高考英语一轮-征文投稿（专项训练）（全国通用）（教师版）

这是一份高考英语一轮-征文投稿（专项训练）（全国通用）（教师版），共49页。试卷主要包含了征文投稿常用词汇，征文投稿常用句型，征文投稿常用模版与演练，征文投稿精准测试22篇，通用高分替换训练等内容，欢迎下载使用。

目 录
征文投稿常用词汇 P1
征文投稿常用句型 P2
征文投稿常用模版与演练 P2
征文投稿精准测试22篇 P5
通用高分替换训练（传统文化） P37
一、征文投稿常用词汇
旨在；以为目的 be aimed at
出版 publish
文章的要求 requirements f the article
如果 n cnditin that
限制在词 be limited t abut ... wrds
是很受欢迎的 be very ppular with...
任何有关的事情 anything relevant t
大约120字就可以了 Abut 120 wrds wuld be fine
在之前提交你的文章 submit yur article befre
体育专栏 sprts clumn
娱乐专栏 entertainment clumn
栏目特点 characteristics f the clumn
语言风格 language style
改编自 be adapted frm
延长截止日期 extend the deadline
二、征文投稿常用句型
1.我想邀请某人写一篇文章
I wuld like t invite sb t write an article fr...
2.我想请你为我们学校的英文报纸写一篇文章。
I’d like t ask yu t writer an article fr ur schl’s English newspaper.
你能写点关于你的学校生活吗？
Culd yu/Wuld yu please write smething cncerning yur schl life?
4.有兴趣的学生欢迎参加。
Any student wh is interested is welcme t participate
5.这里有一些关于我们渴望文章的相关细节。
And here are sme relevant detail abut the articles we are eager fr .
6.它携带外国学生写的关于他们家文化的文章。
It carries articles written by freign students cncerning the culture f their cuntry .
7.这篇文章应该在400字以内。
The article is suppsed t be within 400 wrds .
8.我们想知道在下周之前你是否完稿。
We wnder if it is practicable t have it befre next week.
9.你最好下星期日把你的文章发送给我，词数约120个词就好。
Yu’d better send yur article t me next Sunday and abut 120 wrds wuld be fine .
10.期待您方便时尽快答复。
Lking frward t yur reply at yur cnvenience .
11.期待您尽快确定。
Lking frward t yur cnfirmatin sn .
三、征文投稿常用模版与演练
投稿，通常会有特定的主题，如你最敬爱的人等等，话题基本上围绕书信类，如推荐一个项目，那就和推荐信写作思路一致。如最想感谢的人，那就喝感谢信思路一致，不过在表达上可能人称需要换一下。基本上写一篇相关话题的小短文即可，小短文以记叙文或者议论文为主。学生需要掌握相关词汇，句式用法等。
1.议论文常用模版：
As is ften the case/Nwadays, ______ (陈述现象)
This is really a cmmn phenmenn in ur life. The reasn is that ______(现象的原因) . Hwever,______(现象所带来的问题一). Mrever, ______(现象所带来的问题二).
As far as I am cncerned, ______(我的观点，并提出建议). And meanwhile/mrever, ______(建议二).
In a wrd, ______(总结自己的观点).

2. 写作实操技巧
最新调查指出,人际关系正越来越被"人机关系"所取代,甚至有网友调侃:世界上最远的距离,是我在你面前,而你在低头看手机.根据以下要点用英语写一篇短文给《21世纪英文报》投稿.
1.描述这一现象
2.分析其原因及弊端
3.你认为该如何改变现状
注意:1.词数80左右
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯.
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As is ften the case, when peple are attending meetings, having meals r waiting fr buses, yu can always find them addicted t their phnes, cmpletely ignring thers(陈述现象).
This is really a cmmn phenmenn in ur life. The reasn is that smart phnes nwadays can be used fr peple t play mbile games and keep in tuch with friends thrugh QQ and WeChat (现象的原因) . Hwever, t much expsure t phnes is bad fr peple in terms f health (现象所带来的问题一). Mrever, peple engaged in phnes fail t cmmunicate well with thse arund them (现象所带来的问题二).
As far as I am cncerned, peple shuld wisely make use f their phnes t help with their wrk and study (我的观点，并提出建议). And meanwhile care mre abut their family and friends rather than mbile phnes (建议二).

3. 仿写演练
某英文报社正在开展 “环保”大讨论，向你约稿。请以垃圾分类为主题，按照以下要点发表你的观点：
1. 意义；
2. 现状；
3. 建议
注意：1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 文章标题已拟好，不计入总次数。
3. 参考词汇：垃圾分类 garbage classificatin
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【模板范文】
Nwadays, garbage classificatin is receiving mixed pinins with sme peple applauding it while thers dismissing it as incnvenient. Nevertheless, hwever unaccustmed peple may feel, they must bserve the new regulatin (陈述现象).
As far as I am cncerned, the value f garbage classificatin can’t be ver-emphasized, and its advantages are as fllws. T begin with, it is envirnmentally-friendly in that it will reduce the land ccupatin used t bury garbage (我的观点一). And mrever, it is ecnmically-beneficial, fr it will nt nly save the cst f prcessing garbage, it will als enable the reuse f the recyclable (进一步说明观点二).
Significant as garbage classificatin is, peple’s cnfusin abut the categries f trash smetimes discurages their willingness t d it(现象的问题) . Accrdingly, a series f campaigns shuld be in place t help peple build up a strng awareness f the necessity and understand hw t categrize trash(解决方法).
In a wrd, garbage classificatin is a wrthwhile curse which will benefit future generatins(总结自己的观点).
四、征文投稿精准测试22篇
1．（2025·湖南永州·三模）
假定你是李华，你校英语报“Happy leisure time”栏目拟刊登中学生课外生活的短文请给外国朋友Janice写一封电子邮件约稿，内容包括：1.栏目介绍；2.稿件内容及要求。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Janice,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Janice,
I’m writing t invite yu t cntribute an article t ur schl English newspaper.
In ur schl newspaper, there is a clumn titled “Happy Leisure Time” that features articles written by internatinal students abut their after-schl experiences. I believe this is a wnderful pprtunity fr yu t shw yur talents f writing. And yur sharing persnal experiences wuld undubtedly enrich ur clumn. The length f the article shuld be limited t 400 wrds r s. If yu want t cntribute t ur newspaper, please remember t submit it befre 28th June.
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd give me a reply as sn as pssible.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Janice写一封电子邮件约稿，简要介绍校英语报“Happy leisure time”栏目，并说明稿件内容及要求。
【详解】1.词汇积累
相信：believe → have faith in
机会：pprtunity → chance
展示：shw → shwcase
天赋：talent → gift
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：And yur sharing persnal experiences wuld undubtedly enrich ur clumn.
拓展句：And it is yur sharing persnal experiences that wuld undubtedly enrich ur clumn.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In ur schl newspaper, there is a clumn titled “Happy Leisure Time” that features articles written by internatinal students abut their after-schl experiences. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】If yu want t cntribute t ur newspaper, please remember t submit it befre 28th June.(运用了If引导的条件状语从句)
2．（2025·河北衡水·三模）
近期，学校开展了“手工制作丰富生活 (Handicrafting Enriches Life)”活动，请你写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，介绍你的作品，内容包括：
1. 作品描述 2. 创作缘由 3. 活动感受
注意：1. 写作词数为 80 字左右 2. 请在答题卡相应位置作答
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【参考范文】
Handicrafting Enriches Life
Fr the “Handicrafting Enriches Life” event, I transfrmed used plastic bttles int a unique pen hlder. First, I cut the bttles int prper sizes, then carefully painted vivid green leaves n the surface. T make it mre interesting, I decrated it with clrful cartn stickers. Nw, it stands n my desk, bth practical and eye-catching. I aimed t prmte recycling and bring sme charm t my study space.
Thrugh this activity, I deeply experienced the jy f creatin and learned the true value f reuse. It made me realize that handicrafts nt nly add beauty t life but als enrich ur inner wrld.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向校英文报投稿，介绍在“手工制作丰富生活”活动中的作品，包括作品描述、创作缘由和活动感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
独特的：unique→special
装饰：decrate→adrn
吸引人的：eye-catching→attractive
旨在：aim t→intend t
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I transfrmed used plastic bttles int a unique pen hlder.
拓展句：I transfrmed used plastic bttles int a unique pen hlder which can hld many pens.
【点睛】【高分句型1】T make it mre interesting, I decrated it with clrful cartn stickers. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
【高分句型2】Thrugh this activity, I deeply experienced the jy f creatin and learned the true value f reuse, which made me realize that handicrafts nt nly add beauty t life but als enrich ur inner wrld. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和that引导的宾语从句)
3．（2025·湖南长沙·三模）
校报Yuth正在为昨天的研学旅行进行征文活动，对此请你写一篇征文投稿。内容包括：
（1）研学地点；
（2）研学活动；
（3）你的感悟。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
An Unfrgettable Field Trip
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【参考范文1】
An Unfrgettable Field Trip
Yesterday, ur schl rganized a remarkable field trip t the Prvincial Science and Technlgy Museum, which left an indelible impressin n me.
Upn arrival, we were immediately captivated by the high-tech exhibits. We engaged in hands-n experiments, explred interactive displays, and even participated in a thrilling virtual reality experience. These activities nt nly deepened ur understanding f scientific knwledge but als sparked ur curisity abut the unknwn.
This field trip was mre than just a simple uting; it was a jurney f discvery that bradened my hrizns and inspired me t embrace learning with enthusiasm. It was truly an educatinal and rewarding experience.Pssible
【参考范文2】
An Unfrgettable Field Trip
Guided by prfessinal instructrs, ur class embarked n an immersive explratin at the Future Science Museum, a cutting-edge institutin renwned fr its interactive exhibits n rbtics and sustainable energy. Thrughut the day, we engaged in hands-n experiments simulating AI algrithms, participated in thught-prvking wrkshps abut renewable resurces, and cllabrated in teams t design ec-friendly urban mdels using 3D printing technlgy.
This experience nt nly enriched my understanding f hw theretical cncepts translate int real-wrld innvatins but als highlighted the significance f interdisciplinary cllabratin in tackling glbal challenges. Witnessing the seamless fusin f creativity and technlgy, I nw firmly believe that yuth-driven curisity and cperatin are pivtal in shaping a sustainable tmrrw. The trip has undeniably ignited a fervent passin within me t cntribute t scientific advancements that harmnize humanity with nature.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿征文，要求考生就昨天的研学旅行进行征文活动写一篇征文投稿。内容包括：研学地点、研学活动和你的感悟。
【详解】1.词汇积累
立即地：immediately→instantly
参与： participate in→take part in
令人兴奋不已的：thrilling→exciting
理解： understanding→cmprehensin
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Upn arrival, we were immediately captivated by the high-tech exhibits.
拓展句：As sn as we arrived, we were immediately captivated by the high-tech exhibits.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Yesterday, ur schl rganized a remarkable field trip t the Prvincial Science and Technlgy Museum, which left an indelible impressin n me.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】These activities nt nly deepened ur understanding f scientific knwledge but als sparked ur curisity abut the unknwn.（运用了并列连词nt als）
4．（2025·湖北·三模）
假设你是学生李华，你校即将举办一场以“绿色生活，从我做起”为主题的环保宣传活动，现面向全校学生征集环保创意。请你给校英语报纸写一封投稿，内容包括：
1. 你的创意(如活动形式、具体内容等)；
2. 呼吁大家积极参与。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Editr,
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Sincerely,
Li Hua
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Dear Editr,
Learning that ur schl is scheduled t hld a campaign themed “Green Life, Start frm Me”, I wuld like t prpse the idea f hsting a “Green Fashin Shw” as part f this initiative.
The shw culd take place in the schl meeting hall where students will design and mdel clthes made entirely frm recycled r repurpsed materials, such as ld clthes, plastic bags, r newspapers. Meanwhile, a panel f judges will be invited t evaluate the designs based n creativity, sustainability, and presentatin, with prizes awarded t the mst innvative entries.
I’m cnvinced that the fashin shw will inspire everyne t take actin fr a greener future. I hpe all students will participate and make this event a success!
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生李华的身份，为校英语报纸投稿，提出环保宣传活动的创意并呼吁大家积极参与。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：hld → rganize
完全地：entirely → cmpletely
确信的：cnvinced → assured
参与：participate → engage
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Meanwhile, a panel f judges will be invited t evaluate the designs based n creativity, sustainability, and presentatin, with prizes awarded t the mst innvative entries.
拓展句：Meanwhile, a panel f judges will be invited t evaluate the designs, which will be assessed based n creativity, sustainability, and presentatin, with prizes awarded t the mst innvative entries.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that ur schl is scheduled t hld a campaign themed “Green Life, Start frm Me”, I wuld like t prpse the idea f hsting a “Green Fashin Shw” as part f this initiative. (运用了现在分词短语作状语以及that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】The shw culd take place in the schl meeting hall where students will design and mdel clthes made entirely frm recycled r repurpsed materials, such as ld clthes, plastic bags, r newspapers. (运用了where引导的定语从句)
5．（2025·湖北武汉·三模）
最近，你班越来越多的同学使用AI助手完成学习任务，请你就该现象写一篇短文投稿校英文刊，内容包括：1、你的看法 2、你的建议
注意：写作词数应为80词左右。
请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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【参考范文】
Embracing AI Assistants Wisely
Recently, mre classmates have turned t AI assistants fr academic tasks. While AI tls bst efficiency and ffer instant slutins, ver-reliance risks undermining independent learning. Students may grw dependent, lsing pprtunities t hne critical thinking and prblem-slving skills.
T maximize benefits, I suggest using AI as a supplementary tl rather than a replacement. Set clear gals befre seeking AI help — fr example, verify answers after attempting tasks independently. Additinally, allcate time fr self-study t strengthen fundatinal knwledge and self-discipline.
By striking a balance between technlgy and persnal effrt, we can harness AI’s ptential withut cmprmising academic grwth.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就班级越来越多的同学使用AI助手完成学习任务的现象写一篇短文投稿校英文刊。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近：recently→lately
即时的：instant→immediate
而不是：rather than→instead f
此外：additinally→in additin
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Additinally, allcate time fr self-study t strengthen fundatinal knwledge and self-discipline.
拓展句：Additinally, allcate time fr self-study s that yu can strengthen fundatinal knwledge and self-discipline.
【点睛】【高分句型1】While AI tls bst efficiency and ffer instant slutins, ver-reliance risks undermining independent learning.（运用了while引导的让步状语从句）
【高分句型2】T maximize benefits, I suggest using AI as a supplementary tl rather than a replacement.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语和动名词作宾语）
6.（2025·福建泉州·三模）
假定你是李华，上周你校举办了“劳模校友进校园”宣讲活动。请你“Learning frm Mdel Wrkers”为题，给你校英文报Yuth写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 劳模故事；2. 劳模精神；3. 感受和启发。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Learning frm Mdel Wrkers
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【参考范文】
Learning frm Mdel Wrkers
Last week, ur schl invited several utstanding graduates wh are mdel wrkers t share their stries. One f them, Mr. Chen, has been devted t teaching at a pverty-stricken muntain schl since 1997. Despite the difficult cnditins, he selflessly aided the students, funded learning clubs and tk gd care f barding students.
I’m filled with admiratin fr Chen’s stry, which inspires me t face challenges curageusly and pursue my dreams with the same selfless spirit.
This activity makes me realize that true success lies in making a psitive impact n thers. I’m determined t fllw in the mdel wrkers’ ftsteps and wrk hard t make the wrld brighter.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿征文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，就学校举办的“劳模校友进校园”宣讲活动写一篇短文，需分享自己听到的劳模故事，感受到的劳模精神，以及参与该活动的感受和启发。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
杰出的：utstanding→exceptinal, extrardinary
致力于：be devted t→be cmmitted t, be dedicated t
照顾：take care f→lk after, attend t
意识到：realize→recgnize
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Despite the difficult cnditins, he selflessly aided the students, funded learning clubs and tk gd care f barding students.
拓展句：Althugh the cnditins were difficult, he selflessly aided the students, funded learning clubs, and tk gd care f barding students.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Last week, ur schl invited several utstanding graduates wh are mdel wrkers t share their stries. (运用了wh引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] This activity makes me realize that true success lies in making a psitive impact n thers. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
7．（2025·福建三明·三模）
假定你是李华，请写一篇短文向校英语报“Senir Three”栏目投稿，给高三学生推荐一项减压活动，内容包括：
1. 推荐活动； 2. 说明理由。
注意：
1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear fellw senir three students,
I’d like t recmmend jgging as a great way t relieve stress. Jgging desn’t require any special equipment. Yu can d it arund the schl playgrund r in a park near yur hme. Mrever, it can be easily adjusted accrding t yur physical cnditin and time, whether a shrt sprint r a lng-distance run. When yu jg, yu’ll breathe fresh air and enjy the scenery, which can clear yur mind. It als helps release endrphins, making yu feel happier. S, let’s jg and fight the pressure tgether!
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份向校英语报“Senir Three”栏目投稿，给高三学生推荐一项减压活动并说明理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
推荐：recmmend → suggest
减压：relieve stress → reduce pressure
此外：mrever → in additin/besides
帮助：help → assist
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Jgging desn’t require any special equipment.
拓展句：Jgging, which is a simple and accessible activity, desn’t require any special equipment.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] When yu jg, yu’ll breathe fresh air and enjy the scenery, which can clear yur mind. (运用了when引导时间状语从句和关系代词which引导非限定性定语从句)
[高分句型 2] It als helps release endrphins, making yu feel happier. (运用了现在分词作结果状语)
8．（2025·安徽合肥·三模）
假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举行主题为“Embracing Traditins, Shaping the Future”的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.介绍你熟悉的一项中国传统文化；2.谈谈它的现代意义。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.段文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Embracing Traditins, Shaping the Future
Traditinal Chinese culture cnnects wh we were with wh we are becming.
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【参考范文】
Embracing Traditins, Shaping the Future
Traditinal Chinese culture cnnects wh we were with wh we are becming. Amng all the traditins, the Spring Festival, which is the mst imprtant festival in China, has always held a special place in my heart. The Spring Festival is a time when families gather tgether.
Tday, the Spring Festival still plays a vital rle. It reminds us f the imprtance f family, n matter hw busy we are. Mrever, it has becme a windw thrugh which the wrld learns abut China. What’s mre, the traditins during the festival, such as making dumplings, teach us patience and creativity. By celebrating it, we nt nly keep ur traditins alive but als shw ur pride in Chinese culture.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Embracing Traditins, Shaping the Future”为题写短文投稿，介绍一项中国传统文化并阐述其现代意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：imprtant → significant
聚集：gather → assemble
至关重要的：vital → crucial
庆祝：celebrate → bserve
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Tday, the Spring Festival still plays a vital rle.
拓展句：Tday, it is well-knwn that the Spring Festival still plays a vital rle.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Amng all the traditins, the Spring Festival, which is the mst imprtant festival in China, has always held a special place in my heart.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】It reminds us f the imprtance f family, n matter hw busy we are.（运用了n matter hw引导的让步状语从句）
9．（2025·浙江·三模）
你校上周举办“中国古代诗词进校园”中英文化弥合活动。请你记录这次活动并投稿到校英文报上，具体要求如下：
1. 结合具体中国古代诗词记录活动内容；
2. 表达期待。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【参考范文】
When Verses Build Bridges: A Chrnicle f Cultural Harmny
Last week’s “Ancient Petry Immersin” event unveiled the timeless charm f Chinese classics while weaving cultural threads between East and West. Designed t fster crss-cultural empathy, the activity transfrmed ur campus int an aesthetic dialgue platfrm.
Students staged bilingual petry recitals, breathing life int Li Bai’s “Tasting the mn, my shadw makes us three” with immersive prjectins. Calligraphy wrkshps decded Wang Wei’s landscape imagery thrugh brushstrkes and VR technlgy, allwing internatinal peers t grasp “empty muntains eching with rain” beynd linguistic barriers. The highlight was cllabrative translatin cntests, where teams reinterpreted Su Shi’s philsphical resilience in “Hw can we fear life’s winds and rains?” thrugh mdern slam petry.
As Du Fu envisined “Wrds that startle heaven and earth,” this petic rendezvus prved cultural bundaries disslve when hearts resnate with universal beauty. The eches f quatrains shall cntinue nurturing ur shared humanity.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生记录“中国古代诗词进校园”中英文化弥合活动并投稿到校英文报上。
【详解】1.词汇积累
展示：unveil→unfld
培养：fster→cultivate
掌握：grasp→master
比赛：cntest→cmpetitin
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Calligraphy wrkshps decded Wang Wei’s landscape imagery thrugh brushstrkes and VR technlgy, allwing internatinal peers t grasp “empty muntains eching with rain” beynd linguistic barriers.
拓展句：Calligraphy wrkshps decded Wang Wei’s landscape imagery thrugh brushstrkes and VR technlgy, which allwed internatinal peers t grasp “empty muntains eching with rain” beynd linguistic barriers.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Last week’s “Ancient Petry Immersin” event unveiled the timeless charm f Chinese classics while weaving cultural threads between East and West.（运用了while引导的时间状语从句省略句）
【高分句型2】The highlight was cllabrative translatin cntests, where teams reinterpreted Su Shi’s philsphical resilience in “Hw can we fear life’s winds and rains?” thrugh mdern slam petry.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）
10．（2025·河南新乡·三模）
假定你是李华，你校近期举办了“科普进校园”活动。请你写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，内容包括：
1.活动介绍；
2.你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Our schl recently hsted an activity called “Prmting Tech n Campus”, bringing cutting-edge technlgy t campus. Researchers demnstrated AI rbtics, cnducted chemistry magic shws, and led VR space explratin sessins. The highlight was a drne prgramming wrkshp where students cded flight patterns.
This immersive experience transfrmed abstract textbk cncepts int visible wnders. Seeing my classmates’ eyes light up while perating 3D printers, I realized science isn’t just frmulas — it’s creative prblem-slving. The activity didn’t just display technlgy but it planted seeds f curisity. As ne visiting scientist remarked, “Tday’s hands-n experiments inspire tmrrw’s innvatrs.” Such an activity will surely inspire us t innvate mre in the future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，介绍“科普进校园”活动并阐述自己的感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近：recently → lately
可见的：visible → perceptible
激发：inspire → stimulate
创新：innvate → create
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Our schl recently hsted an activity called “Prmting Tech n Campus”, bringing cutting-edge technlgy t campus.
拓展句：Our schl recently hsted an activity, which is called “Prmting Tech n Campus”, bringing cutting-edge technlgy t campus.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The highlight was a drne prgramming wrkshp where students cded flight patterns.（运用了where引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Seeing my classmates’ eyes light up while perating 3D printers, I realized science isn’t just frmulas — it’s creative prblem-slving.（运用了while引导的时间状语从句的省略、省略引导词that的宾语从句）
11．（2025·安徽·三模）
假定你是李华。你校音乐社团上周举行了露天音乐会(Open-air Cncert)。请你为校园网英语专栏写一篇新闻报道，内容包括：
1. 活动时间、地点；
2. 活动内容；
3. 活动意义。
注意：1. 词数80 左右 2. 可自拟标题。
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【参考范文】
Open-air Cncert Brings Campus t Life
Aiming t enhance campus culture and prvide a platfrm fr students t shwcase their musical talents, ur schl’s Music Club successfully held an pen-air cncert n the campus square last Wednesday afternn. The event attracted a large number f students and teachers.
The cncert ran frm 3: 00 p. m. t 5: 00 p. m. , featuring a variety f perfrmances ranging frm classical pieces t mdern pp sngs. Perfrmers displayed their skills n instruments like guitars, pians, and drums, vividly shwcasing their passin and creativity in music.
The successful event nt nly enriched ur campus life but als brught us clser thrugh the pwer f music, leaving a memrable impressin n everyne invlved.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道。要求考生为校园网英语专栏写一篇关于学校音乐社团上周举行露天音乐会的新闻报道。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提升，增强：enhance → imprve/bst
展示：shwcase → display/exhibit
各种各样的：a variety f → varius/kinds f
留下印象：leave an impressin n → impress
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The event attracted a large number f students and teachers.
拓展句：The event, which was held t enhance campus culture, attracted a large number f students and teachers.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The cncert ran frm 3: 00 p. m. t 5: 00 p. m. , featuring a variety f perfrmances ranging frm classical pieces t mdern pp sngs.(运用了现在分词短语featuring...作伴随状语)
[高分句型2] The successful event nt nly enriched ur campus life but als brught us clser thrugh the pwer f music, leaving a memrable impressin n everyne invlved. (运用了nt als...结构和现在分词作结果状语)
12．（2025·安徽·三模）
上周末你参加了学校组织的以“Planting Trees fr a Greener Wrld”为主题的公益植树活动。现请你为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1．描述活动内容；
2．分享你的收获。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Planting Trees fr a Greener Wrld
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【参考范文】
Planting Trees fr a Greener Wrld
Last Sunday, ur schl held a tree-planting event that invlved all students and teachers.
Armed with shvels and saplings, we headed t the nearby park, where the air was sweet and the grund was ready fr new life. We dug hles, planted saplings, and watered them, wrking in teams with laughter and determinatin.
This experience was incredibly rewarding. Nt nly did I learn practical skills abut planting, but I als felt a sense f achievement, realizing that every effrt cunts in creating a greener wrld.
【导语】本题书面表达是一篇报道，要求考生为校英文报写一篇关于参加公益植树活动的报道，内容包括描述活动内容和分享收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：hld → rganize
为……做好准备：be ready fr → have everything in place fr
重要：cunt → matter
意识到：realize → be aware f
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：This experience was incredibly rewarding.
拓展句：This experience prved t be astnishingly gratifying and fulfilling.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Last Sunday, ur schl held a tree-planting event that invlved all students and teachers.（使用了关系代词that引导的定语从句，先行词为event）
【高分句型2】Nt nly did I learn practical skills abut planting, but I als felt a sense f achievement, realizing that every effrt cunts in creating a greener wrld.（使用了部分倒装和现在分词短语作状语）
13.（2025·内蒙古包头·二模）
你们学校最近组织了一次植树活动，请以“An Interesting Tree-planting Activity”为题写一篇报道，向校英语报投稿，内容包括：
1. 时间、地点及参与者；
2. 植树的过程；
3. 你的体验和感受。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为100左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
An Interesting Tree-planting Activity
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【参考范文】
An Interesting Tree-planting Activity
Last Sunday ur schl rganized an interesting tree-planting activity n campus. Almst all students jined it psitively.
At the beginning, ur teachers explained hw t plant trees and then gave us a demnstratin. Afterwards, we gt invlved and cperated with pleasure. Sme dug hles, sme planted trees while thers watered them. We wrked hard, talking and laughing happily all the time, during which ur teachers tk many phts fr us.
We truly enjyed the activity. Nt nly did it help us cperate better and beautify ur campus, but als it raised ur awareness f prtecting the envirnment.
【导语】此篇范文属于应用文写作中的活动报道体裁，以“An Interesting Tree-planting Activity”为题，向校英语报投稿，介绍学校组织的植树活动，需涵盖活动的时间、地点、参与者、植树过程以及个人体验和感受。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
组织：rganized→arranged
积极地：psitively→enthusiastically
示范：demnstratin→shw
提高：raised→enhanced
2. 句式拓展
原句：Sme dug hles, sme planted trees while thers watered them.
拓展句：Sme students were busy digging hles, sme fcused n carefully planting the trees, and thers were respnsible fr watering them t ensure the yung saplings’ grwth.
原句：We truly enjyed the activity.
拓展句：We thrughly enjyed the activity, immersing urselves in the jyful prcess f cntributing t ur campus.
【点睛】
[高分句型一] At the beginning, ur teachers explained hw t plant trees and then gave us a demnstratin.（“hw t plant trees” 为 “疑问词+不定式” 结构，作宾语，简洁清晰地表达老师讲解的内容，使句子结构多样且合理）
[高分句型二] We wrked hard, talking and laughing happily all the time, during which ur teachers tk many phts fr us.（“talking and laughing happily all the time” 为现在分词短语作伴随状语，生动展现活动中的欢乐氛围；“during which” 引导定语从句，修饰先行词 “We wrked hard” 整个句子，补充说明活动期间老师拍照的情况，让文章内容更丰富 ）
[高分句型三] Nt nly did it help us cperate better and beautify ur campus, but als it raised ur awareness f prtecting the envirnment.（运用 “nt als...” 倒装结构，强调活动带来的多方面积极意义，增强文章表达效果和逻辑性 ）
14.（2025·四川广安·二模）
假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举办以“文化传承”为主题的征文活动。请你以“The Rise f Chinese Style”为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括:
(1) 简述中国风流行的现象；
(2) 分析其流行的原因；
(3) 呼吁更多人关注中国文化。
注意：
(1) 写作词数应为80个左右；
(2) 请按如下格式作答。
The Rise f Chinese Style
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【参考范文】
The Rise f Chinese Style
In recent years, Chinese style has gained glbal ppularity. Traditinal elements like Hanfu, Peking Opera mtifs, and ink painting patterns nw appear in fashin, mvies, and daily prducts. Even internatinal brands are incrprating Chinese cultural symbls int their designs.
Several factrs cntribute t this trend. Firstly, since China’s glbal influence is grwing, yung generatins are increasingly prud f their cultural rts. Besides, creative integratin f traditin with mdern designs attracts diverse audiences. Lastly, scial media platfrms spread these cultural prducts rapidly.
Chinese style is nt just a trend but a bridge cnnecting the past and future. Let’s wrk tgether t explre and prmte ur heritage, ensuring its vitality in the mdern wrld.
【导语】此篇范文属于应用文写作中的征文体裁，以 “The Rise f Chinese Style” 为题，围绕 “文化传承” 主题，阐述中国风流行现象、分析原因，并呼吁关注中国文化，符合英文报征文要求。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
流行：gained ppularity→becme prevalent
因素：factrs→elements
确保：ensuring→guaranteeing
2.句式拓展
原句：Traditinal elements like Hanfu, Peking Opera mtifs, and ink painting patterns nw appear in fashin, mvies, and daily prducts.
拓展句：Elements deeply rted in traditin, such as Hanfu, the mtifs f Peking Opera, and patterns f ink paintings, are nw making appearances nt nly in the realm f fashin but als in mvies and varius daily prducts.
原句：Let’s wrk tgether t explre and prmte ur heritage, ensuring its vitality in the mdern wrld.
拓展句：It's high time that we jined hands t explre and prmte ur cultural heritage, thereby ensuring that it remains vibrant and dynamic in the cntemprary wrld.
【点睛】
[高分句型一] Even internatinal brands are incrprating Chinese cultural symbls int their designs.（简单句直接点明国际品牌融入中国文化符号的现象，简洁有力，突出中国风流行的广度 ）
[高分句型二] Firstly, since China’s glbal influence is grwing, yung generatins are increasingly prud f their cultural rts.（since 引导原因状语从句，清晰地阐述中国风流行的首要原因，使文章逻辑连贯 ）
[高分句型三] Chinese style is nt just a trend but a bridge cnnecting the past and future.（“nt ” 结构强调中国风的重要意义，“cnnecting the past and future” 现在分词短语作后置定语，修饰 “bridge”，让表达更形象生动 ）
15.（2025·山西晋中·二模）
你校英文报正在开展以社区志愿活动为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.你参加的活动;
2.你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Last weekend, I tk part in a cmmunity vlunteer activity with my classmates.
During the activity, I cleaned the public park, picking up litter and weeding the flwer beds. Mrever, ffering visitrs infrmatin abut the park’s attractins gave me a strng sense f value. After that, I visited the elderly in the cmmunity center, chatting with them and helping with small chres, and perfrmed a play t bring them jy.
This experience was truly rewarding. It made me realize hw much a small act f kindness can brighten smene’s day. Vlunteering is a great way t give back and make a difference.
【导语】此篇范文属于应用文写作中的征文体裁，围绕社区志愿活动主题，讲述作者参与的具体活动，并分享活动感受，符合校英文报征文要求。
【详解】
词汇积累
参加：tk part in→participated in
清理：cleaned→tidied up
给予：gave→cnferred
意识到：realize→be aware f
句式拓展
原句：During the activity, I cleaned the public park, picking up litter and weeding the flwer beds.
拓展句：During the activity, I devted myself t cleaning the public park, carefully picking up litter scattered arund and meticulusly weeding the flwer beds.
原句：This experience was truly rewarding.
拓展句：This experience turned ut t be an incredibly rewarding ne.
【点睛】
[高分句型一] During the activity, I cleaned the public park, picking up litter and weeding the flwer beds.（“picking up litter and weeding the flwer beds” 现在分词短语作伴随状语，生动地展现了清理公园时的具体行为，使句子更加丰富，避免平铺直叙 ）
[高分句型二] Mrever, ffering visitrs infrmatin abut the park’s attractins gave me a strng sense f value.（动名词短语 “ffering visitrs infrmatin abut the park’s attractins” 作主语，直接点明该行为带来的感受，突出志愿活动的意义，让表达简洁有力 ）
[高分句型三] It made me realize hw much a small act f kindness can brighten smene’s day.（“hw much a small act f kindness can brighten smene’s day” 为 hw 引导的宾语从句，作 realize 的宾语，深刻地表达出作者从志愿活动中获得的感悟，增强文章的感染力 ）
(2025届河北省部分重点高中高三下学期调研考试)
假定你是学生会主席李华，最近你校实施了“校长陪餐制”。该制度实施后，学校发生了很大的变化。校英语报对此情况进行征稿。请你投稿，内容包括：
(1)实施前后学校食堂的变化；
(2)鼓励同学们提出建议。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：校长陪餐制 the Principal’s Dining Accmpaniment System
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【参考范文】
Since the intrductin f the Principal’s Dining Accmpaniment System, ur schl canteen has seen remarkable imprvements. Previusly, there were frequent cmplaints abut fd quality and cleanliness. Nw, with the principal jining us fr meals, we’ve nticed fresher ingredients, a mre varied and balanced menu, and a cleaner dining area. This nt nly enhances ur dining experience but als shws that the schl cares abut ur health and well-being.
I encurage yu t share yur thughts and suggestins n hw we can further imprve ur canteen. Yur feedback is valuable and can make a real difference!
Let’s wrk tgether t make ur schl canteen even better!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。最近考生学校实施了“校长陪餐制”。该制度实施后，学校发生了很大的变化。要求考生对此情况写一篇稿件对校英语报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提高：imprvement→enhancement
频繁的：frequent→recurring
有价值的：valuable→wrthwhile/invaluable
真正的：real→genuine/authentic
2.句式拓展
原句： Since the intrductin f the Principal’s Dining Accmpaniment System, ur schl canteen has seen remarkable imprvements.
拓展句：Since the Principal’s Dining Accmpaniment System was intrduced, remarkable imprvements have been nticed in ur schl canteen.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Nw, with the principal jining us fr meals, we’ve nticed fresher ingredients, a mre varied and balanced menu, and a cleaner dining area. (运用了with的复合结构)
【高分句型2】This nt nly enhances ur dining experience but als shws that the schl cares abut ur health and well-being.(运用了nt nly…but als…的固定句型以及that引导的宾语从句)
(2025·广东云浮市云安区·一模)
假定你是李华，你校刚刚结束了一场以“美丽的祖国”(Beautiful Mtherland)为主题的摄影比赛。你的作品荣获一等奖。请你给校英文报投稿分享这次经历，内容包括：
1.介绍你的作品；
2.你的感想。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Beautiful Mtherland in My Picture
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【参考范文】
Beautiful Mtherland in My Picture
In the phtgraphy cmpetitin themed “Beautiful Mtherland”, my entry wn the first prize!
I submitted a pht f a vast glden wheat field under the setting sun. The gentle breeze made the wheat waves ripple, and the warm glw f the setting sun painted the entire field with a layer f glden light. This scene reminded me f the hardwrking farmers and their buntiful harvest.
I am extremely thrilled and hnred t have wn the award. This cntest has nt nly allwed me t shw the beauty f ur mtherland but als made me appreciate the charm f nature and the effrts f ur peple. It has inspired me t keep bserving and recrding the wnderful mments f ur cuntry with my camera.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿征文。要求考生给学校英文报投稿，分享刚刚结束的学校组织的以“美丽的祖国”为主题的摄影比赛，介绍自己的获奖作品和感想。
【详解】1. 词汇积累：
比赛：cmpetitin→cntest
奖、奖项：prize→award
勤奋的、努力工作的：hardwrking→diligent
允许：allw→permit
激励、鼓励：inspire→encurage
2. 句式拓展：
原句：In the phtgraphy cmpetitin themed “Beautiful Mtherland”, my entry wn the first prize!
拓展句：In the phtgraphy cmpetitin which was themed “Beautiful Mtherland”, my entry wn the first prize!
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The gentle breeze made the wheat waves ripple, and the warm glw f the setting sun painted the entire field with a layer f glden light.(动词made后为复合宾语结构，并运用了以连词and连接的两个并列句。)
【高分句型2】 This cntest has nt nly allwed me t shw the beauty f ur mtherland but als made me appreciate the charm f nature and the effrts f ur peple. (运用了固定短语nt als...连接并列谓语。)
(2025·山东德州·一模)
假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举办以 “AI in My Life” 为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
(1)AI在你生活中的应用；
(2)你的感受和期待。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Al in My Life
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【参考范文】
Al in My Life
AI has integrated int multiple aspects f my daily life. Every mrning, my smart alarm clck, guided by AI, wakes me up with a custmized weather frecast and the latest news. Besides, AI-pwered learning apps like Duba ffer me explanatins and study tips and efficiently aid in my English practice.
Thanks t AI, my rutine has becme mre cnvenient and my academic perfrmance has been dramatically bsted. AI has truly becme a reliable helper in my life.
Full f anticipatin fr the future f AI, I’m eager t see AI making great leaps in fields such as healthcare and educatin, and cntinuing t shape ur lives in amazing ways.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文给以“AI in My Life” 为主题的征文活动投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
可靠的：reliable→credible
此外：besides→mrever
建议：tip→advice
显著地：dramatically→remarkably
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Thanks t AI, my rutine has becme mre cnvenient and my academic perfrmance has been dramatically bsted.
拓展句：Thanks t AI, nt nly has my rutine becme mre cnvenient, but als my academic perfrmance has been dramatically bsted.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Every mrning, my smart alarm clck, guided by AI, wakes me up with a custmized weather frecast and the latest news. (运用了过去分词作后置定语)
[高分句型2]Full f anticipatin fr the future f AI, I’m eager t see AI making great leaps in fields such as healthcare and educatin, and cntinuing t shape ur lives in amazing ways. (运用了现在分词作宾补)
(2025·山东青岛·一模)
假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你校官网正在征集以“My Favrite City”为主题的英语短视频。请你给该活动的负责人Alan写一封邮件投稿，内容包括：
1.介绍作品；
2.表达期望。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alan,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Alan,
I’m Li Hua, an enthusiastic student frm ur schl. I’m writing t submit my vide n “My Favrite City” fr ur schl website.
In the vide, I explre the beauty and cultural significance f Jinan, a city that truly fascinates visitrs. The vide highlights the picturesque Daming Lake, where vibrant ltus flwers blm in the summer mnths, and the icnic Batu Spring, renwned fr its crystal clear waters. Additinally, the vide features the city’s traditinal architecture, ffering a windw int Jinan’s rich histry and heritage.
I truly hpe that my vide will be selected, as it will inspire students t experience the unique charm f Jinan. Thank yu fr yur time.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校官网组织的以“My Favrite City”为主题的英语短视频征稿活动负责人Alan写一封邮件投稿，介绍自己的短视频并表达期望。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要性：significance→imprtance
此外：additinally→in additin
真诚地：truly→sincerely
希望：hpe→wish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m Li Hua, an enthusiastic student frm ur schl.
拓展句：I’m Li Hua, wh is an enthusiastic student frm ur schl.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】In the vide, I explre the beauty and cultural significance f Jinan, a city that truly fascinates visitrs.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】The vide highlights the picturesque Daming Lake, where vibrant ltus flwers blm in the summer mnths, and the icnic Batu Spring, renwned fr its crystal clear waters.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
(2025届湖北省圆创联考高三下学期第一次模拟英语试题)
假定你是李华，近期，你准备给学校英文报举办的故事续写大赛投稿，你已写好初稿。请你给外教Mary写一封邮件，请她给你指导，内容包括：
1. 写邮件的目的；
2. 征求建议；
3. 表示感谢。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答；
3. 参考词汇：故事续写大赛 Stry Cntinuatin Cntest
Dear Mary,
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Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mary,
I am writing t seek yur invaluable advice regarding my entry fr the Stry Cntinuatin Cntest rganized by an English newspaper.
I have cmpleted the first draft f my stry, and I am eager t enhance its quality and I hpe that yu can help me. I wuld be deeply grateful if yu culd take a lk at my draft and ffer suggestins n hw t imprve the plt develpment, characterizatin and language use. Yur insights wuld undubtedly be instructive in refining my wrk.
Yur timely help wuld mean the wrld t me. Keenly anticipating yur prmpt reply.
Yurs sincerely .
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生准备给学校英文报举办的故事续写大赛投稿，已写好初稿，要求考生按照要求给外教Mary写一封邮件，请她指导。
【详解】1.词汇积累
宝贵的：invaluable → precius
建议：advice → suggestin
关于：regarding → cncerning
完成：cmplete → finish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing t seek yur invaluable advice regarding my entry fr the Stry Cntinuatin Cntest rganized by an English newspaper.
拓展句：I am writing t seek yur invaluable advice regarding my entry fr the Stry Cntinuatin Cntest , which is rganized by an English newspaper.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I have cmpleted the first draft f my stry, and I am eager t enhance its quality and I hpe yu can help.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I wuld be deeply grateful if yu culd take a lk at my draft and ffer suggestins n hw t imprve the plt develpment, characterizatin and language use.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
(2025届江苏省南通市如皋市高三下上学期适应性考试(一))
国产动画电影《哪吒之魔童闹海》在国外热映，请你以此写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，内容包括：1. 分析这一现象； 2. 简述哪吒的故事给你的启示。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇： animated film “Ne Zha: The Reign f the Demn Child”
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【参考范文】
Recently, the Chinese animated film Ne Zha : The Reign f the Demn Child has enjyed immense ppularity verseas, fascinating internatinal viewers.
This success can be attributed t its engaging stry f self-discvery and rebellin against predetermined fate, cmbined with breathtaking visuals and deeply develped characters.
Ne Zha’s jurney, frm being labeled a demn t embracing his unique identity, ffers a prfund lessn: ne shuld never give in t scietal pressures but instead try t shape ne’s wn destiny. This message f self-belief and determinatin is smething that we can all learn frm, especially as we face ur wn challenges in life.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇投稿，分析《哪吒》这部电影在海外爆火的现象及受到的启示。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
吸引，使着迷：fascinate →attract
挑战，困难：challenge →difficulty
令人惊叹的：breathtaking →spectacular
面临：face →be faced with
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Recently, the Chinese animated film Ne Zha: The Reign f the Demn Child has enjyed immense ppularity verseas, fascinating internatinal viewers.
拓展句：Recently, the Chinese animated film Ne Zha: The Reign f the Demn Child has enjyed immense ppularity verseas, which fascinated internatinal viewers.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】This success can be attributed t its engaging stry f self-discvery and rebellin against predetermined fate, cmbined with breathtaking visuals and deeply develped characters. (运用了非谓语动词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】This message f self-belief and determinatin is smething that we can all learn frm, especially as we face ur wn challenges in life. (运用了that引导限制性定语从句以及as引导时间状语从句)
(2025·山东菏泽·一模)
假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举行以“AI in my eyes”为主题的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.AI在生活和学习方面带来的变化；
2.你对AI的观点和看法。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
AI in my eyes
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【参考范文】
AI in my eyes
In tday’s rapidly evlving technlgical landscape, artificial intelligence (AI) plays a crucial rle in shaping varius aspects f ur lives. It has truly becme an integral part f ur lives. In transprtatin, self-driving cars are gradually emerging. In educatin, it ffers custmized learning resurces. And it pwers vice assistants, enabling us t cntrl devices hands-free.
In my eyes, thugh AI bsts efficiency and cnvenience, it may cause cncerns like jb displacement and privacy issues. We shuld regulate and utilize AI prperly t maximize its benefits while minimizing risks.
In cnclusin, AI is a pwerful tl that can reshape ur wrld fr the better if we handle it with care.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“AI in my eyes”为主题，写一篇短文投稿到校英文报，内容需涵盖AI在生活和学习方面带来的变化以及个人对AI的观点和看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
关键的：crucial→critical
出现：emerge→appear
提供：ffer→prvide
依我看： in my eyes→in my pinin
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：And it pwers vice assistants, enabling us t cntrl devices hands-free.
拓展句：And it pwers vice assistants, which enables us t cntrl devices hands-free.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】In my eyes, thugh AI bsts efficiency and cnvenience, it may cause cncerns like jb displacement and privacy issues.(运用了thugh引导的让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】In cnclusin, AI is a pwerful tl that can reshape ur wrld fr the better if we handle it with care.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)
五、通用高分替换训练（传统文化）
1. 高分词汇替换
2. 高分句型替换
3.经典表达
词义
普通词汇
高分词汇
高兴的
glad
delighted
许多
many
numerus/a great many/a large number f/hundreds f
记住
remember
bear/keep... in mind
知道，意识到
knw
be aware f/realize
使，让
make
enable
应该
shuld
be suppsed t
喜欢
like
be fnd f
有帮助的
helpful
f great help
到来
cme
apprach
利用
use
make use f/take advantage f
想要做……
want t d...
wuld like/intend/desire t d...
变好
get better
imprve
关于
abut
in terms f/as fr
对…… 有好处
be gd fr
be beneficial t
越来越多
mre and mre
an increasing number f
告诉某人某事
tell sb. sth.
share sth. with sb./infrm sb. f sth.
受欢迎
be ppular with
enjy wide ppularity amng/with
首先
firstly
t begin with
此外
secndly
in additin/what's mre
句意
普通句型
高分句型
很高兴你对中华传统文化感兴趣。
I am glad yu are interested in traditinal Chinese culture.
Knwing that yu are interested in traditinal Chinese culture, I am delighted.
我们很高兴能和你一起庆祝……
We are happy t celebrate... tgether with yu.
We'll be hnred t have yu celebrate... tgether with us.
我邀请你庆祝……，它是纪念…… 的一天。
I'd like t invite yu t celebrate... It is a day in memry f...
I'd like t invite yu t celebrate... which is a day in memry f...
我建议你了解……
I advise yu t learn...
My suggestin is that yu (shuld) learn...
我认为这是学习…… 的最好的方式。
In my pinin, it is the best way t learn...
I hld the view that it is the best way t learn...
…… 是中国最重要的节日，它有着悠久的历史。
... is the mst imprtant festival in China. It has a lng histry.
..., the mst imprtant festival in China, has a lng histry.
…… 期间，我们将唱歌、跳舞、做游戏。
We will sing, dance and play games during...
We'll spend sme fun time tgether singing, dancing and playing games during...
我相信你能够……
I believe that yu can...
I am cnvinced that yu can...
汉语释义
经典表达
中华传统文化
traditinal Chinese culture
农历
lunar calendar
春节
the Spring Festival
端午节
the Dragn Bat Festival
元宵节
the Lantern Festival
清明节
the Tmb - sweeping Day
重阳节
the Duble Ninth Day
中秋节
the Mid - Autumn Festival
满月
full mn
月饼
mn cake
放鞭炮/烟花
set ff firecrackers/firewrks
包饺子
make dumplings
耍龙灯
play the dragn lantern
拜年
pay a new - year call
家庭团聚
family reunin
京剧是有着 200 多年历史的国粹。
Beijing Opera is a natinal treasure with a histry f mre than 200 years.
了解到你对中国传统文化感兴趣，我写信向你介绍。
Knwing that yu are interested in traditinal Chinese culture, I am writing t intrduce it t yu.
这项活动旨在帮助更多的人了解中国传统文化。
This event aims t help mre peple learn abut traditinal Chinese culture.
你能让我们了解一些你们国家的东西就更好了。
It will be nicer f yu t shw us smething frm yur cuntry.
它是中国最重要的节日之一。
It is ne f the mst imprtant festivals in China.
在农历正月十五庆祝这个节日。
The festival is celebrated n the 15th day f the first lunar mnth.
祝你在中国诗歌的学习上取得更大的进步。
Wish yu greater prgress in the study f Chinese petry.