吉林高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假定你是李华，目前由于疫情（epidemic/ pandemic），你的好友Jim正在居家上网课，但感觉学习效率不高，非常烦恼，因此写信向你询问如何提高网课效率。请你用英语给他回信提些建议。

1.上网课时，远离其他电子设备，专心听讲

2.制定学习计划，合理规划时间

注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头结尾已给出，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：电子设备  electronic device

Dear Jim,

Knowing that you need to take online courses because of the pandemic, I’m writing to offer some useful suggestions on how to improve your study efficiency.

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Hopefully, these suggestions will be of great help to you. Take good care of yourself during the pandemic.

Yours,

Lihua

2．假定你是李华，你的交换生朋友John 即将参加一场中文考试，这次考试结果会影响到他是否能继续留在中国学习，因此他很焦虑。请你写一封电子邮件给他提供一些备考建议，内容包括：

1.注重基础；

2.进行针对性练习；

3.调整心态。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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3．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris刚刚升入高中，感到一切都很陌生。他在邮件中向你询问如何融入新环境。请你根据以下信息回信：

1.多跟同学交流沟通；

2.积极参加学校活动；

3.向老师寻求帮助。

注意：写作词数应为80左右；

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4．假定你是李华，你的美国好友Steve准备下周六举办一个生日宴会。请你就新冠疫情期间的注意事项，给他写封邮件。内容包括：

1.你的建议；

2.注意事项；

3.你的祝愿。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：新冠疫情COVID-l9 pandemic

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5．假如你是李华，你的朋友李月面对即将来临期中考试，感到学习压力很大，不知道如何排解，写信求助于你。请你用英语给她写一封信，提出一些合理建议。

内容包括：

1.正确对待考试

2.正常休息

3.其他建议

注意：1.词数80左右；

2开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Li Yue

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

6．假如你是高一学生李华，非常关心野生动物的保护工作，请你根据以下要点给世界自然基金会写一封100词左右的信。要点如下：

1. 简述野生动物的现状；

2. 说明原因；

3. 你的建议。

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Yours,

Li Hua

7．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Michael打算来中国旅行，让你推荐一个旅游胜地。请你给Michael回信，内容包括：

1.你的建议；

2.你的理由；

3.你的祝愿。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答

Dear Michael,

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Yours,

Li Hua

8．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter在中国留学两年后即将返回美国。他打算送给他的寄宿家庭每人一份礼物，为此来信向你求助，请你回信给他提供一些建议。内容包括：

(1)肯定他的做法；

(2)具体的建议；

(3)表达祝愿。

注意：(1)词数100左右；

(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

9．假定你是高二学生李华，对校园中乱丢垃圾的行为颇有感触，请用英文给校长写封信，内容包括：

1.写信目的；

2.对不良行为提出批评；

3.提出建议。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.段落开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

写作要求：

1.请根据表达需要合理使用表格里所列句型。

2.根据上下文逻辑和衔接需要，在句与句之间适当添加过渡语以使行文连贯。

3.表达要有理有据：有观点有支撑。表达须与上下文逻辑相一致。

Dear Principal,

I am Li Hua, a senior 2 student of our school.

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I would like to put forward some suggestions.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

10．假如你是李华，你的笔友Jack写信告诉你，由于学习压力过大，他经常不吃饭，也不锻炼，导致身体虚弱，学习状态欠佳。请你给他回信。

内容要点：提出2-3条健康生活的建议。

要求：1.词数80左右。2.作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jack,

I was worried and concerned when I heard about your present situation. Therefore, I’m writing to offer you some suggestions of a healthy life, aiming to kick your bad habits which are harmful to your health. My suggestions are listed as follows.

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I hope you can take my suggestions, build up your body and make steady progress with your study.

Yours,

Li Hua

1．Dear Jim,

Knowing that you need to take online courses because of the pandemic, I’m writing to offer some useful suggestions on how to improve your study efficiency.

To begin with, when taking online courses, you are supposed to stay away from electronic devices, which will undoubtedly distract your attention from time to time. By keeping a distance with them, you will find it easier to focus on your lessons. In addition, to help improve your learning efficiency, I strongly recommend you to make a study schedule. Only when you are aware of your arrangement can you make better use of your time. If necessary, you’d better contact your teacher whenever you feel confused. It is the timely communication with your teacher that will save you a lot of troubles.

Hopefully, my advice will be of great help to you. Take good care of yourself during the epidemic.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim写一封信，针对如何提高网课效率给出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

由于：because of→on account of

建议：suggestion→advice

专注于：focus on→concentrate on

此外：in addition→additionally

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：In addition, to help improve your learning efficiency, I strongly recommend you to make a study schedule.

拓展句：In addition, I strongly recommend that you make a study schedule, which can help improve your learning efficiency.

【点睛】【高分句型1】By keeping a distance with them, you will find it easier to focus on your lessons.（运用了动名词作宾语，it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的宾语）

【高分句型2】To begin with, when taking online courses, you are supposed to stay away from electronic devices, which will undoubtedly distract your attention from time to time.（运用了现在分词作状语，动词不定式作主语的补语，which引导的非限制性定语从句）

2．Dear John,

I’ve heard that you’re anxious because of a coming Chinese exam, which will determine whether you can continue your study in China. Here I have some suggestions on how to prepare for the exam.

First, you should pay attention to some basic knowledge like spelling and contents from the textbook. Second, you’d better practice key points. Remember that quality is more important than quantity. Finally, a good mental state plays an important role in each exam.

I wish you a good result in your exam.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生朋友John写一封电子邮件，给他提供一些中文考试备考建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

因为：because of →due to

建议：suggestion → advice

为……做准备：prepare for →make a preparation for

最终：Finally → Eventually

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Here I have some suggestions on how to prepare for the exam.

拓展句：Here I have some suggestions that/which will help you prepare for the exam.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I’ve heard that you’re anxious because of a coming Chinese exam, which will determine whether you can continue your study in China.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和whether引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】Remember that quality is more important than quantity.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

3．Dear Chris,

 I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful.

 First, I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible. In this way, you will get to know each other better. Second, it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities, which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships. Lastly, faced with some tough problems, you might consider asking your teachers, who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions.

 I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you. If there is anything more I can do to help, please let me know.

 Yours,

 Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Chris写封信，告知他融入新环境的建议，内容包括：1.多跟同学交流沟通；2.积极参加学校活动；3.向老师寻求帮助。

【详解】1.词汇积累

困难：trouble→difficulty

建议：suggestion→advice

有益的：helpful→beneficial

提供：offer→provide

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：In this way, you will get to know each other better.

拓展句：If you do in this way, you will get to know each other better.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Second, it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities, which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Lastly, faced with some tough problems, you might consider asking your teachers, who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)

4．Dear Steve,

I heard that you are going to hold a birthday party next Saturday. Since the current COVID-19 pandemic has not ended, as your best friend, I have something to say to you. The specific suggestions are as follows.

First and foremost, try to choose a well ventilated place and use public chopsticks and other methods to reduce the possibility of infection. Secondly, keep a distance and avoid mass gatherings. You'd better invite only some relatives and close friends. Last but not least, shorten the party time as much as possible. Remind those who attend the party to pay attention to proper personal protection.

I hope my suggestions can be helpful to you. Happy birthday to you and everything goes well!

                                                                                                                    Yours,

                                                                                                                     Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友史蒂夫写信，就新冠疫情期间举行生日聚会的注意事项给出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

具体的：specific→ detailed

建议：suggestion → advice

措施：method → measure

适当的：proper→ appropriate

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：First and foremost, try to choose a well ventilated place and use public chopsticks and other methods to reduce the possibility of infection.

拓展句：First and foremost, try to choose a place which is well ventilated and use public chopsticks and other methods to reduce the possibility of infection.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I heard that you are going to hold a birthday party next Saturday. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】Remind those who attend the party to pay attention to proper personal protection.（运用了who引导的定语从句）

5．Dear Li Yue,

I am sorry to hear that you are under such great pressure due to the approaching mid-term examination. I’d like to offer some suggestions.

Firstly, it’s important to have a positive attitude towards exams, which to some extent helps figure out your problems. Moreover, you’d better kick your habit of staying up late and try to keep good hours. Lastly, why not turn to your teachers, friends and classmates for help when things don’t work out as expected?

Just relax and believe in yourself. I am firmly convinced that you can make it.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的朋友李月面对即将来临的期中考试，感到学习压力很大，不知道如何排解的情况，用英语给她写一封信，提出一些合理建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

压力：pressure→ stress

提供：offer →afford

重要的：important→ vital

解决：figure out→ solve

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I am sorry to hear that you are under such great pressure due to the approaching mid-term examination. I’d like to offer some suggestions.

拓展句：I am sorry to hear that you are under such great pressure due to the approaching mid-term examination, so I’d like to offer some suggestions.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, it’s important to have a positive attitude towards exams, which to some extent helps figure out your problems.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Lastly, why not turn to your teachers, friends and classmates for help when things don’t work out as expected?（运用了when引导的时间状语从句。）

6．Dear Sir or Madam ,

I am writing to show my concern about wildlife because at present some wild animals are dying out or in danger.

On the one hand, people hunt animals for food or for clothing, because their fur can be made into clothes. On the other hand, we humans can’t live in harmony with animals which they think are fierce and can attack them. For this reason, they are afraid of wildlife and endanger them.

In order to protect the wildlife from extinction, I suggest that we should set up some special zones for wildlife. What’s more, the most important thing is letting people realize the importance of wildlife protection. Only in this way can wild animals be saved.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是高一学生李华，非常关心野生动物的保护工作，请你根据以下要点给世界自然基金会写一封100词左右的信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

担心：concern→worry

灭绝：die out→be extinct

凶猛的：fierce→ferocious

此外：what’s more→besides

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：On the other hand, we humans can’t live in harmony with animals which they think are fierce and can attack them.

拓展句：On the other hand, we humans can’t live in harmony with animals because they think the animals are fierce and can attack them.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing to show my concern about wildlife because at present some wild animals are dying out or in danger. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)

[高分句型2] On the other hand, we humans can’t live in harmony with animals which they think are fierce and can attack them. (运用了which引导定语从句)

7．Dear Michael,

I’m glad that you are coming to visit China. There is one city I want to recommend to you.

Bejing, the capital of China, has a long history. Many ancient dynasties made it their capitals, so there are many majestic buildings. If you want to have an enjoyable journey, I advise you to visit the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Palace museum. Besides, Beijing is also famous for its local delicacies that you haven’t tasted. Wishing you a pleasant trip in China!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，给你的英国笔友Michael回信，为他推荐一个中国的旅游胜地。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

高兴的：glad→delighted

此外：Besides→What’s more

著名的：famous→known

佳肴，特色菜：delicacy→speciality

2. 句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Many ancient dynasties made it their capitals, so there are many majestic buildings.

拓展句：Because many ancient dynasties made it their capitals, there are many majestic buildings.

【点睛】[高分句型1] If you want to have an enjoyable journey, I advise you to visit the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Palace museum. (运用If引导条件状语从句)

[高分句型2] Besides, Beijing is also famous for its local delicacies that you haven’t tasted. (运用that引导定语从句)

8．Dear Peter,

I’m glad to hear that you want to buy some gifts for your mother that represent Chinese culture. And I am writing to give you some advice.

Personally, I think you should buy the following two gifts: Qipao and Chinese knot. Qipao, a very beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women, can show the real beauty of a woman. I am sure your mother will like it very much. What’s more, it is also a good choice for you to buy the Chinese knot. It is usually hung in the sitting room or cars, which represents good luck.

Wish you a good vacation. Please give my best wishes to your family.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter在中国留学两年后即将返回美国。他打算送给他的寄宿家庭每人一份礼物，为此来信向你求助，请你回信给他提供一些建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：advice→suggestion

就我而言：personally→as far as I’m concerned

选择：choice→option

代表：represent→stand for

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Qipao, a very beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women, can show the real beauty of a woman.

拓展句：Qipao, which is a very beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women, can show the real beauty of a woman.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m glad to hear that you want to buy some gifts for your mother that represent Chinese culture. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] It is usually hung in the sitting room or cars, which represents good luck. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)

9．Dear Mr. Principal,

I am Li Hua, a senior 2 student of our school. I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among us students: littering and scribbling.

I would like to put forward some suggestions. First, it makes our school dirty and does harm to the image of our school. I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. What’s more, it is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble everywhere. Therefore, I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I’m convinced that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students , our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给用英语给校长写一封信，批评校园中存在的随意涂写和乱丢垃圾的行为并提出建议。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

不适当的：improper→inappropriate

对......有害：does harm to→does damage to

另外：what’s more→in addition

同时：at the same time→in the meanwhile

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among us students: littering and scribbling.

拓展句：I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour which can be seen among us students: littering and scribbling.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Therefore, I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour.(运用了if引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] I’m convinced that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

10．Dear Jack,

I was worried and concerned when I heard about your present situation. Therefore, I’m writing to offer you some suggestions of a healthy life, aiming to kick your bad habits which are harmful to your health. My suggestions are listed as follows.

Firstly, you should keep a balanced diet. You should avoid eating food high in fat and too much sweet food. You’d better eat more fresh vegetables and fruits. Secondly, taking exercise every day helps build up a strong body. Why not take more exercise in your spare time? As we all know, regular exercise is an important part of keeping us healthy. Finally, make sure that you have enough sleep and you mustn’t stay up too late at night.By eating properly and exercising regularly, you can keep your body at a proper weight and stay healthy.

 I hope you can take my suggestions, build up your body and make steady progress with your study.     

                                                                         Yours,

                                                                          Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如考生是李华，你的笔友Jack写信告诉你，由于学习压力过大，他经常不吃饭，也不锻炼，导致身体虚弱，学习状态欠佳。请你给他回信。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

确定的：certain→sure

足够的：adequate→ enough

空闲的： free→ spare

做运动：do sports→ take exercise

2. 句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：You should avoid eating food high in fat and too much sweet food. You’d better eat more fresh vegetables and fruits.

拓展句：You should avoid eating food high in fat and too much sweet food，eating more fresh vegetables and fruits.

【点睛】[高分句型1] As we all know, regular exercise is an important part of keeping us healthy.（as引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2] Secondly, taking exercise every day helps build up a strong body.（动名词做主语）