考点46-读后续写-历年真题综合习作02 (原卷版+解析版)
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真题是最好的习作练习,如何分析真题,如何从真题中寻找写作思路和表达方式?都是学生需要学习的地方,练一篇真题胜过练十篇模拟试题,所以本专题只带着学生复习真题,学习和研究真题中的读后续写。
【重要考向】
一、2020年7月新高考全国卷Ⅰ;
二、2018年6月浙江卷;
三、2017年6月浙江卷;
四、2017年11月浙江卷;
五、2016年10月浙江卷;
考向一
2020年7月全国新高考Ⅰ卷
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Meredith family lived in a small cmmunity. As the ecnmy was in decline, sme peple in the twn had lst their jbs. Many f their families were struggling t make ends meet. Peple were trying t help each ther meet the challenges.
Mrs. Meredith was a mst kind and thughtful wman. She spent a great deal f time visiting the pr. She knew they had prblems, and they needed all kinds f help. When she had time, she wuld bring fd and medicine t them.
One mrning she tld her children abut a family she had visited the day befre. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, wh tk care f him and culd nt g ut t wrk, and their little by. The little by -his name was Bernard-had interested her very much.
“I wish yu culd see him,” she said t her wn children, Jhn, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help t his mther. He wants very much t earn sme mney, but I dn't see what he can d.”
After their mther left the rm, the children sat thinking abut Bernard. “I wish we culd help him t earn mney.” said Clara. “His family is suffering s much.”
“S d 1,” said Harry. “We really shuld d smething t assist them.”
Fr sme mments, Jhn said nthing, but, suddenly, he sprang t his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a slutin that we can all help accmplish(完成).”
The ther children als jumped up all attentin. When Jhn had an idea, it was sure t be a gd ne. “I tell yu what we can d,” said Jhn. “Yu knw that big bx f cm Uncle Jhn sent us?Well, we can make ppcrn(爆米花), and put it int paper bags, and Bernard can take it arund t the huses and sell it.”
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When Mrs. Meredith heard f Jhn's idea, she thught it was a gd ne, t.
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With everything ready, Bernard started ut n his new business.
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小试牛刀
补全句子
1. ________________________________________ (由于经济衰退), sme peple in the twn had lst their jbs.
2. Many f their families ________________________________________ (都在努力维持收支平衡).
3. After their mther left the rm, ________________________________________ (孩子们坐在那里想着伯纳德).
4.Fr sme mments, Jhn said nthing, but, suddenly, ________________________________________ (他跳了起来,喊道), “I have a great idea! I have a slutin that we can all help accmplish.”
5.The ther children ________________________________________ (也跳了起来全神贯注地听).
能力提升
1.所以,他们一起去了当地的超市。
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2.他们买了一袋玉米和一些特制的爆米花袋。
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3.当他们到家时,他们做了很多爆米花,放在特制的袋子里。
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4.带着爆米花,他们去了伯纳德的家。
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5.他们告诉伯纳德怎么卖爆米花。伯纳德和他的父母非常感激。
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6.梅雷迪斯一家也很乐意帮助这个家庭。
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7.他把爆米花带到房子里,把所有的爆米花都卖了。
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8.他挣了很多钱。然后,他想自立。
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9.因此,他请梅雷迪思太太教他怎么做爆米花。
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10.之后,他不仅卖爆米花,还往爆米花里加了奶油和盐,让爆米花味道更好。
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11.伯纳德长大后成了一个了不起的人。
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12.他没有忘记梅雷迪思家人的帮助,他也尽力帮助那些需要帮助的人。
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范文赏析:
When Mrs. Meredith heard f Jhn’s idea, she thught it was a gd ne, t. S, they went t the lcal supermarket tgether. They bught a bag f crn and sme special bags fr ppcrn. When they gt hme, they made a lt f ppcrn and put it in the special bags. With the ppcrn, they went t Bernard’s hme. They tld Bernard hw t sell the ppcrn. Bernard and his parents were very grateful. And the Meredith family als felt very happy t help this family.
With everything ready, Bernard started ut n his new business. He tk the ppcrn arund t the huses and sld all his ppcrn. He earned a lt f mney. Then, he wanted t be self-dependent. Therefre, he asked Mrs. Meredith t teach him hw t make ppcrn. After that, nt nly did he sell ppcrn, but he als added cream and salt t the ppcrn t make it taste better. Bernard grew up t be a remarkable man. He did nt frget the help f Meredith’s family, and he als did what he culd t help thse in need.
2018年6月浙江卷
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was summer, and my dad wanted t treat me t a vacatin like never befre. He decided t take me n a trip t the Wild West. We tk a plane t Albuquerque, a big city in the state f New Mexic. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternn. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up frm the airprt and drve us up t his farm in Pecs.
His wife Tina cked us a delicius dinner and we gt t knw his sns Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestrm f the farm huse listening t the frgs and water rlling dwn the river nearby. Very early in the mrning. Uncle Paul wke us up t have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn n my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went t help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul t take the sheep ut t graze (吃草). I was impressed t see my dad and Uncle Paul riding hrses. They lked really cl.
In the afternn, I asked Uncle Paul if I culd take a hrse ride, and he said yes, as lng as my dad went with me. I wasn’t ging t take a hrse ride by myself anyway. S, my dad and I put n ur new cwby hats, gt n ur hrses, and headed slwly twards the muntains. “Dn’t be late fr supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep t the track s that yu dn’t get lst!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm huse were ut f sight. It was s peaceful and quiet and the clrs f the brwn rcks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternn sun mixed t create a magic scene. It lked like a beautiful wven (编织的) blanket spread ut upn the grund just fr us.
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.
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We had n idea where we were and it gt dark.
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小试牛刀
补全句子
1.It was summer, and my dad ________________________________________ (想给我一个前所未有的假期).
2.Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, ________________________________________ (从机场接我们) and drve us up t his farm in Pecs.
3.My dad and I spent the night in the guestrm f the farm huse___________________________________ (听着青蛙和水从附近的河里滚下来).
4.I wasn’t ging t ________________________________________ (一个人骑马) anyway.
5.S, my dad and I put n ur new cwby hats, gt n ur hrses, and ________________________________ (慢慢向山上走去).
6.After a while ________________________________________ (保罗叔叔和他的农舍就不见了).
7.It was s peaceful and quiet and the clrs f the brwn rcks, the deep green pine trees, and the ________________________________________ (和傍晚的阳光混合在一起,创造出一幅神奇的景象).
能力提升
1. 它毛茸茸的,有一身漂亮的棕色头发。
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2. 它用它的一对红眼睛看着我,然后开始在前面疾驰。
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3. “为什么不把它抓回来交给保罗叔叔呢?他们一定很高兴。”想到这一点,我拼命地骑着马去寻找它。
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4. 爸爸看到了,只好跟着我。兔子非常敏捷,很快就进入了一片山林。
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5. 我们不得不下马,继续追赶,完全忘记了后面的赛道。
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6. 尽管我们拼命尝试,但兔子最终还是看不见了。
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7. 然后我们意识到我们在森林深处。
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8. 乌云似乎在天空聚集。
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9. 拿出手机,我们很快就发现出了问题:没有信号。
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10. 没有指南针。我吓坏了,盯着爸爸,试图从他那里寻求解决问题的办法。
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11. “也许你在地理课上学到的东西管用,”他指着天上的星星说。
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12. 我知道他指的是北极星。很快我们找到了正确的方向。
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13. 我们赶紧回去找马。河又出现了。
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14. 家人很担心,准备报警。
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15. 一看到我们,他们松了一口气,紧紧地拥抱着我们。
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16. 在我的一生中,没有什么比这次猎兔更令人难忘的了!
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参考范文:
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. It was furry with a cat f grgeus brwn hair. After lking up at me with its pair f red bulbs , it began t scurry ahead. “Why nt catch it and bring it back t Uncle Paul? They must be very happy.” With this thught, I rde hard t hunt fr it. Dad saw it and had t fllw me. The rabbit was very agile, sn entering a muntain frest. We had t get dwn the hrses, cntinuing the chase and ttally frgetting the track back. Even thugh we tried desperately, the rabbit was ut f sight in the end. Then we realized we were in the deep part f a frest.
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We had n idea where we were and it gt dark. And dark cluds seemed t be gathering in the sky. Taking ut the cell phne, we sn fund smething was wrng: n signal. And n cmpass. Frightened, I stared at Dad, trying t seek a slutin fr the truble frm him. “Maybe what yu have learned in gegraphy class wrks," he said, pinting t the stars in the sky. I knew he meant the Nrth Star. Sn we fund the right directin. We hurried back finding the hrses. And the river was in sight again. The family was wrried and abut t call the plice. At the sight f us, they were relieved and hugged us tightly. There was nthing mre memrable than this rabbit hunting in my life!
2017年6月浙江卷
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternn, Mac Hllan, a primary schl teacher, was cycling frm his hme t Alaska with his friends. One f his friends had stpped t make a bicycle repair, but they had encuraged Mac t carry n, and they wuld catch up with him sn. As Mac pedaled(骑行) alng alne, he thught fndly f his wife and tw yung daughters at hme. He hped t shw them this beautiful place smeday.
Then Mac heard quick and lud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dg!” he thught. But when he lked t the side, he saw instantly that it wasn't a dg at all, but a wlf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac's heart jumped. He fund ut his can f bear spray. With ne hand n the bars, he fired the spray at the wlf. A bright red clud envelped the animal, and t Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back f Mac's bike, tearing pen his tent bag. He fired at the wlf a secnd time, and again, it fell back nly t quickly restart the chase(追赶)。
Mac was pedaling hard nw. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful nt t slw dwn. He saw a steep uphill climb befre him. He knew that nce he hit the hill, he'd be easy caught up and the wlf's teeth wuld be tearing int his flesh.
At this mment, Pauland Beeky were driving their car n their way t Alaska. They didn't think much f it when they saw tw cyclists repairing their bike n the side f the rad. A bit later, they sptted what they, t, assumed was a dg running alngside a man n a bike. As they gt clser, they realized that the dg was a wlf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in frnt f it as the wlf was catching up fast, just a dzen yards away nw.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragragh 1:
The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him.
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Paragragh 2:
A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived.
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小试牛刀
补全句子
1.But when he lked t the side, he saw instantly that it wasn't a dg at all, but a wlf, ________________________________________ (正迅速地追上他).
2. ________________________________________ (麦克的心跳了起来). He fund ut his can f bear spray.
3. ________________________________________ (他一只手放在栅栏上), he fired the spray at the wlf.
4. A bright red clud envelped the animal, and ________________________________________ (令麦克宽慰的是,它向后倒,摇着头).
5.Then ________________________________________ (然后它袭击了麦克的自行车后部), tearing pen his tent bag.
6.He knew that nce he hit the hill, he'd be easy caught up and ________________________________________ (狼的牙齿会撕碎他的肉).
7.A bit later, they sptted what they, t, ________________________________________ (认为是一只狗) running alngside a man n a bike.
能力提升
1. 麦克跳下自行车,冲向车门。
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2. 但麦克还没来得及开门,狼就追上了,扑了上去。
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3. 幸运的是,魔法喷雾第三次救了麦克。
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4. 看到狼退后,保罗迅速打开车门,受惊的人很快爬上车,重重地关上身后的车门。
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5. 贝西从后窗往外看,看见狼站在麦克的自行车上,好像那是一场杀戮。
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6. 不久,那只动物跑了。
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7. 他们对所见的感到震惊,于是加入保罗的行列。
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8. 麦家的一个朋友挑出一些生肉扔给了狼。
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9. 狼对得到的东西很满意,就跑进了树林。
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10. 麦克感谢保罗和贝基,“你停下来救我,我真是太感谢你了,我还活着,这都归功于你。”
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11. 由于麦克受伤,这三个人不得不放弃剩下的旅程回家。
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参考范文:
The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him. Mac jumped ff his bicycle and rushed t the dr f the car. But befre Mac culd pen the dr, the wlf had caught up and jumped t attack. Luckily, the magic spray saved Mac a third time. Seeing the wlf back ff, Paul quickly unlcked the dr, and the frightened man climbed int the car in n time, shutting the dr behind him heavily. Bechy lked ut f the back windw and saw the wlf standing ver Mac’s bicycle as if it were a kill. Sn after, the animal ran ff.
A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived. They were shcked at what they saw and jined Paul. One f Macs friends picked ut sme raw meat and threw it t the wlf. Satisfied with what he gt, the wlf ran int the wds. Mac thanked Paul and Becky, “Hw grateful I am that yu stpped t save me and I we it t yu that I’m still alive.” As Mac gt injured, the three men had t give up the rest f their jurney and returned hme.
2017年11月浙江卷
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
A vacatin with my mther
I had an interesting childhd: It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because f my mther-lving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and frgetful. One strange family trip we tk when I was eleven tells a lt abut her.
My tw sets f grandparents lived in Clrad and Nrth Dakta, and my parents decided t spend a few weeks driving t thse states and seeing all the sights alng the way. As the first day f ur trip apprached, David, my eight-year-ld brther, and I unwillingly said gd-bye t all f ur friends. Wh knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the mment f ur departure arrived, and we laded suitcases, bks, games, camping equipment, and a tent int the car and bravely drve ff. We bravely drve ff again tw hurs later after we’d returned hme t get the purse and traveler’s checks Mm had frgtten.
David and I were always a little nervus when using gas statin bathrms if Mm was driving while Dad slept:” Yu stand utside the dr and play lkut while I g, and I’ll stand utside the dr and play lkut while yu g.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Hney, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gsh… I thught they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t abut t take any chances.
On the furth r fifth night, we had truble finding a htel with a vacancy. After driving in vain fr sme time, Mm suddenly gt a great idea: Why didn’t we find a huse with a likely-lking backyard and ask if we culd set up tent there? David and I became nervus. T ur great relief, Dad turned dwn the idea. Mm never culd understand ur bjectins. If a strange family shwed upn her frnt drsteps, Mm wuld have been delighted. She thinks everyne in the wrld as nice as she is. We finally fund a vacancy in the next twn.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para1:
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us.
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We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way.
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小试牛刀
补全句子
1. ________________________________________ (它充满了惊喜和娱乐), all because f my mther-lving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and frgetful.
2. Finally, the mment f ur departure arrived, and ________________________________________ (我们把手提箱、书、游戏、露营设备和帐篷装进车里) and bravely drve ff.
3.I ________________________________________ (脑海中浮现出可怕的画面): “Hney, where are the kids?”
4. After driving in vain fr sme time, ________________________________________ (妈妈突然有了一个好主意): Why didn’t we find a huse with a likely-lking backyard and ask if we culd set up tent there?
5.T ur great relief, ________________________________________ (爸爸拒绝了这个主意).
能力提升
1. 想到这顶帐篷,妈妈建议我们到下一个村子去野营,眼睛闪闪发光。
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2. 考虑到她的热情,我们都同意了。
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3. 当我们的车门打开时,妈妈立刻冲了出去,催促我们搭起帐篷。
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4. 大卫和我被要求捡些树枝生火。
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5. 当我们回来时,爸爸妈妈已经舒舒服服地躺在帐篷前的草地上,和一个我们这个年纪的当地男孩愉快地交谈着,他好奇地看着帐篷。
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6. 很快我们就知道那个衣衫褴褛的男孩连家都没有。
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7. 当然,妈妈又“忘了”带帐篷了。
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8. 在那次旅行中,我们和爷爷奶奶住在一起。
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9. 但给我印象最深的是那个帐篷,妈妈故意忘记了。
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10. 虽然她很喜欢去野营,但出于同情,她把这顶帐篷送给了那个可怜的男孩。
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11. 是妈妈让我的童年多姿多彩。也是她向我展示了给予的真正意义。
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参考范文:
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us. Thinking f this tent, Mm suggested that we g camping in the next village in excitement, with her eyes glittering. Cnsidering her enthusiasm, we all agreed. When the dr f ur car pened, Mm strmed ut instantly and urged us t put up the tent. David and I were asked t pick up sme branches t build a fire. And when we came back, Dad and Mm had already lain dwn the grass cmfrtably in frnt f the tent, talking merrily with a lcal by at ur age, wh kept glancing at this tent curiusly. Sn we learnt that the by in rags even didn’t have a hme t live in. Of curse, Mm “frgt” t take this tent with us again.
We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way. And we als had a nice time living with my grandparents during that trip. But what impressed me mst was that tent, which was frgtten deliberately by Mm. Thugh she did lve ging camping, she presented that pr by with this tent ut f sympathy. It was Mm that made my childhd clrful. And it was als she that shwed me the true meaning f giving
2016年10月浙江卷
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tm, had driven three hurs t camp vernight by a lake in the frest. Unfrtunately, n the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started t quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was s angry that she said t Tm, “I’m ging t find a better spt fr us t camp” and walked away.
With n path t fllw, Jane just walked n fr quite a lng time. After she had climbed t a high place, she turned arund, hping t see the lake. T her surprise, she saw nthing but frest and, far beynd, a snwcapped muntain tp. She suddenly realized that she was lst.
“Tm!” she cried. “Help!”
N reply. If nly she had nt left her mbile phne in that bag with Tm. Jane kept mving, but the farther she walked, the mre cnfused she became. As night was beginning t fall, Jane was s tired that she had t stp fr the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much t be with Tm and her family. She wanted t hld him and tell him hw much she lved him.
Jane rse at the break f day, hungry and thirsty. She culd hear water trickling (滴落)smewhere at a distance. Quickly she fllwed the sund t a stream. T her great jy, she als saw sme berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling strnger nw, Jane began t walk alng the stream and hpe it wuld lead her t the lake.
As she picked her way carefully alng the stream, Jane heard a helicpter. Is that fr me? Unfrtunately, the trees made it impssible fr peple t see her frm abve. A few minutes later, anther helicpter flew verhead. Jane tk ff her yellw bluse, thinking that she shuld g t an pen area and flag them if they came back again.
But n mre helicpters came and it wasgetting dark again.
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It was daybreak when Jane wke up.
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小试牛刀
补全句子
1.Unfrtunately, n the way ________________________________________ (一个不愉快的话题出现了,他们开始争吵).
2. ________________________________________ (没有路可走), Jane just walked n fr quite a lng time.
3.T her surprise, ________________________________________ (她只看到了森林) and, far beynd, a snwcapped muntain tp.
4.Jane kept mving, but ________________________________________ (走得越远,她就越困惑).
5. As night was beginning t fall, ________________________________________ (简太累了,她不得不停下来过夜).
6. ________________________________________ (简醒着躺在黑暗中), Jane wanted very much t be with Tm and her family.
7. ________________________________________ (天亮时简站了起来), hungry and thirsty.
8.Quickly ________________________________________ (跟着声音来到一条小溪边).
9. ________________________________________ (沿着小溪小心地走着), Jane heard a helicpter.
10.Unfrtunately, ________________________________________ (树木使人们无法从上面看到她).
11.A few minutes later, ________________________________________ (另一架直升机从头顶飞过).
12. Jane tk ff her yellw bluse, thinking that ________________________________________ (如果他们再回来,她应该去一个开阔的地方示意他们).
能力提升
1. 一片漆黑立刻笼罩了整个森林。
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2. 简,精疲力竭,害怕,躺在一块石头旁边,想念她遥远的家人。
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3. 所有美好的回忆涌上心头,她忍不住哭了起来:“如果不是我和汤姆吵架,走开,爬到高处,我就不会被困在这个可怕的地方,面对死亡的危险。”
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4. 她因无休止的焦虑而后悔,然后眼睛里噙着晶莹的泪水。
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5. 尽管她很虚弱,她还是挣扎着站起来,继续寻求帮助。
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6. 令她非常高兴的是,一架直升飞机一次又一次地从头顶飞过。
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7. 她又急又兴奋,用自己的黄色上衣向直升机示意,不遗余力地大叫,以吸引别人的注意。
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8. 幸运的是,她最终被发现并被带上了直升机。
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9. 在那里,她看到了她的丈夫,一个男人盯着她,脸上带着欣慰的表情。
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10.她尽可能紧紧地抱住他,激动得说不出话来。
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11. 此外,他们同意不再吵架,决定过上最充实的生活。
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参考范文:
But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an abslute darkness ruled the frest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay dwn near a stne, missing her family at a distance. All the fantastic memry crwded in and she culdn’t help crying, “Hadn’t I quarreled with Tm, walked away and climbed t the high place, I wuldn’t be trapped in this awful place, cnfrnted with the danger f dying.” She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.
It was daybreak when Jane wke up. Weak as she was, she struggled t her feet, cntinuing searching fr assistance. T her great jy, a helicpter was flying verhead again and again. Eager and excited, she flagged her yellw bluse and spared n effrt t yell s as t attract thers’ attentin. Frtunately, she was eventually nticed and brught int the helicpter. There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expressin f relief. As tightly as pssible, she hugged him and was t thrilled t say anything. Besides, they agreed never t quarrel again, determining t live the life t the fullest.
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