安徽高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信

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邀请信
1．假定你是李华，你校将举办高中英语舞台剧表演比赛活动。请写封邮件给你校的外箱教师Miss Green，邀请她担任评委。内容包括：
1.比赛的目的；
2.比赛的时间和地点；
3.表示期待。
注意：词数100左右：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Miss Green,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2．假设你是李华。为了提高你们的英语水平，学校将举办一场英语晚会（ English evening），请给你校
的英语外教 Johnson写一封信，邀请他参加并准备一个简短的指导，要点如下
1.时间：9月16日晚上6:30至8:30；
2.地点：教学楼二楼礼堂
3.内容：英语剧、英文诗歌朗诵、英语歌曲演唱等
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．假定你是李华。为了普及急救知识，挽救更多的生命。你校预定于下周举行一场关于急救的知识讲座，请你用英语给外教James写一封邮件，邀请他出席该活动，内容包括：
1.活动的时间、地点和主题；
2.告知该活动的重要性；
3.希望他能发言。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．假定你是李华,春节将至,你校将举办新年贺卡(NewYeargreetingcards)设计大赛,你给留学生朋友Peter用英语写一封邮件,邀请他参加本次比赛｡包括以下要点:
1.活动要求:手工制作,应包含图画和文字｡
2.作品评奖:由学校美术老师担任评委,选出30件优秀作品｡
3.作品提交截止时间:1月20日前｡
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯｡
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5．假定你是李华，下周你校将举办一场艺术作品展。请你给你校的外教Mrs. Brown写一封信，邀请她前来观看展览。内容包括：
1.展览的时间、地点及展出内容；
2.作品情况简介。
注意： 1.词数100左右;     2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：书法 calligraphy；插花 flower arrangement
6．假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观人工智能展览。请给他写邮件,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.展览内容;
3.展览意义。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:人工智能Artificial Intelligence
7．假定你是李华，学生会主席。你校和英国某中学是友好学校。对方学校将举办“中国文化周”，邀请你校派学生参加。请你给负责该项目的老师Jason写一封电子邮件表示感谢邀请并询问相关事宜。内容如下：
1. 活动开始时间；
2. 活动内容；
3. 学生住宿安排。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jason,
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8．假定你是李华，你校象棋俱乐部将举办象棋比赛。请你用英语给你的交换生朋友Peter
写一封电子邮件邀请他参加，内容包括:
1. 比赛时间及地点；
2. 参加比赛的意义；
3. 报名方式及截止日期
注意:
1. 词数80左右
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
Dear Peter，
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Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
9．假定你是英语科代表李华，你们班想在下个月举行的校园文化艺术节上表演舞台剧《百万英镑》，并打算在本周六上午进行彩排。请给外教Mr.Smith发一封邮件，邀请他来指导你们的节目。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：彩排rehearsal
Dear Mr.Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．假如你是某国际学校的学生李华，在即将到来的西方文化节中，你们班将上演哑剧“The Gold Rush”，你希望得到外教James的指导和帮助。请你根据以下要点提示给外教James写一封邮件。内容包括：
1. 要求外教观看排练；
2. 希望外教给予指导。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
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1．One possible version:
Dear Miss Green,
How’s everything going? An excellent English Stage Play Performances Competition is approaching in our school, and I’m writing to invite you to be a judge.
In order to improve students’ enthusiasm for learning English, provide them with a platform to show themselves and broaden their cultural horizons, the competition, which is scheduled to fall on next Friday from 4 pm to 6 pm, will be held in our school hall.
The experienced judges like you are the key to the success of the competition. What’s more, I believe your gentle character, the impressive comments and your guidance will definitely add color to this activity.
I truly hope that you can join us. Looking forward to your arrival!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外箱教师Miss Green写封邮件，邀请她在你校将举办的高中英语舞台剧表演比赛活动中担任评委。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时,少量现在进行时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 比赛的目的；
2. 比赛的时间和地点；
3. 表示期待。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
invite sb. to do sth.; in order to do; provide sb. with sth.; broaden one’s cultural horizons; be scheduled to do sth.; fall on; the key to sth.; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. An excellent English Stage Play Performances Competition is approaching in our school, and I’m writing to invite you to be a judge.
2. In order to improve students’ enthusiasm for learning English, provide them with a platform to show themselves and broaden their cultural horizons, the competition, which is scheduled to fall on next Friday from 4 pm to 6 pm, will be held in our school hall.
3. The experienced judges like you are the key to the success of the competition.
4. Looking forward to your arrival!
5.I truly hope that you can join us.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表并列补充关系：What is more
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] In order to improve students’ enthusiasm for learning English, provide them with a platform to show themselves and broaden their cultural horizons, the competition, which is scheduled to fall on next Friday from 4 pm to 6 pm, will be held in our school hall. (运用which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I truly hope that you can join us. （运用that引导的宾语从句）
2．Possible version
Dear Mr Johnson,
I’m writing to tell you that an English evening will be held on the second floor of our teaching building from 6:30 p.m. to 8:30 p.m. on September 16. Varieties of English activities are well prepared, including performing English plays, reciting English poems and singing famous English songs, which will surely give you a surprise.
I sincerely invite you to attend the activity and please prepare a short speech to give us some instructions, which will be greatly appreciated. So please come if it is convenient to you.
Looking forward to sharing with you the pleasant time in the party!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英语外教 Johnson写一封信，邀请他参加英语晚会并准备一个简短的指导。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 介绍英语晚会的时间地点；
2. 介绍英语晚会的内容;
3. 发出邀请并表达期待。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
well prepared；from…to…；give sb. some instructions；look forward to；share…with…
第三步：连词成句
1.I’m writing to tell you that an English evening will be held on the second floor of our teaching building from 6:30 p.m. to 8:30 p.m. on September 16.
2.Varieties of English activities are well prepared, including performing English plays, reciting English poems and singing famous English songs, which will surely give you a surprise.
3.I sincerely invite you to attend the activity and please prepare a short speech to give us some instructions, which will be greatly appreciated.
4.So please come if it is convenient to you.
5.Looking forward to sharing with you the pleasant time in the party!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including(供参考)
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…(供参考)
4.表因果关系：So
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m writing to tell you that an English evening will be held on the second floor of our teaching building from 6:30 p.m. to 8:30 p.m. on September 16. (that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Varieties of English activities are well prepared, including performing English plays, reciting English poems and singing famous English songs, which will surely give you a surprise.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
3．Dear Sir,
I’m writing to tell you a piece of good news. There will be a speech about first aid to be held in the school hall from 2 pm to 4 pm next Friday. It will be an important event for us students to help others who suddenly fall ill or get injured before a doctor can be found. And knowing knowledge about first aid can save lives. So I sincerely invite you to attend the speech and make preparations to state your own opinions. You can tell us some information on how to do first aid. Your sharing will be of great benefit to us.
I’m looking forward to your attendance. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Him
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教James写一封邮件，邀请他出席学校预定于下周举行的关于急救的知识讲座。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般将来时，少量一般现在时和现在进行时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 活动的时间、地点和主题；
2. 告知该活动的重要性；
3. 希望他能发言。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
a speech about first aid; in the school hall; from 2 pm to 4 pm next Friday; an important event for us students; save lives; make preparations; state opinions; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. There will be a speech about first aid to be held in the school hall from 2 pm to 4 pm next Friday.
2. It will be an important event for us students to help others who suddenly fall ill or get injured before a doctor can be found.
3. And knowing knowledge about first aid can save lives.
4. So I sincerely invite you to attend the speech and make preparations to state your own opinions. 5 You can tell us some information on how to do first aid.
6. Your sharing will be of great benefit to us.
7. I’m looking forward to your attendance.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：And
2.表因果关系：So
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but（供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] There will be a speech about first aid to be held in the school hall from 2 pm to 4 pm next Friday. （不定式的被动式作后置定语）
[高分句型2] It will be an important event for us students to help others who suddenly fall ill or get injured before a doctor can be found.（动词不定式用作主语，it作形式主语，关系代词who引导限制性定语从句）
4．Dear Peter,
As the Spring Festival is approaching, our school is planning to hold a competition for designing New Year greeting cards. I think you may be interested in the activity so I am writing to offer you more information about it
It is required that all the works be made by hand, and it is better to include both drawings and greeting words on your card. The art teacher from our school will act as judges for the competition. They are responsible for picking out 30 excellent pieces from all the works.
Since you are so good at drawing, chances are that you will win the award in the event and can communicate with other competitors.
And do remember that the deadline is January the 20th.
All the best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生留学生朋友Peter用英语写一封邮件,邀请他参加本次新年贺卡比赛。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.活动要求:手工制作,应包含图画和文字｡
2.作品评奖:由学校美术老师担任评委,选出30件优秀作品｡
3.作品提交截止时间:1月20日前｡
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be interested in ；by hand；act as ；be responsible for；pick out；be good at；communicate with
第三步：连词成句
1.As the Spring Festival is approaching, our school is planning to hold a competition for designing New Year greeting cards.
2.I think you may be interested in the activity so I am writing to offer you more information about it
3.It is required that all the works be made by hand, and it is better to include both drawings and greeting words on your card.
4.The art teacher from our school will act as judges for the competition.
5.They are responsible for picking out 30 excellent pieces from all the works.
6.Since you are so good at drawing, chances are that you will win the award in the event and can communicate with other competitors.
7.And do remember that the deadline is January the 20th.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] It is required that all the works be made by hand, and it is better to include both drawings and greeting words on your card. （it作形式主语，真正的主语是that引导的主语从句，and连接两个并列句）
[高分句型2] Since you are so good at drawing, chances are that you will win the award in the event and can communicate with other competitors.（since引导原因状语从句，that引导表语从句）
5．Dear Mrs. Brown,
An art exhibition will be held in our school next week. I know that you are interested in artworks, so I'm writing to invite you to attend it.
The art exhibition will take place in the library of our school from Monday to Friday next week. Many artworks, including calligraphy works, flower arrangement, paintings and drawings, all of which are created by students or teachers in our school and are of high quality. I think you will take great interest in them.
I will be glad if you can come to enjoy the exhibition together with me. Looking forward to your coming．
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mrs. Brown写一封信，邀请她前来观看学校即将举办的艺术作品展。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般将来时，少量一般现在时。
结构：总-分-总法
要点：
1.展览的时间、地点及展出内容；
2.作品情况简介。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
art exhibition；invite sb. to do sth.；be interested in；take place；calligraphy works；flower arrangement；paintings and drawings；be of high quality；look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. An art exhibition will be held in our school next week.
2. I know that you are interested in artworks, so I’m writing to invite you to attend it.
3. The art exhibition will take place in the library of our school from Monday to Friday next week.
4. Many artworks, including calligraphy works, flower arrangement, paintings and drawings, all of which are created by students or teachers in our school and are of high quality.
5. I think you will take great interest in them.
6. I will be glad if you can come to enjoy the exhibition together with me.
7. Looking forward to your coming.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：including；and；
2.表因果关系：so；Because, As（供参考）
3.表条件关系：if
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I know that you are interested in artworks, so I’m writing to invite you to attend it.（使用了由that引导的宾语从句和由so连接的状语从句）
[高分句型2] Many artworks, including calligraphy works, flower arrangement, paintings and drawings, all of which are created by students or teachers in our school and are of high quality.（使用了现在分词作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3] I will be glad if you can come to enjoy the exhibition together with me.（使用了由if引导的条件状语从句）
6．Dear Henry,
How is everything going？Aware that you are a great enthusiast of Artificial Intelligence, I am writing to invite you to enjoy a special exhibition about it.
As we all know, Artificial Intelligence is rapidly transforming our life. To my great delight, an exhibition will be held in our science and technology museum, which will start on April 1 and last for seven days. In the exhibition not only can you witness robots that can do housework, but you can also experience self-driving vehicles. More interestingly, you can play the board game with AlphaGo, which is a computer program developed by Google. Meanwhile, a wide variety of the latest technologies will be displayed, including facial recognition.
I do believe that you will be deeply impressed by the exhibition. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Henry写封邮件，邀请他一起参观人工智能展览。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.展览时间、地点;
2.展览内容;
3.展览意义。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
to my great delight；not only…but also…；a wide variety of ； be deeply impressed by；look forward to；a great enthusiast of Artificial Intelligence
第三步：连词成句
1.Aware that you are a great enthusiast of Artificial Intelligence, I am writing to invite you to enjoy a special exhibition about it.
2.As we all know, Artificial Intelligence is rapidly transforming our life.
3.To my great delight, an exhibition will be held in our science and technology museum, which will start on April 1 and last for seven days.
4.In the exhibition not only can you witness robots that can do housework, but you can also experience self-driving vehicles.
5.More interestingly, you can play the board game with AlphaGo, which is a computer program developed by Google.
6.Meanwhile, a wide variety of the latest technologies will be displayed, including facial recognition.
7.I do believe that you will be deeply impressed by the exhibition.
8.Looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：not only...but
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but(供参考)
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result (供参考)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] To my great delight, an exhibition will be held in our science and technology museum, which will start on April 1 and last for seven days.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In the exhibition not only can you witness robots that can do housework, but you can also experience self-driving vehicles.（部分倒装）
[高分句型3] More interestingly, you can play the board game with AlphaGo, which is a computer program developed by Google. （which引导非限制性定语从句和过去分词作后置定语）
7．One possible verion:
Dear Jason,
I'm Li Hua, Chairman of the Students' Union. On behalf of the students, I'd like to express our heartfelt gratitude for inviting us to your school's upcoming Chinese Culture Week. To get further information, I’m writing to make some inquiries concerning the event.
Firstly, I'm wondering on what date the event is scheduled to start so that we can apply for visas and book air tickets in advance. Also, I want to ask about the specific activities throughout the week, because the information can help us make better preparations and promote our participation. Lastly, could you please tell us what type of accommodation(s) will be provided? If possible, we hope to stay in the school dormitory, which will offer us more opportunities for cultural exchange with your students.
Thanks again for your kind invitation. It would be highly appreciated if you could deal with my inquiries at your convenience. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给负责“中国文化周”项目的老师Jason写一封电子邮件表示感谢邀请并询问相关事宜。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在进行时,少量一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.对邀请表示感谢；
2.询问活动开始时间；
3.询问活动内容；
4.询问学生住宿安排。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
On behalf of; express our heartfelt gratitude for; make some inquiries; is scheduled to start; apply for visas and book air tickets in advance; the specific activities; what type of accommodation(s)
第三步：连词成句
1. On behalf of the students, I'd like to express our heartfelt gratitude for inviting us to your school's upcoming Chinese Culture Week.
2. To get further information, I’m writing to make some inquiries concerning the event.
3. Firstly, I'm wondering on what date the event is scheduled to start so that we can apply for visas and book air tickets in advance.
4. Also, I want to ask about the specific activities throughout the week, because the information can help us make better preparations and promote our participation.
5. Lastly, could you please tell us what type of accommodation(s) will be provided?
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly/First, Lastly
4.表因果关系：Because
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1].Firstly, I'm wondering on what date the event is scheduled to start so that we can apply for visas and book air tickets in advance.（so that引导的结果状语从句）
[高分句型2].If possible, we hope to stay in the school dormitory, which will offer us more opportunities for cultural exchange with your students.（which引导的定语从句）
[高分句型3].It would be highly appreciated if you could deal with my inquiries at your convenience.（it作形式主语）
8．Dear Peter,
A Chinese chess competition will be held from 2:00 pm to 4:00 pm in the school gym on December 2nd. Knowing that you are enthusiastic about playing Chinese chess, I’m writing to invite you to take part in it.
As far as I am concerned, this competition is very meaningful. First, you have the opportunity to play with different opponents, which can promote your chess-playing skill. Next, it’s really a great chance for you to make more friends with other students. If you are interested in it, please sign up at the office of the chess club or send an e-mail to chess@126.com before November 30th.
I’m looking forward to your participation.
Yours sincerely,
LiHua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生以李华的名义，邀请交换生朋友Peter参加学校象棋俱乐部举办的象棋比赛。
【详解】第一步：
审题体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 比赛时间及地点；
2. 参加比赛的意义；
3. 报名方式及截止日期
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be enthusiastic about; invite sb. to do sth.; as far as I am concerned; make friends; be interested in; sign up; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1.A Chinese chess competition will be held from 2:00 pm to 4:00 pm in the school gym on December 2nd.
2.Knowing that you are enthusiastic about playing Chinese chess, I’m writing to invite you to take part in it.
3.As far as I am concerned, this competition is very meaningful.
4.You have the opportunity to play with different opponents, which can promote your chess-playing skill.
5.It’s really a great chance for you to make more friends with other students.
6.If you are interested in it, please sign up at the office of the chess club or send an e-mail to chess@126.com before November 30th.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First, Next
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowing that you are enthusiastic about playing Chinese chess, I’m writing to invite you to take part in it.中使用了现在分词作状语，that引导宾语从句。
[高分句型2]First, you have the opportunity to play with different opponents, which can promote your chess-playing skill. 句中使用which引导非限制性定语从句。
9．Dear Mr. Smith,,
My name is LiHua, a student form Class6, Senior 2. I'm writing to ask you to do me a favor.
Our School Art Festival is to be held next month, when we will put on the pay The Million Pound Bank Note. In order to perform successfully, we will hold a rehearsal at 9:30 this Saturday morning. If you are available then, will you please come to watch our performance and give us some advice? Your guidance and suggestions will make a big difference to us. We are all eager for your help.
We would appreciate it very much if you could give some help. We are looking forward to your arrival.
Yours
LiHua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mr. Smith发一封邮件，邀请他来指导你们表演的舞台剧《百万英镑》。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
要求：
你们班想在下个月举行的校园文化艺术节上表演舞台剧《百万英镑》，并打算在本周六上午进行彩排。请给外教Mr. Smith发一封邮件，邀请他来指导你们的节目。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
do sb. a favor; put on the pay; available; guidance and suggestions; be eager for; give some help; look forward to;make a big difference.
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm writing to ask you to do me a favor.
2. Our School Art Festival is to be held next month, when we will put on the pay The Million Pound Bank Note.
3. In order to perform successfully, we will hold a rehearsal at 9:30 this Saturday morning.
4. If you are available then, will you please come to watch our performance and give us some advice?
5. Your guidance and suggestions will make a big difference to us.
6. We are all eager for your help.
7. We would appreciate it very much if you could give some help.
8.We are looking forward to your arrival.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）供参考)
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second(
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Our School Art Festival is to be held next month, when we will put on the pay The Million Pound Bank Note.运用when引导非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型2]
If you are available then, will you please come to watch our performance and give us some advice?运用if引导条件状语从句。
10．Dear Mr James,
I’m writing to ask for a favor from you. Could you please come and watch our mime “The Gold Rush ”, which is intended for the coming “Western Culture Festival”?
This being the first mime our class is going to put on, we are confronted with various problems during our first rehearsing. It is really a challenge to entertain the audience with nonverbal communication. Our next rehearsal is scheduled at 3:30 this Friday afternoon in our school auditorium. If you are available then, could you be so kind as to be present and offer some instruction?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教James写封邮件，请他为班里将上演的哑剧“The Gold Rush”给与指导和帮助。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 要求外教观看排练；
2. 希望外教给予指导。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
ask for a favor; is intended for; the first mime; put on; are confronted with; entertain the audience; nonverbal communication; is scheduled at; offer some instruction
第三步：连词成句
I’m writing to ask for a favor from you.
Could you please come and watch our mime “The Gold Rush ”, which is intended for the coming “Western Culture Festival”?
we are confronted with various problems during our first rehearsing.
It is really a challenge to entertain the audience with nonverbal communication.
If you are available then, could you be so kind as to be present and offer some instruction?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表修饰限定关系：which引导定语从句；
2.表请求和邀请：Could you please；could you be so kind as to be present
3.表礼貌的期待：I am looking forward to your early reply.
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Could you please come and watch our mime “The Gold Rush”, which is intended for the coming “Western Culture Festival”?该句中用which引导了非限制性定语从句，句式简洁，概括多个要点。
[高分句型2] This being the first mime our class is going to put on, we are confronted with various problems during our first rehearsing.该句中的being the first mime our class是现在分词短语做后置定语，修饰this，这种利用非谓语动词来做定语的形式，避免了重复使用定语从句的句式单一性，同时又巧妙地交代了内容要点。