高考英语二轮-应用文写作之书信类（练习）（教师版）

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01 邀请信
Passage 1
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你校将组织参观中国载人航天工程成就展，你班的英国交换生Jim对中国航天兴趣浓厚，请你写一封邮件邀请他参加，内容包括：
1．活动目的及时间安排；
2．活动内容；
3．询问对方意向。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：中国载人航天工程成就展 exhibitin f achievements in China’s manned spaceflight prgram
Dear Jim.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Hw’s everything ging?T advcate the spirit f innvatin and devtin, ur schl will rganize a trip t the exhibitin f achievements in China’s manned spaceflight prgram. Knwing yu’re interested in China’s spaceflight industry, I’m writing t invite yu t jin us.
The activity will be held in Natinal Museum at 8 Sunday. First, we’ll see the mdels f the space statin and rckets t get deeper insights int China’s spaceflight. Then we’ll enjy varius pictures and vides sht during the space missins, which will vividly shw Chinese astrnauts’ life in space. Besides, with instructins f vlunteers, we’ll knw abut the glrius stries behind the spaceflight prgram.
Wuld yu like t cme? Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的邀请信。要求考生给交换生Jim写一封邮件邀请他参加学校组织的中国载人航天工程成就展。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in→ shw interest in
首先：first→ first f all /initially
各种各样：varius → a variety f
此外：besides → what’s mre/mrever
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First, we’ll see the mdels f the space statin and rckets t get deeper insights int China’s spaceflight.
拓展句：First, we’ll see the mdels f the space statin and rckets s that we can get deeper insights int China’s spaceflight.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knwing yu’re interested in China’s spaceflight industry, I’m writing t invite yu t jin us.（运用了现在分词作状语和省略连接词that的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Then we’ll enjy varius pictures and vides sht during the space missins, which will vividly shw Chinese astrnauts’ life in space.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
Passage 2
（2023·北京通州·模拟预测）假设你是红星中学的学生李华。你校交换生Jim对中国的非物质文化遗产非常感兴趣，这个周末在国家博物馆将举办一场非遗文化展。请你给Jim写一封电子邮件，邀请他一同前往。邮件内容包括：
1．介绍活动；
2．发出邀请。
注意：1．词数100左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
提示词：国家博物馆 Natinal Museum f China
非物质文化遗产展览 intangible cultural heritage exhibitin
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Knwing that yu are very interested in China’s intangible cultural heritage, I’m writing t invite yu t visit an intangible cultural heritage exhibitin in Natinal Museum f China with me.
This exhibitin mainly displays sme f China’s intangible cultural heritages, including Chinese calligraphy, Chinese paper-cutting, Chinese seal cutting and s n, which will let yu see the present situatin f these precius heritages and their great significance. Visiting this exhibitin can give yu a deeper understanding f China’s intangible cultural heritage. Yu must be amazed at the depth f Chinese culture.
Wuld yu like t cme? I’m lking frward t meeting yu at the exhihitin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生Jim写封电子邮件，邀请他和你一起去在国家博物馆将举办的一场非遗文化展。
【详解】1.词汇积累
展览：exhibitin→display
展出：display→exhibit
目前的：present→current
宝贵的：precius→valuable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Visiting this exhibitin can give yu a deeper understanding f China’s intangible cultural heritage.
拓展句：If yu visit this exhibitin, yu will have a deeper understanding f China’s intangible cultural heritage.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knwing that yu are very interested in China’s intangible cultural heritage, I’m writing t invite yu t visit an intangible cultural heritage exhibitin in Natinal Museum f China with me. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] This exhibitin mainly displays sme f China’s intangible cultural heritages, including Chinese calligraphy, Chinese paper-cutting, Chinese seal cutting and s n, which will let yu see the present situatin f these precius heritages and their great significance. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
02申请信
Passage 1
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下周准备开展一次“中国传统文化进校园”活动，届时一些外国友人也会应邀参加，现正在招募志愿服务人员，请你用英文给负责人Mr. Smith写一封申请信，内容包括：
1. 申请理由；
2. 个人优势；
3. 希望批准。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Smith,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I’ve heard the news that yu are recruiting vlunteers fr the “Chinese traditinal culture int the campus” activity t be held next week. S I am writing t apply t be ne f the vlunteers because I lve Chinese traditinal culture s much that I can devte myself t serving the participants.
First f all, with a very gd cmmand f English, I can speak the language fluently, which makes me mre qualified t help freigners. Besides, nt nly d I have the ability t rganize activities, but als I am utging and energetic, allwing me t cmmunicate with strangers withut difficulty.
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd cnsider my applicatin. I am lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是属于申请信。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下周准备开展一次“中国传统文化进校园”活动，届时一些外国友人也会应邀参加，现正在招募志愿服务人员，请你用英文给负责人Mr. Smith写一封申请信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
热爱：lve→be fnd f
致力于：devte→cntribute
同时：meanwhile→at the same time
感激：appreciate→grateful
考虑：cnsider→think ver
2.句式拓展
变换句式
原句：I’ve heard the news that yu are recruiting vlunteers fr the “Chinese traditinal culture int the campus” activity t be held next week.
拓展句：I’ve heard the news that yu are recruiting vlunteers fr the “Chinese traditinal culture int the campus” activity, which will be held next week.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Besides, with a very gd cmmand f English, I can speak the language fluently, which makes me mre qualified t help freigners.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Meanwhile, nt nly d I have the ability t rganize activities, but als I am utging and energetic, allwing me t cmmunicate with strangers withut difficulty.( nt nly…but als引导的倒装句，现在分词作结果状语)
Passage 2
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你从英国笔友Jim的来信中得知他所在的大学正在招募国际学生参加暑期夏令营活动。你有意参加。请给该大学写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感兴趣；
2. 你打算参加的原因；
3. 询问相关信息。
注意：1．词数不少于50；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yurs Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m frm Hngxing Middle Schl, Beijing, China. I have heard abut the summer camp fr internatinal students ffered by yur university. I am very interested in the prject.
I have been lking fr pprtunities t experience campus life in the UK, which will definitely help imprve my English and deepen my understanding f the English culture. Therefre, I’m writing t yu t learn mre abut the upcming prject in yur university.
I wuld be grateful if yu prvide me with sme detailed infrmatin. First, what activities will be included in the summer camp? Apart frm this, I als want t knw the exact time and fee fr the camp.
Thank yu fr taking the time t read my letter. I wuld appreciate it a lt if yu culd give me an early reply.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你从英国笔友Jim的来信中得知他所在的大学正在招募国际学生参加暑期夏令营活动。你有意申请参加。请给该大学写封邮件，内容包括：1. 表示感兴趣；2. 你打算参加的原因；3. 询问相关信息。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：hear abut(听说)；the summer camp (夏令营)；be interested in(感兴趣)；lk fr(寻找)；deepen (加深)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用现在完成时、现在进行时、一般现在时、一般将来时和现在完成进行时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I wuld be grateful if yu prvide me with sme detailed infrmatin.运用了if引导的条件状语从句；I wuld appreciate it a lt if yu culd give me an early reply.运用it作形式宾语。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
03求助信
Passage 1
假定你是李华，准备参加学校组织的英文诗朗诵比赛。请给外教Jim写封邮件求助，内容包括：
1. 说明比赛要求；
2. 说出你的困难并请求帮助。
注意：1. 词数不少于100；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m writing t ask fr yur help. Our schl is ging t hld an English petry recitatin cntest. The requirements fr the cntest are quite strict. Each participant needs t chse an English pem and recite it within a limited time.
I really want t d well in this cmpetitin, but I have sme difficulties. Firstly, I’m having truble chsing an apprpriate pem. I’m nt sure which ne wuld be suitable fr the cntest. Secndly, my prnunciatin and intnatin are nt perfect. I’m wrried that this might affect my perfrmance.
I sincerely hpe that yu can give me sme suggestins n pem selectin and help me imprve my prnunciatin. Yur guidance will be f great value t me.
Thank yu very much!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的求助信。要求考生给外教Jim写封信，就自己准备参加学校组织的英文诗朗诵比赛一事说明困难并请求帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先：firstly→ first f all
做某事有困难：have truble ding→ have difficulty ding
担忧的：wrried→ cncerned
真诚地：sincerely→ genuinely
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Our schl is ging t hld an English petry recitatin cntest. The requirements fr the cntest are quite strict.
拓展句：Our schl is ging t hld an English petry recitatin cntest, whse requirements are quite strict.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m nt sure which ne wuld be suitable fr the cntest.（运用了which引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】I’m wrried that this might affect my perfrmance.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
Passage 2
假定你是李华，你班上周进行了英语单词检测，你的成绩不理想。请就此给你的外国朋友Chris写一封电子邮件，向他请教记单词的方法，内容包括：
1. 情况介绍；
2. 提出请求；
3. 期待回复。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I hpe this email finds yu well. I want t share smething with yu. We had an English vcabulary test last week, and unfrtunately, my results were nt very gd. I find it quite challenging t remember all the new wrds.
Culd yu please share sme effective methds fr memrizing vcabulary? I knw yu are very gd at English and might have sme useful tips. Fr example, hw d yu use flashcards, apps, r any ther techniques t remember wrds better?
I lk frward t yur reply and any advice yu can ffer.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你班上周进行了英语单词检测，你的成绩不理想。请就此给你的外国朋友Chris写一封电子邮件，向他请教记单词的方法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不幸地：unfrtunately → unluckily
非常：quite → extremely
方法：methd → way
擅长：be gd at → be skilled in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I find it quite challenging t remember all the new wrds.
拓展句：I find that remembering all the new wrds is quite challenging.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I find it quite challenging t remember all the new wrds.（运用了it作形式主语和不定式短语t remember all the new wrds作真正的主语）
【高分句型2】 I knw yu are very gd at English and might have sme useful tips.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句）
04 建议信
Passage 1
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友 Jim 近期将来中国旅游，他对北京中轴线很感兴趣，想安排一天游玩，向你寻求游览建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 简要介绍北京中轴线;
2. 游览建议及理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;
3. 提示词：北京中轴线 Beijing Central Axis。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】范文1：
Dear Jim,
I’m very glad t knw that yu’ll be visiting China sn.
Beijing Central Axis is abut 7.8 kilmeters lng. It runs thrugh the heart f the city, featuring sme f the mst famus landmarks in Beijing.
Fr yur ne-day tur, I suggest starting at Tiananmen Square and then visiting the Frbidden City t explre its beautiful palaces. After lunch, head t Jingshan Park fr a cmplete view f the city, and wrap up yur day at the Bell and Drum Twers t experience their histrical significance. I believe this rute will give yu a great sense f Beijing’s culture!
If yu need any help, please let me knw.
Yurs,
Li Hua
范文2：
Dear Jim,
I’m excited t hear abut yur upcming trip t China!
The Beijing Central Axis is a 7.8-kilmeter-lng histric line that runs thrugh the heart f the city, stretching frm Yngding Gate in the suth t the Bell and Drum Twers in the nrth. Alng this rute, yu’ll find significant landmarks like Tiananmen Square and the Frbidden City.
Fr the ne-day tur, I recmmend yu explre the Central Axis by bike. Cycling allws yu t see mre sights at yur wn pace. It’s als a fantastic way t cnnect with the lcal culture as yu ride thrugh the dynamic streets. I believe yu’ll be impressed by the sight f traditinal architecture cexisting with cntemprary life.
Any specific landmarks r activities that yu’ re particularly lking frward t experiencing? Feel free t tell me!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你的英国好友Jim近期将来中国旅游，他对北京中轴线很感兴趣，想安排一天游玩，向你寻求游览建议，要求考生用英文给他回复。
【详解】1. 词汇积累（以范文1为例）
高兴的：glad→delighted
建议：suggest→advise
整个的：cmplete→whle
景色：view→landscape/scenery
2. 句式拓展
简单句合并为复合句
原句：Beijing Central Axis is abut 7.8 kilmeters lng. It runs thrugh the heart f the city, featuring sme f the mst famus landmarks in Beijing.
拓展句：Beijing Central Axis, which is abut 7.8 kilmeters lng, runs thrugh the heart f the city, featuring sme f the mst famus landmarks in Beijing.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m very glad t knw that yu’ll be visiting China sn.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] If yu need any help, please let me knw.(if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 2
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的 Glbal Challenges and Yuth Actins (全球挑战与青年行动) 栏目投稿。他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1.建议投稿内容；
2.就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
It’s wnderful t knw that yu plan t submit an article t the “Glbal Challenges and Yuth Actins” clumn.
Given the significance f envirnmental issues, I recmmend yu fcus n the tpic f yuth’s rle in cmbating climate change. Fr example, yu can talk abut the initiatives taken by yung peple t plant trees, encurage the use f public transprtatin, and supprt renewable energy prjects, which play a vital rle in reducing carbn emissins.
This is because climate change is ne f the mst urgent glbal challenges. Yungsters’ active participatin and creative slutins can nt nly bring new hpe but als encurage the schl cmmunity t be mre envirnmentally cnscius.
If yu need further discussin, dn’t hesitate t reach ut t me. Let’s wrk tgether t make yur article a remarkable cntributin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Glbal Challenges and Yuth Actins (全球挑战与青年行动) 栏目投稿，他发来邮件询问你的建议这一情况，用英文给他回复。
【详解】1.词汇积累
专注于：fcus n→ cncentrate n
重要的：vital → imprtant
紧迫的：urgent→ pressing
杰出的：remarkable→ utstanding
2.句式拓展
扩写句子
原句：Given the significance f envirnmental issues, I recmmend yu fcus n the tpic f yuth’s rle in cmbating climate change.
拓展句：Given the significance f envirnmental issues, I recmmend yu fcus n the tpic, which is cncerned with yuth’s rle in cmbating climate change.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Fr example, yu can talk abut the initiatives taken by yung peple t plant trees, encurage the use f public transprtatin, and supprt renewable energy prjects, which play a vital rle in reducing carbn emissins.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】If yu need further discussin, dn’t hesitate t reach ut t me.（运用了If引导的条件状语从句）
05 推荐信
Passage 1
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim所在的学校在举办“世界文化周”活动。作为中国优秀文化的爱好者，Jim负责组织中国文化节 (Chinese Culture Festival)，他向你寻求相关建议。请用英文给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐活动内容；
2.简要说明理由。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m excited t hear that yu’re rganizing the Chinese Culture Festival! There are many aspects f Chinese culture that culd make the event bth enjyable and educatinal.
One idea is t rganize a calligraphy sessin where students can try writing Chinese characters and appreciate the beauty f the language. Additinally, a traditinal Chinese pera perfrmance culd be fascinating, allwing students t admire the rich strytelling traditins f China. Lastly, yu might cnsider hlding an exhibitin n traditinal Chinese festivals s that students can learn abut the histry and custms f hlidays like Spring Festival.
I believe my suggestins will deepen yur understanding f Chinese culture. Feel free t cntact me if yu have any questins.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文给Jim写一封邮件，推荐“世界文化周”活动内容以及简要说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的：excited → thrilled
愉快的：enjyable → pleasant
此外：additinally → besides
考虑：cnsider → accunt
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Additinally, a traditinal Chinese pera perfrmance culd be fascinating, allwing students t admire the rich strytelling traditins f China.
拓展句：Additinally, a traditinal Chinese pera perfrmance culd be fascinating, which allws students t admire the rich strytelling traditins f China.
【点睛】[高分句型1] There are many aspects f Chinese culture that culd make the event bth enjyable and educatinal. (运用了that引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] I believe my suggestins will deepen yur understanding f Chinese culture. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 2
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校英国交换生 Jim 打算寒假出京旅游，发来邮件请你推荐一座中国历史文化名城。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1．你的推荐；
2．推荐理由。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I am s excited t learn that yu are planning t travel t anther city with rich histry and culture in China. After careful cnsideratin, I have decided t recmmend Xi’an t yu.
Yur jurney t Xi’an will be ne f ancient wnders. As the capital city fr 13 dynasties, it is hme t cuntless histric relics — the Terra-ctta Warrirs, the Great Wild Gse Pagda and many thers. I am sure a histry lver like yu will nt be disappinted. Xi’an is als a wnderland fr yu t explre the fascinating art and culture f the East. There, yu can experience the raw energy f Qinqiang Opera and the beauty f calligraphy n stne tablets.
I am sure yu will enjy yurself in this histric city! If yu have further questins, ask me anytime.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国交换生Jim回复邮件，推荐一座中国历史文化名城，并讲述推荐理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
数不尽的：cuntless →innumerable/a great number f
迷人的：fascinating →attractive/absrbing
体验/经历：experience →underg
享受/玩得开心：enjy neself →have fun
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Xi’an is als a wnderland fr yu t explre the fascinating art and culture f the East.
拓展句：Xi’an is als a wnderland, where yu can explre the fascinating art and culture f the East.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am s excited t learn that yu are planning t travel t anther city with rich histry and culture in China.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
【高分句型2】If yu have further questins, ask me anytime.（运用了if引导条件状语从句）
06 介绍信
Passage 1
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国朋友Jim获悉你校近期举办了主题为“劳动光荣”(All Labur Is Glrius)的活动，他发来邮件询问相关情况。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 活动的内容;
2. 活动的意义。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs，
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m delighted t share with yu the details f the activity themed “All Labur Is Glrius” held in ur schl recently.
The activity was rich and clrful. We had a speech cntest where students shared stries abut the value f labr. Als, there were practical labr sessins, like grwing vegetables in the schl garden and cleaning the campus.
This activity was f great significance. It nt nly deepened ur understanding f the dignity f labr but als imprved ur practical skills. We realized that every kind f labr, n matter hw small, cntributes t sciety.
Hpe yu find it interesting! If yu have any questins, feel free t let me knw.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英文给外国朋友Jim介绍校近期举办了主题为“劳动光荣”(All Labur Is Glrius)的活动。其内容包括：活动的内容和活动的意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→glad
重要性：significance→imprtance
理解：understanding →cmprehensin
希望：hpe→wish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： I’m delighted t share with yu the details f the activity themed “All Labur Is Glrius” held in ur schl recently.
拓展句： I’m delighted t share with yu the details f the activity which is themed “All Labur Is Glrius” held in ur schl recently.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 We had a speech cntest where students shared stries abut the value f labr.（运用了where引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】 We realized that every kind f labr, n matter hw small, cntributes t sciety.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
Passage 2
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校上周举办了主题为“让传统文化潮起来”的创意文化节。你的英国好友Jim看到了你分享的活动照片，对此很感兴趣，发来邮件询问相关情况。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1. 活动内容；
2. 你的感想。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m glad that yu’re interested in the phts frm ur recent creative cultural festival! Here’s mre abut it.
With the theme “Make Traditinal Culture Trendy”, the event has injected vigr int traditinal Chinese culture with mdern elements. In the art center, ppular music was played n traditinal musical instruments by talented students, creating a unique feast fr the ears. At the DIY statin, students designed reusable bags and T-shirts featuring elements f Chinese painting and calligraphy. What impressed me the mst was the VR sectin, where students culd immerse themselves in traditinal custms like the firewrk shw.
This event was bth fun and educatinal. It has deepened my appreciatin fr ur rich cultural heritage and demnstrated hw innvatin culd breathe new life int traditin.
I hpe yu find the festival inspiring, t.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英文给英国好友Jim写信介绍学校上周举办了主题为“让传统文化潮起来”的创意文化节。内容包括：活动内容和你的感想。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
有天赋的： talented→gifted
有趣的：fun→interesting
希望：hpe→wish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： At the DIY statin, students designed reusable bags and T-shirts featuring elements f Chinese painting and calligraphy.
拓展句：At the DIY statin, students designed reusable bags and T-shirts which featured elements f Chinese painting and calligraphy.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 In the art center, ppular music was played n traditinal musical instruments by talented students, creating a unique feast fr the ears.（运用了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】What impressed me the mst was the VR sectin, where students culd immerse themselves in traditinal custms like the firewrk shw.（运用了what引导的主语从句和where引导的非限制性定语从句）
07 感谢信
Passage 1
假定你是红星中学李华。你的英国好友Jim在你校作交换生学习期间，给予了你很多帮助。现在他即将结束在中国的学习生活，返回自己的国家，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 回顾Jim对你的帮助；
3. 临别祝愿。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Hw time flies! Yu are abut t end yur study in China and g back t yur cuntry. I’m writing t express my sincere gratitude t yu.
During yur stay at ur schl as an exchange student, yu have ffered me a lt f help. Yu patiently explained difficult pints t me when I was cnfused with my studies. Als, yu shared yur interesting experiences with me, which bradened my hrizns.
I sincerely wish yu a pleasant jurney back hme and all the best in the future.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jim写封感谢信，感谢其在作交换生学习期间给予自己的很多帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
即将：be abut t→ be n the pint f
真诚的：sincere→ genuine
感激：gratitude→ thankfulness
耐心地：patiently→ with patience
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：During yur stay at ur schl as an exchange student, yu have ffered me a lt f help.
拓展句：When yu stayed at ur schl as an exchange student, yu ffered me a lt f help.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Yu patiently explained difficult pints t me when I was cnfused with my studies.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】Als, yu shared yur interesting experiences with me, which bradened my hrizns.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）
Passage 2
假定你是高中生李华，在美国朋友James的帮助下，获得了学校上周英文演讲比赛第一名。请给James写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.比赛情况；
3.你的感想。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear James,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear James,
I’m writing t extend my sincere gratitude fr yur assistance t me. Hadn’t it been fr yur help, I wuldn’t have achieved such a wnderful result in the English speech cntest.
T be hnest, I didn’t have enugh cnfidence in myself at first. S I hesitated abut whether t sign in the cntest r nt. It was yu wh encuraged me t step ut f my cmfrt zne and face the challenge. I still remember the days we spent tgether when yu crrected my speech draft and prnunciatin ver and ver again. At last I was verjyed t win the first place in the cmpetitin.
I’m inspired t accept mre challenges in the future and wuld like t express my heartfelt thanks again!
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友James写邮件，就对方帮助自己在学校英文演讲比赛得到第一名这件事向对方表示感谢，说明比赛情况及自己的感想。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚的：sincere→genuine
鼓励：encurage→inspire/mtivate
（勇敢）面对：face→brave
传达/表达：express→cnvey
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hadn’t it been fr yur help, I wuldn’t have achieved such a wnderful result in the English speech cntest.
拓展句：But fr/Withut yur help, I wuldn’t have achieved such a wnderful result in the English speech cntest.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It was yu wh encuraged me t step ut f my cmfrt zne and face the challenge. （运用了It was…wh结构的强调句型）
【高分句型2】I still remember the days we spent tgether when yu crrected my speech draft and prnunciatin ver and ver again.（运用了省略了关系词和when引导的限制性定语从句）
08 道歉信
Passage 1
假设你是李华，今天轮到你进行外教课的课前五分钟演讲，但你因故缺席了。请给外教Mr.Smith写封邮件致歉。内容包括：
(1)表达歉意；
(2)说明原因；
(3)提出弥补措施。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing t aplgize frm the bttm f my heart fr my absence during the five-minute pre-class speech tday. It was really nt my intentin t miss this imprtant mment. I suddenly fell ill this mrning and the pain was s severe that I had n chice but t g t the hspital immediately. The dctr examined me and gave me sme necessary treatments.
T make up fr it, I’d like t give my speech at the beginning f next class. I’ll nt nly prepare mre interesting materials but als practice several times at hme t ensure that it will be delivered smthly and make it mre wnderful.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，就缺席外教课的课前五分钟演讲向外教Mr. Smith表达歉意，说明缺席原因并提出弥补措施。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
真诚地道歉：aplgize frm the bttm f ne’s heart → aplgize sincerely
严重的：severe → serius
弥补：make up fr → cmpensate fr
确保：ensure → guarantee
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing t aplgize frm the bttm f my heart fr my absence during the five-minute pre-class speech tday.
拓展句：I’m writing t aplgize frm the bttm f my heart because I was absent during the five-minute pre-class speech tday.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I suddenly fell ill this mrning and the pain was s severe that I had n chice but t g t the hspital immediately. (运用了引导的结果状语从句)
[高分句型2] I’ll nt nly prepare mre interesting materials but als practice several times at hme t ensure that it will be delivered smthly and make it mre wnderful. (运用了nt als...并列结构和连词that引导的宾语从句)
Passage 2
假设你是李华，你与外教Peter约好本周日下午一起去看电影，但你临时有事无法赴约。请你给Peter写一封电子邮件，内容应包括：
(1) 表示歉意并解释原因；
(2) 建议另一次的活动，并约定时间。
注意：(1) 写作词数应为80个左右；(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I’m writing t aplgize fr nt being able t jin yu fr the mvie this Sunday afternn as planned. Unfrtunately, smething urgent has cme up, and I need t attend t it. I’m really srry fr the incnvenience this may cause.
T make up fr it, I’d like t suggest meeting fr cffee r dinner next Saturday evening instead. It wuld be a great pprtunity t catch up and spend sme quality time tgether. Let me knw whether this wrks fr yu.
Once again, I’m truly srry fr the change f plans, and I hpe we can reschedule sn.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生以李华的身份，给外教Peter写一封电子邮件，对自己临时有事无法赴约看电影表示歉意，并解释原因，还需建议另一次的活动，并约定时间。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
道歉：aplgize→say srry, make an aplgy
不幸地：unfrtunately→unluckily, pitifully
弥补：make up fr→cmpensate fr
机会：pprtunity→chance
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：T make up fr it, I’d like t suggest meeting fr cffee r dinner next Saturday evening instead.
拓展句：T make up fr it, I’d like t suggest that we meet fr cffee r dinner next Saturday evening instead.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m really srry fr the incnvenience this may cause. (运用了关系代词引导限制性定语从句并被省略)
[高分句型2] Let me knw whether this wrks fr yu. (运用了whether引导宾语从句)
09 投诉信
Passage 1
假定你是李华，在海外代购网店买了一块手表，但是收货后发现了一些问题。请给该店店主Bb写信投诉。内容包括：
1. 遇到的具体问题；
2. 表达诉求。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Bb,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Bb,
I’m Li Hua, ne f yur custmers. I am writing t express my dissatisfactin with yur prduct.
I bught a watch in yur shp and received it yesterday. T my disappintment, there are sme prblems. First f all, the watch didn’t arrive n schedule. In additin, nt nly is it f the wrng clr but als it’s f the wrng brand. I am sure yu can thrughly understand my discntent. And I wnder if yu culd return my mney r change a new ne fr me.
I hpe yur service can be imprved t live up t buyers’ expectatins. Yur kind cnsideratin t my prblems wuld be highly appreciated. Lking frward t yur reply at yur earliest cnvenience.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于在海外代购网店买了一块手表但是收货后发现一些问题的情况，给店主写一封投诉信。
1. 词汇积累
表达：express → vice
按时：n schedule → n time
此外：In additin → what’s mre
完全地：thrughly → cmpletely
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I hpe yur service can be imprved t live up t buyers’ expectatins.
拓展句：I hpe yur service can be imprved s that it can live up t buyers’ expectatins.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In additin, nt nly is it f the wrng clr but als it's f the wrng brand. (运用了nt nly…but als的句型，其中nt nly置于句首引起部分倒转。）
【高分句型2】And I wnder if yu culd return my mney r change a new ne fr me. (运用了if引导的宾语从句)
Passage 2
假定你是李华，现在正在英国某所中学读书。昨天你和朋友们在当地的一家海洋公园(marine park)里游玩，但在观看动物表演时，动物们的状态令人担忧。请你用英语给相关负责人写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 所投诉的问题;
2. 你的期望。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a student currently studying in a lcal high schl in the UK. I recently visited yur marine park with my friends yesterday and had an verall enjyable experience, but I must express my cncerns abut the animal perfrmances.
During the shw, I nticed that the animals seemed stressed and nt in their best cnditin. Their mvements were sluggish, and sme even appeared t be in discmfrt. I believe it is crucial t ensure the welfare f these animals and prvide them with an envirnment that is cnducive t their health and well-being.
I hpe that yu will take these cncerns seriusly and cnsider imprving the cnditins fr the animals. Thank yu fr yur attentin t this matter.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生用英语给相关负责人写一封邮件，指出对动物们的状态表示担忧并表达期望。
【详解】1.词汇积累
令人愉快的：enjyable→cheerful
担心：cncern→anxiety
注意到：ntice→spt
感谢：thank→appreciate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am Li Hua, a student currently studying in a lcal high schl in the UK.
拓展句：I am Li Hua, a student wh is currently studying in a lcal high schl in the UK.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
During the shw, I nticed that the animals seemed stressed and nt in their best cnditin.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]
I believe it is crucial t ensure the welfare f these animals and prvide them with an envirnment that is cnducive t their health and well-being.（运用了省略了that的宾语从句，that引导定语从句）
假设你是红星中学学生李华。你所在的“科学社”近期要开展一次跨学科综合实践活动。请你用英语给在你校国际部学习的好友Jim写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.活动内容；
2.发出邀请。
提示词： 跨学科综合实践活动 interdisciplinary learning activity
注意：1.词数 100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I hpe this email finds yu well. Our “Science Club” is abut t embark n an exciting interdisciplinary learning activity, and I can’t wait t share the details with yu.
The activity aims t explre the cnnectins between science, technlgy, engineering, and mathematics (STEM) thrugh a series f hands-n prjects and presentatins. We’ll be wrking in teams t slve real-wrld prblems, fstering creativity and cllabratin acrss different disciplines.
I knw yu have a keen interest in these fields and wuld be a valuable additin t ur team. Wuld yu like t jin us? It’s a great pprtunity t braden yur hrizns and make new friends.
Please let me knw if yu’re interested. I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu sn!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于邀请信。要求考生以红星中学学生李华的身份，给在校国际部学习的好友Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加“科学社”即将开展的跨学科综合实践活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
跨学科：interdisciplinary → crss-disciplinary
解决：slve → settle
培养：fster → cultivate
机会：pprtunity → chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We’ll be wrking in teams t slve real-wrld prblems, fstering creativity and cllabratin acrss different disciplines.
拓展句：We’ll be wrking in teams t slve real-wrld prblems, which will fster creativity and cllabratin acrss different disciplines.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I hpe this email finds yu well.(运用了省略连词that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I knw yu have a keen interest in these fields and wuld be a valuable additin t ur team.(运用了省略连词that的宾语从句)
[高分句型3] Please let me knw if yu’re interested.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
（2024北京高考）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Tday栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)建议投稿内容；
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
It’s great t hear yu’re planning t write abut China’s achievements n the ccasin f the 75th anniversary f the funding f this cuntry. Here are a few suggestins fr yur article.
T begin with, talk abut China’s ecnmic grwth and technlgical advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, prjects like the Belt and Rad Initiative make a gd tpic t discuss because it shwcases China’s determinatin t build a shared future with the wrld. In additin, yu can als mentin China’s rle in helping slving glbal issues such as the glbal warming, ffering a mre cmprehensive view.
Lking frward t reading yur article!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Tday栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很好的：great →wnderful
成就：achievement→ accmplishment
建议：suggestin →advice
此外：In additin → what’s mre
2.句式拓展
句式变换
原句：It’s great t hear yu’re planning t write abut China’s achievements n the ccasin f the 75th anniversary f the funding f this cuntry.
拓展句：It’s great t hear what yu’re planning t write abut is China’s achievements n the ccasin f the 75th anniversary f the funding f this cuntry.
【点睛】【高分句型1】T begin with, talk abut China’s ecnmic grwth and technlgical advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Then, prjects like the Belt and Rad Initiative make a gd tpic t discuss because it shwcases China’s determinatin t build a shared future with the wrld.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
（2023北京高考）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins.
I think yu can carry ut this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding f “Green Beijing” thrugh getting invlved in different activities by themselves. Yu can shwcase garbage classificatin n site, plant trees and publicize sharing ecnmy, which will all fit int the theme f “Green Beijing”.
Hpefully, yu will get sme inspiratin frm my suggestins. Wish yu success.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestin→tip
提供：ffer→prvide
开展：carry ut→cnduct
主题：theme→tpic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins.
拓展句：Since yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I think yu can carry ut this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding f “Green Beijing” thrugh getting invlved in different activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
（2022北京高考）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因；
2．交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Hw’s everything?
I’m writing t invite yu t give us an nline talk n English writing. Our classmates seem t be weak in rganisatin. Wuld yu please give us sme suggestins n hw t cnnect sentences lgically, hw t develp a paragraph, and hw t structure an essay?
The talk will last abut an hur, and yu can decide n a date at yur cnvenience. Please let me knw which platfrm yu’ll use. It wuld be great if we culd have a 10-minute questin and answer sessin at the end f yur talk.
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份电子邮件，邀请英国好友Jim为班级做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近好吗：Hw’s everything → Hw’s it ging
提供、给予：give → ffer / prvide
不擅长：be weak in → be bad at / be pr in
建议：suggestin → advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing t invite yu t give us an nline talk n English writing.
拓展句：I’m writing t ask if it is cnvenient fr yu t ffer us an nline talk n English writing.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Wuld yu please give us sme suggestins n hw t cnnect sentences lgically, hw t develp a paragraph, and hw t structure an essay?(运用了疑问词+不定式作宾语)
【高分句型2】It wuld be great if we culd have a 10-minute questin and answer sessin at the end f yur talk.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
目录
01 模拟基础练
考点01 邀请信、申请信、求职信&求助信
考点01 推荐信、建议信&介绍信
考点03 感谢信、道歉信&投诉信
02 重难创新练
03 真题实战练