高考英语 重难点专项突破练习卷21 读后续写——动作描写升级（具体动词代替泛词） 导学案含答案

这是一份高考英语 重难点专项突破练习卷21 读后续写——动作描写升级（具体动词代替泛词） 导学案含答案，共10页。
核【核心知识·深度解读】
读后续写中，动作描写的生动性是高分的关键。使用具体、形象的动词代替笼统的泛词（如walk, say, see, eat等），能让读者如临其境，人物形象跃然纸上。近三年高考高分作文无一例外地运用了丰富的动作动词。
一、为什么要升级动作描写？
泛词（如g, d, make）信息量小，无法传达人物的情绪、态度和方式。具体动词（如strll, whisper, glare, devur）不仅能准确描述动作，还能暗示人物性格和情感，推动情节发展。
二、常见泛词升级词库
三、升级原则
① 贴合语境：根据人物的情绪和场景选择动词。如愤怒时用“strmed ut”而不是“walked ut”。
② 避免重复：同一段落中不要重复使用同一动词，可用同义词替换。
③ 与情感融合：动词往往暗示情感，如“trembling”表现恐惧，“dash”表现急切。
专项突破·动作描写
一、单句改写（用更具体的动词替换句中动词部分）
1. The ld man walked slwly alng the street. → ________________________
2. “I'm s srry,” she said quietly. → ________________________
3. He lked at the stranger with suspicin. → ________________________
4. The children ate the pizza hungrily. → ________________________
5. She cried when she heard the bad news. → ________________________
6. He laughed at the jke. → ________________________
7. The man hit the table angrily. → ________________________
8. She held her mther's hand tightly. → ________________________
9. He walked ut f the rm angrily. → ________________________
10. “Help!” he shuted ludly. → ________________________
11. The cat walked quietly twards the bird. → ________________________
12. She drank the ht cffee slwly. → ________________________
13. He lked at the beautiful view fr a lng time. → ________________________
14. The by ran quickly t catch the bus. → ________________________
15. She said smething in a lw vice t herself. → ________________________
16. He walked with difficulty because f his injured leg. → ________________________
17. She ate the ckie in small bites. → ________________________
18. The teacher lked at the nisy students with anger. → ________________________
19. He tk the bk frm the shelf quickly. → ________________________
20. She walked back and frth nervusly. → ________________________
21. The ld wman walked with a stick, slwly. → ________________________
22. “I hate yu!” she cried ludly. → ________________________
23. He lked at her with lve. → ________________________
24. The thief walked silently int the huse. → ________________________
25. She drank a glass f water in ne g. → ________________________
26. He hit the ball with frce. → ________________________
27. She smiled happily. → ________________________
28. He walked with lng steps twards the finish line. → ________________________
29. She spke in a sft, unclear vice. → ________________________
30. The children played nisily. → ________________________
二、选词填空（从方框中选择最合适的动词）
31. After the lng walk, he __________ int the rm and cllapsed n the sfa.
32. “I lve yu,” she __________ in his ear.
33. The mther __________ at the child wh had brken the vase.
34. The hungry dg __________ the fd in secnds.
35. She __________ bitterly when she heard the tragic news.
36. He __________ frm ear t ear when he received the prize.
37. He __________ the dr shut in anger.
38. The little girl __________ her teddy bear tightly, afraid t let g.
39. The sldiers __________ cnfidently acrss the square.
40. He __________ ut f the windw, lst in thught.
41. She __________ ut f the rm s as nt t wake the baby.
42. He __________ dwn the water, his thirst finally quenched.
43. The child __________ thrugh the keyhle, curius abut what was inside.
44. After the accident, he __________ with the help f a cane.
45. “I dn't understand,” he __________ t himself.
46. She __________ with pride as her daughter received the award.
47. The plice fficer __________ the thief by the arm.
48. The cat __________ silently twards the muse.
49. He __________ purpsefully twards the exit.
50. She __________ silently, tears streaming dwn her face.
三、语篇填空（用合适的动词形式填空）
The ld man 51.________ (walk with difficulty) alng the icy path. He 52.________ (lk carefully) at the grund befre each step. Suddenly, he slipped and 53.________ (fell heavily) nt the grund. A yung wman nearby 54.________ (ran quickly) t help him. “Are yu kay?” she 55.________ (asked with cncern). He 56.________ (ndded weakly) and tried t stand up. She 57.________ (held his arm firmly) and helped him t a bench. “Thank yu, my dear,” he 58.________ (said sftly). She 59.________ (smiled warmly) and replied, “Take care.” As she walked away, he 60.________ (lked at her fr a lng time) with gratitude.
51.________ 52.________ 53.________ 54.________ 55.________ 56.________ 57.________ 58.________ 59.________ 60.________
四、段落改写（用具体动词替换泛词，使描写更生动）
61. The children walked int the rm quietly. They saw the birthday cake n the table. They said, “Ww!” and ate the cake quickly.
改写：____________________________________________________________________
62. The man walked ut f the huse angrily. He gt int his car and drve away fast.
改写：____________________________________________________________________
63. She lked at the letter fr a lng time. Then she cried. She put the letter dwn and walked away.
改写：____________________________________________________________________
64. The little by lked at the dg with fear. He walked slwly twards it and tuched it gently.
改写：____________________________________________________________________
65. The teacher said smething t the student. The student lked dwn and walked ut f the rm.
改写：____________________________________________________________________
参考答案及解析
一、单句改写（参考，答案不唯一，合理即可）
1. The ld man trudged alng the street. (trudge 表示沉重地走)
2. “I'm s srry,” she whispered. (whisper 低语)
3. He glared at the stranger with suspicin. (glare 怒视)
4. The children devured the pizza hungrily. (devur 狼吞虎咽)
5. She wept when she heard the bad news. (weep 哭泣)
6. He chuckled at the jke. (chuckle 轻声笑)
7. The man slammed the table angrily. (slam 猛击)
8. She clutched her mther's hand tightly. (clutch 紧握)
9. He strmed ut f the rm angrily. (strm 气冲冲地走)
10. “Help!” he yelled. (yell 喊叫)
11. The cat crept twards the bird. (creep 爬行/悄悄移动)
12. She sipped the ht cffee slwly. (sip 小口喝)
13. He gazed at the beautiful view fr a lng time. (gaze 凝视)
14. The by dashed t catch the bus. (dash 猛冲)
15. She muttered smething t herself. (mutter 咕哝)
16. He limped because f his injured leg. (limp 跛行)
17. She nibbled the ckie. (nibble 小口吃)
18. The teacher glared at the nisy students. (glare 怒视)
19. He grabbed the bk frm the shelf. (grab 迅速抓取)
20. She paced nervusly. (pace 来回踱步)
21. The ld wman hbbled with a stick. (hbble 蹒跚)
22. “I hate yu!” she screamed. (scream 尖叫)
23. He gazed at her with lve. (gaze 深情凝视)
24. The thief crept int the huse. (creep 潜入)
25. She gulped dwn a glass f water. (gulp 大口喝)
26. He struck the ball with frce. (strike 击打)
27. She beamed happily. (beam 笑容满面)
28. He strde twards the finish line. (stride 大步走)
29. She murmured smething. (murmur 低语)
30. The children rmped nisily. (rmp 嬉闹) 或 rared (喧闹)
二、选词填空
31. staggered (蹒跚) 32. whispered (耳语) 33. glared (怒视) 34. devured (狼吞虎咽) 35. sbbed (啜泣) 36. grinned (咧嘴笑) 37. slammed (猛关) 38. clutched (紧抓) 39. marched (行进) 40. gazed (凝视) 41. tipted (踮脚走) 42. gulped (大口喝) 43. peeked (偷看) 44. limped (跛行) 45. muttered (咕哝) 46. beamed (笑容满面) 47. seized (抓住) 48. crept (悄悄移动) 49. strde (大步走) 50. wept (哭泣)
三、语篇填空
51. trudged / hbbled 52. peered 53. crashed / slumped 54. dashed 55. inquired / asked sftly 56. ndded weakly 57. grasped / gripped 58. murmured 59. beamed / smiled warmly 60. gazed
四、段落改写（示例）
61. The children tipted int the rm. They sptted the birthday cake n the table. They gasped, “Ww!” and devured the cake.
62. The man strmed ut f the huse. He leaped int his car and sped away.
63. She stared at the letter fr a lng time. Then she wept. She placed the letter dwn and stumbled away.
64. The little by stared at the dg with fear. He crept slwly twards it and tuched it gently.
65. The teacher whispered smething t the student. The student hung his head and shuffled ut f the rm.
教学使用建议： 建议学生先熟记核心动词词库，然后通过改写练习体会具体动词的表达效果。在续写练习中，有意识地替换泛词，让描写更生动。教师可组织小组互评，看谁的动词选用最贴切、最丰富。泛词
具体动词（按程度/方式分类）
walk
strll（闲逛）, march（行进）, stride（大步走）, tipte（踮脚走）, stagger（蹒跚）, wander（漫游）, creep（爬行/蹑手蹑脚）, pace（踱步）, limp（跛行）
say
whisper（低语）, murmur（咕哝）, mutter（嘀咕）, exclaim（呼喊）, shut（喊叫）, yell（吼叫）, annunce（宣布）, reply（回答）, respnd（回应）, mumble（含糊地说）
lk
glance（瞥）, stare（凝视）, glare（怒视）, gaze（注视）, peek（偷看）, glimpse（瞥见）, bserve（观察）, scan（扫视）, peer（凝视）
eat
devur（狼吞虎咽）, swallw（吞咽）, chew（咀嚼）, bite（咬）, sip（小口喝）, gulp（大口喝）, nibble（小口吃）
cry
weep（哭泣）, sb（啜泣）, wail（嚎啕大哭）, tear up（含泪）
laugh
chuckle（轻声笑）, giggle（咯咯笑）, grin（咧嘴笑）, beam（笑容满面）
hit
punch（拳打）, slap（掌掴）, knck（敲）, beat（打）, strike（击打）
hld
grasp（抓住）, grip（紧握）, clutch（紧紧抓住）, seize（夺取）, grab（抢夺）