unit 10 单元话题满分范文必背-2021-2022学年八年级下册单元重难点易错题精练（人教版）

Unit 10I’ve had this bike for three years.

单元话题满分范文必背

1．假如上周日你参加了长江社区的Yard Sale活动。请给你们学校校刊上的English Club栏目写一篇关于此次活动的介绍。

要点如下:

1.有200多人参加了此次活动。

2.有的人出售旧物,如:衣服、玩具、自行车等。

3.有的人出售自制的蛋糕、卡片、书签等。

4.还有的人交换旧书。

5.请写一至两点你对此次活动的看法。

注意:

1.词数60-80;

2.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。不要逐条翻译。

参考词汇: Changjiang Community (长江社区); exchange (交换); used (旧的)

【答案】It was fine last Sunday. I went to the Yard Sale in Changjiang Community. More than 200 people took park in the activity. Some people sold old things such as bikes, toys, and clothes. Others sold cakes, cards and bookmarks made by themselves. Used books could be exchanged in the yard, too. I enjoyed myself there. In my opinion, it was a very good activity. We can not only make full use of used things, but also protect our environment.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给定材料的提纲式作文。根据材料内容可知，本文主要用一般过去时态来描述，主语为第一和第三人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。要点提示就是写作的基本框架，文章的开头首先要交代活动的时间，地点。然后是活动的具体内容，最后发表自己的个人观点。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。用到的主要词组有take part in参加；by oneself某人自己；enjoy oneself过得愉快；in one’s opinion在某人看来；not only…but also…不但……而且……。

2．近日新冠肺炎疫情 (epidemic) 趋近平稳， 但卫生问题仍需要重视。社区成为预防新冠肺炎的重点，日常的消毒任务很繁重。

假设你所在的社区组织了一次志愿活动，打扫社区卫生，进行全方位消毒，以保持社区的环境卫生。你和你的父母都非常支持，并参加了这次志愿活动。请以此为内容，根据下面的提示，写一篇关于这次活动的作文。

要点：

1. 你们为这次活动准备了什么？如：口罩 (face masks)、手套 (gloves)、靴子 (boots)。

2. 活动中你们做了什么？如：打扫了楼梯 (staircase)、电梯 (lift) 并进行消毒 (disinfect)。

3. 你从这次活动中学到了什么？

注意：

1）词数：80 词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

2）文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可做适当发挥；

3）不得出现真实姓名和校名；

4）条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。

Recently, COVID-19 epidemic has slowed down its pace and cleaning up has become a top priority for communities to prevent novel coronavirus.

Our community also organized voluntary work.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Each individual action has an effect and every person can make a difference － through a mass we can turn the tide.

【答案】例文：

Recently, COVID-19 epidemic has slowed down its pace and cleaning up has become a top priority for communities to prevent novel coronavirus.

Our community also organized voluntary work. We prepared masks, gloves and boots to protect us from dust and viruses. We cleaned the stairs and elevators and disinfected them, so that bacteria and viruses could be killed. When we cleaned up our communities, we felt very happy.

Each individual action has an effect and every person can make a difference － through a mass we can turn the tide.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按记叙文格式写。开头介绍打扫卫生已成为社区防控新冠病毒的首要任务；接下来介绍我们社区组织了打扫社区卫生；最后介绍我从这次活动中学到的东西。

2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一或第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时，介绍我们在进行社区打扫卫生时准备的东西以及做的事，介绍全面，条理清晰，用连词连接并列成分，文章前后连贯。

3.高分亮点：

短语：slow down；protect…from；so that；clean up；make a difference。

句型：目的状语从句so that bacteria and viruses could be killed；时间状语从句When we cleaned up our communities。

3．每个人都经历过童年，小时候的一些瞬间总是令人难以忘怀，那段无忧无虑、快乐无比的日子在我们的记忆中也将永不褪色……请根据提示以My childhood memory为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文，向大家讲述你童年发生的故事。

1．When did it happen?

2．What was your memory?

【答案】My childhood memory

Like many children, I had a happy childhood under the care and love of my parents. My mother took me to the kindergarten and home every day. I thought Mother was so kind and healthy that she would never get sick.

But one day, my father went to the kindergarten to get me back.I asked, "'Why doesn't my mother come'?" "She is sick, and she is in hospital," said Father. I felt sad and frightened. Then I began to cry. "Don't cry, or your mother would worry. You should be a good child. " I seemed to understand my mother was too tired. I made up my mind I would look after my mother from then on.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文，向大家讲述我童年发生的故事。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My mother took me to……，my father went to……，I felt……，I made up my mind……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我有一个愉快的童年，接下来介绍我童年时发生的事，最后我理解母亲太累了，下决心要照顾她。此处take sb to, so……that……,be in hospital, begin to do sth, make up one’s mind, from then on等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

4．红星中学将每年的6月7日定为美食节，而今年的主题是“为贫困孩子献爱心”。请你以学校学生会的名义写一份倡议书（词数在80左右），要点如下：

1. 孩子们没有足够的学习用品和衣服（school supplies and clothes）；

2. 许多贫困孩子上不起学（too…to…）；

3. 我们准备举办美食节为他们筹钱（raise money）；

4. 美食节于6月7日周日上午9: 30在学校操场上举行（school playground）。

Dear students,

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The Students’ Union（学生会）

【答案】例文

Dear students,

In some parts of our country, children don’t have enough school supplies. They don’t have enough clothes to keep warm. They are too poor to go to school. In order to help them, we will hold a food festival to raise money for them. The food festival will be on our school playground at 9:30 a. m. on Sunday, June 7th.

Look forward to your joining.

The Students’ Union

【解析】

1. 题干解读：文章属于材料作文，主要是以“为贫困孩子献爱心”为主题展开描写，内容按照题目中所给的信息描写，也可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第三人称展开描述。主要是介绍活动的详情，包括举办活动的目的，贫困地区孩子们的现状以及活动的时间和地点等。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。

5．假设你是Nancy，请以“Changes in my hometown”为题，介绍一下你家乡的变化。

（1）这些年来，我的家乡发生了很大的变化。

（2）我的家乡过去是个安静的小镇。道路又窄又脏，到处是垃圾。人们住在又小又旧的房子里。人们只能靠步行或骑自行车出行。

（3）后来，政府意识到问题，并积极采取措施改善了这种情况。现在街道宽阔干净，两边绿树成荫。人们出行靠公交车或打的。许多家庭甚至有了私家车。

（4）我认为……（此处请用1-2句话适当发挥）

Changes in My Hometown

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【答案】例文

Changes in My Hometown

There have been great changes in my hometown over the years.

My hometown used to be a quiet small town. The roads were narrow and dirty. There was rubbish everywhere. People lived in small old houses. People travelled around on foot or by bike.

Later the government realized the problem(s) and actively took action to improve the situation. Now the streets are wide and clean, with many green trees on both sides. People travel around by bus or taxi. Many families even have their own cars.

I think my hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future. I hope you can visit it some day.

【解析】

【详解】

1. 题干解读：短文是一篇话题作文。主要以“Changes in my hometown”为主题展开讨论，主要描写家乡以前是什么样子，现在变成了什么样子，包括自己的观点，按照题目中给的提示写清楚写具体就可以。

2. 例文点评：文章主要分四段描写。第一段主要总述我的家乡发生了很大的变化；第二段主要写家乡以前的样貌；第三段主要写家乡后来发生的一些变化；第四段写自己的观点；整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言表达流畅，意思通顺易懂。

3. 高分亮点：

短语：take place；used to be；on foot；by bike；take action；in the future。

句型：I think+宾语从句；I hope+宾语从句；There be句型；

6．校英语报此次征文的主题是“家乡的变化”，请你根据下面提示，完成短文并向校英语报投稿。

提示：

1.What did your hometown look like in the past years?

2.What does your hometown look like now?

3.What do you think of these changes?

要求：

1.语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥；

2.80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。

My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.

【答案】例文

My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.In the past,there weren’t so many tall buildings in the city,and the buildings were old.But now,many new and tall buildings have been built.In my memory,there was only one small park in the city.Now I can find big and beautiful parks in different areas of the city.The roads were dirty and narrow in the past,but now they have become clean and wide.I think such developments are good,and I hope the future of my hometown will be better and better.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题是话题作文，要求以“家乡的变化”为主题完成；内容包括家乡过去的样子、现在的样子以及从过去到现在发生的变化；短文开头已经给出，承接短文开头即可。

2.例文点评：例文详细介绍了家乡过去的样子和家乡现在的样子，同时介绍了发生的变化；整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；人称主要是第一人称和第三人称；时态主要是一般过去时，一般现在时和现在完成时。

3.高分亮点：

短语：in recent years；in the past；in different areas；be better and better；tall buildings；clean and wide；dirty and narrow。

句型：there be句型；have been built现在完成时的被动语态；think和hope后接省略that的宾语从句。

7．请以how I change为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，描述你读初中两年来的变化。写作要点包括外貌，兴趣爱好，行为习惯等方面。

注意：1. 短文开头已写好，不计入总词数。

2. 短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。

【答案】My life has changed a lot in the past two years. I was fat and short when I came to the middle school. At that time I was interested in computer games and I spent most of time on it. I often stayed up and got up late. My parents were worried about me.

 With the teachers’ help, I like sports now and I often play football with my classmates after school. So I become taller and stronger than before. I have a few close friends and we all like reading, too. So I usually go to the library to read some interesting books together with them. I go to bed and get up early now. My parents feel glad to see these. I’m sure I’ll be better and better.

【解析】

【详解】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们以how I change为题写一篇作文，即我是怎样变化的。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的主要内容。一是外貌方面的改变。二是兴趣爱好方面的改变。最后是行为习惯等方面的变化等。主要内容虽然已经列好，但是还需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者从外貌，兴趣爱好，行为习惯等三个方面，讲述了自己这两年来的变化，层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如My parents were worried about me.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如With the teachers’ help, I like sports now and I often play football with my classmates after school.等。

考点：提纲类作文。

8．假如你是张明，你是学校“环保俱乐部”（Saving the Environment Club)的志愿者。上周六，你们俱乐部组织了志愿者活动。请给你的笔友Ben写一封电子邮件，向他介绍这次活动的情况，并谈谈你对志愿者工作的看法。

要求：

1. 80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

要点：

1.介绍活动内容（张贴海报、分发广告……)。

2.谈谈志愿者活动的好处。

Dear Ben,

Last Saturday, I went to Saving the Environment Club and volunteered here. It was a really wonderful experience. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文：

Dear Ben,

Last Saturday, I went to Saving the Environment Club and volunteered here. It was a really wonderful experience.

Some of us put up posters. Some handed out advertisements. Others swept the streets. We also helped clean up the city parks. When we finished all the work, we were very tired but we felt very happy.

I think it is fantastic to be a volunteer. What do you think of volunteering? Please write back soon!

Yours,

Zhang Ming

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目是写一封电子邮件，开头已给出。要求给你的笔友Ben写一封电子邮件，向他介绍上周六你们俱乐部组织的志愿者活动的情况，并谈谈你对志愿者工作的看法，要求包括要点提示内容，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导： 本文应该主要用第一人称来叙述自己上周六参加的志愿活动及其内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；描述活动内容时，应描写细致，合情合理，贴合实际；信件需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。

9．上周六，英语老师带领同学们到儿童医院做志愿活动，并要求大家写一篇日记描述此次志愿活动的过程。假如你是张娟，请你根据下面的提示，完成日记。

写作提示：

1.为儿童医院的儿童送礼物；

2.帮助那里的儿童洗衣服，打扫房间；

3.做一些有趣的活动，给那里的儿童带去欢乐。

写作要求：

1.语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；

2.100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

March13thSaturday  

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【答案】One possible version:

March 13th　Saturday                                                                                       

Last Saturday,our English teacher took our class to Children's Hospital to visit the sick kids. When we arrived there,we gave those sick kids the gifts that we prepared for them. They were very excited and liked the gifts very much. Then,we helped to wash clothes and clean the rooms. We also did some interesting activities with them,such as singing,dancing and telling stories.

I'm glad to take part in such a volunteer activity. Seeing the look of joy on the sick kids' faces,we felt very happy.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇日记作文。假定你是张娟，根据提示写志愿者活动，记录过程。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。

2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据志愿活动的过程，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。