读后续写 警察叔叔的惊喜:艾伦的七岁生日派对 讲义-湖南省长沙市实验中学2023-2024学年高一下学期期末考试英语试题-A4
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这是一份读后续写 警察叔叔的惊喜:艾伦的七岁生日派对 讲义-湖南省长沙市实验中学2023-2024学年高一下学期期末考试英语试题-A4,共4页。试卷主要包含了续写词数应为150个左右;等内容,欢迎下载使用。
After reading cl stries abut plice fficers slving mysteries, Allen Miller thught the plice were awesme, hping t becme ne f them! S, when he had t chse a theme fr his seventh birthday party—he went with his favrite: the plice! And all he wanted fr his birthday party was a mdel plice car. He excitedly invited sme f his friends and anxiusly awaited the day. Unfrtunately, nne f them culd make it t the party due t varius reasns,
Allen’s mm Rachel wrestled with the challenging decisin: shuld she cancel the party and save Allen the embarrassment f an empty party rm? He had been lking frward t the party and talking abut it daily, s it wuld break his heart t cancel it.
Officer Frank Smith, wh had already planned with Rachel and agreed t shw up at the party, heard frm Rachel that it might be canceled due t lw attendance. That’s when he decided t save the day—he is a plice fficer after all! His duty is t serve and prtect, and he decided t prtect Allen frm having a bad day, and serve him the mst amazing seventh birthday party! Officer Smith gt the whle lcal plice t jin in. “We like t be invlved in ur cmmunity. It’s nt just abut enfrcing (执行) the law. We like t be there in the gd times as well,” he explained t Rachel.
On the day f Allen’s party, Officer Smith picked up Rachel and Allen in his plice car. The by didn’t knw where they were ging, but was excited. They stpped at Twn Hall, and fficer Smith led them int the meeting rm where a grup f plicemen were waiting t wish Allen a happy birthday.
注意;
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
There, a party was waiting fr him.
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After they enjyed the cake, Officer Smith tk ut a gift bag.
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【解析】
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文,以人物为线索。Allen很喜欢警察,所以他为自己的七岁生日派对选择了警察主题,并且想要一个警车模型作为生日礼物。但是他的朋友由于各种原因而不能在那天为他庆生。为了不让他失望,警官Frank Smith和Allen的妈妈计划为Allen准备一个独特的生日派对。在生日那天Frank Smith带着Allen和妈妈进入市政厅,一群警察为Allen庆生,他还收到了警车模型。这些当地英雄用小小的善举激励了这个男孩。
在原文中,有几处伏笔为续写部分提供了线索和基础:
Allen对警察的喜爱:原文提到Allen读了关于警察破案的酷故事后,觉得警察很酷,希望自己也能成为其中一员。这为续写中警察们为他举办的生日派对提供了情感基础。
生日派对的主题选择:Allen选择了他最喜欢的警察主题作为生日派对的主题,这为续写中警察们能够参与并带来相关主题装饰和礼物提供了线索。
朋友们无法参加派对:原文提到Allen的朋友们由于各种原因无法参加派对,这为续写中警察们介入并改变派对氛围提供了情境背景。
警察的社区参与:原文中提到警察不仅仅是执法,也喜欢在社区的好时光中出现。这为续写中警察们不仅仅是作为嘉宾出席,而是积极参与派对的组织和举办提供了依据。
在续写中,这些伏笔得到了回应:
警察主题的派对:续写中描述了警察们如何将派对房间装饰成警察主题,包括气球、横幅、蛋糕和模型警车,这些都是对Allen喜爱的回应。
警察们的参与:续写中警察们不仅出席了派对,还带来了礼物,参与了游戏,甚至教Allen如何正确敬礼,这些都是对警察愿意参与社区活动和支持居民的回应。
朋友们缺席的反转:续写中通过警察们的参与和精心准备的派对,将原本可能因为朋友们缺席而变得尴尬的派对转变为一个难忘的庆祝活动,这是对朋友们无法参加的情境的反转。
警察与社区的联系:续写中通过警察们的行为和礼物,展现了他们与社区的紧密联系,以及他们愿意在居民需要时提供支持和帮助,这是对原文中提到的警察社区参与的深化。
【详解】1. 段落续写:
①由续写第一段首句“在那里,一个派对正在等着他。”可知,第一段可以描写生日派对上的情形。
②由续写第二段首句“他们享用蛋糕后,Smith警官拿出一个礼品袋。”可知,第二段可以描写Allen收到了警官送的警车模型,这些警官用小小的善举激励了这个男孩。
2. 续写线索:Allen进入会议室——一群警察为Allen庆祝生日——Allen收到了警车模型的礼物——Allen非常感动
【答案】
There a party was waiting fr him. The mment Allen stepped inside, a chrus f “Happy Birthday” filled the meeting rm, and he fund himself surrunded by lts f plice fficers hlding ballns. Officer Smith intrduced him t all the fficers, wh gave him high fives. Allen was thrilled, and his eyes sparkled with excitement as he lked at the grand plice-themed cake. As Allen cut int the cake with the help f his mm, the rm erupted int cheers and laughter, adding t the jyful atmsphere.
After they enjyed the cake, fficer Smith tk ut a gift bag. “It’s fr yu.” He presented the delicately wrapped parcel t Allen, wh was stunned by the surprise. “Ww, a mdel plice car! It lks exactly like the ne we came here in! Thank yu!” Officer Smith smiled, “Anytime, Allen.” Allen hugged Officer Smith and thanked him again fr making the therwise crushing disappintment his time t shine. It was the lcal heres wh helped by being part f the cmmunity and inspiring the yung sul in small but effective ways.
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There, a party was waiting fr him. The rm was transfrmed int a wnderland f blue and white ballns, with a huge "Happy Birthday Allen" banner hanging at the back. The plicemen, all dressed in their unifrms, greeted Allen with big smiles and a rund f applause. In the center f the rm std a beautifully decrated plice-themed cake, and n each table, there were mdel plice cars, just like the ne Allen had wished fr. The surprise n Allen's face was priceless, and his eyes sparkled with jy as he realized his dream party had cme true. The plicemen engaged in games with Allen, played catch with him, and even taught him hw t salute prperly. The rm was filled with laughter and cheer, making it an unfrgettable celebratin fr the yung by.
After they enjyed the cake, Officer Smith tk ut a gift bag. With a flurish, he presented it t Allen, wh eagerly pened it t find a miniature plice car that lked just like the nes the fficers used. There were als a plice badge, a small flashlight, and a certificate f appreciatin fr being the yungest hnrary member f the lcal plice frce. Allen's face lit up with pride and gratitude. The fficers then gathered arund him fr a grup pht, capturing the mment frever. As the party came t an end, Allen hugged Officer Smith and thanked him fr the best birthday ever. The bnd between the cmmunity and its plice frce was strengthened that day, and Allen's dream f becming a plice fficer was nurtured by the genuine care and supprt f thse wh served t prtect.
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There, a party was waiting fr him. The mment they stepped int the rm, Allen's eyes widened in amazement. The entire plice frce had cme tgether t create a festive atmsphere, with plice-themed decratins adrning the walls and a life-sized cutut f a plice car fr pht pprtunities. A table was laden with his favrite snacks and treats, and in the crner, a stack f wrapped gifts awaited him. The fficers, seeing Allen's excitement, culdn't help but smile. They had all cme t make his day special, shwing him that even in the face f disappintment, cmmunity and camaraderie culd turn things arund.
After they enjyed the cake, Officer Smith tk ut a gift bag. He handed it t Allen with a warm smile, saying, "Happy birthday, Allen! We've gt smething special fr yu." Inside the bag, Allen fund an exact replica f a plice car that he culd assemble himself. There was als a plice hat, a whistle, and a set f stickers featuring varius plice equipment. But the mst tuching gift was a hand-written nte frm each fficer, expressing their supprt and encuragement fr his dream. Tuched by the heartfelt gesture, Allen beamed with happiness. The party cntinued with stries frm the fficers abut their experiences, and Allen listened with rapt attentin, his dream f becming a plice fficer burning brighter than ever befre. It was a birthday celebratin that nt nly brught jy t Allen but als served as a testament t the strng bnd between the plice and the cmmunity they serve.
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