Unit 1 单元话题满分范文必背-2021-2022学年八年级英语下册单元重难点易错题精练（人教版）

Unit 1 What’s the matter?

单元话题满分范文必背

1．你看过类似的老人跌倒无人理会的新闻吗？你又听说过最美女教师救她的学生的故事吗？对这两种社会现象，你有什么看法呢？请你以“Would you like to help others?”为题写一篇短文。

内容包括：1. 你对上面其中一件事的看法。

2. 如果你遇到了这样的事情会怎样做。

3. 讲述你的一次类似经历。

作文要求：1. 词数80个左右。不得照抄原文；不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。

2. 条理清晰，语句连贯。

Would you like to help others?

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【答案】Would you like to help others?

After hearing these events,I was deeply shocked.Why didn’t they help the old man? The things they did were so terrible! We need to help each other,don’t we? I think,if I were one of the passers-by,I would call the police and try my best to help the old man.Last year,on my way to school,I saw a car accident happen.I stopped,called the police and asked other people to help the woman who was injured.At last,she was saved.

If we help each other every day,our world will be warmer and more beautiful.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们Would you like to help others?为题，写一篇作文，选择题目中的一件事，表述自己的看法，并假设自己遇到类似的事情该怎样做，并讲述自己类似的一次经历。题目中给列出了大概的写作提纲，而具体的内容和细节都需要学生们自己发挥想象力进行补充，这是写作中的一个难点。学生们可以从自己的现实生活出发，搜索相关的素材，然后用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态，根据表达需要使用适当的人称，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。如可以使用较常见的主谓宾或主系表结构，这种句子结构简单，易于掌握，不易出错。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句或复合句，如and, but连接的并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，以Would you like to help others?为题，介绍了自己对老人跌倒无人理会这样的事件的看法，假设自己遇到了这样的事情会怎么做，并讲述了自己的一次类似的经历。短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有内容，且对细节进行了想象的描述，使文章内容更加充实、丰富。叙述清晰，有层次。其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，短文以第一人称、一般现在时和一般过去时为主来叙述，注意了谓语动词正确形式的变化，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构完整，表达符合英语的习惯。句式以简单句结构为主，也穿插使用了并列句和宾语从句、状语从句等复合句。表达流畅，文意连贯。短文中较好的句型有After hearing these events, I was deeply shocked.、I think, if I were one of the passers-by, I would call the police and try my best to help the old man、I stopped, called the police and asked other people to help the woman who was injured、If we help each other every day, our world will be warmer and more beautiful等等。

2．Mike昨晚头疼，没睡好觉。今天早上去了医院，医生量过他的体温后发现他并没有发烧，只是有点儿感冒。医生给他开了一些药，让他每天吃两次，多喝热水，好好休息。最后，医生建议他每天锻炼身体。

请你根据以上信息及下面提示，写一篇不少于80词的短文。

提示：1. What is the matter with Mike?

2. How many times does Mike should take the medicine?

3. What did the doctor advise him to do?

要求：

1. 包含所有提示，可适当发挥；

2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Mike didn’t sleep well last night _______________________________________________________

【答案】Mike didn’t sleep well last night because he had a headache. His father took him to the hospital this morning. After taking his temperature, the doctor told him that there was nothing serious. He didn’t have a fever, but had a little cold. Then the doctor gave him some medicine and asked him to take it twice a day. The doctor also told him that he should drink more hot water and have a good rest.

At last, the doctor advised him to do more exercise every day because exercising will help him stay healthy. I hope he will be better soon.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇材料作文。根据所给信息和提示，写一篇不少于80词的短文。本文人称主要第三人称，时态主要是一般过去时。仔细阅读提示和要点、要求。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲，提纲包括所有提示要点。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：

迈克昨晚睡得不好，因为他头痛。他父亲今天早上把他送到医院。医生给他量了体温，告诉他没有什么严重的。他没有发烧，但有点感冒。然后医生给他开了些药，让他每天吃两次。医生还告诉他应该多喝水，好好休息。

最后，医生建议他每天多运动，因为运动有助于他保持健康。我希望他很快会好起来。

【点睛】

这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，时态运用正确，叙述清楚条里，语句通顺，意思连贯，是一篇不错的文章。学以致用，运用了重要句型和短语有：After taking his temperature, the doctor told him that there was nothing serious./ Then the doctor gave him some medicine and asked him to take it twice a day./ At last, the doctor advised him to do more exercise every day because exercising will help him stay healthy.等。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

3．Mike昨晚头疼，没睡好觉。今天早上去了医院，医生量过他的体温后发现他并没有发烧，只是有点儿感冒。医生给他开了一些药，让他每天吃两次，多喝热水，好好休息。最后，医生建议他每天锻炼身体。

请你根据以上信息及下面提示，写一篇不少于80词的短文。

提示：1. What is the matter with Mike?

2. How many times does Mike should take the medicine?

3. What did the doctor advise him to do?

要求：

1. 包含所有提示，可适当发挥；

2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Mike didn’t sleep well last night ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】范文

Mike didn’t sleep well last night because he had a headache. His father took him to the hospital this morning. After taking his temperature, the doctor told him that there was nothing serious. He didn’t have a fever, but had a little cold. Then the doctor gave him some medicine and asked him to take it twice a day. The doctor also told him that he should drink more hot water and have a good rest.

At last, the doctor advised him to do more exercise every day because exercising will help him stay healthy. I hope he will be better soon.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。题目要求是根据所给信息和提示，写一篇不少于80词的短文。要包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

2.写作指导：本文人称主要以第三人称为主，时态主要是一般过去时。首先要认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点，围绕主题展开作文；根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲，提纲包括所有提示要点。然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意时态、主谓一致等问题，不要出现语法错误；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

4．假如你是Martin，你的笔友Alice在给你的来信中说她经常生病，情绪低落。请你给她写封回信，告诉她应该怎样做。

参考词汇: healthy food, do more exercise, enough sleep, keep happy, talk about your problems.

要求：1. 根据参考词汇，并适当发挥；   2. 字数不少于70词，注意字迹工整。

Dear Alice,

I'm sorry to hear that you are not very well and feel unhappy. ____________________

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【答案】Dear Alice,

I'm sorry to hear that you are not very well and feel unhappy. Here is my advice about how to keep healthy. A balanced diet can help you to keep in good health.  

You’d better eat more healthy food. It is good for you to eat a lot of vegetables, fruit and drink milk every day. And you should do more exercise, such as playing ball games, running, swimming and so on. Good food and exercise will be helpful. You aslo need enough sleep. It is really important. What’s more, keep yourself   happy. Try to smile every day. I hope you will be better and enjoy your life.

Yours,

Martin

【解析】

【详解】

根据试题内容可知本文应以一般现在时态为主。文章应灵活采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写、有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如：keep in good health； such as ；keep yourself   happy a lot of,等；而词汇 And，what is more等使文章的表达更富有条理；此外，文章还运用了经典句型： I'm sorry to hear...，You’d better...，It is good for sb to do sth.它们使文章增色不少；同时本文语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。

5．假如你是Kate，你的朋友Mary病了。请根据下面表格中的提示写一封信，告诉她该做什么，不该做什么。

要求：1. 注意书信格式。 2. 70词左右。

【答案】Dear Mary,

I’m sorry to hear you’re not feeling well. First, I thing you should drink a lot of hot water with honey. Second, don’t get tired, and try to relax yourself. Third, you shouldn’t go to bed too late or work too hard. You should have a good rest. If you don’t get better, you should see a doctor and do as the doctor tells you. I hope you feel better soon.

Yours，

Kate

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文，要以书信的形式来完成写作，首先要注意书信的格式，其次要根据所提供的要点，选择恰当的句式去组织材料，注意情态动词should, shouldn’t后跟动词原形，因为列举的建议较多，为了条理更清晰，可以使用 first，second，third条目来介绍。

高分句型一：

I’m sorry to hear you’re not feeling well. 听说你身体不舒服，我很难过。be sorry to do sth很难过做某事，这是不定式表原因。

高分句型二：

If you don’t get better, you should see a doctor and do as the doctor tells you. 如果你没有好转，你应该去看医生，按照医生告诉你的去做。if引导条件状语从句，时态用一般现在时；see a doctor看医生。

6．假如你是王朋，你在美国的笔友杰克(Jack)来信告诉你说他总是觉得很疲惫，导致上课不能集中精力听讲。请根据参考词汇写一封不少于80词的回信，向他提一些建议。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：should, help, exercise, keep healthy, sleep, try

Dear Jack,

I am sorry to hear that you often feel tired. Let me give you some advice.

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Yours,

Wang Peng

【答案】参考范文

Dear Jack,

I am sorry to hear that you often feel tired. Let me give you some advice.

First you should eat breakfast every morning. Eating breakfast can help you study well. Then you should do more exercise after school. Doing exercise can make you keep healthy. It is also very important to sleep eight or nine hours a night. Good sleep can make you feel good and study well in the day. Try to have a healthy lifestyle and then you can study well.

Yours,

Wang Peng

【解析】

1.题干解读：该题目属于书信作文。题目要求是假如你是王朋，请你根据参考词汇，给在美国的笔友杰克(Jack) 写一封不少于80词的回信，关于他总是觉得很疲惫，导致上课不能集中精力听讲的问题，向他提一些建议。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2.写法指导：这是一篇应用文，注意信件的格式。本文给出了一些参考词汇，并给出了作文的开头和结尾。我们要做的就是根据要求列出写作要点，用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意主谓一致等问题，不要出现语法错误；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。