高中英语UNIT1Natureinthebalance表达作文巧升格学案译林版必修第三册
展开UNIT 1 Nature in the balance
写一封建议信
本单元的写作任务是写一封建议信，属于应用文。建议信的目的是向有关组织或个人提出建议，所提建议旨在针对某种事物或现象，提出一些改进的措施。建议信一般采取三段式结构。
[基本框架]
1．开头——提出写建议信的缘由。
2．主体——写出建议的具体内容，并指出你所提出的建议可能会带来的好处。
3．结尾——表明希望自己的建议被采纳。
[常用词块]
1．take actions to protect wildlife采取措施保护野生动物
2．spare no effort to protect them from extinction
不遗余力地保护它们免于灭绝
3．stop the factories from giving out the polluted water and waste air 阻止工厂排放污水和废气
4．arouse the public's awareness of protecting the endangered species 激起大众保护濒危物种的意识
5．pay more attention to our daily life
更多关注我们的日常生活
[常用语句]
精彩开头
1．I'm writing to tell you that...
2．Recently we have made a survey that...
3．Many people are worried about...
4．It worries more and more people that...
正文佳句
1．We intend to...to help/save/protect...
2．We are ready to call on people to...
3．We feel like doing...to teach the illegal hunters a lesson...
4．We'd rather not...but do...
5．We'd like to...to punish those who do harm to wildlife.
余味结尾
1．I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decisionmaking anyway.
2．I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account.
3．I would be more than happy to see improvement.
4．I would be ready to discuss this matter with you for further details.
5．We need your support to make more and more people...
假如你叫李华，你所生活的城市周围有很多动植物正逐渐减少，对此你想向有关部门写一封信，分析造成这种现象的原因，并根据实际情况提出几条切实可行的建议。以下要点要包括在内：
1．野生动植物的现状；
2．分析造成许多野生动植物濒临灭绝的原因；
3．提出几条保护野生动植物的具体措施。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语和结束语已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm writing to give some suggestions to protect the wildlife living in and around our city.______________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
I hope my suggestions are helpful.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【学生习作】
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am writing to give some suggestions to protect the wildlife living in and around our city.
We know many wildlife are in danger. So we should protect them. And the environment is becoming more and more harmful to them. We destroyed them. They don't have something to eat. We also kill them for food.
I think we should protect them and do something useful. First don't cut trees.Second，make laws to punish. And last, everyone should do.
I hope my suggestions are helpful.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
点评：1．语言过于口语化；
2.复杂句式偏少，简单句居多；
3.所给措施可操作性差。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm writing to give some suggestions to protect the wildlife living in and around our city.
As we know，many species of wildlife are in danger of extinction.This is because the environment that they are living in has been destroyed greatly.They not only have little to eat，but also can be killed by human beings.
Personally，more measures should be taken to protect them from being hurt.Firstly，more laws must be made to stop people from cutting down trees.Secondly，all the factories must clean the waste water before it is poured into rivers or lakes.Thirdly，more reserves should be set up so that they can live safely.
I hope my suggestions are helpful.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
假定你是李华，你们学校将举办以“Protect Wild Animals”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语演讲稿。
1．野生动物的现状；
2．保护建议(建保护区、提高保护意识等)；
3．美好愿景。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：自然保护区nature reserve；意识awareness
Good morning，everyone!
I'm very glad to give a speech today.The topic of my speech is______________
_____________________________________________________________________
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_____________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
【参考范文】
Good morning, everyone!
I'm very glad to give a speech today. The topic of my speech is Protect Wild Animals.
As we all know, wild animals also play a part in keeping the balance of nature. Unfortunately, they are in danger, and some of them are dying out. So it is urgent to take some measures to protect them. First of all, we must establish nature reserves. Secondly, it is important to raise public awareness of protecting wild animals. To harm wild animals is to harm ourselves. Therefore, let's take the responsibility and do what we can to protect them. I hope in the future we can live harmoniously and happily together with wild animals.
Thank you!
