高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友David作为交换生到中国学习。目前，他感到有点难以适应新的学习生活，发邮件向你求助。请你回复邮件，内容包括：

1.你的建议；

2.表达你的祝愿。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear David,

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Yours,  

Li Hua

2．假定你是李华。你的英国留学生朋友Mike写信告诉你，他被邀请参加由CCTV举办的中国诗词大会比赛，希望你就赛前准备给他提供一些建议。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：

1、祝贺他受到邀请；

2、提出赛前准备建议；

3、愿意提供帮助并表达祝愿。

注意：1、100词左右；

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mike,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

3．  假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 说明问题；

2. 提出建议。

注意：

  1. 写作词数应为80个左右；

  2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Ryan,

I’m Li Hua from Class 3.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

4．假如你是李华。你的朋友Li Ming进入高三后感觉学习压力很大，写信向你求助。请你用英文给他回一封信，就如何处理压力给他一些建议。

1. 既要努力学习也要学会放松（劳逸结合）；

2. 看关于如何解压的书籍；

3. 向朋友，老师或者父母倾诉。

注意：1.词数100左右；    

2.可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

Dear Li Ming,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

5．假如你是学生会主席李华，为促进学生身心健康发展，请你面向全体学生写一份倡议书，内容包括：

1.倡议目的；

2.倡议内容；

3.倡议与希望。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80词左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear fellow students,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

The Student Union

6．情景作文

注意：1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

I am glad to share my opinion with you.

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7．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国好友Jim来信说他收到理想大学的面试通知，他有些紧张。请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括：

1.  表示祝贺并给予安慰；

2.  提供建议并说明理由。

注意： 1.词数100左右；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

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8．你是高中学生李华，你的英国朋友Anna计划明年夏天高中毕业后来中国游玩，准备提前学一点汉语。她来email询问你关于汉语学习的建议。请给Anna回信，主要内容包括：

1.学习难点；

2.方法建议。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Anna,

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best regards,

Li Hua

9．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Caroline来信说她打算参加所在学校举办的文化节活动并介绍中国文化，想请你从下列主题中推荐一项：1.传统节日；2.文字发展。请你给她回信，内容包括：

1.你的建议；

2.推荐理由。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Caroline,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

10．假定你是李华。你校在新的一学期将会迎来一批外籍交换生。作为负责帮助这些交换生和他们的寄宿家庭(host family)联系沟通的学生导师(student mentor)，你刚收到一位交换生Peter的来信。在来信中Peter表达了对如何融入寄宿家庭的感到担忧和迷茫。请你给Peter回信，并给他一些如何跟寄宿家庭相处的建议。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

1．范文：

Dear David,  

Learning that you have trouble adapting to the new school life, I am writing to put forward some advice.

To begin with, I would like to suggest that you take an active part in various activities, through which you may make more Chinese friends. Besides, you had better spend time learning about the cultural differences between Chinese and English, because it can help you conquer cultural misunderstandings. In addition, it is a good idea/choice to ask the teachers or the School’s Helping Center for help. Last but not least, it is of great importance to learn to speak Chinese well, since it can contribute you to communicating with the Chinese more freely.

I sincerely hope that my suggestions would be helpful and practical to you. May you adapt to the new school life quickly and have a wonderful experience in China.

Yours,  

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友David回复邮件，对于他作为交换生到中国学习感到有点难以适应新的学习生活提出建议并表达祝愿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

积极参加：take an active part in→participate in actively

各种各样的：various→a variety of/all kinds of

克服：conquer→overcome

向某人求助：ask sb for help→turn to sb for help

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：In addition, it is a good idea/choice to ask the teachers or the School’s Helping Center for help.

拓展句：In addition, what is considered as a good idea/choice is to ask the teachers or the School’s Helping Center for help.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that you have trouble adapting to the new school life, I am writing to put forward some advice.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】To begin with, I would like to suggest that you take an active part in various activities, through which you may make more Chinese friends.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型3】Last but not least, it is of great importance to learn to speak Chinese well, since it can contribute you to communicating with the Chinese more freely.（运用了since引导的原因状语从句）

2．Dear Mike,

I’m more than delighted to receive your letter in which you told me that you were invited to participate in the Chinese Poetry Competition to be held next month. I’m writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.

I’d like to give you some advice. As far as I know, it is a good idea for you to recite ancient Chinese poetry as many as possible. What’s more, it is necessary to learn more about the background of each poet. I firmly believe that only if you make full preparations in advance are you likely to get through the next round of the competition.

Don’t hesitate to let me know if you need further help. Wish you a satisfactory result.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华。你的英国留学生朋友Mike写信告诉你，他被邀请参加由CCTV举办的中国诗词大会比赛，希望你就赛前准备给他提供一些建议。请你给他写一封回信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

参加：participate in→take part in

比赛：competition→contest

表达：express→convey

必要的：necessary→essential

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I’d like to give you some advice.

拓展句：I’d like to give you some advice, which I hope will be of great benefit to you.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m more than delighted to receive your letter in which you told me that you were invited to participate in the Chinese Poetry Competition to be held next month. (运用了“介词+关系代词”结构定语从句)

[高分句型2] I firmly believe that only if you make full preparations in advance are you likely to get through the next round of the competition. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

3．Dear Ryan,

 I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.

To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.

My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.

 Thank you for considering my suggestion.

 Yours sincerely,

 Li Hua

【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

首先：to begin with → first of all

提高：improve → progress

建议：suggestion → advice

选择：choose → select

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.

拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.

【点睛】[高分句型1]

This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语）

[高分句型2]

Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）

4．Dear Li Ming,

I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from great stress of studying. Here I’d like to give you some suggestions about dealing with your stress. 

Firstly, you ought to learn to study hard as well as relax if necessary. When tired, you can go walking or do some sports with your classmates. Secondly, as is well known, stress is to us what water is to fish, but do not give yourself too much stress or you may feel frustrated and tired, which is bad for your health. Thirdly, I think it would be beneficial if you could share some of your inner emotions with your friends, parents or teachers.

I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友Li Ming写封信，就如何处理压力给他一些建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

压力：stress→pressure

首先：firstly→in the first place

有益的：beneficial→helpful

处理：deal with→cope with

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Here I’d like to give you some suggestions about dealing with your stress.

拓展句：Here I’d like to give you some suggestions which can deal with your stress.

【点睛】[高分句型1] When tired, you can go walking or do some sports with your classmates. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句和省略)

[高分句型2] Secondly, as is well known, stress is to us what water is to fish, but do not give yourself too much stress or you may feel frustrated and tired, which is bad for your health. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)

5．A Possible Version:

Dear fellow students,

As is known to all, it is health that really matters in the process of our learning and growth. Therefore, I appeal to every individual to take action in order to improve our physical and mental health.

Balancing our study and life always comes first, for only by doing so can we refresh ourselves to greet the new day ahead. Besides, it is also a must to participate in a variety of extracurricular activities, which can definitely relieve us of stress. Plus, doing voluntary work is bound to make a big difference.

Let’s keep healthy both physically and mentally together!

The Student Union

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是学生会主席李华，为促进学生身心健康发展，请你面向全体学生写一份倡议书。

【详解】1.词汇积累

为了：in order to→so as to

呼吁：appeal to→call for

健康的：healthy→fit

此外：besides→in addition

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Therefore, I appeal to every individual to take action in order to improve our physical and mental health.

拓展句：Therefore, I appeal to every individual to take action so that we can improve our physical and mental health.

【点睛】[高分句型1] As is known to all, it is health that really matters in the process of our learning and growth. (运用了as引导非限制性定语从句和强调句)

[高分句型2] Besides, it is also a must to participate in a variety of extracurricular activities, which can definitely relieve us of stress. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)

6．Dear David,

I am glad to share my opinion with you. As for the traditional Chinese gifts for exchange students, I would like to recommend Chinese paintings because Chinese paintings have a long history. By appreciating Chinese paintings, not only will the exchange students understand Chinese art better, but they will have a deep insight into Chinese culture. The second gift I want to recommend is hand-made Chinese knots, which symbolizes good luck, unity and prosperity. Chinese knots are a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people.

I believe the exchange students will fall in love with the two gifts and always remember the moments with us.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给YOUTH编辑David回信，就给交换生何种传统中国礼物给出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

至于：as for→with respect to

更好地理解：understand…better→have a better understanding of

象征：symbolize→stand for

相信：believe→be convinced

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Chinese knots are a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people.

拓展句：Chinese knots, which is a symbol of our great culture, are popular among Chinese people.

【点睛】【高分句型1】By appreciating Chinese paintings, not only will the exchange students understand Chinese art better, but they will have a deep insight into Chinese culture. (运用了not only …but (also)…句型和部分倒装)

【高分句型2】The second gift I want to recommend is hand-made Chinese knots, which symbolizes good luck, unity and prosperity. (运用了省略关系代词引导限制性定语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)

7．Dear Jim,

It was great to hear from you. Congratulations on being selected for the university interview! I know it can be a nerve-wracking experience, but I have every faith you’ll do brilliantly.

In terms of advice, remember to be yourself. You have a unique set of skills and experiences, so don’t be afraid to showcase them. Also, research the university thoroughly and prepare some questions that show your interest in the course. This will demonstrate your level of commitment and passion for the subject area. Additionally, do some practice interviews with friends or family members. This will help you feel more comfortable and confident on the day of the actual interview.

Good luck! I am rooting for you!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国好友Jim来信说他收到理想大学的面试通知，他有些紧张。要求考生给他回复一封邮件，表示祝贺并给予安慰，同时提供建议并说明理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

选择：select → choose

建议：advice → suggestions

害怕的：afraid → frightened

此外：Additionally → In addition

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Additionally, do some practice interviews with friends or family members. This will help you feel more comfortable and confident on the day of the actual interview.

拓展句：Additionally, do some practice interviews with friends or family members, which will help you feel more comfortable and confident on the day of the actual interview.

【点睛】[高分句型1]I know it can be a nerve-wracking experience, but I have every faith you’ll do brilliantly. (运用了省略连词that的宾语从句)

[高分句型2]Also, research the university thoroughly and prepare some questions that show your interest in the course. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)

8．Sample 1:

Dear Anna,

It’s wonderful to hear you’re planning to visit China and learning Chinese! I am thrilled to offer some advice that may help you along your language learning journey.

Firstly, one of the biggest challenges of learning Chinese is the pronunciation and tones. The four basic tones in Chinese can be tricky, and even slight variations in tone can change the meaning of a word. Listening to native speakers and practicing with a tutor or language partner can help you to develop your ear for the language and improve your pronunciation. Another challenge is getting used to the grammar. Chinese sentence structure is quite different from that of English, so it may take some time to adjust. I suggest starting with basic sentence patterns and gradually working your way up to more complex structures. It may also be helpful to focus on learning practical vocabulary related to travel, such as directions, transportation, and ordering food. This will enable you to communicate more effectively during your trip.

I hope these tips are helpful to you, and I wish you the best of luck in your language learning journey. Don’t forget to have fun exploring the language and culture of China!

Best regards,

Li Hua

Sample 2:

Dear Anna,

Thank you for your email. I’m so looking forward to your visit to China and I think it’s a great idea to learn some Chinese before you come.

English-speaking people often think Chinese is difficult to learn because we don’t use the alphabet, but in practice it is not as difficult as it seems once you begin. What is much harder is the pronunciation, as the same sound with different tones would mean different things and correspond to different characters. I think the best advice about learning a language is to try to do a little every day — that’s much more effective, in my opinion, than doing a lot once a week or once a fortnight. It’d be sensible to have some lessons, but you’d have to do a lot of work on your own in between the lessons if you want to make good progress. Although pronunciation is difficult at first, I think that’s what you should concentrate on. Don’t worry too much about the writing of the characters. That way you’ll be able to communicate, even if you don’t know how to write.

Have fun in learning Chinese and enjoy the preparation process for your visit to China.

Best regards,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给计划明年夏天高中毕业后来中国游玩并准备学点汉语的英国朋友Anna写一封关于汉语学习建议的信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

激动的：thrilled→excited

习惯：get used to→become used to

有帮助的：be helpful→be of help

适应：adjust→adapt

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I suggest starting with basic sentence patterns and gradually working your way up to more complex structures.

拓展句：I suggest that you start with basic sentence patterns and gradually work your way up to more complex structures.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Listening to native speakers and practicing with a tutor or language partner can help you to develop your ear for the language and improve your pronunciation.(运用了动名词短语作主语)

【高分句型2】It may also be helpful to focus on learning practical vocabulary related to travel, such as directions, transportation, and ordering food.(运用了it作形式主语，不定式作真正主语的结构)

9．One possible version:

Dear Caroline,

Glad to receive your letter. With regard to the matter you mentioned, I’m writing to offer some suggestions.

I propose a brief introduction to the Chinese writing system be a good choice. To start with,China is widely known for its incredible civilization. Written Chinese becomes an important means by which China’s present is connected with its past. Moreover, Chinese writing is a significant part of the culture, known as Chinese calligraphy.Today, many people enjoy practicing this classic art,making it popular both at home and abroad.

Hope my suggestions can help. If you have any question, please feel free to tell me.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Dear Caroline.

Glad to receive your letter. With regard to the matter you mentioned, I’m writing to offer some suggestions.

I propose Chinese traditional festivals. To start with, China is widely known for its rich history. Over 5000 years’ history has witnessed the creation of many Chinese traditional festivals. You can talk about the Chinese new year, the Mid-autumn festivals, or the Dragon boat festival, each of which has incredible stories behind. Moreover, celebrations of traditional festivals can reflect people’s lifestyles. You can even compare festivals and their celebrations with the similar ones in your country.

Hope my suggestions can help. If you have any question, please feel free to tell me.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Caroline写封回信，向她推荐一个主题以帮助她参加其学校举办的文化节活动并介绍中国文化。

【详解】1.词汇积累

关于：with regard to→ in reference to/concerning/as to

首先：to start with→ first of all/firstly

此外：moreover→ what’s more/besides

重要的：significant → important

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Today, many people enjoy practicing this classic art, making it popular both at home and abroad.

拓展句：Today, many people enjoy practicing this classic art, which makes it popular both at home and abroad.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Written Chinese becomes an important means by which China’s present is connected with its past.（运用了which引导的定语从句）

【高分句型2】If you have any question, please feel free to tell me.（运用了if引导的状语从句）

10．Dear Peter,

It’s fantastic that you’re already turning your mind to ways of making your visit to China a success! Here are a few tips that I think will help you.

First of all, bear in mind that there’s no need to feel nervous or awkward. As the ancient saying ‘Nothing is more delightful than meeting friends from far away’ indicates, hospitality is one of China’s most cherished traditional virtues, so your host family will certainly strive to make you feel at home. Additionally, whatever you encounter, you should keep an open mind. From food to travel, countless unimaginable experiences are awaiting you, and whether it’s eating smelly tofu or rowing a dragon boat, the key is to just have a try! Last but not least, it goes without saying that you should be as outgoing as you can, and show curiosity about Chinese culture and your host family’s lives.

All in all, just relax and keep an open mind! You’re in for a truly wonderful experience, and we’re all eagerly anticipating your arrival!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生作为帮助今年新入学的交换生和他们的寄宿家庭联系沟通的学生导师，给Peter写信告诉他一些如何跟寄宿家庭相处的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

记住：bear in mind → learn by heart

此外：additionally → what’s more

遇到：encounter → come across

令人愉快的：delightful → enjoyable

2.句式拓展

主动语态变被动语态

原句：You’re in for a truly wonderful experience, and we’re all eagerly anticipating your arrival!

拓展句：You’re in for a truly wonderful experience, and your arrival is eagerly being anticipated！

【点睛】【高分句型1】Here are a few tips that I think will help you. (运用了关系代词that引导的定语从句)

【高分句型2】Additionally, whatever you encounter, you should keep an open mind. (运用了whatever引导的让步状语从句)