2024年高考英语一轮复习专题八概要写作课件

这是一份2024年高考英语一轮复习专题八概要写作课件，共19页。PPT课件主要包含了题型要求，命题分析，文章大意，段落大意，表扬孩子也不好，参考范文一，要点 4等内容，欢迎下载使用。

概要写作题型要求根据所提供的材料写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。其中所提供的短文词数在 350 词以内，所选材料的题材和体裁没有限制。
一般来说，体裁以说明文、议论文为主，辅以记叙文等文体；题材则以考生熟悉的话题为主，段落相对较清晰。这一题型主要考查学生对文章主旨大意的概括和准确获取关键词的能力，同时考查学生用简洁的语言概括文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体结构的把握能力。具体来讲涉及三项核心能力：
一是提取文本的关键信息(即要点)。
二是用自己的语言对关键信息重新措辞。三是清晰、有逻辑、连贯地呈现要点。
三、评分标准(一)评分原则
1.本题总分为 25 分，按 5 个档次给分。
2.评分时， 先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.词数少于 40 和多于 80 的，从总分中减去 2 分。
4.评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现。
(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性。(3)上下文的连贯性。
(4)对各要点表达的独立性。
5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应
视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。
(二)各档次的给分范围和要求
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。
Parents everywhere praise their kids.Jenn Berman, authr f The
A t Z Guide t Raising Happy and Cnfident Kids, says, “We've
gne t the ppsite extreme f a few decades ag when parents
tended t be mre strict.” By giving kids a lt f praise, parents think
they're building their children's cnfidence, when, in fact, it may bejust the ppsite.T much praise can backfire and, when given in away that's insincere, make kids afraid t try new things r take a risk
fr fear f nt being able t stay n tp where their parents' praise hasput them.
Still, dn't g t far in the ther directin.Nt giving enughpraise can be just as damaging as giving t much.Kids will feel likethey're nt gd enugh r that yu dn't care and, as a result, may seen pint in trying hard fr their accmplishments.
S what is the right amunt f praise? Experts say that the qualityf praise is mre imprtant than the quantity.If praise is sincere andfcused n the effrt nt the utcme, yu can give it as ften as yur
child des smething that deserves a verbal reward.“We shuld
especially recgnise ur children's effrts t push themselves and
wrk hard t achieve a gal，” says Dnahue, authr f Parenting
Withut Fear: Letting G f Wrry and Fcusing n What Really
Matters. “One thing t remember is that it's the prcess nt the endprduct that matters.”
Yur sn may nt be the best basketball player n his team.But ifhe's ut there every day and playing hard, yu shuld praise his effrtregardless f whether his team wins r lses.Praising the effrt and
nt the utcme can als mean recgnising yur child when he haswrked hard t clean the yard, ck dinner, r finish a bk reprt.Butwhatever it is, praise shuld be given n a case-by-case basis and be
prprtinate (相称的) t the amunt f effrt yur child has put int
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父母对孩子的表扬过多或过少都会带来不好的影响，恰当的表扬应着重表扬孩子做事过程中的努力而非结果，并建立在实际情况的基础上。
第一段：主要介绍了父母从过去批评孩子到现在过度表扬孩
子，而过度的表扬也会对孩子造成伤害。
第二段：主要论述了在批评与表扬孩子方面不要走极端，不
第三段：主要论述了什么是高质量的表扬，对孩子的表扬要
真诚，并且注重孩子努力的过程而不是只关注结果。
第四段：归纳总结，点名表扬应遵循的原则，也就是鼓励与
表扬应该与其付出努力的程度成正比。
It is n easy jb t educate children.Parents are wrng frm strict
discipline in the past t excessive praise tday.( 要 点 1) Cnsiderable
praise helps t encurage children t make prgress, but dn't g frm
ne extreme t the ther.(要点 2) High-quality praise shuld fcus nchildren's effrts, rather than n results.( 要 点 3) The principle fr
dealing with praise is t cnsider the link between praise and effrt.