北师大版高中英语必修第二册unit6 the admirable sectionⅲ表达作文巧升格学案

UNIT 6 The admirable

本单元写作项目是写一篇概要。

[基本框架]

1．开头(beginning)——点明主旨

2．主体(body)——概况要点

3．结尾(ending)——简要总结

[常用词块]

1．attach great importance of强调……重要性

2．against one's will违背某人的意志

3．one after another相继地

4．take a correct attitude to/towards对……抱有正确的态度

5．attract one's attention引起某人的注意

6．make the best of充分利用

[常用语句]

★精彩开头

1．The author highlights the importance of encouragement for students.

作者强调了鼓励学生的重要性。

2．The passage argues that we must not only value those who come first or are the best in any field but the others whose effort push them to success.

文章认为，我们不仅要重视那些在任何领域都是第一位或最好的人，而且要重视那些努力促使他们成功的人。

★正文佳句

1．People who talk and sing to plants have no mental problems at all, according to an agricultural expert.

据一位农业专家说，跟植物说话唱歌的人根本没有精神问题。

2．Laughter Yoga was invented by Madan Kataria, a doctor in Mumbai, India.Laughter includes forced laughter and real laughter.They both lead to a feeling of happiness.

笑瑜伽是由印度孟买的医生马丹·卡塔利亚发明的。笑包括强迫笑和真正的笑。它们都能带来幸福感。

★余味结尾

1．Luckily, there is a lot one can do to make time away from work though it takes some effort, but anyway, it's worthwhile to have a try.

幸运的是，虽然需要付出一些努力，但是人们可以做很多事情来腾出时间离开工作，但是无论如何，值得一试。

2．But, some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system.

但是，一些科学家认为，接触一些泥土有助于我们的免疫系统。

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

The production of coffee beans is a huge, profitable business, but, unfortunately, full­sun production is taking over the industry and bringing about a lot of damage.The change in how coffee is grown from shade­grown production to full­sun production endangers the very existence of certain animals, and even disturbs the world's ecological balance.

On a local level, the damage to the forests required by full­sun fields affects the area's animals.The shade of the forest trees provides a home for birds and other species (物种) that depend on the trees' flowers and fruits.Full­sun coffee growers destroy this forest home.As a result, many species are quickly dying out.

On a more global level，the destruction of the rainforest for full­sun coffee fields also threatens(威胁)human life.Medical research often makes use of the forests' plant and animal life，and the destruction of such species could prevent researchers from finding cures for certain diseases.In addition，new coffee­growing techniques are poisoning the water locally，and eventually the world's groundwater.

Both locally and globally，the continued spread of full­sun coffee plantations(种植园)could mean the destruction of the rainforest ecology.The loss of shade trees is already causing a slight change in the world's climate, and studies show that the loss of oxygen­giving trees also leads to air pollution and global warming.Moreover, the new growing techniques are contributing to acidic soil conditions.

It is obvious that the way much coffee is grown affects many aspects of life, from the local environment to the global ecology.But consumers do have a choice.They can purchase shade­grown coffee whenever possible, although at a higher cost.

【参考范文】

Full­sun production of coffee beans has caused damage to some species, even the ecology.(要点1) First, it destroys the habitats of local species, and even causes their extinction.(要点2) Moreover，with water poisoned and fewer species for medical research, people's life is severely affected.(要点3) The destruction of the rainforest ecology seems inevitable, accompanied by air pollution and global warming and so on.(要点4) Therefore, consumers are advised to buy shade­grown coffee though it's more expensive.(要点5)