高考英语二轮-征文投稿 （专项训练）（北京专用）（教师版）

这是一份高考英语二轮-征文投稿 （专项训练）（北京专用）（教师版），共21页。试卷主要包含了开头段必背，主题句必背，你的建议等内容，欢迎下载使用。
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TOC \ "1-2" \h \u \l "_Tc17943" 01 征文投稿常用词语
\l "_Tc17943" 02 征文投稿常用句型
\l "_Tc20184" 03 征文投稿新考向预测
01 征文投稿常用词语
同意，赞同subscribe t
忠实的读者faithful readers
表达自己的观点vice their pinins
不遗余力地做某事 spare n effrts t d ...
共同努力做某事 make jint effrt t d...
对...…有害 d harm t/be harmful t...
谈到、提到 When it cmes t...
不可否认 There is n denying that...
随着新学期的临近 With the new term appraching
面临考试 be faced with challenge exams
人们普遍认为 It is universally acknwledged that...
很明显，明显地 It is bvius
极为重要；强调...…的重要性 great/crucial/vital significance/imprtance;
强调…的重要性emphasize the imprtance f...; highlight the significance f...; attach imprtance …
\l "_Tc17943" 02 征文投稿常用句型
1.开头段必背
An article in the newspaper caught my attentin. 报纸上一篇文章引起了我的注意
When it cmes t prtecting the cean, it is well-knwn that cean plays an imprtant part in ur life.
说到保护海洋，众所周知，海洋在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。
There are many peple wh I respect . As fr me, my father is the ne I respect. The reasns why I respect him are as fllws.
近来，随着智能手机和电脑的日益流行，越来越多的学生选择用它们在课外学习英语。
Nwadays, with the imprvement f the standard f living, an increasing number f teenagers suffer frm besity, which aruses scial cncerns.
如今，随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的青少年患有肥胖症，这引起了社会的关注。
In the lng span f the Chinese histry, the existence f the utstanding Cnfucius is like a shining pearl.
在中国漫长的历史上，杰出的孔子的存在就像一颗闪亮的珍珠。
Sb. is cnsidered t be ne f the mst influential figures in histry due t his/her accmplishments/achievements/impact.某人被认为是历史上最具影响力的人物之一，因为他/她的[成就/影响力/贡献]。
The lng histry f China has witnessed the flurishing f petry and the brilliance f many exceptinal pets, amng whm I admire Du Fu mst.
中国悠久的历史见证了诗歌的繁荣和许多杰出诗人的才华，其中我最欣赏杜甫。
2.主题句必背
As a high schl student, I nticed that many students had a series f health prblems because f irregular diet.
作为一名高中生，我注意到很多学生都因为饮食不规律而出现了一系列健康问题。
My favurite sprts is rpe skipping, because nt nly can I d it at hme cnveniently but als it can help t refresh me after I get tired frm ding hmewrk.
我最喜欢的运动是跳绳，因为跳绳不仅可以方便地在家里做，而且可以帮助我在做完作业累了之后提神。
Additinally, I take delight in varius activities in the reading club every Friday, where I get immersed in the sea f literature, greatly imprving my literary cmpetence.
此外，我喜欢每周五在阅读俱乐部的各种活动，在那里我沉浸在文学的海洋里，大大提高了我的文学能力。
Only if we take actin t exercise can we be healthier and healthier in the future .
只有当我们采取行动去锻炼时，我们才能在未来变得更健康。
Fr ne thing , nt nly des the cean ffers us varius f sea fd t eat, but als it is hme t many kinds f animals.
首先，海洋不仅为我们提供了各种各样的海鲜可以吃，而且它也是多种动物的家园。
Nt nly des playing basketball build up my bdy and relieve stress frm study, but it als prmtes friendship with thers.
打篮球球不仅增强了我的体质，减轻了学习的压力，而且增进了与他人的友谊。
Faced with the challenge f being destryed, missing r even being stlen, traditinal Chinese relics are urgent t be prtected.
面对被销毁、失踪甚至被盗的挑战，中国传统文物迫切需要得到保护。
结尾句必背
I will greatly appreciate a respnse frm yu at yur earliest cnvenience.
如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。
I d expect Yuth can publish mre classic wrks and have a prmising future.
我希望《青年》能出版更多的经典作品，并有一个光明的未来。
I will greatly appreciate a respnse frm yu at yur earliest cnvenience.
如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。
We hpe that with all these measures taken, eyesight prblems can be greatly reduced.
我们希望这些有效的措施能大大减少视力问题。
I sincerely hpe Yuth will achieve greater success and have a prmising future.
我衷心希望Yuth能取得更大的成就，更受欢迎。
I sincerely hpe that thrugh mre understanding f Cnfucius and his Cnfucianism, we can make the wrld filled with mre lve, justice and peace.
我真诚地希望，通过对孔子及其儒家思想的进一步理解，我们能让世界充满更多的爱、正义与和平。
Persnally, it is high time that we spared n effrt t preserve traditinal cultural relics.
就我个人而言，我们是时候不遗余力地保护传统文物了。
\l "_Tc20184" 03 征文投稿新考向预测
Writing 1
1．假定你是李华，你注意到很多同学喜欢通过社交媒体分享个人生活，请你针对这一现象，给学校英文网站写一篇短文，内容包括：
(1) 描述该现象；
(2) 分析原因；
(3) 个人看法。
注意：
(1) 写作词数应为100个左右；
(2) 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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【答案】Pssible versin
In recent years, it has becme a cmmn sight t see students sharing their everyday mments n scial media platfrms, which is particularly ppular amng high schl students.
There are several reasns behind this phenmenn. One f them is that scial media prvides a cnvenient platfrm fr students t express themselves and cnnect with peers. Besides, sharing life nline can bring a sense f belnging and recgnitin, as likes and cmments frm thers can bst self-esteem. Lastly, in tday’s fast-paced wrld, students ften seek an utlet t relieve stress, and nline sharing serves as such an utlet.
Frm my perspective, sharing nline has gd pints, but we need balance. T much sharing might cause privacy issues and harm ur mental well-being. We shuld think abut what we pst and its effect n ur lives. S, I suggest sharing carefully nline t match ur values and aims.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生针对很多同学喜欢通过社交媒体分享个人生活这一现象给学校英文网站写一篇短文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
日常的：everyday→daily
表达：express→cnvey
另外：besides→mrever
建议：suggest→advise
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：S, I suggest sharing carefully nline t match ur values and aims.
拓展句：S, I suggest we shuld share carefully nline t match ur values and aims.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In recent years, it has becme a cmmn sight t see students sharing their everyday mments n scial media platfrms, which is particularly ppular amng high schl students.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】S, I suggest sharing carefully nline t match ur values and aims. (运用了非谓语动词动名词作宾语)
Writing 2
假定你是某中学学生李华，学校英文网站开展“AI in Our Lives”主题征文活动。请撰写一篇短文投稿，内容需涵盖：
（1）人工智能在你生活中的应用实例；
（2）人工智能带来的问题；
（3）人类与人工智能和谐共处的建议。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Living with AI
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【答案】
Living with AI As a student fascinated by technlgy, AI has reshaped my life. One practical example is language-learning apps like Duling, which adapt exercises t my weaknesses using AI, making learning efficient.
Hwever, risks exist. Over-reliance n AI translatrs may weaken my skills, while Deepfake vides culd spread misinfrmatin, endangering sciety.
T cexist harmniusly with AI, firstly, we must treat it as a tl t enhance, nt replace, human capabilities. Additinally, gvernments and tech firms shuld cllabrate t establish ethical guidelines and stricter regulatins. Ultimately, as yung learners, we must cultivate critical thinking and never cmprmise ur values fr shrt-term cnvenience. All in all, AI’s future depends n us. Let’s embrace its benefits while staying cautius.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校英文网站开展“AI in Our Lives”主题征文活动写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
重塑：reshape → remld
依赖：reliance → dependence
和谐地：harmniusly → cncrdantly
合作：cllabrate → cperate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As a student fascinated by technlgy, AI has reshaped my life.
拓展句：As a student wh is fascinated by technlgy, AI has reshaped my life.
【点睛】[高分句型1] One practical example is language-learning apps like Duling, which adapt exercises t my weaknesses using AI, making learning efficient. (运用了关系代词which引导的非限定性定语从句和现在分词作结果状语)
[高分句型2] T cexist harmniusly with AI, firstly, we must treat it as a tl t enhance, nt replace, human capabilities. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
Writing 3
上周末，你在动物救助站参加了志愿者服务活动。请你写一篇短文分享此次活动，并向校英文报投稿。内容包括：
1. 服务内容；
2. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Vlunteering at the Animal Shelter
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【答案】Vlunteering at the Animal Shelter
Last weekend, I participated in a vlunteer activity at an animal shelter, which turned ut t be an unfrgettable and meaningful experience.
During my service, I tk n varius imprtant tasks. First, I carefully cleaned the animals’ living areas, remving dirt and replacing ld bedding t ensure a tidy envirnment fr them. Then, I prepared fd fr different animals, giving cats their favrite canned fd and ffering parrts a mix f seeds and chpped fruits. What’s mre, I spent a lt f time playing with them, like thrwing balls fr the dgs, which made the animals feel less lnely and much happier. The mst tuching mment came when a timid rescued dg finally apprached me fr petting(抚摸) after hurs f patient interactin. It was incredibly heartwarming t witness its trust in me gradually building up thrugh ur interactin.
This vlunteering experience nt nly made me realize the significance f animal prtectin, but als strengthened my determinatin t cntinuusly participate in vlunteer activities.
【导语】这是一篇应用文。考生在动物救助站参加了志愿者服务活动。请你写一篇短文分享此次活动，并向校英文报投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累：
参加：participate in→take part in
确保：ensure→make sure
极其：incredibly→extremely
逐渐地：gradually→little by little
2.句式拓展：
同义句
原句：Last weekend, I participated in a vlunteer activity at an animal shelter, which turned ut t be an unfrgettable and meaningful experience.
拓展句：Last weekend, I tk part in a vlunteer activity at an animal shelter, and it turned ut t be an memrable and meaningful experience.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Last weekend, I participated in a vlunteer activity at an animal shelter, which turned ut t be an unfrgettable and meaningful experience.（运用了 which 引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型 2】What’s mre, I spent a lt f time playing with them, like thrwing balls fr the dgs, which made the animals feel less lnely and much happier.（运用了which 引导非限制性定语从句）
Writing 4
假设你是李华，学校英文报“Mind & Life”栏目正在征集关于“压力缓解方法”的短文。请你写一篇投稿，分享你的压力管理方法。内容需包括：
1. 有效的压力管理方法；
2. 你的感悟。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节。
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【答案】参考范文：
In tday’s fast-paced wrld, stress has becme an inevitable part f ur lives. Hwever, learning t manage stress is crucial fr maintaining bth mental and physical well-being.
One effective way t cpe with stress is thrugh regular exercise. Physical activities like jgging, yga, r even a simple walk can release endrphins, which are natural md lifters. Anther useful technique is mindfulness meditatin. Taking just 10 minutes a day t sit quietly and fcus n yur breathing can significantly lwer yur stress levels. Additinally, maintaining a healthy scial life is essential. Talking t friends r family abut yur cncerns can prvide emtinal supprt and new perspectives n prblems.
By adpting these stress management techniques, I can face challenges mre calmly and enjy life mre fully. Stress will always be there, but hw we respnd t it makes all the difference.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，向英文报“Mind & Life”栏目投稿，写一篇短文分享自己的压力管理方法，需详细介绍有效的方法，并分享个人感悟。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
不可避免的：inevitable→unavidable
处理：cpe with→deal with, tackle, address
专注于：fcus n→cncentrate n
面对：face→cnfrnt
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Additinally, maintaining a healthy scial life is essential.
拓展句：Additinally, it is essential that we (shuld) maintain a healthy scial life.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Physical activities like jgging, yga, r even a simple walk can release endrphins, which are natural md lifters. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Stress will always be there, but hw we respnd t it makes all the difference. (运用了hw引导主语从句)
Writing 5
你们学校将于下学期实施新的作息方案：课间休息由10分钟延长至15分钟；体育课增加至每天一节；自主学习时段延长。请你以“My View n the New Schedule”为题，给学校英文报写一篇投稿，内容包括：
(1)你的态度；
(2)你的打算。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My View n the New Schedule
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【答案】
My View n the New Schedule
I’m really excited abut the new schedule that ur schl will cnduct next term. The extended break between classes allws us t relax and recharge, and having a daily PE class is a great way t stay fit. Mrever, the lnger self-study time will help us better manage ur studies.
With this new schedule, I plan t use the extra break time t take a shrt walk utside the classrm, which can relieve eye tiredness. During the PE class, I’ll actively participate in varius sprts activities t imprve my physical cnditin. As fr the extended self-study time, I’ll make a detailed plan t review and preview my curses.
In cnclusin, I believe the new schedule is a well-planned arrangement. Nt nly will it benefit ur physical health, but it will als help us achieve better academic results. I’m lking frward t the new term.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“My View n the New Schedule”为题给学校英文报写一篇投稿，表达对新作息方案的态度及个人打算。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常：really → very
兴奋的：excited → thrilled
有助于：help → cntribute t
改善：imprve → enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：During the PE class, I’ll actively participate in varius sprts activities t imprve my physical cnditin.
拓展句：During the PE class, since I knw that regular physical activities are crucial fr maintaining gd health, I’ll actively participate in varius sprts activities t imprve my physical cnditin.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m really excited abut the new schedule that ur schl will cnduct next term.（运用了that引导的定语从句，先行词为the new schedule）
【高分句型2】With this new schedule, I plan t use the extra break time t take a shrt walk utside the classrm, which can relieve eye tiredness.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰前面的句子）
Writing 6
假定你是李华，你校上周举行了“校园劳动周”活动，请给校英语报投稿。内容包括：
(1)活动内容；
(2)活动反响。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Campus Labr Week
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【答案】
Campus Labur Week
Last week, ur schl rganized a meaningful activity themed “Camp Labur Week” t fster students’ practical skills and teamwrk, which attracted mst f the students and achieved desired effects.
Varius f activities were included, cvering many aspects f campus labur. Classrm cleaning and campus gardening were the basic tasks. We even established a cking wrkshp, where we culd prepare simple meals. The hands-n experience nt nly strengthened teamwrk but als deepened us students’ understanding f daily chres.
The event received verwhelming enthusiasm. Bth teachers and students spke highly f it, calling it an “invaluable lessn beynd textbks.” This enriching week left a lasting impressin, reminding us that every effrt shapes a better cmmunity.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生描述“校园劳动周”活动内容及反响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
培养：fster → cultivate
各种各样的：varius → diverse
基础的：basic → fundamental
热情：enthusiasm→ passin
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Last week, ur schl rganized a meaningful activity themed “Camp Labur Week” t fster students’ practical skills and teamwrk, which attracted mst f the students and achieved desired effects.
拓展句：Last week, ur schl rganized a meaningful activity, whse theme is “Camp Labur Week”, t fster students’ practical skills and teamwrk, which attracted mst f the students and achieved desired effects.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Last week, ur schl rganized a meaningful activity themed “Camp Labur Week” t fster students’ practical skills and teamwrk, which attracted mst f the students and achieved desired effects.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】We even established a cking wrkshp, where we culd prepare simple meals.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）
Writing 7
假定你是校英语报主编李华，为规范同学们的汉字书写，报社发起主题征文活动。请写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.学生书写问题；2.书写的重要性；3.改善措施。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Standardize Students’ Chinese Character Writing
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【答案】Standardize Students’ Chinese Character Writing
Nwadays, many students tend t write Chinese characters slppily and irregularly. Sme even ignre the basic strke rders, making their writing hard t recgnize.
Gd handwriting matters a lt. Nt nly des it leave a psitive impressin in exams and daily cmmunicatin, but it als serves as a bridge t inherit ur rich cultural heritage.
T address this issue, we shuld practice writing regularly, paying attentin t strke rders and structures. Meanwhile, cultivating patience and a serius attitude twards writing is equally essential. Let’s take actin and imprve ur Chinese character writing!
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇征文。要求考生以规范同学们的汉字书写为主题，写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
许多的：many→a number f
困难的：hard→difficult
重要：matter→cunt
应该：shuld→be suppsed t
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Sme even ignre the basic strke rders, making their writing hard t recgnize.
拓展句：Sme even ignre the basic strke rders, which makes their writing hard t recgnize.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Nt nly des it leave a psitive impressin in exams and daily cmmunicatin, but it als serves as a bridge t inherit ur rich cultural heritage.（运用了部分倒装）
[高分句型2]
T address this issue, we shuld practice writing regularly, paying attentin t strke rders and structures.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语，动名词writing作宾语，现在分词短语paying attentin t strke rders and structures作状语）
Writing 8
学校英文报开展了以 “AI in My Life” 的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.调查结果描述;
2.简单评论;
3.你的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个词左右;2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答
Emtinal interactin Hmewrk assistance Cntent creatin Other aspects
青少年应用AI调查结果(人数百分比)
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【答案】Recently, a survey named “AI in my life” has been cnducted in ur schl. The result is as fllws.
The findings highlight AI’s rle as bth a supprtive tl and an emtinal utlet in ur life. 66% f the participants turn t AI fr aid with their hmewrk. Cntent creatin cmes secnd, with 54% using it t generate vide scripts r writing. 32% rely n AI fr emtinal interactin, like chatting with chatbt fr cmfrt, while 27% use it in ther aspects.
While AI bsts efficiency and creativity, autmated hmewrk slutins culd hinder critical thinking and reliance n chatbts might reduce human cnnectins. T embrace AI wisely, we are suppsed t ptimize its use fr learning and creatin, while balancing digital and human interactins.
【导语】这是一篇应用文。学校英文报开展了以 “AI in My Life” 的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累：
进行： cnduct→carry ut
突出显示：highlight→emphasize
阻碍：hinder→bstruct
优化：ptimize→imprve
2. 句式拓展：
原句：Cntent creatin cmes secnd, with 54% using it t generate vide scripts r writing.
拓展句：Cntent creatin ranks secnd, and 54% f the participants use it t generate vide scripts r writing.
【点睛】【高分句型1】While AI bsts efficiency and creativity, autmated hmewrk slutins culd hinder critical thinking and reliance n chatbts might reduce human cnnectins.（运用了 while 引导让步状语从句）
【高分句型2】T embrace AI wisely, we are suppsed t ptimize its use fr learning and creatin, while balancing digital and human interactins.（运用了动词不定式 作目的状语）
Writing 9
学校英文报正在开展以“Out-f-schl Curses”为题的讨论。请根据图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.学生参与校外课程情况描述；
2.你的评论及建议。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Recently, a survey was cnducted amng students regarding their participatin in ut-f-schl curses. The survey shws 39% f students take sprts curses, 29% chse art curses, 20% participate in science curses, while nly 12% engage in vlunteering curses.
It’s gd t see many students in sprts activities, which benefits their well-being. The ppularity f art curses is als psitive fr creativity. Hwever, mre fcus shuld be n vlunteering curses t develp scial respnsibility and real-wrld skills.
I suggest that schls and educatinal institutins shuld ffer mre diverse vlunteering curses t attract mre students. Meanwhile, they shuld keep supprting ther ut-f-schl curses t meet students’ varied interests and needs.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，学校英文报正在开展以“Out-f-schl Curses”为题的讨论，要求考生根据图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参与：participatin→engagement
选择：chse→select
许多的：many→plenty f
应该：shuld→be suppsed t
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hwever, mre fcus shuld be n vlunteering curses t develp scial respnsibility and real-wrld skills.
拓展句：Hwever, mre fcus shuld be n vlunteering curses s that they can develp scial respnsibility and real-wrld skills.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
It’s gd t see many students in sprts activities, which benefits their well-being.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
I suggest that schls and educatinal institutins shuld ffer mre diverse vlunteering curses t attract mre students.（运用了that引导宾语从句和虚拟语气）
Writing 10
假定你是某国际学校学生会主席李华。为了丰富校园文化生活，学校计划在图书馆旁设立一个“心灵驿站”(Mind Oasis)，供师生休息放松。请你写一篇短文投稿至校英文报，内容包括：
1. 介绍你的设计方案；
2. 说明设计理由。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Mind Oasis: A Tranquil Retreat n Campus
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【答案】Mind Oasis: A Tranquil Retreat n Campus
I’m excited t share my design fr the upcming Mind Oasis near ur library.
The Mind Oasis will feature tw distinct znes: the Quiet Zne and the Creative Crner. The Quiet Zne will be filled with cmfrtable seating, green plants, and sft lighting, creating a peaceful space fr reading r meditatin. Meanwhile, the Creative Crner will prvide art supplies and a bulletin bard, inspiring artistic expressin and idea sharing.
The idea behind this design is t prvide a place where bth students and teachers can take a break frm their daily rutines and recharge. I believe that such a space can help bth teachers and students relieve stress and enhance their mental well-being. Let’s lk frward t its pening!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校计划在图书馆旁设立的一个供师生休息放松的“心灵驿站”(Mind Oasis)提供设计方案，投稿至校英文报。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的：excited→thrilled
激发：inspire→aruse
帮助：help→assist
提高：enhance→imprve
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The Quiet Zne will be filled with cmfrtable seating, green plants, and sft lighting, creating a peaceful space fr reading r meditatin.
拓展句：The Quiet Zne will be filled with cmfrtable seating, green plants, and sft lighting, which will create a peaceful space fr reading r meditatin.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The Quiet Zne will be filled with cmfrtable seating, green plants, and sft lighting, creating a peaceful space fr reading r meditatin. (运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】The idea behind this design is t prvide a place where bth students and teachers can take a break frm their daily rutines and recharge.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)