高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信

感谢信/祝贺信

1．假如你是李华，前不久，你校英国交换生Bob给你推荐了一本英文小说，读后你的收获很大。请给他写封邮件，包括以下内容：

1. 表达感激之情；

2. 介绍你的收获；

3. 恳求指导。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右;

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Bob,

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

2．假定你是高一新生李华，开学第一天得到你校志愿者王川的帮助，请你写一封感谢信给他，要点如下：

1. 感谢对方提供的具体帮助;

2. 再次致谢。

注意：1. 词数80左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Wang Chuan,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

3．假定你是高三学生李华，暑假参加了在加拿大的姐妹学校Southpointe Academy的游学活动，回国后你想给寄宿家庭（host family）的小伙伴Barry写一封感谢信，内容包括：

1. 感谢他们一家的照顾；

2. 分享游学的体会；

3. 询问寄给他们的礼物是否收到；

4. 邀请他们一家来中国游玩。

注意：

1. 词数80字左右；

2. 可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Barry,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

4．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter最近在某电视台举办的汉语演讲比赛中获得第一名，请你写一封英文邮件，内容包括：

1、向他表示祝贺；

2、你认为他获奖原因；

3、请教参赛经验。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

5．假定你是李华，你的留学生好友Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛(Chinese Traditional Culture Contest)”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信,内容包括：

1.表示祝贺；

2.回顾他的付出和努力；

3.期待他为弘扬中国文化做出贡献。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Peter,

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

6．假设你是李华，上周你因病住院，在住院期间你的主治大夫黄医生对你精心照顾，现在你已经出院回家。请你按照以下提示写封信给黄医生表达感谢。

1. 对黄医生的精心照顾表示感谢

2. 描述黄医生对你住院期间的帮助

3. 邀请黄医生参加你的18岁生日聚会。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

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7．假定你是学生会主席李华，学生会举办的英语演讲比赛（English Speech Contest）得到了外教Pam的大力帮助。活动已圆满结束，请你给她写一封感谢信。内容包括：

1. 表达感谢；

2. 外教的帮助；

3. 同学的收获。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Pam,

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

8．假定你是李华。你已成功申请就读英国圣安德鲁斯大学(the University of St Andrews)。在申请过程中，你得到了英国外教Ms. Brown的大力帮助。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括：

1.告知你被录取；

2.感谢她的帮助；

3.期待再见。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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9．假定你是学生李华，你在学校组织的第三届用英语讲中国故事挑战赛(“Stories of China Retold in English”Challenge)中获得冠军。请撰写一封英语邮件给外教David，分享这一喜讯并感谢他在赛前给予你的帮助。内容包括：

1. 告知喜讯;

2. 回忆外教提供的帮助并表达感谢。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右;

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear David,

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

10．假定你是学生会主席李华，学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动(Work Creates a Better Life)得到了外教Patrick的大力支持。活动已经圆满结束，请你给他写一封感谢信。内容包括：

1. 表示感谢；

2. 外教的帮助；

3. 活动的反响。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Patrick,

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

1．Dear Bob,

I’m writing to express my sincere appreciation to you for recommending me the English novel.

The recommended novel, whose languages are beautiful and plain to read, has brought me many unexpected benefits. Having finished reading it, I have acquired a larger vocabulary, which, in turn, has improved my writing skills. Besides, the English novel opens me up to new experiences and perspectives, offering me new information about culture and society that I never knew before.

Please accept my thanks once again. I really hope you can provide me with some more guidance on reading English novels.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，前不久，你校英国交换生Bob给你推荐了一本英文小说，读后你的收获很大。请给他写封邮件。

【详解】1.词汇积累

表达：express→convey

指导：guidance→instruction

获得：acquire→obtain

此外：besides→in addition to

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Besides, the English novel opens me up to new experiences and perspectives, offering me new information about culture and society that I never knew before.

拓展句：Besides, not only does the English novel open me up to new experiences and perspectives, but also it offers me new information about culture and society that I never knew before.

【点睛】[高分句型1] The recommended novel, whose languages are beautiful and plain to read, has brought me many unexpected benefits. (运用了whose引导非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Having finished reading it, I have acquired a larger vocabulary, which, in turn, has improved my writing skills. (运用了现在分词作状语)

2．Dear Wang Chuan,

I’m writing to say thanks to you. You were my first person I met at this school. l will always remember the day when I first met you.

I felt confused when I came into the school, because everything here was new and strange to me. Then you appeared and gave me a hand. As a volunteer, you helped me find my dormitory, where you even made the bed for me. Besides, you encouraged me and made me get used to the new school.

Thank you for giving me great support. And I hope our friendship will last life-long.

 Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本文是一篇应用文。开学第一天得到你校志愿者王川的帮助，请你写一封感谢信给他，要点如下：1. 感谢对方提供的具体帮助；2. 再次致谢。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

表达：say→express

感谢：thanks→gratitude

遇到：meet→encounter

此外：besides→furthermore

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Then you appeared and gave me a hand.

拓展句：Then, it was your appearance that gave me a hand.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I felt confused when I came into the school, because everything here was new and strange to me. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句以及because引导的原因状语从句)

【高分句型2】As a volunteer, you helped me find my dormitory, where you even made the bed for me. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)

3．One possible version:

Dear Barry,

I want to express my sincere gratitude for your hospitality during my stay with your family in Canada. I had an amazing time getting to know all of you, and I truly appreciate the kindness and care you showed me.

The study tour at Southpointe Academy was unforgettable. I became familiar with Canadian culture and made many new friends, including you. The classes were challenging, but the teachers were supportive and encouraging. I will never forget the memories I made during my time there.

By the way, have the gifts I sent to you all arrived safely? Please let me know if there are any issues with delivery. Lastly, I would like to invite you and your family to visit China. I would love to show you around and share my own culture and traditions with you.

Thank you once again for everything.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给游学期间寄宿家庭的小伙伴Barry写一封感谢信，需要感谢他们一家的照顾，分享自己游学的体会，询问寄给他们的礼物是否收到，并邀请他们一家来中国游玩。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

真诚的：sincere→genuine, earnest, heartfelt

感激：gratitude→thanks, gratefulness

熟悉，了解：become familiar with→familiarize oneself with, be acquainted with

有挑战性的：challenging→demanding

给予帮助的：supportive→helpful, caring

最后：lastly→finally, last but not least

2. 句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：The classes were challenging, but the teachers were supportive and encouraging.

拓展句：Challenging though the classes were, the teachers were supportive and encouraging.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I had an amazing time getting to know all of you, and I truly appreciate the kindness and care you showed me.（运用了关系代词引导限制性定语从句修饰先行词the kindness and care并省略关系代词）

【高分句型2】Please let me know if there are any issues with delivery.（运用了if引导条件状语从句）

4．Dear Peter,

Having received the news that you’ve won the first prize in the Chinese Speech Competition held recently, I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you.

It comes as no surprise to me that you have won first prize because you have been practicing Chinese since you studied here three years ago. It is your devotion, persistence and strenuous endeavors that eventually allow you to gain rapid progress in Chinese. Your success is also an encouragement for me to study hard. I will take part in an English competition. Would you like to give some advice?

Congratulations again on your success.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本文是一篇应用文。你的美国朋友Peter最近在某电视台举办的汉语演讲比赛中获得第一名，请你写一封英文邮件，内容包括：1、向他表示祝贺；2、你认为他获奖原因；3、请教参赛经验。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

因为：because→since

获得：gain→obtain

参加：take part in→participate in

建议：advice→suggestion

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I will take part in an English competition. Would you like to give some advice?

拓展句：Would you like to give some advice becuase I will take part in an English competition.

【点睛】【高分句型1】It comes as no surprise to me that you have won first prize because you have been practicing Chinese since you studied here three years ago. (运用了that引导的主语从句，because引导的原因状语从句以及since引导的时间状语从句)

【高分句型2】It is your devotion, persistence and strenuous endeavors that eventually allow you to gain rapid progress in Chinese. (运用了强调句型)

5．[参考范文]

Dear Peter,

Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.

It came as no surprise, for you are keenly interested in Chinese culture and have been continuously exploring it. Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but also you consulted many locals and professionals, which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture.

Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese culture and make it more accessible to people around the world.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的留学生好友Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信表示祝贺。

【详解】1.词汇积累

赢得：win→bear off

强烈的：keenly→intense

精通：good command of→proficiency in

致力于：devote oneself to→ commit oneself to

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.

拓展句：Because I have Learned your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.

【点睛】【高分句型1】 Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but also you consulted many locals and professionals, which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture.（运用了倒装句，非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese culture and make it more accessible to people around the world.（运用and连接并列句，省略连词的宾语从句）

6．Dear doctor Huang,

It is a great pleasure to express my sincere gratitude to you for your careful treatment and attendance when I was in hospital last week.

On that night, I got acute appendicitis and was sent to your hospital by my roommates. Not only did you immediately diagnose my disease, but also arranged a timely operation for me. What’s more, in the following days, it was you who took care of me and talked to me from time to time to release my pain. Now I’m going to turn 18 soon and I sincerely invite you to attend my birthday party of 18 to share my happiness and growth with you.

Nothing will be able to erase my memories of your attendance. Your help is tremendously appreciated. I’m looking forward to seeing you again.

Yours,

Lihua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，因为生病住院期间你得到了黄医生的精心照顾，要求考生给黄医生写封信向其表达感谢，内容要点：1. 对黄医生的精心照顾表示感谢；2. 描述黄医生对你住院期间的帮助；3. 邀请黄医生参加你的18岁生日聚会。

【详解】1.词汇积累

表达：express→convey

立刻：immediately→instantly

有时：from time to time→at times/once in a while

另外：what’s more→in addition/besides/futhermore

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：On that night, I got acute appendicitis and was sent to your hospital by my roommates.

拓展句：On that night, when I got acute appendicitis, I was immediately sent to your hospital by my roommates.

【点睛】[高分句型1] It is a great pleasure to express my sincere gratitude to you for your careful treatment and attendance when I was in hospital last week.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）

[高分句型2] What’s more, in the following days, it was you who took care of me and talked to me from time to time to release my pain. （运用了强调句型）

7．One possible version:

Dear Pam,

I am writing this letter to express my heartfelt gratitude for your invaluable support and guidance during the English speech contest. Your unwavering commitment and encouragement have helped us achieve a lot in the competition.

You have invested so much time and effort in preparing us for the contest that we all have learned a lot more about English speech. Your excellent teaching skills, patience, and dedication have been instrumental in improving our English language skills. What’s more, your constructive feedback and suggestions have helped us refine our pronunciation, style and presentation, which were crucial in delivering an impressive speech.

We all feel blessed to have had such a precious opportunity to learn from you. Your contribution has greatly enriched our English learning experience, and we will always cherish the memories of the time spent with you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给外教写一封感谢信，对她在英语演讲比赛中的帮助表达感谢，回忆她提供的帮助，并分享同学们的收获。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

真诚的：heartfelt→genuine, sincere, unfeigned, earnest

宝贵的：invaluable→precious, priceless, inestimable

坚定的：unwavering→steady, unhesitating, tireless

投入：invest→spend, devote, contribute

有助于：be instrumental in→be helpful in, be useful in

提高：improve→sharpen, refine, better

此外：what’s more→in addition, additionally, moreover, furthermore, besides

重要的：crucial→essential, crucial, significant, vital

好运的：blessed→favored, fortunate, lucky, privileged, blissful

珍爱：cherish→treasure, value highly

2. 句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：I am writing this letter to express my heartfelt gratitude for your invaluable support and guidance during the English speech contest. Your unwavering commitment and encouragement have helped us achieve a lot in the competition.

拓展句：I am writing this letter to express my heartfelt gratitude for your invaluable support and guidance during the English speech contest because your unwavering commitment and encouragement have helped us achieve a lot in the competition.

【点睛】【高分句型1】You have invested so much time and effort in preparing us for the contest that we all have learned a lot more about English speech.（运用了so… that…引导的结果状语从句）

【高分句型2】What’s more, your constructive feedback and suggestions have helped us refine our pronunciation, style and presentation, which were crucial in delivering an impressive speech.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

8．Dear Ms. Brown,

    I’m glad to tell you that I was admitted to the university of St Andrews and will begin to study there next September.

At the same time, I’m really grateful to you for your help last year during my stay there trying to apply for British universities, without which it would have been much more difficult for me.

I know my university is close to your home so I wish I could visit you as soon as I arrive there. I’m dying to meet you soon.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华。你已成功申请就读英国圣安德鲁斯大学(the University of St Andrews)。在申请过程中，你得到了英国外教Ms. Brown的大力帮助。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括：1.告知你被录取；2.感谢她的帮助；3.期待再见。

【详解】1.词汇积累

同时：at the same time→meanwhile

大学：university→college

困难的：difficult→tough

感谢：grateful→thankful

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：I’m glad to tell you that I was admitted to the university of St Andrews and will begin to study there next September.

拓展句：It is a pleasure to tell you that I was admitted to the university of St Andrews and will begin to study there next September.

【点睛】[高分句型1] At the same time, I’m really grateful to you for your help last year during my stay there trying to apply for British universities, without which it would have been much more difficult for me. (运用了“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] I know my university is close to your home so I wish I could visit you as soon as I arrive there. (运用了as soon as引导时间状语从句)

9．One Possible Version:

Dear David,

Full of joy, I can’t wait to share with you this exciting news! I have been crowned with the championship in the third “Stories of China Retold in English” Challenge in my school.

My gratitude for you is beyond description. When I was racking my brains for the draft, it was you who helped me polish it and correct grammar mistakes carefully. With the draft completed, it was you who helped me rehearse the speech and kindly pointed out how to pause and articulate in a better way. In the tryout, when I stuttered due to extreme anxiety, it was you who encouraged me to continue. Without your constant encouragement, my morale would have been dampened.

Thanks again for your generous help and wish you all the best.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生撰写一封英语邮件给外教David，分享自己获得学校组织的中国故事挑战赛的冠军这一喜讯并感谢他在赛前给予你的帮助。

【详解】1.词汇积累

令人激动的：exciting→thrilling

感激：gratitude→appreciation

初稿： draft→sketch

完成：complete→accomplish

2.句式拓展

同义句

原句：With the draft completed, it was you who helped me rehearse the speech and kindly pointed out how to pause and articulate in a better way.

拓展句：When the draft was completed, it was you who helped me rehearse the speech and kindly pointed out how to pause and articulate in a better way.

【点睛】【高分句型1】When I was racking my brains for the draft, it was you who helped me polish it and correct grammar mistakes carefully.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句和强调句式)

【高分句型2】With the draft completed, it was you who helped me rehearse the speech and kindly pointed out how to pause and articulate in a better way.(运用了with的复合结构和强调句式)

10．Dear Patrick,

I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in the Work Creates a Better Life, which has turned out to be an amazing success.

It is so nice of you to have offered us a variety of presentation skills and creative suggestions on our show. It was under your professional guidance that the participants showed their skills of cooking, gardening, etc. Their impressive performances definitely fueled their passion for daily life skills. Most importantly, this activity helped students receive wide admiration and gain their tremendous confidence.

Many thanks for your time and support.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封感谢信，感谢外教Patrick对学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动的大力支持。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

衷心的：sincere→heartfelt

感激：gratitude→appreciation

惊人的：amazing→fascinating

提供：offer→provide

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Their impressive performances definitely fueled their passion for daily life skills.

拓展句：Their performances which impressed prople definitely fueled their passion for daily life skills.

【点睛】[高分句型1]I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in the Work Creates a Better Life, which has turned out to be an amazing success.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2]It was under your professional guidance that the participants showed their skills of cooking, gardening, etc.(it is...that强调句型)