2023英语高考命题总复习----深耕写作（读后续写）

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考点二 读后续写
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第一步 精准刷题
A
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(2022·广东省深圳市六校高三第一次联考)One Saturday morning, Jeremy woke up to a quiet house. Usually Mom was awake making breakfast and cleaning the kitchen, but not today. At the sound of his mom coughing, Jeremy knocked on her bedroom door and asked with great concern, “Mom, are you OK?”“Honey,” Mom said weakly. “I have a terrible cold. You can have cereal(燕麦) for breakfast and watch cartoons. I'm going to stay in bed.”
Jeremy poured some cereal into a bowl and ate the pieces dry. Mom must feel very bad if she was staying in bed all day. How could Jeremy help? First, he wiped up the crumbs of cereal he left on the kitchen counter. He also put away the cereal box neatly, so the kitchen looked just as it did when he woke up. But what else could he do? Jeremy thought. Saturday was the day when mom did laundry. Jeremy loved to watch the clothes spinning in the machine. That should be fun! He ran to his room to get the laundry basket, inside which there was his mother's favorite white dress, among other clothes and a pair of red socks,
Jeremy opened the door to the washer and put the clothing inside. He had watched Mom do laundry lots of times, so he knew where to find the washing powder and how to pour it into the machine, Finally, he closed the door and pressed the big button that said “START." Jeremy looked through the round glass window. Water was pouring in, and the machine was starting to spin, making his clothing tumble around. That was easy!
Jeremy watched cartoons until he heard the washing machine beep. That meant the washing was done. Jeremy opened the door to take out the damp clothes, He took out a few at a time and moved them into the dryer. Everything seemed clean, and Jeremy felt proud. Then he pulled out a pink dress.
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But he remembered there was no pink dress in the laundry basket.___________________________________
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Holding the neatly folded pink dress, Jeremy nervously knocked at his mom's bedroom door again._________
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写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。妈妈生病了，Jeremy(杰里米）打算帮妈妈洗衣服，把所有衣服都放进洗衣机里洗了。为什么洗完之后裙子会变成粉色？妈妈的裙子被染色了，接下来会发生什么呢？
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But he remembered there was no pink dress in the laundry basket. “Where did it come from?” Jeremy wondered, reaching into the washer to take out more clothes. Then much to his astonishment, he pulled out two T-shirts, both in light pink. Realizing there was something wrong, Jeremy stood frozen, his heart sinking. While racking his brain for reasons, he caught sight of the red socks, and it suddenly occurred to him that they must be to blame for the accident. With no means of handling the situation, Jeremy was in such a panic that he even thought of hiding the dress from his mom. “That isn't a positive approach to the problem,” he reminded himself. Finally, he decided to dry and fold the laundry before telling his mom everything.
Holding the neatly folded pink dress, Jeremy nervously knocked at his mom's bedroom door again. After what seemed like ages, he came to the bedside, his head drooping. Sensing his son's unease, his mother inquired with concern what was wrong. “ Sorry mom, I shouldn't have ruined your favorite dress.” Jeremy apologized. Stuttering out the mistake he had made, he was ready to get a good scolding for his wrongdoing. Realizing what's going on, mom smiled understandingly at Jeremy,“ Never mind, dear. I know you meant to help.” Then mom held the dress up before her and said in an approving tone,“ You know what? I think it looks nice.” At this Jeremy beamed with relief, making a silent vow to be more careful in helping his mom out next time.

B
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(2022·湖南省长沙长郡中学高三月考)It was a rainy November morning. Overcome with anger I knew if I didn't leave the house soon I would lose my temper with my husband, Joe. As rain came down in sheets, Joe offered to take me to work. I struggled into my jacket, seized my bag and teaching plans and ignored him.
He insisted and reached for his boots. I looked at the piles of newspapers and the dirty dishes still on the table. “Don't you have enough to do? I can take care of myself.” I stormed out, not even kissing him goodbye. Joe shouted after me not to take the shortcut(捷径)。
Joe and I had been eagerly looking forward to our retirement when a heart attack that past spring forced him to leave his job earlier than we had planned. As the medical bills mounted we realized I would have to continue working full-time while Joe stayed home and took over the housework.
The new arrangement was a disaster. Exhausted after a day of full work, all I wanted was a hot home cooked meal and a good night's sleep. However, what greeted me at the table was a microwave package. Sometimes he would serve oatmeal(燕麦片)for several nights in a row. One night when I dragged myself to bed, I was terrified to discover Joe had turned our white sheets blue. He told me he had found out how to save on water, soap and electricity. He patted his blue trousers and announced proudly washing everything together was just the secret.
Ten minutes later, ignoring Joe's warning I turned off the main route(道路)，I thought it hadn't rained enough to flood the road, but as I rounded the corner water rushed across my path. After a few feet, the car got stuck. I opened the door and water poured in. I hurriedly closed the door. I couldn't risk walking in this. Almost 20 minutes passed, the car began to shake. I got frightened to death when I heard three long honks(喇叭声)。
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Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck.________________________________
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I screamed that I couldn't make it. ____________________________________________________________
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写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。丈夫提前退休，辛苦工作的作者在下雨天还是不得不去上班赚钱养家。雨越下越大，作者又和丈夫闹了别扭，作者看到了货车的灯光，会是丈夫来帮助作者吗？作者最后能安全到家吗？
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Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. It was Joe! I couldn't help bursting into tears. Joe shouted to me not to be frightened. Then he threw a thick rope so that I could hang on to it and walk straight toward him. I opened the door, grabbed it and inched out. However, a sudden fall left me in the rushing water. I struggled to my feet, only to find a branch blocking the way right in front of me.
I screamed that I couldn't make it. Joe, however, remained calm! He urged me to take one step at a time and assured me I could make it. I moved forward slowly and cautiously before I fell into his arms. Sobbing against his chest, I apologized that I shouldn't have taken the shortcut. Joe patted me saying his primary concern was my safety. Only then did I realize Joe actually understood how to take care of me despite his trouble with the housework.

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(2022·湖南省长沙雅礼中学高三摸底考试)It was somewhere between spring and summer. My mom and I were driving through the countryside. Back then I was 13 years old and always felt unhappy with Mom. But little did I know that this trip was going to be a special one.
A pot of flowers sat in the back seat, whose heavenly scent filled the car. Suddenly, in the middle of nowhere, my mom pulled over. “What are you doing?” I cried, fearing that the car had broken down and we'd be stuck there, so far from home. But that wasn't the case. My mom hopped out(快速跳出来) of the car, grabbing the flowers from the back seat. “It’ll just be a minute,” she called back through the open windows.
My eyes impatiently skimmed the edge of the road before settling on a little sign showing that it was a nursing home. I looked back to the building, somewhat annoyed, as my mom reappeared-empty-handed.
Before she started the car, curiosity drove me to ask, “Do you know someone there?” She shook her head. “Then what did you do with the flowers?” She smiled slightly, “I gave them to the receptionist ( 前台接待员)。”“What?” She laughed at my confusion. “I told the receptionist to give the flowers to whoever needed them, especially who hasn't gotten any in a while.”
I kept silent for a moment. Not long after we continued our driving, I spoke again, “Did you leave your name?” To this she answered instantly, “No. Leaving flowers there for someone who will appreciate them makes me feel good, which is enough of a thank for me.”
Suddenly, still thinking about Mom's deeds, I heard something burst loudly. It was our car that broke down! Nothing could be worse, because neither my mom nor I understood how to repair it, and we didn't know where the garage was. It also seemed impossible to wait for any passer-by, since we had seen so few along the way.
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We were worrying about what could be done. ___________________________________________________
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As we drove along, a flower shop came into sight on the road.______________________________________
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写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。妈妈带着年幼的作者开车去养老院，给老人们送了花还不留名字，这让作者感到很奇怪。突然，车抛锚了。妈妈和作者回去养老院求助，善良的他们会得到什么帮助呢？回家的路上，作者看见了一朵花，接下来又会发生什么？
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We were worrying about what could be done. But after waiting in vain for a considerable time, Mom and I decided to walk back the road to the nursing home and seek help. God knows how far we had driven! When we arrived, the receptionist was surprised, but warmly helped us contact the garage. There, the old men who had received the flowers were excited to meet us, talking about how great that day was. It amazed us what random actions of kindness could mean to the people who received it. While we were laughing and talking merrily, the garage got our car repaired.
As we drove along, a flower shop came into sight on the road. I paced quickly into the flower shop, where a bunch of flowers glowing red in full bloom caught my eye. Having witnessed the effect of kindness, I decided to send Mom the sweet flowers. Soon, the heavenly scent filled the car again. Mom tried to conceal her excitement, but the glittering tears failed her. Through this trip, I discovered that, despite my occasional anger towards her, I actually felt proud of her. This was the trip of my life.

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(2022·重庆实验外国语学校高三摸底考试)Bales left the pavement of Base Road and stepped onto snow-covered Jewell Trail. She planned a six-hour hike through New Hampshire's Mount Washington State Park. She had packed for almost every emergency and intended to walk alone.
She'd checked the weather forecast posted by the Mount Washington Observatory before she left. Based on her experience, Bales knew that her hike was realistic. Besides, she had two emergency plans and extra layers of clothing to better adjust her body temperature as conditions changed.
The hike up the lower part of Jewell Trail was pleasant. Bales felt excited as she walked up into snowy paths. The sun shone through the trees and cast a shadow over her smiling face. Less than an hour later, loads of dark clouds had replaced the sunshine, and snow covered the surrounding trees.
She still smiled. However, the weather was showing its teeth. Bales added even more layers to shelter herself from the cold winds and thick fog. She made her way across the snow-covered ridge(山脊)toward Mount Washington and began to think about calling it a day. Suddenly, she noticed something: a single set of footprints in the snow ahead of her, which had been made by a pair of sneakers-typically not the type for hiking.
Meanwhile, Bales was getting colder, even though she was moving fast and generating some body heat. With strong gusts of wind screaming and attacking her back and left side, she decided to abandon her plan. The only thing, however, kept her on the trail was the sneaker tracks in the snow.
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Bales faced a dilemma about whether to follow the tracks or not.____________________________________
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Her searching now turned into rescuing the man._________________________________________________
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写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。Bales(贝尔斯）打算去徒步旅行，准备好装备后就出发了。但是不一会，下起了大雪，路上有着一排运动鞋的脚印，很可能有人需要帮助。受冻的Bales是跟着运动鞋的脚印还是为了安全回去呢？她能营救出穿运动鞋的人吗？
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Bales faced a dilemma about whether to follow the tracks or not. If she chose to follow the tracks, she'd add time and risk to her hiking. But the tracks ahead suggested someone might be in danger. She couldn't let this go. She called out into the frozen fog,“ Is anybody out there? Do you need help?” The strong winds carried her voice away. Then she walked cautiously in the direction of the tracks. She rounded a corner and spotted a man sitting motionlessly.
Her searching now turned into rescuing the man. She approached him instantly and found he was suffering from frostbite on his feet. Without any hesitation, she covered his body with warm clothes, and then poured him some sugary drink. The wind roared over and they would die soon if they didn't get out of there. She supported the man and inched along the trail. With great efforts, Bales managed to save the man's life. Exhausted, she felt that it was all worth it.

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(2022·江苏省如皋市高三调研)COVID-19 made “social distance” a big problem for 2020 and forced us to adapt in new and often creative ways. My super-social teenage daughters adapted by talking to their friends on video chat; school campuses closed but adapted with online classes.
However, social distance with my parents added an extra challenge. We'd recently moved them (very old) into the house across the street from us. It was wonderful to have them so close, but once COVID-19 arrived, everything changed.
How could we care for and interact with my parents but keep social distance at the same time? I could buy their groceries, and leave them on their doorstep-that would be easy. But meeting their social needs was another matter. They did not use computers or smartphones, so there had to be another way to connect with them. After much thought, my daughters decided we could reach out with beautiful cards, letters and pictures...and one of our dogs could deliver them!
We'd read in the news that although animals could be carriers of the virus, the likelihood was low, so we felt excited about the prospect of our new delivery method, The question wan, which dog wan bent suited for the job? We considered each one carefully: Tootsie, Stevie or Stuffy, we decided to give Tootsie the first shot at it. We tied a small package loosely over her head and sent her toward my parents' door. Holding our breath, we watched as she approached the house.
Suddenly, she turned left, made a beeline for a large dirt patch(小块土地)，shook the package from her neck, and started to bury it, but stopped by our shouts of dismay.
Little Stevie was up next. He had more focus; surely he could do the job. With the package affixed to his back, we set him on course. Stevie looked strong going in. He ran toward the door and nearly made it, but then a lizard(蜥蜴) ran in front of him. Chasing lizards is Stevie's favorite pas- time, so we knew all bets were off. Sure enough, Stevie chased that lizard all over the yard and then went running down the street. I watched with disappointment as my daughters disappeared after him.
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Later, we were ready for a final go-Stuffy.______________________________________________________
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Stuffy received treats (healthy carrots) and seemed truly proud of himself. ____________________________
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写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。在新冠疫情的影响下，人们的出行受到限制，作者用家中的狗来为大家做些善事。Stuffy(史达非）能帮大家做什么呢？Stuffy又会得到什么奖励呢？
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Later, we were ready for a final go-Stuffy, The vet had recently told us that he needed to go on a diet. He was our last choice. But Stuffy loved to chase his ball, so maybe there was hope. We tied him up with the package and walked him across the street. My daughter threw a ball toward my parents' front door, and Stuffy bounded along the path. My parents opened their door just as Stuffy reached the threshold, and they successfully removed the package from his back as we all cheered and jumped up and down for Stuffy. Mission accomplished!
Stuffy received treats (healthy carrots) and seemed truly proud of himself. He did well and we enjoyed it so much that he continued to deliver cards, pictures and little items to my parents every day. We called him our Ding Dong Doggy, even though we have yet to teach him to ring the doorbell. Meanwhile, we were grateful that Stuffy made it possible for us to adapt to the new situation and bond with our parents in a creative way. As Stuffy lost its weight due to the rigorous exercise, we all joked running errands at this special time created an all-win situation.

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动作描写(一)
①Stanley got in line behind Zero.
斯坦利排在泽罗的后面。
②Igor expelled saliva as he spoke.
伊戈尔一边说，一边吐出口水。
③Tom made room as Stanley sat down.
斯坦利坐下时，汤姆腾出地方来。
④He stopped writing as he became aware that somebody was reading over his shoulder.
当他意识到有人在他身后阅读时，他停止了写作。
⑤Magnet helped Stanley to his feet.
马涅特扶着斯坦利站了起来。
⑥Stanley was half asleep as he got in line for breakfast, but the sight of Mr Sir awakened him.
斯坦利在排队吃早饭的时候还处于半睡半醒的状态，但一看见西尔先生，他就醒了。
⑦Kate struggled to her feet.
凯特挣扎着站起来。
⑧Stand straight. Raise your chin.
站直。抬起你的下巴。
⑨His knees crumpled beneath him.
他一下子瘫倒在地。
⑩He kept an eye out for Zero, but Zero didn't come back.
他留意着泽罗，但泽罗没有回来。

心理描写(一)
①What worried him the most was the thought of his parents not knowing what happened to him, not knowing whether he was dead or alive.
他最担心的是他的父母不知道他发生了什么事，不知道他是死是活。
②An even crazier idea kept popping into his head.
一个更疯狂的想法不断地出现在他的脑海里。
③Two nights later, Stanley lay awake staring up at the star-filled sky. He was too happy to fall asleep.
两天后，斯坦利醒着躺在床上，望着满天繁星。他高兴得无法人眠。
④They walked for what seemed like a very long time, and still never came across. They became anxious.
他们走了很长一段时间，仍然没有找到。他们开始焦急起来。
⑤A wave of terror rushed over him when he saw.
当他看到时，一阵恐惧涌上心头。
⑥The fear made him dizzy. He took a breath, summoned his courage,
and continued.
他吓得头晕目眩。他吸了口气，鼓起勇气，继续(说)下去。
⑦He heard his own heart heat.
他听到自己的心在发热。
⑧He felt the scream explode inside him.
他感到那声尖叫在他心里爆发了。
⑨Stanley could hear his heart beat. Each beat told him he was still alive, at least for one more second.
斯坦利能听到自己的心跳。每一次心跳都告诉他自己还活着，至少还能再活一秒钟。
⑩He felt as if he was walking in a dream, not quite able to comprehend what was going on around him.
他觉得自己好像在梦中行走，不太明白周围发生的事情。

环境描写
①Stanley had a poster of him hanging on the wall of his bedroom.
斯坦利把他的一张海报挂在卧室的墙上。
②The lake was so full of holes and mounds that it reminded Stanley of pictures he'd seen of the moon.
湖水中满是洞，石堆成山，它提醒着斯坦利他曾看到过这样的月亮。
③The sun had only just come up over the horizon, but he already could feel its hot rays against his face.
太阳刚从地平线升起，但他已经能感觉到热阳光照在脸上。
④The sun wasn't yet up, but its rays arced over the horizon and brought light to the sky.
太阳还没有升起来，但它的光芒在地平线上划出一道弧线，照亮了天空。
⑤It was especially beautiful in the spring, when the peach trees, which lined the shore, bloomed with pink and rose-colored blossoms.
这是特别美丽的春天，岸边的桃树盛开粉红色和玫瑰色的花朵。
⑥The air became unbearably humid. Stanley was drenched in sweat. Beads of moisture ran down the handle of his shovel. It was almost as if the temperature had gotten so hot that the air itself was sweating. A loud boom of thunder echoed across the empty lake.
空气变得难以忍受的潮湿。斯坦利被汗水湿透了，汗珠从他的铁锹柄上滚落下来，似乎温度变得如此之高以至于空气本身也在出汗。雷声在空旷的湖面上回荡。
⑦The peak looked to him exactly like a giant fist, with the thumb sticking straight up.
在他看来，山峰就像一个巨大的拳头，大拇指竖直向上。
⑧The storm moved off farther west, along with any hope of rain.
暴风雨连同下雨的希望一起向西移动。
⑨The boat lay upside down, half buried in the dirt.
船倒挂着，一半埋在泥土里。
⑩It was as if they had been walking across the flat bottom of a giant frying pan, and now they had to somehow climb up out of it.
这就好像他们一直在一个巨大的煎锅的底部行走，现在他们必须想办法爬出来。
⑪Patches of weeds dotted the mountainside.
一片片野草点缀着山坡。
⑫He was in a field of greenish white flowers that seemed to extend all the way around.
他站在一片绿白花的田野里，这些花似乎向四周伸展开去。
⑬The sun cut through the cloud, and Stanley felt its rays beating down on him. But soon more clouds filled the sky, shading Stanley.
太阳穿过云层，斯坦利感到阳光正照射在他身上。但很快更多的乌云布满天空，把斯坦利遮挡住了。

人物描写
①Stanley weighed three times as much as the other boy.
斯坦利的体重是那个男孩的三倍。
②Once he started a project he would work on it for years, often going days without sleep.
一旦他开始做一个项目，他就会工作好几年，经常是几天不睡觉。
③Elya blushed when Myra entered the room.
迈拉进屋时，艾莉亚脸红了。
④His clothes were soaked with sweat.
他的衣服被汗水湿透了。
⑤His throat felt as if it was coated with sandpaper.
他觉得嗓子像被砂纸磨了一样。
⑥Even the people looked broken, with their worn-out bodies sprawled over the various chairs and sofas.
就连那些人看起来也很疲惫，他们疲惫的身体躺在各种椅子和沙发上。
⑦Every muscle and joint in his body ached as he tried to get out of bed.
当他试图下床时，身体的每一块肌肉和关节都在疼痛。
⑧Now he had such a huge smile that it almost seemed too big for his face, like the smile on a jack-o'-lantern.
现在，他笑得那么灿烂，几乎超出了他的脸面，就像南瓜灯上的笑容。
⑨Zero's mouth was shut tight. As he glared at Mr Pendanski, his dark eyes seemed to expand.
泽罗的嘴紧闭着。当他瞪着潘当斯基先生时，他的黑眼睛似乎睁大了。
⑩If he jerked too quickly, he felt a throbbing pain just above his neck where Zigzag's shovel had hit him.
如果他用力太快，就会感到脖子上方之字形铁锹打到的地方一阵刺痛。

第二步 精深学习
A
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(2022·T8联考)
A Run to Remember
Thirteen can be a challenging age. Not only did I have to adapt to my changing body, I also had to deal with my parents' bitter divorce, a new family and the upsetting move from my country home to a crowded suburb.
When we moved, my beloved companion, a small brown pony(小马)，had to be sold. Feeling helpless and alone, I couldn't eat or sleep, and I cried all of the time. I missed my family, my home and my pony. Finally, my father, realizing how much I missed my pony, purchased an old red horse for me at a local market.
My horse, Cowboy, was without a doubt the ugliest horse in the world. He was pigeon-toed and knock-kneed. But I didn't care about his faults. I loved him beyond all reasons.
I joined a riding club and faced rude comments and mean snickers about Cowboy's looks. I never let on how I felt, but deep down inside, my heart was breaking. The other members rode beautiful registered horses.
When Cowboy and I entered the events where the horse is judged on appearance, we were quickly out of the game. I finally realized that my only chance to compete would be in the timed-speed events. I chose barrel racing(绕桶赛)，an event in which a horse and its rider attempt to complete a triangular pattern around three barrels in the fastest time.
One girl named Becky rode a big brown horse in the race events. She always won the blue ribbons. Needless to say, she didn't feel threatened when I competed against her at the next show. She didn't need to. I came in next to last.
The bitter memory of Becky's smirks(得意的笑)made me determined to beat her. For the whole next month, I woke up early every day and rode Cowboy five miles to the arena(运动场地)。We practiced for hours in the hot sun and then I would walk Cowboy home. On the way home I would be so tired; those five miles seemed twice as long.
All of our hard work didn't make me feel confident by the time the show came. I sat at the gate and sweated it out while I watched Becky and her horse charge through the pattern of barrels, finishing the course with ease.
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My turn finally came.
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No cheers filled the air when I finished my show.
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My turn finally came. As I urged Cowboy forward, he stumbled, and almost fell, much to the delight of the other riders. I jammed my hat down on my head, stroked Cowboy's big red neck and entered the arena. At the signal, we dashed toward the first barrel, quickly whipped around it and with perfect precision rounded the second and thundered on to the third. We tore around the final curve and shot for the finish line.
No cheers filled the air when I finished my show. The end of our run was met with surprised silence. With the sound of my heart pounding in my ears, I heard the announcer call our time. Cowboy and I had beaten Becky and her proud fancy horse! I gained much more than a blue ribbon that day. At thirteen, I realized that I'd always come out a winner if I wanted something badly enough to work for it. I can be the master of my own destiny.


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(2022·山东师大附中高三摸底考试)Paula is a 55-year-old woman living in New Jersey. She lives a happy life without concern for financial or social problems and she constantly shares laughs with her family and friends. About ten years ago, her husband Michael gave her a gold ring with a diamond in it on their 20th wedding anniversary. She cherished it very much and wore it every day.
Having been married for almost 30 years, Paula had everything set for herself, and knew that her life in New Jersey was a thrilling one. One day, Paula was in the bathroom cleaning everything up, from the sink to the floor. She wanted to keep her house clean and beautiful. As soon as Paula finished washing the bathtub, she moved on to the part she feared most: the toilet. Wanting to get it out of the way, she quickly cleaned the inside of the toilet with a brush, and flushed(冲走) the soap away. After finishing, she felt there was something wrong, but she couldn't think of what it was.
Paula's heart skipped a beat when she noticed that her left ring finger felt a bit lighter. She slowly looked down at her ring finger, hoping that her treasured anniversary gift was still on it. She was frightened to see that it was lost. She didn't notice that she flushed it down the toilet.
Paula said, “I must have flushed it down. It had been a little big on my finger, because it was winter time and my hands were smaller. I felt so bad about it. Sad and embarrassed,"
She couldn't believe that she just let thousands of dollars go down the drain(下水道)，literally, She searched the bathroom and even the house, hoping that she just dropped if somewhere and forgot about it. She even took apart the toilet and searched the inside pipes with a flashlight, but in vain. Paula had no idea how to explain this to her husband. To buy the ring, Michael worked extra hard before the anniversary, so to tell him the bad news wan unimaginable for Paula.
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She softly knocked on the door to their bedroom.________________________________________________
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She softly knocked on the door to their bedroom. When she came in, she saw Michael reading his favorite book on the bed. Visibly sweaty and nervous, Paula said that she had bad news to tell him. Michael was worried, but listened. With her eyes looking away from embarrassment, Paula cried and told her husband the ring was flushed down the toilet. Paula had mentally prepared herself for what could possibly be the toughest conversation with her husband ever. But Michael was quiet through the entire explanation, and this put Paula off.
After finishing her explanation, Paula wiped away her tears and waited for Michael to say something. She thought he would get mad at her. However, Michael's face didn't show any anger. Suddenly, he interrupted the silence by giving her a hug. Paula was completely shocked by Michael's reaction to the situation. After all, she lost the ring he had given her to celebrate their anniversary. Michael told Paula that he would buy her another ring, exactly like the one she lost. Paula felt greatly moved.

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(2022·武汉市部分学校高三质量检测)The easy way out isn't always easiest. I learned that lesson when I decided to treat my father to a special meal. I glanced through the cookbook and chose a menu which included homemade bread. Knowing the bread would take time, I started on it as soon as he left for work.
As I was not experienced in cooking, I thought if a dozen was good, two dozen would be better, so I doubled everything. As Dad loved oranges, I also opened a can of orange and poured it all into the bowl. Soon there was sticky dough(面团) covered with ugly yellowish marks. Realizing I had been defeated, I put the dough in the rubbish bin outside so I wouldn't have to face him laughing at my work.
I went on preparing the rest of the meal, and, when Dad got home, we sat down to Cornish chicken with rice. He tried to enjoy the meal but seemed disturbed. Twice he got up and went outside, saying he thought he heard a noise. The third time he left, I went to the windows to see what he was doing.
Looking out, I saw Dad standing about three feet from the rubbish bin, holding the lid up with a stick and looking into the container. When I came out of the house, he dropped the stick and explained that there was something alive in the rubbish bin. Picking up the stick again, he held the lid up enough for me to see. I felt cold. But I stepped closer and looked harder.
Without doubt it was my work. The hot sun had caused the dough to double in size and the fermenting yeast(酵母) made the surface shake and sigh as though it were breathing. I had to admit what the “living thing" was
and why it was there. I don't know who was more embarrassed by the whole thing, Dad or me.
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My dad tapped me gently on the shoulder, and we went inside._____________________________________
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写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者觉得做面包是很简单的事情，但是有一天给爸爸做面包时弄砸了，他把面团扔进垃圾桶，结果天气热面团在垃圾桶里发酵，发出来的声音让作者很尴尬。爸爸会和作者说什么呢？三个月后的聚会，又会发生什么？
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My dad tapped me gently on the shoulder, and we went inside. Sitting back to our Cornish chicken, Dad, smilingly, updated me on recent events at his work without a mere mention of the crazy dough wildly dancing outside, which served wonderfully as a gentle embarrassment reliever. However, while doing the dishes after dinner, Dad said to me with firmness in his voice, “You don't have to be an expert to make bread, but you do have to do your research before taking actions. There is no such thing as an easy way out.” And that was the starting point of my journey with making the perfect bread.
At a party three months later, everyone wanted to try my bread. The rest of the night slipped away, filled with inquiries about my secret recipe. Yet, hardly was there a different answer other than,“ Beauty comes from balance and patience.” To be frank, that was exactly what Id learnt during my numerous experiments. An amazing loaf of bread required suitable balance of ingredients to mix as well as enormous patience of waiting for the dough to rise. Countless were my failures to make tasty bread, every single moment of it was cherished. Along the journey, I've developed from the man whose dough sighs in a dustbin to the man whose bread makes your taste but dance.

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(2022·山东省肥城市高三第一次摸底考试)I was in my room, unwilling to head to the community theatre with “my brother" Henry. He was just adopted by my parents recently. I was not in the mood for being onstage with him.
“Kirstie, come here," my mom called. Following her voice, I found her outside the bathroom, holding a wet book. She gave the book a shake. “Henry's book was in the bathtub. Did you put it there?” She glared at me, something she never did before Henry came to our home. I didn't wet his book on purpose. Tears of hurt clouded my eyes. Worse still, she promised to buy him a new copy. My heart ached. Henry was stealing my mother's love. He was ruining my life.
Meanwhile, Henry was just nearby, absorbed in working on a complicated rope knot(绳结) as usual. Why did a boy like him do the girly work? Far from manly!
Soon, it was time to have to set off to the community theatre. As Henry walked ahead of us to the car, my mom took me aside and said in a low voice, “It's the first time for Henry to be onstage. Be kind to him, Honey.” I nodded but sighed. Being kind didn't use to be hard. But after Henry moved in, everything felt different. The theatre used to be a special place for my parents and me. With Henry involved, it didn't seem so special any more.
Finally, it was our stage time. My heart beat wildly. I forgot my annoyance at Henry for a while. As we kids lined up, ready to act out our short play, I realized how loosely I had tied the drawstring(束带) on my skirt. Sure enough, my skirt began to drop. Laughter from the audience could be heard, and even though I was wearing shorts under my skirt, I could feel my face burst into flames. However, my hands were full. If only someone could help me out!
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Right then, Henry sensed my embarrassment. ___________________________________________________
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After the performance, I found Henry and lapped him on the arm gratefully.___________________________
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写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。新弟弟Henry(亨利）的到来让作者觉得父母的爱被弟弟抢走了，作者一时无法接受弟弟。在表演时，作者的裙子松了，顿时很尴尬，弟弟会怎样帮助作者化解尴尬呢？经过这件事，姐弟两人会发生什么变化？
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Right then, Henry sensed my embarrassment. He immediately came to my aid. He pulled up my skirt and skillfully tied the drawstring with a beautiful knot. Seeing what Henry did for me, something deep in my mind began to change. It seemed as if my cold heart began to melt slowly and my annoyance at him gradually gave way to guilt. I regretted having treated him as a stranger. While my mind was wandering, our performance time came. It turned out a great success, thunderous applause filling the whole theatre.
After the performance, I found Henry and tapped him on the arm gratefully. “Thanks,” I said with a grateful smile on my face. I had to admit that but for his timely help, I would have been extremely embarrassed. Without his knotting skill, the performance would have been quite different. “Knot a problem. You are my sister," he grinned innocently, saying humorously. Surrounded by the cheerful atmosphere, I felt a flood of warmth of a big family. Maybe it wouldn't be so bad to have a new person in my corner of the world after all.

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(2022·江苏省泰州市高三第一次调研考试)When my son Mike begged us to adopt the black-and-white cat, Daisy, we already had Pepper, a seven-year-old gray cat. We couldn't resist our nine-year-old's request. The kitty came home with us that day.
Daisy was naughty. She loved being around the boy and his friends, hanging out in the basement where they played video games or watched television. Sometimes, she explored the basement, jumping up on the bar, going into the small bathroom, and nosing around the laundry room. She'd travel the areas as if on a quest. Then, just when the boys would be at the height of their video game, she'd jump up in front of the screen, disrupting their play. She climbed on their backs, going from shoulder to shoulder.
One evening, our sons, Joe and Mike, were in the basement watching TV when I heard, “Mom! There's a snake in the window well.”
“A snake? How do you know?” I stood at the head of the stairs to the basement, listening.
“It's near the window. We can hear it. There's a strange sound. Listen!”
Grabbing a flashlight and a plastic grocery bag, I headed downstairs to capture the snake. I climbed onto a chair near the window well, turned on the flashlight and looked cautiously through the curtain, I saw nothing but a few spider webs. I listened. Suddenly, a loud sound came from the ceiling. Something was in the ventilation duct(通风管道)。The sound grew louder and more frequent. I paused.
What was making the noise? Could it be a snake like the boys suspected? Pepper had killed a few snakes and brought them home to show us. I told myself that, if it were a snake, it was probably harmless since rattle-snakes aren't common in Omaha, Nebraska, If seemed too noisy to be a snake.
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It was apparent that the boys would be no help. Sitting in the sofa, Joe had drawn a blanket up to his shoulders and Mike stared at me wide-eyed. I took a deep breath and pointed the flashlight toward the spot where I'd heard the sound. The sound grew louder and more intense as I aimed the flashlight toward the window well. My heart raced as the “snake” was close. By the light of the flashlight, I saw something moving.
At the sight of it, I relaxed immediately. When I saw a little white and black paw reached down, I called. “Daisy!" She'd seen the light and followed it, making her way to the window well. The boys jumped up from the sofa and ran over to me to have a closer look. It turned out that naughty Daisy got lost in the ventilation duet while exploring. We all laughed at the scare she'd given us. And that may be a little punishment for her naughtiness.

【写作要领】
领会题型含义
读后续写是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的考查形式，旨在考查语言综合运用能力。读后续写－给出前文，写后文。理论上来说，前文用于阅读输入信息，信息经过大脑思维转换后，形成对前文的理解。理解一定是建立在确定主旨大意，明确前文作者态度和关键信息的前提下，在大脑中建立一个对前文的理解框架和概括，在此基础上，继续建立顺序思维，确定接下来如何安排继续可能或者应该出现的内容。续写部分内容不仅要求词汇和语言框架的准确使用、语言的润色等，更重要的是，要明白应该如何整理续写内容，以使得其和前文统一连贯并能够表述完整的信息。续写是读和写的统一，之间穿插了对阅读能力、概括能力、思维转化能力、语言领悟能力、语言组织能力、创造性思维能力以及对上下文逻辑关系等的考查。
高质量地完成读后续写最重要的是要大量阅读，形成一定的阅读思维能力。沉淀思维，归纳信息，梳理脉络，转换思维，那么阅读的思维能力注定会迅速提升。理解续写前文的内容是这一题型的最关键部分，否则后面的续写就不会有任何形成思维的信息输人，也就谈不上输出了1多读，多思维，多沉淀，多拓展，这是应对读后续写的重要环节!

熟悉题型特点
读后续写的阅读材料一般以350同以内的记叙文和夹叙夹议文为主，偶有少量议论文。要求在此文的后面续写150词左右的英文与前文构成一个完整的故事。一般来说，记叙文浅显易懂，但故事情节多曲折动人，故事线索的逻辑性也较强。要求续写的部分多是故事发展的高潮或结局。续写时要抓住故事的叙事线索，依据原文的写作思路续写文章，并适当发散。写作要求是在读懂原文的基础上，在规定时间内展开合理的想象，并运用所学的英语知识完成续写。续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已经给出。
续写部分要有创新性，不是原文的抄写或胡编乱造，同时，还要带有原文色彩。
续写一般分为两类：半开放性续写和完全开放性续写。半开放性续写要求务必根据文章的逻辑推理续写。完全开放性续写则要求依据文章的思路自由发挥。续写时要尽可能与原文的中心思想和语言风格保持一致。
读后续写不是随心所欲地写，而是要在所给段落开头的帮助下完成续写部分。其中，段落开头语与传统写作中的开头语类似，在某种程度上引导写作思路向某个方面发展，所续写部分不能脱离各自的段落开头语另起炉灶，要在其基础上进行拓展发挥。
读后续写要求读写并重，需要对给定材料精确理解，这样所续写部分才不至于偏离主题，就这方面而言，读后续写有点类似阅读理解题中对文章后续发展的推断，如：What would happen next?
续写部分的思路和内容并不一定是唯一的，可根据自己对原文材料的理解，对文章的结尾做出不同的诠释。

掌握写作思路
1.通读全文，把握脉络
对于试卷所提供的文章，我们在通读的时候，需要将有助于理清文章脉络的词、短语或句子进行勾画。这是非常关键的一步，因为大部分所提供的材料都是记叙文。梳理勾画的目的一是要弄清谁(who)、在什么时间(when)、什么地点(where)、通过什么方式(how)、做了什么事(what),另外一个目的是在我们续写的时候可以适当呼应前文。
2.分析续写所提供的两句话
分析的目的是看是否有新的线索出现，或者是否有与旧的线索呼应的部分。
3.已知推未知
所谓已知是指续写时所提供的每段的首句话。所谓未知就是指我们需要续写的内容。推论的方法如下
第一段第一句顺推第二句(根据所给的人物要么描写语言、动作，要么描写心理、表情等等)
第二段第一句逆推第一段尾句过渡句第二段第一句顺推第二句(根据所给的人物要么描写语言、动作，要么描写心理、表情等等)
第二段尾句总结或感慨
4.完善关系链
所以，现在我们的任务就是将我们所推论出来的句子进行关系链的完善。这个过程可以是动作链的完善，也可以是心理历程的完善。

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第一步 精准刷题
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(2022·山东省枣庄市重点高中高三摸底考试)Recently I graduated from high school, and as a gift I received a huge bunch of flowers, 40 to be exact! I had so many that I didn't know what to do with them. The next weekend my niece and nephew, Sue and Mike, aged 6 and 7, came and suddenly I had an idea. I might let them give out these flowers to people they met on the street, and in this way they could learn how to be friendly to others. So I told them about my plan and explained that these flowers would make people feel happy and smile. They loved the idea and were eager to have a try. So at once we took every single flower and tied a smile card to it. We then went to the street with the flowers.
The first flower went to a policeman. As soon as she saw the policeman, my niece ran up to him and handed him a flower. His smile was so big, but hers was even bigger!
In no time, we neared the end of our flowers. It was lunch time and we went to Subway for lunch. There the kids gave a flower to the waitress, who was really excited to receive the flower. As we were eating our lunch, the waitress came up to the kids with two big chocolate cookies! She said the chocolate cookies were for them and that she really liked the flower! As they ate the cookies, my niece and nephew looked at me with the biggest smiles l had ever seen.
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With just one flower left, I said it should be given to the person who needed it most._____________________
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写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者高中毕业收到了40朵花，让小侄女和小侄子拿到街上，送给需要的人，不少人收到花都很高兴。最后一朵花该送给最需要的人，会送给谁呢？这样的小小善举让作者和孩子们得到什么收获呢？
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With just one flower left, I said it should be given to the person who needed it most. Just then, my nephew caught sight of an old woman in a wheelchair nearby.“I think she's the very person for the flower. She lives a hard life because of bad health. She needs smiles most,” said my nephew. With these words, my nephew, followed by my niece, took the flower up to her. You can imagine how happy the old woman looked! She smiled, and gave each of the kids a big kiss.
It turned out to be a great day for us. We spread a lot of smiles by giving out flowers, and received a lot of smiles in return. The flowers not only made us feel good about ourselves, but also made 40 other people feel happy. I feel there is nothing more enjoyable than being friendly to people. Meanwhile, the kids learned an important lesson in the process. In fact, they can't wait until next time they have such a chance again. They want to give out more flowers!

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(2022·江苏省苏州市高三调研)
Overcoming Adversity
On the bus headed to the United States from Mexico, I experienced the saddest and longest ride I ever had, The thoughts of me not seeing my friends and family again were taking over my mind and causing a strong sense of depression. As I headed to a place I didn't want to call home, minutes felt like hours and the hours felt like days.
“Welcome to the United States," the driver said at the immigration checkpoint. The Officers repeatedly asked me for my passport, but I didn't understand a single word coming out of their mouth. After we sorted out all the confusion we were on our way. With 3 hours left, a new thought took over my mind; stupidity. Not being able to understand a new language was the cause of my feeling. Thin filled me with a burning rage that I had never felt before.
Not understanding the new language I wan introduced to was always a problem that I struggled with alone. In school, I felt like the problems were growing rapidly and I wan losing control. The transition from being a straight A student in Mexico to being a straight F student in the United States wasn't easy and left me wondering if I could ever belong here, I was always known as the weird(怪的)Mexican in the classroom. Making friends wan always hand because no one wanted to hang out with the weirdo(怪人)in the class.
I told myself that if I wanted to overcome my problem I had to practice it more. When it came to group assignments, I thought that it was the perfect moment to carry out my plan to hold a conversation with someone else. The moment arrived, I wan nervous that it was my time to speak in the group. With a stutter (结巴)， my first words came out of my mouth. “Hey my name is Jesus," 1 maid with n strong Mexican accent. Everyone in the group burst out laughing and the cause of their joy was my strong Mexican accent. This made me want to crawl up into a little ball and start crying in front of everyone.
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After a year of hard work and long practices came my first success in reading._________________________
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A simple “Hey how are you" could be the icebreaker between people. ________________________________
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写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者刚从墨西哥来到美国，语言不通是很大的问题。课上发言时，作者的墨西哥口音也受到同学们的嘲笑。经过一年的努力，作者的朗读有哪些进步呢？作者克服困难后，取得了哪些成就？
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After a year of hard work and long practices came my first success in reading. “We are going to do popcorn reading," Mr Cerda said, with a loud voice. I sat there anxiously, part of me hoped he wouldn't call me, but part of me wanted to get the reading over with. Suddenly, I found myself reading the famous words of Dr Seuss,“ You're off to great places. Today is your day! Your Mountain is waiting, so... get on your way!” When I finished reading, all I heard was silence. My classmates were in shock, and I realized my words were as clear as they can be.
A simple “Hey how are you” could be the icebreaker between people. I was a shy kid and I grew up thinking that I was going to be friendless forever. However, I eventually discovered that making friends and meeting new people was actually pretty easy. Whatever the case may be, my grades and ability to speak improved. I participated in tutorials, science fairs, and even competition for academics. All of this became possible when I found confidence in myself because of the inspirational words from Dr Seuss.

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(2022·辽宁省名校联盟高三联合考试月考)Everything about moving day was a puzzle. I didn't know anything about our new building on a new street. Our old life was broken into pieces and packed up in piled boxes. I wondered if it would ever fit back together again.
Mom introduced me to our new neighbours, the Chens. Mrs Chen worked with Mom at the job she'd just started. Mr Chen was a famous craftsman(匠人)from China.
Mom said it was a fresh start, but it felt broken to me. I just wanted things to go back to how they had been before.
After the first day at my new school, I walked home alone. Mom had told me she had to work. I was still hoping she'd meet me after the bell. I had to open the door myself with the new key. I felt a bit hungry and went straight into the kitchen, ripping tape from the packed boxes while I searched for a clean plate. My fingers slipped, and something went crashing to the ground.
“Benjamin” cried Mom from the doorway. I didn't hear her come in. “What just broke?” she asked, kneeling to pick up the pieces. In her hands, I recognized the shattered pieces. It was Grandma's bowl. “I can't believe you broke this,” she said.
“Well, I can't believe we have to live here now! I can't believe I have to switch schools, and I can't believe you didn't even meet me after my first day” I ran into my room, slamming the door behind me. The broom swept across the kitchen floor. Then the click of Mom's bedroom door closed behind her. I sneaked out into the kitchen and found the fragments in the dustbin. There were so many pieces in here, but maybe I could put them back together. Turning the pieces, I tried to match them, but this bowl would never look the same again.
“I'm sorry I yelled," said Mom, as she opened her door. “Please just throw out the pieces. We can't make a fresh start with broken things.” As I wandered down the hall, Mr Chen was emptying his garbage.
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“Are you sure you want to throw that out?” he asked.____________________________________________
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I brought the repaired bowl into her room.______________________________________________________
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写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者一家搬到新家后，作者一时没有适应新变化而感到沮丧。一天，作者不小心打碎了奶奶的碗，让妈妈很不开心。作者去扔碗时，遇到了邻居，邻居会怎么帮助作者呢？作者带着修好的碗回去给妈妈看，这件事会让作者一家有什么感慨呢？
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“Are you sure you want tothrow that out?” he asked. My throat twisted into a knot. “It's broken," I murmured. “That's a simple repair. Come.” In their apartment, Mr Chen spread the broken pieces out like a jigsaw puzzle. After finding each match, he taught me to delicately rebuild the bowl, filling in the crack lines with a special paint. Finally, the bowl was together again. I held it gently in the palm of my hand and admired it for long. Slightly different, it was as beautiful as before. I couldn't wait to show it to Mom and rushed back home.
I brought the repaired bowl into her room. Obviously, she was more than surprised to see the bowl again. “It's amazing” she marveled, running her fingertip over the fixed cracks.“Mr Chen helped me mend it. He is a superb craftsman,” I said with a grin. “Definitely. After being repaired, it looks much stronger than before" said Mom, smiling radiantly. I sat on the edge of her bed, and Mom reached out to me. Our hands joined with crisscrossed fingers, we both knew this was a new beginning.

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(2022·江苏省高三第一次百校联考)Many years ago there lived in Holland a boy named Peter. Peter's father was one of the men who tended the gates in the dikes(堤坝)，called sluices. He opened and closed the sluices so that ships could pass out of Holland's canals into the great sea.
One afternoon in the early fall, when Peter was eight years old, his mother called him from his play. “Come, Peter," she said. “I want you to go across the dike and take these cakes to your friend, the blind man. Remember that you shall be home before dark. " The little boy was glad to go on such an errand (跑腿)， and started off with a light heart. He stayed with the poor blind man a little while to tell him something about his walk along the dike-the sun, the flowers and the ships far out at sea. Then he remembered his mother's wish that he should return before dark. Bidding his friend goodbye, he set out for home.
As he walked beside the canal, he noticed how the rains had swollen the water, and how they beat against the side of the dike, and he thought of his father's gates. “I am glad they are so strong," he said to himself. “If the dike gave way what should we do? These pretty fields would be covered with water." As he walked along the dike he sometimes stopped to pick the pretty blue flowers that grew beside the road, or to listen to the rabbits' soft tread as they rustled through the grass.
Suddenly he heard a noise. It was the sound of trickling water! He stopped and looked down. There was a small hole in the dike, through which a tiny stream was flowing. Any child in Holland is frightened at the thought of a leak in the dike. Peter understood the danger at once. If the water ran through a little hole it would soon make a larger one, and the whole country would be flooded. In a moment he saw what he must do. Throwing away his flowers, he climbed down the side of the dike and thrust his finger into the tiny hole. The flowing of the water was stopped!“Oh!” he said to himself. “I can keep the water back with my finger. Holland shall not be drowned while I am here.”
This was all very well at first, but soon it grew dark and cold. The little fellow shouted and screamed. “Come here; come here,” he called. But no one heard him; no one came to help him.
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It grew still colder, and his arm ached, and began to grow stiff and numb._____________________________
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The moon and stars looked down on the child crouching(蹲) on a stone on the side of the dike.____________
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写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。Peter(彼得）过河去给朋友送蛋糕，妈妈嘱咐他天黑前要回家，但是路过大坝时，他发现有个小洞在漏水，他害怕小洞变成大洞发生洪灾。于是，他用自己的手指堵住了水。天越来越冷，Peter会怎么做？最终Peter 能得救吗？
［精彩范文］
It grew still colder, and his arm ached, and began to grow stiff and numb. He shouted again. “Will no one come? Mother! Mother!” But his mother had looked anxiously along the dike road many times since sunset for her little boy, and now she had closed and locked the cottage door, thinking that Peter was spending the night with his blind friend, and that she would scold him in the morning for staying away from home without permission. Peter tried to whistle, but his teeth chattered with the cold. He thought of his brother and sister in their warm beds, and of his dear father and mother. “I must not let them be drowned," he thought. “I must stay here until someone comes.”
The moon and stars looked down on the child crouching (蹲）on a stone on the side of the dike. His head was bent, and his eyes were closed, but he was not asleep. “I'll stand it somehow," he thought. So, he stayed there all night keeping the sea out. Early the next morning a man going to work heard a groan as he walked along the top of the dike. Looking over the edge, he saw a child clinging to the side of the great wall. “ What's the matter?” he called. “ Are you hurt?”“I'm keeping the water back!” Peter yelled. “Tell them to come quickly!” The alarm was spread. People came running with shovels and the hole was soon mended. They carried Peter home to his parents, and before long the whole town knew that he had saved their lives that night.

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(2022·湖北省武汉市第一中学高三月考)Mary waited anxiously for her turn in the empty dressing room. Never had she been so nervous before. This competition was of vital importance to her comeback. “If I can win today," she said to herself, “I can dance on the national stage next month. " Three months ago, her left arm was seriously injured in a car accident. After the medical treatment, she began to recover slowly, She practiced over and over again in order to regain her dancing skills.
“Hi, Mary," in rushed her friend Jessica. “How is your arm? Is it going to influence your performance?”
“I guess it can be tolerated for I am to win the match." said Mary with a determined look.
“Admirable! But I hear that a girl called Linda is really gifted and strong. She can be your real well-matched competitor. Come on!”
After Jessica left, Mary decided to practice her most difficult spin.“If I don't try harder, I won't grasp this chance." She thought. But her arm began to hurt, making her worried. “Mary, what makes you think you have a chance tonight?" she said to herself. After the pain was gone, she continued to warm up.
A slim girl hurried in and put down an equipment bag on the chair. Then, she took out her dance dress quickly and put it on skillfully. Seeing Mary, she smiled politely and said “Hi, I'm Linda. I am the next one!” Mary nodded in reply but felt uncomfortable. “This is just my competitor. Because of her, I may lose tonight. " Her mind was wandering when Linda let out a scream, “Oh, God, I can't find my music tape!" Linda searched her bag but in vain. “It may be missing on the way." With these words, she then rushed out.
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Suddenly, Mary caught sight of a black box under the chair where Linda put her bag.____________________
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Hearing her name called, Mary walked on the stage with her heart beating faster and faster._______________
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写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了舞蹈表演参赛者 Mary（玛丽）在赛前发生的故事，正在她紧张的准备参赛的时候，竞争对手却找不到音乐磁带。Mary看到了Linda(琳达）的磁带，她会怎么做？比赛中的 Mary能够战胜自我吗？
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Suddenly, Mary caught sight of a black box under the chair where Linda put her bag. She went over and then opened the box to find Linda's tape was just inside. At that time, she was in a dilemma, “This is my chance to defeat her.” But on a second thought, she changed her mind, “If I hide it, I will win the competition but I may lose something.” She placed it on the chair carefully, leaving a note saying “Take it easy, we are the best.” Soon, it's her turn to come on the stage.
Hearing her name called, Mary walked on the stage with her heart beating faster and faster. She kept reminding herself, “I have been practicing for so long, and I will certainly make it.” But the serious pain in her arm came again when she was performing the most difficult spin. She fell down on the stage. At that moment, Linda came back in low spirits. To her surprise and relief she saw the tape and Mary's note. With Mary's kindness and encouragement, Linda finished her performance calmly and skillfully. Finally, Mary lost the game but she believed she had won everything.

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动作描写(二)
①Stunned, I stood up and gave her an awkward hug/hugged her in an award way.
我惊呆了，站起来，笨抽地拥抱了她。
②Speechless, she smiled radiantly and gathered her son into her
她什么都没说，把儿子一把揽入怀中，脸上洋溢着动人的笑容。
③The nearer it got, the more she waved the yellow blouse wildly.
离得越近，她越使劲地挥动那件黄色上衣。
④The man took the sacks, reached into his pocket and placed four coins in Reuben's hand.
那人接过麻袋，手伸进口袋，掏出4个硬币放在鲁本手里。
⑤He parked down the street from Bobby's house, and rushed to his front door, trembling with excitement.
他把车停在鲍比家附近的街道上，兴奋得浑身发抖，冲到前门。
⑥Seeing no other people notice us, I placed the Christmas present down and pounded his doorbell.
看到没有人注意到我们，我放下圣诞礼物，使劲按他的门铃。
⑦She didn't say a word, but smiled a watery smile and held my hand tightly.
她一句话也没说，只是含含糊糊地笑了笑，紧紧地握着我的手。
⑧Belle Ringer nodded thoughtfully, and Frannie hurried off to wait on the rest of her tables.
贝尔·林格若有所思地点了点头，弗兰妮赶紧去为她的其他桌子服务。
⑨I led them toward a large corner booth. I could feel the rest of the staff following behind as we marched through the dining room.
我领着他们走向角落里的一个大摊位。当我们列队穿过餐厅时，我能感觉到其他员工跟在后面。
⑩The man stepped hack/stepped onto the platform to take a good look at the paintings.
那人向后退／走上讲台，好好看了看那些画。
⑪They opened their mouths in surprise.
他们惊讶地张大了嘴巴。
⑫She looked her father straight in the eye and answered his question truthfully.
她眼睛直视着父亲，真诚地回答问题。
⑬As I recall, it was you who suggested this idea in the first place.
我记得一开始是你提出这个主意的。
⑭Instead of being delighted, she threw the invitation on the table crossly, muttering.
她非但不高兴，反而生气地把请束扔在桌上，嘴里嘟囔着。
⑮By a violent effort she conquered her grief and replied in a calm voice, while she wiped her wet cheeks: “Nothing.”
她竭力克制自己的悲伤，一边擦脸上的泪水，一边用平静的声音回答说：“没什么。”
⑯At the end of a week they had lost all hope. Loisel, who had aged five years, declared:“ We must consider how to replace that ornament.”
一周后，他们失去了一切希望。当时卢瓦塞尔已经五岁了，他说：“我们必须考虑如何取代那个装饰品。”
⑰Mauche come stammered:“ The pocketbook was found.”
莫什结结巴巴地说：“钱包找到了。”
⑱When he was seated at the table in Jordanian's tavern, he commenced to explain "the affair”。
当他在约旦酒馆的桌子旁坐下时，他开始解释“这件事”。
⑲He went along, stopping his friends, beginning endlessly his statement.
他继续走着，打断了他的朋友们，没完没了地开始说他的话。
⑳As he left the mayor's office, the old man was surrounded and questioned with a serious curiosity.
当老人离开市长办公室时，他被围住了，人们怀着极大的好奇心询问他。

心理描写(二)
①These events constantly remind me of my father's absence.
这些事件时常使我想起父亲的缺席。
②I immediately picture/imagine him walking through the door, wearing a shining smile.
我立刻想象出他面带灿烂笑容走进那扇门的情景。
③Most days I hope that maybe he will turn up at my doorstep one day.
大多数时候，我都希望也许有一天他会出现在我家门口。
④At that very moment, he wondered whether he would be rewarded for saving people.
就在那时，他想知道自己是否会因为救人而得到奖励。
⑤He was determined to tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice.
他决心告诉人们真相，但没有人能听到他的声音。
⑥So the young man realized the police had arrested the wrong person, and he took the great courage to expose the real criminal.
所以这个年轻人意识到警察抓错人了，他鼓起巨大的勇气揭露了真正的罪犯。
⑦I focused my thoughts on every part of myself.
我把我的思想集中在自己的每个部分。
⑧We nodded our heads in agreement, understanding each other.
我们点头表示同意，相互理解。
⑨Somehow I got the idea it would be fun to waken my father by firing it.
不知怎么的，我有了一个想法，用它来叫醒我父亲会很有趣。
⑩I was wondering where he was. I had a new joke to tell him.
我还在想他在哪儿呢。我有个新笑话要告诉他。
⑪I was afraid to go to sleep, for fear that I would wake up the way I had been before.
我不敢入睡，怕醒来时又恢复了从前的状态。
⑫Then I tried to figure out what I should do. Follow my friend to the hospital?
然后我想知道我该怎么做。跟着我朋友去医院？
⑬There was nothing I could accomplish there, I convinced myself.
我对自己说，在那里我什么也做不了。
⑭All I could do at the hospital, I decided, was to get in the way.
我(心里)断定，在医院里，我所能做的就是帮倒忙。
⑮As I started my car, I realized that my friend had left his truck and keys at the courts.
当我发动汽车时，我意识到我的朋友把他的卡车和钥匙忘在了球场上。
⑯From that one experience I learned that the most important thing in life isn't the money you make.
从那次经历中，我明白了生活中最重要的不是你赚的钱。
⑰I will cherish the fond memories for the rest of my life.
我将用我的余生来珍惜这些美好的回忆。
⑱He felt he could not continue and sat down on the lawn.
他觉得自己无法继续下去了，于是坐在了草坪上。
⑲At this dark and hopeless moment, a wonderful idea came lo him. It filled his mind with a great, bright light.
在这黑暗而绝望的时刻，他想到了一个绝妙的主意。这使他的脑子里充满了一道巨大而明亮的光。
⑳Tom thought for a moment, was about to agree; but he changed his mind.
汤姆想了一会儿，正准备同意；但他改变了主意。

情感描写
1.喜乐
①The smile on her face shone like a diamond.
她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
②A smile of understanding flashed across his face.
他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。
③A ripple of excitement ran through them.
一阵兴奋声穿过他们。
④Laughter lingered around the room.
笑声在房间里萦绕。
⑤His eyes twinkled with pleasure.
他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。
⑥A wild gaiety took hold of her.
一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。
⑦Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile.
令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角持续保持着微笑。
⑧I was wild with joy.
我欣喜若狂。
⑨I was pleased beyond description.
我高兴得难以形容。
⑩She wore a shining smile on her face.
她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
⑪Her smile lit up the whole room.
她的笑容照亮了整个房间。
⑫She shed tears of joy.
她高兴得流下了眼泪。
⑬I couldn't restrain my joy and jumped into the house.
我抑制不住内心的喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门。
⑭She was overflowing with happiness.
她洋溢着幸福。
⑮Her flushed face was shining with excitement.
她兴奋得满脸通红。
⑯Joy welled up inside her.
乔伊心中涌起喜悦。
⑰I was floating on air.
我非常高兴。
⑱Amusement gleamed in his eyes.
他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。
2.愤怒
①I was seized by anger.
我充满了愤怒。
②He was fuming with rage.
他气得大发雷霆。
③His anger boiled over.
他的愤怒爆发了。
④He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.
他几乎控制不住怒火。
⑤He was breathing fire and fury.
他充满着怒火。
⑥His voice trembled with anger.
他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
⑦He gave me a look of burning anger.
他愤怒地看了我一眼。
⑧He glared at me with burning eyes.
他用灼热的目光怒视着我。
⑨He flared up at the word.
他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。
⑩His face clouded with anger.
他气得脸色阴沉。
3.悲伤烦恼
①He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.
他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。
②I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.
我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。
③Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tears.
她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。
④An atmosphere of sadness and loneliness settled over her.
悲伤和孤独的气氨笔罩着轴。
⑤She burst into tears and ram out of the root
她突然哭了起来，跑出丁房间。
⑥She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.
她掩面哭泣。
⑦I tried to light back tears./My eyes were filled with tea8
我努力思住眼泪。／我的眼里充满了泪水。
⑧A frown now stood on his face.
他皱起了眉头。
⑨They sat there with glum looks on their faces.
他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。
⑩The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.
这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。
⑪He brimmed over with sorrow when ...
他满是悲伤···
⑫They were immersed in sorrow.
他们沉浸在悲痛之中。
⑬These days he was in low spirits.
这些日子他情绪低落。
4.害怕
①He turned to me, with his eyes full of' horror.
他转向我，眼里充满了恐惧。
②Fear slowly creeps upon her.
恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。
③She was struck with horror when ...
她感到恐惧·
④She was choked by fear.
她因恐惧而窒息。
⑤Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.
她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。
⑥A flood of fear welled up in him./Fear flooded over him.
他心中涌起一阵恐惧。／恐惧淹没了他。
⑦Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated.
她的心跳得厉害，儿乎窒息而死。
⑧She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。
5.感动
①Touched deeply/immensely, we...
被深深感动，我们·...
②Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.
她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。
③It is very moving to see how much strangers can care for each other.
看到陌生人之间这段彼此关照，实在令人感动。

第二步 精深学习
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(2022·重庆市南开中学高三第四次质量检测)The five children in Larrane Leech's day care group were outdoors early, painting landscapes under the dizzy sun. By 10 am, it was time to find shade, so Larrane decided they would walk down to the river.
“We're going to pick berries now,” she announced. A nature lover, Larrane insisted they spend as much time as possible outdoors. Larrane handed each child an empty jar and called for Pal, her one-year-old German shepherd(德国牧羊犬)。The group made its way over the dusty road and then onto a dirt path through the trees. They stopped at
the first berry bush and got busy picking berries, cheering and talking excitedly.
A young cougar (美洲狮) cocked an ear toward the birdlike chatter and sniffed the air. Stepping over the thick carpet of pine needles, the cougar moved quietly toward the children.
Larrane sensed the children suddenly go quiet. She looked up to see the back end of a cougar, the size of Pal, standing over one child, Mikey. The sight of the cougar near her kids immediately froze Larrane. Larrane couldn't tell whether Mikey had been bitten. Her mind racing wildly, she darted toward the cougar. Desperately intending to grab its tail, she shifted aim at the last minute and seized the cougar by the neck. She shook it from side to side. Instantly, the cougar wheeled toward Larrane. Growling and hissing, it stretched up high and brought its paws down upon the head of the woman. Although still in its youth, it had all the teeth and muscle a cougar needs to pull down a victim three times its size. This animal was capable of killing her.
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写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了一位日托中心的负责人Larrane(拉兰）有一天带五个孩子和一只德国牧羊犬到户外活动，先画风景，后采浆果，在采摘浆果期间出现了一只美洲狮意图伤害他们，Larrane 一行会怎么做？Mikey(麦克）的出现能否帮助众人脱困？
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Now aware of the danger, the other four children screamed and ran behind Larrane. They picked up branches from the ground and began attacking the cougar. However, their strikes only managed to anger the fierce beast. Letting out a threatening howl, it scratched Larrane head. Blood began to flow down Larrane's face, but she held tightly onto its neck to prevent its deadly bite. Just then, Pal came to her rescue. He sank his sharp teeth into the beast and tore 'open its flesh while dragging it backward. Facing such united enemy, the cougar had to admit defeat and flee.
Larrane rushed to Mikey, who lay quietly on the ground. He was still breathing. “Thank God! He's alive.”Larrane thought in relief, but he was disturbingly still because he was in total shock. “ We have to run home now." She said calmly to the terrified children, “Everything will be all right. " With Mikey on her back and the other children following her, she ran all the way back to the day care center. The other staff helped her put Mikey down on a bed. That was when she finally had time to attend to her wound. Larrane met the greatest challenge of her life head-on and won. Sometimes we have no idea what we can do until we have to make a choice between life and death.

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(2022·河北省高三联考)I had moved to Arizona about two weeks before the start of my junior year of high school, so not only was this a new school for me, but also a new state and I did not know anyone.
On the first day of school at lunch after getting my meal, I sat down at a table in the courtyard. As I began to eat, I looked around at the other tables and saw another girl sitting alone, so I decided to go and sit with her. Anyway, there was no reason for me to have a whole table to myself, and who knew maybe I could make a friend. I walked to check and said, “Excuse me, do you mind if I sit with you?" She was surprised at first, but then smiled and said, “No, I don't!”
We hit it off immediately and became close friends throughout the next two years. Towards the end of our senior year, she told me that she had been accepted to an out-of-state college and would be moving away after graduation. I was sad that I would miss her but at the same time was really happy for her.
She then shared with me something very moving. “Do you remember the first day of school when you came over and sat down with me during lunch?” she asked. “Of course! Why do you ask?” I replied.
She continued, “I want to let you know how special you are and that you make a difference. I was severely depressed that day, because something unhappy had happened to me that morning. I had been being sad since the morning and nobody realized my sadness. It had just broken me down. If you hadn't appeared, I would be probably in deep sadness for a long time after I got home from school.”
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写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者刚搬家，来到新学校，第一次吃饭的时候认识了一个女孩，两人从此成为好朋友。大学毕业分离前夕，好朋友告诉作者许多关于自己的事。她会有什么样的故事呢？两人从中收获了什么呢？
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Then, she told me something more I hadn't known before. She was also a new student at that time. Because of language barriers, shyness and difficulties in study, she had to put up with great pressure. At that noon when I met her, getting the worst exam score in her class, she was laughed at by her classmates. She felt lonely and hopeless until I approached her warmly, From then on,we two often learned together and shared happiness and sorrow.
Both of us gained a lot from the incident. She said that it was my company and encouragement that not only made her happy, but also improved her confidence. For me, it was her sincerity that helped me adapt to anew life. I can't help but smile every time because I am really grateful to know the girl grows up healthily. It shows that a simple kind act has the extraordinary ability to change one's life.

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(2022·广东省高三阶段性质量检测)If there's one thing I can't stand people saying, it is “I'm no good at anything, I don't have any talent”，I just don't buy that at all. To me, everyone has at least one talent, and while it sometimes takes you a lifetime to find, it does exist. There was a time when I didn't believe that. What changed my mind was a seemingly small event that took place in 1953.
At that time I was a high school student. I was a funny-looking skinny boy named Eugene Orowitz, who weighed barely 100 pounds, I was a good student, but as far as I was concerned, in just about every other department I was a loser. I wanted to fit in, to be someone and do something well. But I hadn't found anything I was good at. One sunny afternoon, our gym class went out to the school's running track. The teacher taught us all various track and field event8. I was a loser in all of them, Then came the javelin(标枪)，Suddenly something inside me began saying, "Try it! Try it” I had to wait my turn, though, trying not to look too eager. Finally, when everyone had had a chance to throw-the best throw going about 30 yards-I looked at the teacher.
“Hey, Orowitz, you want to try?" he asked.
Embarrassed, I looked down, but managed to nod my head.
“Well, come on then," he said impatiently, and handed me the javelin. Behind me I could hear some of my classmates laughing. As I grasped the javelin in my hand, I was seized with a strange feeling-a new-found excitement. For some crazy reason, I was relaxed over what I was about to do, even though I'd never done it before. I raised the javelin over my head, took six quick steps and let the thing go. The same voice that had urged me to throw it, now told me it was a good throw.
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写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者认为每个人都有至少一种天赋，之前自己不相信，但是高中发生的一次标枪事件却改变了作者的看法。作者能成功将标枪打到远方吗？这件事之后，作者有什么改变？
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I watched as the javelin took off. My heart quickened as I saw it continue to sail, 30 yards out, then 40 yards. As it went past the 50- yard mark, it was still going. For a minute nothing was said. Then someone whispered, “Holy cow!” And others began cheering. Nobody could believe what I had just done. I took the javelin back to the gym teacher. “You keep the thing.” he said, still shaking his head in wonder.
That night I took the javelin home with me. The very next day, I began practicing with it, and every day that summer-for six hours or more-I would throw it in a nearby schoolyard. By the time I was a member of the track team, all my practice paid off. I threw the javelin 211 feet that year, the best throw by any high-school boy in the country. I feel strongly that we must keep our minds open; we can't let ourselves be discouraged or depressed when the talent doesn't readily appear.

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(2022·山东省青岛市第五十八中学高三期中考试)My great grandfather, my grandfather and my father are farmers, and so are all my family. My father has a fixed idea that I would become a farmer too. Although I respect him and am indeed skilled at doing some farm work, I don't agree that I should automatically follow in my father's footsteps.
When I was a teenager, my father happened to take me to an airport which belonged to one of his friends. It was the first time I had seen an aeroplane in real life. Knowing that I had never been on board, my father's friend Tom offered me an opportunity to fly with him in his small aeroplane. I quickly accepted his offer! When we took off, I felt nervous but thrilled. Being up in the clouds and looking at the view below was unlike anything I had ever felt. I was just enjoying it. I assumed being a pilot would be the most awesome thing in the whole world. From that day a thought crept into my mind that I wanted to become a pilot, but I doubted whether my father would support me. After all, it was a totally different path from what he had planned for me. Therefore, I put the thought to the back of my mind, because I knew he would still insist on holding onto his previous idea.
Anyway, besides helping my father on the farm, I would frequently visit Tom's airport. Gradually, I got familiar with every button and switch on the aircraft and I learned a lot about planes, such as how to fill the plane with fuel, how to check the engines and so on. But what I had learned just left me wanting more, so I decided to go to college to become a professional pilot.
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This time I would not hide my desire any more._________________________________________________
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写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者认为每个人都有至少一种天赋，之前自己不相信，但是高中发生的一次标枪事件却改变了作者的看法。作者能成功将标枪打到远方吗？这件事之后，作者有
什么改变？
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I watched as the javelin took off. My heart quickened as I saw it continue to sail, 30 yards out, then 40 yards. As it went past the 50-yard mark, it was still going. For a minute nothing was said. Then someone whispered, “Holy cow!” And others began cheering. Nobody could believe what I had just done. I took the javelin back to the gym teacher. “You keep the thing.” he said, still shaking his head in wonder.
That night I took the javelin home with me. The very next day, I began practicing with it, and every day that summer-for six hours or more-I would throw it in a nearby schoolyard. By the time I was a member of the track team, all my practice paid off. I threw the javelin 211 feet that year, the best throw by any high-school boy in the country. I feel strongly that we must keep our minds open; we can't let ourselves be discouraged or depressed when the talent doesn't readily appear.

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(2022,浙江省＂七彩阳光＂新高考研究联盟高三上学期返校考)Wrapping paper flew everywhere an Cali opened her gift. The box had a picture of a pretty girl. She wan wearing white lee skates and turning around a frozen pond.
Cali looked up at her aunt and uncle with her big brown eyes.“Figure' skates? Wow! How nice of you! But,” the little girl hesitated,“… but I don't know how to skate. ” She looked embarrassed.
＂Don't worry," said Aunt Lisa. “That's the fun part-learning how to do it!”
“That's right," said Uncle George. “We will take you to the ice rink（冰场） and all go skating together.”
“I don't know ...,” said Cali. She wasn't too sure she was going to be able to do it. Sometimes she had a hard time learning new things. She looked again at the happy girl on the box. It did look like fun. Cali imagined herself moving and turning on the ice like a real figure skater.“Okay,” she agreed. “Let's do it!”
The next day Cali went to the skating rink with her aunt and uncle. Her eyes twinkled and her face lit up with excitement as she looked at the other skaters around her. She sat down on the bench and slipped her feet into the skates. Holding the strings in her fingers, she could not figure out how to tie them up. “I don't know how to do it,” she said. She felt sad that this was another thing she couldn't do.
＂Let me show you." Her aunt bent down on one knee, explaining how to put the strings around the small hooks(钩子），Then she tied them into a tight bow, "Now, you do the other skate yourself. I'll help you if you need it." Cali bent over the skate and did what her aunt had showed her. Her tongue stuck out of the side of her mouth as she paid attention. After a few tries, she worked out how to cross the strings around the hooks. Her aunt helped make sure the strings were nice and tight. "You did in!” smiled her aunt, patting Cali on the back.
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写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。Cali(卡利）觉得滑冰的女孩很漂亮，但是又不够自信，觉得自己学不会滑冰。因此，Cali的叔叔和阿姨带着Cali去学习滑冰。他们会如何鼓励和教Cali 滑冰呢？她最终能学会滑冰吗？
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“Time to hit the ice,” her uncle said. As he helped her walk to the edge of the rink, he said, “ We will hold your hands and you stand between us. ” Cali took their hands in hers and made her first step onto the smooth ice. She grinned and tried taking a few steps. “Good, Cali. Now try to glide on one foot for just a second longer on each foof as you walk,” suggested her aunt. Then her uncle skated in front of her while her aunt guided her from behind. “Skate to your uncle now,” she said, pushing her on the back a little to get more speed. Cali glided unsteadily towards her uncle, taking small steps and fighting for balance. When she reached her uncle, he encouraged her to try it on her own. Cali wasn't too sure about that. It seemed like everyone else was zooming past her. She started to get nervous. She lost her balance.
Oof! She fell down, hard. It hurt. She closed her eyes and tried not to cry. In a moment, her uncle was helping her back on feet. He smiled into her eyes. “Everyone falls down the first few times. You just have to get back up again.” Cali took a deep breath. “Okay, I can do this." She skated away from her uncle toward the crowd. As she wobbled, she talked to herself. “ Be brave. Keep going. Small steps. Yes!" She had skated almost all the way around the rink, by herself! Her aunt caught up to her and took her hand. “Look at you! You are working so hard and doing so well. We're proud of you," said Aunt Lisa.

【写作要领】
明晰写作步骤
(一)写作步骤
1.读文：精读文章，确定文章线索。每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索，是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等，这样有利于“顺藤摸瓜(结尾)”。确定文章体裁和题材(话题)。注意文中的关键词，也就是故事中的时间、地点、人物和事件。有效的阅读方法是：阅读原文的过程中确定文章的体裁→理清文章的结构及作者的写作意图→明白原文的情节→推敲已给出的续写段首，推理下文的发展方向→揣摩作者原文的语气，判断作者的情感态度。
2.审题：仔细审题，明确续写要求。一般短文前面都有对续写的具体要求，如词数限制、根据续写段落的首句提示，仔细审题，这样才能做到“心中有数”。
3.谋段：在读文、审题的基础上，先仔细阅读续写部分所给出的两段段首开头语，再构思这两段要写的段落大意。根据原文情节和首段开头语增加次要情节，增加常识情节，这两段加起来要能写出10到15个句子，以满足续写词数要求。
4.回扣：回扣原文，揣摩续写思路。快速回读短文，抓住文章的思路，结合段首的提示语，最终确定续写段落的思路和内容。
5.初写：拟写草稿，修改错词病句。在确定了思路和内容之后，按逻辑规律拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性及语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。写作时要注意所用的人称和时态要与原文一致。另外，还要注意尽可能地减少表达上的语法错误。如果遇到语言上的表述困难，可多参考原文中的有关语句。
6.定稿：写好初稿后，要结合原文中故事线索读一读自己续写的内容。既要确保不出现与原文相矛盾的地方，又要做到内容上前后连贯，语句通顺。润色续写部分，使之过渡与衔接自然，尽量使用高级词汇，最好运用从句、独立主格结构、分词短语等高级句型。誊写文字时，务必做到“字迹工整、清晰”。
(二)续写方法
1.精读所给阅读材料，理清文章脉络并明确作者的论点，确定文章主旨。
2.找出前文与续写段段首句之间的内在联系，站在作者的角度，设计并发展情节，想象要合理，情节要连贯。
3.后续情节一般为故事的高潮或延续，是原作者声音的延续、态度的延伸。因此，要尽量符合原文思路，并求得与读者的心理共鸣，让读者回味无穷。
4.续写时心态要端正，续写的内容要积极向上，把事物美好的一面展示出来。
5.利用自己已有的知识和经验，在继承原作者语言风格基础之上，准确、地道地表达，充分展示语言的表现力。提高关联词与过渡语的使用率，增强整句表现力。
6.如果所给短文为议论文，那么议论文中的段落首句多为主题句，观点鲜明。续写时，要围绕段落分论点确定论证方法，如正反对比、例证等。

掌握写作技巧
1.从原文中整理出3~5个小的情节，从中推理出续写的主要情节。情节不能读后凭空想象，可按自己看过的小说、电视剧情节适当推理。
2.根据两个段首语来推理情节。段首语往往决定着这一整段话的走向，不可衔接不当。
3.根据故事需要，合理地丰富、有条理地增加一些次要的情节。比如人物的表情、动作、心理活动，细节描写等。
4.根据生活常识或者社会经验，丰富文章的细节。不可闹出不合常理的、脱离生活实际的笑话。
5.平时多练习续写微作文，找到自己所能掌控的语句长度。10句*15词＝150词，15句*12词＝150词。其实续写并不可怕，一篇读后续写10~15句，就可以达到词数；分开两段，每段5~8句话。
6.多种句型反复练习、尝试，找到自己能够驾驭的句子类型。简单句、并列句、复合句可以加分不少。当然建议复合句也只是基础的复合句，无需过于复杂，有时候牵强用上反而碍事。
7.平时注意多积累记叙文、故事方面的词汇、句型和句段，丰富自己的记叙文类英语语言的材料库。考试中用出地道的英语句子，老师一定会很欣赏。脑中先成文，落笔就一气呵成。相对简单部分，直接书写在答卷上；重点部分可以先在草稿纸上拟写，斟酌词句的使用，然后誊抄上去。

提升写作质量
1.了解三大特性
(1)创造性
即发挥想象力，该题型具有一定的开放性，需用自己的语言对故事情节进行内容创造。
(2)逻辑性
即根据已提供的关键信息，按照可能的合理的方向续写，使文章逻辑结构完整。
(3)丰富性
即语言能力的充分体现，词汇句法的准确与复杂程度，细节描写的生动性等都将让故事更加立体饱满。
2.遵从三大原则
(1)原文一致原则
内容要前后衔接，上下连贯，语言表达风格一致。
(2)正能量原则
基于故事发展(故事线＋感情线)预测正能量结局。一定要正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言归于好，和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法，等等。
(3)曲折性原则
凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。

注意得分要点
1.字迹清晰
每段首尾的字迹必须非常清楚。其实阅卷老师无论看什么作文，他的重点一般都是放在每段的首尾，首尾必须吸睛。
2.前后呼应，主题升华
读后续写多以叙事文为主，在续写过程中，要捋顺原文故事的发展思路，找准方向后，在结尾处可以加深主题，进行主题上的升华，使文章不仅做到前后呼应，也可以使文章脱颖而出。
3.高级词汇怎么放
读后续写的词汇得分点除了一般的名词、形容词、副词之外，最重要的是高级动词！因为续写侧重叙事，里面涉及到的人的动作是非常多的，比如cry,这就过于简单，要侧重细节描写，to show, not to tell,高分作文一般就会写 With shoulders shivering, her tears cannot help streaming down her face.(她的双肩哆哆嗦嗦，眼泪情不自禁的从她脸上流下来。)。所有类似表现喜怒哀乐的情况，都要事先做好准备(注意，两三句即可，但这两三句一定要是最佳句，如句式，高级词汇都要是最好的，熟记于心，一直用即可)，侧重刻画描写，脸，手，眼睛都可以描写。

熟悉高考评分解读
总体来看，读后续写以读为辅，以写为主，其目标是考查综合语言运用能力。
评分标准是评分的依据和绝对标准。
依据评分标准，读后续写主要考查内容创作和语言运用两个方面。评卷时，评卷老师先根据考生所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
由此可知，阅卷老师在阅卷时，主要考虑以下内容：
1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；
2.内容的丰富性；
3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；
4.上下文的连贯性。