【备考2023】高考英语热点+重难点专题特训学案（全国通用）——热点练12 短文改错

热点12 短文改错

1.判断名词是否可数，以及名词单复数及其所有格

根据名词本身属性及其前的修饰限定成分判断为可数名词，还是不可数名词，从而确定单复数;根据其前后词汇，判断是否用所有格;根据上下句的逻辑关系来判断单复数和所有格。

【例1】

（2021年全国甲卷）Many students say they will talk to their friend or classmates because they’re of the same age and can understand each other.

【解析】

考查名词复数，把their后的friend 改为friends。句意：许多同学说他们会和他们的朋友说或同学讲，因为他们是同龄人，能彼此理解。friend意为“朋友”为可数名词，结合句中修饰名词friend 的形容词性物主代词their，以及句子主语they，所以此处要用复数。故friend改为friends。

2.牢记易混形容词、副词的词义、词性，观察其在句中的比较范围

掌握易混形容词、副词的词义，牢记如 exciting与 excited， hard 与 hardly， possible 与 possibly， here 与there 等易混词的词义，根据句意看比较范围， 判断形式是否正确。如果是两者之间的比较，则用比较级;如果是三者或三者以上的比较，则用最高级。看比较级前是否误加了more，比较等级的固定句式是否准确。

【例3】（2019年全国II卷）

One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor.

【解析】

考查形容词及其比较级的用法。第一处把amazing 改为amazed，“amaze（使惊奇;使惊愕）”形容词形式有amazed（感到惊奇的）与amazing（令人惊奇的）。本句中形容主语的状态，应用amazed，表示主语“我”的感觉。第二处把better前的more去掉，句中better 为well（健康;身体好）的比较级形式，多音节的形容词或副词构成比较级才用more 加形容词或副词原形。

2022年全国甲卷

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My father often took me to his hospital when I was off my school. He showed me how his medical instruments was used. I felt so closely to him. However, after I went to high school, somehow I become distant from him. I was unwilling talk with him and often disobeyed his rule of not stay out with my friends too late. The disagreement was too sharp that neither he nor I knew what to settle it. One day, he talked with me or hoped to mend our relations. With the efforts made by all sides, we began to understand each other better.

2022年全国乙卷

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

We all know that cycling is a greatly exercise. A doctor tells me people who lives the longest are dancers and cyclists. Maybe it is because the combination of fresh air, smooth movement and exercise. Whether you ride a bicycle, you don’t use petrol. So they are not producing carbon dioxide and not cause air pollution. Just see how cars have been taken over our cities. They often run at high speeds, what may put our lives in danger. And there were traffic jams, too. Our cities will be better places if we replace cars with bicycle.

2021年全国甲卷

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last week our teacher asked us to fill in a questionnaire. One of the questions are: Who will you go in times of trouble? Here are the results. Many students say they will talk to their friend or classmates because they're of the same age and can understand each other. Some will turn out to their parents or teachers for help. Only a little choose to deal with the problems on our own. Their answers also show that they dislike talk to others. They kept very much to themselves. In my opinion, where in trouble, we should seek help from those we trust mostly.

2021年全国乙卷

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I love doing housework. I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals. I also water the flowers in the yard and tidying up my own bedroom whatever necessary. In my opinion, students can benefit a lot doing some housework. Firstly, doing housework was helpful for us to be a responsible person. Also, it gives our parents more time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship. What's most, doing housework can be a form of mentally relaxation from study. That's our view on housework. And hopes this can inspire more thinking on the topic!

【2020·全国卷I】

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside.  Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove， I waited patiently unless the oil was hot.  Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together.  ＂Not that way，＂ my mom tried to stop us but failed.  She was right.  It didn’t tum out as I had wished.

【2020·全国卷II】

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m surely you’ll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.

【2020·全国卷III】

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced eat things, we may become ill.

But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.              

1．（2022·四川绵阳·一模）

It seems that my English teacher, Miss Smith, real loves both English or teaching the subject. I think she influence me in two important way. Firstly, she makes me interesting in English. Now I was used to reading English books and watching English TV programs in my spare time. Secondly, she shows me how a teacher can use the students’ own creativity help them learn. Instead of just being a kind of audience for lessons, we take a part in the decision on which happens in the lessons. If I ever have to teach anything in the future, I’ll copy his method.

2．（2022·河南·模拟预测）

I remember a day when I first learned to ride a bike. It was a frightened yet fun experience. My granddad was the person which taught me. When I got on the bike for the first time, I had no ideas what I was doing. My granddad reminded me of that he would hold onto the back of the bike the whole time, and he didn’t. As soon as I started trying to balance me, he let it go. I was so scared that I fell off the bike and begin crying. He kept encouraging me get up and try again. After about one hour, I final mastered the art of riding a bike.

3．（2022·江西景德镇·一模）

Chinese Farmers’ Harvest Festival, fallen on the Autumnal Equinox every year, is a festival to express Chinese farmers’ good wishes for a better life and in the beauty of the countryside. On September 24th, I, together with a friend of me, was very lucky to attend the five Chinese Farmers’ Harvest Festival held in Gaoling, Fuliang. Not only we see many agricultural exhibits there, and we also enjoyed a variety of wonderful performances. However, what impressed me most were some agricultural products made of ceramics, which colors and carvings were vivid, even if they were real. It was really fascinating and I full enjoyed myself. Additionally, I witnessed the significant develop in rural areas in Jiangxi.

4．（2022·四川遂宁·模拟预测）

Dear Jim,

I’m very glad to hear from you. In your letter, you said you suffer from depression because of the heavy load of study and didn’t know how to get rid of it. Therefore, I am writing to offer you with some suggestions.

First of all, that is quite common for high school students to feel depressing sometimes. Which really matters is that you should face your problem and make up your mind to settle it. The most effectively way is to turn to teachers for help. They will surely provide you with useful and practical advices. Besides, take an active part in sports or you’ll feel more energetic than before. Hang out with friends is also good way to relax yourself.

I hope my suggestions can be of some help to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

5．（2022·陕西·西安中学模拟预测）

Richard is our foreign teacher, whom is from England. He has a interesting way to make his classes attractive and lively. For example, in last Friday, when he explained the meaning of “crawl” to us, he did not just tell us their definition from the dictionary. Instead, he lay on his stomach and move forward on his hands and knee slowly. We watched him with interest, laughed loudly. Thus the concept of the word rooted in our mind. Richard can speak some Chinese, and his pronunciation is not well. He often asks us to correct his mistakes. Have you heard of a teacher who learn from student? Richard does!

6．（2022·广西·北海市北海中学一模）

At a young age, I repeatedly heard a sentence from my grandparents, “Honesty is the best policy.” I didn’t true understand it until I was nine, when I broke a window of our classroom after the school. As no one saw it, I hurried home and tell my family happily about my “good luck”. Therefore, my father seriously said to me, “You know our family mottos: Honesty is the best policy. You broke the window, and you should responsible for it.” The next day, I apologized for my teacher. Instead of blame me, my teacher praised myself for my honesty. All in all, be honesty, and you’ll benefit from it!

7．（2022·黑龙江·佳木斯一中三模）

Yesterday, when I complained with my mom about too little entertainment, she share the story of her youth with me. In the 1980s, neither iPads nor smartphones were invented. Each time when evenings approached, the children around would crowd into the only house where had a television. We stared at the small screen until the program ended. Parent would make every effort to drag their children to bed when it was getting lately. But now, iPads and smartphones have taken place of televisions. No wonder my mom always says we are the generation growing up in a honey jar. After listen to my mom’s story I felt lucky to live so a happy and comfortable life.

8．（2022·四川省南充市高坪中学模拟预测）

Dear Hank,

I'm writing to apologize for having lost the book American Culture borrow from you last week.

My friends asked me to play the football yesterday afternoon and I put the book besides the basketball stand. Therefore, I forgot to bring it back afterwards and when I returned to the playgrounds, it wasn't there. I have put up a notice on the notice board to see if anybody took the book in mistake. If I can't find, I will buy a new one for you. I'm sorry for cause you some trouble. I really hoped that you can accept my sincerely apology.

Love,

Li Hua

9．（2022·江西南昌·模拟预测）

The summer holiday is coming. I’d like have lunch with Ren Zhengfei, president of the well-known Chinese tech company Huawei.

Mr. Ren was considered as a great man who always has everything mapped out ahead. And under him leadership, Huawei have become a high-tech giant worldwide. I will take him to Bailu restaurant although the food there is the most delicious in our city. In a meantime, I will listen to his story. Then I will ask him what is importance to make it happen today. Time permitted, I’ll ask for his advices for us teenagers.

I’m expecting for this lunch already.

10．（2022·全国·哈尔滨市第三十二中学校一模）

Last weekend, my fellow students and I participated in a unforgettable picking event on a farm.

Surrounding by hills, the farm looked like a giant park, with sweet flowers, tasty fruits and singing birds. At arrival, we became excited. Soon we set out to picking some peaches and oranges. Some fruits were so tall that we had to work together to pick it. It proved the power of teamworks. Then, a lecture takes place. A farmer instructed us how fruits should be planted and preserved, enabling us understand the hardship of farmers’ life. Hours passed and all of us were unwilling to leave.

How a significant and rewarding event it was! We could’'t be more happier at that moment.