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读原文 划要素 填表格
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
列大纲 两段12句法
I was invited t a ckut n an ld friend's farm in western Washingtn. I parked my car utside the farm and walked past a milking huse which had apparently nt been used in many years. A nise at a windw caught my attentin, s I entered it. It was a hummingbird（蜂鸟）, desperately trying t escape. She was cvered in spider-webs（蛛网）and was barely able t mve her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up. With the bird in my cupped hand, I lked arund t see hw she had gtten in. The brken windw glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece f clth int the hle and tk her utside, clsing the dr securely behind me. When I pened my hand, the bird did nt fly away; she sat lking at me with her bright eyes. I remved the sticky spider-webs that cvered her head and wings. Still, she made n attempt t fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the windw t lng and was t tired? Or t thirsty?
As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path tward my car where I kept a water bttle, she began t mve. I stpped, and she sn tk wing but did nt immediately fly away. Hvering（悬停）, she apprached within six inches f my face. Fr a very lng mment, this tiny creature lked int my eyes, turning her head frm side t side. Then she flew quickly ut f sight. During the ckut, I tld my hsts abut the hummingbird incident. They prmised t fix the windw. As I was departing, my friends walked me t my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew t the center f ur grup and began hvering. She turned frm persn t persn until she came t me. She again lked directly int my eyes, then let ut a squeaking call and was gne. Fr a mment, all were speechless. Then smene said, “She must have cme t say gdbye.”
读原文 划要素 填表格
a hummingbird
cvered in spider-websbarely able t mve her wings.
picked her up
-- I save her
A few weeks later, I went t the farm again.  _______________________________________________________ I was just abut t leave when the hummingbird appeared. _______________________________________________________
A few weeks later, I went t the farm again.I was just abut t leave when the hummingbird appeared.
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
What did I see and d n the farm?
I (主要人物); my friends (次要人物)
What did I see？
the deserted huse
spider web
blackberry path
the hle in the windw
What did I d？
with my friends
chat and laugh
I was just abut t leave when the hummingbird appeared.
读P1P2首句 定情节发展
The reactin between the hummingbird and me.
the hummingbird; I
What did the hummingbird d?
What did I d?
Hw did I feel?
列大纲：两段12句法
思考：12句话中，有哪几句是固定内容？
列大纲：两段12句法
列大纲：两段12句法
I felt relief and awe
I neared the farm
It hvered in the air
It was time fr hme
I remembered the hummingbird
I checked the hle
Everything went smthly
chatted with my friends
lked directly int my eyes
say gdbye t me
I lked at it.
My friends were mved
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:1）As my car neared it, my thughts drifted back t the mment when I rescued the hummingbird frm the spider’s web.
高级表达1--回忆：“我的思绪又回到了那一刻” My thughts drifted back t the mment when...
写句式 招招升级
e.g.:2）With smell f rasted fd wafting in the air, my friends and I chatted and laughed merrily arund the picnic table.
招式2： 非谓语动词with复合结构：with + n. + ding/dne/t d
e.g.:3）It lked directly int my eyes as if trying t cnvey sme deep, unspken gratitude.
招式3： as if/as thugh 常用句式： ① as if ding ② as if + 虚拟语气
e.g.:2）I felt a surge f relief and awe at the sight f this sund and grateful creature.
招式4： 情绪表达常用句式： ① I felt a surge f + 情绪类名词 ② A surge f + 情绪类名词 seized me. (无灵主语)
水到渠成 范文赏析
范文赏析
A few weeks later, I went t the farm again. As my car neared it ,my thughts drifted back t the mment when I rescued the hummingbird frm the spider’s web. I rushed back t the deserted huse. It was a great cmfrt that the riginal hle in the windw was nwhere t be fund. Leaving the huse, I culdn’t help wndering hw it was getting n nw. Had it managed t find its way back hme, r was it still ut there smewhere struggling t survive?With smell f rasted fd wafting in the air, my friends and I chatted and laughed merrily arund the picnic table. Sn, the sun began t set and it was time fr hme.
I was just abut t leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash f mvement caught my attentin. I turned arund t see the same hummingbird hvering in the air. It seemed that the bird was waiting fr me. It lked directly int my eyes as if trying t cnvey sme deep, unspken gratitude. My teary friends were all deeply struck by the prfund bnd between a little bird and her saver. I felt a surge f relief and awe at the sight f this sund and grateful creature, and I knew that I wuld always cherish the memries we shared as I climbed int my car and drve away.
范文赏析