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      这是一份高中英语2025届高考读后续写热点话题讲解练习(情节构思+主旨升华+实战演练)(个人成长+生活趣事),共4页。试卷主要包含了个人成长,生活趣事等内容,欢迎下载使用。
      一、个人成长
      【情节构思】
      第一步:成长前的苦恼(负面情绪塑造)
      第二步:成长过程中变化的心情(蜕变塑造)
      第三步:成长后的收获(喜悦+感激+升华)
      1.遇到困难/挑战时的消极情绪(发愁/无助/不公平/不情愿/失望)
      ①Bitter memries f the manager’s harish wrds came flding back t her.
      经理严厉言语的痛苦回忆涌上她的心头。
      ②Feeling lnely and helpless, I culdn’t eat r sleep.I had been weeping and missing my family.
      我孤单无助,吃不下饭,睡不着觉。我一直在哭泣,想念我的家人。
      ③Unwilling t hand in all my earnings, I was cnsumed by a mixture f sadness and disappintment.
      我不愿交出我所有的收入,我既悲伤又失望。
      2.成长过程中变化的心情(消极→积极)
      ①I realized I culd even be whmever I wanted t be.This taught me that I culd change myself.
      我意识到我可以成为我想成为的任何人。这让我明白,我可以改变自己。
      ②Inspired by him t cnquer my fear, Iwalked cnfidently twards the classrm, determined t make a change.
      我被他鼓励,克服了恐惧,我信心满满地走向教室,决心做出改变。
      ③I lve accepting a challenge, sticking t my gal and then achieving my galthrugh my wn effrts.
      我乐于接受挑战,坚持自己的目标,然后通过自己的努力达到目标。
      【主旨升华】
      1.It was thrugh the embarrassing experience that I learned nt t escape frm my duty and t keep a recrd f my mney, valuing every cent.
      正是通过这种尴尬的经历,我学会了不逃避职责,并记账,珍惜每一分钱。
      2.This prved a rewarding experience, wherehe nt nly harvested jy, but als appreciated the value f effrts.
      事实证明,这是一次有益的经历,他不仅收获了快乐,还意识到了努力的价值。
      3.What happened tday made me realize thatfrgiveness is a kind f virtue.
      今天发生的事情让我意识到宽恕是一种美德。
      4.In the same way,we need struggle t grw strng and survive.We must g thrugh sme sufferings if we really wish t spread ur wings and fly.
      同样地,我们需要奋斗来变强大和生存。如果我们真的想展翅飞翔,就必须经历磨难。
      【实战演练】
      阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。(临沂高三一模)
      Palm trees seemed t speed by the car windw.Eight-year-ld Katrina began t get nervus, the way she always did in new surrundings.She felt a thin shine f sweat abve her lip in spite f the car’s cl air.“The aquarium wn’t be crwded, I bet, and peple are gnna ntice me.I hate wearing this prsthesis leg (假肢).”She felt pinpricks f tears behind her eyes.“Nt being nrmal is the wrst.”
      Entering the Clearwater Marine Aquarium, arund a crner f a tank, she nticed an animal that lked unusual.“Is that a dlphin with stump (残肢) instead f a tail?” she asked an aquarium staff.He ndded.“Yes, that’s Winter.She’s a very special dlphin.”“What happened t her?”“This girl dlphin was fund ff the cast f Flrida, caught in a crab trap.The rpes frm the trap cut ff the bld circulatin t her tail.S she lst her tail.” Katrina caught her breath.“She’s just like me.She’s just like me.”“But she struggled t survive.Nw she wears a prsthetic tail part f the day t help her swim like a dlphin’s suppsed t swim.” the staff cntinued, “Every day, Winter shws us anything is pssible if we believe in urselves.”
      Katrina felt her heartstring was tuched.She waved at Winter.Lking at Katrina, Winter raised her flipper (鳍), came t her and lifted her head.“She’s swimming right int my arms,” Katrina said tearfully.They made eye cntact.She seemed t be speaking t Katrina:We’re the same.
      Back hme, all Katrina talked abut was Winter.Fr tw weeks, she cried and begged her mther t take her back t Clearwater.
      Unfrtunately, anther blw hit Katrina.She fell n the hardwd flr at hme and brke her the ther leg.Katrina was in cnstant leg nerve pain.After a thrugh examinatin, the dctr explained bad news that she wuld need anther surgery n her leg.Years f a living hell came back t her.She started fearing surgery again and refused t take any.
      注意:续写词数应为150左右。
      Katrina’s mm decided t take her back t Clearwater.
      Finally came the day when Katrina was in the hspital again.
      [原文大意]文章讲述了一只腿装了假肢的女孩Katrina因为害怕别人异样的目光而容易感到紧张和自卑。在Clearwater海洋水族馆,她发现了一只尾巴也是假肢的海豚Winter,她仍然努力地像其他有尾巴的海豚一样游泳。Winter每天努力向人们证明“只要相信自己,任何事都有可能”。不幸的是,Katrina再次摔倒,不得不在另一条腿上做手术,Katrina拒绝再次手术。
      [写作指导]
      1.段落续写
      (1)由第一段首句可知,此段描写Katrina的妈妈想要为了鼓励女儿,带她去海洋馆看看Winter。Katrina受到了鼓舞,决定接受手术。
      (2)由第二段首句可知,此段描写Katrina勇敢地进了手术室。在手术成功后,Katrina在家人的鼓励和Winter的启发下,勇敢自信地面对生活,发现世界变得更加美好了。
      2.续写线索:去水族馆——受到鼓舞——决定接受手术——积极面对生活——发现世界的美好
      [参考范文]
      Katrina’s mm decided t take her back t Clearwater.On arriving at Clearwater, Katrina culdn’t wait t see Winter, the lvely dlphin that cmfrted her and bsted her md.As Katrina’s mther pushed the wheelchair t Winter, she raised her flipper, came t her and lifted her head (动作链).Katrinaculdn’t hld back her excitement.Lking at the girl (现在分词短语作状语), Winter seemed t say,“G and take the surgery.” Katrina abslutely knew what that caring eyes were cnveying (宾语从句), s she decided t keep a mre ptimistic state f mind.
      Finally came the day when Katrina was in the hspital again.Thugh feeling nervus and afraid f the pain the surgery might bring (省略句;省略关系词的定语从句),Katrina wuld face it bravely.The peratin was a success.Her mther tk her t Clearwater the day she was discharged frm hspital.Inspired by Winter’s swimming like a nrmal dlphin (过去分词短语作状语),Katrina practiced hard t walk.Her cnfidence has been imprved as she gradually recvered.Katrina has n idea what the future hlds (同位语从句) but she will d anything t have a better lk at this wnderful wrld.
      二、生活趣事
      【情节构思】
      第一步:矛盾塑造(尴尬+紧张)
      第二步:快乐结局塑造(感激+开心+升华)
      1.进退两难的困境和纠结情绪
      ①A wave f guilt and regret swept away her jy.Feelingshe didn’t deserve the prize, she had a sleepless night fr the first time in her life.
      一阵愧疚和后悔将她的快乐一扫而光。由于觉得自己不配获奖,她有生以来第一次失眠了。
      ②Befre she gt sick, she didn’t think a lt abut her bird.Nw Dra realized she shuldn’t selfishly take away its freedm fr her wn enjyment.(2023·泰安高三一模)
      在她生病之前,她没怎么想过她的鸟。现在朵拉意识到她不应该为了自己的快乐而自私地剥夺它的自由。
      2.做出正确选择的动作、结果和情感描写
      ①Tina,blushing with embarrassment, started t stammer ut the truth.
      蒂娜尴尬得满脸通红,开始结结巴巴地说出真相。
      ②Had he had a little mre patience, he wuld have succeeded earlier.
      如果他再耐心一点,他早就成功了。
      ③Handing backthe cell phne t her and seeing her smile happily, Keith realized that hnesty was indeed the best plicy. 基思将手机还给她,看到她开心地笑,他意识到诚实确实是上策。
      【主旨升华】
      1.Dad’s calm smile reflected his mtt,“All’s well with us, never fear.”(2021·浙江1月卷)
      爸爸平静的微笑反映了他的座右铭:“一切都好,永远不要害怕”。
      2.It was the first time that I had truly realized the meaning f patience.
      这是我第一次真正意识到耐心的意义。
      3.We usually take life fr granted, but the stry shws us that there is always beauty in ur heart.
      我们通常认为生活是理所当然的,但这个故事告诉我们,在我们的心中永远有美丽。
      4.The wrds brught warmth t my heart and tears t my eyes.I felt lucky t be a part f this mischievus yet lving family.(2021·浙江1月卷)
      这些话让我心中满是温暖,也让我热泪盈眶。我很幸运能成为这个淘气而又充满爱的家庭的一员。
      【实战演练】
      阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。(湖南省部分学校4月模拟)
      My ten-year-ld self lved summertime.The best part f summer was the cmmunity pl.Everyne was there.
      We didn’t have a care in the wrld.Our biggest cncern was which ne f us culd hld her breath underwater the lngest.We didn’t care what we lked like r wh was cl.I never nce thught abut hw I lked in a swimsuit r if my hair lked gd.I was aware that I wasn’t super-thin like sme f the ther girls I saw, but I didn’t care.
      And then ne day, I was taking my turn n the diving bard with all the ther kids.I jumped in, flated freely t the tp and swam ver t the ladder t make my way ut f the pl.I nticed a girl standing at the tp f the ladder, s I swam slwly, giving her time t mve.I didn’t knw her.She lked cute and thin.
      But instead f mving, a strange thing happened.This girl leaned ver the pl and said t me, “They dn’t allw beached (搁浅的) whales in this pl.”
      Beached whales? I sn realized that I was the beached whale.Suddenly, my cl blue swimsuit didn’t cver enugh.I gt ut f the pl quickly and wrapped my twel arund my bdy, feeling like I was ging t thrw up.Frm that mment n, I was aware f my size.
      Clthes became a hrrible dream, and I struggled thrugh my teen years and int adulthd.I cried ver clthes that didn’t fit.My heart had always hated the little girl by the pl, wh tk the cnfidence ut f my life until I gt my daughter, Lisa.
      One day I dressed my little girl in beautiful clthes and put a bw (蝴蝶结) n her head, but she refused because she liked t be cmfrtable.Is sciety interested in cmfrt? Hwever, when I stared at her, I suddenly realized hw beautiful she was, even thugh she was cvered in mud.
      注意:续写词数应为150左右。
      When Lisa was ten, I came acrss a picture f myself when I was ten and I shwed it t her.
      Then I tld her the stry f the little girl by the pl.
      [原文大意]作者小时候在泳池边游泳,被同龄的女孩嘲笑体型过胖,由此失去自信。直到后来,作者的小女儿改变了作者的态度。
      [写作指导]
      1.段落续写
      (1)由第一段首句可知,此段可描写女儿丽萨看到自己的照片后的反应,以及给作者带来的积极影响。
      (2)由第二段首句可知,此段可描写女儿听完后的反应,小女儿对作者的安慰,以及作者自身的感悟。
      2.续写线索:给女儿看照片——女儿的反应——作者回忆过去——给女儿讲述自己10岁时发生的事情——女儿的反应——作者的感想
      [参考范文]
      When Lisa was ten, Icame acrss a picture f myself when I was ten and I shwed it t her.“That’s me!”she said with a smile.But I shk my head.We culd have been twins.Yes, she lked just like me, and I thught she was a beautiful and smart girl, full f cnfidence (形容词短语作状语).What a pity that I had missed myself.The fat little girl in the pht lked at me, as if she was reminding me that I was nt a beached whale, but a beautiful little girl with dreams and gifts (方式状语从句;宾语从句).Smething started t stir in my mind.
      Then I tld her the stry f the little girl by the pl.After hearing my stry, Lisa was a bit cnfused abut my life’s being shaped because f a hateful little girl’s wrds.But I explained quickly that I had already frgiven her.Anyhw, that was life, and yu must find yurself nce again.With this, Lisa smiled at me, “Oh,it seems that I’m a really lucky daughter (表语从句), because I have a beautiful gd mther.Time t swim nw!”Watching her lively figure ging away(现在分词短语作状语), I strngly believed that life is nt measured by the size f ur clthes but by wh we are (;宾语从句).

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