2022新高考衡水名师原创英语专题卷：专题10 短文改错记叙类专练

2022新高考衡水名师原创英语专题卷：

专题十《短文改错记叙类专练》

（90分钟 100分）

考点01：冠词   3颗星

考点02：代词 3颗星

考点03：介词和介词短语 2颗星

考点04: 名词 3颗星

考点05：主谓一致 5颗星

考点06：形容词和副词   5颗星

考点08：非谓语动词  5颗星

考点09：动词的时态和语态 5颗星

考点10：定语从句   3颗星

考点11  名词性从句   3颗星

考点12  并列连词    4颗星

考点13  状语从句  3颗星

考点27短文改错记叙文专练 5颗星

第I卷 短文改错（每题1分，共40分）

一、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

​Last Saturday, my brother Jeremy and I went to Pingyao that we decided to spend the weekend. At the train station, we noticed an old lady dragged a large suitcase. She seemed be in trouble when we saw her standing on the bottom of the elevator. Getting closer, we realized that the elevator wasn’t operating and that the passengers have to take the stairs. But with such a heavy luggage, the old lady weren’t able to get on the stairs. Jeremy and I went to the lady hurried and we helped her carry the suitcase. The lady thanked me again and again. We felt quite warm. Helping someone in needs takes just a little effort but the reward can be rich and lasting.

二、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词.2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

Last year. my friend and l went to visit the Yellow Mountain We carried two backpacks, that turned out to be pretty heavier for the hike. I am not an experiencing hiker and those endless steps make me want to return to the safe and comfortable ground. But my friend encouraged me great. "Look, the top is coming closer and closer. We are almost there." I pulled me together and kept going. After three-hour exhausting hike to the top, but with wonderful sceneries on the way, we got to the top finally. For our pleasure, we also found a hotel that looked very much inviting.

三、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,,

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Last term, an exchange student calling Jacob from the Great Britain came to our school. He really cares for Chinese culture. Jacob asked me to show himself around the city on weekends. I took him to many local place of interest and we also go to the theater to watch a show of Peking opera. He was so attracted by the performance as he decided to learn it. My father happened to know a master of Peking opera and introduced Jacob to him. Jacob was great honored to be one of his students. Put his heart into it, Jacob made a rapid progress. When he returned England, he gave a performance, for what he won much admiration from his classmates.

四、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。   

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I was very young, I stayed at my hometown with my grandma. She was a diligent woman. She likes to grow vegetables or takes care of all the houseworks. Though my parents often ask her to quit the work, my grandma never listen. She takes that she does as her great joy. I understand her because I see her smile and satisfied with life. Several months before, my father bought for her a new smartphone. And during the Spring Festival, I instructed her on how email and use the Internet. Aside from emailing, she thinks it feels greatly to talk to their grandchildren on WeChat.

第II卷 语法填空（每题1.5分，共60分）

一、阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。

Like many young children, Vikas Jyani dreamed of     1    (be) a pilot as a boy. Living in a small village called Sarangpur in Hisar district, he did not let go of that dream and after years of struggle,     2    (succeed) in becoming a pilot.                           

It was what he did after achieving his dream     3    would make headlines in the news.

With his growing up, the elders in the village always encouraged him     4    (go) for his dreams.     5    turn, he promised that when he did become a pilot, he would take all of them together for a ride in a plane. And that was     6     (exact) what Vikas Jyani did when the time came. He arranged for plane    7    (ticket) for all the 22 elders over 70 years old in the village. The eldest was 90 years old, and the

youngest was 72 years old, most of     8     had never been on a plane in their lives and never thought there was a     9    (possible) that they would take in the view from above the clouds.

All the elders got to travel from New Delhi to Amritsar where they got to see the Golden Temple, Jallianwala Bagh and Wagah Border. Flying in a plane     10    (describe) as the best experience of their lives by many of the elders.

二、阅读下面材料, 在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。

An elderly carpenter was ready to retire. He told his employer of his plans ​①______(leave) the house-building business to live ②______more leisure life with his wife. The contractor was sorry to see his good worker go and asked if he could build just one more house as a ③______(person) favor. The carpenter said yes, but over time ④______was easy to see that his heart was not in his work.

When the carpenter finished the house, his employer handed the front-door key to the carpenter and said, “This is your house. . . my gift to you.” The carpenter was ⑤______(shock)! If he had only known he ⑥______(build) his own house, he would have done it all differently.

So it is ⑦______us. We build our lives, a day at a time, often ⑧______(put) less than our best into the building. Then, with a shock we realize we have to live in the house we have built. If we could do it over, we would do it differently. But you cannot go back. Life is a do-it-yourself project. Your attitude and the ⑨______(choose) you make today help build the “house” you will live in tomorrow. Therefore, build ⑩______(wise)! 

三、阅读下面材料,在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。

One morning, I was waiting at the bus stop, worried about ①(be) late for school. There were many people waiting at the bus stop, ②some of them looked very anxious and ③(disappoint). When the bus finally came, we all hurried on board. I got a place next ④the window, so I had a good view of the sidewalk. A boy on a bike ⑤(catch) my attention. He was riding beside the bus and waving his arms. I heard a passenger behind me shouting to the driver, but he refused ⑥(stop) until we reached the next stop. Still, the boy kept ⑦(ride). He was carrying something over his shoulder and shouting. Finally, when we came to the next stop, the boy ran up to the door of the bus. I heard an excited conversation. Then the driver stood up and asked,“⑧anyone lose a suitcase at the last stop?” A woman on the bus shouted, “Oh dear! It's ⑨ (I). ” She pushed her way to the driver and took the suitcase thankfully. Everyone on the bus began talking about what the boy had done, and the crowd of strangers ⑩ (sudden) became friendly to one another.

四、阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。

A reporter from Jiangsu Province went to Australia and some other①_______( country ) with his father for a 3-month trip. His father spent most of his life②_______ ( work ) in the field. The son started the③_______ ( amaze ) trips with his father around the world because his father had cancer---a serious illness.

The reporter wanted④_______ ( take ) his father to travel, hoping that his father can find his younger self in his last days. They ⑤_______ ( travel ) more than 13, 000 kilometers and took over 110,000 pictures on⑥_______ ( they ) trips to different countries. Well, a miracle happened during the “rebirth” trips. ⑦_______their surprise, his father got better from illness and became more open-hearted. He even taught himself to play ⑧_______violin, and then⑨_______ ( gradual )he played it very well, ⑩_______encouraged him a lot. Now he is expecting another trip to Africa. He is the most stylish dad ever.

Time carves (雕刻) his face but youth flows in his blood. This is the real style.

答案以及解析

I、一、答案：

Last Saturday, my brother Jeremy and I went to Pingyao we decided to spend the weekend. At the train station, we noticed an old lady a large suitcase. She seemed be in trouble when we saw her standing the bottom of the elevator. Getting closer, we realized that the elevator wasn’t operating and that the passengers to take the stairs. But with such a heavy luggage, the old lady able to get on the stairs. Jeremy and I went to the lady and we helped her carry the suitcase. The lady thanked again and again. We felt quite warm. Helping someone in takes just a little effort but the reward can be rich and lasting.

解析： 1．that→ where．考查定语从句的引导词．先行词Pingyao是表达地点的名词，引导词在定语从句中作状语，应用关系副词where引导．故将that改为where．
2．dragged→ dragging．考查非谓语动词．notice注意到，其宾语an old lady与动词drag（拖、拽）之间为主动关系，应用现在分词作宾语的补足语，故将dragged改为dragging．
3．seem后加to．考查不定式．动词seem后面接动词不定式，此处需加不定式的标志词to．故在seem后加to．
4．on→ at．考查介词．根据语境可知，老太太站在电梯的最底层，at the bottom of在…底部，在…最下面．故将on改为at．
5．have→ had．考查时态．本文整体时态为一般过去时，结合前后句时态，此处也用过去式．故将have改为had．
6．去掉a．考查冠词．luggage行李，不可数名词，前面不可以加不定冠词．故去掉a．
7．weren't→ wasn't．考查主谓一致．主语the old lady为单数概念，谓语动词用第三人称单数形式，故将weren't改为wasn't．
8．hurried→ hurriedly．考查副词．此处修饰动词went，应用副词hurriedly（匆忙地）．故将hurried改为hurriedly．
9．me→ us．考查代词．根据上文可知，Jeremy and I两个人上前帮助太太，所以老太太感谢的是"我们"，作动词thanked的宾语，应用宾格us．故将me改为us．
10．needs→ need．考查短语．in need在危难中、需要帮助的、在困难时，固定短语．故将needs改为need．

二、答案：

Last year. my friend and l went to visit the Yellow Mountain We carried two backpacks, turned out to be pretty for the hike. I am not an hiker and those endless steps me want to return to the safe and comfortable ground. But my friend encouraged me . "Look, the top is coming closer and closer. We are almost there."I pulled together and kept going. After three-hour exhausting hike to the top, but with wonderful on the way, we got to the top finally. our pleasure, we also found a hotel that looked very much inviting.

解析：1.that改成which．考查定语从句．本句是非限制性定语从句，which指代前边整个句子的意思．
2.heavier改成heavy．考查形容词．此处用形容词做表语，heavy是形容词"重的"．
3.experiencing改成 experienced．考查形容词．experienced是形容词"有经验的"．我不是一个又经验的爬山者．
4.make改成made．考查时态．本文的叙述是过去时，所以用made．
5.great改成greatly．考查副词．此处是用副词修饰动词encourage．
6.me改成myself．考查代词．我拖着自己跟上了他们，所以用myself．
7.加 a．考查冠词．三个小时的攀登，所以用不定冠词a．
8.sceneries改成scenery．考查名词．scenery是不可数名词，所以改成scenery．
9.For 改成To．考查固定短语．To one's pleasure"令某人高兴的是"．
10.去掉 much．考查副词．very副词修饰形容词inviting．much多余，much修饰名词．

三、答案：

答案：

  Last term，I hosted an exchange student Jacob from the Great Britain to our school．He really cares for Chinese culture．Jacob asked me to show around the city on weekends．I took him to many local of interest and we also to the theater to watch a show of Peking Opera．He was so attracted by the performance he decided to learn it．My father happened to know a master of Peking Opera and introduced Jacob to him．Jacob was honored to be one of his students． his heart into it，Jacob made a rapid progress．When he returned England，he gave a performance，for he won much admiration from his classmates．

解析：

1. 第一句:calling改为called考查非谓语动词。名词student与 call之间是被动关系,故用called。

2. 第二句:himself改为him 考查代词。 show sb. around意为 “带某人四处转转”,故将himself改为him。

3. 第四句:place改为places考查名词。many修饰可数名词的复数形式,故将place改为places。

44. 第四句:go改为went考查时态。本文主要是以过去时态来叙述的,故将go改为过去式went。

5. 第五句:as改为that考查状语从句。so...that...“如此……以至于……”是固定句式,故将as改为that。

6. 第七句:great改为greatly考查副词。修饰was honored用副词形式greatly。

7. 第八句:Put改为Putting考查非谓语动词。句中逻辑主语是与动词put之间是主动关系,故用现在分词作状语,将 Put改为 Putting。

8. 第八句:删除a考查冠词。名词progress是不可数名词,故不需要冠词,去掉a。

9. 第九句:returned 后面加 to 考查介词。 return to somewhere 意 为“回到某地”,是固定短语。

10. 第九句:what改为which考查定语从句。本句是定语从句, 先行词为performance,引导词在句中作for的宾语,故用 which引导。

四、答案：

When I was very young, I stayed at my hometown with my grandma. She a diligent woman. She likes to grow vegetables takes care of all the . Though my parents often ask her to quit the work, my grandma never . She takes that she does as her great joy. I understand her because I see her smile and satisfied with life. Several months , my father bought for her a new smartphone. And during the Spring Festival, I instructed her on how  email and use the Internet. Aside from emailing, she thinks it feels to talk to grandchildren on WeChat.

解析：本文为记叙文。文中介绍了作者的奶奶辛勤操劳,笑对生活,她还学会了使用智能手机上网发邮件和使用微信跟孙辈们聊天。

第1处,考查时态。根据上下文语境可知,本文用一般现在时。故将was改为is。

第2处,考查并列连词。根据上下文可知,此处为并列关系,故将or改为and。

第3处,考查不可数名词。housework为不可数名词,故将houseworks改为housework。

第4处,考查主谓一致。主语为第三人称单数,谓语用一般现在时态,故将listen改为listens。

第5处,考查宾语从句。分析句子结构可知,宾语从句中she doos缺少宾语成分,而that引导名词性从句时无此功能,故将that改为what。

第6处,考查时间副词用法。表示·“从现在起若干时间以前”,常与动词一般过去式连用,用ago,故将before改为ago。

第7处,考查动词短语搭配。buy’sb,sth.为固定说法,“为某人买…”,buy后跟双宾语结构,故介词for多余,应去掉。

第8处,考查非谓语动词。此处应用“疑问词·十不定式”结构作宾语,故在how后加to。

第9处,考查形容词作表语。根据其前动词feel可知,此句为“主系表”结构,故应用形容词形式作表语,将greatly改为great。

第​10处,考查形容词性物主代词。根据上下文语义可知,此处是指“奶奶的孙子们”,故将their改为her。

II、一、答案：1.being

2.succeeded

3.that

4. to go

5.In

6.exactly

7.tickets

8.whom

9.possibility

10.was described

解析：1.考查非谓语动词。dream of doing sth意 为“梦想做某事”。故填being。

2.考查时态。分析句子可知，空处在句中是谓语动词，与did not并列，所以应用过去式。故填 succeeded。

3.考査强调句。分析句子可知，此句是强调 句“It was +强调部分+that.”。此处强调的部分是what he did after achieving his dream。故填 that。

4.考查非谓语动词. encourage sb to do sth 是固定结构，意为“鼓励某人做某事”。故填to go。

5.考查介词 in turn为固定搭配，意为“反过来，相应地”。故填In。

6.考查副讨。分析句子可知，此处应用 副词作状语。故填exactly。

7.考查名词的数。ticket是可数名词，本句表示给22位老人买飞机票，所以应用复数形式。故填tickets.

8.考査定语从句。分析句子可知，“most of     8    had never been on a plane in their lives and …”是定语从句，介词of后用宾格，指人应用whom。

9.考查词性转换。由空前的a可知，空处应用名词。故填possibility

10.考査时态和语态。describe 主语Flying in a plane之间是动宾关系,且叙述的是过去的事情，所以应用—般过去时的被动语态。故填was described。

二、答案：
1. to leave
2. a
3. personal
4. it
5. shocked
6. was building
7. with
8. putting
9. choices
10. wisely
解析：1． to leave．考查固定短语．tell sb to do sth是固定短语"告诉某人做某事"，所以填to leave．
2． a．考查固定短语．live a…life是固定短语"过着…样的生活"，所以填a．
3． personal． 考查形容词．此处用形容词做定语修饰名词favor，personal是形容词"私人的，个人的"，所以听personal．
4． it．考查代词．此处是用代词做形式主语，真正的主语是动词不定式to see …， 所以填it．
5． shocked．考查形容词．此处是用形容词做表语，shocked是形容词"感到震惊的"，所以填shocked．
6． was building．考查时态．根据句意如果他知道他是在给自己建房子，他会做得完全不同，所以应该用过去进行时．故填was building．
7． with．考查固定句型． so it is with sb是固定句型"…也一样"，所以填with．
8． putting．考查非谓语．主句的主语we与put之间是主谓关系，所以用现在分词在句中做状语，所以填putting．
9． choices．考查名词．make choices是固定短语"做选择"，所以填choice．
10． wisely．考查副词．此处用副词修饰动词build．wisely是副词"英名地，明智地"，所以填wisely．

三、答案：being; and; disappointed; to; caught; to stop; riding; Did; me/mine; suddenly

解析：1.考查非谓语动词。句意为" 一天早上，我正在等公交车，担心上学会迟到。"。介词后 面用名词或动名词做宾语，故填being。

2.考查连词。句意为"有很多人在车站等车.而且其中一些人看起来很焦急、很沮丧。"。设空处 连接两个句子，表顺承关系，故填and。

3.考查词性转换。and前后词性一致，应为形容词而且主语为人，故此空填 disappointed，意为"感到沮丧的"。

4. 考查固定搭配。句意为"我坐在一个挨着窗户的地方……"。next to为固定短语，意为"紧挨着"，故填介词to。

5.考查时态。句意为"一个骑车的男孩引起了我的注意。"。文章在讲述一件往事，要用一般过去时，故填caught。

6.考查非谓语动词。句意为"但司机坚持要到下一站才停车。"。refuse后接动词不定式做宾语，意为"拒绝做某事"。

7.考查非谓语动词。句意为"然而，男孩仍在继续骑车。"。keep后接动名词做宾语，意为"继续做某事"，故填riding。

8.考查时态。句意为"有人在上一站丢了一个手提箱吗?"。表示过去发生的事，用一般过去时;而且句子是一般疑问句， 故填Did。

9.考查代词。此句可 以理解为"是我（丢了箱子）"，故填人称代词宾格 me;也可以理解为"是我的(箱子)"，故填名词性物 主代词mine。

10.考查词性转换。 句意为"……这群陌生人突然变得彼此友好起来。"。修饰动词became要用副词形式，故填 suddenly。

四、答案：
1. countries
2. working
3. amazing
4. to take
5. travelled/ traveled
6. their
7. To
8. the
9. gradually
10. which
解析：

1.句意:一位来自江苏的记者和他的父亲去了澳大利亚和其他一些国家,进行了为期三个月的旅行。因country前面由some other修饰,故用复数形式。故填countries。

2.句意:他父亲一生的大部分时间都在田里度过。spend+时间+doing sth.花费时间做某事,故填working。

3.句意:儿子和父亲开始了这次奇妙的旅行,因为父亲得了癌症一一种严重的疾病。amazing令人惊讶的,修饰名词trips。故填amazing。

4.句意:记者想带他的父亲去旅行,希望他的父亲能在最后的日子里找到他年轻的自己。want to do sth.想要做某事,故填to take。

5.句意:他们旅行超过13,000公里,在前往不同国家的旅行中拍摄了超过11万张照片。本文通篇用一般过去时。故填travelled/traveled。

6.句意:他们旅行超过13,000公里,在前往不同国家的旅行中拍摄了超过11万张照片。形容词性物主代词修饰名词trips。故填their。

7.to one's surprise使某人吃惊的是,因在句首,故首字母大写。故填To。

8.句意:他甚至自学拉小提琴,然后逐渐地练习后,他拉得很好。play the violin拉小提琴。故填the。

9.句意:他甚至自学拉小提琴,然后逐渐地练习后,他拉得很好。逐渐地gradually。故填gradually。

10.本句是which引导的非限制性定语从句,指代上面这句话。故填which。