吉林高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份吉林高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共20页。

建议信
1．假设你是李华，见到班里有同学吸烟，给他们写一封建议信，建议他们戒烟，并发表在学校英语报上。包括下列内容：
1. 吸烟对自己的健康有害；
2. 吸烟对周围同学的危害；
3. 吸烟浪费钱。
注意：
1. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；
2. 词数 100 词左右。
Dear classmates,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．假如你是李华，是某时尚杂志的编辑。读者Lucy向你咨询如何选择适合自己的服饰。作为专业人士，请你给Lucy写邮件提供建议，内容包括：
1. 服装款式的选择；
2. 配饰或颜色的搭配；
3. 个人风格的体现。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：accessories 配饰
Dear Lucy,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3．假如你是李华，你的笔友Michael写信告诉你他最近沉迷于踢足球，每天花很多时间练球，结果学习成绩受到影响。父母和老师很不满，要他放弃这个爱好，他很烦恼。请你就他的问题给他提一些有用的建议，如：
1. 理解父母，和他们真诚沟通；2. 规划好自己的时间；3. 保持学习和爱好之间的平衡。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．假如你是李华，一名高一在读学生，最近和父母谈论进入大学后选专业的问题，在意见上和爸妈分歧很大，对此感到很苦恼，现写信向你的英国外教Mr. Jackson求助，要点如下:
1.说明事由；
2.希望提供与父母成功沟通的案例和建议；
3.感谢帮助。
注意: 1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Jackson,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．假设你是李华，你的朋友John沉迷于抖音 (TikTok) 而不能自拔，写信向你寻求帮助，请你给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1. 表示理解和关心；
2. 沉迷抖音的影响；
3. 提出具体建议。
要求：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假设你是李华，你的网友David 刚随父母搬家并换了一所新学校，他希望在新学校交到新朋友，并希望得到你的帮助。请你给他写一封电子邮件，提供在新学校交朋友的建议。
内容包括：1.对他搬新家表示慰问；2.提供在新学校交朋友的建议（至少两点）。
要求：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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7．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack刚刚升入高中，但他一时无法适应新的校园生活，写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回一封建议信，内容主要包括：
1.实际上很多新生对于高中生活感到困惑，因此不必过多担心；
2.建议：
(1)报名参加课外活动，这有助于结交更多的新朋友；（课外的：extra-curricular)
(2)做好日程安排，要特别关注学习，因为作为一名青少年，好好学习是我们的责任。
3.希望建议能适合你。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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8．假定你是李华，你发现许多学生倒掉午餐到学校的小卖部去买零食，于是在同学中做了调查。请给校长写封信，内容包括：
1.产生此现象的原因；
2.解决问题的具体建议。
注意：
1.词数100词左右；
2.信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear School President,
I am Li Hua, a senior student in your school. Recently, I found a lot of students pouring lunch in the school canteen and going to buy snacks instead.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Your student,
Li Hua
9．假如你是王林，昨天收到即将进入高中学习的表弟李明的来信，他向你询问怎样快速适应高中生活。请你根据以下要点给他写一封建议信，词数100左右。
1.培养独立意识，处理好师生关系。
2.养成良好学习习惯。
3.合理饮食，多运动，保持身体健康。
Dear Li Ming,
I am glad that you will study in the senior high school.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Wang Lin
10．假设你是李华，在校园英语论坛（forum）上看到一些同学的帖子，他们在就如何学好英语寻求帮助。请你以Bookworm的网名给他们回帖，结合自己的经验提出一些建议。
内容提示：1）培养学习兴趣；2）找到适合的学习方法；3）勤学好问。
注意：1．词数100左右
2．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Bookworm















1．One possible version:
I am very sorry to see that some of you have got into the habit of smoking.
In my opinion, you should give it up. Firstly, smoking does harm to your physical health. Not only does it hurt your lung but also makes your clothes smelly. Secondly, smoking can pollute the surrounding air, which does greater harm to your classmates. Therefore, they will not get along well with you any more. Thirdly, it wastes your money and time. All in all, as middle school students, we should make full use of time to study hard instead of smoking.
In a word, I appeal to you to give up smoking immediately.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给班里同学写一封建议信，建议他们戒烟。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时等。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 吸烟对自己的健康有害；
2. 吸烟对周围同学的危害；
3. 吸烟浪费钱。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
the habit of smoking; do harm to health; pollute the surrounding air; waste money and time; make full use of time to study; instead of smoking; give up smoking
第三步：连词成句
1. I am very sorry to see that some of you have got into the habit of smoking.
2. In my opinion, you should give it up.
3. Firstly, smoking does harm to your physical health.
4. Not only does it hurt your lung but also makes your clothes smelly.
5. Secondly, smoking can pollute the surrounding air, which does greater harm to your classmates. 6. Therefore, they will not get along well with you any more.
7. Thirdly, it wastes your money and time.
8. All in all, as middle school students, we should make full use of time to study hard instead of smoking.
9. In a word, I appeal to you to give up smoking immediately.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序： Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, All in all, In a word
2.表并列补充关系： Not only…but (also)
3.表因果关系：Therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Not only does it hurt your lung but also makes your clothes smelly.（否定词位于句首引起半倒装）
[高分句型2] Secondly, smoking can pollute the surrounding air, which does greater harm to your classmates.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
2．One possible version:
Dear Lucy,
Knowing that you have trouble in choosing clothes, I am writing to give you some suggestions on it. Fine clothes make a man. As an experienced editor, I am more than happy to help you.  
Faced with numerous clothes, clothing choice is never easy. First of all, buying classics is a wise decision. Compared with fads, classics can stay popular for a long time. Secondly, colors and accessories can change the way you look. The same style can have different effects in different colors. At last, the clothes you choose often reflect your inner feelings and preferences. Your willingness to select your clothes carefully and keep them in good condition indicates that you feel good about yourself and take pride in your appearance.
I really hope you can become more beautiful and confident with fine clothes. If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Lucy写封邮件，在如何选择适合自己服饰方面给出一些专业的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 服装款式的选择；
2. 配饰或颜色的搭配；
3. 个人风格的体现。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
have trouble in doing sth.; more than; compare with; stay popular; feel good about oneself; take pride in; faced with
第三步：连词成句
1.Knowing that you have trouble in choosing clothes, I am writing to give you some suggestions on it.
2.Fine clothes make a man.
3.As an experienced editor, I am more than happy to help you.  
4.Faced with numerous clothes, clothing choice is never easy.
5.First of all, buying classics is a wise decision.
6.Compared with fads, classics can stay popular for a long time.
7.Secondly, colors and accessories can change the way you look.
8.The same style can have different effects in different colors.
9.At last, the clothes you choose often reflect your inner feelings and preferences.
10.Your willingness to select your clothes carefully and keep them in good condition indicates that you feel good about yourself and take pride in your appearance.
11.I really hope you can become more beautiful and confident with fine clothes.
12.If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Secondly, At last
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you have trouble in choosing clothes, I am writing to give you some suggestions on it.句中使用了现在分词作状语，that引导宾语从句。
[高分句型2] Faced with numerous clothes, clothing choice is never easy.句中使用了过去分词作状语。
[高分句型3] If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know. 句中if引导条件状语从句。
3．Dear Michael,
I'm sorry to know that you are not getting along well with your parents and teachers because you are obsessed with playing football. I’m writing to give you some suggestions about it.
First, if I were you, I would stand in my parents' shoes and communicate sincerely with my parents about my enthusiasm for football. Besides, making a plan can also be a sensible choice when it comes to improving efficiency. In addition, it would be beneficial if you could strike a balance between study and play.
I hope my advice will be of value to you and you’ll get good grades without quitting your hobby.
Your sincere,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友Michael写信，就他在爱好上与父母发生的分歧给出一些有用的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 理解父母，和他们真诚沟通；
2. 规划好自己的时间；
3. 保持学习和爱好之间的平衡。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be sorry to do sth.; get along well with sb.; be obsessed with; stand in one’s shoes; communicate with sb.; when it comes to; in addition; quit
第三步：连词成句
1.I'm sorry to know that you are not getting along well with your parents and teachers because you are obsessed with playing football.
2.I’m writing to give you some suggestions about it.
3.First, if I were you, I would stand in my parents' shoes and communicate sincerely with my parents about my enthusiasm for football.
4.Besides, making a plan can also be a sensible choice when it comes to improving efficiency.
5.In addition, it would be beneficial if you could strike a balance between study and play.
6.I hope my advice will be of value to you and you’ll get good grades without quitting your hobby.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序： First
2.表并列补充关系：Besides, In addition
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1]
I'm sorry to know that you are not getting along well with your parents and teachers because you are obsessed with playing football.句中that引导宾语从句，because引导原因状语从句。
[高分句型2]
First, if I were you, I would stand in my parents' shoes and communicate sincerely with my parents about my enthusiasm for football.本句使用了虚拟语气。
[高分句型3]
In addition, it would be beneficial if you could strike a balance between study and play.句中if引导条件状语从从句。
4．One possible version:
Dear Mr. Jackson.
Recently, I have discussed with my parents over what major I should choose in college. I didn’t expect our opinions were so different that we had a big argument. Extremely confused, I am writing to seek your advice.
Fascinated by history, I have long been inspired to learn Archaeology in college while my parents think it not competitive enough in the future job market. It would be nice of you to provide me with some typical cases where your students succeeded in communicating with their parents on this problem. Besides, my parents insisted that I go for some pragmatic majors like finance or business which I take no interest in. What should I do to change their mind? I would be quite appreciative if you could offer me some brilliant suggestions on how to resolve this dispute.
I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice. Looking forward to your writing back soon.
Yours.
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国外教Mr. Jackson写封信，在进入大学后选择专业方面寻求帮助。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和现在完成时，少量一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 说明事由；
2. 希望提供与父母成功沟通的案例和建议；
3. 感谢帮助。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
discuss sth. with sb.; so…that…; seek one’s advice;have a big argument; be inspired to do; provide sb. with sth.; succeed in; communicate with; take interest in; offer sb. sth.; benefit from
第三步：连词成句
1.Recently, I have discussed with my parents over what major I should choose in college.
2.I didn’t expect our opinions were so different that we had a big argument.
3.Extremely confused, I am writing to seek your advice.
4.Fascinated by history, I have long been inspired to learn Archaeology in college while my parents think it not competitive enough in the future job market.
5.It would be nice of you to provide me with some typical cases where your students succeeded in communicating with their parents on this problem.
6.Besides, my parents insisted that I go for some pragmatic majors like finance or business which I take no interest in.
7.What should I do to change their mind?
8.I would be quite appreciative if you could offer me some brilliant suggestions on how to resolve this dispute.
9.I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.
10.Looking forward to your writing back soon.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：Besides
3.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result （供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] It would be nice of you to provide me with some typical cases where your students succeeded in communicating with their parents on this problem.（It+ be +adj.+ of+ sb.+ to do sth.；where引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2] Fascinated by history, I have long been inspired to learn Archaeology in college while my parents think it not competitive enough in the future job market.（过去分词作状语；被动语态；while表示对比）
[高分句型3] I would be quite appreciative if you could offer me some brilliant suggestions on how to resolve this dispute.（if引导的条件状语从句）
5．Dear John,
I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from TikTok addiction. Actually, it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about TikTok and spend a lot of time watching and sharing videos online, which makes them unable to focus on study. Therefore, immediate measures should be taken to stop it. You should start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music or playing chess. Besides, you had better make more friends through face to face communication.
I sincerely hope that these ideas can help you with the problem.（94words）
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友John回一封电子邮件，帮助他走出沉迷抖音。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分总法
要点：
1. 表示理解和关心；
2. 沉迷抖音的影响；
3. 提出具体建议。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
suffer from；TikTok；get crazy about；spend a lot of time in；focus on；listen to music；play chess；make friends；face to face
第三步：连词成句
1. I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from TikTok addiction.
2. Actually, it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about TikTok and spend a lot of time watching and sharing videos online, which makes them unable to focus on study.
3. Therefore, immediate measures should be taken to stop it.
4. You should start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music or playing chess.
5. Besides, you had better make more friends through face to face communication.
6. I sincerely hope that these ideas can help you with the problem.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：Besides；and；
2.表因果关系：Therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from TikTok addiction.使用了that引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型2] Actually, it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about TikTok and spend a lot of time watching and sharing videos online, which makes them unable to focus on study.使用了it作形式主语和which引导的非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型3] I sincerely hope that these ideas can help you with the problem.使用了that引导的宾语从句。
6．Dear David,
I’m really delighted to hear from you. I believe you can be accustomed to living in your new house and your new school. I know you are lacking in friends around you. Now I give you some advice on how to make friends at a new school.
First, I suggest you join clubs and after-school activities to find friends with similar interests. Next, you’d better talk to others actively. Talking to one or two people each day, you’ll figure out who is interested in befriending you. After all, friendship starts with conversations.
Wish you good luck!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，你的网友David 刚随父母搬家并换了一所新学校，他希望在新学校交到新朋友，并希望得到你的帮助。请你给他写一封电子邮件，提供在新学校交朋友的建议。内容包括：1.对他搬新家表示慰问；2.提供在新学校交朋友的建议（至少两点）。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：hear from (收到来信)；be accustomed to(习惯)；lack in(缺少)；advice(建议)；suggest(建议)；after-school activities(课外活动)；with similar interests(有相似兴趣)；talk to(与……谈话)；figure out(弄清楚)；friendship(友谊)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Now I give you some advice on how to make friends at a new school.运用“疑问词+不定式”结构；Talking to one or two people each day, you’ll figure out who is interested in befriending you.运用定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear that you're having trouble adjusting to your high school life. Actually, many freshmen are confused about high school life, so don't worry about it too much. I'm writing to offer you some useful advice.
First, I recommend that you sign up for extra-curricular activities, which can help you make more new friends. In this way you won't feel lonely and your school life will become colorful and interesting. Second, you should make a good schedule and focus on improving your study. As teenagers, it is our responsibility to study well.
I hope my suggestions will be suitable for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给笔友Jack写信，给他一些适应新学校的建议。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack刚刚升入高中，但他一时无法适应新的校园生活，写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回一封建议信，内容主要包括：1.实际上很多新生对于高中生活感到困惑，因此不必过多担心；2.建议：(1)报名参加课外活动，这有助于结交更多的新朋友；（课外的：extra-curricular)(2)做好日程安排，要特别关注学习，因为作为一名青少年，好好学习是我们的责任。3.希望建议能适合你。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：have trouble in doing sth.（做某事有麻烦）; adjust to（适应）; be confused about（对……感到困惑）; worry about（担心）; offer sb. sth.（为某人提供某物）; recommend（推荐）; sign up for（报名参加）; make friends（交朋友）; focus on（关注）; be suitable for sb.（适合某人）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：I am sorry to hear that you're having trouble adjusting to your high school life.中that引导宾语从句；First, I recommend that you sign up for extra-curricular activities, which can help you make more new friends中that引导宾语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句。
8．Dear School President,
I am Li Hua, a senior student in your school. Recently, I found a lot of students pouring lunch  in the school canteen and going out to buy snacks instead.
I made an investigation among the classmates and found some students are disappointed with the flavour and style of canteen food. On the contrary, they think snacks are more delicious. In my opinion, first of all, it’s shameful to waste food for the worldwide food shortage still exists. There should be activities to promote the importance of saving food and the harm of eating too much snacks. In addition, the school canteen food should be improved both in flavour and style. Last but not least, the canteen’s hygiene must be guaranteed.
This is my personal suggestion and I hope the principal consider it. Thank you.
Your student,
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，告知校长学生倒掉午餐买零食吃的现象并提出建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构：总分法   
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.告知现象
2.介绍相关情况
1）解释原因。（reasons）
2）提出建议。（suggestions）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
a lot of; instead; make an investigation; be disappointed with; on the contrary; be shameful to do; too much; both...and...; guarantee
第三步：连词成句
1. I found a lot of students pouring lunch in the school canteen and going out to buy snacks instead.
2. I made an investigation among the classmates and found some students are disappointed with the flavour and style of canteen food.
3. On the contrary, they think snacks are more delicious.
4. it’s shameful to waste food for the worldwide food shortage still exists.
5.There should beactivities to promote the importance of saving food and the harm of eating too much snacks.
6. the school canteen food should be improved both in flavour and style.
7. the canteen’s hygiene must be guaranteed.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：In my opinion, first of all, it’s shameful to waste food for the worldwide food shortage still exists.这句话运用了for引导的状语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如make an investigation; be disappointed with; on the            contrary等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9．Dear Li Ming,
I am glad that you will study in the senior high school. When receiving the information that you want to quickly adjust to the senior high school, I want to cast light on my suggestions for you.
To start with, it is of significance that you need develop a sense of independence, because it can help you form good habits of study. As long as you possess good habits, you can do well in your study. Furthermore, you’d better build a good relationship with your teachers, which can help you a lot. At last, keeping a balanced diet and doing more exercises can strengthen your body. If you can insist on regular training, you can always be in a good mood and high spirits.
Please take my opinions into consideration. May you have a promising future.
Yours,
Wang Lin
【分析】本文是一片应用文，向表弟李明给出一些怎样快速适应高中生活的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.培养独立意识，处理好师生关系。
2.养成良好学习习惯。
3.合理饮食，多运动，保持身体健康。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
cast light on; possess; strengthen; insist on; promising
第三步：连词成句
1. When receiving the information that you want to quickly adjust to the senior high school, I want to cast light on my suggestions for you.
2. As long as you possess good habits, you can do well in your study.
3. At last, keeping a balanced diet and doing more exercises can strengthen your body.
4. If you can insist on regular training, you can always be in a good mood and high spirits.
5. May you have a promising future.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly, And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+ clause(从句), In spite of+ n/doing
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Furthermore, you’d better build a good relationship with your teachers, which can help you a lot.这句话which引导了非限制性定语从句。此外When receiving the information that you want to quickly adjust to the senior high school, I want to cast light on my suggestions for you.还运用了同位语从句。此外文章还使用了一些高级表达，如cast light on; possess; strengthen; insist on; promising等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
10．Dear Friends,
From the forum, I’ve learned that many students have difficulty in learning English. Now I am writing to share my advice with you.
In the first place, it is important to develop your interest in learning English. As you know, interest is the best teacher, which can encourage us to learn English actively. Besides, finding a suitable method is significant. Only if you use effective methods can you improve your English. Last but not least, it is suggested that you should ask your teacher for help when you are in trouble.
I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration. I believe your English will be improved.
Yours,
Bookworm
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，在校园英语论坛（forum）上看到一些同学的帖子，他们在就如何学好英语寻求帮助。请你以Bookworm的网名给他们回帖，结合自己的经验提出一些建议。内容提示：1）培养学习兴趣；2）找到适合的学习方法；3）勤学好问。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：have difficulty in doing sth.(做某事有困难)；share with(分享)；develop interest(培养兴趣)；encourage sb. to do sth.(鼓励某人做某事)；suitable method(合适的方法)；significant(有重大意义的)；effective(有效的)；last but not least(最后但并不是最不重要的)；ask for help(寻求帮助)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如From the forum, I’ve learned that many students have some problems in English learning.运用宾语从句；As you know, interest is the best teacher, which can encourage us to learn English actively.运用非限制性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。