【备考2023】高考英语热点+重难点专题特训学案（全国通用）——热点练14 读后续写

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读→编→造
第1步：读出原故事的六要素 （相当于抓住原故事的主题和重点）
操作步骤：
（1）边读边想象场景，在大脑屮构造画面、拍电影。
（2）边读边用中文把主要情节写下来。（可以避免反复看原文而浪费时间）
（3）主要情节即“记叙文六要素”：人物、时间、地点、起因 、经过、结果
（谁在什么时间、什么地方，因为什么、做了什么、最终怎样。)
第二步：编依据原文中的六要素，用中文编新故事
原则：时间/地点/人物不变，起因/经过/结果顺承）
操作步骤：
（1）编情节：根据两段的首句，猜测故事发展的脉络。（可用正负法，结局一定是正向的，符合社会主义价值观；如果有标题，最后一定要点题）
（2）编细节：为续写的两个自然段各想4-5句话（用中文记下4-5个要点。)
第三步：造
翻译 & 造句
遵循七大黄金原则
针对读后续写的题型特点， 我们可以按照以下的方式进行解题：
1.不增加人物。
由考纲样题及近5年高考真题中所给的段落首句可知,续写的故事情节发展都是由原文的人物所推进,因此,强行增加人物有可能会偏离情节发展。
不增加旁支情节。
题目要求“考生根据所给情节进行续写”，旨在延续原材料的故事情节，并不是要发展新情节。
3.不用过多对话。在续写中展示对话,虽能丰富内容和语言, 增强语篇的连贯性, 但使用过多的对话,会显得篇幅累赘且很难在限定的词数里把整个后续的情节发展补充完整。
4.不用负能量结局。结局设计绝对不能负能量。内容应该积极向上, 能增长知识或传播正能量。如样题的结尾, 我们可以有两种设定:这个年轻人就是银行抢劫者,而Arthur因此成为一个大英雄; 或者Arthur误会了这个年轻人是银行抢劫犯,但最终警察们还是表扬了他见义勇为的行为。
5.不在文末设置悬念。题目要求是“使之构成一篇完整的短文”, 若在文末设置悬念, 就会给人一种还没结束的感觉，这样的故事是不完整的。
6.不偏离原文主题。续写的情节应时刻围绕着短文的主题去推进,如上面的样题, 由续写第二段首句提到的“警察局”可推测, 我们可以围绕勇气及正义的主题去进行续写
7.不违背逻辑常理。情节和细节的想象要合理,符合生活常识及具有逻辑性。
冒险经历，感恩，无私奉献，梦想，克服困难，感悟等等。
真题链接
(2022年1月·浙江高考)
When Dr. Hendersn was assigning (指定) prject mates fr his psychlgy class, I secretly hped that he wuld pair me with my best friend r at least a classmate I culd have sme fun with. Abve all, I hped he wuldn’t assign me t wrk with the fiercely cmpetitive and extremely serius fellw wh always wre dark clthes and apparently had a persnality t match. As fate (命运) wuld have it, Dr. Hendersn very deliberately matched everyne in class and annunced that I wuld be wrking with the ne persn in class I wanted t avid.
I went up t my new teammate and intrduced myself. He lked at me as thugh I weren’t there. I felt he treated me as thugh I wuld hld him back and prbably make him fail t get an A in the curse. He wasn’t mean r abusive; he just gave me the impressin that he culd d whatever prject we dreamed up better if he did it alne.
Needless t say, I didn’t lk frward t an entire term f being brushed ff, but I tried t make the best f it and didn’t say anything fr fear that I wuld make things wrse.
The prject required each team t develp a hypthesis (假说), set up an experiment t test the hypthesis, d the statistical analysis and present the findings. Whatever grade the team received wuld be shared by bth students.
When my teammate and I met t discuss ur prject, I was uneasy. Here was this challenging student wh had a reputatin fr single-mindedness and gd grades — the exact ppsite f me. I actually wanted t drp the class at ne pint, but stpped shrt because I didn’t want t give him the satisfactin f my chickening ut. I decided t stick t it n matter what.
After lng discussins we smehw agreed t d a study n the psychlgical well-being f teenagers. I wasn’t sure what it meant exactly, but at least we had a tpic.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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We started t meet regularly t draw up ur plans.





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One day I gt wrd that he was admitted t hspital fr a serius disease.





【续写话题】傲娇学霸与迷糊学渣
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We started t meet regularly t draw up ur plans. At first, it seemed that he dminated ur discussin fr he was familiar with the tpic, but I was the ppsite. Hwever, as days passed, I gradually gt invlved because he started t encurage me t explain my views! I culd feel his icy shell gradually melting away and eventually I culd discuss with him lking straight in his eyes. We finished the hypthesis and experiment prcedure, in great harmny actually. Things came ut that he was serius, indeed, but he seemed icy because he was lnely. We parted the day befre analysis discussin with cnfidence fr ur prject. But when I returned the next mrning, he was nwhere t be fund. The fact struck me feeling desperate. He didn’t cme either in the fllwing days.
One day I gt wrd that he was admitted t hspital fr a serius disease. It was the day befre deadline and I drwned myself ding analysis and preparing fr the presentatin. Hearing the wrd, I dashed t the hspital and fund him, my dear teammate, lying n the bed, face pale. His eyes sparkled as he saw me. Beside him I managed t finish the last tasks with his guidance--his fingers pinting at certain figures. Then next day I went fr the presentatin in class.
(2021年6月·新高考)
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thught f the surprise they were planning fr Mther's Day. Hw pleased and prud Mther wuld be when they brught her breakfast in bed. They planned t make French tast and chicken prridge. They had watched their mther in the kitchen. There was nthing t it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what t d.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went dwn the stairs quietly t the kitchen. They decided t bil the prridge first. They put sme rice int a pt f water and left it t bil while they made the French tast. Jeff brke tw eggs int a plate and added in sme milk. Jema fund the bread and put tw slices int the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned n the secnd stve burner t heat up the frying pan. Everything was ging smthly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was t ht and the bread turned black within secnds. Jenna threw the burnt piece int the sink and put in the ther slice f bread. This time, she turned dwn the fire s it cked nicely.
Then Jeff nticed steam shting ut f the pt and the lid starting t shake. The next minute, the prridge biled ver and put ut the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned ff the gas quickly. But the stve was a mess nw. Jenna tld Jef t clean it up s they culd cntinue t ck the rest f the prridge. But Jeff's hand tuched the ht burner and he gave a cry f pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cld water. Then she caught the smell f burning. Oh dear！The piece f bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右：
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared.





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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up.





【续写话题】母亲节的惊喜
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As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared. “Dn’t panic!” he handed each ne a wet twel, helping them clean the mess quickly. After that, Jeff stammered ut their plan, his face flushing. Hwever, Father laughed, “Sunds great! I can teach yu t ck.” At this, Jenna and Jef almst jumped t their feet, jy in eyes. Under his careful guidance, it didn’t take lng befre the French tast and chicken prridge were ready. Everything settled, Father left the kitchen, prmising t keep their secret.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up. Meeting their smiling eyes, Mther felt cnfused until they presented the breakfast and said “Happy Mther’s Day”. Mther gave them a tight hug, “Unbelievable! Yu can ck! It’s the biggest surprise I have received.” Her face lit up with happiness. “They have knwn hw t take care f thers.” Father said in respnse t her excitement, winking at Jenna and Jef. They culdn’t help giggling. It was a secret nly shared between them.
(2021年6月·浙江卷)
My dad, Gerge, nly had an eighth grade educatin. A quiet man, he didn't understand my wrld f schl activities. Frm age 14, he wrked. And his dad, Albert, tk the mney my dad earned and used it t pay family expenses.
I didn't really understand his wrld either: He was a livestck trucker, and l thught that I wuld surpass（超过） anything he had accmplished by the time l walked acrss the stage at high schl graduatin.
Summers in the mid, 70s were spent at hme shting baskets, hitting a baseball, r thrwing a ftball, preparing fr my future as a quarterback n a ftball team. In pr weather, I read abut sprts r practiced my trmbne（长号）.
The summer befre my eighth grade I was ne f a grup f bys that a neighbring farmer hired t wrk in his field. He explained ur basic task, the tractr fired up and we were ff, riding dwn the field lking fr weeds t spray with chemicals. After a shrt way, the farmer stpped and painted at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened ver and ver, but we sn learned t identify different grasses like cckleburs, lamb's-quarters, fxtails, and the king f weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring wrk, but I lked frward t the pay, even thugh I wasn't sure hw much it wuld amunt t.
At hme, my dad said, "A jb's a big step t grwing up. I'm glad yu will be cntributing t the husehld." My dad's wrds made me realize that my earning might nt be mine t d with as wished.
My labrs lasted abut tw weeks, and the farmer said there might be mre wrk, but I wasn't interested. I decided it was nt fair that l had t cntribute my mney.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右：
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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The pay day arrived at last.





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I understd immediately what my parents were wrried abut.





【续写话题】“我”的工资
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The pay day arrived at last. I was glad that I finally gt the payment after wrking hard fr tw weeks. While walking back hme with an excited mind. I cnceived many plans abut hw t dispse f it. I needed a new ftball because the ld ne we played had already wrn ut. I intended t purchase my favrite chclates. Upn appraching the huse, I nticed my dad and mm standing beside the ld truck, lking sadly. It seemed as if smething unpleasant happened. “Hw much d we still need t pay fr a new truck?". asked my mther. Three hundred dllars, but we just had tw hundred left.”
I understd immediately what my parents were wrried abut. Really, the truck my dad drve ften brke dwn n the way, which made my dad in truble. My parents had intended t buy a new truck but culdn't affrd it. Suddenly, I realized what I shuld d. Stepping frward, I said, “Dad, here is what I received fr my wrk. I think it wuld help yu a little.” A little surprised at what I said, my mm hugged me tightly. That night, befre I went t bed, l thught I wuld tell the farmer the next day that I wuld cntinue my wrk, after all l grew up.
(2021年1月·浙江卷)
Pumpkin (南瓜）carving at Hallween is a family traditin. We visit a lcal farm every Octber. In the pumpkin field, I cmpete with my three brthers and sister t seek ut the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have t carry ur pumpkins back hme, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-punder back last year.
This year, it was hard t tell whether my prize r the ne chsen by my 14-year-ld brther, Jasn, was the winner. Unfrtunately we frgt t weigh them befre taking ut their insides, but I was determined t prve my pint. All f us were hard at wrk at the kitchen table, with my mm filming the annual event. I’m unsure nw why I thught frcing my head inside the pumpkin wuld settle the matter, but it seemed t make perfect sense at the time.
With the pumpkin resting n the table, hle uppermst, I bent ver and pressed my head against the pening. At first I gt jammed just abve my eyes and then, as I went n with my task, unwilling t quit, my nse briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed t put my whle head int it, like a crk (软木塞) frced int a bttle. I was able t straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting n my shulders.
My excitement was shrt-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m ging t set it dwn, nw,” I said, and with Jasn helping t supprt its weight, I bent back ver the table t give it smewhere t rest. It was nly when I tried t remve my head that I realized getting ut was ging t be less straightfrward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nse gt in the way. I gt int a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and mved my head arund trying t find the right angle, but it was n use. “I can’t get it ut!” I shuted, my vice sunding unnaturally lud in the enclsed space.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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I was stuck fr five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger.





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That vide was psted the day befre Hallween.





【续写话题】尴尬的万圣节
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I was stuck fr five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger. Grwing mre panic, I began t cry. Frtunately, hearing me crying, dad came and helped me lay my head n the table, s my neck culd rest fr a while. Then he said t me “Listen, hney. I have t cut this pumpkin in half. ” I had n chice but t keep still with my eyes tightly clsed and listening t the knife mving n the pumpkin. Mments later, my head was finally released frm this hrrible pumpkin cage. Then mm tld me she had just filmed me managing t pull my head ut f the pumpkin.
That vide was psted the day befre Hallween. Actually my mm had asked whether she culd pst it n the Internet, because after all I was s embarrassed and lked s silly in it. Anyway, I ndded and supprted her idea. It turned ut that peple liked and frwarded it crazily n the Internet, nly t make me an Internet celebrity.
(2020年7月·浙江卷)
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single gal: t phtgraph plar bears. We were staying at a research camp utside “ the plar bear capital f the wrld ” — the twn f Churchill in Manitba, Canada.
Taking pictures f plar bears is amazing but als dangerus. Plar bears — like all wild animals — shuld be phtgraphed frm a safe distance. When I’m face t face with a plar bear, I like it t be thrugh a camera with a telepht lens. But smetimes, that is easier said than dne. This was ne f thse times.
As Elli and I cked dinner, a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur garlic bread.
The hungry bear fllwed his nse t ur camp, which was surrunded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He std n his back legs and pushed at the wden fence psts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pts hard, and fired blank shtgun shells int the air. Smetimes lud nises like these will scare bears ff. Nt this plar bear thugh — he just kept trying t tear dwn the fence with his massive paws (爪子).
I radied the camp manager fr help. He tld me a helicpter was n its way, but it wuld be 30 minutes befre it arrived. Making the best f this clse encunter (相遇), I tk sme pictures f the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wuldn’t last thrugh 30 mre minutes f the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but desn’t hurt them. S I apprached ur uninvited guest slwly and, thrugh the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry rar (吼叫), the bear ran t the lake t wash his eyes.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp.





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At that very mment, the helicpter arrived.





【续写话题】拍照北极熊遇险
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A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp. Then we realized that the spray had nly angered him even mre, fr he seemed much fiercer this time and vilently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, nt knwing what t d. At this critical mment, Elli grabbed several pieces f garlic bread and threw them ver the fence. It wrked! The bear stpped the attack and ran t the bread. But it wasn’t lng befre he ate up all the bread and came back again.
At that very mment, the helicpter arrived. “Thank gdness we are saved!” Elli cried ut. Once the helicpter landed, we gt nt it in n time, excited and relieved. When we were safe n the helicpter up in the air, I was amazed t spt that the bear had finally trn dwn the fence and ran twards the fd we left behind. I quickly tk ut the camera and phtgraphed the rare scene — we were rbbed by a plar bear!
(2020年1月·浙江卷)
“I’m ging t miss yu s much, Pppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent dwn t hug his ld friend gdbye. He std up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying nt t let his emtins (情绪) get the better f him.
His parents were nt quite able t keep theirs under cntrl. They had driven their sn several hurs ut f twn t the university where he wuld sn be living and studying. It was time t say gdbye fr nw at least. The family hugged and smiled thrugh misty eyes and then laughed.
The by lifted the last bag nt his shulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it.” he said. “I’ll see yu back hme in a mnth, kay?” His parents ndded, and they watched as he walked ut f sight int the crwds f hundreds f students and parents. The by’s mther turned t the dg, “Okay, Pppy, time t g back hme.”
The huse seemed quiet as a tmb withut the by living there. All that week, Pppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner, her favrite ty, r even in her daily walk. Her wners were sad t, but they knew their sn wuld be back t visit, Pppy didn’t.
They ffered the dg sme f her favrite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit n the sfa, but the ld girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. Her wners started t get wrried, “What shuld we d t cheer Pppy up?” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.”
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mm. “Withut anybdy left in the huse but us, this place culd use a bit f fun. Let’s get a little dg fr Pppy.”
It didn’t take lng befre they walked thrugh the frnt dr carrying a big bx. Pppy
welcmed them hme as usual, but when she saw the bx, she stpped. She put her nse n it. Her tail began wagging (摆动) ever s slwly, then faster as she caught the smell.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared.





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A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm the university.





【续写话题】小狗Pppy的陪伴
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Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared. Pppy jumped with jy at the sight f the little dg. She lwered her head t watch it curiusly. Then she became s excited that she accidentally kncked ver the bx in an attempt t get clser. With the bx tipping ver, ut came the little ne, wh was nt shy and instantly gt familiar with Pppy. It didn’t take lng befre the tw played arund the huse, cheerfully running after each ther.
A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm the university. He had been missing his parents and the dg since it was the first time that he had been away frm hme fr such a lng time. When the by caught sight f Pppy, he went rushing tward the dg and bent dwn t give her a big hug. Suddenly, the by nticed the little dg. “Oh my gd, wh is this?” His parents laughed at the lk f surprise n his face. “It’s Pppy’s new cmpanin.” said Mm.
热点练

(2022年10月·浙江十校联盟)
Charles Rse lived in the cuntry with his father, wh taught him t read and t write. Mr. Rse tld his sn that, when his mrning lessns were ver, he might amuse himself fr ne hur as he pleased.
There was a river near by. On its bank std the hut f a pr fisherman, wh lived by selling fish. His careful wife kept her wheel ging early and late. They bth wrked very hard t keep themselves abve want. But they were greatly trubled fr fear that their nly sn shuld never learn t read and t write. They culd nt teach him themselves, and they were t pr t send him t schl.
Charles called at the hut f this fisherman ne day, t inquire abut his dg, which was missing. He fund the little by, whse name was Je, siting by the table, n which he was making marks with a piece f chalk. Charles asked him whether he was drawing pictures.
“N. I am trying t write,” said little Je, “but I knw nly tw wrds. Thse I saw upn a sign, and I am trying t write them.”
“If I culd nly learn t read and write,” said he, “I shuld be the happiest by in the wrld.”
“Then I will make yu happy said Charles.” I am nly a little by, but I can teach yu that.”
“My father gives me an hur every day fr myself. Nw, if yu will try t learn, yu shall sn knw hw t read and t write.”
Bth Je and his mther were ready t fall n their knees t thank Charles. They tld him it was what they wished abve all things.
S, n the next day when the hur came, Charles put his bk in his pcket, and went t teach Je. Je learned very fast, and Charles sn began t teach him hw t write.
Sme time after, a gentleman called n Mr. Rse, and said, “Charles did nt always amuse himself. I ften see him g t the huse f the fisherman. I fear he ges ut in their bat.”
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The mment the gentleman left, Mr. Rse went in search f his sn.
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The next day, his father tk him t twn, and gave him bks fr himself and Je, with writing paper, pens, and ink.
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【参考范文】
The mment the gentleman left, Mr. Rse went in search f his sn. He went t the river, and walked up and dwn, in hpe f seeing the bat. Nt seeing it, he grew uneasy. He thught Charles must have gne a lng way ff. Unwilling t leave withut learning smething f him, he went t the hut. He put his head in at the windw, which was pen. There a pleasant sight met his eyes. Charles was at the table, ruling a cpybk Je was reading t him, while his mther was spinning in the crner. Charles was a little cnfused. He feared his father might nt be pleased; but he had n need t be uneasy, fr his father was delighted.
The next day, his father tk him t twn, and gave him bks fr himself and Je, with writing paper, pens, and ink. Charles was the happiest by in the wrld when he came hme. He ran t Je, his hands filled with parcels, and his heart beating with jy.
(2021年1月·八省联考)
During this past year, I’ve had three instances f car truble. Each time these things happened, I was sick f the way mst peple hadn’t bthered t help. One f thse times, I was n the side f the rad fr clse t three hurs with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windws, big signs that said NEED A JACK (千斤顶), and ffered mney. Nthing. Right as I was abut t give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled ver, and the father bunded ut.
He sized up the situatin and called fr his daughter, wh spke English. He cnveyed thrugh her that he had a jack but that it was t small fr the Jeep, s we wuld need smething t supprt it. Then he gt a saw (锯子) frm the truck and cut a sectin ut f a big lg n the side f the rad. We rlled it ver and put his jack n tp, and we were in business.
I started taking the wheel ff, and then, if yu can believe it, I brke his tire irn. N wrries: He handed it t his wife, and she was gne in a flash dwn the rad t buy a new tire irn. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the jb, and I was a very happy man.
The tw f us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pt f water fr us t wash ur hands. I tried t put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wuldn’t take it, s instead I went up t the truck and gave it t his wife as quietly as I culd. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexic, she said. They were in Oregn s Mmmy and Daddy culd wrk n a fruit farm fr the next few weeks. Then they wuld g hme.
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请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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When I was abut t say gdbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.





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After they left, I gt int my Jeep and pened the paper bag.





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When I was abut t say gdbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. I shk my head and said n, wndering why she asked such a questin — was she ging t treat me t lunch r smething? “Wait a minute,” said the girl, and then she went back t the truck. After a few minutes she came back with a paper bag. “Here are sme Mexican snacks and yu can have sme when yu are hungry,” the girl smiled. I was s surprised and tuched that wrds almst failed me. I just said a “WOW!” instead f a “Thank yu!” when I tk the bag.
After they left, I gt int my Jeep and pened the paper bag. When I saw what was in the bag, I was vercme with a mixture f respect and gratefulness. In additin t the snacks, there was the $20 bill. What a kind and respectable family! They are a perfect example f what kindness really means. And I’m sure I will pay it frward.
(2022·浙江C8联考)
Jayce began nticing when he was in kindergarten that he lked different frm his classmates. They had tw hands while he had ne. Due t their yung age, Jayce was encuraged that he was just like an angel with ne wing flded t prepare fr smething.
It started when ne by laughed at him. Frm that day, 5-year-ld Jayce turned sad. He returned hme with questins. “Why am I different? Why me? Why?” He cried t ask his mther, Lewis Seeing Jayce was mad at Gd fr making him that way, the pr mther felt it a huge dagger t her heart. What made her mre srrwful was that she didn’t knw what t d at that pint and hw t prvide answers t her sn’s questins which she culd never find ut herself. The white lie burst just like bubbles that day.
A few weeks later, Lewis turned n the TV t a news stry, where she was shcked t find ut the answer. It was Trashaun, an eighth grader, that displayed psitive energy frm his head t his te. The 14-year-ld sunny by perfrmed his slam dunks(大灌篮) n the TV, wh had been a hit n the Internet. Hwever, like Jayce, he had missed mst f his left arm since his childhd! Lewis called her sn Jayce in. The pr little by gt spellbund, watching dunk after dunk.
At the time, it seemed that watching Trashaun wuld simply be an inspiring mment fr Jayce. He saw Trashaun as a tugh rle mdel wh had a seemingly similar brn disability but led a brilliant life. And had it stayed just that, Lewis wuld have been happy. But little did she knw that a family friend had already reached ut t Trashaun, asking him t help set up a meeting with Jayce t rebuild his cnfidence.
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The day was nt spent drwning in self-pity but fr fun.





Staring at the shirt he sent Jayce, Trashaun began t talk abut their left arms.





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The day was nt spent drwning in self-pity but fr fun. The bys met at a middle Schl n a sunny afternn, and instantly bnded. Seeing his rle mdel in flesh, Jayce was t thrilled t say a single wrd but stand there with his muth pen wide. Amused by the sight, Trashaun held Lewis’ tiny hand as if Lewis had been his little brther t play hide-and-seek first, due t their similar cngenital defect. Gradually, Trashaun led Jayce t ride bikes arund the schl, and eventually, taught Jayce slam dunks. During the rest, Trashaun tk up a shirt that says “Five fingers can als make it”, which was prepared fr Jayce.
Staring at the skirt he sent Jayce, Trashaun began t talk abut their left arms. Trashaun smiled, “I guess yu may be puzzled, surprised, upset, even frustrated, hating Gd make yu this way.” He stpped, falling his eyes n Jayce’s, with ne hand patting Jayce’s head, “But I think this is the perfect way Gd made me. With five fingers, we als made it in lts f things just nw. The missed arm is like a wing flded by an angel. Only when yu’re tugh will yu see the wing!” Behind std Lewis, whse face was flded with tears. She cnfirmed the 14-year-ld wuld be a superher ne day, s wuld her sn, wh was unflding his hidden wing！
(2022年8月·浙江A9联考)
l was a single mther in my 30s wh lived dwn and ut with my daughter Peggy in a small apartment struggling hard t make ur needs meet.
One day, l headed t the dwntwn fr an interview, I sat dwn in the streetcar, and there against thse at was a beautiful silk umbrella with a silver handle decrated with gld scrlls. amng which there was a name carved.
On impulse I determined t find the wner myself. 1 gt ff the street car in the heavy rain and thankfully pened the umbrella t prtect myself. Then I searched a telephne bk fr the name. I fund it immediately and called it, waiting patiently, and then a lady answered.
“Yes," she said in surprise, with extreme excitement." It was my umbrella which had been stlen a year ag."
S appealing was her pleasure that l frgt I was lking fr a jb and went directly t her small huse. She lk the umbrella with teary eyes, explaining with chking vice that the umbrella was given by her parents, nw dead. Her happiness at retrieving(找回)this special pssessin was such that t have accepted her reward wuld have spiled smething. S l refused her ffer and left.
The fllwing mnths were hard. I can nly btain temprary emplyment, fr a small salary. What was wrse, I had just ls1 my last jb befre Christmas, with nly fifteen dllars left. Unless a miracle happened, I wuld be hmeless in January, fdless and jbless. l had prayed steadily fr weeks, and there had been n answer but this cldness and darkness.
The air was full f Christmas merriment, with the bells ringing and children shuting in the bitter dusk f the evening. But there shuld be n Christmas fr me, I knew, n gifts n remembrance whatsever.
Thinking f this, I culdn't cntrl my tears n my way hme, but l managed a smile s I culd greet my little daughter. She pened the dr fr mc and thrw herself in my arms, dreaming jyusly and demanding desirably fr her Christmas gift. There l std, frzen verwhelmed by misery.
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Suddenly, the drbell rang and Peggy ran fleetly t answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus.





Abruptly, a nte attached t ne package caught my eyes.





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Suddenly, the drbell rang and Peggy ran fleetly t answer it, calling that it must be Santa Claus. Then I heard a man's hearty vice cming and went t the dr. He was a delivery man with his arms full f parcels. "This is a mistake", I said, but he read the name n the parcels and they were fr me. When he had gne, I didn't knw what t d. Subsequently, Peggy and l sat n the flr, lking at each ther unbelievably. What a surprise! I searched fr the name f the sender.
Abruptly, a nte attached t ne package caught my eyes. I picked up the nte, which read "Thanks fr yur returning the umbrella. Merry Christmas!" It was the lady wh sent us these parcels. Hlding the nte tightly, I was n the verge f tears, with a stream f warmth spreading acrss my bdy. On the chilly Christmas, I frgt I had n mney fr the rent and nly fifteen dllars in my pcket. We just sat in ur small apartment unwrapping the gifts ne by ne in happiness. A sweet peace flded int me like a blessing, which made me hpeful again.
(2022·吉林高三一调)
Lisa wke up n Saturday mrning very excited. Tday she was turning 10. She thught her mther wuld make her a special breakfast. Last year n her birthday, Lisa wke up t the smell f pancakes and sausage cking. The kitchen table was full f fresh fruit and juice, and her family had even bught lts f fresh flwers t put n the table.
But when she went dwnstairs this mrning, her father, mther and brther were eating cereal (麦片) at the table, just like any ther day. N ne even said “Happy birthday.”
When the phne rang and her mther annunced that Lisa’s aunt wanted t speak with her, she knew that it must be t wish her the best n her 10th birthday. But t Lisa’s surprise, her aunt simply wanted t remind her t pick up her mail the next week while her aunt was ut f twn.
Lisa was quite cnfused. She thught that her family wuld say smething abut her special day, but she didn’t want t seem upset. She tried t be cheerful. After all, she was lking frward t meeting her friends in the park sn. Surely they were ging t be excited abut her birthday.
When Lisa arrived at the park, her friend Jane was the first t greet her. “Nice day, isn’t it, Lisa?” she asked.
Lisa, ready fr her friend t wish her a happy birthday, respnded excitedly, “Yes, it is! It’s a great day. Yu knw why?”
“Because it’s Saturday and the weather is great!” Jane replied.
Lisa ndded, but lked dwn in disappintment.
Sn the rest f her friends arrived, and they all had a gd time playing sccer and spending time tgether. But Lisa culdn’t help but think that it was strange that nne f them had mentined her birthday.
As she walked hme in the late afternn sun, Lisa tried her best nt t cry. Hw culd everyne frget her birthday? She was clse t tears by the time she reached her hme.
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On stepping in, Lisa was quite surprised.





When the birthday candles were lit, the warmest mment came.





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On stepping in, Lisa was quite surprised. The living rm was beautifully decrated, yet nbdy was in sight. Befre Lisa realized it, an excited shut came, “A surprise”. Peple crwded frm behind the dr, sfa and cupbard. Lisa saw her mther, father, brther, aunt, Jane and ther friends she just said gdbye t standing arund her, all laughing. “They all remember my birthday!” thught Lisa. Instantly, she felt her eyes a little wet. On the table lay a lvely birthday cake and her aunt was signaling all t gather arund.
When the birthday candles were lit, the warmest mment came. Everyne sent best wishes t Lisa heartily and gifts began t pile up in her arms. Then came the birthday sng sung gently tgether. In the sft candlelight, every smiling face was s tuching. Lking arund, Lisa felt a strng feeling arise, and that was happiness. “ Hw happy I am! I’m s blessed t have s many peple t lve me” Lisa thught. Tears welled up int her eyes again.
(2022·安徽江淮十校二模)
Andy and Eric were tw friends wh ften played tgether. One day, n their way back hme frm schl, they rde slwly, talking abut the fishing trip that they had planned fr the cming summer vacatin. While turning a crner, Andy cried ut, “A fight near the lake! Let’s g t watch!”
“N,” said Eric. “Let’s g hme and nt get invlved in their quarrel. Stay away frm it, r we may get int truble. What’s mre, ur parents are waiting fr us at hme and I dn’t want them t wrry abut me.”
“Yu are a cward (胆小鬼).” Andy laughed at him. Eric was a little annyed, but he didn’t say anything, just riding hme directly. The next day, he went t schl as usual.
Hwever, Andy had tld all the class that Eric was t timid t d anything brave. S the whle class laughed at him a lt. And frm then n, they lked dwn n Eric, unwilling t play with him. Eric was very sad but he didn’t blame Andy fr his being rude t him, because he learned that true curage is shwn mst in bearing misunderstanding when it was nt deserved, and that he ught t be afraid f nthing but ding wrng. Therefre, he ignred their teasing, studying even harder. What was different was that he had t g hme alne.
Several days later, Andy tgether with his new friends was riding hme. They were s absrbed in their cnversatin that they were unaware f everything else arund them.
Suddenly, Andy nticed an unusual buzz f nise. He came t a stp and lked curiusly up t the heavens. What he saw shcked and terrified him. A huge swarm f bees filled the sky like a black clud and the nisy mass seemed t be heading angrily twards them.
“Bees!” smene shuted. The bys were caught in great panic. All f them except Andy rde as fast as pssible t escape. Andy was t scared t mve.
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Andy stpped there, with the buzz luder and luder.





Dragging themselves ut f the lake, they struggled up t the shre.





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Andy stpped there, with the buzz luder and luder. Just at that mment, Eric rde rapidly twards him like an arrw. He stpped, threw ff his clthes and wrapped up their faces. After that, he shuted t Andy, “This way! There is a lake ahead!” With n time t waste, they rde furiusly in the directin f the lake, the crazy bees fllwing them. Finally, they made it t the lake. Off their bikes and int the cl water they lived, disappearing belw the surface and away frm the savage insects. After hlding their breath fr as lng as they culd, they came up fr air and nticed the bees had gne.
Dragging themselves ut f the lake, they struggled up t the shre. Andy lked at Eric gratefully and was ashamed f having called Eric a cward. He realized that Eric had true curage. He hugged Eric, saying “srry” t Eric repeatedly fr his rude behavir and asked fr his frgiveness. Eric frgave him happily. He and Andy were friends again and they went hme tgether as usual. Frm that, Andy learned what true curage was: never be afraid t d gd, but always fear t d evil.