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      这是一份高考英语二轮-征文投稿(专项训练)(天津专用)(教师版),共20页。试卷主要包含了我想邀请某人写一篇文章,你能写点关于你的学校生活吗?,有兴趣的学生欢迎参加,这篇文章应该在400字以内,我们想知道在下周之前你是否完稿,期待您方便时尽快答复, Hwever,______等内容,欢迎下载使用。
      TOC \ "1-2" \h \u \l "_Tc17943" 01 征文投稿常用词汇
      \l "_Tc20184" 02 征文投稿常用句型
      \l "_Tc5699" 03 征文投稿常用模板
      \l "_Tc20184" 04 真题模拟融合练
      征文投稿常用词汇
      征文投稿常用句型
      1.我想邀请某人写一篇文章
      I wuld like t invite sb t write an article fr...
      2.我想请你为我们学校的英文报纸写一篇文章。
      I’d like t ask yu t writer an article fr ur schl’s English newspaper.
      3.你能写点关于你的学校生活吗?
      Culd yu/Wuld yu please write smething cncerning yur schl life?
      4.有兴趣的学生欢迎参加。
      Any student wh is interested is welcme t participate
      5.这里有一些关于我们渴望文章的相关细节。
      And here are sme relevant detail abut the articles we are eager fr.
      6.它携带外国学生写的关于他们家文化的文章。
      It carries articles written by freign students cncerning the culture f their cuntry.
      7.这篇文章应该在400字以内。
      The article is suppsed t be within 400 wrds.
      8.我们想知道在下周之前你是否完稿。
      We wnder if it is practicable t have it befre next week.
      9.你最好下星期日把你的文章发送给我,词数约120个词就好。
      Yu’d better send yur article t me next Sunday and abut 120 wrds wuld be fine.
      10.期待您方便时尽快答复。
      Lking frward t yur reply at yur cnvenience.
      11.期待您尽快确定。
      Lking frward t yur cnfirmatin sn.
      征文投稿常用模板
      1. 模版
      As is ften the case/Nwadays, ______ (陈述现象)
      This is really a cmmn phenmenn in ur life. The reasn is that ______(现象的原因). Hwever,______(现象所带来的问题一). Mrever, ______(现象所带来的问题二).
      As far as I am cncerned, ______(我的观点,并提出建议). And meanwhile/mrever, ______(建议二).
      In a wrd, ______(总结自己的观点).
      2. 写作实操技巧
      最新调查指出,人际关系正越来越被"人机关系"所取代,甚至有网友调侃:世界上最远的距离,是我在你面前,而你在低头看手机.根据以下要点用英语写一篇短文给《21世纪英文报》投稿.
      1.描述这一现象
      2.分析其原因及弊端
      3.你认为该如何改变现状
      注意:1.词数80左右
      2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯.
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      【模板套用】
      As is ften the case, when peple are attending meetings, having meals r waiting fr buses, yu can always find them addicted t their phnes, cmpletely ignring thers(陈述现象).
      This is really a cmmn phenmenn in ur life. The reasn is that smart phnes nwadays can be used fr peple t play mbile games and keep in tuch with friends thrugh QQ and WeChat (现象的原因) . Hwever, t much expsure t phnes is bad fr peple in terms f health (现象所带来的问题一). Mrever, peple engaged in phnes fail t cmmunicate well with thse arund them (现象所带来的问题二).
      As far as I am cncerned, peple shuld wisely make use f their phnes t help with their wrk and study (我的观点,并提出建议). And meanwhile care mre abut their family and friends rather than mbile phnes (建议二).
      3. 仿写演练
      某英文报社正在开展 “环保”大讨论,向你约稿。请以垃圾分类为主题,按照以下要点发表你的观点:
      1. 意义;
      2. 现状;
      3. 建议
      注意:1. 词数 80 左右;
      2. 文章标题已拟好,不计入总次数。
      3. 参考词汇:垃圾分类 garbage classificatin
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      【模板范文】
      Nwadays, garbage classificatin is receiving mixed pinins with sme peple applauding it while thers dismissing it as incnvenient. Nevertheless, hwever unaccustmed peple may feel, they must bserve the new regulatin (陈述现象).
      As far as I am cncerned, the value f garbage classificatin can’t be ver-emphasized, and its advantages are as fllws. T begin with, it is envirnmentally-friendly in that it will reduce the land ccupatin used t bury garbage (我的观点一). And mrever, it is ecnmically-beneficial, fr it will nt nly save the cst f prcessing garbage, it will als enable the reuse f the recyclable (进一步说明观点二).
      Significant as garbage classificatin is, peple’s cnfusin abut the categries f trash smetimes discurages their willingness t d it(现象的问题) . Accrdingly, a series f campaigns shuld be in place t help peple build up a strng awareness f the necessity and understand hw t categrize trash(解决方法).
      In a wrd, garbage classificatin is a wrthwhile curse which will benefit future generatins(总结自己的观点).
      真题模拟融合练
      1.(2025·天津武清·模拟预测)假设你是李津,你校英文报社正在举办以“压力管理与心理健康”为主题的征文活动。请你以“Hw t Deal with Academic Pressure”为题,写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
      1. 学业压力的常见来源(如考试、作业、升学竞争等);
      2. 应对学业压力的有效方法(如时间管理、运动、倾诉等);
      3. 保持心理健康的重要性及你的建议。
      注意:
      (1)字数不少于100词;
      (2)题目已给出,不计入总词数;
      (3)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
      Hw t Deal with Academic Pressure
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      【答案】One pssible versin:
      Hw t Deal with Academic Pressure
      As we knw, academic pressure has becme a cmmn challenge fr students, especially in senir high schl. It mainly cmes frm exams, heavy hmewrk, and fierce cmpetitin fr cllege admissin.
      T cpe with this pressure, effective strategies are essential. First, time management can help us priritize tasks and avid prcrastinatin. Fr example, making a daily study plan ensures efficiency. Secnd, physical activities like jgging r playing basketball can relieve stress by releasing endrphins. Additinally, talking t friends, teachers, r family members abut ur wrries prvides emtinal supprt.
      In my pinin, mental health is as imprtant as academic success. Schls shuld ffer cunseling services, and students need t learn self-care techniques, such as mindfulness r jurnaling. Remember, a healthy mind is the fundatin f achieving lng-term gals.
      【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生撰写短文投稿,分析压力来源、提出应对方法并强调心理健康重要性。
      【详解】1.词汇积累
      压力:pressure → stress
      关键的:essential → crucial
      基础:fundatin → basis
      目标:gal → target
      2.句式拓展
      简单句变复合句
      原句:T cpe with this pressure, effective strategies are essential.
      拓展句:Effective strategies are essential s that we can cpe with this pressure.
      【点睛】【高分句型1】As we knw, academic pressure has becme a cmmn challenge fr students, especially in senir high schl. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
      【高分句型2】Fr example, making a daily study plan ensures efficiency. (运用了动名词短语作主语)
      2.(2025·天津河西·一模)2024年12月23日是天津620岁的生日,津云新媒体向全市市民征稿,献礼天津。假设你是晨光中学李津,积极参与此项活动。请按以下提示向津云投稿:
      1. 表达你对天津的祝福;
      2. 介绍天津的特色(如文化、美食、景点等);
      3. 你对天津的印象及展望。
      注意:
      1. 词数不少于100;
      2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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      【答案】Dear Editrs,
      As a student frm Chenguang High Schl, I am verjyed t celebrate Tianjin’s 620th birthday n December 23, 2024. It is with great enthusiasm that I extend my heartfelt blessings t Tianjin, wishing it cntinued prsperity and happiness fr all its citizens.
      Tianjin is a city rich in histry and culture. Firstly, it ffers a variety f delicius fd like Gubuli Bazi, whse flavr tells stries f generatins. Secndly, Tianjin’s cultural landmarks are indeed treasures. Fr example, the Ancient Culture Street, with its traditinal architecture and vibrant flk art perfrmances, is a living museum that transprts visitrs back in time. What’s mre, what impresses me mst is Tianjin’s ability t harmniusly blend its histrical rts with mdern advancements.
      I am cnfident that Tianjin will cntinue t thrive as a hub f culture and ecnmy. I am lking frward t witnessing its cntinued grwth and success in the future.
      Yurs,
      Li Jin
      【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇投稿,表达对天津的祝福,介绍天津的特色并说明对天津的印象及展望。
      【详解】1.词汇积累
      庆祝:celebrate→bserve
      各种各样的:a variety f→all kinds f
      首先:firstly→t begin with
      继续做某事:cntinue t d→keep n ding
      2.句式拓展
      简单句变复合句
      原句:Tianjin is a city rich in histry and culture.
      拓展句:Tianjin is a city, which is rich in histry and culture.
      【点睛】[高分句型1]
      It is with great enthusiasm that I extend my heartfelt blessings t Tianjin, wishing it cntinued prsperity and happiness fr all its citizens.(运用了强调句,现在分词wishing作状语,省略了引导词that的宾语从句作wishing的宾语)
      [高分句型2]
      Firstly, it ffers a variety f delicius fd like Gubuli Bazi, whse flavr tells stries f generatins.(运用了whse引导非限制性定语从句)
      3.(2025·天津·模拟预测)假设你是李华,为弘扬传统文化,你校英语杂志社正在举行主题为“我最喜欢的传统节日”的征文活动,请你写一篇英语文章,内容包括:
      1.介绍节日的基本情况(如名称、时间、特殊饮食、节日活动等);
      2.阐述庆祝该节日的意义;
      3.从个人角度出发,谈谈如何在现代生活中更好地传承和创新传统文化。
      注意:
      1.词数100左右;
      2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
      My Favrite Traditinal Festival
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      【答案】
      My Favrite Traditinal Festival
      Of all the traditinal Chinese festivals, the Mid-Autumn Festival is the ne I cherish the mst. Celebrated n the 15th day f the 8th lunar mnth, it is a time fr family reunins and expressing gratitude. During this festival, we enjy mncakes, a special pastry with varius fillings, and admire the full mn, which symblizes cmpleteness and unity. Families ften gather fr a hearty dinner, share stries, and light clrful lanterns, creating a warm and festive atmsphere.
      The Mid-Autumn Festival carries prfund cultural significance. It nt nly strengthens family bnds but als serves as a reminder f ur rich heritage. It encurages us t appreciate the beauty f nature and the value f tgetherness. Fr me, it is a precius pprtunity t recnnect with my lved nes and reflect n the timeless traditins passed dwn thrugh generatins.
      T ensure the preservatin and evlutin f this traditin, I believe we shuld blend mdern elements with traditinal custms. Fr instance, we can use scial media platfrms t share festival-related stries r intrduce innvative mncake flavrs t appeal t yunger generatins. Schls and cmmunities culd als rganize engaging activities, such as lantern-making wrkshps r mncake-baking classes, t invlve peple f all ages. By ding s, we can keep ur cultural traditins alive and relevant in tday’s rapidly changing wrld.
      The Mid-Autumn Festival is mre than just a celebratin; it is a bridge cnnecting the past and the future. Let us cherish this beautiful traditin while embracing creativity and innvatin t ensure its enduring legacy.
      【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校英语杂志社正在举行主题为“我最喜欢的传统节日”的征文活动写一篇英语文章。
      【详解】1.词汇积累
      表达:express→cnvey
      增强:strengthen →build up
      机会:pprtunity →chance
      吸引:appeal t→attract
      2.句式拓展
      同义句转换
      原句:T ensure the preservatin and evlutin f this traditin, I believe we shuld blend mdern elements with traditinal custms.
      拓展句:I believe we shuld blend mdern elements with traditinal custms s that we can ensure the preservatin and evlutin f this traditin.
      【点睛】【高分句型1】During this festival, we enjy mncakes, a special pastry with varius fillings, and admire the full mn, which symblizes cmpleteness and unity.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
      【高分句型2】Families ften gather fr a hearty dinner, share stries, and light clrful lanterns, creating a warm and festive atmsphere.(运用了现在分词作状语)
      4.(2024·天津河北·二模)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你校英文报正面向全体高三毕业生征集毕业感言。
      请你按照以下提示写一篇英语短文投稿。
      内容包括:
      (1)表达你对学校的感激;
      (2)回顾你在校的生活(如:难忘的时刻,获得的知识,个人的成长等);
      (3)展望学校的未来,表达你的美好祝愿。
      注意:
      (1)词数不少于100;
      (2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
      (3)题目已给出,不计入总词数。
      T My Dear Schl
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      【答案】范文
      T My Dear Schl
      As I bid farewell t my alma mater, my heart is filled with gratitude and nstalgia. This schl has been a secnd hme t me, nurturing me with knwledge and wisdm, and shaping me int the persn I am tday.
      Lking back at my schl life, there are cuntless mments that I cherish dearly. I have gained valuable knwledge frm the diligent teachers and learned life skills that will guide me thrugh my future jurney. Mrever, this schl has fstered my grwth as an individual, encuraging me t explre my interests, develp my talents, and vercme my weaknesses.
      As I lk ahead t the future f my schl, I am filled with hpe and ptimism. I envisin a vibrant cmmunity f learners, where students are inspired t pursue their passins and achieve their dreams.
      In cnclusin, I wuld like t express my heartfelt gratitude t my schl fr the pprtunities it has prvided me and the memries it has created.
      【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生一篇关于毕业感言的英语短文投稿。
      【详解】1.词汇积累
      无数的:cuntless→numerus
      表达:express→extend
      此外:mrever→besides
      总之:in cnclusin→in shrt
      2.句式拓展
      简单句变复合句
      原句:Lking back at my schl life, there are cuntless mments that I cherish dearly.
      拓展句:When I lk back at my schl life, there are cuntless mments that I cherish dearly.
      【点睛】[高分句型1] Lking back at my schl life, there are cuntless mments that I cherish dearly. (运用了现在分词作状语)
      [高分句型2] As I lk ahead t the future f my schl, I am filled with hpe and ptimism. (运用了as引导时间状语从句)
      5.(2024·天津·二模)假设你是晨光国际中学的学生李津。在不久前举行的海棠花节活动中,你带领外国同学游览了五大道,和大家在五大道文创市集将亲手制作的手工艺品进行义卖并将所得捐给学校。请你根据以下内容提示向英文校报投稿:
      (1)简要介绍海棠花节活动;
      (2)描述义卖情况;
      (3)表达对此次游览和义卖活动的感受。
      注意: (1)字数不少于 100;
      (2)题目已给出,不计入总词数;
      (3)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
      参考词汇:海棠花节 Crabapple Flwer Festival 五大道 the Five Great Avenues 文创市集 cultural and creative market
      A Memrable Experience at the Crabapple Flwer Festival
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      【答案】
      A Memrable Experience at the Crabapple Flwer Festival
      Amidst the Crabapple Festival’s vibrant blms, I guided internatinal students alng the stried Five Great Avenues, leading t a bustling creative market.
      Our stall brimmed with artisanal crafts, each unique and culturally infused, attracting enthusiasts t ur charity sale. Hand-painted fans and wven bracelets were amng the favrites. Funds raised, an uplifting result, supprted ur schl, enriching educatin and prmting altruism. This event fused culture, artistry, and giving, transcending bundaries, sharing narratives, and illustrating kindness’s prfund impact. The festival highlighted unity and creativity’s transfrmative pwer, uniting us thrugh the glbal tngue f beauty and genersity, leaving a lasting, inspiring impressin.
      【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。在不久前举行的海棠花节活动中,考生带领外国同学游览了五大道,和大家在五大道文创市集将亲手制作的手工艺品进行义卖并将所得捐给学校。要求考生按照要求向英文校报投稿。
      【详解】1.词汇积累
      熙熙攘攘的:bustling→ busy
      独特的:unique→ distinctive
      吸引:attract→ draw
      融合:fuse→ mix
      2.句式拓展
      简单句变复合句
      原句:Amidst the Crabapple Festival’s vibrant blms, I guided internatinal students alng the stried Five Great Avenues, leading t a bustling creative market.
      拓展句:Amidst the Crabapple Festival’s vibrant blms, I guided internatinal students alng the stried Five Great Avenues, which leads t a bustling creative market.
      【点睛】【高分句型1】Amidst the Crabapple Festival’s vibrant blms, I guided internatinal students alng the stried Five Great Avenues, leading t a bustling creative market.(运用了现在分词leading作状语)
      【高分句型2】Funds raised, an uplifting result, supprted ur schl, enriching educatin and prmting altruism.(运用了过去分词raised作定语、现在分词uplifting作定语、现在分词enriching和prmting作状语)
      6.(2024·天津·模拟预测)假设你是明启中学高三学生李华,目前担任学校社团负责人。近期,你校被评为社团明星学校,为了在报纸上分享你校社团情况,请你以“Clubs in My Schl”为题,写一篇文章,内容须包含:
      1. 对你校社团进行分类;
      2. 具体描述每一类社团的特色。
      注意:
      1. 词数100左右;
      2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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      【答案】
      Clubs in My Schl
      T enrich students’ life, ur schl rganizes a variety f clubs in my schl. Almst every student in ur schl participates in a club, which makes their schl life clrful. Generally speaking, the clubs in my schl can be classified int tw types: sprts club and art club.
      Sprts club are ppular amng students. There are basketball club, ftball club, swimming club and s n, which are rganized by students with the same interest. S students there can make friends. Besides, they can nt nly play sprts in free time, but als they can learn sme sprts skills.
      Art club including music club, painting club and s n, gives students a chance t admire the art. Als, it prvides students sme knwledge abut art. Meanwhile, students there can have the access t the instrument, such as pian, Erhu and s n.
      All the students in my schl like the clubs. S I think the clubs are very significant.
      【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Clubs in My Schl”为题,写一篇文章,分享学校社团情况。
      1.词汇积累
      等等:and s n→and the like
      此外:Besides→In additin
      机会:chance→pprtunity
      同时:Meanwhile→At the same time
      2.句式拓展
      简单句变复合句
      原句:Art club including music club, painting club and s n, gives students a chance t admire the art.
      拓展句:Art club which includes music club, painting club and s n, gives students a chance t admire the art.
      【点睛】[高分句型1] Almst every student in ur schl participates in a club, which makes their schl life clrful. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
      [高分句型2] There are basketball club, ftball club, swimming club and s n, which are rganized by students with the same interest. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
      7.(2020·天津北辰·三模)假如你是晨光中学的李津,为配合学校的科技月活动,你校英语社团的微信公众号开展征文活动。要求同学们写一篇英语短文,介绍我国科学家设计的一款生活型智能机器人。现请你投稿,文章内容包括:
      1. 简要介绍这款生活型智能机器人。
      2. 谈谈这款生活智能机器人的功能(至少写2点)
      3. 说明生活型机器人的意义。
      注意:1. 词数不要少于100。
      2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
      3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
      参考词汇:智能机器人intelligent rbt
      June 10, 2020
      Here I wuld like t intrduce a new type f intelligent husehld rbt t yu.
      ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
      【答案】June 10, 2020
      Here I wuld like t intrduce a new type f intelligent husehld rbt t yu.
      In recent years, an intelligent rbt, pwered by slar energy which is envirnmentally-friendly, has been designed t prvide everyday assistance in ur life by scientists in ur cuntry.
      S many pwerful functins des this intelligent rbt have that it can help us in varius ways. Firstly, it can d all the husewrk, such as cking, washing and cleaning windws, as a result f which, peple can be freed frm heavy labur. What’s mre, if used apprpriately, the rbt is capable f taking gd care f the elderly and the sick, lightening the burden f their family members’ care fr them. Of curse, yu’ll als take advantage f this rbt by nt nly cmmunicating with it but surfing the Internet thrugh it t cllect amunts f infrmatin. Nt t mentin it can even entertain yu if it accepts vice cmmands, playing sngs, t mentin just ne example.
      There’s n dubt that the creatin f this intelligent rbt shws the rapid develpment f science and technlgy f ur cuntry. I’m firmly cnvinced it will be a big helper in a family, making life mre cnvenient and I’m lking frward t the life with this rbt.
      【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求考生写一篇英语短文,介绍我国科学家设计的一款生活型智能机器人的相关信息。
      【详解】第一步:审题
      体裁:说明文
      时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
      结构:三段式结构。第一段提出话题“一款生活型智能机器人”;第二段讲述其功能特点;第三段说明其意义。
      要求:1.提出话题(an intelligent rbt)
      2.介绍相关情况:功能强大(s many pwerful functins)
      1)做家务(d all the husewrk)
      2)照顾幼小(take gd care f the elderly and the sick)
      3) 网络娱乐(surf the Internet;entertain)
      3. 意义阐述
      1)体现科技发展(shw the rapid develpment f science and technlgy f ur cuntry)
      2)生活助手(will be a big helper)
      第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
      envirnmentally-friendly; everyday assistance; in varius ways; d the husewrk; such as; be capable f; take gd care f; take advantage f; cmmunicate with; nt nly…but (als); surf the Internet; nt t mentin; there’s n dubt that; be cnvinced; lk frward t
      第三步:连词成句
      1. In recent years, an intelligent rbt, pwered by slar energy which is envirnmentally-friendly, has been designed t prvide everyday assistance in ur life by scientists in ur cuntry.
      2. S many pwerful functins des this intelligent rbt have that it can help us in varius ways.
      3. Firstly, it can d all the husewrk, such as cking, washing and cleaning windws, as a result f which, peple can be freed frm heavy labur.
      4. What’s mre, if used apprpriately, the rbt is capable f taking gd care f the elderly and the sick, lightening the burden f their family members’ care fr them.
      5. Of curse, yu’ll als take advantage f this rbt by nt nly cmmunicating with it but surfing the Internet thrugh it t cllect amunts f infrmatin.
      6. Nt t mentin it can even entertain yu if it accepts vice cmmands, playing sngs, t mentin just ne example.
      7. There’s n dubt that the creatin f this intelligent rbt shws the rapid develpment f science and technlgy f ur cuntry.
      8. I’m firmly cnvinced it will be a big helper in a family, making life mre cnvenient and I’m lking frward t the life with this rbt.
      根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
      第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
      1.表文章结构顺序:first f all; firstly/first; secndly/secnd…; and then; finally; in the end; at last
      2.表并列补充关系:what is mre; besides; mrever; furthermre; in additin; as well as; nt nly…but (als); including
      3.表因果关系:because; as; s; thus; therefre; as a result
      连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
      第五步:润色修改
      【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。
      1.作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:
      In recent years, an intelligent rbt, pwered by slar energy which is envirnmentally-friendly, has been designed t prvide everyday assistance in ur life by scientists in ur cuntry.( 近年来,一个智能机器人,由太阳能驱动,这是环保的,已经被设计在我们的生活中提供日常援助的科学家在我们的国家。)这句话运用了which引导定语从句。
      S many pwerful functins des this intelligent rbt have that it can help us in varius ways.( 这个智能机器人有这么多强大的功能,它可以在各个方面帮助我们。)该句中使用了s that结果状语从句,且将“S+adj.”结构置于句首,使该句使用了部分倒装句式。
      Of curse, yu’ll als take advantage f this rbt by nt nly cmmunicating with it but surfing the Internet thrugh it t cllect amunts f infrmatin.( 当然,您还可以利用这个机器人,不仅可以与它通信,还可以通过它浏览网络以收集大量信息。)该句使用了nt nly…but(als)并列句结构。
      There’s n dubt that the creatin f this intelligent rbt shws the rapid develpment f science and technlgy f ur cuntry.( 毫无疑问,这种智能机器人的创造表明了我国科学技术的迅速发展。)该句使用了固定句式“there’s n dubt that…”,其中that引导同位语从句。
      2.使用了一些固定词组,如envirnmentally-friendly; everyday assistance; in varius ways; d the husewrk; such as; be capable f; take gd care f; take advantage f; cmmunicate with; nt nly…but (als); surf the Internet; nt t mentin; there’s n dubt that; be cnvinced; lk frward t等。
      全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
      汉译
      英文表达
      旨在;以为目的
      be aimed at
      出版
      publish
      文章的要求
      requirements f the article
      如果
      n cnditin that
      限制在词
      be limited t abut ... wrds
      是很受欢迎的
      be very ppular with...
      任何有关的事情
      anything relevant t
      大约120字就可以了
      abut 120 wrds wuld be fine
      在之前提交你的文章
      submit yur article befre
      体育专栏
      sprts clumn
      娱乐专栏
      entertainment clumn
      栏目特点
      characteristics f the clumn
      语言风格
      language style
      改编自
      be adapted frm
      延长截止日期
      extend the deadline

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