江苏高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份江苏高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共16页。试卷主要包含了假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，假定你是李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。
建议信1．假如你是李华，你在美国的表弟David发来邮件说他很苦恼，学习压力很大，常常感到自己不如别人。请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：1.表示理解；2.提出建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.请按如下格式写在答题卡的相应位置。Dear David,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua2．假定你是李华，你的笔友Jack为了让父母感受中国春节的氛围，就如何装饰家里更有“年” 味征求你的意见。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 感谢喜欢中国年；2、如何装饰(不少于两点)；3、你的祝福。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文述贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假定你是学生会主席李华，因为感染新冠病毒人数还在不断增加，请你代表学生会就 如何过好即将到来的寒假，给全体学生一些建议。内容包括：1 .做好个人防护。2 .注意劳逸结合。注意：1 .写作词汇应为80左右;2 .可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：新冠病毒novel coronavirusDear students,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Students’ Union4．假定你是李华，你的外籍朋友Jim在邮件中提到他对如何有效管理自己的时间感到困惑。请你回封邮件，给出你的建议，内容包括：1. 时间管理的重要性;2. 时间管理的技巧。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Jim, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua5．假如你是李华，你的朋友Caroline发来邮件向你求助，她近来因考试成绩不佳，深受打击，逐渐对学习失去信心，请你给她写一封回信，帮助她重拾信心。具体内容如下：1.给予安慰;2.提出建议;3.加以鼓励。注意：1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。Dear Caroline,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua6．假定你是李华，你校交换生Mike准备参加“厉害了，中国”(Amazing China)短视频大赛，特发邮件向你征询视频创意。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：1．提出建议；2．阐明理由；3．表达祝愿。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式作答。Dear Mike,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua7．假如你是李华, 你的英国笔友Caroline对中国传统文化很感兴趣, 请你给她写一封信, 内容包括∶1. 提出学习建议(内容、途径等);2. 希望加强交流。注意∶1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Caroline, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely, Li Hua8．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他最近沉迷于网络游戏，日常生活受到影响，他为此感到苦恼。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括:1.表示理解;2.你的建议及理由。注意: 1. 词数80左右;2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua9．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter下周二要参加学校辩论队的面试，他来信征求你的建议。请你写封回信，内容包括：1. 写信目的；2. 提出建议。注意：1. 词数在100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。参考词汇：辩论队debate team________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．假定你是李华。你的美国朋友David来信说，他想在当地的“汉语桥(Chinese Bridge)”节目中演唱一首汉语励志歌曲，特向你征求建议。请你写一封回信，内容包括：1.支持他参加；2.推荐励志歌曲曲目及理由；3.热切期待。注意：1.词数80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear David, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on what to choose as a Chinese song. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua              1．Dear David,I feel sorry to hear that you are suffering from the great stress. I can understand your feeling. Here are some tips to help you.First, it’s a good way to believe in yourself, always thinking that you’re making progress little by little. That way you will gain more confidence, which is the key to getting your study improved. Second, taking more exercise can not only rest your brain but also build up your bodies. As far as I’m concerned, it’s really helpful to your health and study as well. I do hope you find these ideas of great use. And I do believe, with your attempt, you can manage to overcome these difficulties.Best wishes.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是李华，你在美国的表弟David发来邮件说他很苦恼，学习压力很大，常常感到自己不如别人。请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：1.表示理解；2.提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：tip→suggestion相信自己：believe in yourself→trust yourself有益的：helpful→beneficial克服：overcome→go over/conquer2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I do hope you find these ideas of great use.拓展句：I do hope that you will find these ideas are of great use.【点睛】[高分句型1] That way you will gain more confidence, which is the key to getting your study improved. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和动名词作宾语)[高分句型2] Second, taking more exercise can not only rest your brain but also build up your bodies. (运用了动名词作主语和not only...but also结构)2．Dear Jack,Thanks so much for your affection for the Spring Festival! And I am too willing to offer you some advice on decorating your home.To create the joyous atmosphere, you’d better integrate “red” into your decoration as it means “happiness”. Firstly, paste the red couplets on the doors and affix the red paper-cuttings to the windows. Sticking the character of fu is also a custom. Besides, after the cleaning, you can hang up the red lanterns to illuminate the inside and outside of the house.May you have a pleasant Chinese New Year and remember me to your parents!Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的笔友Jack为了让父母感受中国春节的氛围，就如何装饰家里更有“年”味而征求你的意见这一情况，给他写一封邮件。【详解】1.词汇积累提供：offer→ give建议：advice → suggestion此外：Besides→ What’s more高兴的：pleasant→ happy2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Besides, after the cleaning, you can hang up the red lanterns to illuminate the inside and outside of the house.拓展句：Besides, after the cleaning, you can hang up the red lanterns, which can illuminate the inside and outside of the house.【点睛】【高分句型1】To create the joyous atmosphere, you’d better integrate “red” into your decoration as it means “happiness”.(运用了动词不定式作目的状语和as引导原因状语从句)【高分句型2】Sticking the character of fu is also a custom.(运用了动名词作主语)3．Dear students,With many people being infected with novel coronavirus, we’d like to make some constructive suggestions to help you spend a meaningful winter holiday.To begin with, confronted with the serious condition, we students had better have personal protection in public and stay at home to have enough rest if possible. In addition, so precious is the time that we can’t afford to waste it as senior students. It is advisable that we should keep a balance between relaxation and study.Hopefully, the advice will of benefit to you.Students’ Union【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生代表学生会就如何过好即将到来的寒假，给全体学生一些建议。【详解】1. 词汇积累建议：suggestion→advice首先：to begin with→first of all另外：in addition→what’s more放松：relaxation→easing2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：With many people being infected with novel coronavirus, we’d like to make some constructive suggestions to help you spend a meaningful winter holiday.拓展句：As many people are infected with novel coronavirus, we’d like to make some constructive suggestions to help you spend a meaningful winter holiday.【点睛】[高分句型1]In addition, so precious is the time that we can’t afford to waste it as senior students.(so位于句首的倒装句和that引导的结果状语从句)[高分句型2]It is advisable that we should keep a balance between relaxation and study.(that引导的主语从句)4．Dear Jim,Learning that you have trouble in managing your time effectively, I’m writing to give you some useful suggestions.Effective time management can help reduce your stress and boost your performance. The first thing you need to do is to plan ahead by making a daily to-do list. Being organized also helps a lot when you prepare for your lessons and activities. Most importantly, you must learn to prioritize all your tasks and stick to the goals you have set.I hope you’ll find my suggestions practical and helpful.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生给外籍朋友Jim回封邮件，就如何有效管理自己的时间给出建议。【详解】1. 词汇积累知道：learning→know问题：trouble→problem建议：suggestion→advice有用的：helpful→beneficial2. 句式拓展同义句转换原句：Effective time management can help reduce your stress and boost your performance.拓展句：Not only can effective time management help reduce your stress, but also boost your performance.【点睛】[高分句型1]Learning that you have trouble in managing your time effectively, I’m writing to give you some useful suggestions.(that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]The first thing you need to do is to plan ahead by making a daily to-do list. (省略which的定语从句)5．范文Dear Caroline,I am terribly sorry to hear that you have trouble in study and lose confidence. I am writing to express my genuine concern and share with you some suggestions that might be of some help on it.First of all, it is wise of you to work on positive thinking because a positive thinking will lead to positive results. Don’t worry about letting yourself or others down. Additionally, it is strongly advised that you’d better set realistic goals and break the overall goal into smaller ones, which makes it easy for you to get a sense of accomplishment.I am firmly convinced that you will regain confidence with your efforts. Please contact me with any other questions. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【导语】这是一篇应用文。Caroline近来因考试成绩不佳，深受打击，逐渐对学习失去信心，要求考生给朋友Caroline写一封回信，帮助她重拾信心。【详解】1.词汇积累非常：terribly → extremely失去信心，灰心：lose confidence → lose heart表达，表示：express → show建议：suggestios → advice2.句式拓展同义句转化原句：I am writing to express my genuine concern and share with you some suggestions that might be of some help on it.拓展句：I am writing to express my genuine concern, sharing some suggestions with you, which might be of some help on it.【点睛】【高分句型1】I am terribly sorry to hear that you have trouble in study and lose confidence.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Additionally, it is strongly advised that you’d better set realistic goals and break the overall goal into smaller ones, which makes it easy for you to get a sense of accomplishment.（运用了it作形式主语和which引导的非限制性定语从句）6．Dear Mike,Learning you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China,I’m writing to share my ideas with you. If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China’s smart agriculture. Nowadays, you can see modern farmers using cutting-edge technologies and devices for agricultural production, monitoring and management. Thanks to this, the efficiency is greatly improved and the country’s grain security is guaranteed. Therefore, I’m convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers. May your entry stand out in the competition! Yours, Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生Mike就参加短视频大会的事情写一封回信提出一些建议并表达祝愿。【详解】1.词汇积累报名参加：sign up→enter for主题：theme→subject智能的：smart→intelligent设备：device→equipment2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Learning you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing to share my ideas with you.拓展句：Because I learnt you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m writing to share my ideas with you.【点睛】【高分句型1】If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China’s smart agriculture.(运用了虚拟语气在条件句中的运用) 【高分句型2】I’m convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)7．One possible version:Dear Caroline.Learning that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I am delighted to offer you some advice on how to have a better understanding of it.Traditional Chinese culture is rich and profound, which can be reflected in various fields, such as ancient Chinese poetry, acupuncture, calligraphy, Tai Chi and so on. You can choose one to learn to gain deep insights into traditional Chinese culture. Engage yourself in all kinds of traditional culture activities if possible. If you are interested in Chinese calligraphy, I will be glad to help you, as I have been practicing it these days. Also. you can turn to a local Confucius Institute for help. I believe you are bound to learn it well. Hope to strengthen cultural eschanges with you.Yours sincerely. Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学习中国传统文化的学习内容和学习途径，给英国笔友Caroline给出建议，并表达加强文化交流的愿望。【详解】1.词汇积累：对……感兴趣：be interested in → be crazy about一定会……：be bound to do → not fail to do相信：believe → be convinced that各种各样的：all kinds of → a wide range of2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Learning that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I am delighted to offer you some advice on how to have a better understanding of it.拓展局：Knowing that you have a strong interest in traditional Chinese culture, I am more than glad to provide some tips on how to learn more about it.【点睛】【高分句型1】If you are interested in Chinese calligraphy, I will be glad to help you, as I have been practicing it these days.（运用了If引导的田间状语从句和as引导的原因状语从句）【高分句型2】Traditional Chinese culture is rich and profound, which can be reflected in various fields, such as ancient Chinese poetry, acupuncture, calligraphy, Tai Chi and so on.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，以及表达中华文化的acupuncture, calligraphy等词汇）8．Dear Jim,I’m sorry to hear that you are addicted to video games. I can understand how upset and stressed you must be. Here are a few things you can do.First, if I were you, I would try my best to limit the time spent on video games each day, so I could spend more time on other meaningful activities and hobbies. Another step would be finding purpose in reality, from enjoying face-to-face conversations with your family and friends to taking a walk in the sunshine. Immerse yourself in the pleasure of real life instead of a virtual world. I am sure that with persistence, you’ll definitely get rid of your video game addiction. Looking forward to your good news.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友英国笔友Jim写一封邮件，针对他沉迷于网络游戏，日常生活受到影响，表示理解，提出一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累首先：first→first of all尽全力：try one’s best → spare no effort沉浸：immerse in→ soak in确定无疑地：definitely→ undoubtedly2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Another step would be finding purpose in reality, from enjoying face-to-face conversations with your family and friends to taking a walk in the sunshine.拓展句：Another step would be finding purpose in reality, which contains enjoying face-to-face conversations with your family and friends and taking a walk in the sunshine.【点睛】【高分句型1】First, if I were you, I would try my best to limit the time spent on video games each day, so I could spend more time on other meaningful activities and hobbies.（运用了虚拟语气）【高分句型2】Immerse yourself in the pleasure of real life instead of a virtual world. （运用了祈使句）9．Dear Peter,I’m glad to receive your letter asking for advice on the interview for the debate team. I’m writing to remind you of how to prepare for it.I think you need to read more books about the basic theory of debating. It can help you consolidate the foundation of your knowledge and it can also show them your passion. Additionally, wearing something formal can make you stand out among the candidates and impress the interviewers greatly. At last, you should try to smile more during the interview and be confident. I hope my humble proposals could be practical and helpful.I hope to hear from you about your good news soon!Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Peter写一封回信，给他参加学校辩论队的面试提出相关建议。【详解】1.词汇积累收到：receive → get巩固：consolidate → strengthen使印象深刻：impress → leave a deep impression on建议：proposal → advice/suggestion2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I think you need to read more books about the basic theory of debating. It can help you consolidate the foundation of your knowledge and it can also show them your passion.拓展句：I think you need to read more books about the basic theory of debating, which can help you consolidate the foundation of your knowledge and it can also show them your passion.【点睛】【高分句型1】I think you need to read more books about the basic theory of debating.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Additionally, wearing something formal can make you stand out among the candidates and impress the interviewers greatly.（运用了动名词做主语）10．Dear David,I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on what to choose as a Chinese song. For the song to choose, I have a favorite song, whose name is invisible Wings and which has a great influence on me.First of all, whenever I suffer hardships and blows, it is this song that gives me an invisible strength to face difficulties bravely, and makes me more confident and brave to conquer the challenges. In addition, this song also expresses a positive and optimistic attitude, which makes me more confident to face the future and realize my dream.I sincerely hope my recommendation can be helpful and wish you a wonderful performance. When you come to my city, remember to let me know, since I’d like to be there to cheer for you.Yours, Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校的英文征文比赛投稿。稿件中包括阐述音乐的重要性；简单介绍自己喜欢的一首歌曲以及这种歌对自己的影响。【详解】1.词汇积累此外：in addition→besides困难：hardship→bitterness对……有巨大影响：has a great influence on→have a great impact/effect on克服：conquer→overcome2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：First of all, whenever I suffer hardships and blows, it is this song that gives me an invisible strength to face difficulties bravely, and makes me more confident and brave to conquer the challenges.拓展句：First of all, whenever I suffer hardships and blows, it is this song that gives me an invisible strength to face difficulties bravely, which makes me more confident and brave to conquer the challenges.【点睛】【高分句型1】When we feel nervous or tired, music can not only make us feel relaxed, but also make us much happier. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)【高分句型2】In addition, this song also expresses a positive and optimistic attitude, which makes me more confident to face the future and realize my dream.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)