外研版（2024）七年级上册英语期末复习：Unit4-6作文专题精讲（写作技巧+话题范文）讲义

这是一份外研版（2024）七年级上册英语期末复习：Unit4-6作文专题精讲（写作技巧+话题范文）讲义，共26页。学案主要包含了写作步骤解析，作文如何检查，写作高分技巧，作文评分标准，考试范围+话题，期末综合作文解析等内容，欢迎下载使用。
一审-审题
读题目，审体裁；人称；时态；要点
二列-列提纲
根据要点按照总分总三段式列框架
三连-添要点
给框架内容添枝加叶，丰富要点
四替-加入连词
恰当运用连接词，使文章层次清晰
五美-检查
通读全文， 检查复核
六写-眷写
将检查后的作文整洁抄写在横线上
二、写作步骤解析
1. 审 Search
审体裁：________
审时态：________
审人称：________
审要点：
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
2. 列 Outline
总：开头：点明主题，总述十年后的生活状态；
My life in ten years will be clrful and meaningful.
分：中间：描述自己十年后的职业和生活
be a dctr
read mre bks
travel t many places...
总：结尾：介绍自己为实现梦想的做法
study harder and try t...
my dream will cme true
3.添 Add
be a dctr
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
read mre bks
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
travel t many places...
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
4.连 Cnnect-恰当运用连接词，使文章层次清晰，各部分衔接自然。
My life in ten years will be clrful and meaningful.
__________, I think I’ll be a gd dctr. I believe I’ll bring my patients health and happiness. ____________________, I’ll stay with my family. We’ll travel t many places and have fun. I’ll als read as many bks as I can, fr I want t imprve myself.__________ I’m busy with my wrk, I will never give up studying.
I will study harder __________ try my best t make my dream cme true. I’m sure my dream will cme true __________my hard wrk and the life in the future will get better and better.
5. 查 Check-通读全文， 检查复核
My life in ten years will be clrful and meaning.
In ten years, I think I’ll be a gd dctr. I believe I’ll bring my patient health and happiness. On my spare time, I’ll stay with my family. We’ll travel t many places and have fun. I’ll als read as much bks as I can, fr I want t imprve myself. Even if I’m busy with my wrk, I will never give up study.
I will study harder and try my best t make my dream cme ture. I’m sure my dream will cme true because my hard wrk and the life in the future will get better and better.
6. 誉 Cpy
将检查后的作文整洁地抄写在横线上。
三、作文如何检查
1.查单词拼写
检查单词拼写是否正确，是否存在笔误现象？
查动词形式
检查动词形式：通过人称时态判断；
查语法错误
检查是否有语法错误，句子是否符合语法
查衔接词
检查衔接词是否使用合适，文章是否通顺？
查要点齐全
检查文章要点是否齐全；有无漏写忘写；
查句子结构
检查句子结构是否正确；
查标点符号
检查标点符号是否符合规范；
8.查固定搭配
检查短语句型等固定搭配是否正确。
四、写作高分技巧
技巧一：话题词汇积累
技巧二：用短语代替单词
技巧三：加入所学重点句型
技巧四：加入高级句型
（1）通过举例子扩写(fr example/like/such )：
比如，骆驼帮人们搬运重物。
Fr example， camels carry heavy things fr peple.
春节期间人们做很多事例如吃一顿丰盛的晚餐和看电视节目。
During the Spring Festival， peple d many things， such as having a big family dinner and watching a special prgramme n TV.
例如我通常参观中国的名胜古迹和品尝当地美食。
Fr example,I usually visit different places f interest in China and taste the lcal fd.
（2）使用动名词做主语（谓语动词要三单）
通过给予来帮助他人可能是幸福、健康生活的秘诀。
Helping thers by giving may be the secret t a happy, healthy life.
喝茶不仅仅是一种放松方式。
Drinking tea is mre than a way f relaxing.
吃月饼是节日期间一件必做的事情。
Eating mn cakes is a must during the festival.
（3）加入nt als...不仅而且：
她不仅课上努力学习，课后还读很多书。
She nt nly studies hard in class, but als reads many bks after class.
读书不但让我感到快乐，还能使我提高成绩。
Reading can nt nly make me happy, but als imprve my grades.
它不仅对我们的健康有益，也是许多文化中的重要部分。
It is nt nly gd fr ur health， but als a key part f many cultures.
（4）加入表语从句(放在系动词后)
其中一件重要的事是我可以感受到每个人对中国的爱。
One imprtant thing is that I can feel the lve fr China frm everyne.
最精彩的是我在这里交到很多朋友。
The mst wnderful thing is that I have made a lt f friends here.
（5）加入最高级句型(ne f +the +最高级+名词复数)：
它是中国最重要的传统节日之一。
It is ne f the mst imprtant traditinal festivals in China.
他是最善良的医务工作者之一。
He is ne f the kindest medical wrkers.
它是世界上最强壮的动物之一。
It is ne f the strngest animals in the wrld.
棉花是自然界最常见的植物之一。
Cttn is ne f the mst cmmn plants in the natural wrld.
（6）加入原因状语从句（because...）
我喜欢这个节日，不仅因为我可以享受美味的月饼，而且因为我可以和家人团聚。
I really like the festival, nt nly because I can enjy the delicius mn cakes, but because I can have a family reunin.
那是因为人类一直砍树和占据土地以及动物的生存空间越来越少。
That's because humans keep cutting dwn frests and taking up land and the living space fr wild animals gets smaller and smaller.
（7）加入宾语从句（位于动词、介词后）
我希望每个人都能有一个快乐的新年。
I hpe that everyne has a happy New Year.
我希望我们能爱护动物,帮助它们幸福地生活。
I hpe we can lve animals and help them live happily.
有时它让我感觉像是住在乡村 。
Smetimes it makes me feel like I’m living in the cuntryside.
（8）加入主语从句(充当主语成分)
众所周知，运动对我们的健康有益。
It’s n secret that exercise is gd fr ur health.
众所周知，我们生活在一个数字时代。
It’s n secret that we live in a digital age.
众所周知，喝茶对我们的健康有益。
It’s n secret that drinking tea is gd fr ur health.
（9）加入感叹句(what/hw)
多么平静安稳的生活啊！
What a peaceful and safe life！
你心肠真好！
Hw kind yu are！
他们的工作速度真快啊！
Hw fast they are wrking！
技巧五：加入衔接词
技巧六：加入名言名句
1. Best wishes fr the hlidays and happiness thrughut the New Year.恭贺新禧,万事如意。
2.A new year,a new start.新年新开始。
3.A single flwer des nt make a spring.一花独放不是春。
4.It takes three generatins t make a gentleman.十年树木,百年树人。
5.Lve me，lve my dg.爱屋及鸟。
6.Dn't let ur children see tday's animals nly in museums.
不要让我们的孩子只能在博物馆里看见现在的动物。
7.N trading, n killing.没有买卖，就没有杀害。
五、作文评分标准
结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点
结构：三段式：“观点——要点——总结”
要点：要点齐全，紧扣主题，围绕中心
逻辑：逻辑通顺，使用适当的衔接词
语法：语法正确，确保句子结构，语法正确
亮点：加入亮点，高级的词汇、词组、句型
六、考试范围+话题
Unit 4 Time t celebrate
主题：节假日
角度1：向外国朋友介绍中国的传统节日-中秋节
角度2：介绍你最喜欢的中国节日以及原因-国庆节
角度3：向外国朋友介绍你最喜欢的传统节日-春节
角度4：介绍节日身边的“责任之星”以及节日工作经历
Unit 5 Fantastic friends
主题：神奇的动物
角度1：根据所给信息介绍大熊猫并呼吁保护大熊猫
角度2：写一篇关于保护濒危动物的文章
角度3：介绍我最喜欢的动物和原因
角度4：介绍野生动物的生存现状并呼吁大家保护动物
Unit 6 The pwer f plants
主题：植物的力量
角度1：介绍中国的茶文化
角度2：根据所给信息介绍某种植物
角度3：介绍某种植物的用途和保护措施
角度4：介绍植物的重要性并呼吁大家保护植物
六、单元话题作文解析
U4范文1：向外国朋友介绍中国的传统节日-中秋节
你的英国朋友Michael想了解中国的传统节日。请你根据
以下要点和要求，以“The Mid-Autumn Festival”为题，写一
篇英语短文向他介绍该节日。
要点：
（1）When is the festival celebrated?
（2）What activities d peple d during the festival?
（3）Hw d yu like it?
要求：
（1）文章应包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥；
（2）词数不少于90。
审题：
人称：___________时态：___________
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is ne f the mst imprtant traditinal festivals in China.It takes place n the fifteenth day f the eighth lunar mnth.(介绍中秋节的基本情况)
During this festival, peple usually get tgether with their families fr a big dinner. Eating mn cakes is a must during the festival. Its rund shape stands fr family reunins. At night, peple always enjy the full mn. It makes them think f their relatives and friends.(描述人们的庆祝活动)
I really like the festival, nt nly because I can enjy the delicius mn cakes, but because I can have a family reunin. It always makes me feel warm in my heart.(表达个人感受)
U4范文2：介绍你最喜欢的中国节日以及原因-国庆节。
中国有很多节日,如春节、中秋节和端午节等。请参考以下思维导图,以“My Favurite ChineseFestiva!”为题,写一篇英语短文。
审题：
人称：___________时态：___________
My favrite Chinese festival
There are many festivals in China. Of all the festivals, I like Natinal Day best.It's n 1st Octber every year.(引出最喜欢的节日以及时间)
When Natinal Day cmes, we have a seven-day hliday. It's a time fr me t have fun with my family. I can g ut with my parents t visit sme places f interest.And ne imprtant thing is that I can feel the lve fr China frm everyne. It is really tuching.(人们如何庆祝)
Natinal Day is a day fr Chinese peple t celebrate the birthday f China. We can see the cuntry is getting better and better.And we shuld wrk hard t make ur cuntry strnger.(喜欢的原因)
U4范文3：向外国朋友介绍你最喜欢的传统节日-春节。
假设你叫李伟，你的美国笔友汤姆想了解中国的传统节日。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你最喜欢的传统节日。
审题：
人称：___________时态：___________
Dear Tm，
I am glad t hear frm yu.Let me tell yu smething abut my favurite traditinal Chinese festival.
In my cuntry there are many festivals.My favurite festival is the Spring Festival.It usually cmes in January r February.（最喜欢的节日）During the Spring Festival， peple d many things， such as having a big family dinner and watching a special prgramme n TV.（活动1）Children ften get hngba frm their parents and grandparents.It means lucky mney.（活动2）Besides， peple always wear new clthes and visit their relatives and friends.（活动3）
I hpe yu can cme t China t celebrate the Spring Festival with me.I’m sure yu will have a gd time！（发出邀请）
Best wishes！
Yurs，
Li Wei
U4范文4：介绍节日身边的“责任之星”以及节日工作经历。
有这样一群人，他们放弃了过节与家人团圆的机会，坚守在各个岗位。这些人是“白衣天使”、人民子弟兵、警察、科学家……假如你是李华，你们学校正在组织英语作文比赛，请以“The Star f Duty Arund Us”为题，根据以下思维导图内容提示写一篇英文短文参赛。
审题：
人称：___________时态：___________
The Star f Duty Arund Us
We have a lt f respectable peple arund us.The star f duty in my heart is my uncle.（人物）He wrks as a pliceman.（职业）As a pliceman, he ften stands by t prtect peple.（职责）
During festivals，he desn’t have a break frm wrk.Smetimes， he even stays up withut any breaks at night.（经历1）His daughter is nly three years ld，but he has little time t be with his daughter at festivals.He gives up his family time t answer the call f duty.（经历2）
I think my uncle is a great man.His wrk brings peple safety and happiness，s he is the star f duty in my heart.（评价）
U5范文1：介绍我最喜欢的动物和原因
假设你是约翰， 本周英语角的话题是 “My Favurite Animal”。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文，分享你最喜欢的动物。
审题：
人称：___________时态：___________
My Favurite Animal
By Jhn
My favurite animal is the elephant.（最喜欢的动物）
Elephants are very big and smart.They never get lst.（特征1） They like eating grass， fruit and vegetables.（特征2） What’s mre,they always live in grups.（特征3）
I like elephants because they are always friendly t peple.（喜欢的原因1） There are several elephants in the z near my hme.I ften g there t see them.And they always bring peple much fun.（喜欢的原因2）
U5范文2：写一篇关于保护濒危动物的文章
2025年3月3日是第12个世界野生动植物日，我国的主题为“加大物种保护投入力度， 共建地球生命共同体”。假设你是李明，你所在学校的英语报“人与自然”栏目正在以保护濒危动物猎豹为话题征文，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示，用英文写一篇短文给该专栏投稿。
审题：
人称：___________时态：___________
Cheetahs are ne f the fastest animals n land.They have yellw-brwnish fur and mainly live in sme places f Africa.（介绍1）They feed n ther animals， such as deer and fish.（介绍2）
Nwadays， the number f cheetahs is getting smaller and smaller.（猎豹现状） They dn’t have enugh fd t eat.（原因1） Besides， they dn’t have enugh places t live in.（原因2） What’s mre，peple ften kill them fr their fur.（原因3） As a result， cheetahs are in danger nw.
Let’s try ur best t prtect cheetahs.（呼吁）
U5范文3：根据所给信息介绍大熊猫并呼吁保护大熊猫
假如你是李华，来自合肥。你校正在进行“动物周”活动，请你根据下表提示，写一篇英语演讲稿，向同学们介绍大熊猫，让更多的人了解大熊猫、保护大熊猫。
审题：
人称：___________时态：___________
Pandas
Hell, everyne. I’m Li Hua, a student frm Hefei.I will give a reprt abut pandas.(引出话题)
Pandas are my favurite animal. They are black and white. They like climbing trees and eating bamb. They are cute but strng. They mainly live in Sichuan and Shaanxi f China. Sme peple cut dwn frests and pandas lst their hmes. Besides, pandas have few babies. As a result, they were in danger.(详细介绍大熊猫)
T prtect pandas, China has built many nature reserves. Peple stp cutting dwn trees and try their best t prtect pandas. The number f pandas begins t grw. Nw there are abut 1,900 pandas in the wild. Hw amazing!(保护措施)
Pandas are imprtant t nature. It is imprtant fr us t prtect them.
Thanks fr yur listening.
U5范文4：介绍野生动物的生存现状并呼吁大家保护动物
上周日,你和Sandy去了野生动物园,了解到很多野生动物的生存现状,你想在 Schl News letter 上发文呼吁同学们保护野生动物。请你就下面表格中的提示内容写一篇80词左右的短文。
审题：
人称：___________时态：___________
Last Sunday, Sandy and I went t the wildlife park.
We learnt that wild animals have nwhere t live and n fd t eat. (现状)That's because humans keep cutting dwn frests and taking up land and the living space fr wild animals gets smaller and smaller. (原因)As a result, we shuld take actin t imprve the envirnment and prtect wild animals. We can bth make laws and build mre nature reserves.(应对措施)
As students, we shuld always ask ur parents and relatives nt t buy any fur cats r eat the meat f wild animals. We shuld try t keep a balance between humans and animals.(作为学生如何做)
U6范文1：介绍中国的茶文化
作为中学生，我们应该了解茶并传播茶文化。国际友好交流学校线上论坛拟于下周五举行，本期论坛的主题为“茶文化”。假设你是论坛特邀嘉宾，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示，用英文写一篇短文，向国际友好交流学校介绍中国茶文化。
参考词汇：传播spread
审题：
人称：___________时态：___________
Chinese Tea Culture
Tea is nt nly gd fr health， （意义1）but als a key part f many cultures.（意义2）
Mst Chinese peple drink tea at any time f the day.（品茶的时间） We can drink tea and chat with ur family in the yard every weekend.It’s ur way f cnnecting.（品茶的方式1） We can als drink tea with ur friends at the party，（方式2） r enjy it n ur wn（方式3）.
I hpe mre peple can knw abut tea culture and spread it arund the wrld.（希望）
U6范文2：根据所给信息介绍某种植物-棉花
你所在的自然社团打算发布保护植物的相关海报，你负责有关棉花这一植物的介绍，请根据所给的棉花资料卡，向同学们科普这一植物。
审题：
人称：___________时态：___________
Hi, everyne. Tday, we can see cttn everywhere in ur life. Let’s learn mre abut it!(引出话题)
Cttn is ne f the mst cmmn plants in the natural wrld. It’s as white as snw and has thin stems and brad leaves. It lks sft like a clud. The grwth f cttn needs enugh sunlight, suitable water, and nutrients. Cttn is nt nly a plant, but als a symbl f histry. It has a lng histry f ver 5,000 years. Cttn is mre than a plant fr us. Peple use it in many ways. We use it t make clthes, fr example, T-shirts we wear in summer.It can als be used t fill tys, making them sft.(详细介绍棉花)
It’s n secret that cttn is a key part f ur life. What a wnderful plant!(总结棉花的重要性，赞美棉花)
U6范文3：介绍某种植物的用途和保护措施
《广州日报》收到外国读者的来信,信中说他们对广州的木棉树(kapk tree)很感兴趣,因此现在该报社在征求一篇介绍木棉树的文章,请你写一篇英语短文投稿。
内容包括:
1.木棉树在广州很常见;
2.用途(美化城市,花能制成药等);
3.保护措施(少砍树,多种树……)。
注意:1.词数为60左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名;4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:fruit(n.果实),medicine(n.药)
审题：
人称：___________时态：___________
Kapk Trees
Welcme t Natural Wrld! I am s glad t hear that many peple are interested in kapk trees.
Kapk trees are cmmn in Guangzhu.(木棉树在广州很常见) The kapk trees nt nly make the city beautiful, but als have many ther uses.Their flwers are useful in making medicine.(用途)
But the number f kapk trees is becming smaller and smaller.S we are ging t take actin t prtect them.First, we shuld cut dwn fewer trees and plant mre trees.Secnd, we shuld let peple knw abut the imprtance f the trees.With these actins, we may live in a better city.(保护措施)
U6范文4：介绍植物的重要性并呼吁大家保护植物
以“The imprtance f plants”为题写一篇英语短文，从三个方面谈论一 前下植物的重要性，并呼吁大家要爱护花草树木。
1.Fr peple:give us fd,medicine...
2.Fr animals:live in the frest,eat the fruit...
3.Fr the envirnment:help clean the air, cver the sil, stp the wind.
审题：
人称：___________时态：___________
As we all knw, plants are very imprtant fr humans, animals and the envirnment. Nw, let me intrduce the imprtance f plants t yu.(引出主题)
Fr peple, plants can be used in many ways. We can get a lt f fd frm plants. Sme f plants can be made int medicine and clthes.(对人类的重要性) What's mre, they are als imprtant fr animals.Many animals live in the frest and sme f them feed n plants.(对动物) Finally, trees and ther plants help clean the air, s we can breathe the fresh air every day. They can als cver the sil t stp the wind and water frm carrying the sil away.(对环境)
In a wrd, plants are s imprtant fr us that we shuld try ur best t prtect them.(总结)
七、期末综合作文解析
期末综合范文1
你身边应该有对你来说具有特殊意义的人吧。请以“My_______”为题用英语写一篇短文,描述某个对你来说很重要的人(包括性别、年龄、外貌、性格特征等),如你的家人、朋友、老师、同学等。
审题：
人称：___________时态：__________
My Grandma
There are many peple wh are special t me in my life.Let me tell yu the mst special persn——My grandma.(引出人物)
My grandma is ld and her hair is white. She is kind and she likes pink.(外貌+性格)She is special t me because we're like friends. She always helps me ut when I need help.
When I am with my grandma,we spend a lt f happy time tgether.My grandma knws many things, She is very smart. She likes watching news and she knws things arund the wrld. One thing she's best at is cking. She ften cks delicius fd fr me.I knw my grandma lves me and I lve her , t.(兴趣爱好等)

期末综合范文2
假如你是李华，你想参加学校正在举行的英语征文活动，活动主题为“我的校园生活”。征文内容要求积极向上，展示丰富多彩的校园活动。请根据以下提示，完成一篇征文。
审题：
人称：___________时态：__________
My Schl Life
My name is Li Hua. I am frm Class 1, Grade 7. Nw I wuld like t share my schl life with yu.(引出主题)
We have subjects like English, Chinese, Maths, Histry and s n. Amng all these subjects, my favrite ne is English.(介绍学科) We als have different activities t chse frm. Sme students like t play sprts, while thers prefer t jin clubs. I enjy reading, s I jin in the Reading Club.(俱乐部) I can have the chance t read mre bks with classmates. Peple in my schl are very friendly. Our teachers are very strict but als very nice. They usually take care f us and they wrk very hard t help us master the knwledge. Our classmates are very kind. We help each ther when we are in truble.(介绍同学+老师)
I think my schl life is very wnderful. I lve it very much.
期末综合范文3
假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友 David写一封信，讲述你周日一天的生活，并谈谈感受。
(1)周日早上，在公园闻花香，喂动物，听到了孩子们笑，救助了一只小猫。
(2)回到家后，认真完成作业。
(3)和朋友策划了一个生日派对，派对上欢声笑语。
(4)人们过来帮忙。
(5)你觉得…
要求:
(1)词数:80左右。
(2) 开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
审题：
人称：___________时态：__________
Be Thankful t Our Parents
Dear David,
Hw are yu? I'd like t share a stry with yu.(开篇问好)
On a sunny Sunday mrning, I tk a break and went t the park. I smelled smething different, a mix f flwers. I enjyed feeding the animals and heard children laughing. We fund a lst kitten and helped it. (周日上午的活动)
I wrked hard n my schl hmewrk. It was imprtant. After that, my friends and I planned a birthday party. We wanted t celebrate and relax tgether. At the party, we played and laughed a lt. (介绍派对)
The day was full f fun. I felt grateful fr the day and the friends with me. It was a day I will always remember.(总结)
Yurs,
Hua
期末综合范文4
现如今，世界上有很多珍稀动物濒临灭绝，比如熊猫、蓝鲸等。我们应该拯救这些野生动物，创造一个人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。假设你是李华，现在请你根据以下思维导图内容提示发一封电子邮件给你的朋友詹妮(Jenny)，介绍一下你最想保护的动物。
审题：
人称：___________时态：__________
Dear Jenny,
I'm glad t receive yur letter. My favurite animals are pandas. They are white and black. They like climbing trees and walking in the frests. They feed n bamb. They are very cute and lvely.(介绍最喜欢的动物)
But their situatin is becming very difficult. They are in danger. First, pandas dn't have many babies and baby pandas ften die. Secnd, pandas eat bamb, but the bamb frests are getting smaller and smaller.(介绍濒危的原因)
T prtect animals is t prtect urselves. S we shuld make a better life fr pandas. We can set up nature parks and plant mre bamb in these parks s that pandas can have enugh fd t eat. It is als a gd idea t raise mney fr them. I hpe everyne can d smething t prtect these cute animals..(保护建议)
Yurs
期末综合范文5
假如你是Chris,一名来自英国的交换生,目前正在中国学习和生活。请阅读下面这封来自你妈妈的电子邮件,并予以回复。
注意:(1)针对邮件中的问题作出回答,可适当发挥;
(2)邮件中不得出现真实的人名;
(3)词数不少于60,开头和结尾已给出不计人总词数。
审题：
人称：___________时态：__________
Dear Mum ,
I'm very happy t be in China as an exchange student. Life here is quite great fr me.(引出主题)
In China,it's cmmn t eat rice fr meals. And l enjy eating it a lt.I usually have meat, vegetables and rice fr lunch. But my favurite fd is dumplings.(介绍饮食)
Of all the subjects at schl, my favurite ne is Chinese.I have n classes at weekends and I can d what I like.Fr example,I usually visit different places f interest in China and taste the lcal fd.(介绍学科和周末活动)
The mst wnderful thing is that I have made a lt f friends here. Lin Ping is my new friend,He is tall and he is utging. And he always helps me with my study.(介绍朋友)
I really have a gd time here.
Yurs ,
Chris
十年后，你的生活会是什么样的呢?假如本期学校英语报的征文题目是“My Life in Ten Years”,请你根据下面的要点及要求，发挥想象，写一篇英语短文投稿。
要点：
1.你十年后会从事什么职业；
2.你十年后的生活会是什么样子；
3.为了过上想要的生活，你现在该怎么做。
要求：
1.文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2.词数 80 左右。
U4
词汇
节日
活动
时间
take place发生，举行
last 从……持续到……
fall n the fifteenth day f the eighth lunar mnth在农历八月十五
活动
celebrate庆祝 family reunins家庭团聚
get tgether聚在一起
have a big dinner吃一顿大餐
enjy the full mn欣赏满月
stand fr代表；象征
enjy delicius mn cakes享用美味的月饼
感受/
意义
imprtant重要的 meaningful有意义的
traditinal传统的
have a gd time/enjy neself 玩得开心
bring a lt f pleasure t us
给我们带来很多欢乐
make us feel warm in ur hearts
让我们心里感到温暖
U5
词汇
动物
大熊猫外貌
fat and hairy胖胖的，毛茸茸的 small ears小耳朵
black and white黑白相间的 shrt tail短尾巴
大熊猫特点
cute可爱的 strng强壮的 lazy懒惰的
eat bamb吃竹子 climb trees爬树
like sleeping喜欢睡觉
大熊猫濒危的原因
cut dwn trees砍伐树木
have few babies幼崽少
destry their hmes破坏它们的家园
in danger处在危险中
保护大熊猫的措施
try ur best t d sth.
尽我们最大的努力做某事
stp ding sth.停止做某事
prtect frests保护森林
build nature reserves建立自然保护区
care fr关爱
tell peple t d sth.告诉人们做某事
U6
词汇
植物
棉花的外形特
征
sft fibers 柔软纤维 white fluff 白色绒毛
brad leaves 宽阔叶片 thin stems细茎
hairy seeds 毛茸茸的种子 warm climate温暖气候
rich sil 肥沃土壤 dry weather 干燥天气
little rain 少雨 full sun/enugh sunlight 充足阳光
suitable water and nutrients 适宜的水分和营养物质
棉花的
用途
make clthes 制作衣服
prduce tys 生产玩具 fill pillws 填充枕头
treat→
give sb. a treat 招待某人
same→
have sth. in cmmn （with sb.）
（与某人）在某方面有共同之处
celebrate→
in celebratin f...为庆祝……
eat→
feed n...（动物）以……为食
decide→
make a decisin
=make up ne’s mind
use→
make the mst f sth. 充分利用某事物
thank→
be thankful fr...感谢……
happen→
take place发生，举行
happy→
bring a lt f pleasure t us

=have a gd time/enjy neself
imprtant→
mean a lt t sb. 对某人意义重大
breathe→
take a deep breath 深吸一口气
alne→
n ne's wn 单独；独自
favrite→
ne’s cup f tea 某人感兴趣的东西
healthy/unhealthy→
be in gd/pr health 身体好/差
talk→
have a chat with sb. = chat with sb.
think→
in ne’s view/pinin在某人看来
spend→
knck arund （在某处）悠闲地度过
请某人吃/喝某物→
treat sb. t sth.
对做某事感到震惊→
be shcked t d sth.
想要做某事→
feel like ding sth.
更喜欢（某人）做某事→
prefer （sb.） t d sth.
更喜欢做某事→
prefer ding sth.
意味着做某事→
mean ding sth.
打算做某事→
mean t d sth.
向某人挑战某事→
challenge sb. t sth.
对某人有耐心→
be patient with sb.
后悔做了某事→
regret ding sth.
决定做某事→
make a decisin t d sth.
=decide t d sth.
因...对某人心存感激→
be thankful t sb. fr ding sth.
在（做）某事上支持某人→
supprt sb. in （ding） sth.
要求某人做某事→
require sh.t d sth.
把某物送给某人→
send sb. sth.=send sth. t sb.
派遣/打发某人做某事→
send sb. t d sth.
尽我们最大的努力做某事→
try ur best t d sth.
停止做某事 →
stp ding sth.
告诉人们做某事→
tell peple t d sth.
最好做某事→
had better d sth.
一定要做某→
be sure t d sth
做某事怎么样→
hw abut ding sth
浪费时间做某事→
waste time (in) ding sth
为什么不做某事？→
Why dn’t yu d sth？
=Why nt d sth？
放弃（做）某事→
give up （ding） sth.
让某人做某事→
make sb d sth.
最好（不）做某事→
had better （nt） d sth.
习惯于……→
be/get used t ding sth.
过去曾经……→
used t d sth.
类别
单词/短语
并列
and和；又；而； 两者都……； nt als...不但……而且……； n the ne hand... n the ther hand ...一方面……另一方面……
转折
but但是； hwever 然而； while 然而； therwise 否则；不然
因果
s所以； because/because f/fr/since/as因为； therefre因此； s that 以便于； as a result结果是； as a result f由于
顺序
first(ly)/at first/first f all/t begin with首先secnd(ly)/then/after that/next 其次；
meanwhile/at the same time 同时； finally/lastly最后；
last but nt least最后但同样重要的是
递进
als 也； besides 而且； what’s mre更重要的是；
what’s wrse 更糟糕的是
观点
in my pinin/view/eyes/as fr me/frm my pint f view 在我看来；as we all knw众所周知； t be hnest坦诚地说
总结
n the whle 总的说来； in a wrd/all in all/in shrt 总而言之
其他
in ther wrds/that is t say换句话说；
in fact/as a matter f fact 事实上
给分范围
档次要求
13-15分
①书写工整,要点齐全
②语句通顺，逻辑合理
③语法、拼写无误 ④高级句式。
10-12分
能写出大部分要点,语句较通顺、完整,有个别语法、拼写错误,但不影响句意,书写工整。
7-9分
能写出部分要点,语句基本通顺、完整,有少量语法、拼写错误,但尚能达意,书写较工整。
4-6分
能写出个别要点,语句不够通顺、完整,语法、拼写错误较多,只有个别句子可读,书写不够工整。
0-3分
未能写出基本要点,语法、拼写错误多,不知所云,书写潦草。
外貌
黑白相间
特点
可爱、强壮，爱吃竹子
栖息地
中国四川、陕西等地
濒危原因
内因：幼崽不易存活
外因：人类破坏其生存环境
保护措施
停止砍伐树木、建立自然保护区
现状
数量增长，现在野外约1 900只
现状
无处栖息,无食可吃
原因
人类不断砍伐森林和侵占土地,野生动物的生存空间越来越小
应对措施
立法并多建自然保护区(reserve)
建议
作为学生…
名称
棉花
外形
花朵白色，茎细叶阔
质地
柔软
生长条件
充足的光照，适宜的水分和养料
历史
五千多年
用途
制作衣服；制作玩具等
What subjects d yu study?
What club(s) are yu in?
What are yur teachers and classmates like?
...
Dear Chris ,
Hw is everything ging?I’m really interested in yur life in China.
I knw Chinese peple usually eat rice fr meals. D yu like it? What d yu usually have fr lunch? What's yur favurite fd there?
What's yur favurite subject at schl?D yu have any activities at the weekend?By the way,yu said yu had a new friend there. What's yur friend like?Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs ,
MUM