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Unit 7 Will people have robots?
Grammar(课时3)
知识精讲
话题分析
本单元的话题是了解未来的机器人科技,描述未来的生活,能正确的运用将来时态(be going to或者will),语言要精炼、准确,行文要流畅。
单元写作目标
能描述未来的生活
1.能用“will"描述未来的生活,内容包括居住环境、职业情况、生活水平、出行方式、日常饮食、科技发明等;
2.能使用because ,however, but,so,so that 等连词拓展句子;
3.能正确使用“there will( not) be” 句型对未来的生活进行预测;
4.能正确使用more/less/fewer和其他形容词的比较级描述将来的变化;
5.写作微技能:善用连词,使文章逻辑清晰,思路流畅。
一、词汇积累
1.空闲时间________________
2.免费的_________________
3.活到200岁________________
4.在未来__________________________
5.关于未来的预言_____________________
6.处于极度危险之中_________________
7.一百年之后_____________________
8. 世界和平____________________
9.在海里_______________________
10.看到蓝天______________________
11.更多的污染_____________________
12.更少的自由时间__________________
13.更少的树_______________________
14.我希望如此。______________________
15.50年后 _______________________
16.和人类做同样的工作_____________________
17.一起度过时光___________________________
18.这条街对面_______________________________
19.在公寓里___________________________
20.编程人员__________________________
21.乘火箭飞往月球 __________________
22.住在太空站______________________
23.乘火车去上学______________________
24.人类的仆人______________________
25.帮忙做家务_________________________
26.制造汽车_____________________________
27.反复地______________________
28.感到厌烦_____________________
29.看起来像人类 _____________________
30.比如_________________________
31.不同意某人_____________________
32.几百年_________________________
33.倒塌,落下___________________________
34.似乎不可能 _____________________________
35.从某方面来说_____________________________
36.作为一名记者_____________________________
37.不适合养宠物________________________
38.在工作日______________________________
39.穿戴整洁______________________________
40.业余活动__________________________
二、句子积累
1.人人都应该贡献自己的一份力量来拯救地球。
______________________________________________________
2.未来是什么样子?
_______________________________________________________
3.我认为会有更多的污染。
_________________________________________________________
4.他们帮助做家务并且做一些像在肮脏或危险的地方干活之类的工作。
___________________________________________________________
5.现在已经有在工厂里工作的机器人了。[来源:学,科,网]
______________________________________________________________
6.科学家们正在努力使机器人更像人类并且能做与我们一样的事情。
______________________________________________________________
7.然而,他们承认这可能会花费数百年时间。
______________________________________________________________
8.如果里面有人的建筑物突然倒塌,这些蛇形机器人就能帮助寻找建筑物下的人。
_______________________________________________________________________
9. 20年后,我想我将成为一名报社记者。
__________________________________________________________
10.我认为学生们不再需要字典因为机器人会告诉他们单词的含义。
_________________________________________________________
11.你也应当记住生活中既会有好事也会有坏事。
____________________________________________________
三、以读促写
根据所给汉语或首字母提示,写出空白处所缺单词的正确形式。每空限填一词。完成后请找出文中的比较级并思考其在文中的用法。
Life in the f______1____is different from now.
For example,there won't be___2_____ ( 纸)moneyany more. People will shop on the Internet. And the Inter-net will play an important p____3_____in our daily life. Ofcoursethe net ______4_____( 环境) willnever: be____5_____ ( 危险的).
As for education , there____6_____ ( 甚至) won't beany schools on the _____7___( 地球). Students will havelessons at home on computer._____8____ ( 很可能,大概) teachers will teach them and give out homework
on the Internet. Children hand in their homeworkandtheycanalso check it by themselveson the Net.
Today there are___9_______ ( 已经 ) robots workingin different____10_____ ( 工厂 ) doing simple jobs allday and all night. We____11_______ ( 相信) there will bemore maclhines in ourfuture life. Robots will do all theboring and tiring housework for_____12____ (人类).Parents won't cook or washclothes. A cooking r___13_____willk breakfast anda servant robot will wake us up andservebreakfast to us.
Thanks to robots , it's____ 14_____ (可能的) that peo-ple will be much freer. There will be more_____15_____ ( 假期). Families will be able to spend moretime staying to-gether. ___16________( 在…期间) their holidays , peoplewill go sightseeing or traveling around the worldmoreoften. .
【参考答案】
一、词汇积累
1.free__time 2.be__free 3.live__to__be__200__years__old 4.in__the__future
5.the__prediction__about__the__future 6.be__in__great__danger 7.in__100__years
8.world peace 9.in the sea 10.see blue skies 11.more pollution 12.less free time
13.fewer trees 14. I__hope__so. 15. in__50__years 16.do the same jobs as people
17.spend time together 18. across__the__street 19. in__an__apartment 20. computer__programmer
21. fly__rockets__to__the__moon 22. live__on__a__space__station 23.take__the__train__to__school
24.human servants 25.help__with__the____housework 26.build__cars 27.over__and__over__again
28.get__bored 29. look__like__humans 30.for__example 31.disagree__with__sb
32. hundreds__of__years 33. fall__down 34.seem__impossible 35.at__some__point
36.as__a__reporter 37.be__no__good__for__pets 38.during__the__week 39.wear__smart__clothes
40.free__time__activities
二、句子积累
1. Everyone__should__play__a__part__in__saving__the__earth.
2.What__will__the__future__be__like?
3I__think__there__will__be__more__pollution.
4.They help with the housework and do jobs like working in dirty or dangerous places.
5.Today there are already robots working in factories.来源:学,科,网]
6.Scientists are now trying to make robots look like humans and do__the__same things as we do.
7.However, they agree it may take hundreds__of years.
8.If buildings fall_down with people inside,_these snake robots can help look_for people under the buildings.
9.In 20 years, I think I'll be a newspaper reporter.
10.I think students won't need dictionaries because a robot will tell them the meanings of words.
11.You should also remember that there will be both good and bad things in life.
三、以读促写
1. future 2. paper 3. part 4. environment 5. dangerous 6. even 7. earth
8. Probably 9. already 10. factories 11. believe 12. humans 13. robot 14. possible
15. holidays 16. During
思路点拨
1. 体裁:记叙文。
2. 人称:用第一、三人称。
3. 时态:主要用一般将来时。
能力拓展
一、材料作文
1. 新时代,每一位青少年都应该有理想、有志向、有目标、有抱负,成为中国梦的践行者。假如你是李华,你校英文报刊正以“My Dream Job”为题征文。请你用英文写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你未来想做什么工作,你为什么拥有这样的梦想,以及打算如何实现你的梦想。
提示词语:reporter, scientist, proud, work hard
提示问题:
● What do you want to be in the future? Why?
● How are you going to make your dream come true?
My Dream Job
It’s important for teenagers to have their own dream
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2. 随着科技的快速发展, 过去诸多看似不可能的事情在今天成为现实。若干年后, 人们的居住环境将会发生怎样的变化呢? 请你以"Our Life in the Future"为题, 写一篇英语短文, 展望一下人类未来的生活。
写作提示:
1.Where will people live in the future?
2. How will they go to work or go to school?
3. What's your opinion about the life in the future?
写作要求:
1.语句通顺, 条理清晰, 详略得当, 书写工整;
2. 100词左右, 题目已给出, 不计入总词数。
Our Life in the Future
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3. 阳光中学团委正在举行“畅想未来”的征文活动,请根据提示,以“My ideal school life”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。
现在
未来
至少写两点现在的情况。
1. 多彩的校园生活(课外活动……) 2. 多样的学习方式(网上学习……)
3. 和谐的人际关系(交友互助……) 4. 丰富的校外活动(做志愿者……)
My ideal school life
I am a student in Grade 8. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This is my ideal school life. I hope my dream will come true some day.
4. 每个人的未来都有很多种可能。你的未来将会是什么样的呢?假设你有一个可以看到二十年后你自己的"时间胶囊",请根据以下提示,以"My future"为题,写一篇文章介绍二十年后的你自己。
1.要点:
1)20年后你将干什么?
2)你将在哪里工作?
3)你的家庭和生活怎么样?
4)你怎么度过自己的业余时间?
5)你认为你的将来如何?
2.要求:
1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
2)词数80左右。文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My future
Everything will be possible in the future.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
1.例文
It’s important for teenagers to have their own dreams, such as being a reporter or a scientist. For me, I have a dream too. I want to be a doctor in the future. I think it’s a great and interesting job. I could save many people’s lives. I could also find a lot of happiness in this job. In order to make my dream come true, I am going to try my best to work hard at my subjects especally biology and chemistry. I believe I will be a good doctor in the future and I will be proud of it.
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作。要求根据所给提示以“My Dream Job”为题,谈谈自己未来想做什么工作,为什么拥有这样的梦想,以及打算如何实现梦想。
2.写作指导:本文应该以第一人称单数进行写作;以一般现在时为主,以一般将来时为辅,且可用“be going to do sth.”结构描述“打算如何实现梦想”。写作时应承接短文开头,点明自己的理想工作,接着阐述拥有这样一个梦想的理由并叙述打算如何实现梦想。注意要点要全面,即:覆盖题目要求中提到的所有要点和提示词语。
2.例文:
Our Life in the Future
I think that life in the future won't be the same as it is today.
With the help of technology, building houses on the sea will be possible. As the population is growing quickly, people may move onto the sea to live in the future. People will build houses on the sea at that time. In their houses, they will take the elevator to the underwater world. They will travel between the land and sea by plane or boat.
I hope all of these can come true and our life become better and better in the future.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇命题作文,以“Our Life in the Future”为题写一篇短文介绍人类未来的生活,根据所给提示,要求要点覆盖全面,可适当扩充;注意写作时要点齐全,同时也要紧扣主题。
2.写作指导:本文主要用一般将来时态,人称用第三人称。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式,注意连词的使用。全文要点明确,结构严谨,语法运用准确,注意上下文要连接流畅。
3.例文:
My ideal school life
I am a student in Grade 8. I have too much homework every day and I don't have time for after-school activities. I think my school life is terrible.
I hope our after-school activities are rich and colorful. We will play many ball games after school every day. I hope we can have little and easy homework. We will study online. We will use e-mails to send our homework to the teacher. I hope our teachers and classmates are very helpful and kind. If I have problems, I can ask them for help. What’s more, I want to be a volunteer to help others in need.
This is my ideal school life. I hope my dream will come true some day.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文,要求以“我理想的学校生活”为题写一篇文章。写作时至少描述两点现在的学校生活,并从多彩的校园生活、多样的学习方式、和谐的人际关系、丰富的校外活动四点展开,描述理想中的学校生活。
2.写作指导:本文以第一人称为主,用一般现在时描述现在的学校生活,用一般将来时描述未来的学校生活,注意主谓一致问题;写作时注意分段叙述,首段描述现在的生活;第二段描述未来;第三段总结概括。
4.One possible version:
My future
Everything will be possible in the future. What will your future be like?
In 20 years, I think I will be a doctor. I'll work in a big hospital in Beijing, because Beijing is one of my favorite cities. As a doctor, I'll try my best to help people become healthy. My work may be boring and I'll be busy and tired, but I think it will be meaningful. I'll also have a happy family with one child. I'll give him or her a very good education and help him or her be a useful person. When I'm free, I'll take my family to travel around the world. I think my future will be wonderful.
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目属于议论文写作,话题围绕“我的未来”,主要畅想二十年后的自己。写作时要注意结合题干给出的要点。第一段可以提出论点,二十年后的自己会是什么样?第二段可以进行细节描写,围绕题干要点进行展开和叙述。第三段可以进行适当总结和展望,并结尾。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来阐述;时态采用一般现在时和将来时为主,描述要点时可适当进行展开,发挥想象力,丰富要点细节,保证条理清晰。
Grammar(课时3)
知识精讲
话题分析
本单元的话题是了解未来的机器人科技,描述未来的生活,能正确的运用将来时态(be going to或者will),语言要精炼、准确,行文要流畅。
单元写作目标
能描述未来的生活
1.能用“will"描述未来的生活,内容包括居住环境、职业情况、生活水平、出行方式、日常饮食、科技发明等;
2.能使用because ,however, but,so,so that 等连词拓展句子;
3.能正确使用“there will( not) be” 句型对未来的生活进行预测;
4.能正确使用more/less/fewer和其他形容词的比较级描述将来的变化;
5.写作微技能:善用连词,使文章逻辑清晰,思路流畅。
一、词汇积累
1.空闲时间________________
2.免费的_________________
3.活到200岁________________
4.在未来__________________________
5.关于未来的预言_____________________
6.处于极度危险之中_________________
7.一百年之后_____________________
8. 世界和平____________________
9.在海里_______________________
10.看到蓝天______________________
11.更多的污染_____________________
12.更少的自由时间__________________
13.更少的树_______________________
14.我希望如此。______________________
15.50年后 _______________________
16.和人类做同样的工作_____________________
17.一起度过时光___________________________
18.这条街对面_______________________________
19.在公寓里___________________________
20.编程人员__________________________
21.乘火箭飞往月球 __________________
22.住在太空站______________________
23.乘火车去上学______________________
24.人类的仆人______________________
25.帮忙做家务_________________________
26.制造汽车_____________________________
27.反复地______________________
28.感到厌烦_____________________
29.看起来像人类 _____________________
30.比如_________________________
31.不同意某人_____________________
32.几百年_________________________
33.倒塌,落下___________________________
34.似乎不可能 _____________________________
35.从某方面来说_____________________________
36.作为一名记者_____________________________
37.不适合养宠物________________________
38.在工作日______________________________
39.穿戴整洁______________________________
40.业余活动__________________________
二、句子积累
1.人人都应该贡献自己的一份力量来拯救地球。
______________________________________________________
2.未来是什么样子?
_______________________________________________________
3.我认为会有更多的污染。
_________________________________________________________
4.他们帮助做家务并且做一些像在肮脏或危险的地方干活之类的工作。
___________________________________________________________
5.现在已经有在工厂里工作的机器人了。[来源:学,科,网]
______________________________________________________________
6.科学家们正在努力使机器人更像人类并且能做与我们一样的事情。
______________________________________________________________
7.然而,他们承认这可能会花费数百年时间。
______________________________________________________________
8.如果里面有人的建筑物突然倒塌,这些蛇形机器人就能帮助寻找建筑物下的人。
_______________________________________________________________________
9. 20年后,我想我将成为一名报社记者。
__________________________________________________________
10.我认为学生们不再需要字典因为机器人会告诉他们单词的含义。
_________________________________________________________
11.你也应当记住生活中既会有好事也会有坏事。
____________________________________________________
三、以读促写
根据所给汉语或首字母提示,写出空白处所缺单词的正确形式。每空限填一词。完成后请找出文中的比较级并思考其在文中的用法。
Life in the f______1____is different from now.
For example,there won't be___2_____ ( 纸)moneyany more. People will shop on the Internet. And the Inter-net will play an important p____3_____in our daily life. Ofcoursethe net ______4_____( 环境) willnever: be____5_____ ( 危险的).
As for education , there____6_____ ( 甚至) won't beany schools on the _____7___( 地球). Students will havelessons at home on computer._____8____ ( 很可能,大概) teachers will teach them and give out homework
on the Internet. Children hand in their homeworkandtheycanalso check it by themselveson the Net.
Today there are___9_______ ( 已经 ) robots workingin different____10_____ ( 工厂 ) doing simple jobs allday and all night. We____11_______ ( 相信) there will bemore maclhines in ourfuture life. Robots will do all theboring and tiring housework for_____12____ (人类).Parents won't cook or washclothes. A cooking r___13_____willk breakfast anda servant robot will wake us up andservebreakfast to us.
Thanks to robots , it's____ 14_____ (可能的) that peo-ple will be much freer. There will be more_____15_____ ( 假期). Families will be able to spend moretime staying to-gether. ___16________( 在…期间) their holidays , peoplewill go sightseeing or traveling around the worldmoreoften. .
【参考答案】
一、词汇积累
1.free__time 2.be__free 3.live__to__be__200__years__old 4.in__the__future
5.the__prediction__about__the__future 6.be__in__great__danger 7.in__100__years
8.world peace 9.in the sea 10.see blue skies 11.more pollution 12.less free time
13.fewer trees 14. I__hope__so. 15. in__50__years 16.do the same jobs as people
17.spend time together 18. across__the__street 19. in__an__apartment 20. computer__programmer
21. fly__rockets__to__the__moon 22. live__on__a__space__station 23.take__the__train__to__school
24.human servants 25.help__with__the____housework 26.build__cars 27.over__and__over__again
28.get__bored 29. look__like__humans 30.for__example 31.disagree__with__sb
32. hundreds__of__years 33. fall__down 34.seem__impossible 35.at__some__point
36.as__a__reporter 37.be__no__good__for__pets 38.during__the__week 39.wear__smart__clothes
40.free__time__activities
二、句子积累
1. Everyone__should__play__a__part__in__saving__the__earth.
2.What__will__the__future__be__like?
3I__think__there__will__be__more__pollution.
4.They help with the housework and do jobs like working in dirty or dangerous places.
5.Today there are already robots working in factories.来源:学,科,网]
6.Scientists are now trying to make robots look like humans and do__the__same things as we do.
7.However, they agree it may take hundreds__of years.
8.If buildings fall_down with people inside,_these snake robots can help look_for people under the buildings.
9.In 20 years, I think I'll be a newspaper reporter.
10.I think students won't need dictionaries because a robot will tell them the meanings of words.
11.You should also remember that there will be both good and bad things in life.
三、以读促写
1. future 2. paper 3. part 4. environment 5. dangerous 6. even 7. earth
8. Probably 9. already 10. factories 11. believe 12. humans 13. robot 14. possible
15. holidays 16. During
思路点拨
1. 体裁:记叙文。
2. 人称:用第一、三人称。
3. 时态:主要用一般将来时。
能力拓展
一、材料作文
1. 新时代,每一位青少年都应该有理想、有志向、有目标、有抱负,成为中国梦的践行者。假如你是李华,你校英文报刊正以“My Dream Job”为题征文。请你用英文写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你未来想做什么工作,你为什么拥有这样的梦想,以及打算如何实现你的梦想。
提示词语:reporter, scientist, proud, work hard
提示问题:
● What do you want to be in the future? Why?
● How are you going to make your dream come true?
My Dream Job
It’s important for teenagers to have their own dream
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2. 随着科技的快速发展, 过去诸多看似不可能的事情在今天成为现实。若干年后, 人们的居住环境将会发生怎样的变化呢? 请你以"Our Life in the Future"为题, 写一篇英语短文, 展望一下人类未来的生活。
写作提示:
1.Where will people live in the future?
2. How will they go to work or go to school?
3. What's your opinion about the life in the future?
写作要求:
1.语句通顺, 条理清晰, 详略得当, 书写工整;
2. 100词左右, 题目已给出, 不计入总词数。
Our Life in the Future
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3. 阳光中学团委正在举行“畅想未来”的征文活动,请根据提示,以“My ideal school life”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。
现在
未来
至少写两点现在的情况。
1. 多彩的校园生活(课外活动……) 2. 多样的学习方式(网上学习……)
3. 和谐的人际关系(交友互助……) 4. 丰富的校外活动(做志愿者……)
My ideal school life
I am a student in Grade 8. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This is my ideal school life. I hope my dream will come true some day.
4. 每个人的未来都有很多种可能。你的未来将会是什么样的呢?假设你有一个可以看到二十年后你自己的"时间胶囊",请根据以下提示,以"My future"为题,写一篇文章介绍二十年后的你自己。
1.要点:
1)20年后你将干什么?
2)你将在哪里工作?
3)你的家庭和生活怎么样?
4)你怎么度过自己的业余时间?
5)你认为你的将来如何?
2.要求:
1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
2)词数80左右。文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My future
Everything will be possible in the future.
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参考答案
1.例文
It’s important for teenagers to have their own dreams, such as being a reporter or a scientist. For me, I have a dream too. I want to be a doctor in the future. I think it’s a great and interesting job. I could save many people’s lives. I could also find a lot of happiness in this job. In order to make my dream come true, I am going to try my best to work hard at my subjects especally biology and chemistry. I believe I will be a good doctor in the future and I will be proud of it.
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作。要求根据所给提示以“My Dream Job”为题,谈谈自己未来想做什么工作,为什么拥有这样的梦想,以及打算如何实现梦想。
2.写作指导:本文应该以第一人称单数进行写作;以一般现在时为主,以一般将来时为辅,且可用“be going to do sth.”结构描述“打算如何实现梦想”。写作时应承接短文开头,点明自己的理想工作,接着阐述拥有这样一个梦想的理由并叙述打算如何实现梦想。注意要点要全面,即:覆盖题目要求中提到的所有要点和提示词语。
2.例文:
Our Life in the Future
I think that life in the future won't be the same as it is today.
With the help of technology, building houses on the sea will be possible. As the population is growing quickly, people may move onto the sea to live in the future. People will build houses on the sea at that time. In their houses, they will take the elevator to the underwater world. They will travel between the land and sea by plane or boat.
I hope all of these can come true and our life become better and better in the future.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇命题作文,以“Our Life in the Future”为题写一篇短文介绍人类未来的生活,根据所给提示,要求要点覆盖全面,可适当扩充;注意写作时要点齐全,同时也要紧扣主题。
2.写作指导:本文主要用一般将来时态,人称用第三人称。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式,注意连词的使用。全文要点明确,结构严谨,语法运用准确,注意上下文要连接流畅。
3.例文:
My ideal school life
I am a student in Grade 8. I have too much homework every day and I don't have time for after-school activities. I think my school life is terrible.
I hope our after-school activities are rich and colorful. We will play many ball games after school every day. I hope we can have little and easy homework. We will study online. We will use e-mails to send our homework to the teacher. I hope our teachers and classmates are very helpful and kind. If I have problems, I can ask them for help. What’s more, I want to be a volunteer to help others in need.
This is my ideal school life. I hope my dream will come true some day.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文,要求以“我理想的学校生活”为题写一篇文章。写作时至少描述两点现在的学校生活,并从多彩的校园生活、多样的学习方式、和谐的人际关系、丰富的校外活动四点展开,描述理想中的学校生活。
2.写作指导:本文以第一人称为主,用一般现在时描述现在的学校生活,用一般将来时描述未来的学校生活,注意主谓一致问题;写作时注意分段叙述,首段描述现在的生活;第二段描述未来;第三段总结概括。
4.One possible version:
My future
Everything will be possible in the future. What will your future be like?
In 20 years, I think I will be a doctor. I'll work in a big hospital in Beijing, because Beijing is one of my favorite cities. As a doctor, I'll try my best to help people become healthy. My work may be boring and I'll be busy and tired, but I think it will be meaningful. I'll also have a happy family with one child. I'll give him or her a very good education and help him or her be a useful person. When I'm free, I'll take my family to travel around the world. I think my future will be wonderful.
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目属于议论文写作,话题围绕“我的未来”,主要畅想二十年后的自己。写作时要注意结合题干给出的要点。第一段可以提出论点,二十年后的自己会是什么样?第二段可以进行细节描写,围绕题干要点进行展开和叙述。第三段可以进行适当总结和展望,并结尾。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来阐述;时态采用一般现在时和将来时为主,描述要点时可适当进行展开,发挥想象力,丰富要点细节,保证条理清晰。
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