江苏高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份江苏高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共15页。试卷主要包含了假定你是李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。
建议信1．为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封电子邮件。内容要点如下：1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由。注意：词数80左右。参考词汇：脾气 temper____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假定你是李华。你们班新来的交换生Linda有些腼腆，不太喜欢参加班里的集体活动。请你根据以下提示给她写一封信：1.写信的目的；2.表达想法：大家都很喜欢她，希望她很快融入集体；参加集体活动可有助于她交到朋友并提高汉语水平；如果她有困难，大家都很愿意帮助她。3.祝福。注意：1.词数：80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；Dear Linda,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua3．假设你是一名高中生，名字叫李华，你的美国笔友 David 来信向你求助。他最近在和妈妈闹矛盾，因为妈妈不让他过多上网。他对此很不理解。请你给他写一封回信，要点如下：1.建议他向妈妈道歉；2.说明过多上网的危害；3.列举一些健康的休闲方式。注意： 1.词数100词左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇： Internet addiction 网瘾Dear David,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua4．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom是高一年级的学生，他进入高中后，不知道如何适应高中生活，请给他写一封建议信，要点如下：1、多与老师沟通交流；2、积极参与班级活动；3、与志趣相投的同学交朋友。注意：1、词数80左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Tom, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua5．假定你是李华，你的外国网友Gary由于沉迷于游戏被父母没收了手机，他和父母因此大吵一架。请你给他写一封建议信，帮助他和父母和好。要点包括：1. 对发生争吵表示遗憾；2.给出建议；3. 表达祝愿注意：1.写作词数应为80字左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯Dear Gary：___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours truly,LiHua6．假定你是李华，你的英国好友Lily最近发来邮件说她和父母就学习方法的问题产生了矛盾，为此她很苦恼。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1.表示问候；2.给出建议；3.期望她和父母能够和睦相处。注意：写作词数应为80左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．你们学校门口在上学和放学时间经常出现交通拥堵，(traffic jams)给全校师生和路人带来了不便。为了确保学校门口正常的交通秩序，你校向全校师生征集解决交通拥堵的良策。假如你叫李华，是一名高一的学生。现在，请你用英语给校长写一封电子邮件。【写作内容】1.说明写信的目的；2.分析学校门口拥堵的原因；3.提出2-3点建议【写作要求】1.词数80词左右    2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。注意：1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear headmaster，I am Li Hua, a student from Senior 1. I’m writing to _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours truly,Li Hua8．假如你是李明，你跟你的朋友Paul给你来信，他表示学习压力很大，请你给他发封电子邮件，安慰他并给他提一些建议。要点如下：你的建议：（1）寻求家人、老师和同学们的帮助；（2）树立自信心；（3）多做运动。3.你对他的祝福。字数：100字左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Paul,Nice to have received your last letter._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter来信，说他每次大型考试来临，都会感到十分焦虑，为此写信向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示，用英语给Peter写一封建议信。注意：1.词数：100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter上高中后与父母经常争吵和冷战，为此写信向你求助。请根据以下要点，用英语给他回一封信。1.这种现象是很正常的；2.与父母争吵的原因；3．如何解决这个问题。注意：1.80词左右；2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。Dear Peter,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes,Li Hua    1．Dear Worried,I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper. Here are three useful tips.First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise, which is an effective way to get rid of your anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Yours,Jamie【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英文给Worried同学写一封电子邮件，对该同学的情况表示理解并给予安慰同时提出建议并说明理由。【详解】1.词汇积累糟糕的：awful→bad建议：advice/suggestion→tip有益的：beneficial→useful/helpful摆脱：eliminate→get rid of2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.拓展句：First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. (运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2] The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. (运用了that引导表语从句)2．Dear Linda,I’m glad that you can become one member of our class as an exchange student, but it seems that you are shy and unwilling to take part in the activities in our class. I am writing to tell you that you can benefit a lot from class activities.We all like you. You can make friends while doing the activities. Besides, your Chinese will be improved through these group activities, which makes it easier for you to get on well with others. If you had any difficulty, we would be very glad to give you a hand.You’re so smart that I’m sure you can adapt to our school life quickly. Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你们班新来的、有些腼腆的交换生Linda写一封信，告诉她同学们都很喜欢她，希望她能很快融入集体的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累不情愿干某事：be reluctant to do sth.→be unwilling to do sth.参加：join in/participate in→take part in困难：hardship→difficulty帮助某人：help sb.→give sb. a hand2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：We all like you.拓展句：We all like you so that we want you to integrate into the group soon.【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to tell you that you can benefit a lot from class activities. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】Besides, your Chinese will be improved through these group activities, which makes it easier for you to get on well with others. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)3．One possible version:Dear David,I’m very sorry to hear that a conflict occurred between you and your mother because of your Internet addiction.In my opinion, you should apologize to your mother, as she has done nothing wrong to prevent you from Internet addiction. Although the Internet plays an important role in modern life, we can’t ignore its harm to us. Many students spend most of their time playing computer games or chatting aimlessly with others, which may not only result in poor health and decline in study but also loss of communication in the real world.As students, we should devote our energy to study. When available, you may as well walk outside with your friends or take some exercise to keep fit instead of playing online games. Only in this way can you live and study happily and healthily.Yours, Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友 David写封信，建议他向妈妈道歉，说明过多上网的危害，列举一些健康的休闲方式。【详解】1. 词汇积累冲突：conflict→clash因为：as→because在……中起重要作用：play an important role in→play an important part in导致：result in→lead to2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：When available, you may as well walk outside with your friends or take some exercise to keep fit instead of playing online games.拓展句：When you are available, you may as well walk outside with your friends or take some exercise to keep fit instead of playing online games.【点睛】[高分句型1]Many students spend most of their time playing computer games or chatting aimlessly with others, which may not only result in poor health and decline in study but also loss of communication in the real world.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] Only in this way can you live and study happily and healthily.(运用了only修饰if条件句位于句首引起的部分倒装句)4．One possible version:Dear Tom, I’m sorry to know that you have trouble adapting yourself to senior high school. I’m writing to offer some suggestions.First of all, why not communicate with your teachers frequently? By doing this, your teachers will know your inner thoughts and help you solve this problem. What’s more, if I were you, I would be engaged in different kinds of activities held by class actively. More importantly, it would be a good idea if you make some friends with common interests. If you do this, you can share happiness and sadness with them, and they can also help you get rid of loneliness at high school.I hope you will find these suggestions useful.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Tom写一封建议信,帮助他应对及解决在新的高中生活中面临的问题和困境。【详解】1. 词汇积累适应：adapt to → suit/accommodate to 提供：offer → provide解决：solve → settle/deal with/cope with此外：what’s more → besides/additionally/in addition2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：By doing this, your teachers will know your inner thoughts and help you solve this problem.拓展句：If you can do this, your teachers will know your inner thoughts and help you solve this problem.【高分句型1】What’s more, if I were you, I would be engaged in different kinds of activities held by class actively.（if引起条件状语从句用到了虚拟语气，此句是对现在的虚拟，所以从句be动词用were，主句动词用would接动词原形。）【高分句型2】If you do this, you can share happiness and sadness with them, and they can also help you get rid of loneliness at high school.（if引起条件状语从句。）5．Dear Gary,I am sorry to hear that you had a quarrel with your parents. Here are some of my suggestions.Admit your mistakes first. Tell your parents that you have been aware of the negative effects of mobile games. Then apologize to them for your rudeness. Express sincere regret for your words and actions. Besides, it would be a good idea to reach an agreement with your parents about when you can use the phone.Hope you can make peace with your parents as soon as possible.Your truly,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Gary写一封建议信，帮助他和父母和好。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：advice→suggestion无礼：impoliteness→rudeness意识到：realize→be aware of此外：in addition→besides2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Admit your mistakes first.拓展句：The first thing you need to do is to admit your mistakes.【点睛】[高分句型1] Here are some of my suggestions. (运用了倒装句)[高分句型2] Tell your parents that you have been aware of the negative effects of mobile games. (运用了that引导宾语从句)6．Dear Lily,How’s life recently? I'm sorry that you have a problem with your parents about your study methods. However, it’s so common that everyone may experience the trouble. Here’s my advice to help you out.First of all, keep calm and try to listen to them carefully because their advice might work. You can take their beneficial advice. Next, you’d better find a better approach to communicating with them, such as writing a letter or sending a message. They are likely to take your thoughts into consideration in this way. Besides, it’s important to reach an agreement in the end, which will help remove the misunderstanding.I hope my advice will be of value to you and that you will be able to get on well with them.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Lily写一封建议信，来帮助她处理与父母在学习方法问题上产生的矛盾。【详解】1.词汇积累问题：problem→issue建议：advice→suggestion交流：communicate→contact考虑：take…into consideration→take…into account2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：You can take their beneficial advice.拓展句：You can take their advice that is beneficial to you.【点睛】【高分句型1】However, it’s so common that everyone may experience the trouble. （运用了that引导的主语从句）【高分句型2】Besides, it’s important to reach an agreement in the end, which will help remove the misunderstanding.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）7．Dear headmaster,I’m Li Hua, a student from Senior 1. I am writing to discuss the traffic problem near our school gate.With so many parents coming to pick up their children, traffic jams are frequent near the school gate, causing much inconvenience to us and passers-by.In order to avoid traffic congestion, I strongly recommend some effective measures be taken. First, we should encourage students to ride a bicycle or walk to school by themselves instead of taking a car, which will not only help reduce the jam, but benefit student’s health. It is also a good idea to allow the students of Senior 1 to leave school 10 minutes earlier than others, which will surely make the street less crowded. Besides, cars should not be allowed to park near the school gate.I do hope there will be fewer traffic jams near our school gate.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英语给校长写一封电子邮件，就学校门口拥堵的原因分析原因并给予建议。【详解】1.词汇积累经常的：frequent →common困难：inconvenience →trouble措施：measure →step通过某人自己：by oneself→on one's own2.句式拓展同义句原句：With so many parents coming to pick up their children, traffic jams are frequent near the school gate, causing much inconvenience to us and passers-by.拓展句： With so many parents coming to pick up their children, traffic jams are frequent near the school gate, which causes much inconvenience to us and passers-by.【点睛】[高分句型1] With so many parents coming to pick up their children, traffic jams are frequent near the school gate, causing much inconvenience to us and passers-by. (运用了with的复合结构和现在分词作状语)[高分句型2] It is also a good idea to allow the students of Senior 1 to leave school 10 minutes earlier than others, which will surely make the street less crowded.  (运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)8．Dear Paul,Nice to have received your last letter. I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from. I suggest you talk about your trouble with your teachers and classmates so as to get help from them. You are not supposed to think about your exams all the time, which only makes you more stressed out. Instead, you should think about the progress you have made in your study, which will surely increase your own confidence. In addition, I advise you to do more exercise in your spare time to relieve your stress, because sports will also help you sleep better at night.I hope you will get out of your trouble sooner and live happily.Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友Paul写封信，提出一些减轻学习压力的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累为了：in order to do →so as to do建议：recommend→advise/ suggest考虑：consider→think about空闲时间：leisure time→spare time2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Nice to have received your last letter. I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from.拓展句：Although it is nice to have received your last letter, I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from.【点睛】[高分句型1] You are not supposed to think about your exams all the time, which only makes you more stressed out. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] In addition, I advise you to do more exercise in your spare time to relieve your stress, because sports will also help you sleep better at night. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)9．Dear Peter,Many of us feel somehow nervous whenever we are taking an important exam. Nervousness not only does harm to students’ health but also disturbs our studies. So it’s necessary for us students to learn to relax. I'd like to share my advice with you.I think it’s very important to have a right attitude towards exams. Exams are only a means of checking what we have learned. Therefore, there is no need to worry too much about the results of the exams. Before an exam , making a scientific study plan and keeping a peaceful mind can help to reduce the pressure from the exam. We can also relax ourselves by doing sports and listening to music. Besides, enough sleep and a balanced diet will work as well.Hopefully, my advice will be of some use for you.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生向美国朋友Peter写一封建议信，帮助他缓解考试前的焦虑。【详解】1.词汇积累对……有影响：affect/have an impact/influence/effect on sth.必要的，必然的：essential/inevitable对……有益：be useful/be beneficial to 起作用：play a role/part2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：We can also relax ourselves by doing sports and listening to music.拓展句：We can also relax ourselves by doing sports and listening to music, through which we can get much energy to give us confidence.【点睛】[高分句型1]So it’s necessary for us students to learn to relax.（运用了it作形式主语）[高分句型2]Before an exam , making a scientific study plan and keeping a peaceful mind can help to reduce the pressure from the exam.（运用了动名词作主语）10．Dear Peter,I quite understand that you are troubled by arguing with your parents. Actually, it is quite normal for you to lose temper since you may go through some physical and mental changes.Why not try these pieces of advice and see if they help? First, have an honest communication with your parents, figure out their worries and share your thoughts in order to address their concerns. Second, try to calm yourself down and understand the situation from their point of view.I sincerely hope you will find my suggestions helpful and everything will turn out better in the end.Best wishes,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Peter写一封回信，就他上高中后与父母经常争吵和冷战给予帮助。【详解】1.词汇积累实际上：Actually →In fact经历：go through → experience建议：suggestion →advice为了：in order to→ so as to2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：First, have an honest communication with your parents, figure out their worries and share your thoughts in order to address their concerns.拓展句：In order that the concerns of the parents can be solved, in the first place, have an honest communication with your parents, figure out their worries and share your thoughts.【点睛】【高分句型1】I quite understand that you are troubled by arguing with your parents.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Actually, it is quite normal for you to lose temper since you may go through some physical and mental changes.（运用了since引导的原因状语从句）