2022年中考英语写作提升策略课件

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【2021广州中考真题】 今天，跳绳世界冠军李华给大家上了一节云体育课。请写一则英文的日记记录这特别的一课。日记需包括以下要点： 1.授课者：李华，14岁，红星中学学生； 2.上课内容：跳绳讲解和示范 3.你的收获和感受。 注意：1.参考词汇：跳绳(rpe skipping)、冠军(champin); 2.词数：80词左右（日记的开头已给出，不计入词数）; 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Mnday,May 31stDear Diary,Tday, we had a special nline PE lessn.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
第一步: 审题 Examine the tpic
体裁 Style
要点 infrmatin
要求 request
认真审题，在题干中划出相应内容
今天，跳绳世界冠军李华给大家上了一节云体育课。请写一则英文的日记记录这特别的一课。日记需包括以下要点： 1.授课者：李华，14岁，红星中学学生； 2.上课内容：跳绳讲解和示范 3.你的收获和感受。 注意：1.参考词汇：跳绳(rpe skipping)、冠军(champin); 2.词数：80词左右（日记的开头已给出，不计入词数）; 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Mnday,May 31stDear Diary,Tday, we had a special nline PE lessn.________________________
体裁：日记（应用文）人称：第三人称时态：一般过去时为主
第二步：列出提纲（ Outline）
Intrductin
Li Hua14 years ld the student f Hngxing Middle Schl
explain the way f rpe skippingshw us hw t
learn a lt abut skippingskip well by
第三步：根据提纲写句子(Write sentences)
介绍：The teacher was the wrld champin f rpe skipping. His name is Li Hua. He is 14 years ld. He is a student f Hngxing Middle Schl.内容：He explained the way f rpe skipping and shwed us hw t d it.收获和感受：I learnt a lt abut rpe skipping.I can skip well by practicing.
It was taught by a 14-year-ld by named Li Hua wh has becme the wrld champin f rpe skipping. Besides, Li Hua is a student f Hngxing Junir High Schl. Tday he wrked as a teacher and tried his best t teach us hw t skip rpes. First, he explained the way f rpe skipping carefully. Then, he skipped rpes himself t help us learn better. After that, he tld his experience t us.Frm the special lessn, I learnt a lt f tips abut rpe skipping.What’s mre, I learnt that the best way t d smething best is by prasticing it a lt. Practice makes perfect. What an interesting lessn we had!
写作提升策略一 巧用连接词：
It was taught by a 14-year-ld by named Li Hua wh has becme the wrld champin f rpe skipping. Besides, Li Hua is a student f Hngxing Junir High Schl. Tday he wrked as a teacher and tried his best t teach us hw t skip rpes. First, he explained the way f rpe skipping carefully. Then, he skipped rpes himself t help us learn better. After that, he tld his experience t us.Frm the special lessn, I learnt a lt f tips abut rpe skipping. What’s mre, I learnt that the best way t d smething best is by prasticing it a lt. Practice makes perfect. What an interesting lessn we had!
第四步：美化文章（Beautify the writing）
注意添加关联词，过渡句！书面要整洁！
表并列 and, als, as well as, bth … and …, What’s mre (而且), besides, in additin……….表对比 but, hwever, yet, althugh, while, …….表条件 if, unless, as lng as……表原因 because, because f, fr, since , as…表结果 s, therefre, as a result, s…that, such…that……表说明 like, such as, fr example ….表顺序 first(ly), secnd(ly), … first f all, then, after that next, finally ……..表总结 in a wrd, in my pinin (以我之见) ……表目的 in rder t, s that ……
写作提升策略二 词汇润色：
Tips： 1.高级词；2.短语；3.修饰词
写作提升策略三 句式提升：
感叹句：What a meaningful lessn!Hw interesting the bk is!比较级、最高级句型：比较级+and+比较级（越来越）the+比较级，the+比较级（越,就越） ne f the+最高级+名词复数（最之一）it作形式主语：It seems that smething bad has happened t him.被动语态：Chinese is spken by many peple arund the wrld.名言：Never say die.（永不言败）Where there is a will,there is a way.（有志者事竟成）Gd help thse wh help themselves.（天道酬勤）
宾语从句：The lessn has tld me that we shuld never give up.定语从句：This is the best film that I have ever seen.状语从句：结果状语从句（ / ）目的状语从句（s that...）条件状语从句（if / unless / as lng as）时间状语从句（befre / after / while / when / since / until）比较状语从句（ / nt ）原因状语从句（because / since / as）让步状语从句（althugh / thugh / even thugh / even if）
style、persn 、tense 、 spelling 体裁 人称 时态 拼写 grammar 、 capital 、punctuatin 语法 大小写 标点 infrmatin we knw and dn’t knw已知和未知要点……
第五步：检查改错（Check yur cmpsitin）
在时间允许的情况下可以先打草稿再抄写 ！
第六步：书写规范, 卷面整洁
审清作文体裁、时态、人称 、要点 、 要求
列出提纲，决定文章分几段,以及每段大体内容
把提示信息扩写成句,注意应用基本句型，要点全面
恰当地运用关联词，从词汇和句型方面润色文章
查拼写、语法、标点等问题；并加以改正。
【Let's practise小练笔】
随着“双减”政策的落地，中小学生也迎来了丰富的业余生活。假如你是李华，“双减”政策将在你市落实。请根据以下提示写一篇短文，谈谈“双减”政策落实后，你将如何规划自己的业余生活。内容包括：1．发展个人的兴趣爱好；2．多读书，多做家务；3．多参加社会活动。要求：1．语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺；2．词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；3．不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。参考词汇：Duble Reductin Plicy“双减”政策 I'm glad that Duble Reductin Plicy will be carried ut in ur city.________________________________________________________________________________
体裁：说明文人称：第一人称时态：一般将来时
Intrductin(开篇点题） Main bdy（文章主体） Cnclusin（总结）
Yur pinins
Develp sme hbbiesRead mre bksD husewrkTake part in mre scial activities
第三步&第四步:写&美(Write and beautify)
开篇点题But hw can I spend my spare time? Here are my plans.Nw I can’t wait t plan my after-schl life in advance.规划1 develp sme hbbiesI wuld like t develp sme interests, such as jining an art club, which will help me imprve my sense f beauty.I wuld like t take up sme healthy and meaningful hbbies t enrich my after-schl life and gain sme useful life skills at the same time.
规划2 read mre bks and d husewrkI will make full use f the time t read mre bks and help my parents with the husewrk.I will read as many bks as I can t pen my mind and take the respnsibility fr the husewrk.规划3 take part in mre scial activitiesI am ging t take part in mre scial activities s that I can imprve myself in many ways.In rder t imprve my abilities,I am ging t take part in mre scial activities.
总结 I'm sure the Duble Reductin Plicy will help us grw up healthily and happily.As lng as we can use ur free time wisely, ur life will be better and better.
I'm glad that Duble Reductin Plicy will be carried ut in ur city.Nw I can't wait t plan my after-schl life in advance.______, I wuld like t take up sme healthy and meaningful hbbies t enrich my after-schl life and gain sme useful life skills at the same time. _________, I will make full use f the time t read mre bks and help my parents with husewrk. ______, I am ging t take part in mre scial activities s that I can imprve myself in many ways.___________, I'm sure the Duble Reductin Plicy will help us grw up healthily and happily.
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