U4-U6期末作文教案专题精讲 2025-2026学年外研版英语七年级上册

这是一份U4-U6期末作文教案专题精讲 2025-2026学年外研版英语七年级上册，共10页。教案主要包含了作文写作步骤，写作步骤解析，作文如何检查，写作高分技巧，作文评分标准，单元话题作文解析，期末综合作文解析等内容，欢迎下载使用。
一、作文写作步骤

1. 一审-审题：通读题目，明确体裁、人称、时态及核心要点，避免偏离主题。
2. 二列-列提纲：按“总分总”三段式搭建框架，梳理核心内容逻辑。
3. 三连-添要点：为框架补充细节，让内容更具体、充实。
4. 四替-加连词：合理使用连接词，使文章层次清晰、衔接自然。
5. 五美-检查：通读全文，排查拼写、语法、标点等错误。
6. 六写-誊写：将修改后的作文整洁抄写。

二、写作步骤解析

题目：

假如学校英语报正在征集“ My Dream Jb in Five Years”的征文，请你发挥想象，根据以下要点及要求写一篇短文投稿。

- 要点：1. 五年后你想从事什么职业；2. 该职业的日常工作会是什么样；3. 现在你该如何为实现目标努力。
- 要求：1. 文中不出现真实校名和师生姓名；2. 词数80左右。

1. 审 Search
体裁：记叙文；时态：一般将来时（描述未来）、一般现在时（描述现在的努力）；人称：第一人称；要点：职业选择+工作日常+当下努力的方向。
2. 列 Outline
总：开头点明主题，总述五年后的职业目标——My dream jb in five years is t be a wildlife prtectr, and I believe it will be meaningful.
分：中间描述职业日常——Take care f wild animals, bserve their living habits, stp harmful behavirs t them...
总：结尾说明当下的努力——Study hard at bilgy, learn abut animal prtectin knwledge, take part in related activities...
3. 添 Add
- be a wildlife prtectr：I will wrk in nature reserves, taking care f sick r injured wild animals like pandas and birds. I will als recrd their living habits and reprt t relevant departments.
- bserve their living habits：I will get up early t fllw the animals, nte dwn what they eat and hw they interact with each ther.
- stp harmful behavirs：I will persuade peple nt t hunt wild animals r destry their habitats.
4. 连 Cnnect
My dream jb in five years is t be a wildlife prtectr, and I believe it will be meaningful. Firstly, I will wrk in nature reserves, taking care f sick r injured wild animals like pandas and birds. I will als recrd their living habits and reprt t relevant departments. Secndly, I will get up early t fllw the animals, nte dwn what they eat and hw they interact with each ther. Besides, I will persuade peple nt t hunt wild animals r destry their habitats. Even thugh the wrk may be tiring, I will never give up. T make my dream cme true, I will study hard at bilgy nw, learn mre abut animal prtectin knwledge and take part in related vlunteer activities. I’m sure my dream will cme true with my effrts.
5. 查 Check
通读核对：无拼写错误，动词时态、主谓一致正确，连接词使用恰当，要点齐全，句子结构合理，标点规范，固定搭配无误。
6. 誊 Cpy：将检查后的作文整洁抄写在答题纸上。

三、作文如何检查

1. 查单词拼写：确认无笔误，重点检查易混淆单词（如“their/there”“t/t”）。
2. 查动词形式：根据人称、时态判断动词变形是否正确。
3. 查语法错误：排查句子结构、主谓一致、介词搭配等问题。
4. 查衔接词：确保连接词使用恰当，文章逻辑通顺。
5. 查要点齐全：确认所有题目要求的要点均已涵盖。
6. 查句子结构：避免重复单调，合理搭配简单句与复杂句。
7. 查标点符号：确保逗号、句号、引号等使用规范。
8. 查固定搭配：核对短语、句型的固定用法是否正确。

四、写作高分技巧

技巧一：话题词汇积累

U4 节日相关

- 时间表达：fall n the first day f the first lunar mnth（农历正月初一）、last fr seven days（持续七天）
- 活动表达：exchange greetings（互送祝福）、decrate the huse（装饰房屋）、set ff firewrks（放烟花）、prepare traditinal fd（准备传统食物）
- 感受与意义：jyful（欢乐的）、symblize gd luck（象征好运）、strengthen family ties（增进亲情）、carry frward culture（传承文化）

U5 动物相关

- 大象特征：large bdy（庞大的身躯）、lng trunk（长鼻子）、thick legs（粗壮的腿）、gentle nature（温顺的性格）、live in grups（群居）
- 濒危原因：lss f habitat（栖息地丧失）、illegal hunting（非法捕猎）、lack f fd（食物短缺）、pllutin（污染）
- 保护措施：set up prtectin znes（设立保护区）、ban illegal hunting（禁止非法捕猎）、raise public awareness（提高公众意识）、d research n their living habits（研究它们的生活习性）

U6 植物相关

- 竹子特征：tall and straight（高大挺拔）、hllw stem（中空的茎）、evergreen（常绿的）、grw fast（生长迅速）、adapt t varius climates（适应多种气候）
- 竹子用途：make furniture（制作家具）、prduce paper（造纸）、be used as building materials（用作建筑材料）、decrate gardens（装饰花园）

技巧二：用短语代替单词

- happy→be full f jy（充满欢乐）、feel delighted（感到高兴）
- help→give a hand t sb.（帮助某人）、ffer assistance（提供协助）
- imprtant→play a key rle（发挥关键作用）、be f great significance（意义重大）
- save→ danger（保护……免受危险）、preserve（保护；留存）
- knw→be familiar with（熟悉）、have a gd knwledge f（熟知）
- celebrate→hld a celebratin fr（为……举办庆祝活动）、mark the ccasin（纪念这个时刻）
- like→be fnd f（喜欢）、have a preference fr（偏爱）
- stp→put an end t（终止）、call a halt t（停止）

技巧三：加入所学重点句型

- 邀请某人做某事→invite sb. t d sth.
- 对做某事感到兴奋→be excited t d sth.
- 计划做某事→plan t d sth.
- 渴望做某事→be eager t d sth.
- 承诺做某事→prmise t d sth.
- 尽力做某事→d ne’s best t d sth.
- 建议某人做某事→advise sb. t d sth.
- 习惯于做某事→be used t ding sth.
- 坚持做某事→keep ding sth.
- 避免做某事→avid ding sth.
- 值得做某事→be wrth ding sth.
- 花费时间做某事→spend time (in) ding sth.
- 最好做某事→it’s better t d sth.
- 做某事是必要的→it’s necessary t d sth.
- 为什么不做某事→why nt d sth.

技巧四：加入高级句型

1. 举例子扩写（fr example/such as）：During the Spring Festival, peple d many interesting things, such as pasting Spring Festival cuplets and visiting relatives.
2. 动名词作主语：Prtecting wild animals is nt nly ur duty but als a way t keep the balance f nature.
3. nt als...：Bamb is nt nly a cmmn plant but als an imprtant material in daily life.
4. 表语从句：The mst meaningful thing abut the Dragn Bat Festival is that it helps us remember Qu Yuan’s patritic spirit.
5. 最高级句型：Elephants are ne f the mst intelligent animals in the wrld.
6. 原因状语从句（because）：I lve the Lantern Festival because I can appreciate beautiful lanterns and guess riddles.
7. 宾语从句：I hpe that mre peple will jin in the activity f prtecting plants.
8. 主语从句：It’s well-knwn that plants play a vital rle in purifying the air.
9. 感叹句：Hw wnderful it is t celebrate the festival with family!

技巧五：加入衔接词

- 并列关系：and（和）、nt als...（不仅……而且……）、as well as（也）
- 转折关系：but（但是）、hwever（然而）、thugh（尽管）
- 因果关系：because（因为）、s（所以）、as a result（结果）、therefre（因此）
- 顺序关系：firstly（首先）、then（然后）、next（接下来）、finally（最后）
- 递进关系：besides（此外）、what’s mre（更重要的是）、in additin（另外）
- 观点表达：in my pinin（在我看来）、as far as I’m cncerned（就我而言）、t be hnest（坦诚地说）
- 总结归纳：in a wrd（总而言之）、n the whle（总的来说）、all in all（总之）

技巧六：加入名言名句

1. Unity is strength. 团结就是力量。
2. Every little bit helps. 积少成多。
3. Actins speak luder than wrds. 行动胜于言语。
4. Prtect nature, and nature will prtect yu. 保护自然，自然也会保护你。
5. A jurney f a thusand miles begins with a single step. 千里之行，始于足下。
6. Respect fr nature is the fundatin f human survival. 尊重自然是人类生存的基础。

五、作文评分标准

- 13-15分：书写工整，要点齐全；语句通顺，逻辑合理；语法、拼写无误；运用高级句式和词汇，亮点突出。
- 10-12分：能写出大部分要点，语句较通顺完整；有个别语法、拼写错误，但不影响句意；书写工整。
- 7-9分：能写出部分要点，语句基本通顺完整；有少量语法、拼写错误，但尚能达意；书写较工整。
- 4-6分：能写出个别要点，语句不够通顺完整；语法、拼写错误较多，仅个别句子可读；书写不够工整。
- 0-3分：未能写出基本要点，语法、拼写错误极多，不知所云；书写潦草。

高分核心：结构清晰（三段式）+ 要点齐全 + 逻辑连贯（衔接词）+ 语法正确 + 亮点突出（高级词汇/句型）。

六、单元话题作文解析

U4 节日主题

范文1：向外国朋友介绍中国传统节日——端午节

题目：你的英国朋友Lucy想了解中国的传统节日，請你以“The Dragn Bat Festival”为题，写一篇英语短文向她介绍该节日，包含节日时间、庆祝活动及个人感受，词数不少于90。

审题：人称：第一人称；时态：一般现在时。

The Dragn Bat Festival is ne f the mst traditinal festivals in China. It falls n the fifth day f the fifth lunar mnth every year, in memry f the patritic pet Qu Yuan.

During this festival, peple have many special custms. Eating zngzi is a classic traditin—zngzi is a kind f glutinus rice dumpling wrapped in bamb leaves, with varius fillings like red beans and meat. Dragn bat races are the mst exciting activity. Teams rw bats shaped like dragns, cmpeting fiercely t the sund f drums. Besides, sme families hang calamus and wrmwd at the dr t ward ff evil spirits.

I really lve the Dragn Bat Festival. Nt nly can I enjy delicius zngzi, but I als feel the strng sense f traditin and unity. It reminds us f the value f patritism and makes us cherish ur cultural heritage.

范文2：介绍最喜欢的节日——元宵节

题目：中国有许多传统节日，請以“My Favurite Festival”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的节日，包括节日时间、庆祝方式及喜欢的原因，词数不少于60，内容积极向上。

审题：人称：第一人称；时态：一般现在时。

My Favurite Festival

There are many wnderful festivals in China, and my favurite ne is the Lantern Festival. It cmes n the fifteenth day f the first lunar mnth, marking the end f the Spring Festival.

On this day, the streets are decrated with clrful lanterns f all shapes and sizes. Peple g ut with their families t appreciate the lanterns and guess lantern riddles. Eating sweet dumplings (yuanxia) is anther imprtant custm—they are rund and sweet, symblizing family reunin and happiness. Sme places als hld flk perfrmances like lin dances, adding mre jy t the festival.

I like the Lantern Festival best because it’s a time f jy and warmth. Walking amng the bright lanterns, sharing sweet dumplings with family, I always feel peaceful and happy. It makes me prud f ur traditinal culture.

U5 动物主题

范文1：介绍最喜欢的动物——大象

题目：本周英语角的话题是“My Favurite Animal”，请你写一篇短文分享你最喜欢的动物，包括动物特征、生活习性及喜欢的原因，词数不少于60。

审题：人称：第一人称；时态：一般现在时。

My Favurite Animal

My favurite animal is the elephant. They are huge but gentle creatures, with large bdies, lng trunks and thick legs. Mst elephants are grey, and they have big ears that can help them cl dwn in ht weather.

Elephants mainly live in frests and grasslands, feeding n grass, leaves, fruits and bark. They are scial animals, living in grups led by female elephants. What impresses me mst is their intelligence—they can remember places and friends fr a lng time, and they ften help each ther.

I like elephants because they are kind and lyal. Unfrtunately, many elephants are in danger due t habitat lss and illegal hunting. I hpe mre peple will take actin t prtect them, s that these lvely animals can live in peace.

范文2：呼吁保护濒危动物——金丝猴

题目：2025年世界野生动植物日的主题是“守护濒危物种，共建生态家园”，请你写一篇英语短文，介绍金丝猴的现状、濒危原因及保护措施，呼吁大家保护金丝猴，词数不少于80。

审题：人称：第一人称；时态：一般现在时。

Prtect Glden Mnkeys

Glden mnkeys are precius animals unique t China. They have glden fur, bright eyes and agile bdies, living mainly in the frests f Sichuan, Shaanxi and Gansu prvinces. They feed n leaves, fruits and seeds, and live in small grups.

Hwever, glden mnkeys are nw in danger. The main reasns are habitat destructin—humans cut dwn frests fr farming and cnstructin, making their living space smaller and smaller. Illegal hunting als threatens their survival, as sme peple hunt them fr their valuable fur.

It’s ur duty t prtect glden mnkeys. We shuld set up mre nature reserves t prvide them with safe habitats. We shuld als ban illegal hunting and raise public awareness abut their prtectin. As students, we can spread the message f animal prtectin amng ur friends and family. Let’s wrk tgether t ensure that glden mnkeys can thrive in the wild.

U6 植物主题

范文1：介绍中国的竹文化

题目：国际中学生文化交流论坛将举办“中国传统植物文化”主题分享，請你以“Chinese Bamb Culture”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍竹子的特征、用途及文化意义，词数不少于80。

审题：人称：第一人称；时态：一般现在时。

Chinese Bamb Culture

Bamb is a special plant in China, with a histry f thusands f years in ur culture. It is tall and straight, with hllw stems and evergreen leaves, able t grw quickly and adapt t varius climates.

Bamb has cuntless uses in daily life. Peple use it t make furniture, paper, chpsticks and musical instruments. Its yung shts are als a delicius and nutritius fd. Besides practical uses, bamb has deep cultural meanings in China. It symblizes integrity, mdesty and perseverance—its straight stem represents integrity, hllw interir stands fr mdesty, and its ability t withstand strms shws perseverance.

In Chinese art and literature, bamb is a cmmn theme fr pets and painters. It is nt nly a plant but als a symbl f Chinese traditinal virtues. I hpe mre peple arund the wrld can understand and appreciate Chinese bamb culture.

范文2：介绍植物的重要性并呼吁保护植物

题目：以“The Imprtance f Plants”为题，写一篇英语短文，从对人类、动物及环境三个方面阐述植物的重要性，并呼吁大家爱护植物，词数不少于70。

审题：人称：第一人称；时态：一般现在时。

The Imprtance f Plants

As we all knw, plants are essential t ur wrld. They play a vital rle in supprting human life, animal survival and envirnmental balance.

Fr humans, plants prvide us with fd, such as grains, fruits and vegetables. Many plants are als used t make medicine, helping us treat diseases. What’s mre, the xygen they prduce is necessary fr us t breathe. Fr animals, plants are their hmes and fd surces—many animals live in frests and feed n leaves, fruits and seeds. Fr the envirnment, plants help purify the air, absrb carbn dixide, prevent sil ersin and regulate the climate.

Plants are s imprtant that we must prtect them. We shuld plant mre trees, stp cutting dwn frests randmly and take gd care f flwers and grass arund us. Let’s wrk tgether t prtect plants and create a greener wrld.

七、期末综合作文解析

范文1：介绍对自己重要的人——我的朋友

题目：以“My Best Friend”为题，写一篇英语短文，描述你最好的朋友，包括外貌、性格、爱好及你们的故事，词数不少于70。

审题：人称：第一人称；时态：一般现在时。

My Best Friend

In my life, there is smene wh is very imprtant t me—my best friend Li Ming. He is f medium height with shrt black hair and bright eyes. He is always smiling, making him lk friendly and apprachable.

Li Ming is kind and helpful. Whenever I meet difficulties in study, he is always willing t help me. He is als very hnest and reliable, and I can share my secrets with him. His hbby is playing basketball—he is gd at it and ften invites me t play tgether. We als like reading in the library n weekends, sharing interesting bks with each ther.

One memrable thing is that when I was ill and missed many classes, he came t my hme every day t help me make up lessns. Thanks t him, I didn’t fall behind. Having such a gd friend makes my life happier. I cherish ur friendship very much and hpe it will last frever.

范文2：我的校园生活

题目：假设你是李华，学校英语报正在征集“我的校园生活”主题征文，请你写一篇短文，介绍你的学科、校园活动、师生关系等，词数不少于80，内容积极向上。

审题：人称：第一人称；时态：一般现在时。

My Schl Life

My name is Li Hua, a student frm Class 2, Grade 7. My schl life is clrful and meaningful, filling me with jy every day.

We have a variety f subjects, such as Chinese, English, Maths, Histry and Bilgy. Amng them, I like English best because ur English teacher is very humrus and makes the classes interesting. After class, there are many activities t chse frm. I jin the English Club, where I can practice speaking English with classmates and watch English mvies. We als have sprts meetings and art festivals every year, which bring us a lt f fun.

Our teachers are strict but caring. They nt nly teach us knwledge but als guide us t be gd peple. My classmates are friendly and helpful—we study tgether, play tgether and help each ther when in truble.

I lve my schl life very much. It helps me grw and learn a lt. I will cherish the time at schl and wrk hard t make prgress.

范文3：给笔友的一封信——分享周末生活

题目：假设你是王芳，你的美国笔友Anna想了解你的周末生活，请你写一封信，分享你上周末的经历（如户外活动、学习、陪伴家人等）及感受，词数不少于80，开头和结尾已给出。

审题：人称：第一人称；时态：一般过去时。

Dear Anna,

Hw are yu ding? I’m glad t receive yur letter and I’d like t share my last weekend with yu.

Last Saturday mrning, I went hiking with my family in the suburban muntain. The weather was fine, and we enjyed the fresh air and beautiful scenery. We picked wild flwers and tk many phts. In the afternn, I went back hme t finish my hmewrk. After that, I helped my mm ck dinner—we made dumplings tgether, which was very interesting. On Sunday, I visited my grandparents with my parents. We chatted with them, helped clean the huse and had a big family dinner.

It was a wnderful weekend. I felt relaxed and happy, spending quality time with family and getting clse t nature. Hw was yur weekend? I’m lking frward t yur reply.

Yurs,

Wang Fang

范文4：保护野生动物的电子邮件

题目：假设你是张明，给你的外国朋友Tm写一封电子邮件，介绍你最想保护的动物——藏羚羊，包括其外貌、濒危原因及保护建议，词数不少于80，开头已给出。

审题：人称：第一人称；时态：一般现在时。

Dear Tm,

Hw’s everything ging? Yu asked me abut the wild animal I want t prtect mst, and tday I’d like t tell yu abut Tibetan antelpes.

Tibetan antelpes are beautiful animals living n the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau. They have thick white and brwn fur, slender bdies and lng hrns. They run fast and live in grups, feeding n grass. Hwever, they are in great danger nw. Illegal hunting is the main threat—pachers kill them fr their valuable fur t make expensive clthes. Besides, climate change and habitat destructin als affect their survival.

T prtect Tibetan antelpes, we shuld strengthen law enfrcement t ban illegal hunting. We shuld als set up mre prtected areas and carry ut research t help them reprduce. As individuals, we can refuse t buy prducts made f Tibetan antelpe fur and spread the imprtance f their prtectin.

I hpe mre peple will care abut Tibetan antelpes and jin in the prtectin. Let’s wrk tgether t save these lvely animals.

Yurs,

Zhang Ming