安徽高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份安徽高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共20页。试卷主要包含了开头已为你写出，不计入总词数；等内容，欢迎下载使用。

建议信
1．全国正在掀起一场停止浪费粮食的运动．假定你是学生会主席李华，请你写一封将在学校广播站英语之声播出的倡议书，内容包括：
1．主题：节约粮食, 停止浪费；2．原因：……；3．建议：……
注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．开头已为你写出，不计入总词数；
3．请按如下格式在答题卡的相对位置作答．
Dear schoolmates,
A campaign targeting stopping wasting food is being carried out across the country．
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2．假定你是李华，现在新冠病毒(Covid-19)在国外肆虐，你的英国朋友Tom，给你发来 Email，对此事忧心忡忡。请给他写一封 email，内容包括：
1. 关心和牵挂；
2. 体验和感受；
3. 建议和祝福。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
3．假如你是李华，你在负责本校英语报刊 Heart-to-Heart 栏目，一位同学给该栏目留言，希望得到你的帮助。请你阅读完该同学留言后用英语给她写一封建议信。
After I got into senior high school, I joined many clubs, including the volunteer club, dancing club and sports club. I really enjoy these extra curricular activities, but I find it hard to keep up with other students in my study.
Should I give up the clubs? What else can I do to improve my study? (A confused girl, Grade 1)
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 答题卡上注意书信格式。参考词汇: balance 平衡
Dear confused friend,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Charlie和家人打算暑假期间来中国旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1.表示欢迎；
2.旅行准备；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信就下周三要参加孔子学院（the Confucius Institute）的面试征询你的意见。请你写封回信，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 提出建议（至少两条）；
3. 表示祝愿。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3. 孔子学院是中外合作建立的非营利性机构，致力于增进世界各国人民对中国语言文化的了解，加强中国与世界各国教育文化交流合作。
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6．你的好朋友Kate想要来中国旅游，她写邮件希望你能提供建议，请你给她回复邮件，内容包括：
1．表示欢迎；
2．推荐一处旅游景点并简要介绍该旅游景点。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Kate，
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Yours，
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，你在北京的美籍朋友John，他一时无法融入到新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据以下要点用英语给他写封电子邮件：
1.帮他分析原因;
2.给他提出建议;
3.给他鼓励和信心。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John，
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in getting along well with the new class.

Yours
Li Hua
8．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友George不久前去美国留学，他给你发email说很不适应那里的生活、请你根据以下提示用英语给他回一封email，鼓励他勇敢面对。
1.尊重当地的风俗习惯
2.与美国学生多交流；
3.积极参加户外活动。
注意：1、词数100左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇：礼仪manners；适应adapt to
Dear George,
How nice to hear from you again!
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
9．假设你是李华，你的好朋友晓东给你写信，请你根据信的内容写一封回信，对信中晓东讲到的问题提出你自己的建议或者意见。
Dear friend,
I have a problem. I am not very good at communicating with people. Although I try to talk to my classmates, I still find it hard to make good friends with them. So I feel quite lonely sometimes. I do want to change this situation, but I don’t know how. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.
Yours,
Xiao Dong
注意:1.词数100-120左右
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3.注意字迹清晰，卷面整洁
10．假定你是李华, 你的好友王峰写信告诉你，由于他最近迷上了玩手机游戏, 无法自拔，导致上课注意力不集中，学习成绩下降, 而且为此和父母发生了争吵, 心里很烦恼。你很担心他，请根据以下的要点给王峰写一封回信，劝说他正确解决这个问题。
内容包括：
1. 表示理解。
2. 指出玩手机游戏上瘾的危害。
3. 提出建议，如和父母沟通等。
注意：1. 词数80左右, 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Wang Feng,
I'm sorry to hear that you're suffering from mobile game addiction.
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Yours,
Li Hua













1．参考范文
Dear schoolmates,
A campaign targeting stopping wasting food is being carried out across the country．With a lot of food wasted in our school every day, I am here to appeal to you to save on food．After all, it takes so much to grow and process food．Besides, many other people around the world are starving!
I earnestly suggest that we should never ask more food than we can eat, whether at home, school canteen or restaurants．And all the leftover should be properly dealt with and reused．Let's eat up and make a difference!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封将在学校广播站英语之声播出的以“停止浪费粮食”为主题的倡议书。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.主题：节约粮食, 停止浪费；
2.节约粮食的原因；
3.节约粮食的建议
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
appeal to ；after all； around the world；deal with；eat up；make a difference
第三步：连词成句
1.With a lot of food wasted in our school every day, I am here to appeal to you to save on food．
2.After all, it takes so much to grow and process food．
3.Besides, many other people around the world are starving!
4.I earnestly suggest that we should never ask more food than we can eat, whether at home, school canteen or restaurants．
5.And all the leftover should be properly dealt with and reused．
6.Let's eat up and make a difference!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
本文使用了表并列补充关系的衔接词：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] With a lot of food wasted in our school every day, I am here to appeal to you to save on food．（动词不定式作目的状语）
[高分句型2] I earnestly suggest that we should never ask more food than we can eat, whether at home, school canteen or restaurants．（that引导宾语从句）
2．Dear Tom,
From your email, I know you are worried about the situations in your country. I express my sincere concern about you and your family.
As you know, I’ve just gone through such a distressing and tough time, so I’ve got some experience in prevention. I’d like to share it with you. First, you should wear protective masks whenever you are going out. Second, you should wash your hands frequently and properly. Third, you’d better avoid going to crowded and airless places. In addition, it is vital that you should keep a good state of mind and feel optimistic about your life.
I believe the pandemic will surely be over and we will have a brighter future.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Tom写封邮件，表达在疫情期间对他的关心和建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时和少量现在完成时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 关心和牵挂；
2. 体验和感受；
3. 建议和祝福。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be worried about; sincere concern; go through; protective masks; wash one’s hands frequently and properly; keep a good state of mind; pandemic
第三步：连词成句
1. From your email, I know you are worried about the situations in your country.
2. I express my sincere concern about you and your family.
3. As you know, I’ve just gone through such a distressing and tough time, so I’ve got some experience in prevention.
4. First, you should wear protective masks whenever you are going out.
5. Second, you should wash your hands frequently and properly.
6. Third, you’d better avoid going to crowded and airless places.
7. In addition, it is vital that you should keep a good state of mind and feel optimistic about your life.
8. I believe the pandemic will surely be over and we will have a brighter future.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First, Secondly, Third
2.表并列补充关系：In addition
3.表因果关系：So
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]
As you know, I’ve just gone through such a distressing and tough time, so I’ve got some experience in prevention.(运用as引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
In addition, it is vital that you should keep a good state of mind and feel optimistic about your life.(运用主语从句)
3．Dear confused friend,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on your current situation. I quite understand that you are anxious to improve your study and enjoy the colorful extra activities at the same time.
Here are two suggestions for your problem. First, I recommend that you choose your favorite club and give up the other two. Spending too much time on extracurricular activities is bad and makes it difficult to focus on your study. Second, you should get used to balancing your study and extra activities. I am sure that you will keep up with your classmates after properly scheduling your school life.
I hope my advice would be helpful to you. Wish you success in your future study!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给向本校英语报刊 Heart-to-Heart 栏目留言的同学提出建议，帮助她在课外活动和学习间保持平衡，提高学习水平。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 了解该同学课外活动和学习的情况；
2. 给该同学的两条建议；
3.祝福。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
give up sth.; spend…on sth.; focus on sth.; get used to doing sth.; keep up with sth.; be helpful to sb.
第三步：连词成句
1. First, I recommend that you choose your favorite club and give up the other two.
2. Spending too much time on extracurricular activities is bad and makes it difficult to focus on your study.
3. Second, you should get used to balancing your study and extra activities.
4. I am sure that you will keep up with your classmates after properly scheduling your school life.
5. I hope my advice would be helpful to you.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表文章结构顺序：First, Second
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I quite understand that you are anxious to improve your study and enjoy the colorful extra activities at the same time. 用了that引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型2] Spending too much time on extracurricular activities is bad and makes it difficult to focus on your study. 动名词短语作主语。
4．One Possible Version
Dear Charlie,
So proud and pleased am I to learn that you are coming to China with your family during the summer holiday. It's a good opportunity to experience Chinese culture. Now I'm writing to offer you some practical advice.
It is a good idea for you to make careful preparations before you travel to China. To begin with, you should know of some Chinese culture, which can help you behave properly during your stay. Secondly, you'd better learn how to use chopsticks so that you can taste different varieties of yummy Chinese food. Last but not least, if you can speak some simple Chinese, it will be easy for you to communicate with locals wherever you go.
Hopefully, you will find your trip rewarding and have a great time in China!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国笔友Charlie写一封邮件，回复他在来信中询问的相关信息。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时
结构：三段式
第一段表示热烈欢迎；第二段给出旅行建议；第三标表达祝愿。
要求：
1.表示欢迎；
2.旅行准备；
3.你的祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
experience Chinese culture; offer sb. some practical advice; make careful preparations; know of; Chinese culture ; behave properly; taste different varieties of yummy Chinese food; communicate with; find your trip rewarding
第三步：连词成句
1. It's a good opportunity to experience Chinese culture.
2. I'm writing to offer you some practical advice.
3. It is a good idea for you to make careful preparations before you travel to China.
4. You should know of some Chinese culture, which can help you behave properly during your stay.
5.You can taste different varieties of yummy Chinese food.
6. It will be easy for you to communicate with locals wherever you go.
7.You will find your trip rewarding
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：To begin with, Secondly, Last but not least
2.表修饰限定关系：which
3.表条件、目的关系：if, so that
4.表建议：you should/you＇d better/ if you can…,it will …
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使文章连贯，逻辑清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]
So proud and pleased am I to learn that you are coming to China with your family during the summer holiday.
该句主句部分用了倒装结构，丰富了文章的句型结构，为文章添彩。
[高分句型2]
If you can speak some simple Chinese, it will be easy for you to communicate with locals wherever you go.
该句用了if条件句表达建议，时态上用到了“主将从现”原则。
[高分句型3]
To begin with, you should know of some Chinese culture, which can help you behave properly during your stay.
该句中用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，解释说明了了解中国文化的好处。
5．Dear Peter,
Glad to receive your letter asking me for some advice on the interview for the Confucius Institute scheduled for this coming Wednesday. I’m writing to remind you of what to prepare for.
It would be wise of you to read some books about Confucius, which could help to better understand traditional Chinese culture. It would also be beneficial to learn a few Chinese greetings. Additionally, wearing Han-style clothing will make you stand out among the candidates and impress the interviewers greatly.
I do hope my proposal could be practical. Wish you good luck!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回信，给予下周三参加面试的英国朋友Peter一些建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：建议信
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主兼用一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表达目的
      2.提出建议
      1）了解孔子。（Understanding Confucius）
      2）汉语交流。（Chinese communication）
      3) 汉式服装。（Han-style clothing）
      3. 表达祝愿。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组和句式）
some advice on the interview; remind you of what to prepare for; read some books about Confucius; understand traditional Chinese cultures; learn a few Chinese greetings; wearing Han-style clothing; Wish you good luck!
第三步：连词成句
1. I am glad to tell you some advice on the interview for the Confucius Institute scheduled for this coming Wednesday.
2. I’m writing to remind you of what to prepare for.
3. It would be wise of you to read some books about Confucius
4. You’d better learn a few Chinese greetings.
5. It’s good for you to wear Han-style clothing
6. I hope my proposal could be practical.
7. Wish you good luck!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。
第五步：润色修改
最后，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]：I’m writing to remind you of what to prepare for.这句话运用了特殊疑问词+不定式结构。
[高分句型2]：It would be wise of you to read some books about Confucius, which could help to better understand traditional Chinese culture. 这句话运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句。
[高分句型3]：Additionally, wearing Han-style clothing will make you stand out among the candidates and impress the interviewers greatly.这句话运用了动名词作主语。
6．One possible version:
Dear Kate,
I'm so glad to hear that you want to come to China. As for the tourist attraction, I’d like to recommend you to visit Mount Tai while you are here.
Mount Tai is famous for its beautiful scenery and long history, where there are many old famous temples there. Besides, the air is so fresh that it attracts many tourists all over the world. If you are interested in climbing mountains and visiting temples, it is definitely worth seeing. So I highly recommend it.
I hope you have a good trip!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给将要到中国旅游的好朋友Kate回复关于旅游的建议信。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1．表示欢迎；
2．推荐一处旅游景点并简要介绍该旅游景点。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be glad to hear; tourist attraction; recommend ; visit; be famous for; scenery; long history; temples ; Besides; fresh ; attracts ; tourists; all over the world; be interested in; climb mountains; definitely worth doing; highly.
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm so glad to hear that you want to come to China.
2. As for the tourist attraction, I'd like to recommend you to visit Mount Tai while you are here.
3. Mount Tai is famous for its beautiful scenery and long history, where there are many old famous temples there.
4. Besides, the air is so fresh that it attracts many tourists all over the world.
5. If you are interested in climbing mountains and visiting temples, it is definitely worth seeing.
6. So I highly recommend it.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly/First, Secondly, And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系：Besides, Additionally, moreover(供参考)
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Some…,while others…, so…that…(供参考)
4.表因果关系：So, Because, As, Thus, Therefore, As a result(供参考)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]：Mount Tai  is famous for its beautiful scenery and long history, where there are many old famous temples there.(由where引导定语从句。)
[高分句型2]：Besides, the air is so fresh that it attracts many tourists all over the world. (由so…that…引导结果状语从句。)
[高分句型3]：If you are interested in climbing mountains and visiting temples, it is definitely worth seeing.(由if引导条件状语从句.)
7．Dear John，
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in getting along well with the new class.  One of the reasons, I believe, is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates and maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent.
I am sure，with your effort，you can manage to overcome these difficulties．In my opinion，learning to speak Putonghua and comparing notes with your classmates frequently are good ways for you to make new friends．In your spare time，you should play basketball or go to some parties．At last，I suggest that you should communicate with others confidently. In a word，I'm ready to help you whenever you turn to me for help．
I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible．
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在北京的美籍朋友John写一封电子邮件，针对他一时无法融入新班级的苦恼给出一些建议。
【详解】第一步：明确要求。本篇书面表达要求考生给在北京的美籍朋友John写一封电子邮件，针对他一时无法融入新班级的苦恼给出一些建议。题目要求写作内容应包括以下三条要点：1. 帮他分析原因；2. 给他提出建议； 3. 给他鼓励和信心。因此，可将写作分成三段。第一段：说明写信目的，分析问题原因。第二段：提出建议：学习普通话，和同学交流意见等等；给他鼓励和信心。第三段：结束语，表达祝愿。
第二步：列关键词。如：have trouble in doing sth.，along well with，too···to，make fun of，manage to，communicate with ， encourage sb. to do sth.，turn to sb. for help等。
第三步：连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句，注意主谓一致，时态语态等语法。
第四步：连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，如：In my opinion，At last，Also 等。书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】此范文表达流畅，语言优美，内容全面，符合题目要求。其中值得学习的句型有：动名词短语作主语。In my opinion, learning to speak Putonghua and comparing notes with your classmates frequently are good ways for you to make new friends. 让步状语从句。In a word, I’m ready to help you whenever you turn to            me for help.虚拟语气 At last, I suggest that you should communicate with others confidently.高级句式的使用彰显作者对英语高水平的驾驭能力。
8．Dear George,
How nice to hear from you again! I think it is natural for you not to get used to the life there. Here I have some suggestions for you.
First of all, you should respect the local customs there and try to involve yourself in the natives' lives. Just as the saying goes, "When in Rome, do as Romans do." Secondly, don't be afraid to communicate with American students and make friends with them. Friendship will bring you happiness. What's more, it is better for you to join in more outdoor activities with your friends, which may help you relax and have fun. Finally, mind your won manners and remain modest and honest when getting along with your friends.
I do hope my suggestions will help. May you adapt to your new life and enjoy your stay there.
                                                        Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回复询问信，得知不久前去美国留学的英国朋友George很不适应那里的生活，鼓励他勇敢面对。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.收到来信，得知对方的情况并引出建议。
      2.具体建议
      1）尊重当地的风俗习惯
       2）与美国学生多交流
       3) 积极参加户外活动。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
hear from；get used to；involve ...in；communicate with；make friends with；what's more；have fun；get along with；adapt to
第三步：连词成句
1. I think it is natural for you not to get used to the life there.
2.Here I have some suggestions for you.
3.First of all, you should respect the local customs there and try to involve yourself in the natives' lives.
4.Just as the saying goes, "When in Rome, do as Romans do."
5.What's more, it is better for you to join in more outdoor activities with your friends, which may help you relax and have fun.
6.Finally, mind your won manners and remain modest and honest when getting along with your friends.
7.I do hope my suggestions will help.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：What's more, it is better for you to join in more outdoor activities with your friends, which may help you relax and have fun.这句话运用了which引导的定语从句，使用了一些固定词组，如hear from；get used to；involve ...in；communicate with；make friends with等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9．Dear Xiao Dong,
     I learned from your letter that you had difficulty communicating with people, especially talking with your classmates. Here are some tips for you.
    First of all, you should be active in class activities like questions and answers as well as
discussion. In this way, you can draw your classmates’ attention. People always like to make friends with the one who is active. What’s more, why not practice your spoken English with your classmates as much as possible. It’s a good way to talk with your classmates. You can know each other better. At last, you are supposed to create an interest, which is similar to your classmates. Thus you can have something in common with them.
Hope my advice can be helpful. Looking forward to your reply.
【分析】本篇表达属于应用文，要求给朋友一些人际交往上的一些建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
要求：
1. 问候朋友
2. 给出具体建议
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
have difficulty; active; draw one’s attention; as much as possible; be supposed to; be similar to
第三步：连词成句
1. I learned from your letter that you have difficulty communicating with people, especially talking with your classmates.
2. you should be active in class activities like questions and answers as well as discussion.
3. In this way, you can draw your classmates’ attention.
4. why not practice your spoken English with your classmates as much as possible
5. At last, you are supposed to create an interest, which is similar to your classmates.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：People always like to make friends with the one who is active.这句话运用了定语从句。I learned from your letter that you have difficulty communicating with people, especially talking with your classmates.运用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
10．Dear Wang Feng,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re suffering from mobile game addiction. I completely understand how you feel and I'm writing to help you with the problem.
Actually, long-time exposure to mobile games affects not only your academic performance but also your health. It will harm your eyes as well as your brain. So it is high time that you kicked the habit. Here I’d like to offer you some suggestions. First of all, start some other hobbies, such as reading and working out regularly, which will take your mind off the game and help you resist the temptation. In addition, it is also a necessity to have a heart-to-heart conversation with your parents.
I hope these ideas can help you get rid of your addiction as soon as possible.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。
【详解】假定你是李华, 你的好友王峰写信告诉你，由于他最近迷上了玩手机游戏, 无法自拔，导致上课注意力不集中，学习成绩下降, 而且为此和父母发生了争吵, 心里很烦恼。你很担心他，请根据以下的要点给王峰写一封回信，劝说他正确解决这个问题。
内容包括：1. 表示理解；2. 指出玩手机游戏上瘾的危害；3. 提出建议，如和父母沟通等。
通过审题，可知应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时和一般将来时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】写作时要语言准确，要点全面，条理清楚。还要注意高级词汇和句型的运用来为文章增加亮点，如：I’m sorry to hear that you’re suffering from mobile game addiction. 宾语从句的运用；First of all, start some other hobbies, such as reading and working out regularly, which will take your mind off the game and help you resist the temptation.定语从句的运用。