江苏高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份江苏高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共16页。
建议信
1．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom因疫情隔离返校后无法融入到同学之中，感到很孤独。请你写封邮件，给他提出一些建议。内容包括：
1. 表达关切和鼓励；
2. 给出具体建议；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 写作字数应为80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
Thank you for telling me what’s been upsetting you.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
2．假如你是李华，你的朋友 David 最近要参加一次重要的面试，因此他有些担心，想让你给他点建议。请你写一封邮件给他，邮件内容包括：
1. 面试之前的准备；
2. 面试时的注意点；
3. 面试后能做的事。
注意：
1. 词数应为 80 字左右；
2. 可以适当增加情节，使行文连贯。
Dear David,
I am really glad to hear from you. In your email you have mentioned you are worried about the coming interview. Here are some small tips for you.
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I wish you the best of luck!
Yours,
Lihua
3．为了帮助学生健康成长，你校校报开辟了“Heart-To-Heart”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jennie，收到封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：自己的英语作文写不好，语句乏味、无话可说，得不到好成绩，因此非常气馁。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信，内容包括：
1、表示理解并给予安慰；
2、提出建议：多阅读、多积累和模仿；
3、说明你建议的理由。
注意：写作词数：80-100
（信的开头语与结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）
Dear Worried,
I’m sorry to know that you’re having a bad time at the moment.
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Yours,
Jennie
4．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter告诉你，他目前玩手机上瘾，成了“手机控”，影响了学习生活，他发邮件向你求助。 请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 具体建议；
3. 美好祝愿。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．假定你叫李华，你的英国朋友Mike来信, 说“汉语热”已遍及全球，他也在学中文，并且已能读和写一些汉字，但仍觉得用中文与人交流有困难。请你给他回一封信提几点建议。
内容包括：
1. 回信目的；
2. 建议内容；
3. 希望或祝福。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右，开头及落款无需再写在答题卡上，不计入总词数；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
How is everything going?
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
6．假设你叫李华，你的朋友John沉迷于B站（Bilibili）而不能自拔，写信向你寻求帮助，请你给他写一封建议信。
内容包括：1. 表示理解和关心；
2. 沉迷B站的影响；
3. 提出具体建议。
要求：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
7．假设你是李华，你的朋友Daisy来信说她对自己的身材感到很不满意，想要做整形手术（plastic surgery）。请你给她写一封信，内容包括：
1. 表示担心；
2. 你的看法和建议；
3. 提出希望。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按以下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Daisy,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．假定你是李华, 刚参加了北京冬奥会的志愿者工作。你的意大利好友David想申请下一届志愿者, 写信向你询问相关情况, 请你用英语给他写一封回信, 内容包括:
1. 个人感悟;
2. 如何准备;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意: 1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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9．假设你是晨光中学的李津，你校学生会创办的你最喜爱的《英语月报》（English Monthly）向读者征集意见。请你给主编写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 自我介绍：
2. 说明该报优点：（如：内容方面，对学生帮助方面等）；
3. 提出建议：（如：增加某些内容等）
注意：1. 词数100左右：
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.
参考词汇：励志的inspirational
Dear editors
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Yours,
Li Jin
10．每年的5月22日是“国际生物多样性日”世界上有10种珍稀植物濒临灭绝。假如你是李华，请写一封倡议书，呼吁全校同学“保护生物，爱护环境”
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.开头语和结束语已给出，但不计入总词数
参考词汇：生物多样性biological diversity
Dear schoolmates ,
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Yours sincerely .
Li Hua














1．Dear Mike,
Thank you for telling me what’s been upsetting you. I can relate to how you feel. I know you’re lonely, but don’t be discouraged! All you need to do is make some small changes.
First, don’t distance yourself from your classmates. You should take the initiative to talk to them. Keep in mind that good communication is essential to forming good relationships with people. Second, show a genuine interest in what your classmates do, which is a good way to start interacting with them. Last, always wear a smile when you see them. It may take a lot of effort, but the reward will be amazing.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件给因疫情隔离返校后无法融入到同学之中，感到很孤独的英国朋友Tom表达关切和鼓励，并提出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
气馁的：discouraged→ unnerved
远离：distance→ keep away from
重要的：essential→ significant
惊人的：amazing→ marvelous
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First, don’t distance yourself from your classmates. You should take the initiative to talk to them.
拓展句：You should take the initiative to talk to them so that you won’t distance yourself from your classmates.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Keep in mind that good communication is essential to forming good relationships with people. (运用that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 Second, show a genuine interest in what your classmates do, which is a good way to start interacting with them. (运用which引导非限定性定语从句)
2．One possible version:
Dear David,
I am really glad to hear from you. In your email you have mentioned you are worried about the coming interview. Here are some small tips for you.
Prior to the interview, ensure you make good preparations. Find out about the company and the post you are interviewing for through the company profile. For the duration of the interview, listen carefully to the questions, and if you need clarification, it is not rude to do so. When answering, try to find the right conversational balance by giving all the information needed without talking too much. After the interview, you should follow it up by writing to thank the interviewer for giving you the opportunity and again express your interest in working for the company.
I wish you the best of luck!
Yours,
Lihua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你的朋友 David 最近要参加一次重要的面试，因此他有些担心，想让你给他点建议。请你写一封邮件给他，提出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
①高兴的：glad→delighted
②建议：tip→suggestion
③努力做某事：try to do sth.→attempt to do sth.
④机会：opportunity→chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：When answering, try to find the right conversational balance by giving all the information needed without talking too much.
拓展句：When you answer the questions, try to find the right conversational balance by giving all the information which is needed without talking too much.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Find out about the company and the post you are interviewing for through the company profile.(运用了省略关系代词的定语从句)
【高分句型2】For the duration of the interview, listen carefully to the questions, and if you need clarification, it is not rude to do so.(运用了if引导条件状语从句，it作形式主语，不定式作真正的主语)
3．Dear Worried,
I’m sorry to know that you’re having a bad time at the moment. The truth is that you are not the only one who has met such problems, so you don’t have to worry much. The most important thing is to find ways to change what you are now. Here are some practical tips.
Frist, read as much as you can. The value of reading cannot be overestimated. Not only is it recreation, but it also lights a lamp in the mind, bettering our understanding of the world around us. Second, copy down what you think useful expressions or typical complicated sentences, study them carefully and try to imitate the sentences, finally create new sentences of your own.
I hope you’ll soon feel proud of yourself.
Yours,
Jennie
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给某位在英语学习方面有困扰的同学写一封回信，内容包括：1、表示理解并给予安慰；2、提出建议：多阅读、多积累和模仿；3、说明你建议的理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：important→vital
娱乐：recreation→entertainment
有用的：useful→helpful
复杂的：complicated→complex
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Here are some practical tips.
拓展句：Here are some practical tips which can help you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The truth is that you are not the only one who has met such problems, so you don’t have to worry much. (运用了that引导的表语从句和who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】The most important thing is to find ways to change what you are now. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
4．Dear Peter,
I have received your letter, in which you said that you had become a “phone addict”. This worries me a lot, but this problem can be solved. Here are some of my suggestions.
First of all, don’t take your mobile phone into school, which can let you concentrate on your study at school. Second, when you get home, remember to finish your homework before playing with your mobile phone. Finally, some addictive apps, such as Douyin, should be removed.
I believe that as long as you work hard and strengthen your self-control, you will be able to solve this problem.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Peter写封信，告诉他一些克服他手机上瘾的问题的建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
使担忧：worry→concern
建议：suggestion→advice
首先：first of all→first and foremost
专心于：concentrate on→focus on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：This worries me a lot, but this problem can be solved.
拓展句：Although this worries me a lot, this problem can be solved.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I have received your letter, in which you said that have become a “phone addict”. (运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句和that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] First of all, don’t take your mobile phone into school, which can let you concentrate on your study at school . (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5．Dear Mike,
How is everything going?
I’m glad to learn that you’re learning Chinese and have made some progress in reading and writing Chinese characters. You say you have difficulty communicating with people in Chinese. Now let me give you some advice.
First, you should be brave and confident to speak Chinese and don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Additionally, speak Chinese slowly and clearly. In this way, you can make yourself understood easily. Sometimes body language is useful.
I hope these suggestions will help you.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。你的英国朋友Mike来信, 说“汉语热”已遍及全球，他也在学中文，并且已能读和写一些汉字，但仍觉得用中文与人交流有困难。请你给他回一封信提几点建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
害怕的：afraid→frightened
此外：additionally→ what’s more
建议：suggestion→advice
帮助：help→ aid
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Now let me give you some advice.
拓展句：Now what I want is to give you some advice.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m glad to learn that you’re learning Chinese and have made some progress in reading and writing Chinese characters.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】In this way, you can make yourself understood easily.(运用了过去分词作宾语补足语)
6．Dear John,
Glad to receive your letter. I hear that you have been obsessed with Bilibili recently, and I am sorry for that.
First of all, I can understand your mood. Bilibili is the hottest short video platform at the moment. There are many interesting video records on it, and many people are using it. But on the other hand, the dangers of indulging in Bilibili for a long time are obvious. If you don’t contain yourself and plan your time unreasonably, you will inevitably waste a lot of your time and make it difficult to concentrate and your learning will also be greatly affected.
I suggest you balance your study and entertainment, and plan your time in a reasonable and balanced manner. Only in this way can we enjoy the fun of short videos without affecting our study and life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生你的朋友John写一封信，给沉迷于B站（Bilibili）而不能自拔的他提供帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
沉迷于：be obsessed with →be addicted to
明显的：obvious →evident
不可避免地：inevitably →undeniably
影响：affect →influence
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First of all, I can understand your mood. Bilibili is the hottest short video platform at the moment.
拓展句：First of all, I can understand your mood, because Bilibili is the hottest short video platform at the moment.
【点睛】[高分句型1]If you don’t contain yourself and plan your time unreasonably, you will inevitably waste a lot of your time and make it difficult to concentrate and your learn will also be greatly affected.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
[高分句型2]Only in this way can we enjoy the fun of short videos without affecting our study and life.(运用了部分倒装结构)
7．Dear Daisy,
Knowing that you want to have plastic surgery due to dissatisfaction with your body figure, I’m really anxious about you.
Plastic surgery, like any type of surgery, is not without risks. It can bring negative consequences ranging from an unattractive result to even death. To shape your body, you’d better take regular exercise and eat a well balanced diet. Besides, keep in mind that nobody is perfect, so accept yourself and just do your best.
I do hope you can find my advice useful and think of less risky ways to boost your body confidence.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给要做整形手术的朋友Daisy写一封信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
因为：due to→because of
不满意：dissatisfaction→discontent
此外：Besides→what’s more
建议：advice→suggestion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Plastic surgery, like any type of surgery, is not without risks. It can bring negative consequences ranging from an unattractive result to even death.
拓展句：Plastic surgery, like any type of surgery, is not without risks, which can bring negative consequences ranging from an unattractive result to even death.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you want to have plastic surgery due to dissatisfaction with your body figure, I’m really anxious about you.（由连词that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Besides, keep in mind that nobody is perfect, so accept yourself and just do your best.（由连词that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型3】I do hope you can find my advice useful and think of less risky ways to boost your body confidence.（由省略连词that引导的宾语从句）
8．Dear David，
   I am delighted to learn that you would like to be a volunteer in the next Winter Olympics. And I’d like to share with you my experience as a volunteer for the Beijing Winter Olympics and offer you some practical advice.
   Firstly, I have to say that it is the most exciting and meaningful experience for me to be a volunteer for the Beijing Winter Olympics. And it has a profound and significant influence on my life. Honestly, I once made full preparations for it. I had to learn all the job duties, mastered at least one foreign language, and most importantly, be willing to devote all my time to serving athletes with great patience and kindness.
I think that if you could do these, you will certainly become a qualified volunteer.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Yours,
                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。假定考生是李华, 刚参加了北京冬奥会的志愿者工作。你的意大利好友David想申请下一届志愿者, 写信向你询问相关情况, 请你用英语给他写一封回信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开心的：delighted → pleased
提供：offer → provide
重大的：significant → remarkable
影响：influence → effect
掌握：master → possess
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：And I’d like to share with you my experience as a volunteer for the Beijing Winter Olympics and offer you some practical advice.
拓展句：And I’d like to share with you my experience in the Beijing Winter Olympics when I worked as a volunteer and offer you some practical advice.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am delighted to learn that you would like to be a volunteer in the next Winter Olympics.（that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】I think that if you could do these, you will certainly become a qualified volunteer.（that引起宾语从句；if引起条件状语从句）
9．One possible version:
Dear editor,
I’m so glad to give my personal opinions on my favorite newspaper English Monthly set up by the Student Union. I’m a high school student who is enthusiastic about reading newspapers and I want to learn something from them. I think English Monthly has many advantages. For one thing, it’s rich in content, ranging from economy to civilization. For another, it’s a guide to English learning. Through it, I can have a good knowledge of what’s going on at home and abroad and I’ve improved my English reading skill. If only you could introduce some more about Chinese traditional culture and inspirational stories in the culture column.
Here I really hope English Monthly will attract more readers.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇建议信。文章要求高考给学校编辑写一封关于《英语月报》的看法，并且提出自己建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad → pleased
个人的：personal → individual
观点：opinion → viewpoint
建立：set up → establish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It’s rich in content, ranging from economy to civilization.
拓展句：It’s rich in content, which ranges from economy to civilization.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m a high school student who is enthusiastic about reading newspapers and I want to learn something from them.（运用了定语从句。）
【高分句型2】If only you could introduce some more about Chinese traditional culture and inspirational stories in the culture column.（运用了if only的虚拟语气）
10．Dear schoolmates,
International Day for Biological Diversity is on 22nd, May every year. Now I am writing to appeal for your cooperation in conservation of creatures in the world.
As I know from this year’s International Day for Biological Diversity, there are ten rare plants appearing endangered altogether. The key reason for the extinction is that we human beings are always polluting too much and over destroying forests for fuel. To save the world’s creatures, we should do our bit to advertise low-carbon life and try to avoid giving out gas and littering around.
Here, I sincerely advocate that we go to school on foot or by bike as much as possible every day. Furthermore, we had better make sure those who are ignorant of International Day for Biological Diversity are informed of the danger of creatures’ extinction.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封倡议书，呼吁全校同学“保护生物，爱护环境”。
【详解】1.词汇积累
呼吁：appeal for →call on
破坏：destroy →break
尽自己一份力量：do one’s bit →do one’s share
此外：Furthermore →Moreover
2.句式拓展
简单句变为复合句
原句：To save the world’s creatures, we should do our bit to advertise low-carbon life and try to avoid giving out gas and littering around.
拓展句：In order that the world’s creatures can be saved, we should do our bit to advertise low-carbon life and try to avoid giving out gas and littering around.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The key reason for the extinction is that we human beings are always polluting too much and over destroying forests for fuel.(运用了that引导的表语从句)
[高分句型2] Furthermore, we had better make sure those who are ignorant of International Day for Biological Diversity are informed of the danger of creatures’ extinction.(用了who引导的定语从句)