专题11 书面表达20篇-2023-2024学年八年级英语下学期期末易错题特训（译林版）

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一、书面表达
1．假如你是李华，一名八年级的学生。你的美国笔友Ryan来信询问你的学习、生活以及人生规划方面的情况，请阅读来信并回复。
要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不能出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。
Dear Ryan,
It’s great t hear frm yu． __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
2．每年6月12日为盱眙国际龙虾节。为了笑拥八方来客，盱眙县政府倡导市民做力所能及的事，让盱眙更有烟火气更具人情味。作为盱眙的一份子，请你根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。
提示：
1．盱眙是一座拥有悠久历史的城市，70万人口；
2．保护环境方面：…… （不少于2点）
3．好市民方面：…… （不少于2点）
4．做志愿者方面：…… （不少于2点）
5． …… （不少于2点）
要求:
1．短文必须包括所有内容要点，可以适当发挥1—2点；
2． 80~100词，开头与结尾已给出，不计算在总词数内；
3．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息。
参考词汇：Xuyi Lbster Festival 盱眙龙虾节 pening ceremny 开幕式
Xuyi Lbster Festival has becme mre and mre ppular all ver the wrld． Lts f visitrs cme t ur city．
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Welcme t ur city!
3．《21世纪英文报》以“A jurney f a thusand miles begins with a single step”（千里之行始于足下）为题向中学生征集优秀作品，请你用英文完成一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1．你对谚语的理解；
2．你生活中的一个事例（如：运动，乐器，家务，学习等）；
3．你的感悟。
注意：
1．词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总数；
2．内容涵盖要点，可适当发挥；
3．文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
A jurney f a thusand miles begins with a single step
Have yu heard f the saying “a jurney f a thusand miles begins with a single step”? It means that
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4．八（1）班的同学将举行演讲比赛。演讲的主题是一年来自己学习和生活上的成长与变化。假设你是David，请准备100字左右的演讲稿参加比赛，具体内容如下：
要求：
（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
（3）词数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Hell, everyne． I'm David frm Class 1, Grade 8． Back t the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lt and made great prgress in sme ways．
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Thanks fr yur listening!
5．你们学校一直倡导“环保生活，从我做起”，准备成立学校志愿服务队(vluntary team)，招募学生环保志愿者。假如你是李华，请用英语给服务队的负责人写一封电子邮件，申请成为其中一员。
内容包括：
1． What d yu think f ging green?
2． What actin d yu usually take t g green?
3． What will yu d t spread（传播）the idea f ging green if yur are in the team?
注意：
1．词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
3．文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Dear Chairpersn,
Thank yu fr reading my letter． I wuld like t
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I’m lking frward t yur reply．
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
6．为培养青少年责任意识，提高青少年综合素养，学校英语俱乐部发起题为“Let’s take actin!”的倡议活动。请根据下列提示，选择其中两个方面，写一份倡议书投稿。
注意事项：
1．词数：90词左右文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3．文章必须包含所选两个方面的全部要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Let’s take actin!
We teenagers are the master f the future．
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7．假如你是 Dustin，是八年级六班的学生，请你以“Dn’t be afraid t fail”为话题，结合自己生活和学习中的相关经历以及个人感悟写一篇演讲稿，为全校师生做演讲。
参考词汇：failure n．失败
要求：
1．文章条理清楚，行文连贯，100 词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2．文章中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear teachers and schlmates,
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That’s all fr my speech． Thank yu fr yur attentin．
8．八年级的学习生活即将结束，学校正在进行最佳共青团员 Cmmunist Yuth League member选拔，你作为代表推荐你们班的班长 Liu Ming 作为最佳共青团员候选人。根据以下信息，写一封推荐信给学校团支部。
注意：1．词数 90词左右。 文章首尾已给，不计入总词数。．
2．省略号部分适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear chairpersn,
I wuld like t recmmend Liu Ming, ur mnitr, as the best Cmmunist Yuth League member．
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I think Liu Ming is the best Cmmunist Yuth League member．I hpe yu agree with me．Yurs sincerely
Li Hua
9．青春是美好的，更是奋斗出来的。即将踏入毕业班的我们，该如何珍惜光阴，不负青春，过一个有意义的暑假呢？Teens英文报刊开辟了专栏“A meaningful summer hliday”。假如你是李华，请你结合下表提示，用英语写一篇文章向该栏目投稿，讲述你暑假计划的具体活动安排及其原因。要点如下：
注意∶
1．语句通顺，条理清晰，段落分明，书写工整。
2．词数 80 左右（不包括已给的内容）。
3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名等信息。
The summer hliday is cming． Hw can we spend a meaningful hliday?
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10．你是阳光中学八年级学生。上周六，你们班在校园里组织了一次爱心义卖活动，并将钱款捐给了 “希望工程”（Prject Hpe）。请你根据下表信息给学校英文报写一篇报道，简要介绍本次活动，并谈谈你的体会。
注意：1．词数80左右。报道已给出的部分（见答题卡）不计入总词数。
2．报道需包括上表所有信息，可适当发挥。
3．报道中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
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11．每个人在旅行中都有很多的收获和不同的体会。某英文网站正在开展主题为“My Favurite Place”的征文活动。请用英语为该网站写一篇短文，谈谈你旅游过的一个你最喜欢的地方，你在那里做了什么，以及最喜欢它的原因。
提示词语：enjy, taste, beauty, culture, special, unfrgettable（难忘的）
提示问题：● What is the favurite place yu have been t?
● What did yu d there?
●Why is it unfrgettable?
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12．八（9）班将举行一次主题班会，畅谈一年来自己的收获与变化。请为Tm 准备一份演讲稿，具体内容如下表：
要求：
1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯
2）必须包括提示中所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Hell, everyne． I’m Tm frm Class 9, Grade 8． Back t the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lt and made great prgress in many ways．
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Thanks fr listening!
13．“宿迁是我家，文明靠大家”，作为中学生，应积极参与文明建设（civilized city ）的建设。请根据以下提示，写一篇90词左右的短文。
1．尊敬老师，对人礼貌 2．乐于助人，友善待人
3．阅读经典，提升自我 4．遵守交通规则，不闯红灯
5．保护环境，垃圾分类，植树种花 6．……（自拟一点）
参考词汇：classics经典作品
Hw t make Suqian a civilized city
Suqian is nw trying t becme a civilized city． As students, what shuld we d? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
14．有人说，人与自然的交流才能开启生命的智慧。人要像保护眼睛一样保护自然环境，要像对待生命一样对待自然环境。作为中学生，我们也可以做出自己的努力。请你用英语写一篇以Ging green为题的演讲稿，文章必须包括以下要点。
要求：
1．内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
2．词数90个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3．表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Ging green
Dear ladies and gentlemen,
As we all knw, ur hmetwn Sihng has becme mre and mre beautiful than befre． Hwever, there are many things we can d t prtect the envirnment and build a green hme．
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That’s all． Thanks a lt fr yur attentin．
15．在八年级即将结束之际，八 (1) 班将举行一次主题班会，要求同学们谈谈一年来自己的收获与变化。请为Simn准备一份100字左右的英语演讲稿，具体内容如下：
Hell, everyne． I’m Simn． Back t the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lt and made great prgress in sme ways． _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________16．本周学校将举行英语演讲比赛，主题为“践行文明礼仪，创设最美校园”。你将代表班级参赛，请你根据以下信息写一篇英文演讲稿。
要求：
1．演讲稿内容包含表格中所有要点，省略部分适当发挥。
2．词数90词左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3．语义通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，字迹工整。
4．文中不得出现真实的姓名，校名及地名。
Dear teachers and classmates,
Tday, n behalf f my class, I will give a speech n “Gd manners make the nicest schl”． As a student,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
17．暑假快到了，面对即将到来的九年级，如何过一个充实而有意义的暑假呢？请你写一篇演讲稿，向你的同学介绍一下你的暑假计划。
要求：1．字数90-100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总数；
2．要点齐全，不要逐字翻译，可适当增加使文章连贯通顺。
Hw t have a meaningful summer hliday
Dear classmates, It is July nw． The summer hliday is cming． Hw t have a meaningful summer hliday? Tday, I’ll share my plan with yu．
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Wish yu all have a happy and meaningful summer hliday．
18．在繁忙的学习之余，我们的生活应是丰富多彩的。如何才能使我们的课余生活更有意义呢？请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文，谈谈作为中学生的你对此的看法并说明理由。
1．短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，并展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
2．词数在90字左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总数；
3．短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Hw t make ur free time mre meaningful?
Nwadays, we are usually busy with ur lessns, but we still have t make ur life clurful． Hw shuld we spend ur free time mre meaningfully?
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19．《论语》中说：“不学礼，无以立。”文明礼仪是我们学习、生活的根基，伴随我们成长。作为一名中学生，应将文明礼仪的种子厚植在内心深处，不断提升自身的文明素养。近期，你校将以“Be a student with gd manners”为题，组织学生开展讨论。请根据以下提示要点，用英语写一篇短文，表达观点。
参考词汇：尊重、尊敬respect
注意：1．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、和地名；
2．词数80左右，已给出的文字不计入总词数。
Be a student with gd manners
It is very imprtant t be a persn with gd manners in ur daily life． ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Take actin nw． Behave well!
20．地球是我们的家园，如果每个人都在生活方式上做出小小的改变，就会对我们的地球和后代有着不同的意义。请根据下表内容提示，以“What Can We D t G Green”为题，用英语写一篇倡议书，呼吁人们走进环保生活。
要求：
1．短文内容必须包含所给要点，并适当发挥；2．语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范； 3．文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名；4．词数80左右。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。参考词汇：electricity电
What Can We D t G Green
The earth is ur hme． It’s ur duty t prtect it． ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Dear Li Hua,
Hw are yu ding? Are yu excited t be a Grade 8 student? In America, we usually have a Secndary Schl Admissin Test in Grade Eight． Then we’ll jin a summer camp r take a trip during the hliday．
What abut yu? Hw d yu feel abut schl life in Grade 8? What’s yur plan fr the cming summer hliday? What is yur dream jb in the future?
Hpe t hear frm yu!
Yurs,
Ryan
过去
现在
学习
很少阅读
花时间读书，读书使我放松，因为……
环保
没有意识到环保的重要性
节约用电、用水的方式各举 1例
礼仪
等公交时插队
……
爱心
零用钱用在零食、电脑游戏上
……
展望未来
越来越好……
Manners
Vlunteering
Ging green
●While travelling
●While eating
●．．．
●In the cmmunity
●In sme charities
●．．．
●T save water
●T reduce pllutin
●．．．
理想远大
热爱祖国；热爱共青团，……
品质优秀
善良诚实；举止文明，……
学业优良
成绩优秀；兴趣广泛，……
能力超强
组织志愿者活动；积极参赛，成功获奖。
A meaningful summer hliday
reading
travelling
…
What yu did
What yu’ve learned
●hand ut leaflets
●sell things like…
●…
● dnate the mney
●cmmunicate with thers
●…
过去
现在
学习
读书少，花时间在……
喜欢读书，原因……
礼仪
插队、喧哗
举止文明……
爱心
不知道关心他人
参加慈善活动
展望未来

过去
现在
学习
做作业粗心，功课不好
认真听讲，对课程越来越喜欢了
业余生活
大部分业余时间听音乐，玩游戏
现在用来阅读，因为……
礼仪
乱扔垃圾，在公共场所大声喧哗
通过做……来保护环境，有礼貌……
展望未来
相信自己在九年级会……
Gd manners
at the schl gate．．．
in the dinning hall．．．
in class．．．
．．．
Bad manners
thrw rubbish, make t much nise．．．
Advice
．．．
学习安排：
制定计划，按时作业；多阅读，通过阅读可以……
运动安排：
每天锻炼一小时；（举例子）
兴趣安排：
花点时间做自己感兴趣的事；（举例子）
活动安排：
做志愿者（举例子）
在学校
尊重老师；对同学友善，互相帮助。
在家里
尊敬长辈；爱家人，自己事情自己做。
言谈举止
礼貌语言、餐桌礼仪……（各举一例）
行走或者骑车时遵守交通规则。
不在公共场所大声喧哗。
不乱扔垃圾，保持环境干净。
环境现状
1．地球的污染越来越严重，水和空气被污染。2．森林被砍伐。
环保措施
1．节约用水，刷牙时候关掉水龙头，淋浴少于十分钟；2．保护树木，使用纸的两面；3．节约用电，离开房间要关灯，电视或电脑不用的时候要关掉电源……（补充一点）
环保倡议
培养绿色的生活方式对我们很重要……（补充一点）
参考答案
1．
Dear Ryan,
It’s great t hear frm yu. I have a happy and meaningful schl life in Grade 8. I can take part in different kinds f activities with ur friends at schl. At the same time, we are busy with ur study. S I ften feel tired as well as excited.
I want t make a detailed plan t make gd use f my summer hliday. First, I will jin a study grup t help me study mre efficiently. Grup members will wrk tgether t finish the schlwrk and d a lt f reading. Secnd, I wuld like t pay a visit t Shanghai Disneyland fr abut 3 days because I am a big fan f Mickey Muse and Snw White. Third, I will d sme vluntary wrk fr my cmmunity center, such as caring fr the kids in the neighburhd.
As fr my future, I want t be an eye dctr t help mre peple with eye prblems. T realize my dream, I shuld learn t be careful and study hard.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。首先介绍自己过着快乐而有意义的八年级的学校生活；
第二步，从学习、生活以及人生规划方面具体阐述；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②at the same time同时
③be busy with忙于做某事
④make gd use f充分利用
[高分句型]
①Secnd, I wuld like t pay a visit t Shanghai Disneyland fr abut 3 days because I am a big fan f Mickey Muse and Snw White.(because引导原因状语从句)
②T realize my dream, I shuld learn t be careful and study hard.(动词不定式作目的状语)
2．
Xuyi Lbster Festival has becme mre and mre ppular all ver the wrld. Lts f visitrs cme t ur city. Xuyi is a city with a lng histry and a ppulatin f 700,000.
First f all, we keep the envirnment clean and fllw the traffic rules when in public. Next, it’s a gd chice t live green. Fr example, we chse public transprt, ride bicycles t get arund r recycle water at hme. At the same time, there are sme things that we can’t d. Firstly, it’s nt right t drp litter everywhere. Secndly, we behave plitely instead f saying bad wrds. As a gd citizen, we can als be vlunteers r scial wrkers t help thers in need. What’s mre, we learn t separate waste int different grups t help reduce the pllutin.
Welcme t ur city!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，介绍这座城市的背景；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“保护环境、做好市民以及做志愿者”方面来介绍；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①traffic rules交通规则
②instead f代替
③separate…int…把……分到……
[高分句型]
①At the same time, there are sme things that we can’t d.(that引导定语从句)
②Firstly, it’s nt right t drp litter everywhere.(it作形式主语)
3．
A jurney f a thusand miles begins with a single step
Have yu heard f the saying “a jurney f a thusand miles begins with a single step”? It means that starting a gd life is the result f the beginning.
Last summer hliday, I wanted t learn hw t swim. I asked my father t teach me. I went t the swimming pl with my father. He taught me hw t swim. At first, I was afraid f diving in the water. And I felt uncmfrtable in the water. But my father always encuraged me. He said he wuld prtect me. Then I began t swim, but I culdn’t swim frward at all. It made me upset. Then my father tld me hw t mve, hw t stretch ut my hands and legs. Slwly I culd mve a little. It tk me abut fur hurs t learn t swim. I felt quite happy.
Frm this experience, I have learned a lt. The first step is always the hardest. But if yu d it in a prper way and never give up, yu will make it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”。
③提示：文章为第一人称，结合自己的亲身经历解释千里之行始于足下这句话，内容阐述完整，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，解释谚语的意思；
第二步，具体介绍自己的亲身经历来阐述谚语的意思；
第三步，谈一谈对自己经历的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①At first首先
②be afraid f害怕
③give up放弃
④begin t d开始
⑤want t d想要
⑥ask sb.t d sth.要求某人做某事
[高分句型]
①It means that starting a gd life is the result f the beginning.（宾语从句+动词ing短语作主语）
②He said he wuld prtect me.（宾语从句）
③But if yu d it in a prper way and never give up, yu will make it.（条件状语从句）
4．
Hell, everyne. I’m David frm Class 1, Grade 8. Back t the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lt and made great prgress in sme ways.
First, in the past I spent little time reading. Nw I spend a lt f time reading. Because reading can help me relax. Secnd, I didn’t realize the imprtance f prtecting the envirnment. Nw I try t reduce air pllutin by riding a bike. I save water by taking shrter shwers. I save energy by turning ff the lights when leaving a rm. Third, I used t cut in line when I waited fr a bus. Nw I always queue fr my turn when waiting fr a bus. Furth, I used t spend my pcket mney n snacks and cmputers games. But nw I dnate my pcket mney t the children in pr areas.
I’m sure I can be better and better in Grade 9.
Thanks fr yur listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出；
第二步，从学习、环保、礼仪、爱心方面叙述过去和现在的变化；
第三步，最后展望未来。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time ding花时间做
②the imprtance f……的重要性
③cut in line插队
[高分句型]
I save energy by turning ff the lights when leaving a rm.（when引导的时间状语从句）
5．
Dear Chairpersn,
Thank yu fr reading my letter. I wuld like t jin the schl vluntary team t help prtect ur envirnment. In my pinin, ging green plays a very imprtant rle in ur life.
In my daily life, I ften try my best t reduce pllutin. Fr example, I always remember t take my wn bags when shpping instead f plastic bags. As we all knw, it may take a plastic bag hundreds f years t break dwn. What’s mre, I knw the imprtance f saving energy, s I always turn ff the tap when brushing my teeth and turn ff the lights when I leave a rm. I als plant flwers at hme t live a green life.
If I am lucky enugh t jin the team, I will help hand ut leaflets, teach yung children ways t recycle things and take part in all kinds f activities.
I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs sincerely，
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。说明准备学校成立志愿服务队，招募学生环保志愿者。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“自己的看法、自己的做法以及怎样传播绿色环保理念”三方面来叙述；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①envirnment环境
②pllutin污染
③as well all knw众所周知
④hundreds f成百的
[高分句型]
①If I am lucky enugh t jin the team, I will help hand ut leaflets, teach yung children ways t recycle things and take part in all kinds f activities.(if引导的条件状语从句)
②What’s mre, I knw the imprtance f saving energy, s I always turn ff the tap when brushing my teeth and turn ff the lights when I leave a rm.（when引导的时间状语从句）
6．
Let’s take actin!
We teenagers are the master f the future. On the ne hand, we need t pay attentin t manners. When traveling, yu shuld shake hands with the persn yu first met. It is implite t pint yur chpsticks at thers while eating with them. And dn’t make nise when yu have yur sup. What’s mre, yu shuld bring a gift when yu are invited t a party and be sure t arrive n time r a few minutes earlier. On the ther hand, ur envirnment is changing fr the wrse, s it is time fr us t g green! First f all, water is the surce f life and every ne f us shuld play a part in saving water. Secndly, we shuld use plastic bags less t reduce pllutin. When we g t the supermarket, we shuld take a clth bag with us. Last but nt least, when we g ut r travel, we shuld chse public transprt as ften as pssible, because this will make less pllutin.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总起引出话题；
第二步，介绍在礼仪方面应该怎么做；
第三步，介绍在绿色环保方面应该怎么做。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attentin t注意
②shake hands with sb与某人握手
③be sure t d sth一定要做某事
④play a part in ding sth在做某事中发挥作用
[高分句型]
①It is implite t pint yur chpsticks at thers while eating with them.（It固定句型）
②When we g t the supermarket, we shuld take a clth bag with us.（时间状语从句）
7．
Dear teachers and schlmates,
My name is Dustin, a junir high schl student. Tday my tpic is “Dn’t be afraid t fail”. In ur daily life, we are afraid t fail because failure will make us sad and in lw spirits and even lse heart in the fllwing days.
In my eyes, failures are just part f ur life and we dn’t need t be afraid t fail and must face every failure bravely. Fr example, I was weak in English at first and ften did a bad jb in exams. My sister even laughed at me and said I wuld never be a gd English learner. Luckily, my teacher tld me t believe “Failure is the mther f success” and nt t give up. I fllwed her suggestins and studied hard in English. Finally, I gt gd grades in the final exam.
Thrugh my experience, we can see that failure is an imprtant thing in ur life and we shuldn’t be afraid t fail.
That’s all fr my speech. Thank yu fr yur attentin.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。针对“Dn’t be afraid t fail”为话题进行写作。具体的内容要结合自己的经历和感悟。
2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。第一段介绍自己的演讲主题；第二段叙述自己的个人经历；第三段表达自己的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
8．
Dear chairpersn,
I wuld like t recmmend Liu Ming, ur mnitr, as the best Cmmunist Yuth League member. He lves his cuntry and the Cmmunist Yuth League. He is very kind and hnest. He has gd manners. He has excellent grades and a wide range f interests. He is gd at sprts and music. He’s super capable. He ften rganizes vlunteer activities in his spare time. He als actively participated in varius cmpetitins and successfully wn many awards.
I think that Liu Ming is a gd candidate fr the Cmmunist League. I hpe yu agree with me.
Yurs
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为推荐信。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中你推荐你们班的班长 Liu Ming 作为最佳共青团员候选人的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“你作为代表推荐你们班的班长 Liu Ming 作为最佳共青团员候选人”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“品质、学业、能力等”几个方面重点介绍你推荐你们班的班长 Liu Ming 作为最佳共青团员候选人的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“我希望你同意我的看法”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①recmmend…as…推荐……为……；
②be gd at擅长；
③in ne’s spare time在某人的业余时间；
④participate in参加。
[高分句型]
①I wuld like t recmmend Liu Ming, ur mnitr, as the best Cmmunist Yuth League member. (动词不定式作宾语)
②I think that Liu Ming is a gd candidate fr the Cmmunist League. (that引导宾语从句)
9．
The summer hliday is cming. Hw can we spend a meaningful hliday?
First, I will spend an hur a day reading different bks. I think reading can pen up a whle new wrld t me. Just as the saying ges, “Traveling ten thusand miles is better than reading ten thusand bks.” I can’t wait t have a trip with my family. We can enjy urselves and learn abut the utside wrld as well. What’s mre, it is meaningful fr us t d sme vluntary wrk. I can wrk as a vlunteer at the weekend. I als plan t g t the library t d my hmewrk and prepare fr the next term. Besides, we shuld develp a green lifestyle. Everyne can d smething t make a difference t ur envirnment and urselves.
I’m sure I will have a meaningful hliday.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，要求根据内容提示描述自己的暑假计划的具体活动安排及其原因。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态主要采用一般现在时和一般将来时。文章开头已给出，正文先介绍自己的阅读计划和原因，再介绍自己的旅行计划和原因，最后补充其他的计划和原因，同时注意选用合适的连词、短语和句型来将内容进行串联和拓展。文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
10．
Last Saturday, ur class had a charity sale in ur schl fr Prject Hpe. Befre the sale, we handed ut leaflets t make peple knw ur sale. Then we began t sell different things like fd and tys. Sme were taken frm ur hme, thers were hand-made. It was s much fun! Our mnitr even sang a sng t attract mre peple t buy them. We were very happy t see that all the things were sld ut in a shrt time! Then, we gave away the mney t help children in pr areas.
I think it was a meaningful experience. Making things helps develp ur life skills. Meanwhile, we can learn hw t cmmunicate with thers well. Last but nt least, helping peple makes us happy.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍学校的爱心义卖活动的情况，同时谈一下自己的体会。具体的内容要包含所给的提示，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文采用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段介绍学校的爱心义卖活动的情况；第二段谈一下自己的体会。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
11．
My Favurite Place
I have been t many famus places. My favurite place is Guangzhu.
Last year, I went t Guangzhu in the summer vacatin. When we gt there, we started t hangut n the street. The first thing was t find smething t eat. There were s many delicius snacks. It is hard fr us t chse what t eat, s we planned t eat as much as we can. After we finishing eating, we went t g shpping. Guangzhu is famus trade and its clthes are fashinable and cheap.
This trip is s unfrgettable t me because Guangzhu is the paradise f fd and shpping. I hpe t g there again.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据问题提示以“My Favurite Place”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你最喜欢的地方，以及原因。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍自己去广州的经历；最后一段介绍自己喜欢广州的原因。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
12．
Hell, everyne. I’m Tm frm Class 9, Grade 8. Back t the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lt and made great prgress in many ways.
First, in the past, I seldm read bks. I used t spend mst f time playing cmputer games. Nw I find it interesting t read because gd bks help me relax after a busy day. Secnd, I was implite befre. I smetimes shuted ludly r pushed in befre thers. Nw I behave plitely in public. I always queue and keep my vice dwn. Finally, I used t care little abut thers. But nw I take part in charity activities and help mre peple in need. I ften wrk as a vlunteer and dnate mney t the children in pr areas.
I am sure I will d much better in the future.
Thanks fr listening!
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。针对一年来自己的变化进行写作，包括自己过去和现在的对比，从学习、礼仪、爱心三方面进行叙述。具体的内容要包含所给的提示。
2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段介绍自己过去和现在的变化情况；第三段表达自己的希望。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
13．
One pssible versin：
Suqian is nw trying t becme a civilized city. As students, what shuld we d? We must respect ur teachers and be plite t thers. We shuld als help thse in truble and be friendly t the peple arund us. We shuld read mre bks, especially classics and help imprve urselves. Besides, we must bey traffic rules. We mustn’t g acrss the street when the traffic lights are red. What’s mre, we shuld prtect ur envirnment. Fr example, we shuld separate waste int different grups. And we shuld plant mre trees and flwers. Dn’t walk n the grass.
Suqian is ur hmetwn. Let’s try ur best t make it a civilized city.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文倡议书的写作。写作时承接题干所给开头引出倡议目的；接着要按照题干要求列举倡议内容；最后结尾发出呼吁。
2.写作指导：本文应以第一人称和一般现在时为主来行文；倡议书书写主要内容为提建议，因此可用表建议的句型，例如We shuld…，It is suggested that…，it wuld be better if…等。另外倡议的内容通常不止一个，因此可用in additin， besides，what’s mre等词来列举内容，可以使文章逻辑清晰，层层递进。
14．
例文
Dear ladies and gentlemen,
As we all knw, ur hmetwn Sihng has becme mre and mre beautiful than befre. Hwever, there are many things we can d t prtect the envirnment and build a green hme.
First f all, we can save water by taking shrter shwers and turning ff the tap when we brush ur teeth. Secndly, in rder t save pwer, we shuld turn ff the lights when we leave a rm. Then, we are starting t use energy frm the sun, wind and water. These new types f energy cst very little and will never run ut. If we want t keep ur hme clean and tidy, we shuldn’t drp litter everywhere. Lastly, the air pllutin is a serius prblem, t. I call n yu and yur parents t take the bus mre and drive less.
If we try ur best t build a green hme, ur hme will becme a better place t live in.
That’s all. Thanks a lt fr yur attentin.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主题是保护环境，需要介绍保护环境的重要性，以及如何保护环境。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，然后分条介绍应该如何保护环境；
第二步，号召人们保护环境；
第三步，以感谢结尾。
[亮点词汇]
First f all首先
run ut用光
call n号召
[高分句型]
First f all, we can save water by taking shrter shwers and turning ff the tap when we brush ur teeth.（When引导的时间状语从句）
If we want t keep ur hme clean and tidy, we shuldn’t drp litter everywhere.（if引导的条件状语从句）
15．
Hell, everyne. I’m Simn. Back t the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lt and made great prgress in sme ways.
First, I used t be careless with my study and was bad at my lessns. But nw I listen carefully in class. I am mre and mre interested in all my lessns. Secnd, I spent mst f my free time listening t music and playing cmputer games. But nw I try t spend my free time reading because it can pen up my eyes and make me relaxed. Third, in the past I ften drpped litter everywhere and shuted ludly in public places. Nw, I can behave plitely. I always recycle the waste t prtect the envirnment.
I believe I will be better and better in Grade 9.
Thanks fr yur listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍在学习、生活、礼仪上过去和现在的不同；
第二步，展望未来。
[亮点词汇]
①used t d过去常常
②mre and mre越来越
③spend time ding sth.花费时间做某事
[高分句型]
①But nw I try t spend my free time reading because it can pen up my eyes and make me relaxed.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I believe I will be better and better in Grade 9.（省略that的宾语从句）
16．
Dear teachers and classmates,
Tday, n behalf f my class, I will give a speech n “Gd manners make the nicest schl”.
As a student, we shuld behave plitely and prperly. In the mrning, when we meet ur teachers and classmates at the schl gate, we shuld greet them warmly. In class, it’s very imprtant fr us t listen t the teachers carefully and take sme ntes. At nn, when we g t the dining hall, we shuld queue fr ur turn. Mrever, if yu g t the library, yu’d better keep quiet and bey the rules.
What’s mre, t make the nicest schl, we shuld avid sme bad manners, such as thrwing rubbish carelessly and making t much nise at the break. We shuldn’t step n the grass either when we play games.
We shuld try ur best t d smething fr ur schl. If each f us des ur part frm nw n, ur schl will becme the nicest ne.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。今天，我将代表全班同学做一个关于“礼貌造就最好的学校”的演讲（文章已给出）。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从好的行为、坏的行为等方面介绍文明礼仪，创设最美校园。
第三步，给出建议，结束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①give a speech n就……发表讲话
②had better d sth. 最好做某事
③try ne’s best t d sth. 尽力做某事
④What’s mre此外
[高分句型]
①In the mrning, when we meet ur teachers and classmates at the schl gate, we shuld greet them warmly.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②If each f us des ur part frm nw n, ur schl will becme the nicest ne.（if引导的条件状语从句）
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Hw t have a meaningful summer hliday
Dear classmates, It is July nw. The summer hliday is cming. Hw t have a meaningful summer hliday? Tday, I’ll share my plan with yu.
First, I will make a plan fr my study and finish my hmewrk n time. I’m ging t read a lt. Thrugh reading, I can gain mre knwledge. Secnd, I plan t d exercise fr ne hur every day. It is a gd way t make me energetic and cnfident t meet the challenge in the new term. Third, I will spend sme time ding smething that I’m interested in, fr example, watching TV prgrams n science. Finally, I plan t be a vlunteer in ur neighbrhd t teach hw t srt the garbage, because it is useful fr ur envirnmental prtectin.
Wish yu all have a happy and meaningful summer hliday.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中暑假计划的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作意图。为度过有意义的暑假，我要分享自己的暑假计划；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“学习安排、运动安排、兴趣安排、活动安排”等几个方面详细介绍暑假计划内容；
第三步，书写结语。表达“你们都可以度过快乐而有意义的暑假”这一愿望。
【亮点词汇】①make a plan fr为……制定计划
②plan t d sth.计划做某事
③d exercise做运动
④spend time ding sth.花费时间做某事
【高分句型】①It is a gd way t make me energetic and cnfident t meet the challenge in the new term.（It作形式主语，动词不定式作真正主语）
②I will spend sme time ding smething that I’m interested in, fr example, watching TV prgrams n science.（that引导定语从句）
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Hw t make ur free time mre meaningful?
Nwadays, we are usually busy with ur lessns, but we still have t make ur life clurful. Hw shuld we spend ur free time mre meaningfully?
First, it’s gd t help ur parents d sme husewrk t shw ur lve t them. Secnd, we will knw mre abut the wrld by reading. Third, we shuld take mre exercise t keep ur bdy and mind healthy. We shuld als enjy the natural scenery mre. Furthly, we shuld have the sense f scial respnsibility and take part in a vlunteer service activity.
In a wrd, let’s make full use f ur spare time and prmte ur literacy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出“我们应该如何更有意义地度过我们的空闲时间”的主题；
第二步，根据提示材料提出合理的建议；
第三步，总结概括。
[亮点词汇]
①d sme husewrk做家务
②take mre exercise多锻炼
③have the sense f有……的感觉
④make full use f充分利用
[高分句型]
①First, it’s gd t help ur parents d sme husewrk t shw ur lve t them.（动词不定式作主语）
② In a wrd, let’s make full use f ur spare time and prmte ur literacy.（祈使句）
19．
Be a student with gd manners
It is very imprtant t be a persn with gd manners in ur daily life.
At schl, we shuld respect ur teachers. We shuld als be kind/friendly t ur classmates and help each ther.
At hme, we shuld respect the elderly/ur parents/ur grandparents. Als, we shuld lve family members and d things by urselves/alne.
Then, we shuld say “please” and “thank yu” all the time. As frtable manners, we shuldn’t talk with fd in ur muth. Besides, we shuld bey traffic rules when walking r riding. In public, dn’t shut ludly. What’s mre, t keep the envirnment clean, dn’t drp litter everywhere.
Take actin nw. Behave well!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据表格提示要点，以“Be a student with gd manners”为题，表达自己的观点。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第一人称。文章叙述时从三个方面展开：在学校；在家里以及言谈举止。行文时注意要有层次感，可适当使用短语句型使文章有亮点，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
20．
例文
What Can We D t G Green
The earth is ur hme. It’s ur duty t prtect it. Hwever, it is increasingly plluted at present, especially air and water. Als, frests are cut dwn all ver the wrld. S we must take quick actins t prtect the envirnment.
Firstly, we shuld save water by turning ff the tap while brushing teeth and finishing a shwer within ten minutes. Secndly, we are suppsed t use tw sides f paper in rder t prtect trees. Thirdly, we must save electricity by turning ff lights befre leaving ur rms and turning ff TVs r cmputers when we are nt using them. Finally, we can walk t schl instead f taking a bus r taxi.
All in all, I think it imprtant fr us t develp a green life style and d whatever we can t prtect ur planet.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作内容提示已给出，考生要注意不要遗漏内容提示中的信息，并且要在内容提示的基础上按照要求，补充要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：陈述环境现状。
第二步：陈述环保的措施，包括节约用水、保护树木、节约用电等，并在提示的基础上，增加一点。
第三步：发出倡议，指出培养绿色的生活方式很重要，并在此基础上，增加要点。
[亮点词汇]
① take quick actins t d sth.快速采取行动做某事
② be suppsed t d sth.应该做某事
③ in rder t d sth. 为了做某事
④ by ding sth.通过做某事
[高分句型]
I think it imprtant fr us t develp a green life style and d whatever we can t prtect ur planet.（it作形式宾语，t d sth.作真正的宾语；whatever引导的宾语从句）