吉林高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信

邀请信

1．假定你是李华，你的交换生朋友Jack要回国，为了表达你对他帮助你学英语的感激之情，你想邀请他和你的家人一起共进晚餐。请依据下列要点，给Jack写封信：

1.邀请并感谢；

2.晚餐安排。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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2．假定你是李华，你校近期要举行第一届校园艺术节，请你以组织者的身份邀请好友Steve来参加艺术节，内容包括:

1. 活动时间、地点；

2. 活动目的、主题、内容等；

3. 表达期待。

注意:1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

3．假设你是李华，学校邀请著名书法家沈鹏到校举行书法讲座。请你给外教David写封邮件邀请他参加。

内容要点：1.讲座时间：5月15日（星期日）上午8:00---11:00；

2.讲座地点：艺术楼演讲大厅；

3.活动安排：听讲座，讨论及提问题，观摩名家即兴创作等；

注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.calligraphy 书法；improvise即兴表演

Dear David,

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Yours,

Li Hua

4．假设你是李华，得知这周末市博物馆要举行为期两天的中国邮票展。来自英国的交换生Eric喜欢集邮，请你给Eric写一封信，邀请他一起去参观。要点如下：

1.写信目的；2. 主要活动；3. 约定会面。

注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Eric,

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Yours,

Li Hua

5．假如你是李华，在过去一周你在英国参加中学生文化交流活动，期间一直住在你的英国好友Peter家，现在已经回国。请你根据以下要点给他写一封感谢信。

要点包括：

1. 表达感激之情；

2. 回忆各种收获；

3. 邀请他有空时来中国玩。

注意：词数100左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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6．假定你是学生会主席李华。你校将举办第四届英语文化节（English and Beyond），届时会有精选话剧表演《错误的喜剧》，《傲慢与偏见》等。请写封邮件，邀请外教Kevin参加活动，内容包括：

1. 时间和地点：

2. 活动安排；

3. 欢迎他点评。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：《错误的喜剧》The Comedy of Errors    《傲慢与偏见》Pride and Prejudice

Dear Kevin,

I’m Li Hua, I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

7．最近我们学校高一年级组织了一场盛大的英语文化周活动，其中包括书法比赛（handwriting），百词竞赛（vocabulary），演讲比赛（speech），歌曲和配音比赛（singing and dubbing），并于上周五进行了一次综合汇演(joint performance)。请给你的朋友Jack写一封信，向他介绍这次活动，内容包括：

1.介绍你喜欢的节目；2.讲述你的所见，所闻及所想；3.邀请他参加下一次的英语文化周活动。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jack，

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Yours,

Li Hua

8．假如你是中学生李华, 曾在英国学习三个月，现已回国。你想联系你的英国老师Mr. Richard，但没有其联系方式。请根据以下要点给你的英国同学Jack写一封100词左右的信：

1、感谢Jack对你英语学习的帮助；

2、询问Mr. Richard的近况并索要其联系方式；

3、邀请Jack在暑假期间来杭州做客。

Dear Jack,

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Yours,

Li Hua

9．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友John来信询问中国人过春节的风俗习惯。请你结合自己家乡的实际情况给他回信，内容包括：

1. 春节的简介；

2. 过节的风俗习惯；

3. 邀请他来中国过春节。

注意:

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；

3. 信的开头已为你写好。

Dear John,

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Yours,

Li Hua

10．假设你是李华，请根据以下提示写一篇日记。

1. 今天心情不好，因为英语考试没考好。

2. 你的朋友Lin知道情况后邀请你去他家，这是你第一次去他家。

3. 吃过晚饭，Lin和你进行了面对面的交谈，鼓励你不要失去信心。

4. 你的感受。

注意：1. 词数110左右。

2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：邀请 invite

Nov. 1 Friday                                                              Windy

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1．Dear Jack,

How time flies! Two years has passed since you came to our school to learn Chinese as an exchange student. I’m so glad that you’ve made great progress in learning Chinese. Knowing that you are returning to your country, I feel quite upset and I would like to invite you to have dinner with my family to thank you for your help with my English in your spare time.

Without your help with my oral English and encouragement, I couldn’t have won the English Speech Contest held last month. Tomorrow evening, my parents are going to cook some dishes as a farewell dinner for you. I sincerely hope you can show up.

Looking forward to your early reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的交换生朋友Jack要回国，为了表达你对他帮助你学英语的感激之情，你想邀请他和你的家人一起共进晚餐。请依据下列要点，给Jack写封信：1.邀请并感谢；2.晚餐安排。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：exchange student(交换生)；make great progress in(取得巨大进步)；would like to (想要)；spare time (空闲时间)；oral English (英语口语)等。    

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用现在完成时、一般现在时和现在进行时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I’m so glad that you’ve made great progress in learning Chinese.运用结果状语从句；Knowing that you are returning to your country, I feel quite upset and I would like to invite you to have dinner with my family to thank you for your help with my English in your spare time.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

2．Dear Steve,

Our school is going to hold the first art festival from Oct. 1st to 3rd, 2019. This festival is aimed at making our after-class life more colorful, providing opportunities to show our talents and relax ourselves with the theme “Art Makes Us Rich”.

At the festival, not only will singing contests and instrument playing contests catch your eyes but also classical music, folk music and pop music will make you amazed and excited. You will feel completely relaxed and get away from troubles. So I really hope you will come and attend our festival.

I’m looking forward to the coming of the festival and sincerely hope that the festival will be a great success.

Wish you were here!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，你校近期要举行第一届校园艺术节，请你以组织者的身份邀请好友Steve来参加艺术节，内容包括:1. 活动时间、地点；

2. 活动目的、主题、内容等；3. 表达期待。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：hold the first art festival（举行第一届艺术节）；aimed at making our after-class life more colorful（旨在使我们的课余生活更加丰富多彩）；catch your eyes（引起你的注意）；make you amazed and excited（使你感到惊讶和兴奋）；等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级句子。This festival is aimed at making our after-class life more colorful, providing opportunities to show our talents and relax ourselves with the theme “Art Makes Us Rich”.现在分词作伴随状语；At the festival, not only will singing contests and instrument playing contests catch your eyes but also classical music, folk music and pop music will make you amazed and excited.部分倒装用在句中；I’m looking forward to the coming of the festival and sincerely hope that the festival will be a great success.句中使用宾语从句和抽象名词具体化。

3．Dear David,

I’m writing to invite you to the lecture on Chinese calligraphy which is the art of writing Chinese characters and especially refers to the rules of writing with a brush.

The lecture will be given by Shen Peng, a famous calligrapher, in the lecture hall of the Art Building on May 15th this Sunday. As far as I know, you like the traditional culture of China, so you will enjoy it.

The lecture will last from 8 a.m. to 11 a.m., mainly consisting of three parts: one and a half hours’ listening to the lecture, half an hour’s discussion and one hour for observing the calligrapher improvising on the spot.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假设你是李华，学校邀请著名书法家沈鹏到校举行书法讲座。请你给外教David写封邮件邀请他参加。内容要点：1.讲座时间：5月15日（星期日）上午8:00---11:00；2.讲座地点：艺术楼演讲大厅；3.活动安排：听讲座，讨论及提问题，观摩名家即兴创作等。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：the lecture on Chinese calligraphy（关于中国书法的演讲）；refers to the rules of writing with a brush.（指的是用毛笔书写的规则）；the traditional culture of China（中国的传统文化）；等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。I’m writing to invite you to the lecture on Chinese calligraphy which is the art of writing Chinese characters and especially refers to the rules of writing with a brush.句中which引导定语从句；The lecture will be given by Shen Peng, a famous calligrapher, in the lecture hall of the Art Building on May 15th this Sunday.句中使用一般将来时态的被动语态；As far as I know, you like the traditional culture of China, so you will enjoy it.独立成分用在句中。

4．Dear Eric,

I’m delighted to inform that there will be a Chinese stamp exhibition at the museum of our city this weekend. I’d like to invite you to go there with me.

As I know, you have been into Chinese stamps. At the exhibition, you will appreciate lots of Chinese stamps, including some rare ones, which show Chinese brilliant culture and the extraordinary achievements made by the Chinese in every aspect. Additionally, this will be a good opportunity for you to exchange some stamps with other collectors. I’m convinced that this valuable chance is what you can’t miss.

If you are free, shall we meet at the school gate at 7:00 a.m. this Saturday? I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假设你是李华，得知这周末市博物馆要举行为期两天的中国邮票展。来自英国的交换生Eric喜欢集邮，请你给Eric写一封信，邀请他一起去参观。要点如下：1.写信目的；2. 主要活动；3. 约定会面。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：delighted to inform（高兴告知）；a Chinese stamp exhibition（中国邮票展）；show Chinese brilliant culture（展示中国杰出文化）；to exchange some stamps with other collectors（和其他集邮的人交换一些邮票）；等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。文中使用高级句子。I’m delighted to inform that there will be a Chinese stamp exhibition at the museum of our city this weekend.句中使用宾语从句；As I know, you have been into Chinese stamps.句中使用as引导的非限制性定语从句；At the exhibition, you will appreciate lots of Chinese stamps, including some rare ones, which show Chinese brilliant culture and the extraordinary achievements made by the Chinese in every aspect.句中which引导非限制性定语从句。

5．Dear Peter,

I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in your country, without which I wouldn’t have enjoyed it so much.

Guided by you, I had a chance to visit some places of interest in England and experience such unique culture as well as beautiful scenery. Thanks to your generous help, I do believe that I have a better understanding of your country and culture. What’s more, during the week, the comfortable room, delicious meals and especially your friendly family made me feel at home.

I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness. I will show you around in China. I am looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，在过去一周你在英国参加中学生文化交流活动，期间一直住在你的英国好友Peter家，现在已经回国。请你根据以下要点给他写一封感谢信。要点包括：1.表达感激之情；2.回忆各种收获；3.邀请他有空时来中国玩。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：convey (表达)；have a chance to (有机会)；unique culture(独特的文化)；as well as (而且)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in your country, without which I wouldn’t have enjoyed it so much.运用了非限定性定语从句；以及Thanks to your generous help, I do believe that I have a better understanding of your country and culture.运用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

6．Dear Kevin,

I am Li Hua, chairman of the English Club of our school Next week will again see our school annual celebration—the Fourth English Cultural Festival with its theme English and Beyond. It’s my great honor to invite you to join us.

As our tradition，the whole week, the campus will be immerged in colorful multicultural fairs. Drama Stage as the most attractive role, is scheduled to be held on the afternoon of next Friday in the assembly hall. The popular masterpieces like the Comedy of Errors, Pride and Prejudice from different grades will present a feast of eyes. I hope you can come and have fun with us. We’ll be more than obliged if you can comment on their performances, and provide us students with some advice.

I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求写一封邀请信。

【详解】根据提示，假如你是李华，你校将举办第四届英语文化节（English and Beyond），届时会有精选话剧表演《错误的喜剧》，《傲慢与偏见》等。请写封邮件，邀请外教Kevin参加活动，内容包括：1. 时间和地点；2. 活动安排；3. 欢迎他点评。注意事项：1.首先注意时态以将来时为主，其次人称使用第一人称。2. 根据文章的写作要求，可以分为二段：第一段活动的时间地点，第二段活动的内容，邀请的理由，并表达出你真诚的邀请。3. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然流畅。

【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高级词汇和句式。例如：be immerged in沉浸在…中；a feast of eyes 视觉盛宴；Drama Stage as the most attractive role, is scheduled to be held on the afternoon of next Friday in the assembly hall.该句熟练运用了被动语态；更为可赞的是本文在表达邀请时使用了多变的句式，如：It’s my great honor to invite you to….我很荣幸邀请您…； We’ll be more than obliged if you can… / I would appreciate it if you could… 如果您能…我（们）将不胜感激；等等。

7．        Recently, our school has hold an English Culture Weeks activity. It was so wonderful and amazing that we all were attractive by the joint performance last Friday.

There are a series of competitions,including handwriting, vocabulary, speech,singing and dubbing. All of them above , I like the VENOM and DOUBLE DRAGON best ,whose voices were so likely that we almost couldn’t recognize whether they were real or not. We got lots of fun and knowledge from the activity .The activity also stimulate our interests in English.The winners came up to the stage of pride.I hope I will join in this activity.

Would you like to join in us the next English Culture Weeks activity?

【分析】本文为记叙文。最近我们学校高一年级组织了一场盛大的英语文化周活动，其中包括书法比赛，百词竞赛，演讲比赛 ，歌曲和配音比赛，并于上周五进行了一次综合汇演。请给你的朋友Jack写一封信，向他介绍这次活动，内容包括：介绍你喜欢的节目；讲述你的所见，所闻及所想；邀请他参加下一次的英语文化周活动。

【详解】本题为提纲式作文。根据要求可知，第一部分从总体上叙述这次盛大的文化周及总体评价。第二部分具体描述文化周活动及自己的所闻及所想。最后一部分邀请你的朋友来参加下一次的英语文化周活动。

【点睛】本文内容完整，结构合理。文中的句式相对灵活多变，简单句与复合句相结合。复合句有so...that...引导的状语从句It was so wonderful and amazing that we all were attractive by the joint performance last Friday；由whose引导的定语从句I like the VENOM and DOUBLE DRAGON best ,whose voices were so likely that we almost couldn’t recognize whether they were real or not； 宾语从句we almost couldn’t recognize whether they were real or not和 宾语从句 I hope I will join in this activity等。

8．Dear Jack,

Thanks for your kind help during my stay in Britain. With your help, I have made great progress in my English study.

How is Mr. Richard? I want to know something about his life. I tried to get in touch with him, but unfortunately, I don’t have his address and can’t contact him. Do you have his email or his telephone number?

Would you like to visit Hangzhou during the summer holidays? You see, Hangzhou is a pretty tourist city, which is well-known for the West Lake. I can show you around some places of interest in Hangzhou. I am sure you will stay happily here and learn a lot of funny things.

I’m looking forward to your reply!

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hu

【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生写一封电子邮件。

【详解】第一步：应用文表达，开头结尾给出，注意格式规范，整篇文章使用一般的时态，符合书信语境表达。

第二步：根据内容要点，列出感谢Jack对你英语学习的帮助，询问Mr. Richard的近况并索要其联系方式及邀请Jack在暑假期间来杭州做客。要点概括全面，关键短语，句子选用合理，如have made great progress,  get in touch with, is well-known for, show … around…等等。

第三步：连词成文，结构衔接得体，字数适当，句子运用准确。

【点睛】按照提示，要点全面，语句通顺，准确运用了时态和语态，上下文连贯，符合逻辑关系，同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子为文章增添了色彩和亮点。如 You see, Hangzhou is a pretty tourist city, which is well-known for the West Lake. which引导的非限制性定语从句。I tried to get in touch with him, but unfortunately, I don’t have his address and can’t contact him. 运用转折关系的并列句。这些句式运用准确，使文章结构更加合理，显示了很高的英语水平。

9．Dear John,

Thank you for your Email. I’m more than happy to share with you what I know.

Spring Festival is the most ceremonious traditional festival of the Chinese nation. It is a happy and peaceful festival for family and friends to get together and a bond for people to deepen their feelings. In order to celebrate Spring Festival, we will stick couplets, set off firecrackers, have dinner, watch the Spring Festival Gala, and so on. There is a jubilant atmosphere everywhere.

I’d like to invite you to China for the Spring Festival with us.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；假定你是李华，你的英国朋友John来信询问中国人过春节的风俗习惯。请你结合自己家乡的实际情况给他回信，内容包括:1. 春节的简介；2. 过节的风俗习惯；3. 邀请他来中国过春节。人称使用第一、三人称。时态使用一般现在时态和一般将来时态。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：Spring Festival（春节），the most ceremonious traditional festival（最隆重的传统节日），the Chinese nation（中华民族），get together（团聚），stick couplets（贴春联）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。如In order to celebrate Spring Festival, we will stick couplets, set off firecrackers, have dinner, watch the Spring Festival Gala, and so on.中，使用了不定式及并列谓语。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

10．Nov.1 Friday                                                              Windy

I felt upset the whole afternoon because I didn’t do well in the English exam. My best friend Lin learned about it and then invited me to Lin’s home.

It was the first time that I had been there. His family gave me a warm welcome. After dinner, Lin talked with me face to face. He told me that I shouldn’t give in to difficulty. Everyone would face failure. So long as I kept trying, I could succeed in time.

Now, I have become cheerful and above all I’ve regained self-confidence. I believe the worst enemy in one’s life in oneself. I shouldn’t lose heart just because of one or two failures. As I still have chances to try.

【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一篇日记；假设你是李华，请根据以下提示写一篇日记。1. 今天心情不好，因为英语考试没考好。2. 你的朋友Lin知道情况后邀请你去他家，这是你第一次去他家。3. 吃过晚饭，Lin和你进行了面对面的交谈，鼓励你不要失去信心。4. 你的感受。

第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：do well in（做的好）；learn about（了解）；invite（邀请）；face to face（面对面）；give in（屈服）；lose heart（灰心）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时。

第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如I felt upset the whole afternoon because I didn’t do well in the English exam.运用了原因状语从句；He told me that I shouldn’t give in to difficulty.运用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。