive scenery and a lng histry as well as great achievements in every aspect and s n. I am especially interested in tea culture, Peking pera, Chinese calligraphy and traditinal handicraft. Thrugh the exhibitin, I am expsed t Chinese culture and have a deeper understanding f China and the Chinese peple. It serves as a bridge between China and ther cuntries t enhance each ther’s understanding. I hpe that there will be mre pprtunities in the future fr exchange students like me t learn mre abut China.
【导语】本书面表达属于应用文。要求就“美丽中国”摄影展写篇观后感描述画展特色及自己的感悟。
【详解】1.词汇积累
大量的：a variety f→a range f
丰富的：abundant →fruitful
迷人的：attractive→fascinating
加强：enhance→ strengthen
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句：Thrugh the exhibitin, I am expsed t Chinese culture and have a deeper understanding f China and the Chinese peple.
拓展句：Thrugh the exhibitin, I am expsed t Chinese culture which makes me have a deeper understanding f China and the Chinese peple.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It displays a wide variety f phts that reflect Chinese abundant and unique cultures, attractive scenery and a lng histry as well as great achievements in every aspect and s n.（运用了that引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】I hpe that there will be mre pprtunities in the future fr exchange students like me t learn mre abut China.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
15．（2023·安徽·统考一模）你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内容包括：
1. 音乐会特点；
2. 观看感受；
3. 意见建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
This nline cncert is abslutely fantastic.
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【答案】This nline cncert is abslutely fantastic.
The perfrmers frm the tw schls have dne their best in entertaining the audience with ne sng after anther. Their perfrmances are undubtedly f high quality, which makes the cncert almst n different frm a live ne. I enjyed every secnd f the cncert and was particularly attracted when the bys and girls frm Britain started t sing the traditinal Chinese sng “Liang Zhu”. They perfrmed the sng in a way that tuched my heart and gave me a feeling f cnnectin. I hpe there will be mre pprtunities in the future fr us Chinese students and ur internatinal friends t learn abut and frm each ther.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生就学校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会，在线上留言板上写一则评论。
【详解】1.词汇积累
确定无疑地：undubtedly→withut dubt
尤其地：particularly→ especially
感动：tuch→ mve
希望：hpe→ expect
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：Their perfrmances are undubtedly f high quality, which makes the cncert almst n different frm a live ne.
拓展句：There is n dubt that their perfrmances are f high quality, which makes the cncert almst n different frm a live ne.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Their perfrmances are undubtedly f high quality, which makes the cncert almst n different frm a live ne.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I enjyed every secnd f the cncert and was particularly attracted when the bys and girls frm Britain started t sing the traditinal Chinese sng “Liang Zhu”. （运用了when引导的时间状语从句）