2023届高考英语二轮复习浙江省高考英语作文分类训练感谢信作业含答案

感谢信/祝贺信

1．假如你是李华。在你们学校任教一年的新西兰外教Mr. Smith即将结束教学任务启程回国。作为班长，你代表同学们在班级的欢送会上致欢送辞，并赠送礼物冰墩墩(Bing Dwen Dwen)，内容包括：

1. 感谢Mr. Smith的付出；

2. 选择礼物的理由；

3. 对他的美好祝愿。

注意：1. 词数80词左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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2．假设你是李华，请你用英文给我国选手谷爱凌（Eileen Gu）写一封祝贺信。她在第24届北京冬季奥运会上赢得两金一银奖牌，为中国队奖牌数名列前三做出了突出贡献。

内容包括：

1．表示祝贺；

2．她在奥运会上的优异成绩；

3．个人感想。

注意事项：

1．词数：100词左右；

2．开头及结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

3．可适当增加细节使语句连贯、通顺。

Dear Eileen,

It is universally acknowledged that the 24th Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics was a success.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

3．假如你是李华，你们学校下周将举办成人仪式典礼，校长要求每个同学写一封信给自己的父母，信的内容大致如下：

1. 成长与收获；

2. 表达感恩；

3. 继续努力。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear dad and mom,

How time flies!

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Yours loving boy,

Li Hua

4．假设你是李华，上周日不慎把书包(内含学生证……等重要物品)遗失在操场上，本校外教Mr.Smith捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信。

内容如下：

1.表示感谢；

2.回顾丢失和找到的过程；

3.再次表示感谢。

注意:

1.词数100左右；

2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Smith,

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Yours,

Li Hua

5．假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Simon在你校举办的中文演讲比赛国外友人专场中获得一等奖。请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括：

1. 写信目的；

2. 表示称赞；

3. 期待交流。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

6．假定你是李华，是一名高三学生。上周五，你校举办了一场英语演讲比赛，你荣获了一等奖。请根据下面的写作提纲，给外教Susan Hill写一封感谢信。内容包括：

1．写信的目的；

2．她如何帮助了你；

3．再次表示感谢。

注意：1．词数：100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Susan Hill,

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Yours,

Li Hua

7．假定你是李华，你所在的国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信，以致谢奋战在抗击新冠肺炎一线的医护人员，请你根据下列要点写一封信投稿：

1. 表达谢意; 2. 个人感受; 3. 表达信心。

注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：流行病epidemic       疫情epidemic situation       新型冠状病毒COVID-19

Dear Medical workers,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

8．假定你是李华，你校来自英国的外教Peter即将回国，目前在上海准备相关手续。你代表你们班寄了一件有中国特色的礼物给他以示感谢。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

1.表示感谢：

2.说明礼物和快递信息；

3.表达临别祝愿。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

9．假定你是李华，在即将毕业之际，请你代表全班同学给外教Frank写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1. 表示感谢；

2. 回忆美好瞬间；

3. 表达祝愿。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Frank,

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Yours,

Li Hua

10．假定你是李华，你的外教David即将回国，请你代表全班给他写一封感谢信。内容包括：

1.表达感谢；

2.感谢原因；

3.你的祝愿。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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参考答案

1．Dear Mr. Smith,

On behalf of our classmates, I’m here to convey our heartfelt thanks to you.

Looking back on the past year, we’ll never forget the help you offered us. It was under your professional guidance that we have made such rapid progress in English. To express our sincere gratitude to you, we have carefully chosen a present for you — Bing Dwen Dwen, the mascot of the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics. It stands for joy, strength and willpower and that’s also our sincere wish to you.

Wish you a pleasant journey home and enjoy your life back in New Zealand!

(98 words)

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给写一封感谢信，感谢即将回国的外教。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

传达：show→convey

快的：quick→rapid

代表：represent→stand for

快乐的：happy→pleasant

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：It stands for joy, strength and willpower and that’s also our sincere wish to you.

拓展句：It stands for joy, strength and willpower, which is also our sincere wish to you.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]Looking back on the past year, we’ll never forget the help you offered us.(非谓语动词作状语)

[高分句型2]It was under your professional guidance that we have made such rapid progress in English.(强调句)

2．Dear Eileen,

It is universally acknowledged that the 24th Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics was a success. I am writing to congratulate you on your achievements. The whole nation is proud of you. Thank you heartedly for what you have done to our country.

The other day, when watching the race on TV, I was fully attracted by your excellent performance in your events. And I felt thrilled and cheered for you the moment you reached your goals skillfully and successfully. It was you who won two gold and one silver medals, which contributed to the final result—China at top 3 of the medal list.

Your success and spirit inspire me greatly, and I decide to follow you to do something for our motherland.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给我国选手谷爱凌（Eileen Gu）写一封祝贺信，祝贺她在第24届北京冬季奥运会上赢得两金一银奖牌，为中国队奖牌数名列前三做出了突出贡献。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

以……为骄傲：be proud of →take pride in

兴奋的：thrilled→excited

实现：reach→achieve

决定：decide to→be determined to

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Your success and spirit inspire me greatly, and I decide to follow you to do something for our motherland.

拓展句：Your success and spirit inspire me greatly,   which makes me decide to follow you to do something for our motherland.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】 Thank you heartedly for what you have done to our country.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】 It was you who won two gold and one silver medals, which contributed to the final result—China at top 3 of the medal list.（运用了强调句和which引导非限制性定语从句）

3．Dear dad and mom,

How time flies! Today I will become a real adult and I know what you have done for me since I was born. So I’m writing this letter to convey my deepest gratitude and love to you.

During these years, I gradually gained a lot of confidence from your companion and encouragement. I still remember when I failed in maths exams and even tended to give it up, you just patted me on the shoulder and inspired me to keep on. What’s more, you praised me for my earnest effort and progress, which really gave me a sense of achievement. To be good parents is by no means an easy job as I imagined before, so I’m very grateful for your patience, guidance, responsibility and affection as well as all you have done for me.

Dad and mom, I will spare no effort to pursue my dream and try my best to live up to your expectation.

Love you forever!

Yours loving boy,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你们学校下周将举办成人仪式典礼，校长要求每个同学写一封信给自己的父母。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

表达：express→convey

感激：appreciation→gratitude

鼓励：encourage→inspire

追求：go after→pursue

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：To be good parents is by no means an easy job as I imagined before, so I’m very grateful for your patience, guidance, responsibility and affection as well as all you have done for me.

拓展句：I’m very grateful for your patience, guidance, responsibility and affection as well as all you have done for me because I have learned that to be good parents is by no means an easy job as I imagined before.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] Today I will become a real adult and I know what you have done for me since I was born. (运用了what引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] I still remember when I failed in maths exams and even tended to give it up, you just patted me on the shoulder and inspired me to keep on. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)

4．Dear Smith,

I’m Li Hua, а student from Xinhua Middle School. I’m writing this letter to thank you for returning my schoolbag.

Last Sunday afternoon, after I played basketball with my friends in the playground, I left my schoolbag there owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my student’s ID card, cellphone, wallet and some documents were all in it, which are very important to me. Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school’s Lost and Found, where I knew it was you that had picked up my schoolbag and handed it in.

It’s such а great kindness of you to do so. I’m extremely grateful to you. You did set а good example to us.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写封感谢信，感谢他捡到并归还了你的书包。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

感谢：thank→appreciate

归还：return→give back

由于：owing to=due to

重要的：important→significant

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：I’m extremely grateful to you. You did set а good example to us.

拓展句：I’m extremely grateful to you, who did set а good example to us.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] I was worried because my student’s ID card, cellphone, wallet and some documents were all in it, which are very important to me. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school’s Lost and Found, where I knew it was you that had picked up my schoolbag and handed it in. (运用了where引导的定语从句和强调句型)

5．Dear Simon,

I’m writing to congratulate you with all my heart on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Speech Contest.

I’m amazed at your extraordinary achievement since it’s difficult for a foreigner to have such a good command of Chinese speech. You have been working hard in the past few years. It’s your devotion and diligence that contribute to your success. And I’d like to have an online discussion with you sometime, where we can share each other’s experience of learning Chinese speech. I hope it could help both of us make more progress in the future.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的留学生朋友Simon在你校举办的中文演讲比赛国外友人专场中获得一等奖，要求考生写一封邮件表示称赞并且期待交流。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

非凡的：remarkable→extraordinary

精通，掌握：have a good knowledge of→have a good command of

勤奋：handwork→diligence

导致：lead to/result in→contribute to

2.句式拓展

同义句

原句：I’m writing to congratulate you with all my heart on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Speech Contest.

拓展句：Knowing that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Speech Contest, i am writing to congratulate you with all my heart.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]

It’s your devotion and diligence that contribute to your success.（运用了强调句式）

[高分句型2]

And I’d like to have an online discussion with you sometime, where we can share each other’s experience of learning Chinese speech.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型3]

I hope it could help both of us make more progress in the future.（运用了宾语从句，省略了引导词that）

6．Dear Susan Hill,

I am Li Hua, a student of Senior 3. I am writing to express my gratitude for your kind help.

You don't know how excited I was to get the first prize in the English Speech Contest held in my school last Friday and I owe it to your kind help. I used to be too shy to speak aloud in public. Luckily, you asked me to practice several times in your office and corrected my pronunciation and intonation. In addition, you encouraged me to be confident and brave if I wanted to show my talent on the stage.I made great progress with your kind help, without which I couldn't have got the prize.

Thank you again for your kind help!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Susan Hill写一封感谢信。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

感激：gratitude →appreciation → thanks

帮助：help→ aid →assistance

此外：in addition →what’s more → besides

幸运地：luckily=fortunately

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Luckily, you asked me to practice several times in your office and corrected my pronunciation and intonation.

拓展句Luckily, you asked me to practice several times in your office,where you corrected my pronunciation and intonation.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] In addition, you encouraged me to be confident and brave if I wanted to show my talent on the stage.（运用了if 引导的条件状语从句）

[高分句型2] I made great progress with your kind help, without which I couldn't have got the prize.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和虚拟）

7．One possible version:

Dear Medical workers,

I am Li Hua, a high middle school student. I m writing to express sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice in this battle against COVID-19.

In this epidemic, it is you who, despite the lack of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but striving for life. It is also you who have shed new light on(阐明; 解释) the virus with expertise(专业知识) to build up our confidence to defeat it. It is you who deserve all the admiration and love!

I can never express our thankfulness too much for your selfless contribution. It’s widely believed that with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.

Good luck and stay well!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写封感谢信，致谢奋战在抗击新冠肺炎一线的医护人员。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

感谢：thanks→appreciation/gratitude

阐明、解释：explain →shed new light on

可能：possibility→potential

挽救：save= rescue

尽管，虽然：in spite of=despite=regardless of

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I can never express our thankfulness too much for your selfless contribution.

拓展句：The contribution you make is so great that I can't fully convey our thankfulness too much.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] it is you who, despite the lack of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but striving for life. (运用了 强调句型）

[高分句型2] It’s widely believed that with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery. (运用了主语从句)

8．Dear Peter:

On behalf of everyone in my class, I am writing to express appreciation to you. But for your lively classes, we wouldn’t have made great progress in oral English.

We like to present you a traditional Chinese knot, a decorative handicraft art that began as a form of Chinese folk art in the Tang and Song Dynasty (960-1279 AD) in China. As you may know, Chinese knot stands for long-lasting friendship that we have formed in the past few years. It is delivered to your home address back in London.

Before your departure, I hope you all the best. Should you be available sometime, come back to China and meet us again.

                                                                                                           Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇为应用文，要求考生给英国外教Peter写一封邮件，对他的教导表达感激，并说明赠送礼物，最后临别送出赠言。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

感激：thanks→appreciation

空闲的：free→available

永远的：forever→long-lasting

如果没有：without=but for

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Without your lively classes, we wouldn’t have made great progress in oral English.

拓展句：Without your lively classes, we wouldn’t have made great progress in oral English as we had expected for so long.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] Chinese knot stands for long-lasting friendship that we have formed in the past few years. (运用了that引导的定语从句)

[高分句型2] Without your lively classes, we wouldn’t have made great progress in oral English. (运用了与过去事实相反的虚拟语气)

9．Dear Mike,

On the occasion of graduation, I feel a bit upset. But meanwhile, I want to send our sincere gratitude for your kind help with our English learning on behalf of the whole class. I still remember what you have devoted to improving our oral English and English writing. Besides, you also frankly shared your learning experience with us. Additionally, without your help, I would not have been a top student in English and would not have won the English Speech Contest. All in all, words fail to express our thankfulness to you. I do hope that you will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生代表全班同学给外教Frank写一封电子邮件，对他表示感谢，回忆美好瞬间并表达祝愿。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

真诚的：sincere→genuine

感激：gratitude→appreciation

贡献：devote→contribute

表达：express→convey

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Additionally, without your help, I would not have been a top student in English and would not have won the English Speech Contest.

拓展句：Additionally, had you not helped me, I would not have been a top student in English and would not have won the English Speech Contest.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] I still remember what you have devoted to improving our oral English and English writing. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] I do hope that you will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever! (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

10．Dear Mr. David,

I've heard that you're leaving China soon, so I'm writing to express my thanks.

I can well remember there was a time when I had great difficulty with my English pronunciation. It was you who taught me how to pronounce words correctly. Under your patient guidance I gradually made progress and began to take interest in English. Thanks again for your generous help.

 Wish you a pleasant journey home.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生外教Davi写一封感谢信，代表全班表示感谢。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

感谢：thanks→gratitude

做某事有困难：have difficulty with→have trouble with

对……感兴趣：take interest in→show interest in

令人愉快的：pleasant→enjoyable

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Under your patient guidance I gradually made progress and began to take interest in English.

拓展句：Because you guided me patiently, I gradually made progress and began to take interest in English.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] I can well remember there was a time when I had great difficulty with my English pronunciation.   (运用了when引导的限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] It was you who taught me how to pronounce words correctly. (运用了强调句型)