浙江省高考英语作文分类训练:感谢信
展开1. 感谢Mr. Smith的付出;
2. 选择礼物的理由;
3. 对他的美好祝愿。
注意:1. 词数80词左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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2.假设你是李华,请你用英文给我国选手谷爱凌(Eileen Gu)写一封祝贺信。她在第24届北京冬季奥运会上赢得两金一银奖牌,为中国队奖牌数名列前三做出了突出贡献。
内容包括:
1.表示祝贺;
2.她在奥运会上的优异成绩;
3.个人感想。
注意事项:
1.词数:100词左右;
2.开头及结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节使语句连贯、通顺。
Dear Eileen,
It is universally acknwledged that the 24th Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics was a success.
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Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
3.假如你是李华,你们学校下周将举办成人仪式典礼,校长要求每个同学写一封信给自己的父母,信的内容大致如下:
1. 成长与收获;
2. 表达感恩;
3. 继续努力。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear dad and mm,
Hw time flies!
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Yurs lving by,
Li Hua
4.假设你是李华,上周日不慎把书包(内含学生证……等重要物品)遗失在操场上,本校外教Mr.Smith捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信。
内容如下:
1.表示感谢;
2.回顾丢失和找到的过程;
3.再次表示感谢。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
5.假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友Simn在你校举办的中文演讲比赛国外友人专场中获得一等奖。请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 表示称赞;
3. 期待交流。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
6.假定你是李华,是一名高三学生。上周五,你校举办了一场英语演讲比赛,你荣获了一等奖。请根据下面的写作提纲,给外教Susan Hill写一封感谢信。内容包括:
1.写信的目的;
2.她如何帮助了你;
3.再次表示感谢。
注意:1.词数:100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Susan Hill,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
7.假定你是李华,你所在的国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信,以致谢奋战在抗击新冠肺炎一线的医护人员,请你根据下列要点写一封信投稿:
1. 表达谢意; 2. 个人感受; 3. 表达信心。
注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:流行病epidemic 疫情epidemic situatin 新型冠状病毒COVID-19
Dear Medical wrkers,
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Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
8.假定你是李华,你校来自英国的外教Peter即将回国,目前在上海准备相关手续。你代表你们班寄了一件有中国特色的礼物给他以示感谢。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示感谢:
2.说明礼物和快递信息;
3.表达临别祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
9.假定你是李华,在即将毕业之际,请你代表全班同学给外教Frank写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示感谢;
2. 回忆美好瞬间;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Frank,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
10.假定你是李华,你的外教David即将回国,请你代表全班给他写一封感谢信。内容包括:
1.表达感谢;
2.感谢原因;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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参考答案
1.Dear Mr. Smith,
On behalf f ur classmates, I’m here t cnvey ur heartfelt thanks t yu.
Lking back n the past year, we’ll never frget the help yu ffered us. It was under yur prfessinal guidance that we have made such rapid prgress in English. T express ur sincere gratitude t yu, we have carefully chsen a present fr yu — Bing Dwen Dwen, the masct f the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics. It stands fr jy, strength and willpwer and that’s als ur sincere wish t yu.
Wish yu a pleasant jurney hme and enjy yur life back in New Zealand!
(98 wrds)
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给写一封感谢信,感谢即将回国的外教。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
传达:shw→cnvey
快的:quick→rapid
代表:represent→stand fr
快乐的:happy→pleasant
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:It stands fr jy, strength and willpwer and that’s als ur sincere wish t yu.
拓展句:It stands fr jy, strength and willpwer, which is als ur sincere wish t yu.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Lking back n the past year, we’ll never frget the help yu ffered us.(非谓语动词作状语)
[高分句型2]It was under yur prfessinal guidance that we have made such rapid prgress in English.(强调句)
2.Dear Eileen,
It is universally acknwledged that the 24th Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics was a success. I am writing t cngratulate yu n yur achievements. The whle natin is prud f yu. Thank yu heartedly fr what yu have dne t ur cuntry.
The ther day, when watching the race n TV, I was fully attracted by yur excellent perfrmance in yur events. And I felt thrilled and cheered fr yu the mment yu reached yur gals skillfully and successfully. It was yu wh wn tw gld and ne silver medals, which cntributed t the final result—China at tp 3 f the medal list.
Yur success and spirit inspire me greatly, and I decide t fllw yu t d smething fr ur mtherland.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给我国选手谷爱凌(Eileen Gu)写一封祝贺信,祝贺她在第24届北京冬季奥运会上赢得两金一银奖牌,为中国队奖牌数名列前三做出了突出贡献。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
以……为骄傲:be prud f →take pride in
兴奋的:thrilled→excited
实现:reach→achieve
决定:decide t→be determined t
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Yur success and spirit inspire me greatly, and I decide t fllw yu t d smething fr ur mtherland.
拓展句:Yur success and spirit inspire me greatly, which makes me decide t fllw yu t d smething fr ur mtherland.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】 Thank yu heartedly fr what yu have dne t ur cuntry.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 It was yu wh wn tw gld and ne silver medals, which cntributed t the final result—China at tp 3 f the medal list.(运用了强调句和which引导非限制性定语从句)
3.Dear dad and mm,
Hw time flies! Tday I will becme a real adult and I knw what yu have dne fr me since I was brn. S I’m writing this letter t cnvey my deepest gratitude and lve t yu.
During these years, I gradually gained a lt f cnfidence frm yur cmpanin and encuragement. I still remember when I failed in maths exams and even tended t give it up, yu just patted me n the shulder and inspired me t keep n. What’s mre, yu praised me fr my earnest effrt and prgress, which really gave me a sense f achievement. T be gd parents is by n means an easy jb as I imagined befre, s I’m very grateful fr yur patience, guidance, respnsibility and affectin as well as all yu have dne fr me.
Dad and mm, I will spare n effrt t pursue my dream and try my best t live up t yur expectatin.
Lve yu frever!
Yurs lving by,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华,你们学校下周将举办成人仪式典礼,校长要求每个同学写一封信给自己的父母。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
表达:express→cnvey
感激:appreciatin→gratitude
鼓励:encurage→inspire
追求:g after→pursue
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:T be gd parents is by n means an easy jb as I imagined befre, s I’m very grateful fr yur patience, guidance, respnsibility and affectin as well as all yu have dne fr me.
拓展句:I’m very grateful fr yur patience, guidance, respnsibility and affectin as well as all yu have dne fr me because I have learned that t be gd parents is by n means an easy jb as I imagined befre.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Tday I will becme a real adult and I knw what yu have dne fr me since I was brn. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I still remember when I failed in maths exams and even tended t give it up, yu just patted me n the shulder and inspired me t keep n. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
4.Dear Smith,
I’m Li Hua, а student frm Xinhua Middle Schl. I’m writing this letter t thank yu fr returning my schlbag.
Last Sunday afternn, after I played basketball with my friends in the playgrund, I left my schlbag there wing t my carelessness. I was wrried because my student’s ID card, cellphne, wallet and sme dcuments were all in it, which are very imprtant t me. Just as I was at a lss, I was infrmed that my schlbag was at the schl’s Lst and Fund, where I knew it was yu that had picked up my schlbag and handed it in.
It’s such а great kindness f yu t d s. I’m extremely grateful t yu. Yu did set а gd example t us.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写封感谢信,感谢他捡到并归还了你的书包。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
感谢:thank→appreciate
归还:return→give back
由于:wing t=due t
重要的:imprtant→significant
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:I’m extremely grateful t yu. Yu did set а gd example t us.
拓展句:I’m extremely grateful t yu, wh did set а gd example t us.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I was wrried because my student’s ID card, cellphne, wallet and sme dcuments were all in it, which are very imprtant t me. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Just as I was at a lss, I was infrmed that my schlbag was at the schl’s Lst and Fund, where I knew it was yu that had picked up my schlbag and handed it in. (运用了where引导的定语从句和强调句型)
5.Dear Simn,
I’m writing t cngratulate yu with all my heart n yur winning the first prize in the Chinese Speech Cntest.
I’m amazed at yur extrardinary achievement since it’s difficult fr a freigner t have such a gd cmmand f Chinese speech. Yu have been wrking hard in the past few years. It’s yur devtin and diligence that cntribute t yur success. And I’d like t have an nline discussin with yu smetime, where we can share each ther’s experience f learning Chinese speech. I hpe it culd help bth f us make mre prgress in the future.
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的留学生朋友Simn在你校举办的中文演讲比赛国外友人专场中获得一等奖,要求考生写一封邮件表示称赞并且期待交流。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
非凡的:remarkable→extrardinary
精通,掌握:have a gd knwledge f→have a gd cmmand f
勤奋:handwrk→diligence
导致:lead t/result in→cntribute t
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:I’m writing t cngratulate yu with all my heart n yur winning the first prize in the Chinese Speech Cntest.
拓展句:Knwing that yu have wn the first prize in the Chinese Speech Cntest, i am writing t cngratulate yu with all my heart.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
It’s yur devtin and diligence that cntribute t yur success.(运用了强调句式)
[高分句型2]
And I’d like t have an nline discussin with yu smetime, where we can share each ther’s experience f learning Chinese speech.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3]
I hpe it culd help bth f us make mre prgress in the future.(运用了宾语从句,省略了引导词that)
6.Dear Susan Hill,
I am Li Hua, a student f Senir 3. I am writing t express my gratitude fr yur kind help.
Yu dn't knw hw excited I was t get the first prize in the English Speech Cntest held in my schl last Friday and I we it t yur kind help. I used t be t shy t speak alud in public. Luckily, yu asked me t practice several times in yur ffice and crrected my prnunciatin and intnatin. In additin, yu encuraged me t be cnfident and brave if I wanted t shw my talent n the stage.I made great prgress with yur kind help, withut which I culdn't have gt the prize.
Thank yu again fr yur kind help!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Susan Hill写一封感谢信。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
感激:gratitude →appreciatin → thanks
帮助:help→ aid →assistance
此外:in additin →what’s mre → besides
幸运地:luckily=frtunately
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Luckily, yu asked me t practice several times in yur ffice and crrected my prnunciatin and intnatin.
拓展句Luckily, yu asked me t practice several times in yur ffice,where yu crrected my prnunciatin and intnatin.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] In additin, yu encuraged me t be cnfident and brave if I wanted t shw my talent n the stage.(运用了if 引导的条件状语从句)
[高分句型2] I made great prgress with yur kind help, withut which I culdn't have gt the prize.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和虚拟)
7.One pssible versin:
Dear Medical wrkers,
I am Li Hua, a high middle schl student. I m writing t express sincere gratitude t yu all fr yur devtin and sacrifice in this battle against COVID-19.
In this epidemic, it is yu wh, despite the lack f equipment and the ptential f infectin, desperately rescue thse infected but striving fr life. It is als yu wh have shed new light n(阐明; 解释) the virus with expertise(专业知识) t build up ur cnfidence t defeat it. It is yu wh deserve all the admiratin and lve!
I can never express ur thankfulness t much fr yur selfless cntributin. It’s widely believed that with ur jint effrts China will win the battle and make a quick recvery.
Gd luck and stay well!
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写封感谢信,致谢奋战在抗击新冠肺炎一线的医护人员。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
感谢:thanks→appreciatin/gratitude
阐明、解释:explain →shed new light n
可能:pssibility→ptential
挽救:save= rescue
尽管,虽然:in spite f=despite=regardless f
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I can never express ur thankfulness t much fr yur selfless cntributin.
拓展句:The cntributin yu make is s great that I can't fully cnvey ur thankfulness t much.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] it is yu wh, despite the lack f equipment and the ptential f infectin, desperately rescue thse infected but striving fr life. (运用了 强调句型)
[高分句型2] It’s widely believed that with ur jint effrts China will win the battle and make a quick recvery. (运用了主语从句)
8.Dear Peter:
On behalf f everyne in my class, I am writing t express appreciatin t yu. But fr yur lively classes, we wuldn’t have made great prgress in ral English.
We like t present yu a traditinal Chinese knt, a decrative handicraft art that began as a frm f Chinese flk art in the Tang and Sng Dynasty (960-1279 AD) in China. As yu may knw, Chinese knt stands fr lng-lasting friendship that we have frmed in the past few years. It is delivered t yur hme address back in Lndn.
Befre yur departure, I hpe yu all the best. Shuld yu be available smetime, cme back t China and meet us again.
Sincerely yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇为应用文,要求考生给英国外教Peter写一封邮件,对他的教导表达感激,并说明赠送礼物,最后临别送出赠言。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
感激:thanks→appreciatin
空闲的:free→available
永远的:frever→lng-lasting
如果没有:withut=but fr
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Withut yur lively classes, we wuldn’t have made great prgress in ral English.
拓展句:Withut yur lively classes, we wuldn’t have made great prgress in ral English as we had expected fr s lng.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Chinese knt stands fr lng-lasting friendship that we have frmed in the past few years. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Withut yur lively classes, we wuldn’t have made great prgress in ral English. (运用了与过去事实相反的虚拟语气)
9.Dear Mike,
On the ccasin f graduatin, I feel a bit upset. But meanwhile, I want t send ur sincere gratitude fr yur kind help with ur English learning n behalf f the whle class. I still remember what yu have devted t imprving ur ral English and English writing. Besides, yu als frankly shared yur learning experience with us. Additinally, withut yur help, I wuld nt have been a tp student in English and wuld nt have wn the English Speech Cntest. All in all, wrds fail t express ur thankfulness t yu. I d hpe that yu will have a bright future and that ur friendship will last frever!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生代表全班同学给外教Frank写一封电子邮件,对他表示感谢,回忆美好瞬间并表达祝愿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
真诚的:sincere→genuine
感激:gratitude→appreciatin
贡献:devte→cntribute
表达:express→cnvey
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Additinally, withut yur help, I wuld nt have been a tp student in English and wuld nt have wn the English Speech Cntest.
拓展句:Additinally, had yu nt helped me, I wuld nt have been a tp student in English and wuld nt have wn the English Speech Cntest.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I still remember what yu have devted t imprving ur ral English and English writing. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I d hpe that yu will have a bright future and that ur friendship will last frever! (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
10.Dear Mr. David,
I've heard that yu're leaving China sn, s I'm writing t express my thanks.
I can well remember there was a time when I had great difficulty with my English prnunciatin. It was yu wh taught me hw t prnunce wrds crrectly. Under yur patient guidance I gradually made prgress and began t take interest in English. Thanks again fr yur generus help.
Wish yu a pleasant jurney hme.
Yurs
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生外教Davi写一封感谢信,代表全班表示感谢。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
感谢:thanks→gratitude
做某事有困难:have difficulty with→have truble with
对……感兴趣:take interest in→shw interest in
令人愉快的:pleasant→enjyable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Under yur patient guidance I gradually made prgress and began t take interest in English.
拓展句:Because yu guided me patiently, I gradually made prgress and began t take interest in English.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I can well remember there was a time when I had great difficulty with my English prnunciatin. (运用了when引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It was yu wh taught me hw t prnunce wrds crrectly. (运用了强调句型)
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