福建高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份福建高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共21页。

建议信
1．假定你是李华，你的好友Mike用花呗购物成瘾，这给他的生活和学习带来了困扰。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括:
1.过度消费的危害;
2.提出合理的建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:蚂蚁花呗Credit Pay
2．假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Charlie和家人将于暑假来中国旅游。请你给他写一封电子邮件，为他提供建议。内容包括：
1. 欢迎他和家人来中国旅行；
2. 旅行前的准备：了解中国文化，学会用筷子，学一些简单的汉语。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：chopstick 筷子
Dear Charlie,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3．假如你是阳光中学的李华，你校乒乓球队应邀去澳大利亚一所中学参加中学生乒乓球友谊赛。作为队长，请你给举办学校的联系Mr. Williams写封邮件询问相关事宜，要点如下：
1.接受邀请，表示感谢；
2.询问食宿、交通及比赛日程等方面的安排；
3.提出相关建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．阅读以下内容，身为Z时代的一员，你是否有过相似的烦恼和担忧？请就文中提及的问题给父母写一封信，说说你的想法。注意不要大段引用原文。词数120词。
Many children born in the 1990s and 2000s were raised by “helicopter parents” who were always there to guide and help them with a busy schedule filled with homework and extra-curricular activities such as dancing, drawing, or sports. With parents who do everything for them, today’s youth seem to prefer to live like teenagers even when they are in their 20s or 30s.
Dear Mom and Dad,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Love,
Your ______
5．假定你是李华，本学期你作为交换生到加拿大的Calgary High School学习。开学一个月，你发现跟当地的同学们很难融洽相处。对此，你给朋友Frank写信求助。内容包括：
1.遇到的问题；
2.你的感受；
3.寻求建议。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Frank,
How is it going these days?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Jack想学漳州方言(dialect)。请你给他写封电子邮件，提出你的建议，内容包括:
1. 多和当地市民交流；
2. 观看漳州方言电视节目；
3. 买一本有关漳州方言词典；
4. ……
注意: 1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack，
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua.
7．你校正在组织英语演讲活动，请你用英文发表关于学生如何保护视力的演讲，内容包括：
1.中学生视力现状；
2.保护视力的建议。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.题目和首句已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Protect Our Eyesight?
Boys and girls,
Today, the topic of my speech is how to protect our eyesight.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．假定你是李华，你的朋友李越刚进入高中，因为学习压力和没有朋友而感到很焦虑，不知如何排解，写信求助于你。请你用英语回一封信给他，提出一些合理建议，内容包括：
1、转变心态，正确对待学习压力；
2、听听歌曲，释放学习压力；
3、 多与同学交流，和他们成为朋友 ；……
注意：1、词数80左右；
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Yue,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
9．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友David即将来福州游玩，他写信向你了解他到福州后乘坐何种交通工具旅行比较适宜。请你给他写封回信，建议他乘坐地铁或公交，既环保便捷、又准点且价格便宜。
参考词汇：环保的environmentally friendly / eco-friendly；
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
I’m so glad to hear that you will come to China for your holiday.
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10．假如你叫李明，有一位来自英国的朋友Mike。他与父母一道来到了中国。初来乍到，他发现自己在家时所学的汉语根本就不够用。因此，他给你发来一封电子邮件，向你请教如何提高汉语听说能力。
请根据下面的提示，给他回一封邮件。邮件的内容包含如下要点：
①邮件已收到，理解他所遇到的问题。
②提出如下建议：在课内课外要多说汉语，应尽可能与同学交流，不要担心犯错误；在家看电视时，多注意节目主持人的发音，以便提高听力水平。
③祝愿他学习取得进步。
注意：①内容应包括以上要点，可适当增加细节，以使内容连贯；
②词数：80词左右。
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1．Dear Mike,
Learning that recently you’ re bothered by the addiction to purchasing with Credit Pay and a heavy financial burden in repayment, I’m writing to offer some suggestions.
Honestly, I totally disapprove of overspending. Not only does it drive us to buy unnecessary things, but also distracts our attention from study, which should be your present focus. If I were you, I would budget reasonably and devote myself to study.
I sincerely hope you can take my suggestions into careful consideration.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给好友Mike写一封邮件，表达对于过度消费的看法和提出建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.过度消费的危害；
2.提出合理的建议。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
bother,addiction to,purchase,heavy financial burden,offer some suggestions, disapprove of,drive sb. to do,distract our attention,budget reasonably,devote myself to study,take my suggestions into careful consideration
第三步：连词成句
1.Learning that recently you’ re bothered by the addiction to purchasing with Credit Pay and a heavy financial burden in repayment, I’m writing to offer some suggestions.
2.I totally disapprove of overspending.
3.Not only does it drive us to buy unnecessary things, but also distracts our attention from study, which should be your present focus.
4.If I were you, I would budget reasonably and devote myself to study.
5.I sincerely hope you can take my suggestions into careful consideration.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Not only does it drive us to buy unnecessary things, but also distracts our attention from study, which should be your present focus.（运用了倒装和非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
If I were you, I would budget reasonably and devote myself to study.（运用了虚拟语气）
2．Dear Charlie,
I’m delighted to know you’re coming to China with your family during the summer holiday. I’m writing to offer you some advice.
It’s a good idea for you to make some preparations before coming to China. To begin with, you should know of some Chinese culture, which can help you behave properly during your stay. Secondly, you’d better learn how to use chopsticks so that you can taste varieties of Chinese food. Last but not least, it’s necessary to learn some simple Chinese.
I hope you will find may advice helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国笔友Charlie写封邮件，提供一些来中国旅游的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 欢迎他和家人来中国旅行；
2. 旅行前的准备：了解中国文化，学会用筷子，学一些简单的汉语。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
be delighted to do; during the summer holiday; offer some advice; make some preparations; to begin with; behave properly; so that; varieties of; last but not least; find sth helpful
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m delighted to know you’re coming to China with your family during the summer holiday.
2. I’m writing to offer you some advice.
3. It’s a good idea for you to make some preparations before coming to China.
4. To begin with, you should know of some Chinese culture, which can help you behave properly during your stay.
5. Secondly, you’d better learn how to use chopsticks so that you can taste varieties of Chinese food.
6. Last but not least, it’s necessary to learn some simple Chinese.
7. I hope you will find may advice helpful.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：To begin with, Secondly, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore（供参考）
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句) （供参考）
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result（供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] To begin with, you should know of some Chinese culture, which can help you behave properly during your stay. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Secondly, you’d better learn how to use chopsticks so that you can taste varieties of Chinese food. (运用了“疑问词+不定式”作宾语以及so that引导的目的状语从句)
3．Dear Mr. Williams,
I am Li Hua, captain of Table Tennis team in Sunshine High School. Thanks for your invitation and we are delighted to accept it. Therefore, I am writing to consult you about the arrangements.
First, we'd like to know the details about the food and accommodations. Eager to learn more about the local culture, we prefer to live in host families to get more chances to communicate with the local people. What’s more, would you please pick us up at the airport on our arrival ? Finally, what about the match schedule? Please email me in advance so that we can make some preparations.
Your attention to this letter would be highly appreciated. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求给澳大利亚一所中学的Mr. Williams写封邮件，询问应邀去澳大利亚比赛安排的相关事宜。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态： 一般现在时
结构：总分法
第一部分是文章的开头段，说明写邮件的原因；第二部分是支持段，询问具体的安排事项，并提出建议；第三部分是结尾段，盼对方尽快回复。
要求：
1.说明写邮件的原因：接受邀请，表示感谢，写信询问安排事宜
2.询问具体的安排事项
①询问食宿：希望住在寄宿家庭
②询问交通：希望到达后Mr. Williams会接机
③询问比赛日程：希望发邮件告知比赛日程
3.希望尽快得到答复
第二步:列提纲（重点词组）
be delighted to do…；accept；consult sb. about …；food and accommodations；be eager to do…；prefer to do…；communicate with；pick sb. up；the match schedule；in advance；make some preparations；appreciate
第三步：连词成句
(1) I am Li Hua, captain of Table Tennis team in Sunshine High School.
(2) Thanks for your invitation and we are delighted to accept it.
(3)I am writing to consult you about the arrangements.
(4) We'd like to know the details about the food and accommodations.
(5) Eager to learn more about the local culture, we prefer to live in host families to get more chances to communicate with the local people.
(6) Would you please pick us up at the airport on our arrival?
(7) What about the match schedule?
(8) Please email me in advance so that we can make some preparations.
(9) Your attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.
(10) Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序：first …what’s more … finally
2.表因果关系：therefore
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Eager to learn more about the local culture, we prefer to live in host families to get more chances to communicate with the local people.（形容词短语作状语）
[高分句型2]
Please email me in advance so that we can make some preparations.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
4．Dear Mom and Dad,
I’m writing to you. Many words I’d like to tell you are crowded on my pen.
First, thanks for your contribution to looking after me and arranging my life. But if I want to say, the fact is that I don’t like this way you love me. Please don’t feel sad. I love you very much.
Since I was born, you have planned a good future for me and arranged a good life, following the schedule strictly. I need to learn playing the piano, handwriting and dancing. It’s good. However, have you ever cared whether I am happy? The way you want me to live as a teenager isn’t my life.
Love,
Your daughter
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求考生就文中提及的问题给家长写一封信。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 请就文中提及的问题给父母写一封信，说说你的想法。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
Look after me; arrange my life; this way you love me; plan a good future; arrange a good life; follow the schedule strictly
第三步：连词成句
1. First, thanks for your contribution to looking after me and arranging my life.
2. But if I want to say, the fact is that I don’t like this way you love me.
3. Since I was born, you have planned a good future for me and arranged a good life, following the schedule strictly.
4. I need to learn playing the piano, handwriting and dancing.
5. However, have you ever cared whether I am happy?
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First
2.表转折对比关系：However, but
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] But if I want to say, the fact is that I don’t like this way you love me. （that引导的表语从句）
[高分句型2] Since I was born, you have planned a good future for me and arranged a good life, following the schedule strictly. （现在分词作状语）
[高分句型3] However, have you ever cared whether I am happy?（whether引导的宾语从句）
5．Dear Frank,
How is it going these days? I have been to Calgary High School for a month, but I still can’t get on well with my classmates. I’m writing to ask for help.
To begin with, I often feel left out because my Canadian classmates prefer to do things individually. Besides, they always talk about the topics which are totally foreign to me. All of these do upset me. Since you are familiar with both Chinese and Canadian cultures, I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友Frank写一封求助信，询问如何和当地的同学们很难融洽相处。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.遇到的问题；
2.你的感受；
3.寻求建议。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
get on well；ask for；feel left out；prefer to；talk about ；be foreign to
第三步：连词成句
1.I have been to Calgary High School for a month, but I still can’t get on well with my classmates.
2.I’m writing to ask for help.
3.To begin with, I often feel left out because my Canadian classmates prefer to do things individually.
4.Besides, they always talk about the topics which are totally foreign to me.
5.All of these do upset me.
6.Since you are familiar with both Chinese and Canadian cultures, I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.本文使用了表文章结构顺序的衔接词：to begin with
2.本文也使用了表并列补充关系的衔接词：Besides
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] To begin with, I often feel left out because my Canadian classmates prefer to do things individually.（because引导原因状语从句）
[高分句型2] Besides, they always talk about the topics which are totally foreign to me.（which引导限制性定语从句）
6．Dear Jack，
Glad to know you feel like learning the Zhangzhou dialect. I think it can help you fit better into the city. Now let me offer you some suggestions.
It would be a good idea if you could communicate with the local citizens because it can improve your fluency. Watching the dialect programs on ZZTV can also contribute to better pronunciation and understanding. Besides, a dictionary on the Zhangzhou dialect, which you can refer to whenever you want, can be of great help. The optional course of the Zhangzhou dialect in our school is a good choice, too.
I hope you’ll find these suggestions useful.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给留学生朋友Jack写封电子邮件关于学习漳州方言提出建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 多和当地市民交流；
2. 观看漳州方言电视节目；
3. 买一本有关漳州方言词典；
4. 合理发挥。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
offer sb. some suggestions，communicate with，contribute to，besides，refer to，be of great help，optional，find…useful
第三步：连词成句
I think it can help you fit better into the city. Now let me offer you some suggestions.
It would be a good idea if you could communicate with the local citizens because it can improve your fluency.
Watching the dialect programs on ZZTV can also contribute to better pronunciation and understanding.
Besides, a dictionary on the Zhangzhou dialect, which you can refer to whenever you want, can be of great help.
The optional course of the Zhangzhou dialect in our school is a good choice, too.
I hope you’ll find these suggestions useful.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：Besides（供参考）
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…（供参考）
4.表因果关系：Because
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] It would be a good idea if you could communicate with the local citizens because it can improve your fluency.使用了because引导的状语从句
[高分句型2] Watching the dialect programs on ZZTV can also contribute to better pronunciation and understanding.使用了动名词作主语
[高分句型3] Besides, a dictionary on the Zhangzhou dialect, which you can refer to whenever you want, can be of great help.使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句
7．                                                                                      How to Protect Our Eyesight
Boys and girls,
Today, the topic of my speech is how to protect our eyesight.
Nowadays, with the development of digital products, more and more students have the problem of short eyesight.
Actually, it's possible for us to take measures. Firstly, we should kick some bad habits. For example, don't read in the dark. Moreover, we need to have a balanced diet. Eating vegetables and fruits is as important as eating meat and milk. Lastly, doing exercise regularly is also beneficial.
Take action and follow the suggestions above. I think we may protect our eyes from becoming short-sighted.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英文发表关于学生如何保护视力的演讲。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：作文内容应该包括
1.中学生视力现状
2.保护视力的建议
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
with the development of；take measures；in the dark；need to do；take action；protect …from
第三步：连词成句
1.Nowadays, with the development of digital products, more and more students have the problem of short eyesight.
2.Actually, it's possible for us to take measures.
3. Firstly, we should kick some bad habits.
4.For example, don't read in the dark.
5.Moreover, we need to have a balanced diet.
6.Eating vegetables and fruits is as important as eating meat and milk.
7.Lastly, doing exercise regularly is also beneficial.
8.Take action and follow the suggestions above.
9.I think we may protect our eyes from becoming short-sighted.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last(仅参考)
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including(仅参考)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Actually, it's possible for us to take measures.（it作形式主语，真正的主语是动词不定式短语）
[高分句型2] Eating vegetables and fruits is as important as eating meat and milk.（动名词eating作主语）
[高分句型3] I think we may protect our eyes from becoming short-sighted.（think后是省略that的宾语从句）
8．
Dear Li Yue,
You wrote that you are under great stress and have no friend at school. I understand quite well that you are anxious and lonely. As your best friend, I’d like to give you some suggestions.
First of all, I recommend that you have a positive attitude towards your study. After all, stress is only part of students’ life. Besides, I think you can listen to songs in your spare time, which can relieve your stress. Last but not least, why not try to communicate with your classmates and even make friends with them? Through the communication you can find support, which will encourage you to overcome difficulties in your study and life.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. Believe in yourself and you will make it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给李越写封回信，提出一些合理建议，排解焦虑。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：内容包括：1、转变心态，正确对待学习压力；2、听听歌曲，释放学习压力；3、 多与同学交流，和他们成为朋友  
注意：1、词数80左右； 2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第二步:列提纲
would like to do, first of all, recommend that, a positive attitude, after all, besides, spare time, Last but not least, why not, communicate with, make friends with, be helpful to
第三步：连词成句
1. As your best friend, I’d like to give you some suggestions.
2. First of all, I recommend that you have a positive attitude towards your study.
3. After all, stress is only part of students’ life.
4. Besides, I think you can listen to songs in your spare time.
5. Last but not least, why not try to communicate with your classmates and even make friends with them?
6. I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：After all , Besides
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…（供参考）
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result（供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] First of all, I recommend that you have a positive attitude towards your study.运用一个that引导的宾语从句。
[高分句型2] Besides, I think you can listen to songs in your spare time, which can relieve your stress.运用一个which引导的非限制性定语从句。

9．Dear David,
I’m so glad to hear that you will come to China for your holiday.
When you arrive in Fuzhou, you'd better take the subway, which has been well developed and become popular in Fuzhou nowadays. It has lots of different lines, so it is convenient for you to travel wherever you want to. The subway is spacious, comfortable and environmentally friendly. They are seldom delayed and guarantee the safety of travelers. It's easy to get tickets through many channels, such as by telephone, through the Internet, or on the self-service ticket machine. Besides, prices of tickets are cheap and reasonable. It offers good services to passengers and I am sure you will enjoy a good journey.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给David写封回信，建议他乘坐地铁或公交，既环保便捷、又准点且价格便宜。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 建议一种交通方式；
2.说出这种交通方式的优点;
3.表达自己的祝愿。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
arrive in；become popular；such as；enjoy a good journey
第三步：连词成句（包含关键句，至少3句）
1.When you arrive in Fuzhou, you'd better take the subway, which has been well developed and become popular in Fuzhou nowadays.
2.It has lots of different lines, so it is convenient for you to travel wherever you want to.
3.The subway is spacious, comfortable and environmentally friendly.
4.They are seldom delayed and guarantee the safety of travelers.
5.It's easy to get tickets through many channels, such as by telephone, through the Internet, or on the self-service ticket machine.
6.Besides, prices of tickets are cheap and reasonable.
7.It offers good services to passengers and I am sure you will enjoy a good journey.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] When you arrive in Fuzhou, you'd better take the subway, which has been well developed and become popular in Fuzhou nowadays. (when引导时间状语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It's easy to get tickets through many channels, such as by telephone, through the Internet, or on the self-service ticket machine. （it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
10．One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I am glad to receive your email asking for my advice on how to improve your Chinese and I understand your problem.
Here is my advice on improving your Chinese. Firstly, speak Chinese more, both in and out of class. Try your best to communicate with your classmates in Chinese. Don't be afraid of making mistakes because making mistakes is quite natural. I think the more you speak, the better your Chinese will be. Secondly, you can pay more attention to TV presenters in order to improve your listening when you are watching TV at home. I'm sure you will make great progress as time goes on. In conclusion, I wish you every success in your studies.
Yours,
Li Ming
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国的朋友Mike回一封邮件，就他如何提高汉语听说能力给予一些建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 邮件已收到，理解他所遇到的问题；
2. 提出如下建议：
1）在课内课外要多说汉语，应尽可能与同学交流，不要担心犯错误；
2）在家看电视时，多注意节目主持人的发音，以便提高听力水平；
3. 祝愿他学习取得进步。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
receive your email; my advice on how to improve your Chinese; understand your problem; my advice; speak Chinese more; both in and out of class; try your best to communicate with your classmates; don't be afraid of making mistakes; watch TV at home; pay more attention to TV presenters; in order to improve your listening; make great progress; wish you every success
第三步：连词成句
1. I am glad to receive your email asking for my advice on how to improve your Chinese and I understand your problem.
2. Here is my advice on improving your Chinese.
3. Firstly, speak Chinese more, both in and out of class.
4. Try your best to communicate with your classmates in Chinese.
5. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes because making mistakes is quite natural.
6. I think the more you speak, the better your Chinese will be.
7. Secondly, you can pay more attention to TV presenters in order to improve your listening when you are watching TV at home.
8. I'm sure you will make great progress as time goes on.
9. In conclusion, I wish you every success in your studies.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序： Firstly, Secondly, In conclusion
2.表并列补充关系：and
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Don’t be afraid of making mistakes because making mistakes is quite natural.（非谓语动词动名词作主语和作宾语）
[高分句型2] I think the more you speak, the better your Chinese will be.（形容词比较级的特殊句型）
[高分句型3] Secondly, you can pay more attention to TV presenters in order to improve your listening when you are watching TV at home.（非谓语动词不定式作目的状语）