人教版八年级下册英语 Unit 3 Could you please clean your room？满分话题作文范文与解析 学案

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人教版八年级下册英语 Unit 3 Could you please clean your room？满分话题作文范文与解析 学案1．假设你是丽莎(Lisa),某英文报刊正在就“Should Teenagers Help Their Parents with Housework”这一话题展开征文活动，请你根据自己的体会，写一篇短文向该报社投稿。提示：1. What’s your opinion (观点) about it?2. Why should teenagers help their parents with housework?3. What are the advantages (好处) of doing housework?要求：1. 语句通顺、符合逻辑，可适当发挥。2. 不少于70词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sir or Madam,I think that _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours truly,Lisa【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,I think that teenagers like me should help our parents with housework.First, doing housework makes us independent. We can’t depend on our parents all the time. So we should learn how to take care of ourselves now.Second, doing housework is a kind of physical exercise. It helps us stay healthy and strong. Third, since we live in a house with our parents, it’s fair for us to work together and make the house clean and comfortable. All in all, doing housework helps us to learn life skills and understand the idea of fairness. So I think teenagers should learn to enjoy doing it with our parents.                                                                                                Yours                                                                                          Lisa【解析】【详解】本文是根据自己的体会，写一篇短文向该报社，所以句子的主语用第一人称，句子的谓语动词用一般现在时，所写的句子应该符合英语语法，要使用高级的句式和词汇。短文用了一些短语和句式，如：help sb with sth帮助某人做某事；take care of 照顾；it is+形容词+for sb to do sth,make sth +形容词；enjoy doing sth喜欢做某事。用了that，since引导的从句，增加了文章的亮点。2．学生做家务不仅可以培养劳动意识，而且有利于掌握一些生活技能。假设学校正在开展“珍爱亲情，我爱做家务”的征文活动，请你针对该话题写一篇英语短文。要求:1.条理清楚，语义连贯，句式规范。2.词数100左右，文意开头已经给出，不计入总词数。As a middle school student, I think doing housework is good for me.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文As a middle school student, I think doing housework is good for me.First, doing housework can not only develop my ability to look after myself well but also make me independent. After all, I can’t depend on others all my life.Second, doing housework can help share my parents’work. It can also improve the relationship between my parents and me.Finally, doing housework can keep my room tidy, so I can have a comfortable place to live and study.In short, it’s really good for students to do housework at home.【解析】【详解】题干解读：题目要求对学生做家务这一话题，发表自己的看法，讲述学生做家务的一些好处。这是一个话题作文，题目中只给出了写作的话题，而具体的写作内容，需要学生们自己发挥想象力进行详细地阐述。短文应使用一般现在时、第一人称来叙述。例文点评：例文写得非常优秀，文章是总分总的结构，层次清晰。第一段点明文章主旨，下面从三个方面叙述了做家务的好处，使用了First, Second和Finally，叙述详细、清晰。最后用一句话作总结。句式结构文章，符合英语的表达需要。语法规范、语言准确。高分亮点：短语：As a middle school student；is good for；look after；After all；depend on；all my life；keep my room tidy；have a comfortable place to live and study；In short。句型：I think doing housework is good for me.；First, doing housework can not only develop my ability to look after myself well but also make me independent；Finally, doing housework can keep my room tidy, so I can have a comfortable place to live and study.；In short, it’s really good for students to do housework at home3．请你根据提示及要求，以Let’s help our parents do chores为题，写一篇英文倡议书。要点提示： （1）父母工作繁忙，我们应该分担家务；（2）我们可以做的家务有：整理床铺、打扫房间，洗衣服，洗餐具、倒垃圾等。写作要求： （1）包括所有要点提示，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（2）80词左右 (开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。Let’s help our parents do choresDear students,Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doing chores is not difficult, but it means a lot. From now on, let’s help our parents do chores.【答案】例文Let’s help our parents do choresDear students,Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them. Our parents are always busy with work. They are tired after work, but they still have to do chores. If we help them do some chores, they will have more time to rest. And sharing housework can help us understand our parents better. So we should help them do housework as much as we can. In fact, we can do lots of housework at home. For example, we could make the bed, clean up the room, wash clothes, do the dishes and take out the trash.Doing chores is not difficult, but it means a lot. From now on, let’s help our parents do chores.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“Let’s help our parents do chores”为题，根据写作要点写一篇倡议书，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：首先第一部分，指明要帮助父母做家务的原因以及做家务的好处，此处人称主要为第三人称；其次第二部分，谈谈我们日常生活中可以做的家务有哪些，此处人称主要为第一人称；最后总结感受，此处文章已给出结尾。全文时态主要为一般现在时，行文时要涵盖要点提示，表达准确，思路清晰，层次分明。4．在一堂英语课上, 老师组织全体同学开展有关“做家务活”的小组调查活动。假设下表是你所做的小组调查记录, 请你根据记录信息, 用英语向全班同学进行汇报。要求: 1. 将表格信息全部用上。2. 适当发挥, 谈谈你对做家务活的看法。3. 词数: 60～80个。(开头及结尾已给出, 不计入总词数)Dear class, Good morning! Now let me report the discussion work in our group.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thanks for listening!【答案】Dear class,Good morning! Now let me report the discussion work in our group. Li Ming cleans up rooms at weekends and Lin Mei likes cooking dinner with her mother. Wang Jie sometimes washes clothes for her family. As for me, I usually help my father water the flowers. In my opinion, it is necessary for us students to do some chores. By doing chores, we can help our parents and understand them better. We’ll also learn to take care of ourselves. Besides, we can relax ourselves from hard work and develop our abilities. That’s all. Thanks for listening!【解析】【详解】在一堂英语课上, 老师组织全体同学开展有关“做家务活”的小组调查活动。假设下表是你所做的小组调查记录, 请你根据记录信息, 用英语向全班同学进行汇报。注意文中使用一般现在时态，第一段主语用第三人称单数，最后一段用第一人称，写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化。另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅。【点睛】作者写作时，还使用了较为丰富的句型，如Wang Jie sometimes washes clothes for her family；In my opinion, it is necessary for us students to do some chores.这些给文中增色不少。5．假如你是李明，下表是你所做的一项关于“做家务活”的讨论记录，请你根据这个记录用英语向全班同学做一个汇报。提示：1.汇报内容：你和同学所做的家务活；你对做家务活的看法；2.词数：80左右，汇报的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear class,Good morning! I`m Li Ming. Now let me report the discussion about housework in our group. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thanks for listening!【答案】Dear class,Good morning! I`m Li Ming. Now let me report the discussion about housework in our group. Wu Jun cleans up rooms at the weekend and Jia Mei likes cooking dinner with her mother. Wang Ping sometimes washes clothes for her family. As for me, I usually help my father water the flowers.In my opinion, it is necessary for us students to do some housework. By doing it, we can help our parents and understand them better. We’ll also learn to take care of ourselves. Besides, we can relax ourselves from hard work and develop our abilities. That’s all. Thanks for listening!【解析】【详解】这是一篇材料作文，也是一篇演讲稿。假如你是李明，下表是你所做的一项关于“做家务活”的讨论记录，请你根据这个记录用英语向全班同学做一个汇报。本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时。仔细阅读提示和要点、注意事项。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥，适当使用连词，叙述的条理性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲，提纲包括所有提示要点。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：尊敬的同学们：早上好！我是李明。现在让我报告一下我们小组关于做家务的讨论。吴军周末打扫房间，贾梅喜欢和妈妈一起做饭。王平有时为家人洗衣服。至于我，我通常帮我父亲浇花。在我看来，我们学生有必要做些家务。通过这样做，我们可以帮助我们的父母，更好地理解他们。我们也会学会照顾自己。此外，我们可以放松自己，从艰苦的工作和发展我们的能力。就这些。谢谢你的聆听！【点睛】这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，时态运用正确，叙述清楚条里，语句通顺，意思连贯，是一篇不错的文章。学以致用，运用了重要句型和短语有：As for me/ In my opinion/ it is necessary for us students to do some housework./ Besides, we can relax ourselves from hard work and develop our abilities.等。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。6．假如英语老师想知道你们班全体同学做家务的情况，作为班长，你为此进行了一次调查。请根据下面的调查结果，用英语写一份80词左右的调查报告。要求：1.语句通顺，行文流畅；2．必须包含表格中所给内容，可适当发挥。【答案】There are thirty－two students in our class.Most of us do shores at home.Eighteen students clean their living rooms every day.They think it's very interesting.Eight students make their beds after they get up in the morning.They hate doing it.They say it's boring.Four students enjoy washing clothes and folding clothes.They think they're relaxing.Only two students don't do any chores at home.I think it's bad for them.They should spend some time on chores and learn to be independent.【解析】【详解】这是一篇材料作文，根据表格中的调查内容，给英语老师介绍一下调查结果。时态为一般现在时。文章开头使用there be句型介绍班级人数，然后引入话题，多数学生在家都会做家务。接下来根据表格内容，逐个介绍调查结果即可，包括人数，所做家务的内容，笑脸表示喜欢like，哭脸表示不喜欢hate，然后说明其原因。最后谈谈自己的观点。同时选择合适的连接词或过渡句，使文章具有一定的连贯性。NameChoresLi MingClean up roomsLin MeiHelp Mom cook dinnerWang JieWash clothesIWater the flowersNamesHouseworkWu JunClean up rooms at weekJia MeiHelp mother cook dinnerWang PingWash clothesI……StudentsChoresLikes or dislikesReason18clean the living roominteresting8make the bedboring4wash clothes，fold clothesrelaxing2………