Unit4-Unit6 期末作文专题精讲学案（写作技巧 范文） 2025-2026学年外研版英语七年级上册-1

这是一份Unit4-Unit6 期末作文专题精讲学案（写作技巧 范文） 2025-2026学年外研版英语七年级上册-1，共23页。学案主要包含了作文写作步骤，写作步骤解析，作文如何检查，写作高分技巧，作文评分标准，考试范围+话题，单元话题作文解析，期末综合作文解析等内容，欢迎下载使用。
一、作文写作步骤
一审-审题
读题目，审体裁；人称；时态；要点
二列-列提纲
根据要点按照总分总三段式列框架
三连-添要点
给框架内容添枝加叶，丰富要点
四替-加入连词
恰当运用连接词，使文章层次清晰
五美-检查
通读全文，检查复核
六写-眷写
将检查后的作文整洁抄写在横线上
二、写作步骤解析
十年后，你的生活会是什么样的呢?假如本期学校英语报的征文题目是“My Life in Ten Years”,请你根据下面的要点及要求，发挥想象，写一篇英语短文投稿。
要点：1.你十年后会从事什么职业； 2.你十年后的生活会是什么样子； 3.为了过上想要的生活，你现在该怎么做。
要求：1.文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2.词数 80 左右。
1. 审 Search
审体裁：记叙文
审时态：一般将来时
审人称：第一人称
审要点：
十年后的职业
十年后的生活状态
现在为实现梦想的做法
2. 列 Outline
总：开头：点明主题，总述十年后的生活状态；
My life in ten years will be full f hpe and challenges.
分：中间：描述自己十年后的职业和生活
be a teacher
travel t different cuntries
spend time with family
总：结尾：介绍自己为实现梦想的做法
study hard and imprve my skills
my dream will cme true
3. 添 Add
be a teacher
I will be an English teacher in a middle schl. I will try my best t make my classes interesting and help my students fall in lve with English.
travel t different cuntries
I will travel t cuntries like the UK and the US t learn abut different cultures and bring back new teaching ideas.
spend time with family
I will spend mre time with my family. We will have dinner tgether every day and g n trips during hlidays.
4. 连 Cnnect-恰当运用连接词，使文章层次清晰，各部分衔接自然。
My life in ten years will be full f hpe and challenges.
First f all, I think I’ll be an English teacher in a middle schl. I will try my best t make my classes interesting and help my students fall in lve with English. Besides, I will travel t cuntries like the UK and the US t learn abut different cultures and bring back new teaching ideas. What’s mre, I will spend mre time with my family. We will have dinner tgether every day and g n trips during hlidays. Althugh I will be busy with my wrk, I will never stp learning.
I will study hard nw and imprve my cmmunicatin and teaching skills. I believe my dream will cme true ne day.
5. 查 Check-通读全文，检查复核
My life in ten years will be full f hpe and challenges.
First f all, I think I’ll be an English teacher in a middle schl. I will try my best t make my classes interesting and help my students fall in lve with English. Besides, I will travel t cuntries like the UK and the US t learn abut different cultures and bring back new teaching ideas. What’s mre, I will spend mre time with my family. We will have dinner tgether every day and g n trips during hlidays. Althugh I will be busy with my wrk, I will never stp learning.
I will study hard nw and imprve my cmmunicatin and teaching skills. I believe my dream will cme true ne day.
6. 誉 Cpy
将检查后的作文整洁地抄写在横线上。
三、作文如何检查
查单词拼写
检查单词拼写是否正确，是否存在笔误现象？
查动词形式
检查动词形式：通过人称时态判断；
查语法错误
检查是否有语法错误，句子是否符合语法
查衔接词
检查衔接词是否使用合适，文章是否通顺？
查要点齐全
检查文章要点是否齐全；有无漏写忘写；
查句子结构
检查句子结构是否正确；
查标点符号
检查标点符号是否符合规范；
查固定搭配
检查短语句型等固定搭配是否正确。
四、写作高分技巧
技巧一：话题词汇积累
U4词汇节日活动
时间
take place 发生，举行；last 从……持续到……；fall n the first day f the first lunar mnth 在农历正月初一
活动
celebrate 庆祝；family reunins 家庭团聚；get tgether 聚在一起；have a big dinner 吃一顿大餐；enjy the firewrks 欣赏烟花；stand fr 代表；象征；receive red envelpes 收红包
感受/意义
imprtant 重要的；meaningful 有意义的；traditinal 传统的；have a gd time/enjy neself 玩得开心；bring jy t ur lives 给我们的生活带来欢乐；strengthen family bnds 加强家庭纽带
U5词汇动物
老虎外貌
strng and fierce 强壮凶猛；range fur with black stripes 橙黄色带黑色条纹的皮毛；sharp teeth and claws 锋利的牙齿和爪子；lng tail 长尾巴
老虎特点
pwerful 强大的；fast runner 跑得快；hunt ther animals 捕猎其他动物；live alne 独居；gd at swimming 擅长游泳
老虎濒危的原因
illegal hunting 非法捕猎；lss f habitat 栖息地丧失；pllutin 污染；in danger 处在危险中
保护老虎的措施
make laws t prtect them 制定法律保护它们；set up nature reserves 建立自然保护区；stp buying prducts made frm tiger parts 停止购买虎制品；raise public awareness 提高公众意识
U6词汇植物
水稻的外形特征
lng and thin stems 细长的茎；narrw leaves 狭窄的叶片；glden grains 金黄色的稻粒；grw in water 生长在水中
水稻的生长条件
warm climate 温暖气候；plenty f water 充足的水分；fertile sil 肥沃土壤；enugh sunlight 充足阳光
水稻的用途
make rice 制作大米；prduce rice wine 酿造米酒；feed peple 养活人类；used in traditinal medicine 用于传统医学
技巧二：用短语代替单词
like → be fnd f... 喜欢……
happy → be in high spirits 情绪高涨
help → give sb. a hand 帮助某人
learn → pick up... 学会……
want → feel like ding sth. 想要做某事
use → take advantage f sth. 利用某事物
say → express neself 表达自己
think → cme up with an idea 想出一个主意
g → head fr... 前往……
eat → have a meal 吃饭
技巧三：加入所学重点句型
邀请某人做某事 → invite sb. t d sth.
对做某事感到兴奋 → be excited t d sth.
希望做某事 → hpe t d sth.
计划做某事 → plan t d sth.
同意做某事 → agree t d sth.
拒绝做某事 → refuse t d sth.
建议做某事 → suggest ding sth.
期待做某事 → lk frward t ding sth.
尽力做某事 → try ne’s best t d sth.
需要做某事 → need t d sth.
技巧四：加入高级句型
（1）通过举例子扩写(fr example/like/such )：
例如，蜜蜂帮助花朵授粉。
Fr example, bees help flwers pllinate.
端午节期间人们做很多事，例如赛龙舟和吃粽子。
During the Dragn Bat Festival, peple d many things, such as dragn bat racing and eating zngzi.
（2）使用动名词做主语（谓语动词要三单）
阅读是获取知识的重要途径。
Reading is an imprtant way t gain knwledge.
种植树木有助于改善环境。
Planting trees helps imprve the envirnment.
（3）加入nt als...不仅而且：
她不仅英语说得好，还会说法语。
She nt nly speaks English well, but als can speak French.
运动不仅能增强体质，还能缓解压力。
Exercise nt nly builds up ur bdies, but als relieves stress.
（4）加入表语从句(放在系动词后)
最让我开心的是我在学校交到了很多朋友。
The happiest thing fr me is that I have made many friends at schl.
重要的是我们要学会独立。
What is imprtant is that we shuld learn t be independent.
（5）加入最高级句型(ne f +the +最高级+名词复数)：
春节是中国最重要的传统节日之一。
The Spring Festival is ne f the mst imprtant traditinal festivals in China.
老虎是世界上最危险的动物之一。
The tiger is ne f the mst dangerus animals in the wrld.
（6）加入原因状语从句（because...）
我喜欢春节，因为我可以收到红包和吃美食。
I like the Spring Festival because I can receive red envelpes and eat delicius fd.
老虎濒临灭绝，因为它们的栖息地被破坏了。
Tigers are endangered because their habitats are destryed.
（7）加入宾语从句（位于动词、介词后）
我相信我们的努力会得到回报。
I believe that ur effrts will pay ff.
他不知道该如何解决这个问题。
He desn’t knw hw he can slve this prblem.
（8）加入主语从句(充当主语成分)
众所周知，水是生命之源。
It is well-knwn that water is the surce f life.
显而易见，保护环境对我们至关重要。
It is bvius that prtecting the envirnment is crucial fr us.
（9）加入感叹句(what/hw)
多么美丽的花园啊！
What a beautiful garden!
他跑得真快啊！
Hw fast he runs!
技巧五：加入衔接词
技巧六：加入名言名句
A jurney f a thusand miles begins with a single step. 千里之行，始于足下。
Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。
The early bird catches the wrm. 早起的鸟儿有虫吃。
Actins speak luder than wrds. 行动胜于言语。
Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
It’s never t ld t learn. 活到老，学到老。
Lve me, lve my dg. 爱屋及乌。
N pain, n gain. 不劳无获。
五、作文评分标准
评分核心：结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点
结构：三段式：“观点——要点——总结”
要点：要点齐全，紧扣主题，围绕中心
逻辑：逻辑通顺，使用适当的衔接词
语法：语法正确，确保句子结构，语法正确
亮点：加入亮点，高级的词汇、词组、句型
六、考试范围+话题
Unit 4 Time t celebrate
主题：节假日
角度1：向外国朋友介绍中国的传统节日-端午节
角度2：介绍你最喜欢的外国节日以及原因-圣诞节
角度3：向外国朋友介绍你家乡的特色节日-泼水节
角度4：介绍节日期间的志愿者活动经历
Unit 5 Fantastic friends
主题：神奇的动物
角度1：根据所给信息介绍老虎并呼吁保护老虎
角度2：写一篇关于保护海洋动物的文章
角度3：介绍我最喜欢的动物和原因-海豚
角度4：介绍城市中流浪动物的生存现状并呼吁大家关爱它们
Unit 6 The pwer f plants
主题：植物的力量
角度1：介绍中国的水稻文化
角度2：根据所给信息介绍某种植物-竹子
角度3：介绍某种植物的用途和保护措施-银杏树
角度4：介绍植物对气候变化的影响并呼吁大家保护植物
七、单元话题作文解析
U4范文1：向外国朋友介绍中国的传统节日-端午节
你的英国朋友Michael想了解中国的传统节日。请你根据以下要点和要求，以“The Dragn Bat Festival”为题，写一篇英语短文向他介绍该节日。
要点：
When is the festival celebrated?
What activities d peple d during the festival?
Hw d yu like it?
要求：
文章应包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥；
词数不少于90。
审题：
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
范文：
The Dragn Bat Festival
The Dragn Bat Festival is ne f the mst imprtant traditinal festivals in China. It falls n the fifth day f the fifth lunar mnth every year. It is celebrated t hnr the great pet Qu Yuan.
During the festival, peple have many interesting activities. The mst famus ne is the dragn bat race. Teams f rwers paddle their dragn-shaped bats as fast as they can t the beat f drums. It’s exciting t watch! Peple als eat zngzi, a kind f sticky rice dumpling wrapped in bamb leaves. Zngzi has different fillings like meat, beans, and egg ylks.
I really lve the Dragn Bat Festival. It nt nly reminds us f ur histry and culture but als brings families tgether. The dragn bat races are full f energy, and eating zngzi with my family makes me feel warm and happy. It’s a festival that cmbines fun, traditin, and delicius fd.
U4范文2：介绍你最喜欢的外国节日以及原因-圣诞节
世界上有很多节日，如圣诞节、感恩节和万圣节等。请参考以下思维导图，以“My Favurite Freign Festival”为题，写一篇英语短文。
审题：
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
范文：
My Favurite Freign Festival
There are many interesting freign festivals in the wrld. Of all the festivals, I like Christmas best. It is celebrated n December 25th every year t remember the birth f Jesus Christ.
Christmas is a time f jy and giving. Peple decrate their hmes with Christmas trees, clrful lights, and beautiful rnaments. They exchange gifts with family and friends, and children lk frward t receiving presents frm Santa Claus. Many families g t church t attend special services, and they als have big dinners with delicius fd like turkey and Christmas pudding.
I like Christmas because it’s a time when peple are kind and generus. The whle wrld seems t be filled with happiness and lve. It als gives me a chance t learn abut different cultures and traditins. I hpe ne day I can celebrate Christmas in a freign cuntry and experience the festive atmsphere firsthand.
U4范文3：向外国朋友介绍你家乡的特色节日-泼水节
假设你叫张伟，你的美国笔友汤姆想了解中国的特色节日。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你家乡的泼水节。
审题：
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
范文：
Dear Tm,
I’m glad t hear frm yu. Let me tell yu abut a special festival in my hmetwn—the Water-Splashing Festival.
The Water-Splashing Festival is the mst imprtant festival fr the Dai peple in Yunnan, China. It usually takes place in April, marking the start f the Dai New Year. During the festival, peple dress up in traditinal clthes and gather in the streets. They carry buckets and water guns, and splash water n each ther. Splashing water is a way t send gd wishes— the mre water yu get, the mre luck yu will have in the new year.
There are als ther activities like dragn bat races, peacck dances, and firewrks shws. Everyne is happy and full f energy. I hpe yu can cme t my hmetwn t celebrate the Water-Splashing Festival with me. I’m sure yu will have a wnderful time!
Best wishes,
Zhang Wei
U4范文4：介绍节日期间的志愿者活动经历
有这样一群人，他们在节日期间放弃休息，投身于志愿者活动，帮助那些需要帮助的人。假如你是李华，你们学校正在组织英语作文比赛，请以“My Vlunteer Experience During the Festival”为题，根据以下思维导图内容提示写一篇英文短文参赛。
审题：
人称：第一人称
时态：一般过去时
范文：
My Vlunteer Experience During the Festival
During the Spring Festival this year, I had a meaningful vlunteer experience. I jined a vlunteer team t help the elderly in a nursing hme.
On the mrning f the festival, we brught fruits, snacks, and New Year’s gifts t the elderly. We helped them clean their rms, cut their hair, and chat with them. Sme f us perfrmed prgrams like singing and dancing t make them happy. I talked with an ld grandma wh tld me stries abut her life when she was yung. She was very happy t have smene t listen t her.
This vlunteer experience taught me the imprtance f caring fr thers. It made me realize that giving is mre rewarding than receiving. Even thugh I didn’t spend the festival with my family, I felt warm and happy. I hpe mre peple can jin vlunteer activities and spread lve and kindness during festivals.
U5范文1：介绍我最喜欢的动物和原因-海豚
假设你是约翰，本周英语角的话题是 “My Favurite Animal”。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文，分享你最喜欢的动物。
审题：
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
范文：
My Favurite Animal
By Jhn
My favurite animal is the dlphin. Dlphins are ne f the mst intelligent animals in the wrld.
Dlphins live in the cean. They have smth, grey skin and a lng, curved drsal fin. They are very fast swimmers and can jump high ut f the water. Dlphins are scial animals and live in grups called pds. They cmmunicate with each ther using sunds and bdy language. They are als knwn fr their friendly behavir twards humans.
I like dlphins because they are smart and playful. I nce saw a dlphin shw at an aquarium, and I was amazed by their ability t fllw cmmands and perfrm tricks. Dlphins als help humans in many ways, like rescuing peple wh are lst at sea. They are truly amazing creatures, and I hpe we can prtect them and their habitat.
U5范文2：写一篇关于保护海洋动物的文章
2025年6月8日是第17个世界海洋日，我国的主题为“保护海洋生物多样性，人与自然和谐共生”。假设你是李明，你所在学校的英语报“人与自然”栏目正在以保护海洋动物为话题征文，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示，用英文写一篇短文给该专栏投稿。
审题：
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
范文：
Prtecting Marine Animals
Marine animals are an imprtant part f ur planet’s ecsystem. Hwever, many f them are in danger nw.
Pllutin is ne f the biggest threats t marine animals. Plastic waste, il spills, and chemical pllutin are harming their health and destrying their habitats. Overfishing is als a prblem. Many fish species are being caught faster than they can reprduce, which affects the whle fd chain. Climate change is causing the cean t warm and becme mre acidic, which is bad fr cral reefs and the animals that live there.
We must take actin t prtect marine animals. We can reduce ur use f plastic, supprt sustainable fishing practices, and learn mre abut cean cnservatin. Gvernments shuld make stricter laws t prevent pllutin and verfishing. Everyne has a rle t play in prtecting ur ceans and the amazing animals that live in them. Let’s wrk tgether t ensure a better future fr marine life.
U5范文3：根据所给信息介绍老虎并呼吁保护老虎
假如你是李华，来自哈尔滨。你校正在进行“动物周”活动，请你根据下表提示，写一篇英语演讲稿，向同学们介绍老虎，让更多的人了解老虎、保护老虎。
审题：
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
范文：
Tigers
Hell, everyne. I’m Li Hua, a student frm Harbin. Tday, I want t talk abut ne f the mst amazing animals—the tiger.
Tigers are the largest cats in the wrld. They have beautiful range fur with black stripes, sharp teeth, and strng claws. They are pwerful hunters and can run very fast. Tigers live alne in frests and grasslands in Asia. They hunt animals like deer and wild bar.
Sadly, tigers are in great danger nw. There are less than 4000 wild tigers left in the wrld. Illegal hunting fr their fur and bdy parts is a majr threat. Their habitats are als being destryed by defrestatin and human develpment.
We must prtect tigers. Gvernments have made laws t stp illegal hunting and set up nature reserves t prtect their habitats. We can als help by raising public awareness and supprting cnservatin rganizatins. Tigers are an imprtant part f ur planet, and we can’t let them disappear. Let’s wrk tgether t save these magnificent animals.
Thank yu fr listening.
U5范文4：介绍城市中流浪动物的生存现状并呼吁大家关爱它们
上周日，你和Sandy去了动物收容所，了解到很多城市流浪动物的生存现状，你想在 Schl Newsletter 上发文呼吁同学们关爱流浪动物。请你就下面表格中的提示内容写一篇80词左右的短文。
审题：
人称：第一人称
时态：一般过去时和一般现在时
范文：
Care fr Stray Animals
Last Sunday, Sandy and I visited an animal shelter and learned abut the difficult lives f stray animals in ur city.
Stray animals are hmeless and ften dn’t have enugh fd t eat. They are als mre likely t get sick because they dn’t have prper medical care. Many f them were abandned by their wners, sme gt lst, and thers are the ffspring f stray animals that reprduce t quickly.
There are things we can d t help. Animal shelters prvide a safe place fr them, but they need mre supprt. We can adpt a stray animal instead f buying ne, dnate fd and supplies t shelters, r vlunteer ur time. As students, we can als educate thers abut the imprtance f caring fr stray animals. Let’s shw kindness t these helpless creatures and make ur city a better place fr them.
U6范文1：介绍中国的水稻文化
作为中学生，我们应该了解水稻并传播水稻文化。国际友好交流学校线上论坛拟于下周五举行，本期论坛的主题为“水稻文化”。假设你是论坛特邀嘉宾，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示，用英文写一篇短文，向国际友好交流学校介绍中国水稻文化。
审题：
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
范文：
Chinese Rice Culture
Rice is ne f the mst imprtant fds in China, and it has a lng histry and rich culture.
Rice has been grwn in China fr ver 7000 years. It is a staple fd fr mst Chinese peple, especially in the suthern part f the cuntry. Rice is nt just a fd; it is als an imprtant part f Chinese culture. There are many traditinal festivals and custms related t rice. Fr example, during the Dragn Bat Festival, peple eat zngzi made f glutinus rice. In sme areas, there are rice-planting festivals where peple celebrate the start f the grwing seasn.
Rice is als used in traditinal Chinese medicine and is believed t have health benefits. Chinese peple have develped many ways t ck rice, such as fried rice, cngee, and rice ndles. Rice culture reflects the hard wrk and wisdm f Chinese farmers. I hpe mre peple can learn abut Chinese rice culture and appreciate the imprtance f this amazing crp.
U6范文2：根据所给信息介绍某种植物-竹子
你所在的自然社团打算发布保护植物的相关海报，你负责有关竹子这一植物的介绍，请根据所给的竹子资料卡，向同学们科普这一植物。
审题：
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
范文：
Bamb
Hi, everyne. Tday, I want t intrduce yu t a very useful and interesting plant—bamb.
Bamb is a type f grass that grws in many parts f the wrld, especially in Asia. It has lng, thin stems that are green and hllw inside. Bamb grws very fast—sme species can grw up t 1 meter in a single day! It is strng and flexible, which makes it a great material fr many things.
Bamb has been used by humans fr thusands f years. In China, it is used t make furniture, baskets, and paper. Yung bamb shts are als a ppular fd in many Asian cuntries. Bamb is als imprtant fr the envirnment. It helps prevent sil ersin and prvides shelter fr many animals.
Bamb is a truly amazing plant. It is nt nly useful but als beautiful. Let’s learn mre abut bamb and d ur part t prtect this valuable resurce.
U6范文3：介绍某种植物的用途和保护措施-银杏树
《中国日报》收到外国读者的来信，信中说他们对中国的银杏树很感兴趣，因此现在该报社在征求一篇介绍银杏树的文章，请你写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容包括：
银杏树在中国很常见；
用途（美化城市，木材用于制作家具，叶子和果实可入药等）；
保护措施（保护古树，种植新树，加强研究……）。
注意：1. 词数为60左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
审题：
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
范文：
Ginkg Trees
Welcme t Green China! I’m glad t hear that many peple are interested in ginkg trees.
Ginkg trees are cmmn in China, especially in cities. They are knwn fr their beautiful fan-shaped leaves that turn glden in autumn. Ginkg trees have many uses. Their wd is used t make furniture, and their leaves and fruits are used in traditinal medicine. They als help purify the air and make ur cities mre beautiful.
Hwever, sme ld ginkg trees are in danger. We shuld prtect these ancient trees, plant mre yung ginkges, and study hw t help them grw better. Let’s wrk tgether t ensure that ginkg trees cntinue t thrive in China fr many years t cme.
U6范文4：介绍植物对气候变化的影响并呼吁大家保护植物
以“Plants and Climate Change”为题写一篇英语短文，从三个方面谈论植物对气候变化的影响，并呼吁大家要爱护花草树木。
吸收二氧化碳：help reduce greenhuse gases
调节气温：cl the air and reduce heat islands
保护土壤和水资源：prevent sil ersin and cnserve water
审题：
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
范文：
Plants and Climate Change
Plants play a crucial rle in fighting climate change. They are ur natural allies in prtecting the planet.
First, plants absrb carbn dixide frm the air thrugh phtsynthesis. Carbn dixide is a majr greenhuse gas that causes glbal warming. By absrbing it, plants help reduce the amunt f greenhuse gases in the atmsphere and slw dwn climate change.
Secnd, plants help regulate temperatures. They release water vapr int the air thrugh transpiratin, which cls the surrunding envirnment. Trees and ther plants als prvide shade, which helps reduce the heat island effect in cities.
Third, plants prtect sil and water resurces. Their rts hld the sil tgether, preventing ersin caused by wind and rain. They als help cnserve water by reducing runff and increasing infiltratin int the grund.
In cnclusin, plants are essential fr cmbating climate change. We shuld plant mre trees and prtect existing frests and grasslands. Every plant cunts in ur fight against glbal warming. Let’s take actin nw t prtect ur planet and its amazing plants.
八、期末综合作文解析
期末综合范文1
你身边应该有对你来说具有特殊意义的人吧。请以“My_______”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述某个对你来说很重要的人(包括性别、年龄、外貌、性格特征等)，如你的家人、朋友、老师、同学等。
审题：
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
范文：
My English Teacher
There are many special peple in my life, but the mst imprtant ne is my English teacher, Miss Wang.
Miss Wang is in her thirties. She has lng black hair and a warm smile. She is kind and patient, and she always makes her classes interesting. She uses games, sngs, and stries t help us learn English. When we make mistakes, she never gets angry. Instead, she helps us crrect them and encurages us t try again.
Miss Wang is nt just a teacher—she is als ur friend. She listens t ur prblems and gives us gd advice. She cares abut each f us and wants us t succeed. Thanks t her, I have fallen in lve with English and made great prgress. I am very lucky t have such a wnderful teacher. I will always remember her and the lessns she taught me.
期末综合范文2
假如你是李华，你想参加学校正在举行的英语征文活动，活动主题为“我的校园生活”。征文内容要求积极向上，展示丰富多彩的校园活动。请根据以下提示，完成一篇征文。
What subjects d yu study?
What sprts d yu like t play?
What are yur teachers and classmates like?
What club activities d yu take part in?
审题：
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
范文：
My Schl Life
My name is Li Hua, and I am a student in Class 2, Grade 7. My schl life is busy but exciting.
We study many subjects, including Chinese, Maths, English, Science, and Histry. My favurite subject is English because I lve learning abut different cultures and making friends with peple frm ther cuntries. I als enjy Science classes because we d interesting experiments.
I lve sprts. I play basketball with my classmates every afternn after schl. It’s a great way t stay healthy and make friends. I am als a member f the schl’s science club. We meet every Wednesday t d prjects and learn abut new technlgies.
My teachers are very knwledgeable and kind. They always help us when we have prblems. My classmates are friendly and supprtive. We wrk tgether and have fun. I am very happy with my schl life and I lk frward t every day at schl.
期末综合范文3
假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友 David写一封信，讲述你周六一天的生活，并谈谈感受。
周六早上，和家人一起去爬山，欣赏风景，锻炼身体。
下午，去图书馆看书，完成作业。
晚上，和朋友一起看电影，吃晚饭。
你觉得…
要求：
词数:80左右。
开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
审题：
人称：第一人称
时态：一般过去时
范文：
Dear David,
Hw are yu? I had a great day last Saturday, and I want t share it with yu.
In the mrning, I went muntain climbing with my family. The weather was perfect, and the view frm the tp was amazing. We tk many phts and had a picnic. Climbing the muntain was a gd wrkut and made me feel strng and healthy.
In the afternn, I went t the library. I read sme interesting bks and finished my hmewrk. It was quiet and peaceful, and I gt a lt dne.
In the evening, I went t the mvies with my friends. We watched a funny cmedy and then had dinner at a pizza restaurant. We laughed a lt and had a wnderful time.
Overall, it was a perfect day. I felt happy and relaxed. I hpe yu als have a great weekend!
Yurs,
Li Hua
期末综合范文4
现如今，世界上有很多珍稀植物濒临灭绝，比如银杏树、珙桐等。我们应该拯救这些珍稀植物，创造一个人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。假设你是李华，现在请你根据以下思维导图内容提示发一封电子邮件给你的朋友詹妮(Jenny)，介绍一下你最想保护的植物。
审题：
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
范文：
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad t hear frm yu. My favurite plant is the ginkg tree. Ginkg trees are ne f the ldest living tree species in the wrld. They have beautiful fan-shaped leaves that turn glden in autumn.
Hwever, ginkg trees are in danger nw. Many ld ginkg trees are being cut dwn fr their wd r t make space fr buildings. Pllutin is als harming their health. Climate change is making it harder fr them t grw and reprduce.
Prtecting ginkg trees is imprtant. We shuld make laws t prtect ld ginkg trees, plant mre yung ginkges, and study hw t help them adapt t climate change. Everyne can d their part by learning abut ginkg trees and supprting cnservatin effrts.
I hpe yu can learn mre abut ginkg trees and jin me in prtecting these amazing plants.
Yurs,
Li Hua
期末综合范文5
假如你是Chris，一名来自英国的交换生，目前正在中国学习和生活。请阅读下面这封来自你妈妈的电子邮件，并予以回复。
Dear Chris,
Hw is everything ging? I’m really interested in yur life in China. I knw Chinese peple usually drink tea. D yu like it? What d yu usually drink? What’s yur favurite drink there? What’s yur favurite sprt at schl? D yu have any plans fr the summer hliday? By the way, yu said yu had a new friend there. What des yur friend like ding?
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
MUM
注意：(1) 针对邮件中的问题作出回答，可适当发挥；(2) 邮件中不得出现真实的人名；(3) 词数不少于60，开头和结尾已给出不计人总词数。
审题：
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
范文：
Dear Mum,
I’m having a great time in China as an exchange student. Life here is full f new experiences.
Chinese peple lve drinking tea, and I have grwn t like it t. My favurite tea is green tea because it’s light and refreshing. I als like drinking sy milk fr breakfast—it’s healthy and delicius.
At schl, my favurite sprt is table tennis. It’s very ppular in China, and I play it with my classmates every day. I’m getting better and better! Fr the summer hliday, I plan t travel t Xi’an t see the Terractta Army. I’m really excited abut it.
I have made many new friends here. My best friend is Lin Ta. He likes playing basketball and watching mvies. He ften helps me with my Chinese, and I help him with his English. We have a lt f fun tgether.
I miss yu, but I’m really enjying my time in China. I will tell yu mre when I cme hme.
Yurs,
Chris
类别
单词/短语
并列
and 和；又；而； 要么……要么……； 既不……也不……
转折
but 但是；hwever 然而；thugh/althugh 虽然；even if/even thugh 即使
因果
s 所以；because 因为；since 既然；as a result 结果是；thanks t 多亏了
顺序
first(ly) 首先；secnd(ly) 其次；then 然后；after that 在那之后；finally 最后
递进
als 也；t 也；in additin 此外；what’s mre 更重要的是；furthermre 而且
观点
persnally 在我看来；as far as I’m cncerned 就我而言；it seems t me that 在我看来
总结
in cnclusin 总之；t sum up 总而言之；in shrt 简而言之；all in all 总的来说
其他
fr example 例如；in ther wrds 换句话说；n the cntrary 相反
给分范围
档次要求
13-15分
①书写工整,要点齐全 ②语句通顺，逻辑合理 ③语法、拼写无误 ④高级句式。
10-12分
能写出大部分要点,语句较通顺、完整,有个别语法、拼写错误,但不影响句意,书写工整。
7-9分
能写出部分要点,语句基本通顺、完整,有少量语法、拼写错误,但尚能达意,书写较工整。
4-6分
能写出个别要点,语句不够通顺、完整,语法、拼写错误较多,只有个别句子可读,书写不够工整。
0-3分
未能写出基本要点,语法、拼写错误多,不知所云,书写潦草。
外貌
橙黄色带黑色条纹的皮毛，锋利的牙齿和爪子
特点
强壮凶猛，跑得快，擅长捕猎
栖息地
亚洲的森林和草原
濒危原因
非法捕猎，栖息地丧失，污染
保护措施
制定法律保护，建立自然保护区，提高公众意识
现状
野生老虎数量不足4000只
现状
无家可归，食物短缺，容易生病
原因
被主人遗弃，迷路，繁殖过快
应对措施
建立收容所，开展领养活动，进行绝育手术
建议
作为学生，我们可以……
名称
竹子
外形
细长的茎，绿色的叶片，中空的内部
质地
坚硬有韧性
生长条件
温暖湿润的气候，排水良好的土壤
历史
几千年
用途
制作家具，造纸，食用，观赏